Thriller HEART TRANSPLANT

[edm_rahul_rockk]

UPDATE 1
"move move move move move" nurse ne gala faad kar chillaya, stretcher le jana wo bhi itne bheed me......

"will he survive??" doosre nurse ne stretcher ke saath daudte hue bola

Chillane wali nurse chup thi, situation haath ke bahar thi
Patient ko jald se jald lekar Jaana bhi shayad bekar hai kyunki patient ka survival percentage bilkul zero hai

"KYA HUA MERE Bete KO?? " awaz door se a rahi thi ek aurat ki jo shayad maa thi is shaks ki

"sorry madam emergency hai" bol nurse ne aage jaane se rok liya aur stretcher emergency room me le gayi
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"koi to raasta hoga, koi to??" kanishk bol utha, isme request kam thi bheek zyada tha

"sorry kanishk, isme mujhe koi. breakthrough nahi mil raha hai, mai koi help nahi kar paunga" doctor ramya boli

"lekin ramya tum meri bohut achi friend ho yaar, is situation me agar tum kuch nahi kar paayi to koi kuch nahi kar payega" kanishk bola

"dekho kanishk, hum doctors ki bhi limitations hai, aur tum yahan ke best heart speciality hospital me khade ho, I don't think ki India me isse acha hospital milega tumhe" Dr ramya fir boli

"I'm not here to discuss about hospital, I'm here to discuss about my son damn it" kanishk ke sabr ka baandh toot raha tha

"waise last aur final option hai" ramya boli

"wo kya??" kanishk ne poocha

"Dr prasad, heart specialist. Australia me bade Naam hai unke. Aisa koi case nahi hai jise unhone handle nahi kiya ho?? And luckily wo India me hai aur wo bhi isi shahar me" ramya boli

"kya wo kingshuk ko theek kar sakte hai??" kanishk ne utsukta se poocha. Ramya ke baaton se Ummed ki asha nazar aayi kanishk ko

DHADAMMMMM

"deepti??" ramya hairan thi deepti ko dekh kar, baal idhar udhar kapde jaise taise pehen kar aayi thi, college ki Jaan thi deepti, lekin industrialist kanishk se shaadi kar apna career khatam kiya tha usne

"please ramya, please bol do ki kingshuk ko kuch nahi hoga, please please please" deepti rote hue ramya ke paas gayi

"deepti please apne aap ko sambhal lo agar tum toot gayi to kaise chalega" kanishk apne chair se uth deepti ko sambhal kar bola

"kya bigada tha usne kanishk??? Uska ek pair bhi sahi nahi hai, partial handicapped hai kingshuk" deepti ka rona jaari tha

"kuch nahi hoga kingshuk ko kuch bhi nahi" kanishk bola

"usne kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kiya kingshuk, kya bhagwan unpe barasta hai jo kamzor hai??" deepti ke is baat ka koi jawab nahi tha kanishk ke paas

"deepti, maine Dr prasad ko mail kar diya hai, abhi ke abhi pohunch rahe hai hospital me

" please deepti kisi tarah mere bete ko bacha lo, mai tumse bheek mangti hoon "deepti ramya ke pair me gir gir gayi

" sab theek ho jaega deepti, sab theek ho jaega "bol roti hui deepti ko apne seene me rakh kar uske sar par haath ferne lagi ramya

Welcome Back With New Story Bro
Arey Aap Shuru Karo Story Support Karne Ke Liye Hum Log HaiN Bhai

 

[Kala Nag]

UPDATE 1
"move move move move move" nurse ne gala faad kar chillaya, stretcher le jana wo bhi itne bheed me......

"will he survive??" doosre nurse ne stretcher ke saath daudte hue bola

Chillane wali nurse chup thi, situation haath ke bahar thi
Patient ko jald se jald lekar Jaana bhi shayad bekar hai kyunki patient ka survival percentage bilkul zero hai

"KYA HUA MERE Bete KO?? " awaz door se a rahi thi ek aurat ki jo shayad maa thi is shaks ki

"sorry madam emergency hai" bol nurse ne aage jaane se rok liya aur stretcher emergency room me le gayi
-------------------------------------------------------------------
"koi to raasta hoga, koi to??" kanishk bol utha, isme request kam thi bheek zyada tha

"sorry kanishk, isme mujhe koi. breakthrough nahi mil raha hai, mai koi help nahi kar paunga" doctor ramya boli

"lekin ramya tum meri bohut achi friend ho yaar, is situation me agar tum kuch nahi kar paayi to koi kuch nahi kar payega" kanishk bola

