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Welcome back bhai ab kese ho umeed karta hun ki ab ekdum thik ho gaye hoge
#UPDATE 49
Thakur admi:- Maine koi rape nhi kiya naa maine kisi ko mara hai, tum mujhpar jhutha ilzaam laga rahe ho?
Vijay:- Achcha lekin tune apharan to kiya hai naa ......
meri baat sun ke sabke kaan khade ho gaye, yaha tak ki us admi ki khud ki ankhe bade bade ho gaye meri baat sun ke.
Ab Aage......................
Main abhi ek bahut bade maidan me khada tha or mujhe janjeeron se jakad ke sipahi khade the, ye ek bahut bada yuddh ka maidan tha, kinare me yaha ke log khade the jo mujhe saza dete hue dekhne aaye the, paata nhi kya prachar kiya gaya tha mere bare jo sab mujhe aise ghur rahe the.
iisse maaroooo.... iisse maaaroooo.... iisse maaroooo....
" shantttttttttt raho sab, maharaj aa rahe hain"
ye awaaz senapati ki thi, jise sun ke sab chup ho gaye.
Maharaj aake apne gaddi par baith gaya or mujhe dekh ke ek kutil muskan diya.
main abhi khada apne vicharo me hi khoya hua tha ki uss maharaj ke bolne ki aawaz mere kano me padi.
Maharaj:- Mere nagar wasiyon ye ghuspathiya jo aap sabke samaksh khada hai, isne nagar me utpat machaya or hamare nagar me chhup ka ghus paith kar raha tha, jiske apradh me isse maut ki saza di jati hai, senapati iss ghuspaithiye ka sar dhad se alag kar do.
itna sun kar senapati mere taraf badh chala, mujhe kaise bhi kar ke yaha se niklna tha, jaise hi senapati mere pass aaya maine apne puri taqat juta ka un janjeeron ko apni taraf khincha jo sipahiyon ne paad rakhi thi.
Mere khinchte hi or sab meri oor khichte aa gaye, maine unko dhkka de kar janjeer ko jhatka diya or unke hatho se chhuda liya, tab tak senapati mere kareeb aa chuka tha or aate hi apne takwar se mujh par hamla kar diya.
maine apne hath ke janjeer se uska vaar rok diya or dusre se usko mara jisse wo door ja geera, itne me sainik bhi aane lage mere taraf, maine jaldi se apne hath ke janjeero ko nikala or ek talwar ko apne hatho me prakat kiya.
Phir kya jo bhi samne aata gaya sab ko kat-te hue main waha se aage badhne laga, lekin main jitno ko marta ustne phir aa jate, mujhe abhi unn sab se bhidne ka mauka thik nhi laga mujhe kaise bhi yaha se bahar nikalna tha.
Main apni tarafjyada sainikaata dekh waha se bhaga ... or waha ke deewaro ko kud kar bahar nikal gaya, mere pichhe sainik lage hue the, iiss liye abhi chhupne ki jagah chahiye thi, isliye main nagar me hi ek ghar me ghus gayakyoki sara nagar khali hi tha sab to meri maut dekhne maidan me the, main ek ghar me ghus kar baith gaya.
main:- Kaha fans gaya hun main, mujhe pushtak ke chakkar me kya kya karna pad raha hai, jaan jate jate bachi, ab mujhe raat me hi mahal me dekhna hoga koun saa maharani kaha hai, yaar bhuk bhi lagi hua hai.
tabhi gate khulne ki aawaz aai, sayad iss ghar me rahne wale aa gaye the, maine jhank kar dekha to ye koi ladki thi.
main wahi chhup kar intezar karne laga kab raat ho, iss bhag daud se main thak gaya tha iss liye main wahi so gaya.
abhi thoda hi soya tha ki koi zor se chillaya, main hadbada ke uth gaya samne dekha to wahi ladki chlla rahi thi wo mere samne hi khadi thi, main daud ke uska muh band kiya.
Main:- sshhhhhhh..sshhhhhhh chuppp..chupppp nhi to main tumko maar dung chup ho jao.
lekin wo chhatpatane lagi or usne laat maar kar waha ka saman geera diya, itna sab aawaz or chillane se udhar se koi bhagta hua aaya.
unkwon:- Kya hua miru kya geer gaya kyo chillai tum?
