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Nice update bro, bechara Prateek Ghar walon ko explain nahi kar pa raha ladki ke bare main kya batayeUPDATE - 57
Ab tak
Nayi jagah mill gayi thi humne Strange world ke pass mein hi ulkapindon ke samuh ke pass banayi thi ye nayi jagah jaha saare jeev aa gaye the....aur saath hi unke aas pass ki hcheezin bhi jisse unko pata bhi nahi chalne wala tha wo kab waha aaye....paryaha pe humme ek banda milla jo ki jeevon ki taskari karta tha...pata nahi wo waha kaise aa gaya tha....usko jab strange world leke aye to waha ek ladki aa jatti hai Insan thi wo usko magic bhi aata thaMain samajh nahi paa raha tha wo waha kaise aayi fir usne uss bande ko maarna shuru kiya aur usse puchne laga ki kidhar hai uska parivar kaha rahte hai wo....tab samajh aaya isko bhi utha ke leke aaye hoga wo...
Ab aage
Wo ladki usko maare jaa rahi thi...Main ladki ko dekhe jaa raha tha....isko dekh ke aisa laga jaise pahle bhi milla hu isse.....yahi aas pass kahi....
Nikita ke sath ek baar jab yaha ghoom raha tha Elf Kingdom mein jaane ke liye tab....tab bhi aisa hi laga tha jaisa ab lag raha tha....par ye pata nahi tha ki kyun........
Old Owl - Wo usko maar degi roko usko.....
Dhruv - Aee pagal hai kya....dekh kya raha hai wotere samne usko maare jaa rahi hai....pata to kar kyun maar rahi hai......
Ye dono bole jaa rahe the par mujhe sunayi hi nahi de raha tha......
Ye insan...kitne aje...nahi nahi sunder hote hai....isko hi dekh lo......uss bande ko maarte hue kitni sunder lag rahi thi ye.....gusse se lal sakal.....aankhon mein thode aashu.....hawa mein jhulte hue baal..........aur uske wo pair...jisse wo usko maare jaa rahi thi.....
Old Owl - wo maar degi usko.....
Iss baar wo saamne aa gaya tha.....aur uski aawaj ladki ne bhi suni...aur wo uski oor dekhne lagi.....sayad isne bahut se ajeeb jeev dekhe honge par abhi uske saamne ek bada sa ullu tha jo bol raha tha.....wo thoda chauki aur picche chali gayi...
Main - Kon ho tum...aur yaha kaise....
Sayad andhera tha iss wajah se usne mujhe uss waqt Strange world ka hi koi banda samajh liya hoga...waise Main insano ki tarah hi dikhta hu..Mom ke karan sayad....khair...usne dhyaan se mujhe dekha...fir Old Owl ko....aur fir waha se bhag gayi.....chilate hue...
Ye samajh mein nahi aaya aakhir hua kya....itne der se mere hi saamne usko koote jaa rahi thi tab kuch nahi....aur ab dekha to aise bhagi jaise puccho mat...sayad Old Owl ki wajah se.....haa aur kya.....wo dekhne mein bhi darawna hai raat ko aur darawna lagta hoga upar se bolta bhi hai dar hi jaayega koi bhi....
Maine Old Owl ki taraf dekhte hue ye sab socha....
Old Owl - dekh kya rahe ho aise.....wo bhag gayi....aur isko dekho kaisi haalat ho gayi hai iski...iska kya karna hai.....
Main - kya karna hai iska....tum pahle ek kaam karo uss ladki ke picche lag jaao yaa laga do kisi ko mujhe uske baare mein sab janna hai.....
Old Owl - Aur Elf king unka kya.....
Main - Haa to kaha naa khud jao yaa kisi aur ko bhejo par iss ladki ke baare mein sab janna hai mujhe....
Old Owl - thik hai....
Main - Jwala Portal kholo...ek mehmaan aa raha hai....uska dhyaan rakhna hai....
Usne portal khola main uss taskari karne wale ko utha ke usse ander leke gaya....
Jwala - Isko wapas kyun leke aa gaye....
Main - isse pucch taach karni hai....tumme se kisi ko aata hai kya ye karna....
Jwala - Puch taach...hum ye sab nahi karte....
Polar bear king - Hum bhi inn sab mein waqt barbaad nahi karte....
Main - pata nahi kon hai ye sab....inko puch taach nahi karni aati....isko Earth pe leke jaaun kya....yaa yahi rahne du....
Maine kuch der socha aur fir isko Earth pe le jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya waha pe log mil hi jaayenge jo isse puch taach karenge aur unki madad se main pata kar paunga uss ladki ke baare mein....pata nahi kyun...par uska wo gusse se bhara chahra meri aakhon ke saamne se hat hi nahi raha tha....
Main - Jwala main isko ghar leke jaunga...waha iski khabar lenge....tum...ek kaam karo... Old Owl se ek baar baat kar lena maine usko kisi ke picche jaane ko kaha hai....wo agar kabhi bhi khatre mein ho usko bachana hai aur mujhe batana bhi hai samjhe...
Jwala - ab ye kon nayi aa gayi....
Main - Pata nahi ussi ka pata karna hai....waise mujhe tumse Bijli ke baare mein baat karni hai....wo theek nahi lag rahi thi...
Jwala - Wo....wo thodi problem hai iss wajah se...
Main - Haa to wahi to puch raha hu...kya pareshani hai....usse milna nahi hua bahut waqt se aur abhi uss din milla to wo pareshan lag rahi thi...
Jwala(hadbadate hue) mujhe pata nahi.....tumko jaana hai naa main portal khol raha hu....mujhe bhi yaha kaam hai....
Main samajh nahi paaya ye kya tha ye bata kyun nahi raha kuch aur wo bhi kuch nahi bata rahi thi....pata nahi kya hua hai inko....
Main usko leke Portal mein chala gaya aur waha se fir Earth pe....apne ghar ke pass aa gaya....
Waise maine socha tha Didi ke hotel mein rakhne ke liye isko...waha Didi bhi hogi aur unko to aata hi hoga puchtaach karna...par usse pahle Didi se puchna hoga lekin ab samajh nahi aa raha tha isko aise sadak pe chod ke ghar mein jaake didi se pucchu kaise....
Maine ek chota sa pather liya aur didi ke room ki taraf fenka...mujhe kya pata tha isse ek dhamaka hi ho jaayega....
Chota sa dhamaka ho gaya...aur uski wajah thi hamare ghar ke aas pass laga hua kawach....raat ke waqt ke liye....jisse koi ander naa jaa sake...kahi aur se...siway darwaje ke...
Dhamake ke karan sab uth gaye....aur main pagalon sa khada apne iss kaam ke baare mein soch raha tha...Dhruv mujhpe has raha tha...
Ghar se sabhi bahar aa gaye...Bua thi nahi baaki sab ghar pe hi the...sab aa gaye bahar...par Didi aur Nikita nahi aaye..........
Dekho to bhala jinse kaam tha unhi ka pata nahi humko.....
Khair...
Dadi ne sabse pahle mujhe dekha.....wo mere pass aayi...aur unke picche picche baaki sab bhi....
Chachi - tum yaha iss waqt kya kar rahe ho....
Main - Wo....wo main bas aise hi aa gaya tha.....
Chacha ji - WO kon hai.....aur usko bandha hua kyun hai....
Dadaji - Satya dekho jaake kaun hai wo aur tum theek ho Prateek...
Main - Ji dadaji main theek hu....
Dadi - Par tum yaha iss waqt kar kya rahe ho...aana tha to Rupal ke saath aa jaate...Nikita to aayi thi uske saath...aur pather kyun fenka tumne apne hi ghar pe...
Chachi - Maa ye aaj bhi ghar pe aaya hoga Apni Didi se milne.....ek din aur aaya tha uss din seedha ghar mein aa gaya tha...mujhe pata chala gaya tha...aaj sayad issi wajah se bahar se pather fenk raha tha jisse kisi ko pata naa chale...Ab batao tum iss waqt kya kaam hai...
Main - Haa Didi se milna tha...par mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch hoga...main bas apko pareshan nahi karna chahta tha....
Chacha - Papa ye to.....wahi hai jiski photo lagi hui thi uss sarkari daftar mein...ye taskari karta hai jeevon ki aur iska yaha aana nishedh hai...
Dadaji - Jaldi se phone karo....
Yaha dadaji uss mote aadmi ko phone karne ki baat kar rahe the....wo ek tarah se Strange world ki taraf se bheja gaya yaah pe ek dutt hai...
