Romance Han maine bhi pyar kiya hai(Completed)

[Rahul]

update 1
Maine aaj fir bahut sharaab pi li thi bahut nasa ho gaya mujhe aur phir mere pair mujhe idhar udhar lekar chalne lage chalte chalte mai pata nahi kahan aa gaya tha tabhi ek aadmi se takra gaya aur wo bola kya shahab kuch chahiye kya..maine use dekha aur bola chahiye bhai mujhe pyar chahiye wo pyar jo mujhko chhod kar chala gaya..wo bola chaliye fir aap mere sath aaj aapko pyar se nahla dete hain..mai bola kahan bhai to wo bola yahin pas me munnibai ke yahan chalna wahan pyar ka bhandaar hai..mai bola aisa kya to fir le chalo hamko wahan mai bahut pareshan hun..fir hum munnibai ke kothe par pahunch gaye ji han ye kotha tha khair hame kya pata hum to nase me the pyar ki talash me kothe par aa gaye pahli baar galti se par mujhe hosh kahan tha..munnibai ne puncha kya loge aap to jo aadmi sath me aaya tha wo bola ki pyar chahiye bahut sara fir munnibai ne bola 10000 rupye lagengen kuch din pahle ek nayi ladki aayi hai aur badi muskil se taiyaar hui pyar dene ko fresh maal hai kya bolta hai..maine turant paise de diye aur pyar kharid liya apne liye ab mujhe kya malum ki ye pyar sirf aaj ki raat ke liye hai zindgi bhar ke liye nahi hai..fir mujhe ek kamre me pahuncha diya gaya jahan mujhe pyar milne wala na aur pyar dene wali sayad bathroom me thi..kafi time ho gaya to maine bathroom ka darwaja khatkaya aur bola ye kya baat mera pyar bathroom me ghus gawa..bas itna bolna tha ki darwaja khula aur wo sidhe me gale me jhul gayi rote hue aur boli prem tum aa gaye prem aur mera sara nasa uthar gaya turat..are tum yahan tumne to mujhe laat maarkar apni zindgi se nikaal diya tha us sagar ke liye fir tum mera intzaar kar rahi thi..meri zindgi barbaad karke tumhe kya mila mai bola..wo rote hue boli dekh lo kya mila mujhe aaj kothe par aa gayi hun mai sagar ne meri sari property hadap kar mujhe yahan chhod diya aur ab tum aa gaye mujhe yahan se le chalo prem mujhe yahan nahi rahna abhi le chalo mujhe yahan se...

 

[Rahul]

Mai janta hun update me bahut si kamiyan hai par maine fatafat likh diya aur post kar diya

 

[Sam190]

Pehla update padh kar Aisa lag Raha hai ke story boring honey waali hai

 

[Rahul]

Pehla update padh kar Aisa lag Raha hai ke story boring honey waali hai

Aisa na bolo bhaiya ji ye pahla update hai aur usme bhi tute dilon ko jod raha hun aap aisa kaise soch liye story boring hogi..aate rahiyega aur padhte rahiyega short story hogi kuch update me khatam ho jayegi mujhe faltu me khinchna nahi aata ya kah lo mai utna bada writer nahi hun par story ka end achcha hoga kyonki mai khud mera bhi b positive hai

 

[king cobra]

for new story
waah bhai kya achchi story likh rahe aap bilkul naya sa hai sab kuch aisa na pahle kahin padha na suna bole to mast update diya bidu

 

[PARADOX]

Pehla update padh kar Aisa lag Raha hai ke story boring honey waali hai

mujheto story bohot achhi lag rahi hai...

thik se padho re....phir bolo....

 

[PARADOX]

for your first story Rahul dude....

 

[Rahul]

update 2
Thoda apne bare me bata dun..mera naam prem hai aur mere ghar me mere alawa mere bhaiya aur bhabhi hain jo mujhse bahut pyar karte hain..mere paida hone ke kuch shaal baad hi mom dad ek car accident me hame chhodkar chale gaye.. fir mere bhaiya ne mujhe aur business ko jaise taise samhala..wo to shadi bhi nahi karna chahte the par anju bhabhi ne jaise taise mujhe manaya fir maine bhaiya ko manaya tab jakar dono ki shadi hui.. mai un dono ki ankh ka tara hun mera college complete ho chuka hai aur mai kuch mahino se saraab me duba hun kyonki mera dil ek ladki ne bahut buri tarah tod diya hai aur ab zindgi wapas mujhe samne lekar aa gayi hai jahan sayad ek suruaat ho sakti hai ya kuch aur bhi ho sakta hai..to aab aate hain hum munnibai ke kothe par jahan ek nawa hangama suru ho chuka hai..maine sonch liya ise yahan se jaise bhi nikaalna hai par mujhe nind aa rahi thi to mai bola ki achcha subah chalenge abhi so jao mai subah munnibai se baat karta hun ya jaise bhi tumhe yahan se nikaal dunga ye wada hai mera aur mai apne wada kabhi nahi todta tum janti ho..fir uska to pata nahi par mai so gaya aur aaj bahut dino baad mast nind aayi mujhe......

 

[PARADOX]

First update bohot hi achha hai....starting nashe se ki hai aur khatam bhi nashe se....
Wese ye chhori idhar kaa kar rahi hai....

 

[PARADOX]

update 2
Thoda apne bare me bata dun..mera naam prem hai aur mere ghar me mere alawa mere bhaiya aur bhabhi hain jo mujhse bahut pyar karte hain..mere paida hone ke kuch shaal baad hi mom dad ek car accident me hame chhodkar chale gaye fir mere bhaiya ne mujhe aur business ko jaise taise samhala..wo to shadi bhi nahi karna chahte the par anju bhabhi ne jaise taise mujhe manaya fir maine bhaiya ko manaya tab jakar dono ki shadi hui aur mai un dono ki ankh ka tara hun mera college complete ho chuka hai aur mai kuch mahino se saraab me duba hun kyonki mera dil ek ladki ne bahut buri tarah tod diya hai aur ab zindgi wapas mujhe samne lekar aa gayi hai jahan sayad ek suruaat ho sakti hai ya kuch aur bhi ho sakta hai..to aab aate hain hum munnibai ke kothe par jahan ek nawa hangama suru ho chuka hai..maine sonch liya ise yahan se jaise bhi nikaalna hai par mujhe nind aa rahi thi to mai bola ki achcha subah chalenge abhi so jao mai subah munnibai se baat karta hun ya jaise bhi tumhe yahan se nikaal dunga ye wada hai mera aur mai apne wada kabhi nahi todta tum janti ho..fir uska to pata nahi par mai so gaya aur aaj bahut dino baad mast nind aayi mujhe......