Fantasy Hero

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Nice update bro

 

[Hellohoney]

Excellent start

Sukriya bhai

 

[Hellohoney]

Fantastic update

Sukriya bhai

 

[Hellohoney]

Awesome updates

Sukriya bhai

 

[Hellohoney]

for new story..
Nayi kahani.... naye mod, naye pehlu.... ek freshness...
bahot hi behtareen suruwat huyi hai kahani ki...
Kahani ek ring aur kahani ke pramukh kirdaar veer pe mul roop pe adharit hai...
Apne bete ke saamne us ring ke baare mein jikar karne wale amal ek scientist hai, jinko shayad kisni fanahaya hai isliye police wale aake unko giraftaar kar ke le gaye... ho na ho fanshane ke piche jo log hai, weh log amal se ring ke bare mein jaankari hashil karna chaahte ho...
veer ki mom pregnant hai Matlab veer ki chhoti bahan bhi hogi in future... jahir si baat hai,,, yahan xf pe stories fantasy prefix ho to chhote bhai ki jagah chhoti behne zyada paida hoti hai...
Khair..... So veer ka Yun nind se jaag jaana aur wo sabhi ghatanaye sapne mein dekhna matlab saaf hai ki wo amal ki giraftaari wali ghatana atit mein ghat chuki hai... jisko wo baar baar sapne mein dekhta hai...
well matlab kahani mein flashback bhi hai.. good...

Well... shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Sukriya naina ji

 

[Hellohoney]

very nice update bhai

Sukriya bhai

 

[Hellohoney]

Nice update bro

Sukriya bhai

 

[parkas]

Update 1

Hajaro saal pehle bharamhand me devta or asuro me varchasv ke lite yudh chidh gaya.ye yudh bhot hi bhaysnkar tha.kyunke dono log apne apne varchasv ki ladai lad rahe the. Esliye dono tarafh se bharpur prayas horahe the. Lekin ek vakt esa bhi aaya jisme devta on ka palda bhari hogaya .


Tab yudh me samil huve asur guru sukrachary jiski vajah se asuro ka palda bhari hone laga.

Lekin ye ladai achai or burai ki thi esliye devtao ki tarafh se bhagvan shiv khud yudh bhumi me aaye.

Bhagvan shiv ke aatehi devtaome hars ka mahol hogaya or danav todanav lekin guru sukr bhi bhaybhit hogaye kyunki vo bhi ek shiv bhakt the or unhe pata tha ki agar bhagvan shiv devtao ki tarafh se lade to asuro ka vinas nischint he lekin tabhi unhone chal ka pryog karneka vichar aaya.

Or unhone apna ek mahatv purn sastr nikal vo tha ek ring ye koi mamuli ring nahi balke bhagvan shiv ne khud unki tapsys ke rup me unhe aasirvad ke rup me pradan kiya tha. jisse dharn karte he guru sukr ke sath sath sare asur or asuro ka nivas sthan joki tripur namse jana jata tha vo gayab hogaya.


Ek chota ladka bola.

Ladka: wow matlab gayab mod on.

Papa papa kahahen aap.

Bolke ladka apne bap ko dhundh ne laga jo use ye story suna rahe the.

Tabhi ladke ke piche se uska bap nikla.

Baap: han gayab mod on.

Ladka: fhir kya huva papa.

Baap:fir shiv ji to shivji he devo ke dev mahadev unho ne apna vinas kari astr nikala jo ki tha dhanus or baan or shiv ji ne baan ko dhanus me lagake choda or jese hi baan dhanus se nikla vese hi badi tejise aage badha or aage jake teen hisso me bat gaya or sidha jake tripura joki 3 hisso me tha un 3 hisso se jake takraya or bhot bada dhamaka huva or usi dhamake ke sath tripur pura nast hogaya sathme dhamake ki vajahse vaha esa asar huva ki sare asur ghayal hoke murchit hogaye or guru sukr bhi es dhamake ke asar se bach nahi paye vo vo bhi murchit hogaye.

Ladka: papa us ring ka kya huva.

Papa: us dhamake asarme vo ring guru sukr ke hath se nikal ke kahin kho gayi.

Ladka: kya gir gayi lekin kahan.

Papa: vo ring dharti par giri .

Ladka: vo ring dharti par he wow matlab papa aapko pata he ki ring kahan he.

Papa: han or me use tere liye hi dhundh raha hun.

Ladka ye sunke khus hoke nachne laga or chilla chilla ke bolne laga.

Ladka: ye papa aap gret ho hoooo us ring ko pahen ke me bhot sakti sali hojavunga.

Ladke ke papa use dekhkar khus hogaye lekin use rokte huve samjhane lage.

Papa: ruk ja beta ruk.

Apne papa ki baat sunke ladka ruk gaya lekin usee chehre pe bhot pyari muskan thi jese vo aaj bhot jyada khus ho.

Papa: beta meri ek baat hamesa yaad rakhna saktiyon ke sath kuch jimmedari bhi aati he.

Ladka: kesi jimmedari papa.

Papa: jimmedari beta logo ki hifhajat ki logo ki khusyon ki or jo ye jimmedari nibhata he vahi hota he asli hero.

Tabhi ek orat vahan aati he jo ki pregnant thi vo bhi 9 mahine se or uske hathme ek cake tha or vo barthdey song garahi thi .

Aurat: heppy barthdey to you, heppy barthday to you, happy barthday to you veer, happy barthday to you.

Ladke ka naam veer tha to ab usko veer hi likhunga.

Veer: maa I love you maa aapko yaad he mera barthday .

Maa: me kese apne pyare bache ka bathday bhul sakti hun.

Papa:are tumne espe skendal to lagaye hi nahi.

Maa: are meto bhul hi gayi thi abhi leke aati hun.

Aurat jab cendal lene ke liye jarahi hoti he ke uska dhyan dusre room me chalrahe news pe jata he or uske kadam vahin tham jate he or usko bhot jyada pasina aane lagta he.

Use es tarah se dekh uska pati jo ki achanak se uski najar udjar gayi thi vo puchta he.

Papa: suman kya huva ruk kyun gayi.

Maa ka naam ab suman likhunga.

Suman: amal jaldi yaha aake dekho.

Suman ki baat sunke amal bhi vajan phonch jata he or dekhta he to tv par uske bare me hi news chal rahi thi

Riportar:amal bajaj nam ke jane mane Scientist ne drso me resarch ke naam par kiya karodo ka ghapla .

Or tabhi police ahan aajati he.

Oficer: mr.amal bajaj aapko frod ke iljam me girafhtar kiya jata he.

Papaaaaa.

Ek chikh ke sath ek ladke ki nind khul jati he.

Nice and superb update..

 

[Hellohoney]

Nice and superb update..

Sukriya bhai.

 

[Raj n sithar]

Bhai tv serial hi start kar diya Kya ( hiro, gayab mod on) name se pahle hi tv par aa raha he. Kuch to different bat add karte