Fantasy Hero

[Hellohoney]

Nice update brother

but jahan tak mujhe lagta hai yeh story Sony SAB channel ka shoe (Hero gayab mood on) hai

Aap ko sahi lagta he bhai lekin me story me kuch cheng karunga.

 

[Hellohoney]

Nice buddy
But Ek advice deta hu
.
Starting 10 -12 updates Mega Updates do
And frequency daily rakho ya phir ek din se ek
.
Story ki starting mai agar y doo points
Dhayn mai rakhogai
To y most views gain karige
.
Next
Thread Name
Hero sai Change kar
Hero : Sex Mode On
Ya phir
Hero : Gayab Mode On rakhlo
.
Eski phiche Thought y hai
Jesa
Tmkoc mai hai
Bilkul waishe
..
Logo ko tv serials mai sex story dekhnai mai maza aata hai
.
So , Give them what they want


Abd last advice
.
Kahani ka flow
First episode se lekar aakhir tak same rakho
But incidents ko erotic kardo
.
For example
Veer (the little kid)
Usai present vesa karo ...jesa vo serial mai hai ....but saath mai sex thought add kardo
.
And one last thing
A famous quote of a movie,
" Kahani ko nahi ......Kahani k Hero ko Becho"
.
.
Baaki
Story thumhari hai
Usi wese likho ....jesa tum chahte ho

Sukriya bhai aap ki bate me jarur dhayan me rakhunga.

 

[Hellohoney]

bhai me 1 hi baat batana chahatahu ki tv series jaisa chutiyapa matkarna ring milgaya lagaya fir nikalke rakha fir lagaya fir nikalke rakha kyaheye ? Aap bas itna karna ki 1 baar lagaya to perminet lagatehi gayeb hojay bas yehi he mera sujhab.

Sukriya bhai lekin hamesa gayab rehega to fhemeli ka kya hoga.

 

[Egin]

Sukriya bhai lekin hamesa gayab rehega to fhemeli ka kya hoga.

Yoga karke control karo bas aur kya bro

 

[mashish]

Waiting

 

[Hellohoney]

Yoga karke control karo bas aur kya bro

Dekhte he kya hota he.

 

[Hellohoney]

Waiting

Sukriya bhai

 

[Naik]

Agle update ka intizar h bhai

 

[Naina]

Sukriya bhai lekin hamesa gayab rehega to fhemeli ka kya hoga.

 

[mashish]

Waiting