Romance Han maine bhi pyar kiya hai(Completed)

[Siraj Patel]

For starting new story thread

Hope this story will touch our hearts
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[Naina]

for new story...

Kya baat hai....... ishq me haare huye Aashiqo ke toli me ek aur aashiq ka naam jud gaya......
Kishmat ka khel bhi toh dekho zindagi ke kish mod ushi se amna samna ho gaya jishke liye Begane ho gaye the ..........
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update Rahul ji..... great going

 

[Naina]

Aisa na bolo bhaiya ji ye pahla update hai aur usme bhi tute dilon ko jod raha hun aap aisa kaise soch liye story boring hogi..aate rahiyega aur padhte rahiyega short story hogi kuch update me khatam ho jayegi mujhe faltu me khinchna nahi aata ya kah lo mai utna bada writer nahi hun par story ka end achcha hoga kyonki mai khud mera bhi b positive hai

Aap bas likhte jaye...... bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap.

 

[Naina]

One more update plz..

 

[Rahul]

One more update plz..

Agla update kal dophar tak ya shaam tak mujhe bhi sabki story padhni aur aapki bhi to kal update deta yahan tab tak mera khurafati dimag kuch sonch bhi lega likhna kya hai

 

[Rahul]

For starting new story thread

Hope this story will touch our hearts
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Thanks bhai ji yahan kuch reserve nahi kiya hai choti si story likhne ki koshis kar raha aur update bhi pahle panne par diya hai..congrats to aap sabko karte do sabd story par bhi bol deo hamara sina chuda ho jayega

 

[Damha]

update 1
Maine aaj fir bahut sharaab pi li thi bahut nasa ho gaya mujhe aur phir mere pair mujhe idhar udhar lekar chalne lage chalte chalte mai pata nahi kahan aa gaya tha tabhi ek aadmi se takra gaya aur wo bola kya shahab kuch chahiye kya..maine use dekha aur bola chahiye bhai mujhe pyar chahiye wo pyar jo mujhko chhod kar chala gaya..wo bola chaliye fir aap mere sath aaj aapko pyar se nahla dete hain..mai bola kahan bhai to wo bola yahin pas me munnibai ke yahan chalna wahan pyar ka bhandaar hai..mai bola aisa kya to fir le chalo hamko wahan mai bahut pareshan hun..fir hum munnibai ke kothe par pahunch gaye ji han ye kotha tha khair hame kya pata hum to nase me the pyar ki talash me kothe par aa gaye pahli baar galti se par mujhe hosh kahan tha..munnibai ne puncha kya loge aap to jo aadmi sath me aaya tha wo bola ki pyar chahiye bahut sara fir munnibai ne bola 10000 rupye lagengen kuch din pahle ek nayi ladki aayi hai aur badi muskil se taiyaar hui pyar dene ko fresh maal hai kya bolta hai..maine turant paise de diye aur pyar kharid liya apne liye ab mujhe kya malum ki ye pyar sirf aaj ki raat ke liye hai zindgi bhar ke liye nahi hai..fir mujhe ek kamre me pahuncha diya gaya jahan mujhe pyar milne wala na aur pyar dene wali sayad bathroom me thi..kafi time ho gaya to maine bathroom ka darwaja khatkaya aur bola ye kya baat mera pyar bathroom me ghus gawa..bas itna bolna tha ki darwaja khula aur wo sidhe me gale me jhul gayi rote hue aur boli prem tum aa gaye prem aur mera sara nasa uthar gaya turat..are tum yahan tumne to mujhe laat maarkar apni zindgi se nikaal diya tha us sagar ke liye fir tum mera intzaar kar rahi thi..meri zindgi barbaad karke tumhe kya mila mai bola..wo rote hue boli dekh lo kya mila mujhe aaj kothe par aa gayi hun mai sagar ne meri sari property hadap kar mujhe yahan chhod diya aur ab tum aa gaye mujhe yahan se le chalo prem mujhe yahan nahi rahna abhi le chalo mujhe yahan se...

nice story mein bhi aa gya ap ke kaan pakarne just kidding

good start hero ko pyar me dhoka mila hai aur wo sarabi ban gya good...
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Ye kya prem prem ki talash me munni bai ke kotthe per chala gya wo bhi raste me khare aadmi ke piche lag ker hahaha....
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Prem ki talash me hero pohancha munni bai ke kotthe aur prem ko premika mil bhi gayi.....
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Ye jo raste me aadmi tha ye aadmi tha ya koi angel heroine ki 1st night per he us ne kotthe per hero ki entry karwa di good....
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Lagta hai heroine ne sagar ke piche prem ko chora aur sagar ne property ke piche heroine ko...
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Now suggetion
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Thora space de ker likho ta ke parhane me asani ho...
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Expretion bhi dikhao...
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Jaldi se likhne ki zaroorat nai hai araam se likho
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Keep it up give update regulary and complete story

 

[Siraj Patel]

Thanks bhai ji yahan kuch reserve nahi kiya hai choti si story likhne ki koshis kar raha aur update bhi pahle panne par diya hai..congrats to aap sabko karte do sabd story par bhi bol deo hamara sina chuda ho jayega

Bilkul bhai aapki story read Karke review dunga.

