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koi ni bhai waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta story complete hogi to aap bhi apna kimti samay nast na kare mein kabhi bhi story band kar wane wala hu kyuki mujhe befizul ki baate pasand nahirajput chauhaan bhai .....main bahot dino se apni kahani likhne me busy hoon isliye aapki kahani padhne ka samay nahi mil raha hai .....iske liye main dil se maafi chahta hoon .....
shayri .........aapki kahani na padh paane ka malaal hai
Kahani padhne ka waqt aayega ye sab waqt ka kamaal hai
rajput chauhaan bhai....is forum par ek se ek namune bhare pade hain khud to kuch likh nahi sakte aur dusre ki kahani me apni taang adate hainkoi ni bhai waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta story complete hogi to aap bhi apna kimti samay nast na kare mein kabhi bhi story band kar wane wala hu kyuki mujhe befizul ki baate pasand nahi
bhai aisa na bolo..aap bahot achha likh rahe ho..hum toh hai hi aapke sath..!!koi ni bhai waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta story complete hogi to aap bhi apna kimti samay nast na kare mein kabhi bhi story band kar wane wala hu kyuki mujhe befizul ki baate pasand nahi
Gher k saari aurtow ki taraf se rishta pakka ho gaya ab bas mard bache h dekhte h mardo ka kia faisla hota hUPDATE -63
Ravi ne apna bazaar ka saara kaam nipta diya tha or abhi samay kafi tha to us ne socha kyu na apne liye kuch kapde le liye jaye yahi soch kar vo paas ke mall me gya jaha daupher ki wajah se jayda bheed nahi thi lagbhag na ke braber hi log dikhayi pad rahe the to vo bhi ek jeans pasand karke trail room ki taraf chal diya jaha andar jaate hi uski aankhe badi ho gayi andar ka nazara dekh kar kyuki andar ek ladki kapde try kar rahi thi or jaise hi ravi andar ghusa to us ne apni dress utaar di jis se uski gori gori chuchi ravi ke samne aa gayi shishe me se
ravi to butt bna use dekh raha tha ki tabhi ladki ko ahat hui kisi ki to vo ravi ke taraf dekhe bina hi boli
Ladki- tum andar kyu aa gye koi dekh lega bahar jao khair chhodo ye batao ye dress kaisi lag rahi hai mujh per ( ek long dress pehan kar ravi ko dikhate hue boli
jaise hi ladki ne ghum kar dekha to waha koi nahi tha use thoda ajeeb lga kyuki us ne khud mehsoos kiya tha ki koi tha waha jise vo apna boy friend samjh kar apni dress ke baare me puch rahi thi jab kuch samajh na aaya to us ne dusri dress try ki or use pehan kar gol gol ghum kar khud ko dekh ne lagi
Ravi- bach gya yaar agar vo dekh leti to bahut badi problem ho jaati kasam se waise chuchi badi kamaal ki thi ek bar mil jaaye to maja aa jaye per dobara mili bhi to pehchanunga kaise chuchi dekh ne ke chakkar me chahra to dekha hi nahi ek kaam karta hu yahi khada ho kar wait karta hu jab bahar aayegi to chupke se dekh lunga
Abhi ravi apne khayali pulaav paka hi raha tha ki vo ladki bahar aayi to uski nazar ravi per padi or vo chowkte hue boli
Ladki- o my god ravi tum or batao kaise ho school ke baad to tum dikhe hi nahi
Name- shilpa
Age-18( ravi ki class mate thi jab hamara sharmila hua karta tha esliye ladkiyo se dur hi rehta tha)
ravi use dekhte hi pehchaan gya per abhi sadme me tha use yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki apne sharmilepan ki wajah se us ne itne hot item per dhyaan hi nahi diya kitna bekuf tha vo wahi ravi ko kuch na bolte dekh shilpa boli
Shilpa- kya hua aise kya dekh rahe ho pehchaana nahi kya mein shilpa hu tumhari class mate ( hath se ishara karte hue boli)
Ravi- vo haa vo tum haa pehchaan liya kaisi ho tum or dress fit aayi ki nahi
hadbadahat me ravi kya bol gya jab use dhyaan aaya to nazar jhuka kar shilpa ke bol ne ka intzaar karne lga jabki shilpa samajh gayi jiska ehsaas use andar hua tha vo uska veham nahi tha balki uske sath padh ne wala uska sharmila class mate tha esliye muskura kar ravi ko dekhte hue boli
