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Bhai shayed aap pichle kai update thik se padha nhi hai....or nix kaabile me kya hua wo bhi....kyu ki waha jo bhi hia jo usko samajh payega to apke ye sawal ka jawab use mil jayega....or Prateek or madhu ka purnjanam kyu hua hai ye bhi...apko ek baat bata deta hu....nix kaabile me jis murti ka puja kiyaa jata tha wahi story ke main villain hai...or usko ek mouka mila tha achhai ka rashta chunne ke liye par wo burai ka rashta chuna or madhu ko apni baal par khud ka karna chahta hai abhi or Prateek ko madhu ke pash nhi jane deta hai....or pichhe murti me jo hai wo gaddaribki hai tabhi to Prateek or madhu alag hua....or mueti me jo hai usko khatam karne ke liye fir se Prateek ek sarir me aaya hai or apko pata hogai ki immoral kabhi marte nhi....To aakhir viraj ki entry ho gyi h sath me prateek ko aaj us sachai ka bhi pta chl jaayega jiske liye wo yaha h aur uski abhi tk itni dekhbhal se rkha tha master ne slayer ke liye...lgta h bin maqsad ki uski zindgi me ab sayd kuchh maqsad aajaye...dekhte h viraj prateek ko kya kya btata h...aur uske baad prateek kya krta h...kyuki slayer bhi koi aasan opponent nhi h ..lucifer tk usko srf hila paya tha..to itna aasan to h nhi ki slayer ke paas abhi pahuch jaye prateek aur use khatam kr de.. Dusra karan fumos bhi h jo slayer ko additional power de skta h kbhi bhi unki madad se wo aur powerfull ho jayega...wahi prateek abhi utna powerfull bhi nhi h abhi to iss mortal jeevan me ...abhi usko aur strong bnna h...aur sayd srf itna hi kuchh nhi h uske maqsad me aakhir kisi karanvash hi to prateek ka punarjanam hua hoga...srf slayer hi uski wajha nhi ho skti h...slayer to uske iss janam me aaya h purv me to bahut rahasya h ki aakhir wajha kya thi ye sab hone ki...chliye intzaar h agle update ka brother
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Nice update bhai waiting for next updateUPDATE - 94
Hum ghar pe the.......Main aur Rupal didi bich mein baithe the.......aas pass sabhi khade the aur baithe the......
Chachi - dono ke dono ander gaye hi kyun.......kya jarurat thi jaane ki......
Didi - waha pe aawajein aa rahi thi.......humme laga.......sayd koi musibat mein hai.......hum aise kaise.....usko rahne dete.....
unhone mujhe bachane ko jhoot bol diya.......Maine aisa to nahi socha tha.......
Chachi - kya tumhe nahi laga wo wahi saitaan hoga.......kya milla tha ander koi.......wo insan milla tha kya......
Chachi - ussi ke wajah se to behosh hui main......tu chup kyun baitha hai bata jaldi.......
Main -main.....wo.....hmmm......haa ussi se.....ussi hua tha.....ye sab ussi ki wajah se hua tha......
Dadi - to wo insan kaha gaya......kahi usko.......
Didi - Nahi wo to waha se bhag gaya........ander ki taraf........wo camera leke aaya tha sayad wo bhoot dekhne aaya ho.....aur humko dekh ke wo bhag gaya.....par jaane se pahle usne...... tu chup kyun hai bolega.......baitha hai aise hi......Mummy main jaa rahi hu mera sar dard kar raha hai......Mujhe sona hai......
Chachi - baitho chup chap kya lagta hai sab mann lungi main......Kavita isko check karo jarra......
Didi - Haa ye sahi hai......har waqt check karte jaao ye Doctor ko issi ke liye to rakha hai ghar mein naa........thoda der hua Rupal ko check karo......mujhe nahi karana kuch......
Wo jhootha gussa dikha ke waha se nikal li........ab main bacha tha sirf.......
Chachi - isko main baad mein dekhungi.....tum batao.....kya kya hua tha waha pe........aur dhyaan rahe......jo bhi bologe wo sab usse confirm karaungi.....agar dono ki baatein alag hui.....to samajh lena......
Maine bas unki hi baatein batayi thoda badha chadha ke......aur phir main bhi waha se khishak liya.......
