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[Yasasvi3]

Update 6
Update 7 is also posted to padho or bato kaisa h

 

[Yasasvi3]

UPDATE 3


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Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao


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Ab aage....



Yash dur se dono maa betiyo ko gale lagte hue dekh raha tha na jane kya chal raha tha uske man me..fir achanak uski nazar uski nazar us diary per jati h jo use Khushi ne di thi abhi kuch time phale yash usi ko khol kar padhne lagta h to uska dimag chakara jata h wo khud se khata h
:- bhot kuch h is ladki ke bare me jaan ne ke liye...kyu kabhi samjh nahi aata meko...na kabhi kisi gurukul me sikhaya na hi is Yash ki school me to inko samjha to samjha jaye kese???...itne sari chije wo bhi sirf is chutku si ladki ke liye had h bhagwan...

Fir Yash un dono ke pass jata h jo abhi bhi gale lagi hui thi...Yash :- dekho aaj achanak se itni raat ko tum yaha aayi Bina bataye mene koi khas intazam bhi nahi kiya tumdono ke liye to please kya tum dono aaj aaj hotel me rah sakti ho please kal me khud tumse contact karungaa yashasvi ke liye..bye bye sweetie pie

Khushi:- ohkey aacha h..
Fir wo dono waha se chali jati h

Or Yash door close kar deta h and sochta h ki wo bache ko to sath le gayi lekin.....kal ye jagah ye Ghar jo ki already lagbhag Khali sa pada h ye bhi bank mujhe se le lega.....kya karu me ab...sochnga padega re baba


Yash ek photo ke hath me leta ha or sochta h .
:- ye photo is ladke ke maa baap ki h jo ki bhot hi aache khase paise Wale or paropkari log the Jo ki car accident me mare gaye unhone sari property apne bhatije chirag ke name kardi per wo apni khud ki sagi aulaad ke liye khuch nahi chhod ke gaye.....kya jhandu aadmi tha ye ladka....
Per ek second iske mmi papa ko thodi pata tha ki ki ye ladka jhandu h ....wo konsa future dekh sakte the?ya unko pta tha ye kisi kaam ka nahi h ... useless admi huhh.....Per aisa ho kese sakta h ki accident se theek phale property chirag ke name hui na ki is Yash ke name(ander jo Yash h wo great Yash h and body Yash gill ki)....kya unki mout me chirag ka hath h?

Ke banda sach me jhandu h kisi kaam ka nahi h sala chalata firta kangali ki dukaan na kuch hota h ...na jata h...faltu sala.....ghar walo ne property nahi di ....bank se karje me dooba h ....ghar bacha nahi ....ab bichari wo nanhi pari ko kha rakhunga??....

Mana ye ladka bank crooupt (diwaliya)ho chuka h
Per ye ek company ka malik bhi h sala kuch Paisa to kahi pe chupa ke rakha hoga emergency ke liye ya apne fayde ke liye ??

Ye soch ke Yash Sara Ghar chaan Marta h sab kuch dhundhne ke baad usko kuch milta h pta h kya??....
Paisa na ..yani Paisana(I know bad joke)...

Thak haar kar wo ek jagah sofe per pani taarif tika ke Beth jata h
Dekhta h usko kuch mila ....ek bracelet..ek invitation Card and 1000 cash....( Ye tha mailk...) ..Yash sochta h itna kuch to us dairy ke hisab se ek din na chale ...

[ Mana the great Yash 2000 saal purana h but jab wo is sari me aaya to itni informations to mil gyi na just like use Khushi ke bare me pta chala]

Yash (man me):- Ye beclate (kangan)to gill pariwar ki bahu ko diya jata h..or me dragon devta ke ladki wali chije ka kya karunga

Ab invitation dekhte h ..

{Dear
Hamre jhaj ki pahalee yaatra ka jashn manaane ke lie emaviteshan, shreemaan. (Yash gill ke papa) aur unake parivaar ko jahaaj par chadhane aur samaaroh dekhane ke lie aamantrit kiya gaya hai.
juaariyon ka raaja - rakka.}


Ise pash ke Yash sochta h jooriyo ki ship ...abhi maaja aayaga na bhidu ab karunga me is baachi ke liye kuch......

