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Update 28 posted

 

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Shandar update Bhai

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Nice update bro

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Ati uttam utkrisht lekhni dekhte hain ab surya kab ghar pahunchta hai or shreya kaise band bajati hai raunak mehra ka Lajawab Jabardast superb ekdum dhasu update

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Super update Bhai

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Bahot badhiya zabardast shaandar update
Rohan har technic ko badi aasani se maharat ke saath hasil kerta jaa raha Jo bahot achchi baat h lekin isbar saptchakra hasil kerna itna aasani nahi hone wala
Shreya bechari Roz apne bhai ko dhoondhne aati h jungle me lekin isbar Rounak bhi uske peeche aa raha h Galat irada leker ab dekhte h kia Rounak apne irade me kamyab hota h ya fir Shreya usko chahti ka doodh yaad dilati h

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Bhai ji update kab tak aayegi please if possible

 

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Update 15​

Recap
Apne abhi Tak padha ki Rohan ko surya se ek taknik milta hai jo uske supreme yodha ke sach ko logo se chhupa sakta tha Rohan us taknik ko atmasadh kar leta hai iske bad wo talwar ke pass jata hai aur use utha kar kabu kar leta hai.
Fir surya apne storage ring se sare kitabo aur taknikon ko nikalta hai wo sare kitab chemist ke the fir wo apne divya dristi se dekhta hai to usme usko bahut sari galtiya dikhti hai fir surya apne swarg ki sudharak shakti se u sare galtiyon ko thik kar deta hai.
Galti thik hone ke bad Rohan un sare kitabo ko atmasadh kar leta hai jisse usko chemist ki sari gyane mil jati hai fir wo bajra hammer taknik ki sari galtiyan surya se thik karwata hai aur usko bhi practice kar leta hai.
Iske bad wo log waha se nikalne ke liye aage badh jate hai jaha unko Saptchakra ke ek vayu chakra milta hai jise Rohan kabu karne ke liye jata hai.
Idhar rohan ke bahan shreya roj ke bhati aaj bhi Rohan ko dhundhne ke liye jangal jati hai jaha uske pichhe pichhe Rounak mehra bhi apne do sathiyo ke sath jata hai.

Ab aage
Mai us bavandar ke taraf badhe ja raha tha jaise jaise Mai aage Jaa raha tha waise waise mere uper havao ka dabav badhte jaa raha tha.

Dhire dhire mere uper havao ka dabav itna badh gaya ki mujhe ghutan hone lagi aur aisa lag raha tha ki mere sharir ki sari hadiya in dabav se tut kar chakna chur ho jayega.

Lekin mai kisi tarah se un havao ke dabav ko bardasht karte huye us bavandar tak pahuch hi gaya aur fir mai jaise hi us bavandar ke andar apna ek pair rakha to achanak wo bavandar mujhe apne andar khich liya.

Mai jaise hi us bavandar ke andar khicha gaya mai us mai bhi bavandar ke sath tez raftar me gol gol ghumne laga mai itna tez gati se us bavandar ke andar ghume ja raha tha ki mujhe sabkuch dikhna band ho gaya aur dhire dhire mera senses jane laga.

Mai behosh hone ke kagar par pahuch gaya tabhi mujhe mere kano me surya ke awaj sunayi diya.

Surya- Rohan tum aise himat nhi har sakte agar tum us bavandar ke andar behosh ho gaye to tumhara bachna muskil ho jayega.
Aur agar tum isi tarah yaha mar gaye to tumhare pariwar ka kya hoga jo tumhare wapas aane ka intjar kar raha hai.
Tum himat mat haro aur apna senses mat jane do tum apna dhyan kendrit karo aur us bavandar ko dhyan se dekho tumhe usme se nikalne ka rasta mil jayega.

Surya ke bat sun kar mai apne senses me wapas lautne ka prayas karne laga aur fir dhire dhire dhyan kendrit karne laga jab mai puri tarah se apne senses me wapas lauta to mai us bavandar ko dhyan se dekhne ki kosish karne laga.

Wo bavandar itna tez gati se ghum raha tha ki usme kuchh dekhna bahut mushkil ho raha tha kyuki wo bavandar mujhe bhi utni hi tez gati se ghumaye jaa raha tha jitni tez gati se wo ghum raha tha.

Bahut dhyan se dekhne ke bad mujhe us bavandar me ek loop hole dikha jo mujhe us bavandar ke andar aane se bana tha.

