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Main:-(Aschary) Pura sach nhi hai, iska kya matlb hua, or ab aapki beti kahan hai?
AB AAGE....................
Rinoma:- Han jo tumne dekha wah pura sach nhi hai, hum jalchar/ jaliyjeev hain, ham mayavi hote hai, meri beti ramika yaha ki maharani hai, ham yaha bahut hi sukh or shanti se rahte the, kintu ek din iss shanti ko grahan lag gaya or hamara sab kuchh barbad ho gaya.
Main:- Aisa kya hua aap logo ke sath or aapki beti ramika kahan hai?
Rinoma:- Baat uss samay ki hai jab meri beti 18 vars ki hui to humne use maharani banane ka faisla kiya, meri beti me adbhut shaktiyan thi, jo koi bhi usko hasil kar le to wah raaj kar sakta tha, meri beti ko ye taqat or shakti ek pushtak se mili thi, jaha ek taraf mere rajya me khushiyan thi wahi ek jagah aisi bhi thi jaha kisi ke darr ka saya tha.
Main:-(man me) Pushtak kahi ye wahi pushtak to nhi jo main lene aaya hun?
Main:- Kaisa darr or kiska? Or aap kaisi pushtak ki baat kar rahe hain?
Rinoma:- Maine apne jeevan me bahut se shaitano ka samna kiya hai, lekin mujhse ek hi bhul hui, or wo yah ki main JOKRAM ko maar nhi saka, wah apni maya or chhal se bach jata tha, uske paas aisi bahut si taqate or shaitani shaktiyan hai jo use bahut shaktishali bnati hain?
Rinoma:- Ek din uski nazar mere putri par pad gai or usko meri putri ki shaktiyon ka gyat hua, sath hi me uss pushtak ka bhi, wah kisi bhi tarike se meri putri or mayavi pushtak ko pana chahta tha. Jiske liye usne meri putri se vivah ka prastav mere samakh bheja.
Kintu main uske kukarmo ke baare me janta tha, ye papi meri putri se kyo shadi karna chahta hai, maine uske prastav ko thukra diya, jiske wajah se hame kai prakar ke muskilon ka samna karna pada.
Main:- To ab aapki putri kahan hain?
Rinoma:- Maaf karna kintu maine tumse nhi puchha ki tum yaha kyo aaye ho? or tum yaha tak pahunche kaise?
Main:- Main prithvi ka nivasi hun, main ek manav hun, mera naam Chandra hai or main yaha ek jadui pushtak ki talash me aaya hun, jiska pata mujhe ek paheli se laga or uss ki sahayta se main yaha tak pahunch paya hun.
Rinoma:- Achha lekin yaha koun si jadui kitab hai, mujhe to sayad gyat nhi?
Main:- Mujhe yaha ki maharani se milna tha, jo ki mere paheli ke anusar ek wahi hai jo uska pata bta sakti hai, or kya pata jiss pushtak ki aap abhi baat kar rahe the, ye wo hi pushtak ho jiski mujhe talash hai.
Rinoma:- Ho sakta hai ki tumhara kahna satya ho, kintu?
Main:- Kintu kya? Kya ab aap mujhe apni putri ka pata btayege ki wo kahan hai, mujhe jaldi se wah pushtak lekar wapas lautna hai, isi pushtak ka zikr to maine bahar kiya tha, jiski evaj me mujhe yaha kaidkhane me dal diya gaya.
Rinoma:- Ye kabhi nhi ho sakta, uss pushtak ko koi hasil nhi kar sakta, uske liye hum apni jaan de denge or kisi ki bhi le lenge, bhalai isi me hai ki tum yaha se wapas laut jao.
Main:- Are jao jao bade aaye jaan lene wale, khud to kaid me ho or mujhe dhamki de rahe ho, main jab tak uss maharani ramika se nhi mil leta tab tak main kahi nhi jane wala.
Rinoma meri baat sun ke khamosh ho jata hai, usko kuchh bhi samajh nhi aata kya bole, phir maine hi kuchh der baad usko puchha.
Main:- Waise aap yaha kaid me kyo ho, or aapki beti kahan hai, aap to kah rahe the ki wah yaha ki maharani hai, kintu bahar to koi or hi tha, ye kya chakkar hai?
Abhi Rinoma kuchh kah pate ki ek sipahi kaidkhane ke bahar aaya,
Sipahi:- Savdhan maharaj padhar rahe hain.
