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Romance Han maine bhi pyar kiya hai(Completed)

Rahul

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ek chotu update diya hai abhi taki aapke kuch purane sawalon le jabaab mil jayen baki kal shaam tak :ciao:
 

Casinar

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Maine aaj fir bahut sharaab pi li thi bahut nasa ho gaya mujhe aur phir mere pair mujhe idhar udhar lekar chalne lage chalte chalte mai pata nahi kahan aa gaya tha tabhi ek aadmi se takra gaya aur wo bola kya shahab kuch chahiye kya..maine use dekha aur bola chahiye bhai mujhe pyar chahiye wo pyar jo mujhko chhod kar chala gaya..wo bola chaliye fir aap mere sath aaj aapko pyar se nahla dete hain..mai bola kahan bhai to wo bola yahin pas me munnibai ke yahan chalna wahan pyar ka bhandaar hai..mai bola aisa kya to fir le chalo hamko wahan mai bahut pareshan hun..fir hum munnibai ke kothe par pahunch gaye ji han ye kotha tha khair hame kya pata hum to nase me the pyar ki talash me kothe par aa gaye pahli baar galti se par mujhe hosh kahan tha..munnibai ne puncha kya loge aap to jo aadmi sath me aaya tha wo bola ki pyar chahiye bahut sara fir munnibai ne bola 10000 rupye lagengen kuch din pahle ek nayi ladki aayi hai aur badi muskil se taiyaar hui pyar dene ko fresh maal hai kya bolta hai..maine turant paise de diye aur pyar kharid liya apne liye ab mujhe kya malum ki ye pyar sirf aaj ki raat ke liye hai zindgi bhar ke liye nahi hai..fir mujhe ek kamre me pahuncha diya gaya jahan mujhe pyar milne wala na aur pyar dene wali sayad bathroom me thi..kafi time ho gaya to maine bathroom ka darwaja khatkaya aur bola ye kya baat mera pyar bathroom me ghus gawa..bas itna bolna tha ki darwaja khula aur wo sidhe me gale me jhul gayi rote hue aur boli prem tum aa gaye prem aur mera sara nasa uthar gaya turat..are tum yahan tumne to mujhe laat maarkar apni zindgi se nikaal diya tha us sagar ke liye fir tum mera intzaar kar rahi thi..meri zindgi barbaad karke tumhe kya mila mai bola..wo rote hue boli dekh lo kya mila mujhe aaj kothe par aa gayi hun mai sagar ne meri sari property hadap kar mujhe yahan chhod diya aur ab tum aa gaye mujhe yahan se le chalo prem mujhe yahan nahi rahna abhi le chalo mujhe yahan se...

Are Rahul tum bhi likhne lage? Lo!! Ek aur reader writer ban gaya matlab 1 reader ki kami hui aur :lol:
Chalo ab kahani par ata hoon. Meri ek short story aayi thi kuch saal pehle "Prisoner of Love" naam ki. Usski yaad dila diya iss update ne.
Magar start bahut achi hai aur dil ki taaron ko chhuh gayi.
Tumne ek pyar mein dhoka khaya hua aashik ka bade ache se varnaan kiya hai chand hi shabd mein. Usski taklif aur dil ka haal acha bayaan kiya hai.
Aksar toote hue dil wale sharab ka sahara lekar jana kahin aur chahte hein par pahunch kahin aur jaate hein.
Update passand aya mujhe kyunke pehla update mein hi ussko apne khoye hue pyar ka saamna karne ko mil gaya.... aguey padhta hoon...
 