"dekho kanishk, hum doctors ki bhi limitations hai, aur tum yahan ke best heart speciality hospital me khade ho, I don't think ki India me isse acha hospital milega tumhe" Dr ramya fir boli

"I'm not here to discuss about hospital, I'm here to discuss about my son damn it" kanishk ke sabr ka baandh toot raha tha

"waise last aur final option hai" ramya boli

"wo kya??" kanishk ne poocha

"Dr prasad, heart specialist. Australia me bade Naam hai unke. Aisa koi case nahi hai jise unhone handle nahi kiya ho?? And luckily wo India me hai aur wo bhi isi shahar me" ramya boli

"kya wo kingshuk ko theek kar sakte hai??" kanishk ne utsukta se poocha. Ramya ke baaton se Ummed ki asha nazar aayi kanishk ko

DHADAMMMMM

"deepti??" ramya hairan thi deepti ko dekh kar, baal idhar udhar kapde jaise taise pehen kar aayi thi, college ki Jaan thi deepti, lekin industrialist kanishk se shaadi kar apna career khatam kiya tha usne

"please ramya, please bol do ki kingshuk ko kuch nahi hoga, please please please" deepti rote hue ramya ke paas gayi

"deepti please apne aap ko sambhal lo agar tum toot gayi to kaise chalega" kanishk apne chair se uth deepti ko sambhal kar bola

"kya bigada tha usne kanishk??? Uska ek pair bhi sahi nahi hai, partial handicapped hai kingshuk" deepti ka rona jaari tha

"kuch nahi hoga kingshuk ko kuch bhi nahi" kanishk bola

"usne kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kiya kingshuk, kya bhagwan unpe barasta hai jo kamzor hai??" deepti ke is baat ka koi jawab nahi tha kanishk ke paas

"deepti, maine Dr prasad ko mail kar diya hai, abhi ke abhi pohunch rahe hai hospital me

" please deepti kisi tarah mere bete ko bacha lo, mai tumse bheek mangti hoon "deepti ramya ke pair me gir gir gayi

" sab theek ho jaega deepti, sab theek ho jaega "bol roti hui deepti ko apne seene me rakh kar uske sar par haath ferne lagi ramya

भाई यह गलत है
आपकी अपडेट शुरू होते ही खतम हो जाती हैं
थोड़ा अपडेट बड़ा करो

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations for another beautiful story Swaraj bhai.
Heart transplant se yahi lagta hai ki nayak ka Heart kisi aise insaan se liya jayega jiski maut kafi dukhad aur tragedy bhari rahi hogi.
Waise nayak ka naam kuchh bichitra type ka hai. Kahi ye naam ka chakkar bhi suspense to nahi !
Waise starting phir se behtreen hua hai.
Jaha tak readers ki baat hai , aap jante hi honge ki yaha kis tarah ki story par readers prem barshate hai.
Aap likhiye..hamara support hamesha rahega.

 

[Swaraj]

शुभकामनाएँ मित्र...............
आशा ही नहीं पूर्ण विश्वास है की ये कहानी भी आपकी स्थापित छवि के अनुरूप कुछ अनोखा, आश्चर्यजनक और अप्रत्याशित कथानक लेकर हम सब को सम्मोहित कर देगी

आपकी एजेंट सिरीज़ की कोई भी कहानी मेंने पढ़ी ही नहीं है............ अब अन्य मित्रों की इतनी उत्सुकता देखकर लगता है..............पढ़नी ही पड़ेगी

Thanks bro,
Sabse pehle thanks aapne time nikal kar story ko padha aur apna review diya
Story kingshuk se judi hui hai aur uska evolution aur adventure par hai,
Baaki maine agent series part 1,part 2 par kaafi Saare readers ka Pyaar paaya hai, shayad isliye unke request par part 3 likhna shuru kar dunga
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Welcome Back With New Story Bro
Arey Aap Shuru Karo Story Support Karne Ke Liye Hum Log HaiN Bhai

Thanks bhai aap log apna pyaar aise hi dete rahiye
Is journey me Kingshuk ko support karte rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

भाई यह गलत है
आपकी अपडेट शुरू होते ही खतम हो जाती हैं
थोड़ा अपडेट बड़ा करो

Thanks bro
Sachmuch me ye update chota tha, next update bada karne ki koshish karunga
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Congratulations for another beautiful story Swaraj bhai.
Heart transplant se yahi lagta hai ki nayak ka Heart kisi aise insaan se liya jayega jiski maut kafi dukhad aur tragedy bhari rahi hogi.
Waise nayak ka naam kuchh bichitra type ka hai. Kahi ye naam ka chakkar bhi suspense to nahi !
Waise starting phir se behtreen hua hai.
Jaha tak readers ki baat hai , aap jante hi honge ki yaha kis tarah ki story par readers prem barshate hai.
Aap likhiye..hamara support hamesha rahega.

