Fantasy immortal

[Yasasvi3]

Update 9 posted.... it's on Page no 33

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[Gaurav1969]

22 hi h

Feels like 26 so said that
Kyonki thoda padhne ke baad scroll karna padta hai

 

[Yasasvi3]

Feels like 26 so said that
Kyonki thoda padhne ke baad scroll karna padta hai

Koi na edited..... check again thanks for suggesting...aapke reviews hame behtar banate h

 

[Raj_sharma]

UPDATE 8



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Yash :- dekho baby..... soory dekho pari ab tumhara punarjanam impossible h bole to yampossible jii....kuki aama tum jo h bahut samya se ihha rah rahe ho to ab tum h du (2) tho raste phala alun tumko waps ralh me badal dalaga to bhagwan tunhara aatama ko shanti dega sweet Shanti...and dusraa jo h me tumko jadu sikhunga(cluvention..ya cluvention jo anime fans h samjh jayenge jo na samjhe wo samjho saadhna hoti hana tapsya wahi) taki tum bhoot Raja na na matlab rani ban jao

Pari:- abe hatt bawala h kya meko nahi bana rakh wakh tera dimaag kharaab h me wo rskh banke udu nahiiiiii...meko Bhoot rani bana do

Yash:- dekh waise to tera uper ka floor Khali h warna tu ab tak aisa na padi hoti per tera dil aaine ke mafik saaf h bas isiich liye me teko sikhayaga jaduuuchal ab ek papi de

Pari :- muh guma ke hatt tharki

Yash:- but soch le ek baar apne ghutne walw dimag se ye baat bhheje me ghusa le ki ager tere me sudhar na aaya ya tune sadhna nahi sikhi ya tune iska galt use karne ka socha bhi to tu kabhi swarg nahi ja payagi...oe bhoot hone ke baad bhi mar jayagai

Yash :- (in mind) bhan ke b....barose itni sunder kanaya rakh banke udegi sale is se bura kya hi hoyaga

Pari:-ha malik ..meko nahi hoyaga mere fasle pe pachataava please meko wo sikha do me tumhare hath jodti hu per padti hu please....

Yash:- malik....abe bin pende ki choti lutiya teko to ptana bhi nahi aata logo kilagata h ye bhi sikhana padega .... ohkey me tumko sikhunga per thik h tu itna bol rahi h to me phale ek Ghost body ka intezam karna padega Teri traning se phle..or meko kuch Samman bhi lana oadega teko teri ghost body me bhejne ke liye..or uske baad me take tarike sikhunga ki kese ki jati h saadhna ya jadu....

Pari:- Thankyou Malik aap kitne aache ho kya mom or daduu ko dikhaungi jab meri training suru ho jayagi

Yash :- ha kyu nahi per dekh tu na hi kare asa to badhiya h unke liye bhi or tere liye bhi kyki tu Bhoot h or wo insaan ager tum unke sampark me jao to ho skata h wo khud ya koi or tumko nukasaan pahuchaye so dur raho to hi aacha hoga

Savse aacha to ye hoga ki tum unke sapnon me jao or unko batao ek ek baat ki kya hua tumare sath kese mari tum warna wo log hameha pareshan rahange tumko leke unko aache se samjha or bolde ab me swarag ja rahi hu...waise kaam tere nak wale h ( pari ne aankhe dikhai) are i mean kuch nahi ......to unko saone me teri rakh jaha padi h wo dikha and uska visarrjan karne ko bolde taki unke dil ko shanti mil jaye yahi ek best rasta h or ab tumre liye ye h ki tum apne sare risto ko bula do or bas sadhna pe Dhyan lagao kuki ye duniyaa...ye mahfil tere kaam ki nahi ...

Pari:- thik h me aapki baat manugi pakka manugi meko yu bhtakna ab aacha na lagata ghutan hoti h dam ghuta h ase rahakar mera...