king cobra

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subah ke 8 baje meri nind khuli to maine dekha mere samne sofe par meri purani premika jiska chehra meri taraf aur ankhon me ansu bhare hue ab raat bhar royi hai to abhi ansu na gir rahe the par laal laal thi..khair mujhe sab yaad aa gaya raat me jo bhi hua par sar mera dard karna suru ho chuka tha..khair fir maine usse kaha aao chalte hain aur hum dono munnibai ke pass aa gaye..munnibai koi chudail jaisi awrat nahi thi bas halaat ne usko yahan la khada kiya tha..jab usko maine bola is ladki ko mai apne sath le jana chahta hun to usne kaha le jao..munnibai ko hamare bare me sab pata tha aur sahanbhuti bhi thi shayad ishiliye usne meri premika ko aaj tak dhandhe par na baithaya tha..usne meri pic bhi dekhi hui thi use puri kahani malum thi aur wo bhi mera sayad intzaar kar rahi thi..mera aana kismat se hua tha yahan par kahte hain ki agar dil se pukaro to upar wala sunta hai sayad uski pukaar par taras khakar mujhe bhagwan ne wahan bhej diya tha..khair maine apne bodyguard shera ko call kiya shera kahan ho abhi to wo bola mai kothe ke niche khada hun bhai..wo log meri location gps se pata karke raat me hi niche pahunch gaye the..maine shera ko bola 5 lakh rupye lekar upar aa jao..fir maine munnibai ko wo paise diye aur hum dono aaraam se bahar aa gaye koi fight wagira ki jarurat na padi wahan..maine driver se apne naye makaan par jane ko bol diya jise do din pahle maine liya tha kyonki ghar to le ja nahi sakta tha abhi use aur shayad kabhi bhi na le ja paun..khair hum ghar pahunche aur tabhi bhabhi ka call aa gaya ghar se bhabhi boli prem kahan ho aap bhai jaldi se ghar aa jao khusi aayi hai aur aapko yaad kar rahi hai..ye khusi jo hai wo bhabhi ki mausi ki beti hai aur mujhe bahut pasand karti hai..bas mere aage padte hi iski bolti band ho jati hai..
waah bidu kya update diya hai chota hi sahi par mast hai aur is update ki bahut jarurat thi kahani ke liye nahi to hum log pata nahi kya kya sonchte rahte..ye khusi ka kya role hai bhai kahin ye hamare prem bhai ki khusi to na banegi..shandaar update bidu agle update ka intjaar rahega
 

Casinar

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Thoda apne bare me bata dun..mera naam prem hai aur mere ghar me mere alawa mere bhaiya aur bhabhi hain jo mujhse bahut pyar karte hain..mere paida hone ke kuch shaal baad hi mom dad ek car accident me hame chhodkar chale gaye.. fir mere bhaiya ne mujhe aur business ko jaise taise samhala..wo to shadi bhi nahi karna chahte the par anju bhabhi ne jaise taise mujhe manaya fir maine bhaiya ko manaya tab jakar dono ki shadi hui.. mai un dono ki ankh ka tara hun mera college complete ho chuka hai aur mai kuch mahino se saraab me duba hun kyonki mera dil ek ladki ne bahut buri tarah tod diya hai aur ab zindgi wapas mujhe samne lekar aa gayi hai jahan sayad ek suruaat ho sakti hai ya kuch aur bhi ho sakta hai..to aab aate hain hum munnibai ke kothe par jahan ek nawa hangama suru ho chuka hai..maine sonch liya ise yahan se jaise bhi nikaalna hai par mujhe nind aa rahi thi to mai bola ki achcha subah chalenge abhi so jao mai subah munnibai se baat karta hun ya jaise bhi tumhe yahan se nikaal dunga ye wada hai mera aur mai apne wada kabhi nahi todta tum janti ho..fir uska to pata nahi par mai so gaya aur aaj bahut dino baad mast nind aayi mujhe......