Bua - Kavita tu uski baaton ka bur.......
K.Bua - kya bol rahi hai......uski baaton ka bura kaise lag sakta hai......wo bhi to apni hi hai naa......tu bhi.....Bhabhi isko check karu kya.....mujhe isme bhi dikkat lag rahi hai......
Bua - jyada udd mat......samjhi.....
Maine dekha ye log khud mein lage hue hai main waha se nikal gaya.......
Bahar aaya tha main.......mujhe iss waqt uss Rian se baat karna tha.......uss Old Owl ke baare mein uska kaam kiya yaa nahi........
Maine usko ek do baar aawaj di......par aaya hi nahi wo........ek number ka chutiya hai ye bhi.......Immortals mein sayad ye sabse bewakoof ho......par jitna ye bewakoof hai iski muhboli bahenwo utni hi chalak thi.......
Ab ye aaya nahi to main chal diya aise hi aas pass ghumne ko wo bhi binna kisi ko bataye.........
Ghar pe Bua sabko wo sab bata rahi thi jo kuch din pahle hua tha.......hamara Strange world mein chale jaana waha pe Nix logo ka alag ho jaana......ye sab.......
Unhone iske baare mein bahut socha ki bataya jaaye yaa naa jaaye......par jab unhone mera behaviour dekha to ek tarah se unko laga ki sayad isse problem ho sakti hai.......to aage kuch bura naa ho iske liye wo sabko batana hi sahi samjhi.......par bas utna h jo pata hona chahiye.......haa Madhu ke baare mein bhi bata diya inhone jo bhi inko pata tha.......
Chachi - Matlab kya hai......ye pichle janam jaisa hai kya kuch......
Bua - Pujari ji ne jaisa kaha tha usse to mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai Bhabhi.......bas aap sab thoda usko ab bado jaisa treat karna.......
Dadi - wo ladki kaun hai......usko dekha hai naa tunne.......
Bua - Haa main usko.......ye aap abhi se kya leke baith gayi......
Dadi - Kya leke baith gayi se kya matlab hai......ab khud ki bhi age dekho......kya pata agar tumhare bhatije ki shadi ho jaaye to tumhara dimmag khule ki tumko bhi kar lena chahiye......
Bua - Maaa........kya kabhi bhi kuch bhi shuru kar deti ho.......
K.Bua - Kya bol rahi hai......sahi to kaha inhone.......ab umar ho gayi hai teri.......
Chachi chay ka pyaala apne honton se lagate hue......
Chachi - waise umar to tumhari bhi ho gayi hai.......kaho to tumhare yaha iski khabar de du.......
K.Bua ki aankhen ek dum se badi ho gayi......wo ekdum Chachi ko dekhne lagi.......
Bua - hmm ye bhi sahi hai Bhabhi......
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha,......Main aaj wapas se jaake baitha hua tha park mein......ab ghar jaa nahi sakta tha main......to bas waise hi baitha uske ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha ki sayad.......galti se......bas ek baar......wo dikh jaaye.....aur main usko dekhu......kass wo rukk jati......waise hi kisi murat ki tarah....aur main bas usko dekhta rahta........
"aaee Bacche tum yaha......"
pata nahi kaun tha......pahle to maine ignore maara.......par wo mere pass aa gaya.....jab dekha usko to wo leader tha.......
Leader - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho......
Main - tumse matlab.......
Leader - dekho uss din jaan naa bachai hoti to abhi yahi pe.....
Main - mujhe tumse koi ladayi nahi karni main bas yaha pe baith.......
Bol hi raha tha ki uske dusre taraf se......Madhu aur wo Pankaj aate hue dikhe.......
Dhadkane ekdum se tezz ho gayi......sar pe pasina aa gaya......waha hawa acchi khassi chal rahi thi....aur main to chaaw mein baitha tha......
Main - Agar wo aa rahi hai to main binna darre yaha rah sakta hu.......mujhe kuch nahi hoga......main usko itne pass se wapas se dekh paaunga......
Main bas yahi to soch raha tha......aur wo dono aaye.....
Pankaj - aap yaha ho hum uss taraf dekh rahe the.....
Leader - arre main wahi tha.....wo to isko dekha........sach kahte the tum......ye log.....