Ye sunte hi main bahar ki taraf dekhne laga, jabki rinoma meri taraf dekh ke kisi soch me goom the.
Rinoma:- Agar tum apne prano ki raksha chahte ho to, tum uske samne kisi bhi pushtak ka zikr mat karna anyatha wo tumko maar dalega.
Main:- Kyaa???? Are magar...
Rinoma:-shhuuuuussssssss chup karo.
Tabhi gate khoola or maharaj andar aaya, 6ft se bhi jyada hight thi uski, chehra to thik thak hi tha lekin dekh kar hi dhurt or makkar lag raha tha. Sath me uske do char chamche bhi the, ek unme se senapati bhi tha.
Senapati:- Maharaj yahi hai wo jisne nagar me ho-halla macha ke rakha tha.
Uss maharaj me mujhe ghoora or upar se niche tak dekha .
Mantri:- Maharaj ke samman me jhuko anyatha tumhara sar dhad se alag kar diya jayega.
Main chup chap uss maharaj ko dekh raha tha.
Senapati:- Suna nhi tumne, apna shish jhukao...
Maharaj:- Shuuuuuuuusss shant ho jao, tum koun ho or hamare nagar me kaise aaye, yaha tumne ashanti kyo failayi.
Main:- Kshama kare kintu maine koi ashanti nhi failayi, main to bas kisi ki talash kar raha tha.
Maharaj:- Kiski talash thi tumko? Pahle apna parichay do, kaha se aaye ho?
Main:- Main prithvi ka niwasi hun, mera naam chandra hai, main yaha ki maharani se milna chahta hun?
Maharaj:- Achha to tum insaan ho, maharani se milne ka uddeshya kya hai tumhara, wo kaise janti hai tumko?
Main:- Main to pahli baar milna aaya hun unko, mera unse koi parichay nhi or mera milne ka uddeshya to main unko mil kar hi btaunga.
Maharaj:- (man me) Tum mujhe btao yaa naa btao insaani kide, kintu main janta hun tu kis liye aaya hai yahan, mere siva wo pushtak koi hasil nhi karega, koi nhi.
Maharaj:- Maharani tumse nhi milegi, tumne hamare rajya me aise aa kar apradh kiya hai, jiske liye tumko raja milegi, senapati kal subah iss insaan ka sari praja ke samne sar dhad se alag kar diya jaye, ye ek ghuspathiya hai.
Senapati:- Jo agya maharaj.
Main:- Kintu maine to koi apradh nhi kiya... Tum aisa nhi kar sakte.
Maharaj:- Main aisa kar sakta hun kyoki main yaha ka maharaj hun, hahahahahahaha.
Or sare chamche bhi hasne lage.
Phir wo sab waha se chale gaye.
Mujhe iss maharaj par bahut gussa aa raha tha, maine ek laat kaidkhane ke sariya me mara to usme se vidhyut tarag nikal ke charo tataf fail gai, or mujhe bahut zor ka jhatka laga, main udte hue diwaar se takraya..
Rinoma:- Sambhal kar.... Kya tum thik ho?
Main:-Aaaahhhhh ahhhh Ye ye kaise hua, mujhe itne zor ka jhakta kaise laga?
Rinoma:- Kyoki in salakhon me vidhyut hai, isliye isko jo koi chhuyega usko jhatka lagta hai, tumko kya laga main yaha kyo kaid hun, iiss kaidkhane me koi bhi jeev shakti vihin ho jata hai.
Main:- Kya??? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai, mujhe yaha se nikalna hai?
Rinoma:- Tum yaha se nhi nikal sakte, prayas karna vifal hoga isliye shant raho.
Main:- Nahi main aise hath par hath rakh kar nhi baith sakta, mujhe maharani se milna hai or iss dushta raja ko saza bhi deni hai.
Rinoma:- Tum uska kuchh bhi nhi kar paoge, wo bahut shaktishali hai, wah tumko mar dega kyo maut ke samne jana chahte ho.
Main:- To kya main apni maut ka intezar karu... Kal subah to waise bhi wo mujhe maar dega, isse achha main lad ke maru, or shaktishali koun hai wah to yuddh se faisla hoga.