Fir Yash so jata h or Khushi and yashasvi hotel me


Fir agle din ...gill house...

Sambhal ke bhan ke l ( laddu) sambhal ke tere baap ka nahi h toot gaya to wasool karunga tere se hi
Or suno Ander se kuch mat chhodna sab kuch le aao jitna kuch h. - ye khane wala bank karamchari tha jo majdooro ko nirdesh de raha tha ...


Yaha apne the great Yash chal pade apna jhola utha ke .. be like hum to feeker h chal padhenge jhola le kar( yaad aaya kiska dailog h).....Yash apne man me bolata h aaj phala din h or ek din me sab kuch waps haasil kar lunga .... akhir me hu kon...

Yash ja hi Raha hota h ki raste me ek budha aata h or usko bolta h :- Abe o launde tum yahi rahte ho na ... Hamka morning walkwa karna h tanki bato aas pass ye gardenwa kha milaga . .sasur ka nati..

Yash (man me) :- are is budde uncle me hamko ye shaitan ka aura kyu feel ho Raha h ...
Tabhi yash :- oh chacha ..dekho baat aisa h na aapke na charo or hamko bad aura feel ho Raha h aap na ihha se chale jaiye warna na hum aapko family sahita uda denge....

Buddha uncle ek dam se chauk jata h ki re boodbak ye kya h kon h?......

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Let's see guy's aage kya hota h kya nahi hota h...maaje ki baat batu aage kya hoga even I don't know me ek update padhti hu and usko hindi me than agla....so mere liye bhi ye ek thriller story h to hum or aap sath sath chal rahe h...shyad hi koi asi writer ho mera jitna cute ya pagal ho(ghamond nahi h please it's a joke for intertanment)lo me bhi aapko kya batane lag gyi ....

Hmm ek suggetion chahiye aap log bole to story ko casual chalne Diya jaye ya thode dailogs jo mene Aaj ass kiye h aise likhaa jaye?? Please apni ray comments me jaroor deve.... dhanywaad....apki yasasvi.... not yashasvi ....
Image's add kru?but us se thoda maaja kharb hoga chalo places ki daal dungi character ki khud imagination me rakho

 

[Yasasvi3]

Jo bhi ho mujhe aapki writing hasne par majbur kar deti hai maine khud ko rok nahi pata hasne se...

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Yasasvi3 ji....
N oe and excellent update....

Bahut fadu update likha ha madam aapne

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बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट यशस्वी ।
आप की यह स्टोरी पुरी हो या न हो , मै पहले की तरह ही आपको सपोर्ट करता रहूंगा ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट डियर ।

Interesting...badiya kadi se kadi jod rhi ho aap..

Sawaalo ke ghode khol diye..

Nice

Update ak jagah par par ismain added emojis alag level bana rahe

First of all for your new story.. I hope ye kahaani apne anzaam tak paunchegi..

Realised?

Keep writing "Yashasvi" ji

Khud itne chote update aur ham par ilzaam lagaya ja raha hai ki ham chote update dete hai waah re matlabi duniya

Kair update bahut aacha hai bas itna hi

Nirash to tere se waise bhi nahi hone wale , Congratulations for new story dear, best of luck

Chinese Air Lines Me Hindi Me Swagat Funny
starting samajh me nahi aaya

Nice and superb update....

Update posted guy's. Dhundho galtiyan

 

[dhalchandarun]

UPDATE 3


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Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao


_________________________________
Ab aage....



Yash dur se dono maa betiyo ko gale lagte hue dekh raha tha na jane kya chal raha tha uske man me..fir achanak uski nazar uski nazar us diary per jati h jo use Khushi ne di thi abhi kuch time phale yash usi ko khol kar padhne lagta h to uska dimag chakara jata h wo khud se khata h
:- bhot kuch h is ladki ke bare me jaan ne ke liye...kyu kabhi samjh nahi aata meko...na kabhi kisi gurukul me sikhaya na hi is Yash ki school me to inko samjha to samjha jaye kese???...itne sari chije wo bhi sirf is chutku si ladki ke liye had h bhagwan...

