Fantasy immortal

[Yasasvi3]

Update 6
Update 7 is also posted to padho or bato kaisa h

 

[dhalchandarun]

Update ak jagah par par ismain added emojis alag level bana rahe

Apni story continue rakhiye...okay...log ek ek karke dhire dhire judte chale jayenge.

 

[Damon_Salvatore]

Ye khani simple si baat h inspired ha may be pahle kisi ne likhi ho if yes to bata dena ..
(update padhne ke baad title to mene apne man se dala h... moderates se request rahagi ager tittle me dikkat h to ek baar bata ke tittle change kar sakte h aap)




Than ye khani mene bas apni marji se suru karne ka socha h.

Is khani ke sabhi patra kalpanik h .

Ye khani total meri style me hogi l.

My story my rules.


Suggetions ka welcome.

No intro diract updates.

Daily updates meri marji pe mood pe

Or koi swal ho to please aap puch sakte h


dice 6


Baki news failado....

First of all for your new story.. I hope ye kahaani apne anzaam tak paunchegi..

 

[Damha]

INDEX​

Update 1

Update 2

2nd update realised....

Realised?

 

[Moon_light]

Apni story continue rakhiye...okay...log ek ek karke dhire dhire judte chale jayenge.

Continue hi tu hai abhi ak din pehle hi tu update dala

 

[rhyme_boy]

UPDATE 2



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Yash:- kaun h be?( Jake gate pe Jake dekhta h or gate kholta h) Tu kon h?

Samne dekhta h to pata h ki ek khoobsurat ladki or ek chhoti si pyari si nanhi si ek pari h( yaha uski age nahi bata sakti ..

Ladki:- Yash .....(Pyar se Yash ki or dekhte hue)
4 saal phale me pregnent hui thi....us raat ke baad.........

Ye dekhlo hamari beti h yashasvi..

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AB aage.......





memories me jhankte hue (Yash).....

Ye ladki us hasin Bala ka name h Khushi.is bande ki ki crush wese h to pyari ...karib 4 saal phale ye ladki kidnap hui thi( me story ko me jayada bakchodi nahi chahti ki kidnap ka alg se seen banu naah) so uske baad isne use bachaya per tab tak gunde is ladki ko drugs ki sui laga chuke the.....fir ye ladki drugs ke nashe me thi ...is ladke ke pass koi or rasta na bacha to ....raat ki chhaiya me tata thaiya kar bethe ... beshram log ....huh..



Ye insaan hi hopeless h...sala tharkulla(yaad hoga na thark tharki tharkulla)

Isko ek antidote ki trh use Kiya gya kis se ye ladki apne durga ka ilaj kar paye kitna halkat h ye banda har ko Baja ke chala jata h


Khushi:- me us raat ke baad kabhi tumse milna nahi chahti thi sabkuch bhula dena chahti thi or me chali bhi gayi thi per mujhe nahi pta tha ki Mera pet me ....ki me pregnant hu ......mene tumko kabhi pasnd tak nahi kiya pyar to dur ki baat to mujhe ise nahi rakhna chahiye tha per fir mene socha in sab me in nanhi si jaan ki kya galti jo me iske sath galt kru isliye mene ise janm diya or iska name rakha "yashasvi"

Tum mere family conditions ke bare me jante ho na meri family ke hallat. Mere dadaji ne mere liya CAO GROUP chooda mujhe sambhalne ke liye . Or tum mere rsitadaro ko jante wo sabhi jalte he mere se hamesha se hi...jalkookade kahi ke ...ager unhe yashasvi ke bare me pta chala to wo usko nuksaan pahuchane ki puri kosis karange
Mene iski identity ko chupane ki bhot kosis Kari bhot tariko se per un logo ne is per Nazar rakhni suru kar di thi piche hi pad gaye the iske .. isliye mujhe isko kisi na kisi ke pass le jana tha..mujhe yashasvi ki chinta sabse jyada h mujhe nahi fark padta wo kiske sath rahe is time uski safety mera liye sabse important h to mujhe sabse aacha option tum dikhe kuki tum iske biological father bhi ho isliye ise yaha le aayi.