Tabhi wo Mujhe dekh ke chaunk gaya or bhagne ki koshish kare laga.
Main:- Hey wahi ruk jao nhi to isko jaan se maar dunga.
Meri baat sun wo ruk gaya, lekin tabhi wo ladki ne mere hath me zor se kaat liya jisse mujhe bat dard hua.
Main:- Aaaaahhhhhhhh....... tumko meri baat samajh nhi aati kya ... pagal ho, maine ek thappad usse maar diya.
Ladka:- Usse maat maro usse chhod do, wo kuchh nhi karegi ... bhagwan ke liye meri bahan ko chhod do, hum kisi ko kuchh nhi btayege.
Main:- dekho main kisi ko kuchh nhi karunga, mujhe bas raat tak yaha rahne do main kisi ko oi nuksaan nhi karunga, mujhe bas maharani se milna hai, raat tak mujhe yaha rahne do.
Ladka:- Thik hai tum yaha rah sakte ho, hum nhi kahege kisi ko.
phir main wahi baitha raha, ab wo sab bhi shant the.
Ladka:- Tum bhojan karoge hum bhojan karne jaa rahe hain?
Ab mujhe to bhukh to lagi hi thi to maine han bol diya.
Main:- Tumhara Naam kya hai, iss ghar me tum dono hi rahte ho?
Ladka:- han hum do hi rahte hai, hamare mata pita nhi hai, mera naam LIO hai or Ye meri bahan MIRU, Tum koun ho?
Main:- Main dharti se aaya hun, mera naam chandra hai, main manav hun.
LIO:- Kya tum manav ho, lekin manav to pani me swas nhi le sakte, kintu tum to..
Main:- Shaayad main sabse alag hun isliye le paa raha hun.
Main:- Tum Dono karte kya ho, or miru maaf karna maine tum par hath uthaya mujhe aisa nhi karna chahiye tha, bhojan ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
Meri baat par bas miru muskura di or kuchh nhi bola.
Lio:- Main nagar me aapni dukan chalata hun, meri bahan mahal me kaam karti hai sevika ka.
Itna sun main bahut khush hua.
Main:- Achha kya tum mujhe maharani se milwa sakti ho, mujhe unse milna bahut jaruri hai.
Lio:- Waise tum maharani se kyo milna chahte ho, unse to 1 saal se koi nhi mil paya hai, wo bahar nhi aati hai.
Main :- Kyo aisi kya wajaha hai jo wo bahar nhi aati, jabki ye rajya to unke hi adhin hai to ye maharaj kahan se aa gaya?
Miru:- Wo maharani ke pati hai, maharani kisi se nhi milti unki tabiyat thik nhi hai, isliye unko kaksh se bahar nhi aane diya jata, unki seva me kuchh vishesh dasiyan hai wahi jati hai unki kaksh me or sainiko ka bahut pahra hai waha koi nhi jata.
Main:- Ohh aisa kya tab main kaise milunga unse.
aise hi baate karte bhojan hua hamara or phir aise hi bate chahti rahi.
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Wahi dusri taraf
Jokram Maidan me jo kuchh bhi hua tha usse bahut gussa tha aur apne kaksh me idhar se udhar tahal raha tha.
Jokram:- haaaaa... nahi chhodunga tujhe insaani kide, tune abhi meri taqat nhi dekhi teri maut ab mere hatho hi likhi hai, uss pushtak ko meri siva koi hasil nhi kar sakta.
Phir wo kuchh mantra padhta hai kuchh hi time me waha do saye aa jate hain jo dekhne se hi bhayanak the, wo jokram ke samne jhk gaye.
Jokram:- jao mere gulamo jao or uss insaani kide ko dhundh kar uska shikar karo or mere kamsksh le kar aao, taki main usko apne hatho se saza de saku.
shaitan Gulam:- jo huqum malikkk.
Aur wo dono waha se gayab ho jate hain meri talash me wo dono sidha pahunche uss maidan me jaha se main bhaga tha, taki mere sugandh se wo pata kar sakke ki main kis or gaya hun.