Rinoma:- Meri baat maan jao nhi to bemaut mare jaoge, usne meri zindagi chhin li, to phir tum sadharan insaan uska kya kar loge, yaha tak ki usne meri putri ko bhi apne vash me kar rakha hai, tum uska kuchh nhi kar paoge, ye kaidkhana bhi usi ki ek chhoti si maya hai.
Main:- Koun hai yah, aap kiski baat kar rahe hain, or aapki putri uske vash me kaise aa gai?
Rinoma:- Yahi to hai wo shaitan jokram jisne naa sirf mujhse mera rajya balki meri putri bhi mujhse chhin li, usne dhokhe se meri putri ko apne maya ke vash me karke, hamare rajya ko apne kabje me kar liya, or mujhe yaha kaid kar diya, isliye kahta hun tum usse yuddh me nhi jeet sakte.
Main:- Aap chinta maat kijiye iska faisla to ab yuddh me koga koun kise harata hai, pahle aap mujhe yaha se bahar jane ka koi tarika btaiye, taki main aapki putri tak pahuncu saku.
Rinoma:- Yaha se nikalne ka koi or rasta nhi hai, ye khud JOKRAM ki maya se bna hai, usne mujhe kaid karne ke liye hi iska nirman kiya tha, anyatha main kab ka uski kaid se aazad ho gaya hota, or rahi meri putri tak pahunchne ki baat to waha tak jana bahut hi kathin hai, JOKRAM ne bahut hi kadi suraksha laga rahi hai apne shatani sipahiyon ki, uss tak pahunchana muskil hai.
Main:- Aap meri madad bhi karna chahte hai yaa mere hosle ko todna chahte hai, aap meri madad kam or dara jyada rahe hain.
Rinoma:- Maaf karna kintu yahi satya hai, ek kaam ho sakta hai, jab tumko kal le jaya jayega tab tum kisi tarah nikal gaye unke hatho se to kuchh ho sakta hai.
Main:- Are han ye mere dimag me kyo nhi aaya, bas ab kal ka intezar hai, leki aapki putri tak main pahunchu kaise ye to btaiye?
Bas itna hi......
Dhanyawad
Main:-(Aschary) Pura sach nhi hai, iska kya matlb hua, or ab aapki beti kahan hai?
AB AAGE....................
Rinoma:- Han jo tumne dekha wah pura sach nhi hai, hum jalchar/ jaliyjeev hain, ham mayavi hote hai, meri beti ramika yaha ki maharani hai, ham yaha bahut hi sukh or shanti se rahte the, kintu ek din iss shanti ko grahan lag gaya or hamara sab kuchh barbad ho gaya.
Main:- Aisa kya hua aap logo ke sath or aapki beti ramika kahan hai?
Rinoma:- Baat uss samay ki hai jab meri beti 18 vars ki hui to humne use maharani banane ka faisla kiya, meri beti me adbhut shaktiyan thi, jo koi bhi usko hasil kar le to wah raaj kar sakta tha, meri beti ko ye taqat or shakti ek pushtak se mili thi, jaha ek taraf mere rajya me khushiyan thi wahi ek jagah aisi bhi thi jaha kisi ke darr ka saya tha.
Main:-(man me) Pushtak kahi ye wahi pushtak to nhi jo main lene aaya hun?
Main:- Kaisa darr or kiska? Or aap kaisi pushtak ki baat kar rahe hain?
Rinoma:- Maine apne jeevan me bahut se shaitano ka samna kiya hai, lekin mujhse ek hi bhul hui, or wo yah ki main JOKRAM ko maar nhi saka, wah apni maya or chhal se bach jata tha, uske paas aisi bahut si taqate or shaitani shaktiyan hai jo use bahut shaktishali bnati hain?
Rinoma:- Ek din uski nazar mere putri par pad gai or usko meri putri ki shaktiyon ka gyat hua, sath hi me uss pushtak ka bhi, wah kisi bhi tarike se meri putri or mayavi pushtak ko pana chahta tha. Jiske liye usne meri putri se vivah ka prastav mere samakh bheja.
Kintu main uske kukarmo ke baare me janta tha, ye papi meri putri se kyo shadi karna chahta hai, maine uske prastav ko thukra diya, jiske wajah se hame kai prakar ke muskilon ka samna karna pada.
Main:- To ab aapki putri kahan hain?
Rinoma:- Maaf karna kintu maine tumse nhi puchha ki tum yaha kyo aaye ho? or tum yaha tak pahunche kaise?