Yash Yash babu ke dimag ka to bh....(Bharta...ban gaya usne socha uda deta hu in sabko ) Per tabhi...

Yash ke hath se kisi ka pyara sa hath touch hua Yash ko wo feel apne man ki gharaiyo tak feel hua ...

Itne me yashasvi boli...... Papa .....aap mere papa h? (Bhot hi ummeed bhari Nazaro se usne apne papa ki traf dekha)(uff ye massosmiyat kisi heavan ke dil ko bhi pighala de asi massosmiyat ko bhala kese koi na nahi kar sakta h......ladke jaan de sakte h apni bacchiyon ke liya....I am not a boy but I feel and see how boy's treat thire doughter...( Ye mere apne vichar h)

Yash :- (man main) huh...kya uper wala mera sath majkh kar raha h? Subha subha me hi Mila majkh ke liye ....sala itni salo ke clivention ke baad pyar ki wajah se hi me nipat liya ya jis pyar se mujhe nafart h or aaj aabhi 10 min phale mera waps punarjanm hua h ....to mera samne meri hi Biwi or bache khade h ....ise hi khate h kya? kismat.....
Chalo koi na aaj itne salo baad mujhse fir se dubra moka or dubara janm Mila h indino ke roop pe jis pyar ki wajah se me adhrua tha aaj us pyar ko waps karne ka or uper wale ke diya moka ka fyada uthane ka time h uska rasta h ye dono maa beti

Yash :- ha beta me hi hu tumhara papa... ya kahu dad.

Yashasvi:- are wahhh(Khushi se jhoomne lagti h) hurry mera pass bhi ab papa h wo janvi ki tarh .
Uske papa uske ghoda ban ke apne uper baithe h to kya aap mujhe apne kadhne per bethaynge?

Yash :- abhi?(Kya majakk h?)

Yashasvi:- nahi mmi ne bola tha aap se pahli baar milu to aachi bacchi ki trh rahu koi shararat na karu to is baar apko Jane Diya jata h agli baar nahi chhoda jayaga

Khushi:- Yash tumne abhi jawab nahi Diya?

Yash :- theek h me maanta hu ye meri hi beti h or me iski jimmadaari leta hu ab se per iski wajah tum to bilkul nahi ho ye sirf isiliye ki me iska papa hu... clear..

Khushi Yash ko ek bada sa suitcase or diary dete hue...:- ye lo ye isme iske sare kapde or iski chiije h is diary me iski hobby's ise kya pasnd h kya nahi ... totally iske bare me sab is diary me likha h to ye tumhare bhot kaam aayagi and agli baar ki isko bijli ke kadakne or andhre se dar lagata h jab barish ho tub bhi to ise hug karke Sona hamesha or isne chahe kitni bhi galtiyan kari ho tum kabhi ispe hath nahi uthaoge

Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao

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So so so guys here is update no 2 kaisa laga chalo chalo sharmao mat bata bhi do jo bata nahi sakta unki saja h like karne kiwo
bhi like wala nahi love wala emoji dalo ( it's totally part of fun)

Really engaging update.... Your writing style is really different and unique in its own way...

Wo ta ta thaiyya aur tharkulla was good ones...ha ha ha

Keep writing "Yashasvi" ji

 

[rhyme_boy]

Realised?

Arrey janaab bhavnao ko samjho..sab log to samajh gye...

 

[bramhan]

UPDATE 2



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Yash:- kaun h be?( Jake gate pe Jake dekhta h or gate kholta h) Tu kon h?

Samne dekhta h to pata h ki ek khoobsurat ladki or ek chhoti si pyari si nanhi si ek pari h( yaha uski age nahi bata sakti ..

Ladki:- Yash .....(Pyar se Yash ki or dekhte hue)
4 saal phale me pregnent hui thi....us raat ke baad.........

Ye dekhlo hamari beti h yashasvi..

_____________________________________________
AB aage.......





memories me jhankte hue (Yash).....