Chalo kuch to pata chala hero k baare mein..... ab uss kothe se ladki ko nikalna kia khel hoga? Khoon kharaba bhi ho sakta hai ta bahut saare paise dena par sakta hai.... aguey padhta hoon
 

Casinar

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subah ke 8 baje meri nind khuli to maine dekha mere samne sofe par meri purani premika jiska chehra meri taraf aur ankhon me ansu bhare hue ab raat bhar royi hai to abhi ansu na gir rahe the par laal laal thi..khair mujhe sab yaad aa gaya raat me jo bhi hua par sar mera dard karna suru ho chuka tha..khair fir maine usse kaha aao chalte hain aur hum dono munnibai ke pass aa gaye..munnibai koi chudail jaisi awrat nahi thi bas halaat ne usko yahan la khada kiya tha..jab usko maine bola is ladki ko mai apne sath le jana chahta hun to usne kaha le jao..munnibai ko hamare bare me sab pata tha aur sahanbhuti bhi thi shayad ishiliye usne meri premika ko aaj tak dhandhe par na baithaya tha..usne meri pic bhi dekhi hui thi use puri kahani malum thi aur wo bhi mera sayad intzaar kar rahi thi..mera aana kismat se hua tha yahan par kahte hain ki agar dil se pukaro to upar wala sunta hai sayad uski pukaar par taras khakar mujhe bhagwan ne wahan bhej diya tha..khair maine apne bodyguard shera ko call kiya shera kahan ho abhi to wo bola mai kothe ke niche khada hun bhai..wo log meri location gps se pata karke raat me hi niche pahunch gaye the..maine shera ko bola 5 lakh rupye lekar upar aa jao..fir maine munnibai ko wo paise diye aur hum dono aaraam se bahar aa gaye koi fight wagira ki jarurat na padi wahan..maine driver se apne naye makaan par jane ko bol diya jise do din pahle maine liya tha kyonki ghar to le ja nahi sakta tha abhi use aur shayad kabhi bhi na le ja paun..khair hum ghar pahunche aur tabhi bhabhi ka call aa gaya ghar se bhabhi boli prem kahan ho aap bhai jaldi se ghar aa jao khusi aayi hai aur aapko yaad kar rahi hai..ye khusi jo hai wo bhabhi ki mausi ki beti hai aur mujhe bahut pasand karti hai..bas mere aage padte hi iski bolti band ho jati hai..

are bade asaani se nikal liye kothe se. bahut jaldi nikal pade wahan se...haan jeise main ne last comment mein kaha ya to fight ya paisa, innhi ke beech deal tey hota hai eise maamlon mein......
to chalo donon wahan se nikal to gaye magar ab kia yeh khushi ab gham to nahin laane wali inn donon ki zindagi aur pyar ke beech?
ab kia hoga? Prem keise sambhaalega iss haalaat ko? ya to khushi ko sab sach sach batana hoga ke Prem kissi aur se pyar karta hai ya phir kia?
agle update mein to pata chalega.....
bahut achchi story hai rahul yaara likhte chalo aur :congrats:
 
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subah ke 8 baje meri nind khuli to maine dekha mere samne sofe par meri purani premika jiska chehra meri taraf aur ankhon me ansu bhare hue ab raat bhar royi hai to abhi ansu na gir rahe the par laal laal thi..khair mujhe sab yaad aa gaya raat me jo bhi hua par sar mera dard karna suru ho chuka tha..khair fir maine usse kaha aao chalte hain aur hum dono munnibai ke pass aa gaye..munnibai koi chudail jaisi awrat nahi thi bas halaat ne usko yahan la khada kiya tha..jab usko maine bola is ladki ko mai apne sath le jana chahta hun to usne kaha le jao..munnibai ko hamare bare me sab pata tha aur sahanbhuti bhi thi shayad ishiliye usne meri premika ko aaj tak dhandhe par na baithaya tha..usne meri pic bhi dekhi hui thi use puri kahani malum thi aur wo bhi mera sayad intzaar kar rahi thi..mera aana kismat se hua tha yahan par kahte hain ki agar dil se pukaro to upar wala sunta hai sayad uski pukaar par taras khakar mujhe bhagwan ne wahan bhej diya tha..khair maine apne bodyguard shera ko call kiya shera kahan ho abhi to wo bola mai kothe ke niche khada hun bhai..wo log meri location gps se pata karke raat me hi niche pahunch gaye the..maine shera ko bola 5 lakh rupye lekar upar aa jao..fir maine munnibai ko wo paise diye aur hum dono aaraam se bahar aa gaye koi fight wagira ki jarurat na padi wahan..maine driver se apne naye makaan par jane ko bol diya jise do din pahle maine liya tha kyonki ghar to le ja nahi sakta tha abhi use aur shayad kabhi bhi na le ja paun..khair hum ghar pahunche aur tabhi bhabhi ka call aa gaya ghar se bhabhi boli prem kahan ho aap bhai jaldi se ghar aa jao khusi aayi hai aur aapko yaad kar rahi hai..ye khusi jo hai wo bhabhi ki mausi ki beti hai aur mujhe bahut pasand karti hai..bas mere aage padte hi iski bolti band ho jati hai..
Nice update bhai