Main:- Main prithvi ka nivasi hun, main ek manav hun, mera naam Chandra hai or main yaha ek jadui pushtak ki talash me aaya hun, jiska pata mujhe ek paheli se laga or uss ki sahayta se main yaha tak pahunch paya hun.
Rinoma:- Achha lekin yaha koun si jadui kitab hai, mujhe to sayad gyat nhi?
Main:- Mujhe yaha ki maharani se milna tha, jo ki mere paheli ke anusar ek wahi hai jo uska pata bta sakti hai, or kya pata jiss pushtak ki aap abhi baat kar rahe the, ye wo hi pushtak ho jiski mujhe talash hai.
Rinoma:- Ho sakta hai ki tumhara kahna satya ho, kintu?
Main:- Kintu kya? Kya ab aap mujhe apni putri ka pata btayege ki wo kahan hai, mujhe jaldi se wah pushtak lekar wapas lautna hai, isi pushtak ka zikr to maine bahar kiya tha, jiski evaj me mujhe yaha kaidkhane me dal diya gaya.
Rinoma:- Ye kabhi nhi ho sakta, uss pushtak ko koi hasil nhi kar sakta, uske liye hum apni jaan de denge or kisi ki bhi le lenge, bhalai isi me hai ki tum yaha se wapas laut jao.
Main:- Are jao jao bade aaye jaan lene wale, khud to kaid me ho or mujhe dhamki de rahe ho, main jab tak uss maharani ramika se nhi mil leta tab tak main kahi nhi jane wala.
Rinoma meri baat sun ke khamosh ho jata hai, usko kuchh bhi samajh nhi aata kya bole, phir maine hi kuchh der baad usko puchha.
Main:- Waise aap yaha kaid me kyo ho, or aapki beti kahan hai, aap to kah rahe the ki wah yaha ki maharani hai, kintu bahar to koi or hi tha, ye kya chakkar hai?
Abhi Rinoma kuchh kah pate ki ek sipahi kaidkhane ke bahar aaya,
Sipahi:- Savdhan maharaj padhar rahe hain.
Ye sunte hi main bahar ki taraf dekhne laga, jabki rinoma meri taraf dekh ke kisi soch me goom the.
Rinoma:- Agar tum apne prano ki raksha chahte ho to, tum uske samne kisi bhi pushtak ka zikr mat karna anyatha wo tumko maar dalega.
Main:- Kyaa???? Are magar...
Rinoma:-shhuuuuussssssss chup karo.
Tabhi gate khoola or maharaj andar aaya, 6ft se bhi jyada hight thi uski, chehra to thik thak hi tha lekin dekh kar hi dhurt or makkar lag raha tha. Sath me uske do char chamche bhi the, ek unme se senapati bhi tha.
Senapati:- Maharaj yahi hai wo jisne nagar me ho-halla macha ke rakha tha.
Uss maharaj me mujhe ghoora or upar se niche tak dekha .
Mantri:- Maharaj ke samman me jhuko anyatha tumhara sar dhad se alag kar diya jayega.
Main chup chap uss maharaj ko dekh raha tha.
Senapati:- Suna nhi tumne, apna shish jhukao...
Maharaj:- Shuuuuuuuusss shant ho jao, tum koun ho or hamare nagar me kaise aaye, yaha tumne ashanti kyo failayi.
Main:- Kshama kare kintu maine koi ashanti nhi failayi, main to bas kisi ki talash kar raha tha.
Maharaj:- Kiski talash thi tumko? Pahle apna parichay do, kaha se aaye ho?
Main:- Main prithvi ka niwasi hun, mera naam chandra hai, main yaha ki maharani se milna chahta hun?
Maharaj:- Achha to tum insaan ho, maharani se milne ka uddeshya kya hai tumhara, wo kaise janti hai tumko?
Main:- Main to pahli baar milna aaya hun unko, mera unse koi parichay nhi or mera milne ka uddeshya to main unko mil kar hi btaunga.
Maharaj:- (man me) Tum mujhe btao yaa naa btao insaani kide, kintu main janta hun tu kis liye aaya hai yahan, mere siva wo pushtak koi hasil nhi karega, koi nhi.
Maharaj:- Maharani tumse nhi milegi, tumne hamare rajya me aise aa kar apradh kiya hai, jiske liye tumko raja milegi, senapati kal subah iss insaan ka sari praja ke samne sar dhad se alag kar diya jaye, ye ek ghuspathiya hai.