Ye ladki us hasin Bala ka name h Khushi.is bande ki ki crush wese h to pyari ...karib 4 saal phale ye ladki kidnap hui thi( me story ko me jayada bakchodi nahi chahti ki kidnap ka alg se seen banu naah) so uske baad isne use bachaya per tab tak gunde is ladki ko drugs ki sui laga chuke the.....fir ye ladki drugs ke nashe me thi ...is ladke ke pass koi or rasta na bacha to ....raat ki chhaiya me tata thaiya kar bethe ... beshram log ....huh..



Ye insaan hi hopeless h...sala tharkulla(yaad hoga na thark tharki tharkulla)

Isko ek antidote ki trh use Kiya gya kis se ye ladki apne durga ka ilaj kar paye kitna halkat h ye banda har ko Baja ke chala jata h


Khushi:- me us raat ke baad kabhi tumse milna nahi chahti thi sabkuch bhula dena chahti thi or me chali bhi gayi thi per mujhe nahi pta tha ki Mera pet me ....ki me pregnant hu ......mene tumko kabhi pasnd tak nahi kiya pyar to dur ki baat to mujhe ise nahi rakhna chahiye tha per fir mene socha in sab me in nanhi si jaan ki kya galti jo me iske sath galt kru isliye mene ise janm diya or iska name rakha "yashasvi"

Tum mere family conditions ke bare me jante ho na meri family ke hallat. Mere dadaji ne mere liya CAO GROUP chooda mujhe sambhalne ke liye . Or tum mere rsitadaro ko jante wo sabhi jalte he mere se hamesha se hi...jalkookade kahi ke ...ager unhe yashasvi ke bare me pta chala to wo usko nuksaan pahuchane ki puri kosis karange
Mene iski identity ko chupane ki bhot kosis Kari bhot tariko se per un logo ne is per Nazar rakhni suru kar di thi piche hi pad gaye the iske .. isliye mujhe isko kisi na kisi ke pass le jana tha..mujhe yashasvi ki chinta sabse jyada h mujhe nahi fark padta wo kiske sath rahe is time uski safety mera liye sabse important h to mujhe sabse aacha option tum dikhe kuki tum iske biological father bhi ho isliye ise yaha le aayi.

Yash Yash babu ke dimag ka to bh....(Bharta...ban gaya usne socha uda deta hu in sabko ) Per tabhi...

Yash ke hath se kisi ka pyara sa hath touch hua Yash ko wo feel apne man ki gharaiyo tak feel hua ...

Itne me yashasvi boli...... Papa .....aap mere papa h? (Bhot hi ummeed bhari Nazaro se usne apne papa ki traf dekha)(uff ye massosmiyat kisi heavan ke dil ko bhi pighala de asi massosmiyat ko bhala kese koi na nahi kar sakta h......ladke jaan de sakte h apni bacchiyon ke liya....I am not a boy but I feel and see how boy's treat thire doughter...( Ye mere apne vichar h)

Yash :- (man main) huh...kya uper wala mera sath majkh kar raha h? Subha subha me hi Mila majkh ke liye ....sala itni salo ke clivention ke baad pyar ki wajah se hi me nipat liya ya jis pyar se mujhe nafart h or aaj aabhi 10 min phale mera waps punarjanm hua h ....to mera samne meri hi Biwi or bache khade h ....ise hi khate h kya? kismat.....
Chalo koi na aaj itne salo baad mujhse fir se dubra moka or dubara janm Mila h indino ke roop pe jis pyar ki wajah se me adhrua tha aaj us pyar ko waps karne ka or uper wale ke diya moka ka fyada uthane ka time h uska rasta h ye dono maa beti

Yash :- ha beta me hi hu tumhara papa... ya kahu dad.

Yashasvi:- are wahhh(Khushi se jhoomne lagti h) hurry mera pass bhi ab papa h wo janvi ki tarh .
Uske papa uske ghoda ban ke apne uper baithe h to kya aap mujhe apne kadhne per bethaynge?

Yash :- abhi?(Kya majakk h?)