Ki tabhi Yash ka phone ring hota h .....hale dil tujhko sunta dil ager ye bol pata.....
Yash lapak ke phone uthata h...or silent karke bokta h

Yash:- dekho apun tumhari tarh thhala (free) nahi h ki sare din yahi betha rahe apun ko business ke liye jana padeginga..or iske sath hi tera liye ek Ghost body ki vaywastha karni h plus jo jo saaman lagaga bhang bho... bhootani ji aap samjh gyi nachalo aata hu raat ko wait mat karna so jana(last line was my masti)

Pari (dari hui awaz me ) ah...kitna darwana hoga jab jin logo me phale meko jaise mara wahi log meko mil Gaye ya wo log waps aa gaye to mera kya hoga

Yash:- are bewadiiiAbe phali baat teko waps thik hone me 4 5 saal lagne Wale h or abhi bas ek hi saal hua h abhi wo log aa hi nahi sakte abhi to koi na dekh sakta teko

(Man me):- me try karunga ki ye sab aache se sikhe or iska pura Dhyan rakhna padga ..baki ladki cute to h



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FOUR SESSION HOTEL


amiro wala hotel ek dam laguary....5 male ki building wo bhi aaisaan Kafi faila hua tha ..
Usi ke ek room me .....


Knock knock....
are ye citkabra (jhethalaal jaise Kapde)niche Black pent me kon h piche se to pta nahi lag raha thoda pass jate h ....are ye to Yash h but ye yaha ku...yahi me soch rahi hu...chalo guys dekhte h


Ki tabhi ander se ek Sunder or aakarshak mahila ki awaz aati h ..

Unknown:- hmmm Yash.......ha ander aa jao...

( Ha meko pta h aapko Jaan na h ladki kesi dikh rahi h ....to suno boycut ya wo kaan tak baal hote Hana wo aankhe hassin thodi si laal.....( Me wahi bata rahi hu jo oro se lag hi baki aap jante ho ladki me kya kya hota h) Gale me ek laal patta pta nahi kyu.......kohnai tak aane wala ek overcoat phana h or hath bandhe ek teacher ke jaise khadi h....

Or wo apni baat ko aage badhate hue ...:- dekho khushi (update 2) yashasvi ke sath nind ki wadiyon me h to chup chap kahde raho yahi hilna bhi mat.....

Me teko bol rahi hu tune koisis bhi ki na khushi ke pass hone ki mana tu yashasvi ka baap h per tune ager khushi ke bare me asa wasa kuch socha bhi to teri soch me ghuske teko food dalungi...me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi jo tumne khushi ke sath 4 saal phale Kiya...

Yash (thoda jor se):- chaar saal phale ...ha .....me batu kya hua tha...tum uski bodyguard thi na fir bhi tumare hote hue ... tumhare hote hue wo log khushi ko kiddnap karke le gaye the...kya wo bhi mareri galti thi?? ...ya tumari naakamiyabi...

Me to accurately uska raksak hua jisne usko bachaya us time un logo ne use drugs diye the jis se wo kisi ka bhi...mera matlab kisi ke sath bhi pani pyas bujha sakti thi...tumne socha bhi h kabhi ager wo mere alwa kisi or ko mili hoti to samne wala ya wali uske sath kya kya nahi kar sakte the??kabhi apne Khali dimag me tapli marke sochna

Unknown girl :- tuuuuuuuu....

Tu kya khana chahta h ki tune hi sahi kiya.......kahi ka mantri h kya tu?jo karaga sahi karaga
...