Senapati:- Jo agya maharaj.
Main:- Kintu maine to koi apradh nhi kiya... Tum aisa nhi kar sakte.
Maharaj:- Main aisa kar sakta hun kyoki main yaha ka maharaj hun, hahahahahahaha.
Or sare chamche bhi hasne lage.
Phir wo sab waha se chale gaye.
Mujhe iss maharaj par bahut gussa aa raha tha, maine ek laat kaidkhane ke sariya me mara to usme se vidhyut tarag nikal ke charo tataf fail gai, or mujhe bahut zor ka jhatka laga, main udte hue diwaar se takraya..
Rinoma:- Sambhal kar.... Kya tum thik ho?
Main:-Aaaahhhhh ahhhh Ye ye kaise hua, mujhe itne zor ka jhakta kaise laga?
Rinoma:- Kyoki in salakhon me vidhyut hai, isliye isko jo koi chhuyega usko jhatka lagta hai, tumko kya laga main yaha kyo kaid hun, iiss kaidkhane me koi bhi jeev shakti vihin ho jata hai.
Main:- Kya??? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai, mujhe yaha se nikalna hai?
Rinoma:- Tum yaha se nhi nikal sakte, prayas karna vifal hoga isliye shant raho.
Main:- Nahi main aise hath par hath rakh kar nhi baith sakta, mujhe maharani se milna hai or iss dushta raja ko saza bhi deni hai.
Rinoma:- Tum uska kuchh bhi nhi kar paoge, wo bahut shaktishali hai, wah tumko mar dega kyo maut ke samne jana chahte ho.
Main:- To kya main apni maut ka intezar karu... Kal subah to waise bhi wo mujhe maar dega, isse achha main lad ke maru, or shaktishali koun hai wah to yuddh se faisla hoga.
Rinoma:- Meri baat maan jao nhi to bemaut mare jaoge, usne meri zindagi chhin li, to phir tum sadharan insaan uska kya kar loge, yaha tak ki usne meri putri ko bhi apne vash me kar rakha hai, tum uska kuchh nhi kar paoge, ye kaidkhana bhi usi ki ek chhoti si maya hai.
Main:- Koun hai yah, aap kiski baat kar rahe hain, or aapki putri uske vash me kaise aa gai?
Rinoma:- Yahi to hai wo shaitan jokram jisne naa sirf mujhse mera rajya balki meri putri bhi mujhse chhin li, usne dhokhe se meri putri ko apne maya ke vash me karke, hamare rajya ko apne kabje me kar liya, or mujhe yaha kaid kar diya, isliye kahta hun tum usse yuddh me nhi jeet sakte.
Main:- Aap chinta maat kijiye iska faisla to ab yuddh me koga koun kise harata hai, pahle aap mujhe yaha se bahar jane ka koi tarika btaiye, taki main aapki putri tak pahuncu saku.
Rinoma:- Yaha se nikalne ka koi or rasta nhi hai, ye khud JOKRAM ki maya se bna hai, usne mujhe kaid karne ke liye hi iska nirman kiya tha, anyatha main kab ka uski kaid se aazad ho gaya hota, or rahi meri putri tak pahunchne ki baat to waha tak jana bahut hi kathin hai, JOKRAM ne bahut hi kadi suraksha laga rahi hai apne shatani sipahiyon ki, uss tak pahunchana muskil hai.
Main:- Aap meri madad bhi karna chahte hai yaa mere hosle ko todna chahte hai, aap meri madad kam or dara jyada rahe hain.
Rinoma:- Maaf karna kintu yahi satya hai, ek kaam ho sakta hai, jab tumko kal le jaya jayega tab tum kisi tarah nikal gaye unke hatho se to kuchh ho sakta hai.
Main:- Are han ye mere dimag me kyo nhi aaya, bas ab kal ka intezar hai, leki aapki putri tak main pahunchu kaise ye to btaiye?
Bas itna hi......
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Tiwari ji jabardast or shandar vapasi agle update ka besabri se intzar hai please ho sake to kal tk dedo
Welcome again dost update Zabardast ha keep it up
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Boht hi khoob Surat andaz se update likhi h ap ne bahi
Excellent birrilant fantastic good update
Let's see what happend
Excellent birrilant fantastic good update
Let's see what happend
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