Update 41
Agle din jab aabaas nashe se uthta hai toh dekhta haai who sana k kamre maai naanga soya thaaaaaaaaa
Aur baju mai nangi sana lete lete roooooooooo rahi thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Yeh dekh abaas ki fattttttttttttttttttttttttt jaati haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai
Abaas- Sana mai yeha kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa krr raaha hu isss haalat maaai tere saath
Sana rote rote- Abuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaaal raat ko nashe maaai aapne meri izaaaat lotttttttt liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Yeh suna abaas k pair k niche se zameen nikaaal jaati haai
Abaass- Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Aisa nhi hooooooooooooo sakta mai aisa nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kr saktaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Sana- Aapne kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaai abbu
ammi aur bhai ka gussaaaa kaal aapne mere upaaar nikaala haaiiiii
Yeh sun abaas rone laaagta haai- Hai upaar wale yeh maine kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa krrrrrrrrrrrr diya apni bacchi k sath
(Dosto abaas bhale hi bevdaa thaaaaaa aur usne fatimaaa ko kabhi dil se pyaaaaaaaarrr nhi kiyaaaaaaaa paar who tharki nhi thaaa
kaal usne naashe maaii Fatima ayaan k gussaa sana par nikaal )
Abaaasssss--- Yeh gunah maafi k laayak nhi haaai bol k kapde phen k waha se bhaagg jaata haaaaaaaaaai
Aur upaar teerace maaai jaake
Abaas- Saab khatam hoo gaya meri biwi meri nhi rahi aur kaal raat maine aapni beti k sath gunah kr diya bol k
sucide krrrrr leeta haaaaaiiii
Idhaar ghaar mai shok k mahool hoooo jaata haaaaaiiii
Saab koi abaas ki maut k liye khud ko doshi maan raahe theeeeeeeeee
Ayaan Fatima ko lag raha tha abaas unke kaaran sucide kiyaa haai
Dadi ko laaga unke laalach k kaaran usne aapna beta khooooooooo diyaaaaaaaaaaaa
Par Asli Karan sirf sana ko paata thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Sana ko aapne abbu k liye dukh lag raaha thaaaa bhale hii Abaas n nashe mai uski izzat luti thi
sana ne aapne abbu ko maaf kr diyaa thaaaaa aur jaanbhuj k ye baat kisi ko nhi baatayi
Kyonki aab jab uske abbu n sucide kr hi liya thaaa toh who unko badnaam nhi krna chaati thiii
Dheere Dheere time nikaaal jaata haai ghaar puraaa baadal gaya thaaa
Ab Ayaan aur fatimaaaaaaa bhi guilt mai the
Aur dur dur rehte the aur pyaaaaaaaaaar nhi krte the
Idhaaar Abaas k marne k baad daadi ki tabyaat kharab rehti thiii
9 month baad
Fatima aur sana dono ki delivey hone waali thiii hospital mai
Ayaan Fatima k Operation theratre k baahar hii thaaaaaaaaaaaa
Kuch time baad doctor baachaa leke baahar nikaalta haai
Doc- Mubaarak hoo aap baap baan gaye Ladki Hui haai
Yeh sunnn Ayaaan Bahut khussh hotaa haaaaaaaiiii
Aur Bacchi ko godi mai leleta haai
Ayaan- Tum toh bilkul aapni Ammi paar gayi hoooooooo
Wohi aankh wohi naak meri pyaaaaaaaaaari beti
Doc- Hume ek aaur baat baatani haaaaaaaaaiii
Hum bacche ki maaaaaaa ko nhi bacha paaye
Yeh sunnnn Ayaan k pair k niche se zamenn nikaaaaaaaaaaaaal jaati haai
Ayaaaaaaan- Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rote rote Yeh kya bol rahe hooooooo aap doc aisa nhi hoooo saktaaa
Meri ammi mujhe chood k nhiiiii jaaaaaaaaaaa saakti
Doc- Dekhiyaa aapne aap ko sambhaaliyeee
humne phele hi baatya tha iss umaar maai pregnant hona risky haaai
Ayaan- yeh kyaaaaaaaa bol rahe hoooooooooo
kisko baataya tha
Doc- Fatima ko
(Dosto doc n Fatima ko phele bata rakha thaa iss ummar maai bacha jaanam dene se aapki jaan jaa sakti haaai paar Fatima n ayaan ki Khushi k liye yeh risk liya tha aur kisi ko nhi baataya tha)
Ayaan- Ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kiyaaaaa aapne mere sath