 

[Rahul]

nice story mein bhi aa gya ap ke kaan pakarne just kidding

good start hero ko pyar me dhoka mila hai aur wo sarabi ban gya good...
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Ye kya prem prem ki talash me munni bai ke kotthe per chala gya wo bhi raste me khare aadmi ke piche lag ker hahaha....
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Prem ki talash me hero pohancha munni bai ke kotthe aur prem ko premika mil bhi gayi.....
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Ye jo raste me aadmi tha ye aadmi tha ya koi angel heroine ki 1st night per he us ne kotthe per hero ki entry karwa di good....
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.
Lagta hai heroine ne sagar ke piche prem ko chora aur sagar ne property ke piche heroine ko...
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.
Now suggetion
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.
Thora space de ker likho ta ke parhane me asani ho...
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Expretion bhi dikhao...
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Jaldi se likhne ki zaroorat nai hai araam se likho
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.
Keep it up give update regulary and complete story

Huum agle update me aapko sare sawalo ke jabaab mil jaygen kya hua kyun hua kaise hua kuch bhi achanak nahi hota mera dost sab sonch samjhkar lika gaya hai aur jo aadmi takraya wo ladkiyon ka dalaal bhi ho sakta hai aadmi ghumte ghumte kothe par bhi ja sakta khash kar jab wo nase ki halat me ho aur jo premika hai use wahan aaye mahina bhar se jada ho chuka koi pahunchte hi dhandha suru kar de jaruri nahi kuch ladkiyon ko manane me mahino beet jate tab wo raji hoti aur bhi bahut si baten hain..lo kafi kuch bata bhi diya maine par aane wala update aapki sonch se bhi upar hoga aap wahan tak nahi sonch sakte

 

[Rahul]

update 3
subah ke 8 baje meri nind khuli to maine dekha mere samne sofe par meri purani premika jiska chehra meri taraf aur ankhon me ansu bhare hue ab raat bhar royi hai to abhi ansu na gir rahe the par laal laal thi..khair mujhe sab yaad aa gaya raat me jo bhi hua par sar mera dard karna suru ho chuka tha..khair fir maine usse kaha aao chalte hain aur hum dono munnibai ke pass aa gaye..munnibai koi chudail jaisi awrat nahi thi bas halaat ne usko yahan la khada kiya tha..jab usko maine bola is ladki ko mai apne sath le jana chahta hun to usne kaha le jao..munnibai ko hamare bare me sab pata tha aur sahanbhuti bhi thi shayad ishiliye usne meri premika ko aaj tak dhandhe par na baithaya tha..usne meri pic bhi dekhi hui thi use puri kahani malum thi aur wo bhi mera sayad intzaar kar rahi thi..mera aana kismat se hua tha yahan par kahte hain ki agar dil se pukaro to upar wala sunta hai sayad uski pukaar par taras khakar mujhe bhagwan ne wahan bhej diya tha..khair maine apne bodyguard shera ko call kiya shera kahan ho abhi to wo bola mai kothe ke niche khada hun bhai..wo log meri location gps se pata karke raat me hi niche pahunch gaye the..maine shera ko bola 5 lakh rupye lekar upar aa jao..fir maine munnibai ko wo paise diye aur hum dono aaraam se bahar aa gaye koi fight wagira ki jarurat na padi wahan..maine driver se apne naye makaan par jane ko bol diya jise do din pahle maine liya tha kyonki ghar to le ja nahi sakta tha abhi use aur shayad kabhi bhi na le ja paun..khair hum ghar pahunche aur tabhi bhabhi ka call aa gaya ghar se bhabhi boli prem kahan ho aap bhai jaldi se ghar aa jao khusi aayi hai aur aapko yaad kar rahi hai..ye khusi jo hai wo bhabhi ki mausi ki beti hai aur mujhe bahut pasand karti hai..bas mere aage padte hi iski bolti band ho jati hai..