Fir Yash un dono ke pass jata h jo abhi bhi gale lagi hui thi...Yash :- dekho aaj achanak se itni raat ko tum yaha aayi Bina bataye mene koi khas intazam bhi nahi kiya tumdono ke liye to please kya tum dono aaj aaj hotel me rah sakti ho please kal me khud tumse contact karungaa yashasvi ke liye..bye bye sweetie pie

Khushi:- ohkey aacha h..
Fir wo dono waha se chali jati h

Or Yash door close kar deta h and sochta h ki wo bache ko to sath le gayi lekin.....kal ye jagah ye Ghar jo ki already lagbhag Khali sa pada h ye bhi bank mujhe se le lega.....kya karu me ab...sochnga padega re baba


Yash ek photo ke hath me leta ha or sochta h .
:- ye photo is ladke ke maa baap ki h jo ki bhot hi aache khase paise Wale or paropkari log the Jo ki car accident me mare gaye unhone sari property apne bhatije chirag ke name kardi per wo apni khud ki sagi aulaad ke liye khuch nahi chhod ke gaye.....kya jhandu aadmi tha ye ladka....
Per ek second iske mmi papa ko thodi pata tha ki ki ye ladka jhandu h ....wo konsa future dekh sakte the?ya unko pta tha ye kisi kaam ka nahi h ... useless admi huhh.....Per aisa ho kese sakta h ki accident se theek phale property chirag ke name hui na ki is Yash ke name(ander jo Yash h wo great Yash h and body Yash gill ki)....kya unki mout me chirag ka hath h?

Ke banda sach me jhandu h kisi kaam ka nahi h sala chalata firta kangali ki dukaan na kuch hota h ...na jata h...faltu sala.....ghar walo ne property nahi di ....bank se karje me dooba h ....ghar bacha nahi ....ab bichari wo nanhi pari ko kha rakhunga??....

Mana ye ladka bank crooupt (diwaliya)ho chuka h
Per ye ek company ka malik bhi h sala kuch Paisa to kahi pe chupa ke rakha hoga emergency ke liye ya apne fayde ke liye ??

Ye soch ke Yash Sara Ghar chaan Marta h sab kuch dhundhne ke baad usko kuch milta h pta h kya??....
Paisa na ..yani Paisana(I know bad joke)...

Thak haar kar wo ek jagah sofe per pani taarif tika ke Beth jata h
Dekhta h usko kuch mila ....ek bracelet..ek invitation Card and 1000 cash....( Ye tha mailk...) ..Yash sochta h itna kuch to us dairy ke hisab se ek din na chale ...

[ Mana the great Yash 2000 saal purana h but jab wo is sari me aaya to itni informations to mil gyi na just like use Khushi ke bare me pta chala]

Yash (man me):- Ye beclate (kangan)to gill pariwar ki bahu ko diya jata h..or me dragon devta ke ladki wali chije ka kya karunga

Ab invitation dekhte h ..

{Dear
Hamre jhaj ki pahalee yaatra ka jashn manaane ke lie emaviteshan, shreemaan. (Yash gill ke papa) aur unake parivaar ko jahaaj par chadhane aur samaaroh dekhane ke lie aamantrit kiya gaya hai.
juaariyon ka raaja - rakka.}


Ise pash ke Yash sochta h jooriyo ki ship ...abhi maaja aayaga na bhidu ab karunga me is baachi ke liye kuch......

Fir Yash so jata h or Khushi and yashasvi hotel me


Fir agle din ...gill house...

Sambhal ke bhan ke l ( laddu) sambhal ke tere baap ka nahi h toot gaya to wasool karunga tere se hi
Or suno Ander se kuch mat chhodna sab kuch le aao jitna kuch h. - ye khane wala bank karamchari tha jo majdooro ko nirdesh de raha tha ...


Yaha apne the great Yash chal pade apna jhola utha ke .. be like hum to feeker h chal padhenge jhola le kar( yaad aaya kiska dailog h).....Yash apne man me bolata h aaj phala din h or ek din me sab kuch waps haasil kar lunga .... akhir me hu kon...

Yash ja hi Raha hota h ki raste me ek budha aata h or usko bolta h :- Abe o launde tum yahi rahte ho na ... Hamka morning walkwa karna h tanki bato aas pass ye gardenwa kha milaga . .sasur ka nati..