Wo baat puri karta usse pahle mujhe kahna tha kuch warna ye leader meri image aur kharab kar deta Madhu ke samne......
Main - Pankaj mere bhai......wo main......mujhe Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....yaad hai tumne mujhe kaha tha wo yahi rahti thi.....unka ek kamra tha......Main bas ussi ke baare mein soch raha tha......
Madhu - Ye kya bol raha hai Pankaj......
Pankaj to pahle bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha.......ekdum se shocked........
Madhu - Pankaj....kya hua......ye kya bol raha hai.....
Pankaj - isne mujhe bhai kaha......tumne sunna naa......aapne sunna Bhai kaha isne mujhe.....
Main - Ab bhai ko to Bhai hi kahenge naa......
Pankaj - Par main kaha tumhara bhai hu......tumhi ne kaha tha pahle dost banenge aur phir bhai....main to dost bhi nahi ban sakka Bhai to dur ki baat hai.....isko rahne dete hai.....
Mann to kiya abhi yahi pe apni talwaar se isko 1000 tukdon mein kaat du.......
Madhu - rukko.....isne kaha iski Maa yaha rahti thi.....to kya......
Pankaj - Maine tumhe ye sab bataya to tha......
Madhu - Hmm main iss baare mein bhul gayi......Iska naam kya tha......
Naam bhul gayi....
mera naam bhul gayi.....kyun.....
jab usne puccha mera naam kya tha......main bas apne jagah se utha.......aas pass kya hai kaun hai kyun hai kisi chizz se matlab nahi raha tha mera......maine portal khola aur waha se nikal gaya......
Main nahi jaanta tha main kaha jaa raha hu.......bas khola aur nikal gaya waha se......
Ye bhi sayad ek park hi tha......Main baith gaya ek taalab ke saamne.....
Bahut ajeeb lag raha tha matlab kya hi kahu isko........naa accha kah sakta hu naa burra......gussa tha.....par dukh usse jyada tha.....
Wahi baitha taalab mein chote chote bijli ke tukde phenkne laga main.......
Wahi waha Madhu ke pass.......
unhone dekha ki Maine portal khola aur uske ander chala gaya.......wo bhi iss waqt.....jab park bhara hua tha......Madhu ko itna to pata tha ki ye sab insano ke saamne nahi karte hai......
Wo teeno aas pass dekhne lag gaye.......ki kahi kisi ne dekha to nahi abhi jo hua.......karib 10 minute tak wo dekhte rahe......aur jab unko laga kisi ne nahi dekha tab wo waha se wapas apne ghar jaane lage.....inka plan kuch aur tha par ho kuch aur gaya......
Madhu - usko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha......agar kisi Insan ne dekha hota to pareshani ho jaati......aare ek do hote to hum sambhal sakte the.....usne purre park ke samne ye kiya tha......
Pankaj ko thoda thoda samajh aa raha tha Prateek ne aisa kyun kiya.....aur abhi wo thoda sa ghabra bhi raha tha......Pujari ji ke kahe anusar.......kisi bhi kimmat pe Madhu aur Prateek ke bich nahi aana hai.....aur wo aa chuka tha......ab usko pata nahi tha aage kya ho sakta hai....
Pankaj - Humme iske baare mein ghar mein batana hoga.....Papa ko ye sab batana hoga.....wo inn sabko thoda aur baarikhi se dekhenge...
Leader - Main isme madad kar sakta tha par agar maine apni powers uss amount mein bahar nikale to dikkat ho sakti hai......Head office ko pata chal jaayega aur phir main....wapas chala jaaunga sayad......
Madhu - Humme bas jaake ye tumhare Papa ko bolna hai......par isme tumhari galti hai Pankaj......
Pankaj ne jab ye sunna uski fatt gayi thi......wo itne der se bas yahi to soch raha tha......Pujari ji ki baat.......dono ke bich mein nahi aana hai.....aur ab Madhu ne usko galat bol diya......ho sakta hai ye abhi kaabu se bahar jaaye aur.....kaam khatam......
Pankaj - nahi.....nahi.....dekho main galat tha....par tum bas iske liye mujhe kuch nahi kar sakti......Main bata raha hu tumko.....main usko yaha leke aaunga....tumhare saamne.....tumse milne ko......bas kuch karna mat mujhe......