Mujhe laga tha k kuch jhagda hoga magar munnibai ne to itni asaani se premika ko le jane diya

Aur ye achanak khusi ki entry :what: jaise Ek myaan me do talwar nahi reh sakti waise hi yaha ek hi heroine hogi ab wo kon bane gi wo to Rahul bhai hi decide karenge:alright:
 

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subah ke 8 baje meri nind khuli to maine dekha mere samne sofe par meri purani premika jiska chehra meri taraf aur ankhon me ansu bhare hue ab raat bhar royi hai to abhi ansu na gir rahe the par laal laal thi..khair mujhe sab yaad aa gaya raat me jo bhi hua par sar mera dard karna suru ho chuka tha..khair fir maine usse kaha aao chalte hain aur hum dono munnibai ke pass aa gaye..munnibai koi chudail jaisi awrat nahi thi bas halaat ne usko yahan la khada kiya tha..jab usko maine bola is ladki ko mai apne sath le jana chahta hun to usne kaha le jao..munnibai ko hamare bare me sab pata tha aur sahanbhuti bhi thi shayad ishiliye usne meri premika ko aaj tak dhandhe par na baithaya tha..usne meri pic bhi dekhi hui thi use puri kahani malum thi aur wo bhi mera sayad intzaar kar rahi thi..mera aana kismat se hua tha yahan par kahte hain ki agar dil se pukaro to upar wala sunta hai sayad uski pukaar par taras khakar mujhe bhagwan ne wahan bhej diya tha..khair maine apne bodyguard shera ko call kiya shera kahan ho abhi to wo bola mai kothe ke niche khada hun bhai..wo log meri location gps se pata karke raat me hi niche pahunch gaye the..maine shera ko bola 5 lakh rupye lekar upar aa jao..fir maine munnibai ko wo paise diye aur hum dono aaraam se bahar aa gaye koi fight wagira ki jarurat na padi wahan..maine driver se apne naye makaan par jane ko bol diya jise do din pahle maine liya tha kyonki ghar to le ja nahi sakta tha abhi use aur shayad kabhi bhi na le ja paun..khair hum ghar pahunche aur tabhi bhabhi ka call aa gaya ghar se bhabhi boli prem kahan ho aap bhai jaldi se ghar aa jao khusi aayi hai aur aapko yaad kar rahi hai..ye khusi jo hai wo bhabhi ki mausi ki beti hai aur mujhe bahut pasand karti hai..bas mere aage padte hi iski bolti band ho jati hai..
munni bai to bare dil wali nikli lekin bhai Ek baar sai se introduction do
 

Rahul

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munni bai to bare dil wali nikli lekin bhai Ek baar sai se introduction do
Are ladke tere karan hi apan jaldi se tisra update chap diya bahut kuch soncha tha par tere sawaal ne likhwa liya mujhse :D waise koi baat na mai sameet lunga usko bhi ab edit na karunga jo likh diya so likh diya..aur munnibai ka role khatam ab uska kauno kaam nahi hai aage to ab khusi aur meri purani premika priya aur story ka main khalnayak bole to sagar :cool:bas aur kuch bhai bhabhi ke bare me bas yahi sab chalega story me aur mere kuch dost bhi time aane par shamil hongen
 
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