Main - Nahi.....wo mere saath hai...
Chachi - Kya matlab tumhare sath hai tum kar kya rahe ho aaj kal...
Main - Mera matlab maine usko pakda hai main usko yaha puch taach ke liye leke aaya hu...
Dadi - Beta kya bole jaa rahe ho....tum thik to ho naa...
Samajh mein nahi aa raha tha mujhe ab kon si kahani banaun main....kaha milla ye aur kya kar raha tha ye.....
thoda haklane ke baad...
Main - ye school ke pass tha....waha pe kisi ka wait kar raha tha.....jab wo aaya isne usko pakadne ki koshish ki par maine isko dekh liya....aur usko baccha liya....fir isko yaha leke aa gaya.....
Chacha - to ye nashe mein ye sab kar raha tha....
Main - haa ye nashe mein tha tabhi to maine isko pakad liya....
CHachi - fir puch taach kya karni isko Strange world bhej dete hai waha se isko sazza sunayi jaayegi...
Main - Nahi main bas...janna chahta tha isne humla kyun kiya...
Dada ji - Par kyun....
Main - wo...wo..
Dadi - bas bahut ho gaya tum sab ka....Satya isko taikhane mein rakh aao....Nidhi iske pass khana aur paani rakh aana....par isse thoda dur...jaha bas ye dekh paaye khaa aur pi naa sake...samjhi....aur aap bahut ho gaya jab se aaya hai mera baccha bas sawal sawal yahi ho raha hai.....isne isko pakda hai isko aur bhi jankari leni hai....ye acchi baat hai....Prateek tum abhi yahi raho subah chale jaana wapas.....aur sham ko wapas aa jaana tab tak ye saare sawalon ka jawab dega...
Dadaji - kya bol rahi ho...
Dadi - bola naa maine....aur strange world ko hi saup denge isko inn sab ke baad....
Dadaji chup ho gaye...aur main Chacha ji ke saath usko uthane chala gaya aur waha se usko taikhane mein laake rakh diya....pahli baar ye jagah dekh raha tha.....kya jagah thi....kulhadi....bhala talwar.....tarah tarah ke kawach...kya kuch nahi the waha....
Main - Chachu ye to kammal ki jagah hai...
Chacha - Haa par ab chalte hai aur jaake room mein so jao...
Main - hmm thik hai...
Main upar chala gaya sone ko...
Kya sota main....3 baj gaye the inn sab mein....haa aankh lagi thi thodi der ke liye aur aaj bhi wahi darwaja saamne tha usko chuwa aur neend khul gayi meri....par jab waqt dekha to mere hosh hi udd gaye....9 Baj rahe the....pahle class ka waqt ho gaya tha mere....aur main ghar mein tha...koi uthane tak nahi aaya tha mujhe....
Main jaldi se taiyaar hua aur room se bahar nikla....
Chachi - Arre aaram se....ab bhag ke kya hoga....class shuru ho chukki hogi....
Main - Aapne uthaya kyun nahi fir...
Chachi -Maa ne manna kiya tha bol rahi thi tum raat ko aaye the...thakke hue hoge...aur ek din school ki padhayi chutt jaane se thodi tum kamzor ho jaaoge...
Main - Par chachi aaj se club mein jaana tha....
Chachi - mujhe sab pata hai....club ki timing sham ko hoti hai.....aur ye baat tumhari Dadi bhi jaanti hai issiliye uthane se manna kiya tha....
Main -Nikita to chali gayi hogi school akeli hi...waise wo thi kaha...Didi bhi nahi dikh rahi....
Chachi - wo dono kya yaha thi......wo to Mummy ke yaha thi....kal ghar aayi thi fir waha ka bol ke chali gayi....Nikita School gayi hai yaa nahi ye bhi pata nahi....
Main -aapko uthana chahiye tha mujhe...
CHachi - Aur main Maa se daant khati.....khana khao jaldi....
Main - Bua ka kya....wo to mujhe hi daantengi unko binna bataye yaha aaya hu........
Chachi - iss baat ke liye to tumko sabse daant padni hai...khair abhi khana khao aur fir nicche aa jaana jo puchna hai puch lena usse....
Main - wo batayega...
Chachi - Haa batayega hi waise bhi tumhare chacha ne acche se khabar li hai uski....aur sayad Papaji bhi gaye the baat karne usse....
Main - hmm theek hai..
Maine khana khaya aur fir nicche jaane laga....tabhi waha didi aa gayi...
Didi - Chotu tu yaha....kuch hua hai kya tujhe....
Main - Nahi to...
Didi - TO yaha kya kar raha hai.....school kyun mein kyun nahi hai tu....
Main - Wo main....wo....
Chachi ne unko sab bataya.....
Didi - tu school ke bahar kya kar raha tha.....raat mein....
Wapas se sawal shuru
Didi - accha wo sab chod kaha hai wo main dekhti hu usko.....
Main - Niche hai...Nikita school gayi kya....
Didi - Wo kyun jaayegi aaj......Bua ne bataya nahi kya ki wo abhi 2 din ki chutti pe hai.....ab wo Monday se jaane wali hai waha.....
Main - Kya....par kyun....kya hua usko...
Didi - arre wo mujhe usse kuch kaam tha....wo meri madad kar rahi hai...aur kuch nahi...
Main - mujhe bata deti aap....
Didi - chup kar.....mujhe bata deti....tujhse nahi hota wo sab....Maa aap isko yahi rakho mai aati hu nicche se....
Main - Maine sawal karne hai usse...
Didi - haa to baad mein kar lena...ab yahi rukko...
Main wahi rukka raha aur wo nicche jaake pata nahi kya karne lag gayi....thodi der baad upar aayi...aur mujhe nicche leke gayi...
Didi - Puccho jo puchna hai....
Main - haa haa par aap jao yaha se....
Didi - Kya matlab hai iska....ab main kahi nahi jaa rahi jo puchna hai yahi puccho...
Main - thik hai....batao wo ladki kon thi jo tumhe maar rahi thi......kya wo insan nahi thi.....
Wo - Kiski baat kar rahe ho tum main kisi ko nahi jaanta jo mujhe maar raha tha...
Didi - Ye kiski baat kar rahe ho tum...
Main - Rukko didi pahle isse puchna hai dekho ye jawab nahi de raha hai....
Didi ne pass padde ek chaku ko uthaya aur usko uske anguli pe de maara.....wo dard se cheekhne laga....
Didi - ab bataoge....
Wo - Haa wo insan hai...
Main - Strange world mein insan kaise pahuchi...
Wo - Maine pahuchaya main usko leke gaya tha yaha se.....
Main - kyun....
Wo kuch nahi bola fir....bilkul chup raha.....
Didi - ye aise nahi sunn raha ha.....
"rukko tum dono....ab koi isko nahi chuega samjhe....sab picche hatto..."
Upar se wahi Mota aadmi bola jisne hunmme Strange world mein bheja tha....pata nahi kaha se aaya tha ye......
"isko leke chalo.....isko sazza wahi milegi...."
Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi upar se chachi ne chup rahne ka ishara kiya....aur hum dono chup ho gaye.....usko leke chale gaye wo sab....hum waise hi usko jaate hue dekhte rahe....
Unke jaane ke baad hum upar gaye....
Didi - Maa ye yaha kaise....
Chachi - Kal tumhare papa ne kaha tha ki uss taskari wale ka earth pe aana manna hai uske yaha aate hi inn sab ko pata chal gaya tha par kyunki wo yaha hamare ghar mein the issliye wo iss waqt aaye hai...naaki raat mein....
Main - Mujhe usse aur bhi batein puchni thi....
Chachi - Ab kuch nahi ho sakta hai....bhool jao usko aur koi aur rasta nikalo pata karne ka...jiss baare mein bhi pata kar rahe the....
Main - haa ab to wahi karna hoga.....Main School jaata hu fir....Bua ke class tak pahuch hi jaaunga...
Chachi - Arre ruk jaao aaj....
Didi - Nahi Maa mujhe bhi isse baat karni hai main isko waha chod ke aati hu....
Binna Chachi ki baat sunne wo leke chal di mujhe....sidhe bus stand ke pass
Didi - kis ladki ki baat kar rahe the aur insani ladki Strange world mein kaise....