Yash (man me) :- are is budde uncle me hamko ye shaitan ka aura kyu feel ho Raha h ...
Tabhi yash :- oh chacha ..dekho baat aisa h na aapke na charo or hamko bad aura feel ho Raha h aap na ihha se chale jaiye warna na hum aapko family sahita uda denge....

Buddha uncle ek dam se chauk jata h ki re boodbak ye kya h kon h?......

.......
.......
......
Let's see guy's aage kya hota h kya nahi hota h...maaje ki baat batu aage kya hoga even I don't know me ek update padhti hu and usko hindi me than agla....so mere liye bhi ye ek thriller story h to hum or aap sath sath chal rahe h...shyad hi koi asi writer ho mera jitna cute ya pagal ho(ghamond nahi h please it's a joke for intertanment)lo me bhi aapko kya batane lag gyi ....

Hmm ek suggetion chahiye aap log bole to story ko casual chalne Diya jaye ya thode dailogs jo mene Aaj ass kiye h aise likhaa jaye?? Please apni ray comments me jaroor deve.... dhanywaad....apki yasasvi.... not yashasvi ....
Image's add kru?but us se thoda maaja kharb hoga chalo places ki daal dungi cheaters ki khud imagination me rakho

Bahut badhiya aise hi rakho dialogues me koi changes nahi aapki style hi unique hai so continue with what you have...aapke andar se jo feel aati hai use hi likh daliye....

 

[rhyme_boy]

UPDATE 3


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Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao


_________________________________
Ab aage....



Yash dur se dono maa betiyo ko gale lagte hue dekh raha tha na jane kya chal raha tha uske man me..fir achanak uski nazar uski nazar us diary per jati h jo use Khushi ne di thi abhi kuch time phale yash usi ko khol kar padhne lagta h to uska dimag chakara jata h wo khud se khata h
:- bhot kuch h is ladki ke bare me jaan ne ke liye...kyu kabhi samjh nahi aata meko...na kabhi kisi gurukul me sikhaya na hi is Yash ki school me to inko samjha to samjha jaye kese???...itne sari chije wo bhi sirf is chutku si ladki ke liye had h bhagwan...

Fir Yash un dono ke pass jata h jo abhi bhi gale lagi hui thi...Yash :- dekho aaj achanak se itni raat ko tum yaha aayi Bina bataye mene koi khas intazam bhi nahi kiya tumdono ke liye to please kya tum dono aaj aaj hotel me rah sakti ho please kal me khud tumse contact karungaa yashasvi ke liye..bye bye sweetie pie

Khushi:- ohkey aacha h..
Fir wo dono waha se chali jati h

Or Yash door close kar deta h and sochta h ki wo bache ko to sath le gayi lekin.....kal ye jagah ye Ghar jo ki already lagbhag Khali sa pada h ye bhi bank mujhe se le lega.....kya karu me ab...sochnga padega re baba


Yash ek photo ke hath me leta ha or sochta h .
:- ye photo is ladke ke maa baap ki h jo ki bhot hi aache khase paise Wale or paropkari log the Jo ki car accident me mare gaye unhone sari property apne bhatije chirag ke name kardi per wo apni khud ki sagi aulaad ke liye khuch nahi chhod ke gaye.....kya jhandu aadmi tha ye ladka....
Per ek second iske mmi papa ko thodi pata tha ki ki ye ladka jhandu h ....wo konsa future dekh sakte the?ya unko pta tha ye kisi kaam ka nahi h ... useless admi huhh.....Per aisa ho kese sakta h ki accident se theek phale property chirag ke name hui na ki is Yash ke name(ander jo Yash h wo great Yash h and body Yash gill ki)....kya unki mout me chirag ka hath h?

Ke banda sach me jhandu h kisi kaam ka nahi h sala chalata firta kangali ki dukaan na kuch hota h ...na jata h...faltu sala.....ghar walo ne property nahi di ....bank se karje me dooba h ....ghar bacha nahi ....ab bichari wo nanhi pari ko kha rakhunga??....

Mana ye ladka bank crooupt (diwaliya)ho chuka h
Per ye ek company ka malik bhi h sala kuch Paisa to kahi pe chupa ke rakha hoga emergency ke liye ya apne fayde ke liye ??