Wo dono mera pichha karte un rasto par chal diye jaha jahan se main gujra tha or ant me wo lio ke ghar ke bahar aa kar ruk gaye.
jaise hi wo bahar ruke mujhe kuchh khatre ka ehsaas ho gaya, mere bhediye wali khoobiya ye bta rahi thi ki kuchh to hone wala hai, abhi main ye sonch hi raha tha hi tabhi darwaza tod kar do ajeeb se janwar andar aa gaye.
usnko dekh kar miru or lio ek taraf bhage, unhone aise janwar kabhi nhi dekhe the wo sab bahut hi khatarnak lag rahe the, muh se khoon tapak raha tha , chokh nukile dant the or kali ankhe. un dono ne ek zordar dahad mara or mujh par kud gaye.
Maine kudte dekh kar dusri taraf chhalang laga di or maine bhi apna roop badal liya bhediye me or dahad mara, pura ghar kanp gaya.
Mera ye roop dekh kar to lio or miru kanp gaye unko yakeen hi nhi hua jo apne ko manav kah raha tha uska ye roop bhi ho sakta hai.
wo dono janwar meri taraf daude or maine apne hatho me dono ki gardan hawa me hi pakad li, or kud kar ghar se bahar aa gaya.
Phir maine unko zameen pae de mara, lekin un salo ko kuchh nhi hua, wo phir khade ho ke mere dono taraf se gher ke chakkar katne lage, mainbiche me khada unko ghurr kar dahad raha tha,
tabhi pichhe se ek ne mere upar jhalan lagai or mere kandhe me dant gada diya ... main ne usko pakad ke zameen me mara or usko beech se faad diya. tabhi.........
Aaj itna hi.
Thanks
Thakur admi:- Maine koi rape nhi kiya naa maine kisi ko mara hai, tum mujhpar jhutha ilzaam laga rahe ho?
Vijay:- Achcha lekin tune apharan to kiya hai naa ......
meri baat sun ke sabke kaan khade ho gaye, yaha tak ki us admi ki khud ki ankhe bade bade ho gaye meri baat sun ke.
Ab Aage......................
Main abhi ek bahut bade maidan me khada tha or mujhe janjeeron se jakad ke sipahi khade the, ye ek bahut bada yuddh ka maidan tha, kinare me yaha ke log khade the jo mujhe saza dete hue dekhne aaye the, paata nhi kya prachar kiya gaya tha mere bare jo sab mujhe aise ghur rahe the.
iisse maaroooo.... iisse maaaroooo.... iisse maaroooo....
" shantttttttttt raho sab, maharaj aa rahe hain"
ye awaaz senapati ki thi, jise sun ke sab chup ho gaye.
Maharaj aake apne gaddi par baith gaya or mujhe dekh ke ek kutil muskan diya.
main abhi khada apne vicharo me hi khoya hua tha ki uss maharaj ke bolne ki aawaz mere kano me padi.
Maharaj:- Mere nagar wasiyon ye ghuspathiya jo aap sabke samaksh khada hai, isne nagar me utpat machaya or hamare nagar me chhup ka ghus paith kar raha tha, jiske apradh me isse maut ki saza di jati hai, senapati iss ghuspaithiye ka sar dhad se alag kar do.
itna sun kar senapati mere taraf badh chala, mujhe kaise bhi kar ke yaha se niklna tha, jaise hi senapati mere pass aaya maine apne puri taqat juta ka un janjeeron ko apni taraf khincha jo sipahiyon ne paad rakhi thi.
Mere khinchte hi or sab meri oor khichte aa gaye, maine unko dhkka de kar janjeer ko jhatka diya or unke hatho se chhuda liya, tab tak senapati mere kareeb aa chuka tha or aate hi apne takwar se mujh par hamla kar diya.
maine apne hath ke janjeer se uska vaar rok diya or dusre se usko mara jisse wo door ja geera, itne me sainik bhi aane lage mere taraf, maine jaldi se apne hath ke janjeero ko nikala or ek talwar ko apne hatho me prakat kiya.
