Romance I Am Sorry [Completed]

[Champ_AK_81]

Bahut lajwaab update ......

Nice story...

Waiting for kasam

Thanks Sahil bhai for reading this story...Kasam if possible 2-3 weeks baad restart karunga.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Ye pehla wala abhi padha....
Magar kia xossip competition mein do update accept kiye jaate the? Yehi first update to mujhe 3500 words tak laga aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai sirf 3500 words ke hi short stories contest mein hote hein..... to kia second update tumne yahan add kiya ya do parts mein post kiya?
Veise ye pehla wala thik hai par ek contest ke liye poor hai.

As promised main ne padh liya. Its good.

Thanks Sir for reading...Contest me 4000 word limit tha uss time...1st Update same tha contest me...2nd update bhi 1st Update me hi merge kar diya tha lekin usme dono ko baat karte nahi dikhaya tha...Kaafi short tha...Bas usme Diya ki feelings dikhaya tha Yash se bin mile.

Yaha story section me (Xossip me bhi) socha 2nd update ko thoda extend kar du jo contest me nahi kar paaya tha word limit ki vajah se.

Thanks for your comment sir.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Champ bro esika mam ko kei khabar cha missing so much her thread

...Even I am missing her and her stories here.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Next short story very soon.

 

[Naina]

UPDATE 2​

Letter padhte vakt Diya ke chehre me bahut saari bhaaw aa rahe the…Suru me wo thoda gussa thi to baad me usko bhi Yash ke liye bura lag raha tha…Abb Diya ko samajh me aaya Yash ka uske life se chale jaane ki vajah…Jo bhi naarajgi tha Diya ke dil me wo sab Yash ki iss letter se dur ho gaya.

Kuch der tak wo Yash ke bare me sochti rahi…Kitna mushkil aur bematlab ka jindagi tha uska…Jindagi me kabhi acche se pyar mila hi nahi…Aur jab pyar mila tab wo apne pyar bhare lamho ko khul kar jee bhi nahi paaya…Hamesha ek hi dart tha uske paas kahi Diya ko uska sachaayi pata nachal jaaye aur kahi wo bhi usse alag naho jaaye.

Wo Yash ki majburi aur pyar ke baad aaya hua badaaw ko saaf mehsus kar rahi thi.

Wo sochne lagi ki Yash se pyar kar ke usne koi galti nahi kiya.

Kuch der aisi hi baatein sochne ke baad usne apna mobile uthaa kar Yash ka number dial kiya.

Second ring me hi Yash ne phone uthaa liya.

Yash:- Hello.

Yash iss tarah se bola jaise wo kisi anjaan aadmi se baat kar raha hai…Diya ne new number se usse call kiya tha.

Yash ki aawaj sun kar Diya ke dil ko ek alag hi khushi mila…Bahut vakt baad usne Yash ki aawaj suni thi…Wo kuch nahi boli.

Yash:- Hello.

Dusri taraf se jawaab na milne ke baad Yash ne fir se kaha.

Yash ki iss aawaj se Diya waapas hosh me aayi aur usse ehsas hua ki wo phone me Yash se baat kar rahi hai.

Diya:- Tumse milna hai…Yahi mere ghar ke paas ki park me aa jaao.

Diya ne itna kaha aur phone kaat diya…Aur wo park ki taraf nikal gayi.

Yash ne bhi Diya ki aawaj pehchaan liya…Khusi me jhumte hue wo bhi ussi park ki taraf gaya jaha Diya ne usse bulaaya tha.

Diyako park me pahunchne me jada vakt nahi laga…Wo park ke ek bench me baith kar Yashka intejaar karne lagi…Usne faisla kar liya ki wo Yash ko maaf kar degi lekin thoda nakhre dikhaane ke baad.