Madhu ko samajh nahi aaya iska matlab....wo apna sar khujane lag gayi.......
Madhu - Ye kya bol rahe ho.....maine kab kaha main kuch karne wali hu......maine kaha tumhari galti thi......uski Maa rahti thi tumhare yaha.....aur usko uski Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....usko aane dena tha....baaki batein baad mein kar sakte the....par usko aane to dena tha......
Leader - Main bhi sayad yahi kahunga.....
Pankaj - haa....usko aane dena chahiye tha.....main khud leke aaunga usko......tum bas....bas mujhe kuch mat karna.....main leke aaunga usko......
Madhu - Pagal ho kya,......main kya karungi tumko......bekkar mein kuch bhi bole jaa rahe ho......chalo ghar aur jaake batao sab kuch......
Pankaj kaamp raha tha iss waqt......usne apni aakhon se dekha tha darwaja ukhadte hue......
Wo jaldi se ghar mein gaya.....Daksh ko dhundha aur sab kuch bataya......naa sirf ye sab,.......balki Strange world wala kissa bhi.....wo kissa jo school mein sab samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya tha.......School ke hisab se Madhu bas waha chali gayi aur uske baad jab wo wapas aayi to uske sath saath aadhe se jyada Nix bhi yaha aa gaye......
Sabko aisa laga wo bas apne logo ki madad karne gayi thi.....yaa aisa hi kuch......par jab saari sachayi Pankaj ne Daksh ko batayi to wo.....wo pareshan ho gaye......wo samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya karna chahiye......matlab aisa kuch unhone pahli baar sunna tha......
Aur jiss tarah se sab unko bataya gaya wo samajh rahe the sab sach hi hona chahiye......
Unhone isko bado ki tarah handle karne ka socha.......pahle to wo uss park mein gaye.....aur waha pe uss portal ke tukde dekhne lage......kyunki wo sabse pahle Prateek ko dhundhna chahte the.....
Par kuch bhi nahi milla waisa......wo waha se wapas aaye......dekha Leader Madhu aur Pankaj wahi hai......
Daksh - Pankaj ghar pe raho Madhu ke saath.....aur aapko main thoda parehsan karna chahta hu.....kya aap mere saath Meri Bahen ke yaha chalenge......mujhe lagta hai humme unse baat karni hogi isko leke......
Pankaj - Main bhi chalunga......main yaha pe.....
Daksh ko pata tha wo kya soch raha hai......unhone manna kar diya......
Pankaj ko ghar pe hi rahna tha Madhu ke saath.......aur usko bas yahi lag raha tha naa jaane kab......wo wapas se apna aapa kho degi aur usko.......agar ye nahi karegi to wo Prateek aa jaayega aur wo......yaa phir sayad dono milke......
Pankaj - Papa main Pujari ji ke pass.....haa unke pass chala jaata hu.....sayad......
Madhu ko ye bada ajeeb lag raha tha matlab itni si baat hui aur ye Pankaj usse itna darr raha tha....usne kuch kaha bhi nahi usko jyada......
Madhu - Main jaa rahi hu waha........Daksh sir aapne mujhe apne saath rakha bahut bahut aabhar uska.....par.....par ab sayad main iss jagah ke liye sahi nahi hu......waise bhi mere kabile ke log yaha aa chukke hai.....Main unke saath hi rahna pasand karungi......
Daksh - abhi ke liye iss baat ko yahi rahne dete hai Madhu......tum ek kaam karo......apne iss darpokh bhai ko leke jaau apne Pujari ji ke pass......aur tum.......darr kya rahe ho.......aaj tumhari Maa yaha hoti to....pata nahi kya sochti wo......
Pankaj darra hua tha......usne dekha tha kya hua tha darwaje ke saath.....iss wajahse wo darra hua tha.....par apne pita ki baat sunn ke usko khud se sharm aane lagi......
Pankaj - Main yahi rahunga.....madhu ke saath.....aap jaao......
Madhu - main jaa rahi hu Pujari ji ke pass......
Daksh - Beta kuch der rukk jaao......nahi to ye......