Lekin ab muskil ye tha ki mai us loop hole ke pass pahuchunga kaise kyuki wo loop hole mere samne se just dusre side tha aur agar mai waha kisi tarah se pahuch bhi gaya to waha se bahar kaise nikalunga kyuki wo loop hole bahut chhota ho gaya tha aur dhire dhire wapas bhar bhi raha tha.

Mujhe jo bhi karna hoga jaldi hi karna hoga.

Fir mai kuchh der sochne ke bad maine ye faisala kiya ki mujhe kisi tarah se apne ghumne ki gati ko kam karna hoga jab mera gati kam ho jayega to mai asani se us loop hole ke pass pahuch jaunga.

Fir maine apne shakti ko ikatha kiya aur us bavandar ke biprit disha me jane ki kosish karne laga jisse ye huya ki mera ghumne ka gati dhima ho gaya aur dhire dhire wo loop hole mere pass pahuchne laga.

Fir mai intajar karne laga ki kab mai us roshani ke gole ki disha me pahuchunga jab mai us roshani ke gole ki disha me pahuch jaunga tabhi mai is bavandar se bahar nikal sakta tha kyuki agar mai us disha me nhi nikalta to wapas jidhar se aaya tha udhar hi chala jata.

Mai jaise hi us disha ki or pahunchne wala tha waise hi maine apne sharir ki sari shaktiyo ko ekkatha kiya jisme mere supreme level ki bhi shaktiya samil thi mai fir apni puri takat ko lagate huye us loop hole ko tod diya aur fir us loop hole ko todte huye bahar ja gira.

Us bavandar se bahar nikalne me meri sari shaktiyan khatam ho gayi thi aur mujhe chot bhi bahut aayi thi isliye mai waha thoda rest karne laga.

KANCHANPUR JANGLE
Idhar dusri taraf shreya mujhe dhundhne ke liye us jangal me aayi thi aur mujhe dhundh rahi thi.

Lekin usko ye pata nhi tha ki koi aur bhi hai jo uske piche piche is jangal me aaya hai.

Idhar rounak mehra apne do sathiyo ke sath shreya ke piche piche is jangal tak pahuch gaya tha aur Shreya ko dhundh raha tha ki tabhi uski najar shreya par padi aur khush hote huye uske pass chala gaya aur jate hi shreya ke rasta ko rok leta hai jisse shreya thoda gusa ho jati hai aur guse me bolti hai.

Shreya- ye kya batmizi hai rounak tumhari himat kaise huyi meri rasta rokne ki chalo mera rasta chodo nhi to tumhare liye ye achha nhi hoga.

Rounak- dekho shreya mai kabse tumhare pichhe aa raha hu lekin tum mujhe bhav hi nhi de rhi ho.
Mai kitni bar tumhe bola ki mai tumse bahut pyar karta hu lekin tum meri samjh hi nhi Rahi ho.

Shreya- Dekho Rounak mai tumhe achhe se samjha rhi hu mera rasta chhodo mai yaha tumhari bakwas sunne nhi aayi hu mujhe abhi mere bhai ko dhundhna hai.

Rounak- ( Haste huye) ha ha ha ha oh to tum yaha us kachre zero ko dhundhne aayi ho are ab use dhundhna byarth hai kyuki wo to kahi jakar sharam se mar gaya hoga.

Uske bat ko sun kar uske sathi bhi jor jor se hasne lage.

Shreya- (guse se) Apni jaban ko lagan do Rounak agar tum aur ek shabd mere bhai ke bare me bole to mai tumhari jaban ko kat dungi samjhe.

Rounak- (Haste huye) Sorry sorry maf kardo mai to bas aise hi bol raha tha tum to gusa ho gayi achha ab mai us looser ko kachra nhi bolunga

Shreya- Tum jaise adami ke muh lagna hi bekar hai.

Itna bol kar Shreya waha rasta badal kar se jane lagti hai jise dekh kar rounak bolta hai.

Rounak- Are tum abhi kidhar jane lagi abhi hamara bat pura nhi huya hai.
To tum kya bol rahi ho mera bat manogi ya nhi.

Shreya- ( guse se) Mai tumhe achhi tarah se janti hu tum kitna ghatiya aur nich ho tumne Aaj tak na Jane kitni ladkiyo ke jindagi barbad ki hai agar is duniya me tum akhari insan bhi hoge tabh bhi mai tumhe apna naukar bhi na rakhungi.

Shreya ke bat ko sun kar rounak guse se aag babula ho jata hai aur guse me bolta hai.

Rounak- Lagta hai tum pyar se nhi manogi ab mujhe apna asli rup tumhe dikhana hi padega.
(Apne sathiyo se ) Padko is sali ko isko apne khubsurat jism par jyada hi ghamand hai aaj mai iski sari ghamand nikal dunga.