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Ki itne me hi koi aata h.....ab kon aayaga ye apun fir kabhi batayagi

Ye ant me kon aaya ??? Ye apun ko jaan ne ka hai aur ye beech2 me Chinese bhasa use kar dete ho uske liye dimaak per jor dena padta hai Khair update kaafi badhiya likha hai kanya hum prasann hue

 

[parkas]

UPDATE 8



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Yash :- dekho baby..... soory dekho pari ab tumhara punarjanam impossible h bole to yampossible jii....kuki aama tum jo h bahut samya se ihha rah rahe ho to ab tum h du (2) tho raste phala alun tumko waps ralh me badal dalaga to bhagwan tunhara aatama ko shanti dega sweet Shanti...and dusraa jo h me tumko jadu sikhunga(cluvention..ya cluvention jo anime fans h samjh jayenge jo na samjhe wo samjho saadhna hoti hana tapsya wahi) taki tum bhoot Raja na na matlab rani ban jao

Pari:- abe hatt bawala h kya meko nahi bana rakh wakh tera dimaag kharaab h me wo rskh banke udu nahiiiiii...meko Bhoot rani bana do

Yash:- dekh waise to tera uper ka floor Khali h warna tu ab tak aisa na padi hoti per tera dil aaine ke mafik saaf h bas isiich liye me teko sikhayaga jaduuuchal ab ek papi de

Pari :- muh guma ke hatt tharki

Yash:- but soch le ek baar apne ghutne walw dimag se ye baat bhheje me ghusa le ki ager tere me sudhar na aaya ya tune sadhna nahi sikhi ya tune iska galt use karne ka socha bhi to tu kabhi swarg nahi ja payagi...oe bhoot hone ke baad bhi mar jayagai

Yash :- (in mind) bhan ke b....barose itni sunder kanaya rakh banke udegi sale is se bura kya hi hoyaga

Pari:-ha malik ..meko nahi hoyaga mere fasle pe pachataava please meko wo sikha do me tumhare hath jodti hu per padti hu please....

Yash:- malik....abe bin pende ki choti lutiya teko to ptana bhi nahi aata logo kilagata h ye bhi sikhana padega .... ohkey me tumko sikhunga per thik h tu itna bol rahi h to me phale ek Ghost body ka intezam karna padega Teri traning se phle..or meko kuch Samman bhi lana oadega teko teri ghost body me bhejne ke liye..or uske baad me take tarike sikhunga ki kese ki jati h saadhna ya jadu....

Pari:- Thankyou Malik aap kitne aache ho kya mom or daduu ko dikhaungi jab meri training suru ho jayagi

Yash :- ha kyu nahi per dekh tu na hi kare asa to badhiya h unke liye bhi or tere liye bhi kyki tu Bhoot h or wo insaan ager tum unke sampark me jao to ho skata h wo khud ya koi or tumko nukasaan pahuchaye so dur raho to hi aacha hoga

Savse aacha to ye hoga ki tum unke sapnon me jao or unko batao ek ek baat ki kya hua tumare sath kese mari tum warna wo log hameha pareshan rahange tumko leke unko aache se samjha or bolde ab me swarag ja rahi hu...waise kaam tere nak wale h ( pari ne aankhe dikhai) are i mean kuch nahi ......to unko saone me teri rakh jaha padi h wo dikha and uska visarrjan karne ko bolde taki unke dil ko shanti mil jaye yahi ek best rasta h or ab tumre liye ye h ki tum apne sare risto ko bula do or bas sadhna pe Dhyan lagao kuki ye duniyaa...ye mahfil tere kaam ki nahi ...

Pari:- thik h me aapki baat manugi pakka manugi meko yu bhtakna ab aacha na lagata ghutan hoti h dam ghuta h ase rahakar mera...