Yashasvi:- nahi mmi ne bola tha aap se pahli baar milu to aachi bacchi ki trh rahu koi shararat na karu to is baar apko Jane Diya jata h agli baar nahi chhoda jayaga

Khushi:- Yash tumne abhi jawab nahi Diya?

Yash :- theek h me maanta hu ye meri hi beti h or me iski jimmadaari leta hu ab se per iski wajah tum to bilkul nahi ho ye sirf isiliye ki me iska papa hu... clear..

Khushi Yash ko ek bada sa suitcase or diary dete hue...:- ye lo ye isme iske sare kapde or iski chiije h is diary me iski hobby's ise kya pasnd h kya nahi ... totally iske bare me sab is diary me likha h to ye tumhare bhot kaam aayagi and agli baar ki isko bijli ke kadakne or andhre se dar lagata h jab barish ho tub bhi to ise hug karke Sona hamesha or isne chahe kitni bhi galtiyan kari ho tum kabhi ispe hath nahi uthaoge

Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao

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So so so guys here is update no 2 kaisa laga chalo chalo sharmao mat bata bhi do jo bata nahi sakta unki saja h like karne kiwo
bhi like wala nahi love wala emoji dalo ( it's totally part of fun)

Khud itne chote update aur ham par ilzaam lagaya ja raha hai ki ham chote update dete hai waah re matlabi duniya

Kair update bahut aacha hai bas itna hi

 

[Raj_sharma]

Announcement:-

Ladies and gentlemen aap sabhi ka swagat h Chinese airlines me ummeed h apki yatra subha ho.

In the aeroplane -

Logo me khus fusahat-
Someone - are dekho to kitni khubsurat mahila h . koi vip h kya? tum to itne lali powder laga ke bhi nahi ho pa rahi paise barbaad hi ho rahe h
Her wife- Ghar chalo tum

Nirash to tere se waise bhi nahi hone wale , Congratulations for new story dear, best of luck

 

[Flame Boy]

Update 1​

Announcement:-

Ladies and gentlemen aap sabhi ka swagat h Chinese airlines me ummeed h apki yatra subha ho.

In the aeroplane -

Logo me khus fusahat ho rahi thi.

Someone :- aree.dekho to kitni khubsurat mahila h . koi vip h kya? tum(bagal me baithi apni Biwi se)to itne lali powder laga ke bhi nahi ho pa rahi paise barbaad hi ho rahe h

His wife :- Ghar chalo tum

Someone (others) :-:are yaaro dekho guy's ye to uper se leke niche tak pure brands ki dukaan h dukaan Zara gucchi bhai kya kya phana h be kon ho sakti h ye?

Per tabhi uska sathi bolta h :- yaar wo cute to h hi. ek dam princess ki trh. me iske pass gaya tha abhi jaankari bana ne per isne to ek dam ignore kar diya yaar dil ke tukde nahi chote chhote mitthi ke kan(dust particles ) bana diye.


Mmi......

(Tabhi ek awaz aati h.....ye kon bola be ya boli?)

Mmi mmi bhar dekho....wo kya h?

(Ek pyari si cute si ladki ne ye bola)


Badal h beta wo

ye sabd usi ladki ke the jiski itne samay se charcha ho rahi h ab Jake inke muh se kuch nikala.

Bachhi- Mmi kya papa meko apanayengey?

Ladki - Ha ha kyu nahi meri baby.tum ko koi kese nahi apnayaga? Tum jesi sweet or cute baby girl ko bhala koi kese na bol sakta h ? Aaja Mera baccha mma ki goad me soja

Ladki - okk mma

( Ye h choti si cute baby jiska name h yashasvi [ it's not me.aasan laga isliye likha h])

Bachi ke sone ke baad wo ladki sochti h- {kash me kabhi tumse dur hi na hoti to aaj ye sab na hota}

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Wahi unknown time unknown
please ( ye purani baat h )
Dhamke ho rahe the bahot sare......boom......