Rounak ke bat sun kar un dono ladko ne shreya ko pakdne ke liye uske taraf badhe lekin jaise hi wo shreya ko hath lagate shreya dono ko ek ek punch marti hai aur dono udte huye ek ped se takra jate hai.

Wo log shreya ke ek punch bhi sah nhi paye unke muh se khoon nikalne laga aur wo wahi behosh ho kar gir gaye

Apne sathiyo ko is tarah mar kha kar behosh hota dekh Rounak guse se pagal ho jata hai.

Rounak- Mai to sirf tumhe pyar se hasil karna chahta tha lekin ab nhi ab mai tumhe aise dard dunga ki puri tum puri jindagi yahi sochogi ki mujhe rounak ka bat man lena chahiye tha.

Itna bol kar rounak apne sharir se apne shaktiyo ko bahar nikalte hai aur Shreya par war karne ke liye aage badh jata hai rounak bhi daksh rank ke advance level par pahuch gaya tha is liye usme thoda jyada hi ghamand aa gaya tha.

Rounak ko apne uper karne ke liye aate dekh kar Shreya bhi guse me aa gayi aur fir guse me boli.

Shreya- Tumne aaj tak bahut se ladkiyo ke majburi ka fayda uthaya hai lekin aaj tumne galat ladki se panga le liya tumne ek rayjada pariwar ke ladki ko chhedne ki bhul ki hai aaj tum yaha se sahi salamat wapas nhi jaoge.

Rounak- tumme itna samarth nhi hai ki tum rounak mehra ki ek bal bhi ukhad sako.
Aaj tumhe pata chalega ki rounak mehra ke bat na manne ka anjam kya hota hai.

Itna bol kar rounak apne full speed me shreya ke pass jata hai aur apne shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha karte huye shreya par ek punch mar deta hai.

Rounak ka punch full speed me shreya ke taraf aa raha tha uske punch se aag nikal rahi thi.

Ye dekh kar Shreya ke chehre par ek muskan aa gaya aur wo bhi apne shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha karte huye ek punch mar deti hai.

Iske bad Shreya ka punch jakar sidha rounak ke punch se takrata hai jaha ek visphot ki awaj sunayi deti shreya ke punch me itna takat tha ki rounak udte huye ek ped se takra jata hai jabki shreya apni jagah se bas thoda hi hi pichhe hati thi.

Rounak shreya ke punch ka takat dekh kar ek pal ke liye ghabra gya tha lekin agle hi pal uske chehra guse se lal ho gaya aur wo guse me aage badhte huye apne sharir ki sari shakti ko nikalte huye jor se chilaya.

Rounak- ab bahut ho gaya tumhara lo ab sambhalo mera agla war ... Fire fist

(Fire fist ek rank 2 ke low level punch taknik hai)

Rounak ka fire fist ek bahut bade se punch me badal kar Shreya ke taraf jane laga us punch se bhayanak aag nikal raha tha jiske karan aas pass ke ped paudhe jalne lage the.

Shreya ne dekha ki rounak ek rank 2 ke taknik use kiya hai to wo bhi apne hath ko uper uthati hai aur bolti hai.

Shreya- Lightening bolt.

(Lightening bolt bhi ek rank 2 ka hi taknik hai)

Shreya ne jab lightening bolt taknik ka use kiya to asaman me badal chha gaye aur bijali kadkane lagi fir unhi bijli me se bijli ke chhote chhote kan nikal kar ek bahut bada hatheli banane laga jab wo hatheli ban kar taiyar huya to usse bahut hi bhayanak shakti nikal rahi thi fir wo hatheli sidha jakar rounak ke punch se takra gaya.

Shreya ke lightening bolt rounak ke fire fist se takrate hi charo taraf roshani fail gayi aur unme se bhayanak shakti nikalne lagi rounak un shaktiyo ko bardast nhi kar paya aur udte huye piche ja kar gira uske muh se khun nikalne laga tha.

Apne muh se khun nikalte dekh kar rounak samajh gaya ki shreya ko harana uske akele ki bas ki bat nhi hai is liye wo apne dono sathi jo ki ab hosh me aa gaye the aur Shreya aur rounak ke ladayi dekh rahe the Rounak unko awaj dete huye bola.

Rounak- hamne isko jitna kamjor samjha tha ye usse kahi jyada shaktishali hai isse ham akele nhi hara sakte isliye ham teeno ko ispar ek sath hamla karna hoga.