Wo baithi baithi Yash ke bare me hi soch rahi thi…Wo Yash ke roop ke bare me soch rahi thi…Wo dekhna chaahti thi ki 2 saal me Yash me kitna badlaaw aaya hai…Uski personality kitna badla hai…Pehle ki tarah hi abb wo uske saath masti majaak karega ya fir jimmedaari ki vajah se wo ye sab kuch bhul gaya hai…Letter jis tarah se likha tha usse to yahi lag raha tha ki abb wo bahut serious ho gaya hai.

Kuch issi tarah ki baatein sochte hue 30 minute beet gaya.

30 minute baad Yash bhi aa gaya…Diya Yash ke khayal me itna kho gayi thi ki usse pata hi nahi chala Yash kab uske paas aaya aur baith gaya.

Bench par baithne ke baad Yash ne pyar bhari nighaao se Diya ko dekh kar kaha.

Yash:- Sorry Diya…Thoda late ho gaya.

Yash ki aawaj sunne ke baad Diya chaunk kar apne baayi taarf mudi…Paas me hi Yash ko baitha dekh wo hairaani se boli.

Diya:- Ttum…Tum kab aaye yaha?

Yash:- Bas kuch der pehle…Jab tum mere khayalon me hi khoi hui thi.

Yash ne muskura kar kaha…Yash ka iss andaaj me kehne se Diya ko ehsas hua ki aaj bhi ye wohi Yash hai jise wo pyar karti thi.

Lekin apna nakhra dikhaate hue wo boli.

Diya:- Mai tumhaare bare me kyu sochungi…Maine tumhe issi liye bulaaya hai kyu ki mai tumhe ye bataana chaahti thi ki maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya.

Diya jhutthi naarajgi dikhaate hue boli…Usse yakin tha uski iss baat se Yash ka chehra latak jaayega aur wo usse manaayega…Lekin Yash ka jawaab uske soch se bilul alag tha.

Yash:- Abb meri Diya mujhse jhuth bhi bolne lagi.

Yash ne pehle ki tarah hi muskura kar kaha.

Yash:- Mai tumhe acche se jaanta hu meri jaan…Tumne mujhe maaf kar diya hai…Agar mana hi karna hota to phone me hi apna saara gussa nikaal kar mujhe kehti ki tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya.

Yash ne iss baar confidently kaha.

Diya:- What "meri Diya"? Khabardaar agar aage se aisa kuch bolke mujhe irritate kiya to…Aur maine tumhe ye nahi kaha ki maine tumhe maaf kar diya hai…Maine sach me tumhe ye kehne ke liye bulaaya tha ki maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya.

Diya ka jhutthi naarajgi jaari tha.

Yash:- Maanta hu tumne ye nahi kaha ki tumne mujhe maaf kar diya hai…Lekin ye bolna utna jaruri bhi nahi…Kyu ki kabhi kabhi dil ki baat bin kahe bhi samajh me aa jaata hai…Tumne mujhe maaf kar diya hai yahi bahut hai.

Yash ki baat me abhi bhi confidence tha…Abb Diya ko bhi laga ki uski jhutthi naarajgi dikhaane se koi faaidaa nahi hai.

Diya:- Ha maine tumhe maaf kar diya hai…Lekin tum yakin ke saath kaise keh rahe the.

Yash:- Tumse pyar kiya hai dear…Tumhe acche se jaanta hu…Tumhaare chehre ko dekh kar hi bata sakta hu ki tum kya soch rahe ho.

Mai yaha kuch der pehle hi aa gaya tha…Mai tab se tumhe hi dekh raha tha…Tum kuch sochti hui muskura rahi thi…Tumne mujhe yaha milne bulaaya to tum mere hi bare me soch rahi thi.

Diya Yash ki iss baat par kuch na boli...Uska muskaan hi sab kuch bol raha tha.

Yash bhi usko muskuraata dekh muskuraane laga.

Diya:- Maine socha tha jab tum yaha aaoge to mujhe manaaoge aur mai khub nakhra karungi…Lekin tumne mauka diya hi nahi.

Diya ne naarajgi dikhaate hue kaha.