Phir kya jo bhi samne aata gaya sab ko kat-te hue main waha se aage badhne laga, lekin main jitno ko marta ustne phir aa jate, mujhe abhi unn sab se bhidne ka mauka thik nhi laga mujhe kaise bhi yaha se bahar nikalna tha.
Main apni tarafjyada sainikaata dekh waha se bhaga ... or waha ke deewaro ko kud kar bahar nikal gaya, mere pichhe sainik lage hue the, iiss liye abhi chhupne ki jagah chahiye thi, isliye main nagar me hi ek ghar me ghus gayakyoki sara nagar khali hi tha sab to meri maut dekhne maidan me the, main ek ghar me ghus kar baith gaya.
main:- Kaha fans gaya hun main, mujhe pushtak ke chakkar me kya kya karna pad raha hai, jaan jate jate bachi, ab mujhe raat me hi mahal me dekhna hoga koun saa maharani kaha hai, yaar bhuk bhi lagi hua hai.
tabhi gate khulne ki aawaz aai, sayad iss ghar me rahne wale aa gaye the, maine jhank kar dekha to ye koi ladki thi.
main wahi chhup kar intezar karne laga kab raat ho, iss bhag daud se main thak gaya tha iss liye main wahi so gaya.
abhi thoda hi soya tha ki koi zor se chillaya, main hadbada ke uth gaya samne dekha to wahi ladki chlla rahi thi wo mere samne hi khadi thi, main daud ke uska muh band kiya.
Main:- sshhhhhhh..sshhhhhhh chuppp..chupppp nhi to main tumko maar dung chup ho jao.
lekin wo chhatpatane lagi or usne laat maar kar waha ka saman geera diya, itna sab aawaz or chillane se udhar se koi bhagta hua aaya.
unkwon:- Kya hua miru kya geer gaya kyo chillai tum?
Tabhi wo Mujhe dekh ke chaunk gaya or bhagne ki koshish kare laga.
Main:- Hey wahi ruk jao nhi to isko jaan se maar dunga.
Meri baat sun wo ruk gaya, lekin tabhi wo ladki ne mere hath me zor se kaat liya jisse mujhe bat dard hua.
Main:- Aaaaahhhhhhhh....... tumko meri baat samajh nhi aati kya ... pagal ho, maine ek thappad usse maar diya.
Ladka:- Usse maat maro usse chhod do, wo kuchh nhi karegi ... bhagwan ke liye meri bahan ko chhod do, hum kisi ko kuchh nhi btayege.
Main:- dekho main kisi ko kuchh nhi karunga, mujhe bas raat tak yaha rahne do main kisi ko oi nuksaan nhi karunga, mujhe bas maharani se milna hai, raat tak mujhe yaha rahne do.
Ladka:- Thik hai tum yaha rah sakte ho, hum nhi kahege kisi ko.
phir main wahi baitha raha, ab wo sab bhi shant the.
Ladka:- Tum bhojan karoge hum bhojan karne jaa rahe hain?
Ab mujhe to bhukh to lagi hi thi to maine han bol diya.
Main:- Tumhara Naam kya hai, iss ghar me tum dono hi rahte ho?
Ladka:- han hum do hi rahte hai, hamare mata pita nhi hai, mera naam LIO hai or Ye meri bahan MIRU, Tum koun ho?
Main:- Main dharti se aaya hun, mera naam chandra hai, main manav hun.
LIO:- Kya tum manav ho, lekin manav to pani me swas nhi le sakte, kintu tum to..
Main:- Shaayad main sabse alag hun isliye le paa raha hun.
Main:- Tum Dono karte kya ho, or miru maaf karna maine tum par hath uthaya mujhe aisa nhi karna chahiye tha, bhojan ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
Meri baat par bas miru muskura di or kuchh nhi bola.
Lio:- Main nagar me aapni dukan chalata hun, meri bahan mahal me kaam karti hai sevika ka.
Itna sun main bahut khush hua.
Main:- Achha kya tum mujhe maharani se milwa sakti ho, mujhe unse milna bahut jaruri hai.
Lio:- Waise tum maharani se kyo milna chahte ho, unse to 1 saal se koi nhi mil paya hai, wo bahar nhi aati hai.
