Kaafi dino se soch raha tha ye kahani padhne ki finally mein kal baitha aur do din me hi mene poori padh daali. Pehle kabhi mene aapki story nahi padhi hai, isme shuru ke kuch updates copied and pasted the but aage ke aapke khud ke likhe hue the. Toh mein keh sakta hu ki mene aapki ek story padh lii hai.
Ab aate hai kahani par ..
Shuruaat boht hi acchi thi, sabhi ke characters uttam the. Hero se mein thoda disappointed tha shuru me kyuki baap ka na hona, upar se maa ke pese daaru par udaana, bakchodi karna, behan ke saath zabardasti, dost ko dhoka. Kul milaake hero ki personality ek awaara insaan ki thi jo ki apne ling se sochta hai bas. Mujhe laga aage chal ke character development hoega but hero ka koi bhi character development nahi hua aur hero wahi kaam roz roz karta aur uske baad bhi usse guilt feel nahi ho raha tha. Uske baad kahani aapne likhni shuru kari aur thank g*d!! Finally! Hero me sudhaar dekhne ko mila. Jitni acchi kahani chal rahi thi, usme boht kuch ho sakta tha, beshaq mein ending se boht hi niraash hu par ab koi ni. Ending ke pehle tak jitna padha, wo worth tha. Kaafi maza aaya. Kaafi hot moments the. Anju ka plot kaafi pasand aaya mujhe. Overall yahi kahunga ki ending kaafi rushed thi but kahani worth reading hai. Aise hi readers ke liye likhte rahiye aap!
Dhanyawad!!