Incest HUM 3 (Completed)

[N sexy]

Dear, you have completed an incomplete story. I am very happy about this and to some extent you have written the story very well but I did not like the end of it at all. Because a great story is one whose end touches the readers' hearts.
Well never mind, you wrote very well. Hopefully, you will be back soon with a new story.. Thank you!

Thanks dear

 

[N sexy]

story jitni achchi thi,
ending ne utna hi nirash kiya,
khair kya hi kar sakte hain, aapke paas bhi samay ki kami hai,
lekin agar ho sake to mera ye request maan lijiyega new story start karne se pahle apni purani story manhoos complete kar dijiyega aur uske saath aisi koi harkat mat kijiyega jaldi khatam karne ke liye,
it's a humble request

Thanks dost lekin ab nayi story ke sath aisa nahi hoga

 

[N sexy]

Nice ending

Thanks dost

 

[Incestlala]

Sorry dost aap sahi kah rahe hai lekin agar yahan roj update nahi aaye to log gali bakne lagte hai isiliye aisa end karna pada

Ha ye bat to hai lekin yadi Jane se pehale Jane Karan bata do or administration ko bol story stop Kara do to Gali dene wala koi bhi aapki story me aayega hi Nahi

 

[eternity]

N sexy good you have ended it. I can understand everyone has other occupation too. Its better to end the story than to just lingering it or leaving it incomplete. Best of luck for other endeavor.

 

[N sexy]

N sexy good you have ended it. I can understand everyone has other occupation too. Its better to end the story than to just lingering it or leaving it incomplete. Best of luck for other endeavor.

Thanks

 

[Robins]

Last me mja nhi aaya sb ekdum se khtam

 

[Sukhi Choudhry]

Pls Neha Restart Mamhoos

 

[Boby]

where is index N sexy ji

 

[Werewolf]

Kaafi dino se soch raha tha ye kahani padhne ki finally mein kal baitha aur do din me hi mene poori padh daali. Pehle kabhi mene aapki story nahi padhi hai, isme shuru ke kuch updates copied and pasted the but aage ke aapke khud ke likhe hue the. Toh mein keh sakta hu ki mene aapki ek story padh lii hai.
Ab aate hai kahani par ..
Shuruaat boht hi acchi thi, sabhi ke characters uttam the. Hero se mein thoda disappointed tha shuru me kyuki baap ka na hona, upar se maa ke pese daaru par udaana, bakchodi karna, behan ke saath zabardasti, dost ko dhoka. Kul milaake hero ki personality ek awaara insaan ki thi jo ki apne ling se sochta hai bas. Mujhe laga aage chal ke character development hoega but hero ka koi bhi character development nahi hua aur hero wahi kaam roz roz karta aur uske baad bhi usse guilt feel nahi ho raha tha. Uske baad kahani aapne likhni shuru kari aur thank g*d!! Finally! Hero me sudhaar dekhne ko mila. Jitni acchi kahani chal rahi thi, usme boht kuch ho sakta tha, beshaq mein ending se boht hi niraash hu par ab koi ni. Ending ke pehle tak jitna padha, wo worth tha. Kaafi maza aaya. Kaafi hot moments the. Anju ka plot kaafi pasand aaya mujhe. Overall yahi kahunga ki ending kaafi rushed thi but kahani worth reading hai. Aise hi readers ke liye likhte rahiye aap!
Dhanyawad!!