Yash:- Nakhre dikhaane ke liye to saari jindagi baaki hai…Vaada karta hu tumse tumhaara ye hak kabhi nahi cheenunga.

Yash ki iss baat par Diya ne kuch nahi kaha.

Kuch der baad fir Yash ne kaha.

Yash:- Agar tum sach me naraaj hoti to sach me bahut mushkil ho jaata manana…Mai sure nahi tha ki tum mujhe maaf karogi bhi ya nahi…Saamne se kehne ki himmat nahi tha…Himmat karke ek letter me apni majburi aur feelings bataya…Aur tum par faisla chhod diya ki tum mujhe maaf karogi ya nahi.

Thanks a lot Diya…Mujhe maaf karne ke liye…Tumhaara maafi mere liye kisi vardaan se kam nahi hai…Aisa lag raha hai mujhe dusri jindagi mil gaya hai.

Yash ne iss baar serious ho kar apni baat kaha…Diya ka usko maaf karne se wo sach me bahut khus tha.

Diya:- Maine bhi tumse saccha pyar kiya tha Yash aur aaj bhi karti hu…Tumhaari majburi jaane ke baad bhi agar mai tumhe maaf nahi karti to ye mera ego hota…Aur pyar me ego ki koi jagah nahi hota.

Yash maine tumhaara dil ki acchaayi ko dekh kar pyar kiya tha…Bhale hi tum galat the lekin tumhaara dil bahut saaf tha…Mai tumhaari sacchaayi to nahi jaanti thi lekin tumhaara acchaayi, mera saath dena , baat karna inn sab vajah se mai bhi tumse pyar karne lagi.

Hamesha yahi sochti thi ki sach me mujhe bahut hi sharif aur imaandaar ladka se pyar hua hai…Aaj bhi wohi khayal hai…Jab tum mujh se alag ho gaye to mujhe bilkul bhi vishwas nahi ho raha tha ki kya wo wohi Yash hai jisse mai pyar karti thi.

Uss vakt to khud se hi nafrat ho gaya tha apna faisla par…Lekin aaj tumhaara letter padhne ke baad pata chal gaya tumhaara bewafai ka sach.

Yash sach me tumhari jindagi me bahut kam khushiya aayi hai…Abb aage se aisa nahi hoga…Mai tumhe itna pyar dungi ki tum apna ateet bhul jaaoge…Abb aage hamaare jindagi me sirf pyar aur khushiyan honge.

Diya ne bhi apni dil ki baat kahi.

Yash bhi Diya ki baat sun kar muskuraata raha...Kuch der baad usne kaha.

Yash:- Mai bhi tumse bilkul waise hi pyar karunga jaise pehle karta tha...Pehle to ek majburi tha aur mai khusi se pyar bhare lamho ko jee nahi paa raha tha...Lekin abb koi majburi nahi hai...Abb hamaare bich sirf pyar aur khushiya hi honge.

Yash ki baat sun kar Diya ke hontho me bhi muskaan aa jaata hai...Iss baar wo kuch nahi boli...Fir kuch der baad usko kuch yaad aaya aur wo boli.

Diya:- Tum me to bilkul bhi badlaaw nahi aaya…Pehle jaise the abhi bhi waise hi ho.

Diya ne Yash ko gaur se dekhte hue pucha.

Yash:- Kisne kaha…Thoda daadhi aur moonch badh gaya hai.

Yash ne apne daadhi par haath ferte hue kaha.

Diya:- Mai daadhi moonch ki baat nahi kar rahi hu…Mai tumhaare masti majaak ke bare me baat kar rahi hu…Aate hi tumne maafi maangne ki jagah majaak karna suru kar diya.

Yash:- Ye majaak bhi mai sirf tumhaare saath hi karta hu…Jab pehle tumhaare karib jaane ka socha tha…To socha mujhe khud ko badalna hoga…Issi liye mai apne khaamosh rehne wali aadat ko bhula kar tumhaare saath hansi majaak kiya karta tha…Tumse uss andaaj me baat karne me bhi alag hi maja tha.