Rounak ke bat sun kar uske dono sathi darte darte ha me apna sar ha me hilaya kyuki wo log pahle hi shreya ke takat ko mahsus kar liye the fir teeno Shreya ke taraf badhane lage.

Shreya ne jab dekha ki teeno ek sath mil kar uspe hamla karne aa rahe hai to wo bhi apne puri shakti ko ekattha karte huye un teeno se ladne ke liye taiyar ho gayi.

Idhar un teeno ne bhi apne shakti ko nikalte huye aage badhne lage lekin wo teeno mil kar Shreya par hamla karte usse pahle hi shreya ne apne lightening shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha kar kar ek ladke par war kar diya shreya apne is punch me srijankar rank ki bhi shakti ka use kiya tha jisse wo ladka us punch ko rok na saka aur wo punch sidha jakar us ladke ke chhati se takra gaya jiske karan us ladke ke muh se khun nikalne laga aur wo wahi behosh ho kar gir gaya.

Apne ek sathi ko aise behosh hote dekh kar dusra ladka jo pahle se hi dara huya tha wo aur dar gaya aur waha se bhag gaya ab sirf rounak akele hi bachha tha lekin wo apne ego ke chalte waha se bhaga nhi balki shreya se ladne ke liye uske taraf jane laga.

Rounak ne apne aag ke shakti se bahut sare teer banaya aur Shreya par chhod diya wo sare teer bahut tez gati se shreya ke taraf badh rahe the.

Idhar shreya ne jab dekha ki aag se bana huya teer uske taraf badh raha hai to shreya ne apne samne ek bijali ka kavach bana liya.

wo sare teer aakar us kavach se takra gaye aur nast ho gaye.

Apne teero ko is tarah se nast hote dekh kar rounak boukhla gaya apne puri shakti ko apne hatho me ekkatha kar ke ek punch banaya aur Shreya ko marne ke liye uske taraf bhaga lekin shreya iske liye pahle se hi taiyar thi.

Usne asani se uske punch ko rok liya aur apne puri shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha kar ke ek punch uske chhati pe de mari.

Ek kadak ke awaj ke sath rounak ke chhati ke hadi tut gaya aur wo niche gir gaya uske muh se khun nikalne laga tha.

Rounak ko niche girta dekh kar bhi shreya ruki nhi balki ghuma kar ek kick rounak ke main part par de mari jiske karan rounak ka bhayanak chikh pure jangal me gunj gaya aur wo dard ke karan wahi behosh ho gaya.

Shreya ne jab dekha ki rounak behosh ho gaya hai to wo waha se chali gayi aur apne bhai ko dhundhne lagi.

Jab aaj bhi uska bhai use nhi mila to wo nirash ho gayi aur udasi me hi apne ghar laut gayi.

Idhar shreya ko waha se jate hi rounak ka ek sathi jo waha se bhag gaya tha wo fir wapas lout aaya aur fir kisi tarah se apne dusre sathi ko hosh me laya aur fir dono mil kar rounak ko uthaya aur waha se chale gye.

GHATI ME
Idhar mai us bavandar se nikalne ke bad aram kar raha tha kyuki us bavandar se nikalne me meri sari shakti khatam ho gyi thi.

Fir mai wahi baith kar dhyan lagane laga aur apne absorption ki shakti se waha ke spritual shaktiyo ko apne andar absorb karne laga.

Kafi der tak spritual shakti ko apne andar absorb karne ke bad mai pahle ki tarah thik ho gaya aur jo shaktiya khoya tha use wapas paa liya lekin mere jakham abhi bhi nhi bhare the.

Mai apne jakhmo par dhyan na dete huye us gole ko jo vayu chakra tha use hasil karne ke liye mai uske taraf jane laga.

Thodi der chalne ke bad jab mai us gole ke pass pahucha to dekha ki wo roshani ka gola nhi balki ek chakra tha jo bahut tezi se ghum raha tha aur uske ghumne ke raftar ke karan wo ek roshani ke gole jaisa dikh raha tha.

Mai der na karte huye aage badha aur us chakra ko pakdne ki kosish karne laga.

Lekin bar bar pryas karne ke bad bhi mai us chakra ko pakad nhi paa raha tha.

Kyuki wo chakra itni tez gati se ghum raha tha ki use pakad pana namumkin tha mai thak har kar surya se puchha.

Mai- jab mai is chakra ko pakad hi nhi paunga to ise kabu kaise karunga Surya Bhai koi upay batao mai kaise ise pakadunga aur hasil karunga.

Surya- Rohan aisa jaruri nhi ki jo dikhta hai wo sach hi hai tum apna divya dristi activate Karo aur us chakra ko dekho.