Maine didi ko bata diya jo kuch bhi hua tha....jitna unko batana chahiye tha....jaise ki Jwala ke kabile ke pass ye pahuch gaya tha kisi tarah se fir hum strange world gaye aur waha pe ek ladki isko maarne lagi mujhe dekh wo bhag gayi waha se....Main ussi ke baare mein puch raha tha isse...
Didi - par kyun...
Main - Didi wo khatre mein ho sakti hai naa.....
Didi - iss liye....
Itne mein bus aa gayi.....Main bus pe chada aur unko dekhne laga wo wahi rukki hui thi....
Main - aapko nahi chalna kya....
Didi - nahi tum jao....aur wapas se mille wo ladki to mujhse milwana usko samjhe....
Main - par kyun...
Didi - Jitna bola utna karo....
Bus chal padi aur main pahuch gaya school mein....waha se fir ander chala gaya aur abhi class chal rahi thi aur iske baad Bua ki class thi main apne room mein chala gaya thodi der ke liye.....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhenge uss ladki ko....aur chalenge ek nazar apne DB ji pe daalne.. sath hi kuch aur baatein
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Bhai bahut hi badhiya like raha ho nice story and nice update but prateek ko rupal nikita aur gharwalo se itna bhi mat dabao ki maza hi kharab ho jaye. Rupal ko shaktiya prateek ke dwara mili. Nikita ko shaktiya prateek se mili. Family ko jwala k kabile dwara protection mila he wo bhi prateek k dwara. Story ka main hero bhi prateek he sir use is tarah dabaya jata he to maza nhi aata.
very nice update bhaiUPDATE - 57
Ab tak
Nayi jagah mill gayi thi humne Strange world ke pass mein hi ulkapindon ke samuh ke pass banayi thi ye nayi jagah jaha saare jeev aa gaye the....aur saath hi unke aas pass ki hcheezin bhi jisse unko pata bhi nahi chalne wala tha wo kab waha aaye....paryaha pe humme ek banda milla jo ki jeevon ki taskari karta tha...pata nahi wo waha kaise aa gaya tha....usko jab strange world leke aye to waha ek ladki aa jatti hai Insan thi wo usko magic bhi aata tha
Ab aage
Wo ladki usko maare jaa rahi thi...Main ladki ko dekhe jaa raha tha....isko dekh ke aisa laga jaise pahle bhi milla hu isse.....yahi aas pass kahi....
Nikita ke sath ek baar jab yaha ghoom raha tha Elf Kingdom mein jaane ke liye tab....tab bhi aisa hi laga tha jaisa ab lag raha tha....par ye pata nahi tha ki kyun........
Old Owl - Wo usko maar degi roko usko.....
Dhruv - Aee pagal hai kya....dekh kya raha hai wotere samne usko maare jaa rahi hai....pata to kar kyun maar rahi hai......
Ye dono bole jaa rahe the par mujhe sunayi hi nahi de raha tha......
Ye insan...kitne aje...nahi nahi sunder hote hai....isko hi dekh lo......uss bande ko maarte hue kitni sunder lag rahi thi ye.....gusse se lal sakal.....aankhon mein thode aashu.....hawa mein jhulte hue baal..........aur uske wo pair...jisse wo usko maare jaa rahi thi.....
Old Owl - wo maar degi usko.....
Iss baar wo saamne aa gaya tha.....aur uski aawaj ladki ne bhi suni...aur wo uski oor dekhne lagi.....sayad isne bahut se ajeeb jeev dekhe honge par abhi uske saamne ek bada sa ullu tha jo bol raha tha.....wo thoda chauki aur picche chali gayi...
Main - Kon ho tum...aur yaha kaise....
Sayad andhera tha iss wajah se usne mujhe uss waqt Strange world ka hi koi banda samajh liya hoga...waise Main insano ki tarah hi dikhta hu..Mom ke karan sayad....khair...usne dhyaan se mujhe dekha...fir Old Owl ko....aur fir waha se bhag gayi.....chilate hue...
Ye samajh mein nahi aaya aakhir hua kya....itne der se mere hi saamne usko koote jaa rahi thi tab kuch nahi....aur ab dekha to aise bhagi jaise puccho mat...sayad Old Owl ki wajah se.....haa aur kya.....wo dekhne mein bhi darawna hai raat ko aur darawna lagta hoga upar se bolta bhi hai dar hi jaayega koi bhi....
Maine Old Owl ki taraf dekhte hue ye sab socha....
Old Owl - dekh kya rahe ho aise.....wo bhag gayi....aur isko dekho kaisi haalat ho gayi hai iski...iska kya karna hai.....
Main - kya karna hai iska....tum pahle ek kaam karo uss ladki ke picche lag jaao yaa laga do kisi ko mujhe uske baare mein sab janna hai.....
Old Owl - Aur Elf king unka kya.....
Main - Haa to kaha naa khud jao yaa kisi aur ko bhejo par iss ladki ke baare mein sab janna hai mujhe....
Old Owl - thik hai....
Main - Jwala Portal kholo...ek mehmaan aa raha hai....uska dhyaan rakhna hai....
Usne portal khola main uss taskari karne wale ko utha ke usse ander leke gaya....
Jwala - Isko wapas kyun leke aa gaye....
Main - isse pucch taach karni hai....tumme se kisi ko aata hai kya ye karna....
Jwala - Puch taach...hum ye sab nahi karte....
Polar bear king - Hum bhi inn sab mein waqt barbaad nahi karte....
Main - pata nahi kon hai ye sab....inko puch taach nahi karni aati....isko Earth pe leke jaaun kya....yaa yahi rahne du....
Maine kuch der socha aur fir isko Earth pe le jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya waha pe log mil hi jaayenge jo isse puch taach karenge aur unki madad se main pata kar paunga uss ladki ke baare mein....pata nahi kyun...par uska wo gusse se bhara chahra meri aakhon ke saamne se hat hi nahi raha tha....
Main - Jwala main isko ghar leke jaunga...waha iski khabar lenge....tum...ek kaam karo... Old Owl se ek baar baat kar lena maine usko kisi ke picche jaane ko kaha hai....wo agar kabhi bhi khatre mein ho usko bachana hai aur mujhe batana bhi hai samjhe...
Jwala - ab ye kon nayi aa gayi....
Main - Pata nahi ussi ka pata karna hai....waise mujhe tumse Bijli ke baare mein baat karni hai....wo theek nahi lag rahi thi...
Jwala - Wo....wo thodi problem hai iss wajah se...
Main - Haa to wahi to puch raha hu...kya pareshani hai....usse milna nahi hua bahut waqt se aur abhi uss din milla to wo pareshan lag rahi thi...
Jwala(hadbadate hue) mujhe pata nahi.....tumko jaana hai naa main portal khol raha hu....mujhe bhi yaha kaam hai....
Main samajh nahi paaya ye kya tha ye bata kyun nahi raha kuch aur wo bhi kuch nahi bata rahi thi....
Main usko leke Portal mein chala gaya aur waha se fir Earth pe....apne ghar ke pass aa gaya....
Waise maine socha tha Didi ke hotel mein rakhne ke liye isko...waha Didi bhi hogi aur unko to aata hi hoga puchtaach karna...par usse pahle Didi se puchna hoga lekin ab samajh nahi aa raha tha isko aise sadak pe chod ke ghar mein jaake didi se pucchu kaise....
Maine ek chota sa pather liya aur didi ke room ki taraf fenka...mujhe kya pata tha isse ek dhamaka hi ho jaayega....
Chota sa dhamaka ho gaya...aur uski wajah thi hamare ghar ke aas pass laga hua kawach....raat ke waqt ke liye....jisse koi ander naa jaa sake...kahi aur se...siway darwaje ke...
Dhamake ke karan sab uth gaye....aur main pagalon sa khada apne iss kaam ke baare mein soch raha tha...Dhruv mujhpe has raha tha...
Ghar se sabhi bahar aa gaye...Bua thi nahi baaki sab ghar pe hi the...sab aa gaye bahar...par Didi aur Nikita nahi aaye..........
Dekho to bhala jinse kaam tha unhi ka pata nahi humko.....
Khair...
Dadi ne sabse pahle mujhe dekha.....wo mere pass aayi...aur unke picche picche baaki sab bhi....
Chachi - tum yaha iss waqt kya kar rahe ho....
Main - Wo....wo main bas aise hi aa gaya tha.....
Chacha ji - WO kon hai.....aur usko bandha hua kyun hai....
Dadaji - Satya dekho jaake kaun hai wo aur tum theek ho Prateek...