Madhu - ye meri wajah se to darr raha hai.....aur maine kaha kuch kiya iske sath....maine kuch bola tumko.....jo darr rahe ho.....
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha wahi ghar pe ab sabhi mujhe dundh rahe the.....kyunki main bahut der se bahar tha......Nikita ne Jwala ko bulana sahi nahi samjha sabhi ke saamne......par usko pata tha main kaha ho sakta hu........
To usne sabko bata diya......aur uski baat se lagbhag sab santust the......
Nikita - Wo pakka Madhu ke pass hoga......School mein bhi usko dekhta rahta hai bas.......
Bua - hmmm Mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hai....par kya humme....waha jaana chahiye......
Chachi - Main baat karti hu Daksh se......sayad unko pata ho Madhu kaha hai phir waha jaake dekh lenge.....
Chachi ne ye kaha aur call laga diya......
Waha Daksh samjha rahe the ghar pe hi raho....par Madhu mann nahi rahi thi......
Chachi - Hello......Daksh ji.......
Daksh - Hmm....bataiye Nitya kya kar sakta hu main aapke liye......
Chachi - Ek minute........(ye Daksh ji ko bhi pata hai ye sab yaa sirf humme hi pata hai...)
Bua - Pankaj tha waha pe pata nahi usne bataya hai yaa nahi.....
Halaki phone ko dhakk rakha tha par aawaj chali gayi......
Daksh - Nitya ji mujhe inn sab ke baare mein abhi hi pata chala hai......hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge.....waise mujhe aapse ek baat puchni thi.....
Chachi - Hmm iss baare mein milke ek saath baat karna hi sahi hoga.....aur haa puchiye kya puchna hai uske baad main bhi puch lungi.....
Daksh - Wo Kya Prateek waha pe hai abhi....
Chachi - Nahi to yaha nahi hai......Mujhe lagta hai aapke ghar ke pass hoga wo Madhu aapke yaha hi hai naa......
Daksh Mama ko samajh aa gaya tha ki wo ghar to nahi gaya hai......to pahle wo baaki sab se thoda dur ho gaye......
Daksh - Ji darasal baat aisi hai.......Prateek tha yaha pe.....par baccho mein kuch baatein ho gayi.....aur wo yaha se chala gaya......mujhe laga aapke pass hoga to main aane wala tha.....par aapne call kar diya....wo yaha nahi hai.....aur naa hi uske portal ka koi tukda mujhe milla hai jisse main bata paaun wo kaha hai....
Chachi - Hmm.....ye to chinta ki baat hai.....Hum aa rahe hai waha pe.......
Call cut aur Chachi ne ye baat sabhi ko batayi...
Chachi ki baat sunne ke baad sabhi jaane ko ready ho gaye.....par Bua ne Nikita ko ghar pe rukne ko kaha......ek to Didi thi apne kamre mein iss wajah se aur dusra....wo chahti thi Nikita waha pe Jwala ko bulaye aur usko dhundhne kahe......
Sabhi ko ye sahi laga ki Nikita ghar mein rahi to agar Prateek wapas aaya to wo bata degi.....saath mein Rupal ko bhi dekh legi......sab usko waha chod ke nikal gaye.......
Nikita ne bhi sabke jaane ke baad jaldi se Jwala ko bulaya......aur usko Prateek ko dhundhne ko bola......
Jwala bhi chal diya......
Sab Mujhe dhundh rahe the......par main ek taalab ke pass baitha taalab mein bijli ke chote chote tukde paani mein fenk raha tha.....usse waha pe wo paani garam hota jaa raha tha......aur aas pass baadal jaisa ban gaya tha.......
"Aee ladke ......kya kar rahe ho yaha......band karo ye badal banana......"
Maine mudd ke dekha......ek budha.....haa Budha hi tha.....yaa pata nahi matlab baal aise safed ki uske saamne dudh bhi ganda lage......aur chahra bhi bahut attractive tha......ek pal ko laga ki ye Orion ka hi banda hoga.....par phir.....uske kapde dekh ke laga nahi ye nahi hai waha ka....ye koi aur hi hai.....
"jaao yaha se.....mera mood sahi nahi hai.....bhago...."
Maine aise hi usko kah diya.......
