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Aap bas likhte jaye...... bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap.Aisa na bolo bhaiya ji ye pahla update hai aur usme bhi tute dilon ko jod raha hun aap aisa kaise soch liye story boring hogi..aate rahiyega aur padhte rahiyega short story hogi kuch update me khatam ho jayegi mujhe faltu me khinchna nahi aata ya kah lo mai utna bada writer nahi hun par story ka end achcha hoga kyonki mai khud mera bhi b positive hai
Agla update kal dophar tak ya shaam tak mujhe bhi sabki story padhni aur aapki bhi to kal update deta yahan tab tak mera khurafati dimag kuch sonch bhi lega likhna kya haiOne more update plz..
Thanks bhai ji yahan kuch reserve nahi kiya hai choti si story likhne ki koshis kar raha aur update bhi pahle panne par diya hai..congrats to aap sabko karte do sabd story par bhi bol deo hamara sina chuda ho jayegaFor starting new story thread
Hope this story will touch our hearts
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nice story mein bhi aa gya ap ke kaan pakarne just kiddingupdate 1
Maine aaj fir bahut sharaab pi li thi bahut nasa ho gaya mujhe aur phir mere pair mujhe idhar udhar lekar chalne lage chalte chalte mai pata nahi kahan aa gaya tha tabhi ek aadmi se takra gaya aur wo bola kya shahab kuch chahiye kya..maine use dekha aur bola chahiye bhai mujhe pyar chahiye wo pyar jo mujhko chhod kar chala gaya..wo bola chaliye fir aap mere sath aaj aapko pyar se nahla dete hain..mai bola kahan bhai to wo bola yahin pas me munnibai ke yahan chalna wahan pyar ka bhandaar hai..mai bola aisa kya to fir le chalo hamko wahan mai bahut pareshan hun..fir hum munnibai ke kothe par pahunch gaye ji han ye kotha tha khair hame kya pata hum to nase me the pyar ki talash me kothe par aa gaye pahli baar galti se par mujhe hosh kahan tha..munnibai ne puncha kya loge aap to jo aadmi sath me aaya tha wo bola ki pyar chahiye bahut sara fir munnibai ne bola 10000 rupye lagengen kuch din pahle ek nayi ladki aayi hai aur badi muskil se taiyaar hui pyar dene ko fresh maal hai kya bolta hai..maine turant paise de diye aur pyar kharid liya apne liye ab mujhe kya malum ki ye pyar sirf aaj ki raat ke liye hai zindgi bhar ke liye nahi hai..fir mujhe ek kamre me pahuncha diya gaya jahan mujhe pyar milne wala na aur pyar dene wali sayad bathroom me thi..kafi time ho gaya to maine bathroom ka darwaja khatkaya aur bola ye kya baat mera pyar bathroom me ghus gawa..bas itna bolna tha ki darwaja khula aur wo sidhe me gale me jhul gayi rote hue aur boli prem tum aa gaye prem aur mera sara nasa uthar gaya turat..are tum yahan tumne to mujhe laat maarkar apni zindgi se nikaal diya tha us sagar ke liye fir tum mera intzaar kar rahi thi..meri zindgi barbaad karke tumhe kya mila mai bola..wo rote hue boli dekh lo kya mila mujhe aaj kothe par aa gayi hun mai sagar ne meri sari property hadap kar mujhe yahan chhod diya aur ab tum aa gaye mujhe yahan se le chalo prem mujhe yahan nahi rahna abhi le chalo mujhe yahan se...
Bilkul bhai aapki story read Karke review dunga.Thanks bhai ji yahan kuch reserve nahi kiya hai choti si story likhne ki koshis kar raha aur update bhi pahle panne par diya hai..congrats to aap sabko karte do sabd story par bhi bol deo hamara sina chuda ho jayega
Huum agle update me aapko sare sawalo ke jabaab mil jaygen kya hua kyun hua kaise hua kuch bhi achanak nahi hota mera dost sab sonch samjhkar lika gaya hai aur jo aadmi takraya wo ladkiyon ka dalaal bhi ho sakta hai aadmi ghumte ghumte kothe par bhi ja sakta khash kar jab wo nase ki halat me ho aur jo premika hai use wahan aaye mahina bhar se jada ho chuka koi pahunchte hi dhandha suru kar de jaruri nahi kuch ladkiyon ko manane me mahino beet jate tab wo raji hoti aur bhi bahut si baten hain..lo kafi kuch bata bhi diya maine par aane wala update aapki sonch se bhi upar hoga aap wahan tak nahi sonch saktenice story mein bhi aa gya ap ke kaan pakarne just kidding
good start hero ko pyar me dhoka mila hai aur wo sarabi ban gya good...
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Ye kya prem prem ki talash me munni bai ke kotthe per chala gya wo bhi raste me khare aadmi ke piche lag ker hahaha....
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Prem ki talash me hero pohancha munni bai ke kotthe aur prem ko premika mil bhi gayi.....
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Ye jo raste me aadmi tha ye aadmi tha ya koi angel heroine ki 1st night per he us ne kotthe per hero ki entry karwa di good....
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Lagta hai heroine ne sagar ke piche prem ko chora aur sagar ne property ke piche heroine ko...
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Now suggetion
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Thora space de ker likho ta ke parhane me asani ho...
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Expretion bhi dikhao...
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Jaldi se likhne ki zaroorat nai hai araam se likho
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Keep it up give update regulary and complete story