Thanks bro,
Aap ne shayad sahi kaha hai, kingshuk ka character ke baare me aapko aage pata chalega aur story ka suspense bhi aage khulega, aap readers apna pyaar aise hi dete rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

UPDATE 2
FLASHBACK
"ye kaise possible hai kanishk??" deepti ne poocha

"possible hai deepti,dekho khushi 3 saal ki hai aur kingshuk bas ek saal ka hai,ragini mujhe chod gayi ye batakar ki kingshuk ke parwarish par koi sawal na ho, aur..... Khushi ko bhi to Baap ka Pyaar chahiye" kanishk khushi ke sar par haath fer kar bola

Deepti soch me pad gayi, kanishk aur deepti ka Pyaar poore college ko pata tha. Lekin deepti ke papa ko kanishk ek aankh nahi bhaata tha, isliye deepti ki shaadi kahin aur ho gayi.

Kanishk ke family ne bhi uski shaadi ragini se kar di,
Ragini sarvgun sampann ladki thi, aur dono ke life me kingshuk ek farishte ki tarah aaya tha lekin....

Kingshuk ke birth se hi uska ek pair me defect tha, kai doctors dikhaye lekin kuch na hua
Ragini ko complications hone lage aur isi ke chalte ek din wo chal basi, Jaane se pehle usne kasam dilwai thi ki kingshuk ke parwarish me koi kami na ho

"fine kanishk. Lekin ek baat ka dhyan rakhna ki kingshuk aur khushi me pyaar barabar baantna warna mai is shaadi ko continue nahi kar paungi" deepti boli

"promise" kanishk bola

Aur fir dono ne shaadi kar li, deepti ne koi kami nahi rakhi thi kingshuk ke laaln poshan me, sab kuch ache se chal raha tha ki.....

"deepti??"

Aankhen kholi deepti ne 18 ghante ho gaye the khana to kya Paani ki ek boond nahi piya tha usne

"Dr prasad a chuke hai" kanishk bola to deepti turant uthkar chal padi kanishk ke peeche

"hi" muskurate hue Dr prasad ne apna haath aage bahdhaya

"namaste" deepti itna bol paayi

"Dr kuch ho sakta hai kya??" ramya ne poocha

"Hmmm....... Problem hai Dr ramya, heart poori tarah puncture ho chuka hai, lagta hai kaafi logo ne maara hai is bachhe ko, heart ko maine kisi tarah bas tika ke rakha hua hai aur...." Dr prasad bolte hi ja rahe the ki deepti khauff bhari aankhon se kamre ke bahar chali gayi, peeche peeche kanishk bhaaga

"deepti ye sab kya hai??" kanishk ne deepti ko wahan par rakhi bhagwan ki moorti ke Saamne dekh kar poocha

"meri bhakti me kya reh gaya tha kanishk ki bhagwan ne mere Saath aisa kiya??" deepti ne rote hue poocha to kanishk ke paas koi jawab nahi tha

"kya meri mamta itni kamzor hai kanishk ki mai apne bachhe ko bacha nahi pa rahi hoon" deepti ka rona jaari tha. Kanishk ne deepti ke sar par haath rakha

"shayad bhagwan isliye aisa kar raha hai kyunki kingshuk ne mere pet se janm nahi liya" deepti bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi


"khushi bhi hamari bachhi hai deepti, agar tum toot gayi to kaise chalega" kanishk bola

"khushi khatre se bahar hai kanishk, mujhe sirf kingshuk ki chinta hai" deepti rote hue boli

Dr prasad door se ye sab dekh rahe the, unka bhagwan par bilkul vishwas nahi tha.
Aur ye sab dekh kar vishwas aur bhi nahi karne ka kar raha tha
Shayad bhagwan hai hi nahi

"AREY YAAR ABHI SE KAISE??MORGUE ME LE JAO" gala faad kar ek junior doctor chillaya

"suno??" Dr prasad ne junior doctor se poocha

"chandri sir??" muskurate hue doctor bola

"Arey Naam nahi poocha, itna kyun chilla rahe ho?" Dr prasad ne irritate hokar poocha

"Arey sir, wo ek laash mili hame, police ne shinakht karne ki koshish ki lekin fuussssss, police se aaj kal kuch hua hai jo..." chandri ko bolne se rok diya doctor ne

"chilla kyun rahe the??" Dr prasad bole

"laash ka zyada tar hissa jal gaya hai, sirf heart aur lungs sahi salamat hai, socha ki..." chandri apna sar khujane laga