Main :- Kyo aisi kya wajaha hai jo wo bahar nhi aati, jabki ye rajya to unke hi adhin hai to ye maharaj kahan se aa gaya?
Miru:- Wo maharani ke pati hai, maharani kisi se nhi milti unki tabiyat thik nhi hai, isliye unko kaksh se bahar nhi aane diya jata, unki seva me kuchh vishesh dasiyan hai wahi jati hai unki kaksh me or sainiko ka bahut pahra hai waha koi nhi jata.
Main:- Ohh aisa kya tab main kaise milunga unse.
aise hi baate karte bhojan hua hamara or phir aise hi bate chahti rahi.
*****************************************
Wahi dusri taraf
Jokram Maidan me jo kuchh bhi hua tha usse bahut gussa tha aur apne kaksh me idhar se udhar tahal raha tha.
Jokram:- haaaaa... nahi chhodunga tujhe insaani kide, tune abhi meri taqat nhi dekhi teri maut ab mere hatho hi likhi hai, uss pushtak ko meri siva koi hasil nhi kar sakta.
Phir wo kuchh mantra padhta hai kuchh hi time me waha do saye aa jate hain jo dekhne se hi bhayanak the, wo jokram ke samne jhk gaye.
Jokram:- jao mere gulamo jao or uss insaani kide ko dhundh kar uska shikar karo or mere kamsksh le kar aao, taki main usko apne hatho se saza de saku.
shaitan Gulam:- jo huqum malikkk.
Aur wo dono waha se gayab ho jate hain meri talash me wo dono sidha pahunche uss maidan me jaha se main bhaga tha, taki mere sugandh se wo pata kar sakke ki main kis or gaya hun.
Wo dono mera pichha karte un rasto par chal diye jaha jahan se main gujra tha or ant me wo lio ke ghar ke bahar aa kar ruk gaye.
jaise hi wo bahar ruke mujhe kuchh khatre ka ehsaas ho gaya, mere bhediye wali khoobiya ye bta rahi thi ki kuchh to hone wala hai, abhi main ye sonch hi raha tha hi tabhi darwaza tod kar do ajeeb se janwar andar aa gaye.
usnko dekh kar miru or lio ek taraf bhage, unhone aise janwar kabhi nhi dekhe the wo sab bahut hi khatarnak lag rahe the, muh se khoon tapak raha tha , chokh nukile dant the or kali ankhe. un dono ne ek zordar dahad mara or mujh par kud gaye.
Maine kudte dekh kar dusri taraf chhalang laga di or maine bhi apna roop badal liya bhediye me or dahad mara, pura ghar kanp gaya.
Mera ye roop dekh kar to lio or miru kanp gaye unko yakeen hi nhi hua jo apne ko manav kah raha tha uska ye roop bhi ho sakta hai.
wo dono janwar meri taraf daude or maine apne hatho me dono ki gardan hawa me hi pakad li, or kud kar ghar se bahar aa gaya.
Phir maine unko zameen pae de mara, lekin un salo ko kuchh nhi hua, wo phir khade ho ke mere dono taraf se gher ke chakkar katne lage, mainbiche me khada unko ghurr kar dahad raha tha,
tabhi pichhe se ek ne mere upar jhalan lagai or mere kandhe me dant gada diya ... main ne usko pakad ke zameen me mara or usko beech se faad diya. tabhi.........
Aaj itna hi.
Thanks
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Asif khan
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Kia zabardast interesting update mara h Maza a gia
Excellent birrilant fantastic behad shandar jawab nahi yar tumhara
Excellent birrilant fantastic behad shandar jawab nahi yar tumhara
Mr.X796
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Bhai morning main padh ke rebu deta hun
Extraordinary update Bhai ...
Bahut khubsurat update hai Bhai
Chandra to jaise taise Jan bacha jr bhag gya. But do saye ki bich fas gya dekhna dilchasp hoga.. aakhir pustak kaise pata hai..
Bahut khubsurat update hai Bhai
Chandra to jaise taise Jan bacha jr bhag gya. But do saye ki bich fas gya dekhna dilchasp hoga.. aakhir pustak kaise pata hai..
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Chhota par mast update hai.chandra ka action chalu ho gaya hai. Usaki shaktiya use jitayegi.
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