Shilpa- hmm fit aayi waise tumhe kaisi lagi meri dress tum ne dekhi to thi na ache se ( meri dress per jor dete hue )
ab ravi pehle ki tarah itna anjaan bhi nahi tha ki shilpa ki double mining baat ko na samjhe esliye use usi ke andaaz me jawaab dete hue bola
Ravi- dress to dekh hi nahi paaya waise jo dekha vo kamaal ki thi kaash chhu kar dekh paata to material ka bhi pta chal jata( ankh maarte hue)
Shilpa- gande ladke aise kisi ko chhup kar dekhte hue sharam nahi aati waise agar itni himmat school time me karte to pta nahi kya kya chhu lete hahaha( ravi ko dekh kar jor jor se haste hue boli)
Ravi- us time itni samajh nahi thi na waise ab kafi samajh daar ho gya hu or vo mein chhup kar nahi dekh raha tha galti se ho gya tha sab agar bura lga ho to sorry
Shilpa- jaanti hu tumhe aisa jaanbujh kar nahi karoge tum or batao kya chal raha hai admission kaha liya hai
Ravi- yahi sehar waale collage me hi lunga waise vo kaha jise samajh kar tum mujhse puch rahi thi ki dress kaisi hai bf hai tumhara
Shilpa- hmm hoga yahi kahi khair use chhodo chalo coffee pite hai tab tak vo bhi aa jayega
Ravi- use bura nahi lagega mujhe tumhare sath dekh kar
Shilpa- bura kyu lagega vo bhi to kahi ladkiya taad raha hoga tum chhodo na usko yaar kitni bar tumse baat kar ne ki per us waqt to tum ladkiyo se aise dur bhaagte the jaise tumhe khaa jayengi or ab dekho kapde badalte hue dekh kar bhi sharam nahi aati baitho ( table per baith kar haste hue boli)
Ravi- tum bhi na ek to khud gate lock nahi kiya or galti meri nikaal rahi ho or waise bhi samne aisa hot nazara ho to kon nahi dekhega madam bahut lucky hai tumhara boyfriend roz aisa garam nazara dekhta hoga uuufffff mein to abhi bhi bhul nahi paa raha hu kya golai thi haaye hhhmmm( thandi aah bharte hue )
Shilpa- chup karo tum bahut bigad gaye ho or tumhe kya lagta hai mein aisi ladki hu jo roz uske samne apne kapde khol kar khadi rehti hu to aisa kuch nahi hai 3 month ke reletion me sirf 1 baar hi hum intimate hue hai vo bhi 2 din pehle hi
Ravi- mera vo matlab nahi hai yaar mein to bus ye keh raha tha ki jise ek baar dekh kar mera ye haal vo hai to use mehsoos kar ke use kaisa feel hota hoga
Shilpa- bus bhi karo yaar mujhe sharam aa rahi hai or aisa kya ho gya jo tum bhul nahi paa rahe ho tum to aise nahi the
Ravi- kaas pehle hi aisa hota to shayad aaj mein uski jagah hota or tum meri hoti
Shilpa- tum bhi na sach me pagal ho gaye ho yar jo aisi baate kar rahe ho shaitaan kahi ke ( ravi ki baato ka jawaab hash kar dete hue)
Ravi- acha ye batao tum kaha ho gao me to dikhi nahi school ke baad
Shilpa- papa ne yahi ghar le liya to hum yahi shift ho gaye per ab to milna hota rahega ek hi collage me jo hai kyu
Ravi- haa ye to hai waise ab chalna chahiye kafi time ho gaya tumhara boyfriend bhi tumhe dhoond raha hoga
Shilpa- hmm chalo waise tumhara number kya hai
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Shilpa- ok thank you mein miss call kar di hai save kar lena
Ravi- haa kar lunga mast maal ke naam se hihi( ankh marte hue)
Shilpa- tum nahi sudhar ne waale kar lo jis naam se bhi karna hai ( ravi ki taraf dekhte hue boli)
Number lene ke baad dono waha se apne- apne raste nikal liye or jald hi ravi ghar pahuch gaya ghar me ghuste hi us ne pehle samaan rakha or apne room ki taraf jaane lga to hall me hi use gori mil gayi jis ne ravi ke paas jaate hi uske gaal per kiss kiya or pyar se dekhte hue ravi se boli
Gori- kitni der laga di aane me pta hai kab se tumhara wait kar rahi hu mann bhi nahi lag raha tha
Ravi - acha ji or mann kyu nahi lag raha tha aapka vo bhi bta do
Gori- mujhe nahi pta kyu nahi lag raha tha or tum na har bar baat ghumaya mat karo samjhe
Ravi - baat ko to aap ghuma rahi ho meine to sidha sa sawaal kiya hai aap se
Gori- plz ravi mat karo na aisi baate bus mere sath baithe raho yahi thodi der