Jaane ke wajaye wo mere bagal mein aake baith gaya......maine ek baar uski taraf dekha....phir laga bekkar mein kya karna......main ab pattar utha ke fenkne wala tha ki......
"bijli khatam ho gayi kya.....jo patther utha liya....."
Main - to tum bhi koi jaadui jeev ho.....
"hmm main.......haa main bhi hu....."
Ajeeb tha......aisa laga pahle wo kuch aur kahne wala tha aur phir socha kya samjhana mujhe.....usne bas haa kah diya......ye mujhe bewakoof samajh raha hai.....
Main - tum jaao kahi aur jaake baitho.....main yaha akela rahna chahta hu......
Nadi ke upar badal banne hue the.....meri wajah se......usne apna haath aage kiya....aur ek tezz hawa ka jhoonka aaya aur usse wo puri jagah saaf ho gayi.....bas raha to.......paani ke upar machliyan.....
Ye machliyan paani ke upar kyun thi pata nahi.......
" ye sab dekh rahe ho......tumne inn sab ko maar diya.....inko maine banaya tha.....ye sab tumne khatam kar diya......."
Maine jab sunna wo saari machliyan marri hui hai mujhe bura laga......main yaha apne dukh ko mitane aaya tha ye to dusro ko mitta baitha.....
Main - maaf karna mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch ho jayega.......Main chala jaata hu yaha se......
Wo - sunno.....baitho.....chalo baatein karte hai kuch....thoda bahut tum batao....thoda bahut main bataunga......
Main - tum mujhe nahi jaante aur naa Main tumko......humme kya baat hogi......
Wo - to jaan lete hai naa......Main Viraj hu.....
Next update mein inki baatein sunenge......Viraj batane wala hai kaise usko Sofia na jhoot bola aur Slayer ko bana diya.....Matlab Slayer ka pura itihaas pata chalne wala hai usko.....aur saath hi wo kiss jagah pe hai wo bhi.....insano ko laane ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai.....
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Nice update bhaiUPDATE - 94
Hum ghar pe the.......Main aur Rupal didi bich mein baithe the.......aas pass sabhi khade the aur baithe the......
Chachi - dono ke dono ander gaye hi kyun.......kya jarurat thi jaane ki......
Didi - waha pe aawajein aa rahi thi.......humme laga.......sayd koi musibat mein hai.......hum aise kaise.....usko rahne dete.....
unhone mujhe bachane ko jhoot bol diya.......Maine aisa to nahi socha tha.......
Chachi - kya tumhe nahi laga wo wahi saitaan hoga.......kya milla tha ander koi.......wo insan milla tha kya......
Chachi - ussi ke wajah se to behosh hui main......tu chup kyun baitha hai bata jaldi.......
Main -main.....wo.....hmmm......haa ussi se.....ussi hua tha.....ye sab ussi ki wajah se hua tha......
Dadi - to wo insan kaha gaya......kahi usko.......
Didi - Nahi wo to waha se bhag gaya........ander ki taraf........wo camera leke aaya tha sayad wo bhoot dekhne aaya ho.....aur humko dekh ke wo bhag gaya.....par jaane se pahle usne...... tu chup kyun hai bolega.......baitha hai aise hi......Mummy main jaa rahi hu mera sar dard kar raha hai......Mujhe sona hai......
Chachi - baitho chup chap kya lagta hai sab mann lungi main......Kavita isko check karo jarra......
Didi - Haa ye sahi hai......har waqt check karte jaao ye Doctor ko issi ke liye to rakha hai ghar mein naa........thoda der hua Rupal ko check karo......mujhe nahi karana kuch......
Wo jhootha gussa dikha ke waha se nikal li........ab main bacha tha sirf.......
Chachi - isko main baad mein dekhungi.....tum batao.....kya kya hua tha waha pe........aur dhyaan rahe......jo bhi bologe wo sab usse confirm karaungi.....agar dono ki baatein alag hui.....to samajh lena......
Maine bas unki hi baatein batayi thoda badha chadha ke......aur phir main bhi waha se khishak liya.......
Bua - Kavita tu uski baaton ka bur.......
K.Bua - kya bol rahi hai......uski baaton ka bura kaise lag sakta hai......wo bhi to apni hi hai naa......tu bhi.....Bhabhi isko check karu kya.....mujhe isme bhi dikkat lag rahi hai......