Main - Ji dadaji main theek hu....
Dadi - Par tum yaha iss waqt kar kya rahe ho...aana tha to Rupal ke saath aa jaate...Nikita to aayi thi uske saath...aur pather kyun fenka tumne apne hi ghar pe...
Chachi - Maa ye aaj bhi ghar pe aaya hoga Apni Didi se milne.....ek din aur aaya tha uss din seedha ghar mein aa gaya tha...mujhe pata chala gaya tha...aaj sayad issi wajah se bahar se pather fenk raha tha jisse kisi ko pata naa chale...Ab batao tum iss waqt kya kaam hai...
Main - Haa Didi se milna tha...par mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch hoga...main bas apko pareshan nahi karna chahta tha....
Chacha - Papa ye to.....wahi hai jiski photo lagi hui thi uss sarkari daftar mein...ye taskari karta hai jeevon ki aur iska yaha aana nishedh hai...
Dadaji - Jaldi se phone karo....
Yaha dadaji uss mote aadmi ko phone karne ki baat kar rahe the....wo ek tarah se Strange world ki taraf se bheja gaya yaah pe ek dutt hai...
Main - Nahi.....wo mere saath hai...
Chachi - Kya matlab tumhare sath hai tum kar kya rahe ho aaj kal...
Main - Mera matlab maine usko pakda hai main usko yaha puch taach ke liye leke aaya hu...
Dadi - Beta kya bole jaa rahe ho....tum thik to ho naa...
Samajh mein nahi aa raha tha mujhe ab kon si kahani banaun main....kaha milla ye aur kya kar raha tha ye.....
thoda haklane ke baad...
Main - ye school ke pass tha....waha pe kisi ka wait kar raha tha.....jab wo aaya isne usko pakadne ki koshish ki par maine isko dekh liya....aur usko baccha liya....fir isko yaha leke aa gaya.....
Chacha - to ye nashe mein ye sab kar raha tha....
Main - haa ye nashe mein tha tabhi to maine isko pakad liya....
CHachi - fir puch taach kya karni isko Strange world bhej dete hai waha se isko sazza sunayi jaayegi...
Main - Nahi main bas...janna chahta tha isne humla kyun kiya...
Dada ji - Par kyun....
Main - wo...wo..
Dadi - bas bahut ho gaya tum sab ka....Satya isko taikhane mein rakh aao....Nidhi iske pass khana aur paani rakh aana....par isse thoda dur...jaha bas ye dekh paaye khaa aur pi naa sake...samjhi....aur aap bahut ho gaya jab se aaya hai mera baccha bas sawal sawal yahi ho raha hai.....isne isko pakda hai isko aur bhi jankari leni hai....ye acchi baat hai....Prateek tum abhi yahi raho subah chale jaana wapas.....aur sham ko wapas aa jaana tab tak ye saare sawalon ka jawab dega...
Dadaji - kya bol rahi ho...
Dadi - bola naa maine....aur strange world ko hi saup denge isko inn sab ke baad....
Dadaji chup ho gaye...aur main Chacha ji ke saath usko uthane chala gaya aur waha se usko taikhane mein laake rakh diya....pahli baar ye jagah dekh raha tha.....kya jagah thi....kulhadi....bhala talwar.....tarah tarah ke kawach...kya kuch nahi the waha....
Main - Chachu ye to kammal ki jagah hai...
Chacha - Haa par ab chalte hai aur jaake room mein so jao...
Main - hmm thik hai...
Main upar chala gaya sone ko...
Kya sota main....3 baj gaye the inn sab mein....haa aankh lagi thi thodi der ke liye aur aaj bhi wahi darwaja saamne tha usko chuwa aur neend khul gayi meri....par jab waqt dekha to mere hosh hi udd gaye....9 Baj rahe the....pahle class ka waqt ho gaya tha mere....aur main ghar mein tha...koi uthane tak nahi aaya tha mujhe....
Main jaldi se taiyaar hua aur room se bahar nikla....
Chachi - Arre aaram se....ab bhag ke kya hoga....class shuru ho chukki hogi....
Main - Aapne uthaya kyun nahi fir...
Chachi -Maa ne manna kiya tha bol rahi thi tum raat ko aaye the...thakke hue hoge...aur ek din school ki padhayi chutt jaane se thodi tum kamzor ho jaaoge...
Main - Par chachi aaj se club mein jaana tha....
Chachi - mujhe sab pata hai....club ki timing sham ko hoti hai.....aur ye baat tumhari Dadi bhi jaanti hai issiliye uthane se manna kiya tha....
Main -
Chachi - wo dono kya yaha thi......wo to Mummy ke yaha thi....kal ghar aayi thi fir waha ka bol ke chali gayi....Nikita School gayi hai yaa nahi ye bhi pata nahi....
Main -
CHachi - Aur main Maa se daant khati.....khana khao jaldi....
Main - Bua ka kya....wo to mujhe hi daantengi unko binna bataye yaha aaya hu........
Chachi - iss baat ke liye to tumko sabse daant padni hai...khair abhi khana khao aur fir nicche aa jaana jo puchna hai puch lena usse....
Main - wo batayega...
Chachi - Haa batayega hi waise bhi tumhare chacha ne acche se khabar li hai uski....aur sayad Papaji bhi gaye the baat karne usse....
Main - hmm theek hai..
Maine khana khaya aur fir nicche jaane laga....tabhi waha didi aa gayi...
Didi - Chotu tu yaha....kuch hua hai kya tujhe....
Main - Nahi to...
Didi - TO yaha kya kar raha hai.....school kyun mein kyun nahi hai tu....
Main - Wo main....wo....
Chachi ne unko sab bataya.....
Didi - tu school ke bahar kya kar raha tha.....raat mein....
Wapas se sawal shuru
Didi - accha wo sab chod kaha hai wo main dekhti hu usko.....
Main - Niche hai...Nikita school gayi kya....
Didi - Wo kyun jaayegi aaj......Bua ne bataya nahi kya ki wo abhi 2 din ki chutti pe hai.....ab wo Monday se jaane wali hai waha.....
Main - Kya....par kyun....kya hua usko...
Didi - arre wo mujhe usse kuch kaam tha....wo meri madad kar rahi hai...aur kuch nahi...
Main - mujhe bata deti aap....
Didi - chup kar.....mujhe bata deti....tujhse nahi hota wo sab....Maa aap isko yahi rakho mai aati hu nicche se....
Main - Maine sawal karne hai usse...
Didi - haa to baad mein kar lena...ab yahi rukko...
Main wahi rukka raha aur wo nicche jaake pata nahi kya karne lag gayi....thodi der baad upar aayi...aur mujhe nicche leke gayi...
Didi - Puccho jo puchna hai....
Main - haa haa par aap jao yaha se....
Didi - Kya matlab hai iska....ab main kahi nahi jaa rahi jo puchna hai yahi puccho...
Main - thik hai....batao wo ladki kon thi jo tumhe maar rahi thi......kya wo insan nahi thi.....
Wo - Kiski baat kar rahe ho tum main kisi ko nahi jaanta jo mujhe maar raha tha...
Didi - Ye kiski baat kar rahe ho tum...
Main - Rukko didi pahle isse puchna hai dekho ye jawab nahi de raha hai....
Didi ne pass padde ek chaku ko uthaya aur usko uske anguli pe de maara.....wo dard se cheekhne laga....
Didi - ab bataoge....
Wo - Haa wo insan hai...
Main - Strange world mein insan kaise pahuchi...
Wo - Maine pahuchaya main usko leke gaya tha yaha se.....
Main - kyun....
Wo kuch nahi bola fir....bilkul chup raha.....
Didi - ye aise nahi sunn raha ha.....
"rukko tum dono....ab koi isko nahi chuega samjhe....sab picche hatto..."
Upar se wahi Mota aadmi bola jisne hunmme Strange world mein bheja tha....pata nahi kaha se aaya tha ye......
"isko leke chalo.....isko sazza wahi milegi...."
Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi upar se chachi ne chup rahne ka ishara kiya....aur hum dono chup ho gaye.....usko leke chale gaye wo sab....hum waise hi usko jaate hue dekhte rahe....
Unke jaane ke baad hum upar gaye....
Didi - Maa ye yaha kaise....
Chachi - Kal tumhare papa ne kaha tha ki uss taskari wale ka earth pe aana manna hai uske yaha aate hi inn sab ko pata chal gaya tha par kyunki wo yaha hamare ghar mein the issliye wo iss waqt aaye hai...naaki raat mein....