Ye soch ke Yash Sara Ghar chaan Marta h sab kuch dhundhne ke baad usko kuch milta h pta h kya??....
Paisa na ..yani Paisana(I know bad joke)...

Thak haar kar wo ek jagah sofe per pani taarif tika ke Beth jata h
Dekhta h usko kuch mila ....ek bracelet..ek invitation Card and 1000 cash....( Ye tha mailk...) ..Yash sochta h itna kuch to us dairy ke hisab se ek din na chale ...

[ Mana the great Yash 2000 saal purana h but jab wo is sari me aaya to itni informations to mil gyi na just like use Khushi ke bare me pta chala]

Yash (man me):- Ye beclate (kangan)to gill pariwar ki bahu ko diya jata h..or me dragon devta ke ladki wali chije ka kya karunga

Ab invitation dekhte h ..

{Dear
Hamre jhaj ki pahalee yaatra ka jashn manaane ke lie emaviteshan, shreemaan. (Yash gill ke papa) aur unake parivaar ko jahaaj par chadhane aur samaaroh dekhane ke lie aamantrit kiya gaya hai.
juaariyon ka raaja - rakka.}


Ise pash ke Yash sochta h jooriyo ki ship ...abhi maaja aayaga na bhidu ab karunga me is baachi ke liye kuch......

Fir Yash so jata h or Khushi and yashasvi hotel me


Fir agle din ...gill house...

Sambhal ke bhan ke l ( laddu) sambhal ke tere baap ka nahi h toot gaya to wasool karunga tere se hi
Or suno Ander se kuch mat chhodna sab kuch le aao jitna kuch h. - ye khane wala bank karamchari tha jo majdooro ko nirdesh de raha tha ...


Yaha apne the great Yash chal pade apna jhola utha ke .. be like hum to feeker h chal padhenge jhola le kar( yaad aaya kiska dailog h).....Yash apne man me bolata h aaj phala din h or ek din me sab kuch waps haasil kar lunga .... akhir me hu kon...

Yash ja hi Raha hota h ki raste me ek budha aata h or usko bolta h :- Abe o launde tum yahi rahte ho na ... Hamka morning walkwa karna h tanki bato aas pass ye gardenwa kha milaga . .sasur ka nati..

Yash (man me) :- are is budde uncle me hamko ye shaitan ka aura kyu feel ho Raha h ...
Tabhi yash :- oh chacha ..dekho baat aisa h na aapke na charo or hamko bad aura feel ho Raha h aap na ihha se chale jaiye warna na hum aapko family sahita uda denge....

Buddha uncle ek dam se chauk jata h ki re boodbak ye kya h kon h?......

.......
.......
......
Let's see guy's aage kya hota h kya nahi hota h...maaje ki baat batu aage kya hoga even I don't know me ek update padhti hu and usko hindi me than agla....so mere liye bhi ye ek thriller story h to hum or aap sath sath chal rahe h...shyad hi koi asi writer ho mera jitna cute ya pagal ho(ghamond nahi h please it's a joke for intertanment)lo me bhi aapko kya batane lag gyi ....

Hmm ek suggetion chahiye aap log bole to story ko casual chalne Diya jaye ya thode dailogs jo mene Aaj ass kiye h aise likhaa jaye?? Please apni ray comments me jaroor deve.... dhanywaad....apki yasasvi.... not yashasvi ....
Image's add kru?but us se thoda maaja kharb hoga chalo places ki daal dungi cheaters ki khud imagination me rakho

Waahhhh Yasasvi3 (not Yashasvi) ji,

Achcha update tha..
Yash, Behen ka Laddu to diwaliya nikla, aur rupay ke naam par uske paas bas 1000 rupay hi nikle.. ab ye is 1000 rupay ko crore bana dega apne baazu ki shakti se.. .. ye mazdoor ka haath hai kaatiya..

Wese mein abhi tak apna sar khuja raha hu ke ye ho kya raha hai..lekin aagey chalte hain ke kya pol Patti khulti hai is character ki..

Aur haan mere opinion mein aap casual rakhein story ko aur aise dialogue be 'ass' karein kyuki ye aapka unique style hai

Aur 'cheaters' ki image rehne dijiye let us imagine them...