Mai Surya ke bat man kar jab us chakra ko dekha to dekh kar chauk gaya kyuki itni tez gati se wo chakra nhi ghum raha tha balki uske pass ek suraksha kavach lagaya huya tha wahi ghum raha tha.

Wo chakra to apne jagah par jas ka tas tha

 

[Shekhu69]

Kya baat adhbhut Lajawab Jabardast superb romanchak ekdum dhasu update

 

[Dhakad boy]

Shandar update Bhai

 

[Sidh]

Update 15​

Recap
Apne abhi Tak padha ki Rohan ko surya se ek taknik milta hai jo uske supreme yodha ke sach ko logo se chhupa sakta tha Rohan us taknik ko atmasadh kar leta hai iske bad wo talwar ke pass jata hai aur use utha kar kabu kar leta hai.
Fir surya apne storage ring se sare kitabo aur taknikon ko nikalta hai wo sare kitab chemist ke the fir wo apne divya dristi se dekhta hai to usme usko bahut sari galtiya dikhti hai fir surya apne swarg ki sudharak shakti se u sare galtiyon ko thik kar deta hai.
Galti thik hone ke bad Rohan un sare kitabo ko atmasadh kar leta hai jisse usko chemist ki sari gyane mil jati hai fir wo bajra hammer taknik ki sari galtiyan surya se thik karwata hai aur usko bhi practice kar leta hai.
Iske bad wo log waha se nikalne ke liye aage badh jate hai jaha unko Saptchakra ke ek vayu chakra milta hai jise Rohan kabu karne ke liye jata hai.
Idhar rohan ke bahan shreya roj ke bhati aaj bhi Rohan ko dhundhne ke liye jangal jati hai jaha uske pichhe pichhe Rounak mehra bhi apne do sathiyo ke sath jata hai.

Ab aage
Mai us bavandar ke taraf badhe ja raha tha jaise jaise Mai aage Jaa raha tha waise waise mere uper havao ka dabav badhte jaa raha tha.

Dhire dhire mere uper havao ka dabav itna badh gaya ki mujhe ghutan hone lagi aur aisa lag raha tha ki mere sharir ki sari hadiya in dabav se tut kar chakna chur ho jayega.

Lekin mai kisi tarah se un havao ke dabav ko bardasht karte huye us bavandar tak pahuch hi gaya aur fir mai jaise hi us bavandar ke andar apna ek pair rakha to achanak wo bavandar mujhe apne andar khich liya.

Mai jaise hi us bavandar ke andar khicha gaya mai us mai bhi bavandar ke sath tez raftar me gol gol ghumne laga mai itna tez gati se us bavandar ke andar ghume ja raha tha ki mujhe sabkuch dikhna band ho gaya aur dhire dhire mera senses jane laga.

Mai behosh hone ke kagar par pahuch gaya tabhi mujhe mere kano me surya ke awaj sunayi diya.

Surya- Rohan tum aise himat nhi har sakte agar tum us bavandar ke andar behosh ho gaye to tumhara bachna muskil ho jayega.
Aur agar tum isi tarah yaha mar gaye to tumhare pariwar ka kya hoga jo tumhare wapas aane ka intjar kar raha hai.
Tum himat mat haro aur apna senses mat jane do tum apna dhyan kendrit karo aur us bavandar ko dhyan se dekho tumhe usme se nikalne ka rasta mil jayega.

Surya ke bat sun kar mai apne senses me wapas lautne ka prayas karne laga aur fir dhire dhire dhyan kendrit karne laga jab mai puri tarah se apne senses me wapas lauta to mai us bavandar ko dhyan se dekhne ki kosish karne laga.

Wo bavandar itna tez gati se ghum raha tha ki usme kuchh dekhna bahut mushkil ho raha tha kyuki wo bavandar mujhe bhi utni hi tez gati se ghumaye jaa raha tha jitni tez gati se wo ghum raha tha.

Bahut dhyan se dekhne ke bad mujhe us bavandar me ek loop hole dikha jo mujhe us bavandar ke andar aane se bana tha.

Lekin ab muskil ye tha ki mai us loop hole ke pass pahuchunga kaise kyuki wo loop hole mere samne se just dusre side tha aur agar mai waha kisi tarah se pahuch bhi gaya to waha se bahar kaise nikalunga kyuki wo loop hole bahut chhota ho gaya tha aur dhire dhire wapas bhar bhi raha tha.

Mujhe jo bhi karna hoga jaldi hi karna hoga.