Nahiiiii......asa nahi .....ho sakta.....akhir me hu kyu?.....kya main prem ke is kasht ke kaaran marane ja raha hoon?.....akhir me hu kyu ...nahi.... bilkul nahi........(Ye ek ek bhot hi sakati sali vyakti tha )

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Gill family ka ghar.....(Gill ke Punjabi cast h Jaat hi hote h may be but is se koi fark nahi padegaa khani me )

Ek Banda bathroom me bathtub me naha raha tha ki tabhi uske phone pe kisi ka phone aaya h or wo bolta h:-

Dekho tension na lo me me sab theek kar dunga ...dekho jab bank Wale aayange to me Ghar ke piche se satak lunga . Tu bas dekhta ja mera plan. Chalo karakhta hu faltu tension nahi lene ka.Huh...

Itne me bathtub ke pass ek hair dryer Rakha hota hai wo plag mein Laga hota hai wo ludhak ke Pani mein gir jata hai aur vah ladka vahi baat kab main bada bada tadapne lagta hai.....
Aur tab sunai deti hai bahut hi dardnak aur khaufna cheekheain .....( aap imagine kar sakte ho aise time mein jab Banda baathtab mein pada Ho usko bijali ke current ke jhatake lag rahe ho plus pani ke andar current ka prabhav bahut jyada hota hai jis Karan ashanniye pida hoti h)
Or wo mar jata h uska sarrir bilkul kala pad jata h jo aam tor pe current lagne per hota h per tabhi.....

Uper ki light bhi jal bujh rahi hoti h (flickering)}

Tabhi Achanak us ladke ki Aankhen khulati hai aankhon mein alag hi Tej hota hai .. wo bolta h-

"2000 saal pure 2000 saal"Pure ke pure 2000 saal baad aaj Jake ek nayi suruwaat hui h ek dam nyi suruwaat...ha ha ha

Main the great Yash ......ek vilakshan pratibha ka dhanee hoon jisane gu yuaan sootr kee rachana kee aur amaron ka abhootapoorv maarg khola - mujhe logon ke beech draigan devata ke roop mein jaana jaata tha........
lekin mere charam aarohan ke dauraan mainne apana saara pyaar kho diya.....
main is vyakti ke shareer par kabza karana chaahata tha, lekin mainne nahin socha tha ki vah itanee jaldee mar jaega - yah us vyakti jitana achchha nahin hai jo abhee bhee jeevit hai.
Jo bhi ho me kafi Lucky tha jo aaj tak jinda hu itne bade hadse ke baad bhi ..mujhe ab waps suru se suru karna padega .....
lekin mainne apanee clivention ke 200 saal mein kabhee bhee pyaar nahin kiya; mujhe koee chinta nahin thee, aur mainne apana poora dhyaan Saktio par kendrit kiya - pyaar kya hai, aur ise kaise samajha ja sakata hai?

Wo ye sab soch raha hota h ki tabhi darwazae ki ghanti bajati h....ting tong.....

Yash:- kaun h be?( Jake gate pe Jake dekhta h or gate kholta h) Tu kon h?

Samne dekhta h to pata h ki ek khoobsurat ladki or ek chhoti si pyari si nanhi si ek pari h( yaha uski age nahi bata sakti ..

Ladki:- Yash .....(Pyar se Yash ki or dekhte hue)
4 saal phale me pregnent hui thi....us raat ke baad.........

Ye dekhlo hamari beti h yashasvi..


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Dekho boss ye tha phala update...likes ki fikar nahi feedback ki tension h so please aap sab milke bataye kisi ne bata bhi Diya to waps bato ki kami kidhar h

Chinese Air Lines Me Hindi Me Swagat Funny
starting samajh me nahi aaya

 

[Yasasvi3]

Jo bhi ho mujhe aapki writing hasne par majbur kar deti hai maine khud ko rok nahi pata hasne se...

To kisne kha rokne ko? ghar ki chhat pe Jane ka khuli hawa me sans leke khul ke hasne ka bhiddu

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Yasasvi3 ji....
N oe and excellent update....