"kya blood group hai iska??" dil zor zor se dhadakne laga Dr prasad ka

"a positive" chandri bola

Dhadkan ruk si gayi Dr prasad ki
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"khushi??" Dr ramya ne khushi ke sar par haath fera

Khushi ki aankhen band thi, lekin uske dimag band nahi thi, uske dimag me bas kal ka poora scene Saamne a raha tha

FLASHBACK
"aur fir maine sir se bola ki mai kar lunga" kingshuk apna chashma theek karke bola

"aur tu theek kar lega?? Idiot tujhe pata bhi hai ki kitna bada kaam hai??" khushi boli

"pata hai di, lekin aap help karogi na??" bol kingshuk apni didi ke sar par haath ferne laga

"shaam ho gayi, are you sure scooty se aana sahi hai??" kingshuk ne poocha

"karate aata hai mujhe bachhu" bol khushi ne speed badhai

Lekin peeche se do teen bike ek Saath Ho gayi scooty ke

"oye hoye kya Maal hai??"

"is langde ki jagah hame bitha deti meri jaan"

"love you khushi"

Kingshuk darr gaya, Bachpan se hi darpok sa hai kingshuk. Shayad apne handicap hone par use kisi tarah ka confidence nahi mil paaya tha

Do bike ne aakar scooty rok diya

"raaste se hat ja shamsher" deepti gusse se boli, shamsher Naam Ka ladka deepti ke paas aaya aur uska haath pakad liya

"kyun ri?? Bada complain karne lag gayi aaj kal??" shamsher Naam Ka ladka bola

"chod do didi ko??" kingshuk bola

"Arey?? Langda to dhamki de raha hai" shamsher bola to sab hasne lage

Shamsher ne khushi ko chod kingshuk ke paas aaya

TAADDDD

Ek kick pada shamsher ko

"acha??" bol khushi ke oopar jhatpat pada shamsher aur uska dupatta uda diya

Khushi ne dono haath se apna seena dhak diya

TAADDDD

is baar kingshuk ka stretcher pada shamsher ke sar par aur khoon nikalne laga

Shamsher sar pakad kar baith gaya

" didi bhaago" kingshuk chillaya

Lekin. Isse pehle ki kisi ne khushi ke sar par danda maar diya aur khushi behosh ho gayi

"Langda madarchod" bol shamsher kingshuk ke paas gaya

Bas aankhen band hone se pehle khushi itna hi dekh paayi

"khushi beta??" Dr ramya ne fir pukara to aankhen band karke khushi ki aankhon se aansu nikalne lage

 

[kamdev99008]

Deepti ko complications hone lage aur isi ke chalte ek din wo chal basi

यहाँ रागिनी होनी चाहिए दीप्ति की जगह

"possible hai deepti,dekho khushi 3 saal ki hai aur kingshuk bas ek saal ka hai,ragini mujhe chod gayi ye batakar ki kingshuk ke parwarish par koi sawal na ho, aur..... Khushi ko bhi to Baap ka Pyaar chahiye" kanishk khushi ke sar par haath fer kar bola

खुशी दीप्ति की बेटी है और किंशुक से 2 साल बड़ी है ......... किंशुक कनिष्क का बेटा है ..............

"Hmmm....... Problem hai Dr ramya, heart poori tarah puncture ho chuka hai, lagta hai kaafi logo ne maara hai is bachhe ko, heart ko maine kisi tarah bas tika ke rakha hua hai aur...." Dr prasad bolte hi ja rahe the ki deepti khauff bhari aankhon se kamre ke bahar chali gayi, peeche peeche kanishk bhaaga

"laash ka zyada tar hissa jal gaya hai, sirf heart aur lungs sahi salamat hai, socha ki..." chandri apna sar khujane laga

"kya blood group hai iska??" dil zor zor se dhadakne laga Dr prasad ka

"a positive" chandri bola

तो ये है दिलदार जिसका दिल मिलेगा किंशुक को ..............
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किंशुक के ना माँ है ना बहन
खुशी के ना पिता है ना भाई
कनिष्क के बेटी नहीं
दीप्ति के बेटा नहीं
लेकिन फिर सबको ये सब मिल गए ....................

अब किंशुक के पास दिल नहीं
जलकर मरनेवाले के पास जान नहीं
अब फिर ये दोनों एक दूसरे को मिल रहे हैं

बहुत खूब स्वराज भाई......... जैसा सोचा था वही हुआ.........
अद्भुत
अकल्पनीय
अविस्मरणीय

बहुत सारी विसंगतियों को इकट्ठा करके संगति में लाया गया है.............. रचना अद्भुत ही होगी...........

 

[Sidd19]

Congratulations bhai for the new story