Fir mai kuchh der sochne ke bad maine ye faisala kiya ki mujhe kisi tarah se apne ghumne ki gati ko kam karna hoga jab mera gati kam ho jayega to mai asani se us loop hole ke pass pahuch jaunga.

Fir maine apne shakti ko ikatha kiya aur us bavandar ke biprit disha me jane ki kosish karne laga jisse ye huya ki mera ghumne ka gati dhima ho gaya aur dhire dhire wo loop hole mere pass pahuchne laga.

Fir mai intajar karne laga ki kab mai us roshani ke gole ki disha me pahuchunga jab mai us roshani ke gole ki disha me pahuch jaunga tabhi mai is bavandar se bahar nikal sakta tha kyuki agar mai us disha me nhi nikalta to wapas jidhar se aaya tha udhar hi chala jata.

Mai jaise hi us disha ki or pahunchne wala tha waise hi maine apne sharir ki sari shaktiyo ko ekkatha kiya jisme mere supreme level ki bhi shaktiya samil thi mai fir apni puri takat ko lagate huye us loop hole ko tod diya aur fir us loop hole ko todte huye bahar ja gira.

Us bavandar se bahar nikalne me meri sari shaktiyan khatam ho gayi thi aur mujhe chot bhi bahut aayi thi isliye mai waha thoda rest karne laga.

KANCHANPUR JANGLE
Idhar dusri taraf shreya mujhe dhundhne ke liye us jangal me aayi thi aur mujhe dhundh rahi thi.

Lekin usko ye pata nhi tha ki koi aur bhi hai jo uske piche piche is jangal me aaya hai.

Idhar rounak mehra apne do sathiyo ke sath shreya ke piche piche is jangal tak pahuch gaya tha aur Shreya ko dhundh raha tha ki tabhi uski najar shreya par padi aur khush hote huye uske pass chala gaya aur jate hi shreya ke rasta ko rok leta hai jisse shreya thoda gusa ho jati hai aur guse me bolti hai.

Shreya- ye kya batmizi hai rounak tumhari himat kaise huyi meri rasta rokne ki chalo mera rasta chodo nhi to tumhare liye ye achha nhi hoga.

Rounak- dekho shreya mai kabse tumhare pichhe aa raha hu lekin tum mujhe bhav hi nhi de rhi ho.
Mai kitni bar tumhe bola ki mai tumse bahut pyar karta hu lekin tum meri samjh hi nhi Rahi ho.

Shreya- Dekho Rounak mai tumhe achhe se samjha rhi hu mera rasta chhodo mai yaha tumhari bakwas sunne nhi aayi hu mujhe abhi mere bhai ko dhundhna hai.

Rounak- ( Haste huye) ha ha ha ha oh to tum yaha us kachre zero ko dhundhne aayi ho are ab use dhundhna byarth hai kyuki wo to kahi jakar sharam se mar gaya hoga.

Uske bat ko sun kar uske sathi bhi jor jor se hasne lage.

Shreya- (guse se) Apni jaban ko lagan do Rounak agar tum aur ek shabd mere bhai ke bare me bole to mai tumhari jaban ko kat dungi samjhe.

Rounak- (Haste huye) Sorry sorry maf kardo mai to bas aise hi bol raha tha tum to gusa ho gayi achha ab mai us looser ko kachra nhi bolunga

Shreya- Tum jaise adami ke muh lagna hi bekar hai.

Itna bol kar Shreya waha rasta badal kar se jane lagti hai jise dekh kar rounak bolta hai.

Rounak- Are tum abhi kidhar jane lagi abhi hamara bat pura nhi huya hai.
To tum kya bol rahi ho mera bat manogi ya nhi.

Shreya- ( guse se) Mai tumhe achhi tarah se janti hu tum kitna ghatiya aur nich ho tumne Aaj tak na Jane kitni ladkiyo ke jindagi barbad ki hai agar is duniya me tum akhari insan bhi hoge tabh bhi mai tumhe apna naukar bhi na rakhungi.

Shreya ke bat ko sun kar rounak guse se aag babula ho jata hai aur guse me bolta hai.

Rounak- Lagta hai tum pyar se nhi manogi ab mujhe apna asli rup tumhe dikhana hi padega.
(Apne sathiyo se ) Padko is sali ko isko apne khubsurat jism par jyada hi ghamand hai aaj mai iski sari ghamand nikal dunga.

Rounak ke bat sun kar un dono ladko ne shreya ko pakdne ke liye uske taraf badhe lekin jaise hi wo shreya ko hath lagate shreya dono ko ek ek punch marti hai aur dono udte huye ek ped se takra jate hai.