Main - Mujhe usse aur bhi batein puchni thi....
Chachi - Ab kuch nahi ho sakta hai....bhool jao usko aur koi aur rasta nikalo pata karne ka...jiss baare mein bhi pata kar rahe the....
Main - haa ab to wahi karna hoga.....Main School jaata hu fir....Bua ke class tak pahuch hi jaaunga...
Chachi - Arre ruk jaao aaj....
Didi - Nahi Maa mujhe bhi isse baat karni hai main isko waha chod ke aati hu....
Binna Chachi ki baat sunne wo leke chal di mujhe....sidhe bus stand ke pass
Didi - kis ladki ki baat kar rahe the aur insani ladki Strange world mein kaise....
Maine didi ko bata diya jo kuch bhi hua tha....jitna unko batana chahiye tha....jaise ki Jwala ke kabile ke pass ye pahuch gaya tha kisi tarah se fir hum strange world gaye aur waha pe ek ladki isko maarne lagi mujhe dekh wo bhag gayi waha se....Main ussi ke baare mein puch raha tha isse...
Didi - par kyun...
Main - Didi wo khatre mein ho sakti hai naa.....
Didi - iss liye....
Itne mein bus aa gayi.....Main bus pe chada aur unko dekhne laga wo wahi rukki hui thi....
Main - aapko nahi chalna kya....
Didi - nahi tum jao....aur wapas se mille wo ladki to mujhse milwana usko samjhe....
Main - par kyun...
Didi - Jitna bola utna karo....
Bus chal padi aur main pahuch gaya school mein....waha se fir ander chala gaya aur abhi class chal rahi thi aur iske baad Bua ki class thi main apne room mein chala gaya thodi der ke liye.....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhenge uss ladki ko....aur chalenge ek nazar apne DB ji pe daalne.. sath hi kuch aur baatein
Mast update bro. Story amazing hai agr esi trh regular update milte rahe to mza hi a jayega story ka. Thank you
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Nayi jagah mill gayi thi humne Strange world ke pass mein hi ulkapindon ke samuh ke pass banayi thi ye nayi jagah jaha saare jeev aa gaye the....aur saath hi unke aas pass ki hcheezin bhi jisse unko pata bhi nahi chalne wala tha wo kab waha aaye....paryaha pe humme ek banda milla jo ki jeevon ki taskari karta tha...pata nahi wo waha kaise aa gaya tha....usko jab strange world leke aye to waha ek ladki aa jatti hai Insan thi wo usko magic bhi aata tha
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Wo ladki usko maare jaa rahi thi...Main ladki ko dekhe jaa raha tha....isko dekh ke aisa laga jaise pahle bhi milla hu isse.....yahi aas pass kahi....
Nikita ke sath ek baar jab yaha ghoom raha tha Elf Kingdom mein jaane ke liye tab....tab bhi aisa hi laga tha jaisa ab lag raha tha....par ye pata nahi tha ki kyun........
Old Owl - Wo usko maar degi roko usko.....
Dhruv - Aee pagal hai kya....dekh kya raha hai wotere samne usko maare jaa rahi hai....pata to kar kyun maar rahi hai......
Ye dono bole jaa rahe the par mujhe sunayi hi nahi de raha tha......
Ye insan...kitne aje...nahi nahi sunder hote hai....isko hi dekh lo......uss bande ko maarte hue kitni sunder lag rahi thi ye.....gusse se lal sakal.....aankhon mein thode aashu.....hawa mein jhulte hue baal..........aur uske wo pair...jisse wo usko maare jaa rahi thi.....
Old Owl - wo maar degi usko.....
Iss baar wo saamne aa gaya tha.....aur uski aawaj ladki ne bhi suni...aur wo uski oor dekhne lagi.....sayad isne bahut se ajeeb jeev dekhe honge par abhi uske saamne ek bada sa ullu tha jo bol raha tha.....wo thoda chauki aur picche chali gayi...
Main - Kon ho tum...aur yaha kaise....
Sayad andhera tha iss wajah se usne mujhe uss waqt Strange world ka hi koi banda samajh liya hoga...waise Main insano ki tarah hi dikhta hu..Mom ke karan sayad....khair...usne dhyaan se mujhe dekha...fir Old Owl ko....aur fir waha se bhag gayi.....chilate hue...
Ye samajh mein nahi aaya aakhir hua kya....itne der se mere hi saamne usko koote jaa rahi thi tab kuch nahi....aur ab dekha to aise bhagi jaise puccho mat...sayad Old Owl ki wajah se.....haa aur kya.....wo dekhne mein bhi darawna hai raat ko aur darawna lagta hoga upar se bolta bhi hai dar hi jaayega koi bhi....
Maine Old Owl ki taraf dekhte hue ye sab socha....
Old Owl - dekh kya rahe ho aise.....wo bhag gayi....aur isko dekho kaisi haalat ho gayi hai iski...iska kya karna hai.....
Main - kya karna hai iska....tum pahle ek kaam karo uss ladki ke picche lag jaao yaa laga do kisi ko mujhe uske baare mein sab janna hai.....
Old Owl - Aur Elf king unka kya.....
Main - Haa to kaha naa khud jao yaa kisi aur ko bhejo par iss ladki ke baare mein sab janna hai mujhe....
Old Owl - thik hai....
Main - Jwala Portal kholo...ek mehmaan aa raha hai....uska dhyaan rakhna hai....
Usne portal khola main uss taskari karne wale ko utha ke usse ander leke gaya....
Jwala - Isko wapas kyun leke aa gaye....
Main - isse pucch taach karni hai....tumme se kisi ko aata hai kya ye karna....
Jwala - Puch taach...hum ye sab nahi karte....
Polar bear king - Hum bhi inn sab mein waqt barbaad nahi karte....
Main - pata nahi kon hai ye sab....inko puch taach nahi karni aati....isko Earth pe leke jaaun kya....yaa yahi rahne du....
Maine kuch der socha aur fir isko Earth pe le jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya waha pe log mil hi jaayenge jo isse puch taach karenge aur unki madad se main pata kar paunga uss ladki ke baare mein....pata nahi kyun...par uska wo gusse se bhara chahra meri aakhon ke saamne se hat hi nahi raha tha....
Main - Jwala main isko ghar leke jaunga...waha iski khabar lenge....tum...ek kaam karo... Old Owl se ek baar baat kar lena maine usko kisi ke picche jaane ko kaha hai....wo agar kabhi bhi khatre mein ho usko bachana hai aur mujhe batana bhi hai samjhe...
Jwala - ab ye kon nayi aa gayi....
Main - Pata nahi ussi ka pata karna hai....waise mujhe tumse Bijli ke baare mein baat karni hai....wo theek nahi lag rahi thi...
Jwala - Wo....wo thodi problem hai iss wajah se...
Main - Haa to wahi to puch raha hu...kya pareshani hai....usse milna nahi hua bahut waqt se aur abhi uss din milla to wo pareshan lag rahi thi...
Jwala(hadbadate hue) mujhe pata nahi.....tumko jaana hai naa main portal khol raha hu....mujhe bhi yaha kaam hai....
Main samajh nahi paaya ye kya tha ye bata kyun nahi raha kuch aur wo bhi kuch nahi bata rahi thi....
Main usko leke Portal mein chala gaya aur waha se fir Earth pe....apne ghar ke pass aa gaya....
Waise maine socha tha Didi ke hotel mein rakhne ke liye isko...waha Didi bhi hogi aur unko to aata hi hoga puchtaach karna...par usse pahle Didi se puchna hoga lekin ab samajh nahi aa raha tha isko aise sadak pe chod ke ghar mein jaake didi se pucchu kaise....
Maine ek chota sa pather liya aur didi ke room ki taraf fenka...mujhe kya pata tha isse ek dhamaka hi ho jaayega....
Chota sa dhamaka ho gaya...aur uski wajah thi hamare ghar ke aas pass laga hua kawach....raat ke waqt ke liye....jisse koi ander naa jaa sake...kahi aur se...siway darwaje ke...
Dhamake ke karan sab uth gaye....aur main pagalon sa khada apne iss kaam ke baare mein soch raha tha...Dhruv mujhpe has raha tha...
Ghar se sabhi bahar aa gaye...Bua thi nahi baaki sab ghar pe hi the...sab aa gaye bahar...par Didi aur Nikita nahi aaye..........