Ki tabhi Yash ka phone ring hota h .....hale dil tujhko sunta dil ager ye bol pata.....
Yash lapak ke phone uthata h...or silent karke bokta h

Yash:- dekho apun tumhari tarh thhala (free) nahi h ki sare din yahi betha rahe apun ko business ke liye jana padeginga..or iske sath hi tera liye ek Ghost body ki vaywastha karni h plus jo jo saaman lagaga bhang bho... bhootani ji aap samjh gyi nachalo aata hu raat ko wait mat karna so jana(last line was my masti)

Pari (dari hui awaz me ) ah...kitna darwana hoga jab jin logo me phale meko jaise mara wahi log meko mil Gaye ya wo log waps aa gaye to mera kya hoga

Yash:- are bewadiiiAbe phali baat teko waps thik hone me 4 5 saal lagne Wale h or abhi bas ek hi saal hua h abhi wo log aa hi nahi sakte abhi to koi na dekh sakta teko

(Man me):- me try karunga ki ye sab aache se sikhe or iska pura Dhyan rakhna padga ..baki ladki cute to h



.................................................
FOUR SESSION HOTEL


amiro wala hotel ek dam laguary....5 male ki building wo bhi aaisaan Kafi faila hua tha ..
Usi ke ek room me .....


Knock knock....
are ye citkabra (jhethalaal jaise Kapde)niche Black pent me kon h piche se to pta nahi lag raha thoda pass jate h ....are ye to Yash h but ye yaha ku...yahi me soch rahi hu...chalo guys dekhte h


Ki tabhi ander se ek Sunder or aakarshak mahila ki awaz aati h ..

Unknown:- hmmm Yash.......ha ander aa jao...

( Ha meko pta h aapko Jaan na h ladki kesi dikh rahi h ....to suno boycut ya wo kaan tak baal hote Hana wo aankhe hassin thodi si laal.....( Me wahi bata rahi hu jo oro se lag hi baki aap jante ho ladki me kya kya hota h) Gale me ek laal patta pta nahi kyu.......kohnai tak aane wala ek overcoat phana h or hath bandhe ek teacher ke jaise khadi h....

Or wo apni baat ko aage badhate hue ...:- dekho khushi (update 2) yashasvi ke sath nind ki wadiyon me h to chup chap kahde raho yahi hilna bhi mat.....

Me teko bol rahi hu tune koisis bhi ki na khushi ke pass hone ki mana tu yashasvi ka baap h per tune ager khushi ke bare me asa wasa kuch socha bhi to teri soch me ghuske teko food dalungi...me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi jo tumne khushi ke sath 4 saal phale Kiya...

Yash (thoda jor se):- chaar saal phale ...ha .....me batu kya hua tha...tum uski bodyguard thi na fir bhi tumare hote hue ... tumhare hote hue wo log khushi ko kiddnap karke le gaye the...kya wo bhi mareri galti thi?? ...ya tumari naakamiyabi...

Me to accurately uska raksak hua jisne usko bachaya us time un logo ne use drugs diye the jis se wo kisi ka bhi...mera matlab kisi ke sath bhi pani pyas bujha sakti thi...tumne socha bhi h kabhi ager wo mere alwa kisi or ko mili hoti to samne wala ya wali uske sath kya kya nahi kar sakte the??kabhi apne Khali dimag me tapli marke sochna

Unknown girl :- tuuuuuuuu....

Tu kya khana chahta h ki tune hi sahi kiya.......kahi ka mantri h kya tu?jo karaga sahi karaga
...


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Ki itne me hi koi aata h.....ab kon aayaga ye apun fir kabhi batayagi

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Yasasvi3 ji....
Nice and lovely update....

 

[Smith_15]

Update 9

 

[Yasasvi3]

S

Ye ant me kon aaya ??? Ye apun ko jaan ne ka hai aur ye beech2 me Chinese bhasa use kar dete ho uske liye dimaak per jor dena padta hai Khair update kaafi badhiya likha hai kanya hum prasann hue

Note karwaya kar konsa sabd...h wo....chamiya ki tarh bas padh liya or kaam khatamkuch farz bhi nibha liya kar

 

[Raj_sharma]

S

Note karwaya kar konsa sabd...h wo....chamiya ki tarh bas padh liya or kaam khatamkuch farz bhi nibha liya kar

Jaroor

 

[Sidd19]

Very nice update

 

[Sidd19]

Waiting for next the update