Wo log shreya ke ek punch bhi sah nhi paye unke muh se khoon nikalne laga aur wo wahi behosh ho kar gir gaye

Apne sathiyo ko is tarah mar kha kar behosh hota dekh Rounak guse se pagal ho jata hai.

Rounak- Mai to sirf tumhe pyar se hasil karna chahta tha lekin ab nhi ab mai tumhe aise dard dunga ki puri tum puri jindagi yahi sochogi ki mujhe rounak ka bat man lena chahiye tha.

Itna bol kar rounak apne sharir se apne shaktiyo ko bahar nikalte hai aur Shreya par war karne ke liye aage badh jata hai rounak bhi daksh rank ke advance level par pahuch gaya tha is liye usme thoda jyada hi ghamand aa gaya tha.

Rounak ko apne uper karne ke liye aate dekh kar Shreya bhi guse me aa gayi aur fir guse me boli.

Shreya- Tumne aaj tak bahut se ladkiyo ke majburi ka fayda uthaya hai lekin aaj tumne galat ladki se panga le liya tumne ek rayjada pariwar ke ladki ko chhedne ki bhul ki hai aaj tum yaha se sahi salamat wapas nhi jaoge.

Rounak- tumme itna samarth nhi hai ki tum rounak mehra ki ek bal bhi ukhad sako.
Aaj tumhe pata chalega ki rounak mehra ke bat na manne ka anjam kya hota hai.

Itna bol kar rounak apne full speed me shreya ke pass jata hai aur apne shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha karte huye shreya par ek punch mar deta hai.

Rounak ka punch full speed me shreya ke taraf aa raha tha uske punch se aag nikal rahi thi.

Ye dekh kar Shreya ke chehre par ek muskan aa gaya aur wo bhi apne shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha karte huye ek punch mar deti hai.

Iske bad Shreya ka punch jakar sidha rounak ke punch se takrata hai jaha ek visphot ki awaj sunayi deti shreya ke punch me itna takat tha ki rounak udte huye ek ped se takra jata hai jabki shreya apni jagah se bas thoda hi hi pichhe hati thi.

Rounak shreya ke punch ka takat dekh kar ek pal ke liye ghabra gya tha lekin agle hi pal uske chehra guse se lal ho gaya aur wo guse me aage badhte huye apne sharir ki sari shakti ko nikalte huye jor se chilaya.

Rounak- ab bahut ho gaya tumhara lo ab sambhalo mera agla war ... Fire fist

(Fire fist ek rank 2 ke low level punch taknik hai)

Rounak ka fire fist ek bahut bade se punch me badal kar Shreya ke taraf jane laga us punch se bhayanak aag nikal raha tha jiske karan aas pass ke ped paudhe jalne lage the.

Shreya ne dekha ki rounak ek rank 2 ke taknik use kiya hai to wo bhi apne hath ko uper uthati hai aur bolti hai.

Shreya- Lightening bolt.

(Lightening bolt bhi ek rank 2 ka hi taknik hai)

Shreya ne jab lightening bolt taknik ka use kiya to asaman me badal chha gaye aur bijali kadkane lagi fir unhi bijli me se bijli ke chhote chhote kan nikal kar ek bahut bada hatheli banane laga jab wo hatheli ban kar taiyar huya to usse bahut hi bhayanak shakti nikal rahi thi fir wo hatheli sidha jakar rounak ke punch se takra gaya.

Shreya ke lightening bolt rounak ke fire fist se takrate hi charo taraf roshani fail gayi aur unme se bhayanak shakti nikalne lagi rounak un shaktiyo ko bardast nhi kar paya aur udte huye piche ja kar gira uske muh se khun nikalne laga tha.

Apne muh se khun nikalte dekh kar rounak samajh gaya ki shreya ko harana uske akele ki bas ki bat nhi hai is liye wo apne dono sathi jo ki ab hosh me aa gaye the aur Shreya aur rounak ke ladayi dekh rahe the Rounak unko awaj dete huye bola.

Rounak- hamne isko jitna kamjor samjha tha ye usse kahi jyada shaktishali hai isse ham akele nhi hara sakte isliye ham teeno ko ispar ek sath hamla karna hoga.

Rounak ke bat sun kar uske dono sathi darte darte ha me apna sar ha me hilaya kyuki wo log pahle hi shreya ke takat ko mahsus kar liye the fir teeno Shreya ke taraf badhane lage.

Shreya ne jab dekha ki teeno ek sath mil kar uspe hamla karne aa rahe hai to wo bhi apne puri shakti ko ekattha karte huye un teeno se ladne ke liye taiyar ho gayi.

