Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan

[Chinturocky]

Bhai suspense me hi chhod diya.
Besabari se intzaar hai Naye update ka.

 

[Krishna kumar]

Nice

 

[Iron Man]

मीरा की माँ का नाम रचना देवी(45) है जिसने मीरा को पाल-पोसके बड़ा किया,
मीरा 5 साल की थी, जब उसके पिता दुष्यन्त का निधन हो गया था,
गांव से 10 किम दूर एक गांव है जिसका नाम सोनपुर है,
सोनपुर छह महीने तक बर्फ से ही ढका रहता है. सर्दियां शुरु होने से पहले यहां रहने वाले निवासी
माणा गांव को चले आते है...



Himalay ki goad me basa bahut hi sundar ek Ganv Jiska Naam Sonpur hai,

Charo or se Unchi-unchi pahadiyon se ghira hua hai. gaganchumbi ped aur parvat ganv ki shobha ko aur badhate hai jisse waha ka najara aur bhi khoobsurat ho jata hai.


Parvaton ke talchhat me basa yah ganv Bharat ke nakse me bhi nahi dikhta.

kyuki kul-milakar sirf 25 (Mitti aur lakdi se bane) ghar honge jinme 40 Parivar rahte hain, kul aabadi sirf 250 ke kareeb hogi
iss Ganv ke nivasi Ya to shikari hai ya fir kisaan jo ki sirf apna pet bharne ke liye Parvati ilaakon me kheti karte hai.

Inko bahar ki duniya koi matlab hi nahi.
Aaj bhi Yaha Jadi- butiyon se ilaaz aur Mashaal se rosni ki jaati hai,

Adhunikta ka to naamo-nishaan bhi nahi hai.


Ganv se bahar Jaane ka sirf ek hi Rasta jo ki ek surang se hokar 50 km Ghane jangal ko paar karke kachhi sadko se milti hai
Aur un kachi sadko se 150km door state highway hai Jo ki deharadoon city ko jata hai.

Jitna dekhne me khubsurat ganv hai usse bhi jyada Dayalu aur nek-dil ganv me rahne wale rahne wale Niwasi hai.


Kabeer Son(Age-22),



Dekhne men Sudol-Mazboot shareer, Shikar karne mein mahir, Sabki madad karne wala Mehanti nauzvana hai,

Jo ki sonpur mukhiyan Bhuvan Son(Age-60) ka Putr hai Jo peshe se shikari bhi hai.

Bhuvan son ke Purvajon ne hi Yaha rahne wale kabile ko Basaya aur ganv ka naam Sonpur rakha.

Mata Aarti Son ki Gambhir beemari ke chalte 7 Saal pahle Mrityu ho gayi,
Jub Kabeer 15 Saal ka Balak tha,

Pita Bhuvan ne Hi Chhoti Umar se hi Kabeer ko Shikar karna shikhaya,
Shikar, Kheti, Kasrat, aur Pahadi ilakon me Roj-marra ke kaamon se Kabeer Mazboot shareer ka Khubsurat Naujwan ban gaya,

Jise dekhkar Ganv ki Chhoriyan Aahhen bharti hai, Achhe Gun ke karan Sabka sathi hai, aur Madadgar bhi.....

Sardi aane ko sirf ek Saptah hi baaki rah gaya hai....Sonpur ke Nivasi ek bar fir Mana Ganv Jaane ke liye taiyaar hai.

Jahan Logo ke rahne ke liye Mana Ganv ke Nivasi Pahle se hi Kuch Ghar aur Khaliyhan khaali kar dete hai....