gori ki baat maan kar ravi chup ho gaya or pyar se gori ko apne sath lagaye baith gaya jis per gori ne bhi pyar se ravi ko dekha or apna sir uske kandhe per tika diya
dono ek dusre ki baaho me baithe hue apne mann me kuch soch hi rahe the ki andar aati divya boli
Divya- ye dekho didi premi joda kaise ek dusre se chipke baithe hai ghar ke andar kisi parwah bhi nahi hai inhe ( ada se ravi or gori ko dekhte hue boli)
Madhu- bus bhi kar divya kyupareshaan kar rahi hai bachho ko
Divya- haye haye jiji maine kon sa inhe rok rahi hu per jinhe aap bachha keh rahi ho na ek bar shadi kra do phir dekhna har saal apki goad me bachha de denge kyu didi( kamla ko dekhte hue)
Gori to divya ki baato ko sunkar pani pani ho gayi or badi mushkil se apni sharam ko chupa kar khud thik karte hue boli
Gori- maa aap yaha sab thik to hai na
Vimla- haa meri bachhi tujhe khush dekh kar ab lag raha hai ki sach me sab thik hai bhagwaan kare ki tum hamesha aise hi khush raho mein tumhara shukriya kaise aada karu madhu
Madhu- ye kaisi baat kar rahi ho didi yu paraya to na karu mujhe aisa keh ke bus ab aage sab kuch aap ke hath hai to use sambhal lena baki mujhe or kuch nahi chahiye
Vimla- vo sab ab tu mujh per chhod de mere bachho ki khushi ke liye mujhe jo karna pade mein karungi( madhu ko purn vishwash dilate hue boli)
Divya- to iska matlab gori hamari bahu ban gayi kyu jiji
Madhu- bilkul per eska matlab ye nahi ki tum dono ko azaadi mil gayi hai shaadi ravi ki padhai puri hone ke baad hi hogi us pehle nahi
Divya- to ab ye dono sath nahi rahenge kya aisa mat karo didi inke sath verna ye ji nahi payenge kyu gori ( maje lete hue)
Gori ab kya kehti bechari bus sharma kar itna hi boli
Divya- ab es me mein kya bolu mami jaisa aap logo ko thik lage
abhi koi kuch kehta ki us se pehle hi ravi bol pada jo kab se chup baitha inki baate sun raha tha
Ravi- ye kya baat hui maa apko pta hai na mein or didi ek dusre ke bina nahi reh paate to phir ab kaise rahenge
Madhu- ab to didi mat bol use teri hone wali biwi hai or koi dur nahi kar raha tum dono ko samjhe love birds
Ravi- abhi biwi bani to nahi hai na to kyu abhi se unhe torcher kar rahe ho sab dekho kaise sir jhuka kar khadi hai bechari meri didi ( gori ka hath pakad kar use apne sath laate hue bola)
Divya- hamara beta gaya hamare hath se jiji ye to abhi se joru ka gulaam ban gaya hihihi
Ravi- aap na kabhi nahi sudhroge chachi apko to baad me batata hu mein abhi aap chalo didi yaha se hum upar chalte hai
kisi ki baat sune bina hi gori ko apne room me legaya to gori boli
Gori- ye kya kar rahe ho ravi sab kya sochenge plz niche chalo( ravi ki baaho me reh kar hi fikr jaatate hue boli)
Ravi- sshhhhh shant ho jaiye koi kuch nahi sochega esliye aap bhi mat socho samjhi aap
Gori- tum nahi samjh rahe baad me sab mujhe hi bolenge tumhara kya hai sun na to mujhe hi padega
Ravi- to apne hone wale pati ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti aap ( gori ke labo ke kareeb hote hue)
Gori- acha ji abhi se hukam karne lage or tum na thoda dur raho mujhe tumhare iraade thik nahi lag rahe ( ravi ki ankho me dekhkar muskuraate hue boli)
Ravi- irade to shuru se thik the per ab imaan dol raha hai mera
Gori- apne imaan ko kaho jra kabu me rahe kyuki yaha biwi nahi didi hi hai abhi samjhe tum( to dol jao na ravi ab to mein tumhari ho gayi hu ab mujhe kisi ki parwah nahi ) mann me boli
Ravi- acha ji abhi bhi nakhre aap aise nahi manogi apko to chup karana hi padega
kehte hi gori ke hotho ko muh me bhar kar chus ne lga
Aisa mat kerna bhai kuch gine chule writer h jisne aap sabse ooper ho please band keryega bhaikoi ni bhai waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta story complete hogi to aap bhi apna kimti samay nast na kare mein kabhi bhi story band kar wane wala hu kyuki mujhe befizul ki baate pasand nahi