Idhar un teeno ne bhi apne shakti ko nikalte huye aage badhne lage lekin wo teeno mil kar Shreya par hamla karte usse pahle hi shreya ne apne lightening shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha kar kar ek ladke par war kar diya shreya apne is punch me srijankar rank ki bhi shakti ka use kiya tha jisse wo ladka us punch ko rok na saka aur wo punch sidha jakar us ladke ke chhati se takra gaya jiske karan us ladke ke muh se khun nikalne laga aur wo wahi behosh ho kar gir gaya.

Apne ek sathi ko aise behosh hote dekh kar dusra ladka jo pahle se hi dara huya tha wo aur dar gaya aur waha se bhag gaya ab sirf rounak akele hi bachha tha lekin wo apne ego ke chalte waha se bhaga nhi balki shreya se ladne ke liye uske taraf jane laga.

Rounak ne apne aag ke shakti se bahut sare teer banaya aur Shreya par chhod diya wo sare teer bahut tez gati se shreya ke taraf badh rahe the.

Idhar shreya ne jab dekha ki aag se bana huya teer uske taraf badh raha hai to shreya ne apne samne ek bijali ka kavach bana liya.

wo sare teer aakar us kavach se takra gaye aur nast ho gaye.

Apne teero ko is tarah se nast hote dekh kar rounak boukhla gaya apne puri shakti ko apne hatho me ekkatha kar ke ek punch banaya aur Shreya ko marne ke liye uske taraf bhaga lekin shreya iske liye pahle se hi taiyar thi.

Usne asani se uske punch ko rok liya aur apne puri shakti ko apne hath me ekkatha kar ke ek punch uske chhati pe de mari.

Ek kadak ke awaj ke sath rounak ke chhati ke hadi tut gaya aur wo niche gir gaya uske muh se khun nikalne laga tha.

Rounak ko niche girta dekh kar bhi shreya ruki nhi balki ghuma kar ek kick rounak ke main part par de mari jiske karan rounak ka bhayanak chikh pure jangal me gunj gaya aur wo dard ke karan wahi behosh ho gaya.

Shreya ne jab dekha ki rounak behosh ho gaya hai to wo waha se chali gayi aur apne bhai ko dhundhne lagi.

Jab aaj bhi uska bhai use nhi mila to wo nirash ho gayi aur udasi me hi apne ghar laut gayi.

Idhar shreya ko waha se jate hi rounak ka ek sathi jo waha se bhag gaya tha wo fir wapas lout aaya aur fir kisi tarah se apne dusre sathi ko hosh me laya aur fir dono mil kar rounak ko uthaya aur waha se chale gye.

GHATI ME
Idhar mai us bavandar se nikalne ke bad aram kar raha tha kyuki us bavandar se nikalne me meri sari shakti khatam ho gyi thi.

Fir mai wahi baith kar dhyan lagane laga aur apne absorption ki shakti se waha ke spritual shaktiyo ko apne andar absorb karne laga.

Kafi der tak spritual shakti ko apne andar absorb karne ke bad mai pahle ki tarah thik ho gaya aur jo shaktiya khoya tha use wapas paa liya lekin mere jakham abhi bhi nhi bhare the.

Mai apne jakhmo par dhyan na dete huye us gole ko jo vayu chakra tha use hasil karne ke liye mai uske taraf jane laga.

Thodi der chalne ke bad jab mai us gole ke pass pahucha to dekha ki wo roshani ka gola nhi balki ek chakra tha jo bahut tezi se ghum raha tha aur uske ghumne ke raftar ke karan wo ek roshani ke gole jaisa dikh raha tha.

Mai der na karte huye aage badha aur us chakra ko pakdne ki kosish karne laga.

Lekin bar bar pryas karne ke bad bhi mai us chakra ko pakad nhi paa raha tha.

Kyuki wo chakra itni tez gati se ghum raha tha ki use pakad pana namumkin tha mai thak har kar surya se puchha.

Mai- jab mai is chakra ko pakad hi nhi paunga to ise kabu kaise karunga Surya Bhai koi upay batao mai kaise ise pakadunga aur hasil karunga.

Surya- Rohan aisa jaruri nhi ki jo dikhta hai wo sach hi hai tum apna divya dristi activate Karo aur us chakra ko dekho.

Mai Surya ke bat man kar jab us chakra ko dekha to dekh kar chauk gaya kyuki itni tez gati se wo chakra nhi ghum raha tha balki uske pass ek suraksha kavach lagaya huya tha wahi ghum raha tha.

Wo chakra to apne jagah par jas ka tas tha

Nice update