Dekho to bhala jinse kaam tha unhi ka pata nahi humko.....
Khair...
Dadi ne sabse pahle mujhe dekha.....wo mere pass aayi...aur unke picche picche baaki sab bhi....
Chachi - tum yaha iss waqt kya kar rahe ho....
Main - Wo....wo main bas aise hi aa gaya tha.....
Chacha ji - WO kon hai.....aur usko bandha hua kyun hai....
Dadaji - Satya dekho jaake kaun hai wo aur tum theek ho Prateek...
Main - Ji dadaji main theek hu....
Dadi - Par tum yaha iss waqt kar kya rahe ho...aana tha to Rupal ke saath aa jaate...Nikita to aayi thi uske saath...aur pather kyun fenka tumne apne hi ghar pe...
Chachi - Maa ye aaj bhi ghar pe aaya hoga Apni Didi se milne.....ek din aur aaya tha uss din seedha ghar mein aa gaya tha...mujhe pata chala gaya tha...aaj sayad issi wajah se bahar se pather fenk raha tha jisse kisi ko pata naa chale...Ab batao tum iss waqt kya kaam hai...
Main - Haa Didi se milna tha...par mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch hoga...main bas apko pareshan nahi karna chahta tha....
Chacha - Papa ye to.....wahi hai jiski photo lagi hui thi uss sarkari daftar mein...ye taskari karta hai jeevon ki aur iska yaha aana nishedh hai...
Dadaji - Jaldi se phone karo....
Yaha dadaji uss mote aadmi ko phone karne ki baat kar rahe the....wo ek tarah se Strange world ki taraf se bheja gaya yaah pe ek dutt hai...
Main - Nahi.....wo mere saath hai...
Chachi - Kya matlab tumhare sath hai tum kar kya rahe ho aaj kal...
Main - Mera matlab maine usko pakda hai main usko yaha puch taach ke liye leke aaya hu...
Dadi - Beta kya bole jaa rahe ho....tum thik to ho naa...
Samajh mein nahi aa raha tha mujhe ab kon si kahani banaun main....kaha milla ye aur kya kar raha tha ye.....
thoda haklane ke baad...
Main - ye school ke pass tha....waha pe kisi ka wait kar raha tha.....jab wo aaya isne usko pakadne ki koshish ki par maine isko dekh liya....aur usko baccha liya....fir isko yaha leke aa gaya.....
Chacha - to ye nashe mein ye sab kar raha tha....
Main - haa ye nashe mein tha tabhi to maine isko pakad liya....
CHachi - fir puch taach kya karni isko Strange world bhej dete hai waha se isko sazza sunayi jaayegi...
Main - Nahi main bas...janna chahta tha isne humla kyun kiya...
Dada ji - Par kyun....
Main - wo...wo..
Dadi - bas bahut ho gaya tum sab ka....Satya isko taikhane mein rakh aao....Nidhi iske pass khana aur paani rakh aana....par isse thoda dur...jaha bas ye dekh paaye khaa aur pi naa sake...samjhi....aur aap bahut ho gaya jab se aaya hai mera baccha bas sawal sawal yahi ho raha hai.....isne isko pakda hai isko aur bhi jankari leni hai....ye acchi baat hai....Prateek tum abhi yahi raho subah chale jaana wapas.....aur sham ko wapas aa jaana tab tak ye saare sawalon ka jawab dega...
Dadaji - kya bol rahi ho...
Dadi - bola naa maine....aur strange world ko hi saup denge isko inn sab ke baad....
Dadaji chup ho gaye...aur main Chacha ji ke saath usko uthane chala gaya aur waha se usko taikhane mein laake rakh diya....pahli baar ye jagah dekh raha tha.....kya jagah thi....kulhadi....bhala talwar.....tarah tarah ke kawach...kya kuch nahi the waha....
Main - Chachu ye to kammal ki jagah hai...
Chacha - Haa par ab chalte hai aur jaake room mein so jao...
Main - hmm thik hai...
Main upar chala gaya sone ko...
Kya sota main....3 baj gaye the inn sab mein....haa aankh lagi thi thodi der ke liye aur aaj bhi wahi darwaja saamne tha usko chuwa aur neend khul gayi meri....par jab waqt dekha to mere hosh hi udd gaye....9 Baj rahe the....pahle class ka waqt ho gaya tha mere....aur main ghar mein tha...koi uthane tak nahi aaya tha mujhe....
Main jaldi se taiyaar hua aur room se bahar nikla....
Chachi - Arre aaram se....ab bhag ke kya hoga....class shuru ho chukki hogi....
Main - Aapne uthaya kyun nahi fir...
Chachi -Maa ne manna kiya tha bol rahi thi tum raat ko aaye the...thakke hue hoge...aur ek din school ki padhayi chutt jaane se thodi tum kamzor ho jaaoge...
Main - Par chachi aaj se club mein jaana tha....
Chachi - mujhe sab pata hai....club ki timing sham ko hoti hai.....aur ye baat tumhari Dadi bhi jaanti hai issiliye uthane se manna kiya tha....
Main -
Chachi - wo dono kya yaha thi......wo to Mummy ke yaha thi....kal ghar aayi thi fir waha ka bol ke chali gayi....Nikita School gayi hai yaa nahi ye bhi pata nahi....
Main -
CHachi - Aur main Maa se daant khati.....khana khao jaldi....
Main - Bua ka kya....wo to mujhe hi daantengi unko binna bataye yaha aaya hu........
Chachi - iss baat ke liye to tumko sabse daant padni hai...khair abhi khana khao aur fir nicche aa jaana jo puchna hai puch lena usse....
Main - wo batayega...
Chachi - Haa batayega hi waise bhi tumhare chacha ne acche se khabar li hai uski....aur sayad Papaji bhi gaye the baat karne usse....
Main - hmm theek hai..
Maine khana khaya aur fir nicche jaane laga....tabhi waha didi aa gayi...
Didi - Chotu tu yaha....kuch hua hai kya tujhe....
Main - Nahi to...
Didi - TO yaha kya kar raha hai.....school kyun mein kyun nahi hai tu....
Main - Wo main....wo....
Chachi ne unko sab bataya.....
Didi - tu school ke bahar kya kar raha tha.....raat mein....
Wapas se sawal shuru
Didi - accha wo sab chod kaha hai wo main dekhti hu usko.....
Main - Niche hai...Nikita school gayi kya....
Didi - Wo kyun jaayegi aaj......Bua ne bataya nahi kya ki wo abhi 2 din ki chutti pe hai.....ab wo Monday se jaane wali hai waha.....
Main - Kya....par kyun....kya hua usko...
Didi - arre wo mujhe usse kuch kaam tha....wo meri madad kar rahi hai...aur kuch nahi...
Main - mujhe bata deti aap....
Didi - chup kar.....mujhe bata deti....tujhse nahi hota wo sab....Maa aap isko yahi rakho mai aati hu nicche se....
Main - Maine sawal karne hai usse...
Didi - haa to baad mein kar lena...ab yahi rukko...
Main wahi rukka raha aur wo nicche jaake pata nahi kya karne lag gayi....thodi der baad upar aayi...aur mujhe nicche leke gayi...
Didi - Puccho jo puchna hai....
Main - haa haa par aap jao yaha se....
Didi - Kya matlab hai iska....ab main kahi nahi jaa rahi jo puchna hai yahi puccho...
Main - thik hai....batao wo ladki kon thi jo tumhe maar rahi thi......kya wo insan nahi thi.....
Wo - Kiski baat kar rahe ho tum main kisi ko nahi jaanta jo mujhe maar raha tha...
Didi - Ye kiski baat kar rahe ho tum...
Main - Rukko didi pahle isse puchna hai dekho ye jawab nahi de raha hai....
Didi ne pass padde ek chaku ko uthaya aur usko uske anguli pe de maara.....wo dard se cheekhne laga....
Didi - ab bataoge....
Wo - Haa wo insan hai...
Main - Strange world mein insan kaise pahuchi...
Wo - Maine pahuchaya main usko leke gaya tha yaha se.....
Main - kyun....
Wo kuch nahi bola fir....bilkul chup raha.....
Didi - ye aise nahi sunn raha ha.....
"rukko tum dono....ab koi isko nahi chuega samjhe....sab picche hatto..."
Upar se wahi Mota aadmi bola jisne hunmme Strange world mein bheja tha....pata nahi kaha se aaya tha ye......
"isko leke chalo.....isko sazza wahi milegi...."
Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi upar se chachi ne chup rahne ka ishara kiya....aur hum dono chup ho gaye.....usko leke chale gaye wo sab....hum waise hi usko jaate hue dekhte rahe....
Unke jaane ke baad hum upar gaye....
Didi - Maa ye yaha kaise....
Chachi - Kal tumhare papa ne kaha tha ki uss taskari wale ka earth pe aana manna hai uske yaha aate hi inn sab ko pata chal gaya tha par kyunki wo yaha hamare ghar mein the issliye wo iss waqt aaye hai...naaki raat mein....
Main - Mujhe usse aur bhi batein puchni thi....
Chachi - Ab kuch nahi ho sakta hai....bhool jao usko aur koi aur rasta nikalo pata karne ka...jiss baare mein bhi pata kar rahe the....
Main - haa ab to wahi karna hoga.....Main School jaata hu fir....Bua ke class tak pahuch hi jaaunga...
Chachi - Arre ruk jaao aaj....
Didi - Nahi Maa mujhe bhi isse baat karni hai main isko waha chod ke aati hu....
Binna Chachi ki baat sunne wo leke chal di mujhe....sidhe bus stand ke pass
Didi - kis ladki ki baat kar rahe the aur insani ladki Strange world mein kaise....
Maine didi ko bata diya jo kuch bhi hua tha....jitna unko batana chahiye tha....jaise ki Jwala ke kabile ke pass ye pahuch gaya tha kisi tarah se fir hum strange world gaye aur waha pe ek ladki isko maarne lagi mujhe dekh wo bhag gayi waha se....Main ussi ke baare mein puch raha tha isse...
Didi - par kyun...
Main - Didi wo khatre mein ho sakti hai naa.....
Didi - iss liye....
Itne mein bus aa gayi.....Main bus pe chada aur unko dekhne laga wo wahi rukki hui thi....
Main - aapko nahi chalna kya....
Didi - nahi tum jao....aur wapas se mille wo ladki to mujhse milwana usko samjhe....
Main - par kyun...
Didi - Jitna bola utna karo....
Bus chal padi aur main pahuch gaya school mein....waha se fir ander chala gaya aur abhi class chal rahi thi aur iske baad Bua ki class thi main apne room mein chala gaya thodi der ke liye.....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhenge uss ladki ko....aur chalenge ek nazar apne DB ji pe daalne.. sath hi kuch aur baatein
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Nice update bhaiUPDATE -56
Ab tak
Clubs mein intro ho gaya tha hum dono ka par.....isme bhi ek baar Didi aur Pankaj ke bich thodi kaha sunni hui...khair iske baad Nikita Didi ke saath ghar chali gayi....wahi main Jwala ke pass jaa pahucha kyunki ab uske thikane ke baare mein pata chal chukka tha logo ko....humne ek plan banaya ki uss jagah ko Daanavon ka thikana dikha denge jiske baad sab chale jaayenge...par Demos ke log kuch jyada hi jiddi nikle aur unko bhagane ke liye mujhe AAlbus aur Cooper ki madad leni padi....
Ab aage
Ye aasan nahi hone wala tha....humko turant hi waha se nikalna padega...Dragon ki khabar aag ki tarah failegi....upar se wo dark power ki baatein...ab to waha rahne ka koi matlab hi nahi tha.....
Dhurv -Sabko yaha se nikalna hoga....
Main - haa jaanta hu main.....par ye sab jaayenge kya.....
Dhruv - jaayenge jarur jaayenge.....tum baat karo inse....
Main - Jwala sayad tum bhi samajh rahe hoge ab kya hone wala hai....
Jwala abhi apne aas pass apne logo ko hi dekh raha tha.....pata nahi kya soch raha tha wo....
Main - Jwala tum sun rahe ho naa...
Itne mein Jwala ki Mom waha aati hai...
J.Mom - haa wo samajh raha hai sab....bas thoda pareshan hai.....humme yaha se nikalna hoga.....sabko....
Main - haa sabko nikalna hoga....aur isme Jwala ko hi sabko batana hoga.....
J.Mom Jwala ke pass jaati hai....wahi main thodi der unki oor dekhta hu fir aage ke baare mein sochne lagta hu.....
Main(mann mein) - Old Owl ke log uske kahe binna sayad naa jaaye yaha se.....mujhe usko yaha bulana hoga....
Maine Old Owl ko bualaya....par wo aaya nahi...
Old Owl - Bataiye...kya baat hai...
Main - Tumhe abhi yaha aana chahiye.....
Old Owl - Nahi main nahi aa sakta abhi...aap bataiye kya kaam hai main kisi ko bhej deta hu....
Main - ye bas tumse hi hoga...
Old Owl - Arre mere log bahut kabil hai.....aap bataiye to....
Maine usko yaha jo kuch bhi hua sab bata diya.....isko sunne ke baad wo kuch der to chup raha fir usne kaha....
Old owl - sabhi ko hatana hoga waha se.....jungle mein bhi bahut se jeev hai....unko bhi....
Main - Par unko kaise...hum waha jaa bhi nahi sakte.....
Old Owl - Pura jungle hata do...par koi bhi prajati khatam nahi honi chahiye aur naa hi kisi baahari ko dikhni chahiye.....
Main - Tumhe yaha aana chahiye....hum kuch karenge....
Old Owl - Tum unn sab ko dekho....main koi jagah dhundhta hu....jaha sabko rakha jaa sakke......
Dhruv - Uski baat bhi sahi hai par dikkat ye hai ki ye ho nahi sakta....hum kaise pure jungle ko yaha se hata denge.....aur wo jagah jaha se tumhare ander se wo Dark power nikli thi uska kya...
Main - Main kya bataun kuch samajh aaye tab naa....
Polar bear king - Humme yaha se jaana hoga.....
Main - haa main jaanta hu...aur main issi baare mein soch raha hu ki kaise jaaye....
King - tumne hamare baare mein sunna to hoga hi....agar hum aur ye pheonix mil jaaye to bahut kuch kar sakte hai....
Main - Haa jaanta hu.....par tum sab miloge hi nahi kabhi....to iss baare mein sochna hi bekar hai..
King - Main taiyaar hu....aur mujhe wo tarika bhi pata hai jisse hum apne liye ek naya ghar bana sakte hai....
Main - kya matlab hai iska.....
King - Kya lagta hai iss jagah ko kaise banaya gaya tha....humne banaya tha matlab hamare purvajon ne...aur ab jab ye khatam hone jaa raha hai to humko isko aur iske saath saath baaki ke jeevon ko bhi yaha se nikalna hoga...aur wo bhi unko binna pata chale.....
Main - kaise hoga ye.....
King - Kabile ke sardaar ko bulao.....
Main - Jwala yaha aao ye hamari madad kar sakte hai....
Jwala apni Maa se baat kar raha tha....usne meri oor dekha...aur fir mere pass aaya...
Jwala - haa batao....
Main - Ye bol raha hai agar tum dono chaho to ye puri jagah hi kahi aur chali jaayegi....
Jwala - Puri jagah ke saath saath wo jungle ka hissa bhi jiskke liye ye sab yaha aaye hai.....
Polar bear king - Haa thik waisa hi hoga....bas tumhe mera saath dena hoga....
Jwala - Batao kya karna hai mujhe......
king - apne kuch logo ko jaake bolo jungle ke uss hisse ke pass jaaye aur waha pe ek ghera banaya.......mere log bhi waha pahuchte honge.....tumhe unse kahna hai ki jab mere log barf ka use kare tab wo fire ka use karee....isse waha ke vatavaran mein asantulan aa jaayega par ye bas ussi bhag mein hona chahiye...jab ye ho raha hoga tab tum aur main wo karenge jisse ye puri jagah hi yaha se kahi aur chali jaayegi....aur rahi baat unn jeevon ki to wo ussi jagah se waha pe pahuch jaayenge aha pe hamare log asantulan paida karne wale hai.....wo ek bada sa portal ban jayega jo sabhi chizon ko khinch lega apni taraf....
Main - Kahi isse aisa kuch to nahi hoga naa ki jungle ke jeev waha se bahar aa jaayenge........
King - Nahi unko pata bhi nahi chalega kuch aur ye portal bhi koi aam portal nahi hone wala isse waves niklengi aur uske chapet mein jaise hi koi aayega wo waha se gayab ho jaayega matlab teleport ho jaayega..
Jwala - fir wo jagah kyun nahi hogi jiski wajah se ye sab ho raha hai.....