Awesome update

 

[Iron Man]

Update - 4 Shaitan( Eblis )



Pishach Lok par Hamle ke baad,
Iblis ka kahar din pratidin badhta ja raha tha jispar koi lagam nahi tha......
Ab aage....
Bella,



Pisach Lok Maharni Bella, Ko Dekhkar Iblis Ka man bhi Sambhog karne ka Hua
Kyuki Shaitan Bhi Apne Uttradhikari Lalsa huyi..
Iblis aur Bella ke Shaitani Sambhog se Paida hua... Shaitan putr Geryon (iblis Son)

Geryon


Iblis aur Geryon ne Milkar Sare Lokon par Atank ka khooni khel khela,
Dharti, Jin lok, Pari Lok,
Sampoorn Bramhand me Trahi-trahi macha dali....Har taraf bas khoon ki nadiya, Chheekh-Pukaar ka Aalam bana raha,
Pure bramhand ne shaitani Rajya Ka prakop aur Andhkar hi andhkar chha gaya....

Angel Quien Elizabeth Aur Jin Lok ke Badshah Jinn-e-Gulpham Kayoot
Dono Ne milkar Apni-Apni Shaktiyon se Jinn Lok aur Pari Lok dono Lok anduri Hisson se ek Pul(bridge) ke Madhyam se Jod diya Jisse ki Dono Duniya Aana-Jaana bana rahe,


Aur Dono Lok ko Surakshit rakhne ke Liye
Elizabeth aur Kayoot ne Apni Sampoorn Shaktiyon se Ek suraksha Kawach Taiyar kiya,
taaki Dubaara Shaitano ka Hamla na ho sake,
Aur Don lok surakshit rahe,

Kintu iss prakriya mein Maharani Elizabeth ki sampoorn shaktiya Khatm ho gayi,
Jiske falswaroop Elizabeth ek aam Insan ban Gayi,

Aur Khud ki Shaktiyon ko wapas paane ke liye Dharti lok Jaane ka Nischay kiya Ishwar ki pooja aur bhakti ke liye,


Elizabeth ne khud ki duniya ko to bacha liya kintu khud ko na bacha saki

Kyuki Geryon Ko Har pal ki khabar thi,

Elizabeth ki isi galti ka fayda uthakar Geryon ne Angel Queen Elizabeth ko Apne giraft me le liya,

Elizabeth

Elizabeth ke Saundarya aur Kamuk Roop ko Dekhkar Geryon ka Khudpar kabu na Raha,

(Note- Ab Elizabeth Ek aam Insaan hai, Koi Angel Nahi, Manusya Yoni mein aa gayi,
Kyuki Apni sampoorna Urja Surksha Kawach Banane mein Khatm kar di )

Geryon ne Angel Queen ke Najuk komal badan ko Apne Shaitani panjo se Raund dala, Aur Kamuk Yauvan ko Apni Hawas ka Shikar Bana dala,

Geryon ka Virya Jub Queen ke andar Pahuncha to Achanak Geryon ko tez jhatka laga aur bahut door Ja gira,


Elizabeth Ke Body ke Charo Aor Ek Tez safed Roshni Fail Gayi,
aur jub Roshni kam huyi to Waha Elizabeth nahi thi.....


Shaitan Eblis jo Dhyan me baitha tha Achanak uski Aankhe khul gayi,


Gusse Se Eblis ki Aankho se Angare Nikalne lage...

Dhyan me baithne ki Jagah ke Aas-Paas Pahra de Rahe sabhi sena ko Jalakar Rakh kar diya,
Har-Taraf bas aag hi aag dikh rahi thi,


Eblis Krodh me Jor se Daharra Geryonnnnnn !!!!!

Awesome update

 

[Govindsonic]

Sandarrrr update bhai

 

[Hayaan]

Welcome Iron Man Sir ji...
In My Thread....
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Bahut khushi huyi Aapko dekh kar...

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Thanks !!

 

[Hanny]

Nice update Bhai

 

[Hayaan]

Hii Guys... Good Morning..!!

Next Update Has Been Posted at Page No.334

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[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome update
Lagta h fight secen ko pura sath hi dikhaoge
Ab ye anny ko Kya hua wo to khud akele h 200 se lad sakti h aur ye second target chairman h
Keep posting

 

[Hayaan]

Nice update Bhai

Thanks bhai ji....
For continue reading and Nice Supports...
Bas aise hi Apna Sath banaye rakhein...