Itna bada dhoka diya aapne mujhe who bhi meri khusi k liyee
mai aapke binaaaa kaise jiiiii paungaaaa
Doc- aap sambhaliye aapne aapko aapni baachi k baare mai sochiye
aapko uske liye jeena paadega bol k waha se chaaal deta haai
Idhaar sana ko bhi ladki hoooooooo jaati haaai
Par Doc n usse bol diya tha who kabhi phir se ammi nhi baan paayegi
(dosto sana ko laagta tha kami sirf Amjad mai hai paar kuch kami usme bhi thi aur sayaad abbu k sath sex krne k kaaran kuch complication aa gaya hoga sana maai)
Ayaan aapni dono beti ko leke ghaar aa gaya thaaaaa
Ghaarrrrr Mai saab dukhi the Fatima k liyeeeee
Dadi n yeh saab paar pota k liye kiyaa who toh milaaa nhiiiii ghaar puraaaa barbaad hooooooooo gaya
Aise hi kuch din nikaal jaate haai
Dadi ayaan ko dusra nikah k liye bolne laagti haai
Dadi- beta aap mere pass jyaada time nhi bacha aagar tu dusra nikah kr lega toh mai chain se maar paaungi
Ayaan- dadi mai aab zindagi mai kabhi dusra nikah nhi karunga
Dadi- Par tere paas aabhi puri jaawani paadi haai
Ayaan- Aab Mere liye meri beti hi mera saab kuch haai
Mujhe aaur kuch baat nhi karna bol k chaal deta haai
Kuch din baad
Dadi bahut bimaar thi ayaan ko aapne paas bulaati haai
Dadi- Beta aab mere jaane k time aa gaaya haaai mere laalach ne iss pariwaaar ko tod diyaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ayaan- Aisa maaaaaaaat bolo dadi
Dadi- Sahi bol rahi hu maaaaaaaaaaaaai paar pota dekh hi nhi paayi maaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiii
Par tujhe iss pariwwar k vansh aage badhana hi hogaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Meri ek aakhir iccha puri kr dena bol
K ayaan k kaan mai kuch bolti haai
Jisskoo sun ayaan shock hooo jaata haaai
Idhaar daaadi marrrrrrrrrrrrr jaati haaaaaaaaai
Aab ghar mai sirf ayaan sana aur uski do beti bacch jaate haai
(Dosto mujhe pata hai kuch logo ko Fatima k marna pasand nhi aayega kuch log chate the ayaan Fatima hamesha sath rahe paar writer k story k liye original plan hamesha se yahi tha
Story open ended hai aur aagar aap log part 2 k liye bologe toh mai start karunga
Aage ki story k hint aap samjh hi gaye honge)
Dekha jaye toh saab ko aapni galti ki saza mili
Sana ko phele talaq phir Abbas se izzat lutwaa ki
Abaas ko sucide krke
Dadi Bina paar pota dekhe maarrrrrr gayi
Ayaan ne Fatima ko khooooooo diyaa
Bass Fatima n ayaan kimaat chukayi thi aapni jaan deke pyaaaaaaar k liye
Waise bhi yeh duniyaaa uske liye naarak baan chuki thiii
Agar who jinda bhi rehti toh hamesha guilt mai rehti abass ko dekh dekh k
Abaas k marne k baad uska guilt aaur badh gaya tha
Haar kaam ki ek price hoti hai jo sabko deni padti haai iss story mai bhi saab character ne who price pay kiya
Har Ending k sath ek nayi kahani shuru hoti hai
Aap isko ending nhi ayaan k nayi zindagi k beginning samjh sakte hai
Hope aapko meri Pheli Story Pasaand aayi hogi
Comment krke ending k baare mai aapna view jarur share kijye
Thanks For Reading
Appropriate ending ...
iska part 2 jaroor ana chahiye ...
ab ayaan ke liye uski dono betiyan hi sab kuch hai ... sab kuch ... mayne ... sab kuch ... samajhne wale samajh gaye honge ... jo na samjhe wo anadi hain ...
kuch saal to sana se kaam chala lega ... aur uske baad ... dual samuhik suhagraat ... ek 41 Ayaan aur uski do-do nazayaz 18 saal ki betiyan ...
aakhri anjaam kya hoga ... kya do naye zamane ki ladkiya apne baap ke iss incest lust ko jhel payengi ... kya unke double incest union se utpan santan normal hogi ... kya woh abnormal childbirth se zinda bach payengi ... kahin aisa to nahi ki ant me ... Ayaan iss duniya me akela reh jayega ... do abnormal bachon ke saath ... part 2 me hi inn gutthiyon ka raaz khul sakega ... to zaroor likhna ...