 

[parkas]

UPDATE 3


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Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao


_________________________________
Ab aage....



Yash dur se dono maa betiyo ko gale lagte hue dekh raha tha na jane kya chal raha tha uske man me..fir achanak uski nazar uski nazar us diary per jati h jo use Khushi ne di thi abhi kuch time phale yash usi ko khol kar padhne lagta h to uska dimag chakara jata h wo khud se khata h
:- bhot kuch h is ladki ke bare me jaan ne ke liye...kyu kabhi samjh nahi aata meko...na kabhi kisi gurukul me sikhaya na hi is Yash ki school me to inko samjha to samjha jaye kese???...itne sari chije wo bhi sirf is chutku si ladki ke liye had h bhagwan...

Fir Yash un dono ke pass jata h jo abhi bhi gale lagi hui thi...Yash :- dekho aaj achanak se itni raat ko tum yaha aayi Bina bataye mene koi khas intazam bhi nahi kiya tumdono ke liye to please kya tum dono aaj aaj hotel me rah sakti ho please kal me khud tumse contact karungaa yashasvi ke liye..bye bye sweetie pie

Khushi:- ohkey aacha h..
Fir wo dono waha se chali jati h

Or Yash door close kar deta h and sochta h ki wo bache ko to sath le gayi lekin.....kal ye jagah ye Ghar jo ki already lagbhag Khali sa pada h ye bhi bank mujhe se le lega.....kya karu me ab...sochnga padega re baba


Yash ek photo ke hath me leta ha or sochta h .
:- ye photo is ladke ke maa baap ki h jo ki bhot hi aache khase paise Wale or paropkari log the Jo ki car accident me mare gaye unhone sari property apne bhatije chirag ke name kardi per wo apni khud ki sagi aulaad ke liye khuch nahi chhod ke gaye.....kya jhandu aadmi tha ye ladka....
Per ek second iske mmi papa ko thodi pata tha ki ki ye ladka jhandu h ....wo konsa future dekh sakte the?ya unko pta tha ye kisi kaam ka nahi h ... useless admi huhh.....Per aisa ho kese sakta h ki accident se theek phale property chirag ke name hui na ki is Yash ke name(ander jo Yash h wo great Yash h and body Yash gill ki)....kya unki mout me chirag ka hath h?

Ke banda sach me jhandu h kisi kaam ka nahi h sala chalata firta kangali ki dukaan na kuch hota h ...na jata h...faltu sala.....ghar walo ne property nahi di ....bank se karje me dooba h ....ghar bacha nahi ....ab bichari wo nanhi pari ko kha rakhunga??....

Mana ye ladka bank crooupt (diwaliya)ho chuka h
Per ye ek company ka malik bhi h sala kuch Paisa to kahi pe chupa ke rakha hoga emergency ke liye ya apne fayde ke liye ??

Ye soch ke Yash Sara Ghar chaan Marta h sab kuch dhundhne ke baad usko kuch milta h pta h kya??....
Paisa na ..yani Paisana(I know bad joke)...

Thak haar kar wo ek jagah sofe per pani taarif tika ke Beth jata h
Dekhta h usko kuch mila ....ek bracelet..ek invitation Card and 1000 cash....( Ye tha mailk...) ..Yash sochta h itna kuch to us dairy ke hisab se ek din na chale ...

[ Mana the great Yash 2000 saal purana h but jab wo is sari me aaya to itni informations to mil gyi na just like use Khushi ke bare me pta chala]

Yash (man me):- Ye beclate (kangan)to gill pariwar ki bahu ko diya jata h..or me dragon devta ke ladki wali chije ka kya karunga

Ab invitation dekhte h ..

{Dear
Hamre jhaj ki pahalee yaatra ka jashn manaane ke lie emaviteshan, shreemaan. (Yash gill ke papa) aur unake parivaar ko jahaaj par chadhane aur samaaroh dekhane ke lie aamantrit kiya gaya hai.
juaariyon ka raaja - rakka.}


Ise pash ke Yash sochta h jooriyo ki ship ...abhi maaja aayaga na bhidu ab karunga me is baachi ke liye kuch......

Fir Yash so jata h or Khushi and yashasvi hotel me


Fir agle din ...gill house...