King - Mashal ke nicche hi andhera hota hai......wo portal us jagah pe hoga issi wajah se wo waisa ka waisa hi rahega......
Main - Inn daanavon ka kya......
King - Ye inpe hai jaisa ye chahe....
Jwala - tum unse baat karo main iske saath saari taiyaari karta hu........par hum jaayenge kaha.......
King - yahi sawal mera bhi tha...hum kahi bhi jaa sakte hai par accha hoga koi shant jagah dhundhe jaha koi aata jaata naa ho.....
Main - Old Owl issi kaam mein laga hua hai.....main usse baat karta rahunga jaise hi usko ko jagah milegi tum ye shuru kar dena......
Main itna bolne ke baad unn daanavon ke pass gaya.....aur wo sab apna kaam karne lage......
Main - suniye hum sab yaah se jaane wale hai.....kya aap yaha rahoge yaa hamare saath jaaoge......
D- Hum kahi bhi rah sakte hai....waise bhi ye agah humme pasand aa gayi hai...hum yahi rahna chahte hai.....
Main - theek hai par iske liye aap sab ko kuch waqt ke liye yaha se jaana hoga....
D - jaisa tum kaho.......
Wo yaha rahne ko taiyaar the aur ye ek tarah se accha bhi tha.......Bahar ke logo ne daanavon ko dekha tha yaha to agar ye yahi rahe to accha hoga..
Sab apne apne kaam mein lage hue the......humme issi raat ko sab kam khatam karna tha.......
Old Owl se meri baat ho rahi thi wo Strange world ke aas pass hi dekh raha tha nayi jagah ko......aur kuch der mein usko wo mil gayi....waha pass mein hi ek khali jagah thi jiske charo taraf ulkapind the....waha koi aata jaata bhi nahi tha.....aur agar galti se koi chala bhi jaaye to hum to adrishya hi rahenge naa to unko dikhenge hi nahi.......
Old Owl ne jaise hi mujhe uss jagah ka pata bataya maine bhi usko sab samjha diya....
Old Owl - Main portal khol raha hu.........waha se kuch logo ko idhar bhej dena...yaha bhi wo kaam mei lag jaayenge.....
Maine waisa hi kiya......aur fir kya tha sabse pahle to daanavon ko uss jagah se bahar kiya....taaki wo bhi naa teleport hi jaaye....fir Jwala aur Polar bear king ne apna kaam shuru kiya....aur dekhte hi dekhte ek bahut bada sa portal nban gaya par wo horizontal tha matlab jamen pe....theek jungle ke uss hisse mein jaha pe Dark power release hui thi mujhse......
Kuch hi der mein uske ander se tarangein nikalne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte charo taraf phailne lagi.....
Main - ye ped paude kya ye bhi waha chale jaayenge...
Dhruv - Aisa kuch maine pahle kabhi nahi dekha to main bata nahi sakta......
King - saare nahi.......bas wo jinke ass pass koi jeev ho...nayi jagah pe jungle humme khud banana hoga....yaa fir e kaam ye jeev khud kar lenge.....
Main - isme koi dikkat to nahi hogi naa.....
King - Nahi....aur waise bhi bahari logo ko kaha pata hai ki yaha jungle thi....agar pura jungle chala bhi jaaye to koi pareshani nahi hogi.....
Main bas unko apna kaam karte dekhte raha......usme se j tarange aa rahi thi wo pahle to charo taraf phail rahi thi uske baad wapas aa rahi thi.....wahi Old Owl ke pass....wahi tarangein wapas se phail rahi thi....aur saath mein laa rahi thi apne saath yaha ki chizzen...
dekhte dekhte hamari taraf se log gayab hone lag gaye aur unki taraf pahuchne lage......
Pahle se jo log waha the wo uss ilake ko adrishya banane mein lage hue the....
Kareeb 2 ghante tak aisa chala hoga....aur fir wo portal khud band ho gaya aur iss side sirf Main Jwala King aur wo daanav the jo ki inn sab se dur khade hue the.....
Main unke pass gaya unko bataya ki sab ho chukka hai aur unko wapas aane ko bol diya....aur ander aane ke baad maine Jwala se portal kholne ko kaha aur usme se hote hue hum tinno apni nayi jagah pe pahucha gaye........yaha sab ussi tarah ka tha....kyuni jeevon ke saath saath unke aas pass ke chizzen bhi waha se yaha aa gayi thi......wo Jwalamukhi tak yaha aa chukka tha aur uske upar bane ghosle aur unke upar ke ande bhi...par saath hi saath wo saare chamgadar bhi aa chukke the Polar bear Kabile ke saath sath....matlab abhi bhi wo sab apne ghar nahi jaa sakte the...
inn sab mein Old Owl ke logo ko thodi pareshani hui thi....unko apne ghar wapas se banane pad rahe the....sabhi ke ghar waha se yaha nahi aa paaye the....wo teleport hoke purane jagah pe jaate waha se apna saman yaha leke aa rahe the...
Main - Old Owl yaha sab theek hai naa....
Old Owl - haa sab sahi hai...iss jagah pe sayad hi koi aata hoga aur maine sabse pahle iss ilake ko hi ad...
Wo ye bol hi raha tha ki mujhe saamne se ek banda aata hua dikha jo sayad nashe mein tha....Insan to hoga nahi wo...pata nahi kon si prajati thi ye.....chahre pe ajeeb se daane the uske...
Main - Ye kon hai..
Old Owl - pata nahi....
Jwala - Isko khatam karna hoga....
Main - Nahi dekho isko ye nashe mein hai isko main iske jagah tak chod ke aata hu....
King - Isne sab dekh liya hai ye khatarnak hai,,...humme wapas se jagah badalni pad sakti hai....
Main - wo nashe mein hai abhi....Jwala tum portal kholo.....Old Owl isko dhyaan se dekho aur batao iss prajati ke log kaha rahte hai Strange world mein...
Old Owl usko dekhne laga....Jwala ne Portal khol diya....
Old Owl - Elf Kingdom se thodi hi duri pe rahte hia inn jaise log...isko dekha hua hai maine kahi pe...
Main - Yaad karo....hum isko wahi chod aayenge,....
Old Owl pahle isko waha leke chalte hai abhi acche se yaad nahi aa raha kaha dekha hai sayad waha yaad aa jaaye....
Portal khula tha Uske anderr Old Owl ne apna ek pankh dala jisse wo wahi khulta jaha Old Owl chahta....
Hum tinno ander chale gaye......Main Old Owl aur wo banda...
Hum yaha pe ek nadi ke kinare the....
Main - Yaha pe rahte hai aise log....
Old Owl - Haa yahi kahi rahte hai...maine dekha tha....aur isko main jaanta hu...kahi dekha tha isko....
Main yaad karo fir....
Usne apne dimmag pe jor daala aur mujhe usse dur kar diya.....
Main - kya kar rahe ho....
Old Owl - Ye....ye jeevon ki taskari karta hai....yaha se waha....isko maine Elf Kingdom ke jail mein dekha tha...par ye bahar kaise nikla...
Main - Kya ye taskari karta hai...
Old Owl - Haa yahi sunna tha maine......ye dusre planets se jeev utha ke laata hai aur unhe bech deta hai....isko wapas se jail mein bhejna sahi hoga....
"ye kahi nahi jaayega....jab tak mujhe mere sawalon ke jawab nahi mil jaate.."
Ek ladki ki aawaj aayi aur main aur old owl chaunk gaye....Old Owl chupp gaya...adrishya ho gaya....
Aur fir ek ladki aayi.....insan yaha pe
Mujhe ye samajh hi nahi aa raha tha....
Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha....
Wo mere pass aayi uss bande ko gardan se pakda....aur khinchte hue leke gayi ek ped ke pass....aur usko bandh diya.......isko magic bhi aati hai
kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha....
Main - tum kon ho aur yaha kaise....tum to...insan lag rahi ho....
Mere muh se aisa sunne ke baad usne meri oor dekha...
Fir uss bande ko maarne lagi...
"Kaha se laaye the mujhe yaha....kaha hai mera parivar...."
Aise hi bolte hue wo usko maarti rahi...aur main dekhta raha........
Abhi ke liye itna kaafi hai....next update mein dekhte hai ki ye madam kon hai....aur ye yaha kaise aa pahuchi....aur Magic kaise aata hai isko.......
ye kal ka update hai aaj wala thodi der mein deta hu