Noiceaaram se likh ke aaram se padhne ka bhau

Bahut fadu update likha ha madam aapne

(raat ki chhaiya me tata thaiya kar bethe)
Ise padhkar hasi nahi ruk rahi thi

Yash ko jabardasti bap bana diya gaya ha use khud nahi pata tha ki uski beti ha or bechare ka punarjanm hue 10 minute hi hue the ki sidha wife or beti gift me mile kher jo bhi ho hasi majak se shuru hua update emotional hoker hua dekhte han ki age kya hota ha yash ki life me

That's my point socho koi 2000 saal badh utha fir koi aake .....or fir jo mara bhi pyar ki wajah se tha usko koi baachi aake bole papa.....to banda(great Yash)be like ......hum to sikkar per nahi gaye to ye bandook kisne chalaiyii

यशस्वी , आप एक जिंदादिल , बिंदास और खुशमिजाज इंसान हो यह आपके अनगिनत स्टोरी पर दिए गए रिव्यू और आप की पहली स्टोरी - जो अधूरी रह गई थी - से ही जान गया था ।
यह आप की दूसरी स्टोरी है और सच कहूं तो बहुत बहुत उम्दा लिखा है आपने ।
यह अपडेट पुरी तरह इमोशनल और दर्द से भरा हुआ था । खासकर खुशी और उसकी नन्ही बेटी यशस्वी के वर्तमान हालात को देखकर ।
यश साहब की मौजूदा हालात एक आम इंसान की तो नही रही पर व्यवहार उनका वही पुराना है ।
बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट यशस्वी ।
आप की यह स्टोरी पुरी हो या न हो , मै पहले की तरह ही आपको सपोर्ट करता रहूंगा ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट डियर ।

Sanju .....I thanks for the compliment aapko yaad h apun ki phali story good mera bhi bhot man tha uske likhne ka butka kare ....and ha ye clear rakho ki Yash gill mat chuka h ab uske Ander jo h wo great Yash h ..ya shyad so mara h nahi h. Thoda sa meko bhi doubt h so.... fihaal jo h wo great Yash h ohkey..

The real tharkulla....

Interesting...badiya kadi se kadi jod rhi ho aap..

Sawaalo ke ghode khol diye..

Ghode se similer chij to nahi kholi payange.. ..mera se sex update shayad diye jayange but yaar story me aayange tab tab tak me bhi padh rahi hu aap bhi padho

Nice

Thanks

Update ak jagah par par ismain added emojis alag level bana rahe

Natural aadat hoti h hum ladkiyo ki.....kisi se baat ki hogi to may be aap samjh jayenge

Wonderful keep going

Yep Buddy...

Apni story continue rakhiye...okay...log ek ek karke dhire dhire judte chale jayenge.

Me itni tension na leti... befikar bhi hona jarrori h befikari me khona jarrori h

First of all for your new story.. I hope ye kahaani apne anzaam tak paunchegi..

Yep maksad nahi bhoolna

Realised?

Ha movie hana yeto released

Continue hi tu hai abhi ak din pehle hi tu update dala

Ek din me so update dala galt ho aap

Really engaging update.... Your writing style is really different and unique in its own way...

Wo ta ta thaiyya aur tharkulla was good ones...ha ha ha

Keep writing "Yashasvi" ji

(Kya bolu ispe ...sabdless)

Arrey janaab bhavnao ko samjho..sab log to samajh gye...

Oh released are dekho meko updated name ajib laga so I use realised

Khud itne chote update aur ham par ilzaam lagaya ja raha hai ki ham chote update dete hai waah re matlabi duniya

Kair update bahut aacha hai bas itna hi

Per din ke do bhi to h babu...aap bhi do chote chote....and me writer nahi huye mat bhulo

Nirash to tere se waise bhi nahi hone wale , Congratulations for new story dear, best of luck

I like the confidence

Chinese Air Lines Me Hindi Me Swagat Funny
starting samajh me nahi aaya

(Are dada......ab me chij chau chau likhu?wo aayaga samjh??? comon sance babu ... English me samjh aa jyagi aapko? ... sahi batu ye story English me bhot hi kam sabdo me h.....mene 8 kee 18 banaye h(sabd)