Sambhal ke bhan ke l ( laddu) sambhal ke tere baap ka nahi h toot gaya to wasool karunga tere se hi
Or suno Ander se kuch mat chhodna sab kuch le aao jitna kuch h. - ye khane wala bank karamchari tha jo majdooro ko nirdesh de raha tha ...


Yaha apne the great Yash chal pade apna jhola utha ke .. be like hum to feeker h chal padhenge jhola le kar( yaad aaya kiska dailog h).....Yash apne man me bolata h aaj phala din h or ek din me sab kuch waps haasil kar lunga .... akhir me hu kon...

Yash ja hi Raha hota h ki raste me ek budha aata h or usko bolta h :- Abe o launde tum yahi rahte ho na ... Hamka morning walkwa karna h tanki bato aas pass ye gardenwa kha milaga . .sasur ka nati..

Yash (man me) :- are is budde uncle me hamko ye shaitan ka aura kyu feel ho Raha h ...
Tabhi yash :- oh chacha ..dekho baat aisa h na aapke na charo or hamko bad aura feel ho Raha h aap na ihha se chale jaiye warna na hum aapko family sahita uda denge....

Buddha uncle ek dam se chauk jata h ki re boodbak ye kya h kon h?......

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Let's see guy's aage kya hota h kya nahi hota h...maaje ki baat batu aage kya hoga even I don't know me ek update padhti hu and usko hindi me than agla....so mere liye bhi ye ek thriller story h to hum or aap sath sath chal rahe h...shyad hi koi asi writer ho mera jitna cute ya pagal ho(ghamond nahi h please it's a joke for intertanment)lo me bhi aapko kya batane lag gyi ....

Hmm ek suggetion chahiye aap log bole to story ko casual chalne Diya jaye ya thode dailogs jo mene Aaj ass kiye h aise likhaa jaye?? Please apni ray comments me jaroor deve.... dhanywaad....apki yasasvi.... not yashasvi ....
Image's add kru?but us se thoda maaja kharb hoga chalo places ki daal dungi cheaters ki khud imagination me rakho

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Yasasvi3 bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

 

[Yasasvi3]

jurm meñ ham kamī kareñ bhī to kyuuñ
tum sazā bhī to kam nahīñ karte

 

[dev61901]

Badhiya update madam ji

Yash to diwaliya nikla yashasvi ko kaise palega lagta ha maa bap ko bhi marwa diya gaya property ke liye ya chalo kuchh bhi ho aapki writing style funny ha padhkar maja aa jata ha

Aap aise hi likhte raho to jyada badhiya ha hasi majak masti ke sath chalne diya jaye story ko

 

[dev61901]

Update posted guy's. Dhundho galtiyan

Humne ignore kar di aapki galtiyan warna spelling mistakes thi

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

मरहूम यश साहब की कहानी भी अजीब है । धनाढ्य और रईस मां-बाप का एकलौता औलाद लेकिन जीवनयापन एक दरिद्र की । ऊपर से वसीयत उसके चचेरे भाई चिराग के नाम पर । हंड्रेड पर्सेंट यश के मां-बाप की मृत्यु संदेहास्पद है । और लाजिमी है शक चिराग पर ही जाना है ।
इधर खुशी और उसकी नन्ही बेटी यशस्वी की हालत भी अत्यंत दयनीय दिखाई दे रहा है । क्या यश का यह नया वर्सन खुशी और यशस्वी के जीवन मे खुशियों का सौगात दे पाएगा ?
और यह जुआरियों के जहाज और उस जहाज पर सफर करने का इनविटेशन कार्ड से क्या मतलब है ? कहीं यह जहाज जुआ का अड्डा तो नही ? लेकिन ऐसे हाई फाई जुए के लिए यश को इनवाइट किसने और क्यों कर दिया ?

वैसे यह अपडेट भी बहुत खुबसूरत था ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट यशस्वी मैडम ।

 

[Flame Boy]

(Are dada......ab me chij chau chau likhu?wo aayaga samjh??? comon sance babu ... English me samjh aa jyagi aapko? ... sahi batu ye story English me bhot hi kam sabdo me h.....mene 8 kee 18 banaye h(sabd)

Mujhe english bhej do maze aa jaayenge and maine bas ek point nikala tha fun ke liye chi chau ko padhne me funny lagta isiliye bola heh bura nahi maan'ne ka behen