Mai aaj bhi yahi chaahta hu ki mai tumhaare saath hamesha pehle ki tarah hi rahu…Aur hamaare bich bhi hamesha waise hi pyar, hansi aur majaak hi rahe.

Diya:- Hamesha aise hi rehna Yash…Mujhe tum aise hi pasand ho.

Diya ki baat sun kar Yash ne kaha.

Yash:- As you wish Mam.

Yash ne iss andaaj me kaha ki Diya bhi apni hansi rok nahi paayi.

Yash:- Lekin tum me aaya ek badlaaw ko maine acche se mehsoos kiya.

Diya:- Kya?

Diya ne utsukta ke saath pucha.

Yash:- Abb tum pehle se moti ho gayi ho.

Yash ne hanste hue kaha.

Diya:- You!!!

Diya ne jhutha gussa dikhaate hue Yash ke kandhe me maarne lagi.

Yash:- Mai to majaak kar raha tha…Tum abhi bhi waise hi ho jaise pehle thi…Agar moti ho bhi gayi to mera bhi mera pyar me koi kami nahi aayega.

Yash ki iss baat se Diya shaant ho gayi…Iske baad kuch der tak dono ke bich khaamoshi chaa gaya…Iss khaamoshi ke dauran dono hi ek dusre ko kabhi kabhi pyar bhari nighaawo se dekh lete the.

Yash:- Aaj mujhe mehsus ho raha hai ki mai bahut lucky hu.

Yaash ne khushi jaahir karte hue kaha.

Diya:- Aur wo kyu?

Diya ne bhi utsukta ke saath pucha.

Yash:- Kyu ki abhi tak tumhaari shaadi nahi hua…Jab tumse alag hua tab yahi baat soch kar darta tha ki agar tumhaari shaadi ho jaayegi to mera kya hoga…Thanks a lot…Tumne mera intejaar kiya.

Yash ne khush ho kar kaha…Aur last ke line majaak me.

Diya:- Mai tumhaara intejaar nahi kar rahi thi…Sach me tum par bahut gussa aa raha tha…Mujhe to pyar aur shaadi se nafrat ho gaya tha…Issi liye abhi tak maine shaadi ke baare me socha tak tak nahi.

Yash:- Jo bhi ho…Mere liye to bahut acchi baat hai…Abb tum bataao ki tumhaare ghar me rishte ke liye baat karne kab aau?

Diya:- Itni jaldi…Thoda to wait kar lo…Mai Maa aur Papa ko acche se mana to lu.

Yash:- Bahut alag reh liya tumse…Abb aur nahi raha jaata…Abb to yahi khwahish hai ki bahut jald tumhe apna dulhan bana kar apna ghar le jaau.

Yash ne bahut pyar se kaha aur Diya Sharma gayi.

Yash:- Tumhaare parents iss rishte ke liye inkaar to nahi karenge na?

Yash ne thoda darte hue kaha.

Diya:- Kyu dar gaye? Pyar karne wale aise dara nahi karte…Fikar mat karo…Maan jaayenge lekin thoda vakt lagega…Maan to wo pehle bhi gaye the jab maine unhe hamaare pyar ke bare me bataya tha…Lekin tumhaare uss harkat ki vajah se bahut naaraj hai.

Yash:- Sach me bahut bada galti kar diya tha tumhe khone ki dar se…Koi baat nahi mai khud chal kar maafi maangunga.

Iske baad kuch der baat karne ke baad Yash aur Diya Diya ki ghar ki taraf chale jaate hai.

Yash Diya ki parents se maafi maangta hai aur sab kuch bataata hai…Sab kuch jaane ke baad aur thodi der baat karne ke baad Diya ke parents Yash ko maaf karke usko apna lete hai.

Issi ke saath Yash aur Diya ki jindagi aage pyar aur khusiyon se bhar jaata hai.

THE END​

kuch Yaadein taza ho gayi xp ki .....
story atul ji....extraordinary..

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


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