Bua - jyada udd mat......samjhi.....
Maine dekha ye log khud mein lage hue hai main waha se nikal gaya.......
Bahar aaya tha main.......mujhe iss waqt uss Rian se baat karna tha.......uss Old Owl ke baare mein uska kaam kiya yaa nahi........
Maine usko ek do baar aawaj di......par aaya hi nahi wo........ek number ka chutiya hai ye bhi.......Immortals mein sayad ye sabse bewakoof ho......par jitna ye bewakoof hai iski muhboli bahen
Ab ye aaya nahi to main chal diya aise hi aas pass ghumne ko wo bhi binna kisi ko bataye.........
Ghar pe Bua sabko wo sab bata rahi thi jo kuch din pahle hua tha.......hamara Strange world mein chale jaana waha pe Nix logo ka alag ho jaana......ye sab.......
Unhone iske baare mein bahut socha ki bataya jaaye yaa naa jaaye......par jab unhone mera behaviour dekha to ek tarah se unko laga ki sayad isse problem ho sakti hai.......to aage kuch bura naa ho iske liye wo sabko batana hi sahi samjhi.......par bas utna h jo pata hona chahiye.......haa Madhu ke baare mein bhi bata diya inhone jo bhi inko pata tha.......
Chachi - Matlab kya hai......ye pichle janam jaisa hai kya kuch......
Bua - Pujari ji ne jaisa kaha tha usse to mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai Bhabhi.......bas aap sab thoda usko ab bado jaisa treat karna.......
Dadi - wo ladki kaun hai......usko dekha hai naa tunne.......
Bua - Haa main usko.......ye aap abhi se kya leke baith gayi......
Dadi - Kya leke baith gayi se kya matlab hai......ab khud ki bhi age dekho......kya pata agar tumhare bhatije ki shadi ho jaaye to tumhara dimmag khule ki tumko bhi kar lena chahiye......
Bua - Maaa........kya kabhi bhi kuch bhi shuru kar deti ho.......
K.Bua - Kya bol rahi hai......sahi to kaha inhone.......ab umar ho gayi hai teri.......
Chachi chay ka pyaala apne honton se lagate hue......
Chachi - waise umar to tumhari bhi ho gayi hai.......kaho to tumhare yaha iski khabar de du.......
K.Bua ki aankhen ek dum se badi ho gayi......wo ekdum Chachi ko dekhne lagi.......
Bua - hmm ye bhi sahi hai Bhabhi......
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha,......Main aaj wapas se jaake baitha hua tha park mein......ab ghar jaa nahi sakta tha main......to bas waise hi baitha uske ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha ki sayad.......galti se......bas ek baar......wo dikh jaaye.....aur main usko dekhu......kass wo rukk jati......waise hi kisi murat ki tarah....aur main bas usko dekhta rahta........
"aaee Bacche tum yaha......"
pata nahi kaun tha......pahle to maine ignore maara.......par wo mere pass aa gaya.....jab dekha usko to wo leader tha.......
Leader - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho......
Main - tumse matlab.......
Leader - dekho uss din jaan naa bachai hoti to abhi yahi pe.....
Main - mujhe tumse koi ladayi nahi karni main bas yaha pe baith.......
Bol hi raha tha ki uske dusre taraf se......Madhu aur wo Pankaj aate hue dikhe.......
Dhadkane ekdum se tezz ho gayi......sar pe pasina aa gaya......waha hawa acchi khassi chal rahi thi....aur main to chaaw mein baitha tha......
Main - Agar wo aa rahi hai to main binna darre yaha rah sakta hu.......mujhe kuch nahi hoga......main usko itne pass se wapas se dekh paaunga......
Main bas yahi to soch raha tha......aur wo dono aaye.....
Pankaj - aap yaha ho hum uss taraf dekh rahe the.....
Leader - arre main wahi tha.....wo to isko dekha........sach kahte the tum......ye log.....
Wo baat puri karta usse pahle mujhe kahna tha kuch warna ye leader meri image aur kharab kar deta Madhu ke samne......
Main - Pankaj mere bhai......wo main......mujhe Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....yaad hai tumne mujhe kaha tha wo yahi rahti thi.....unka ek kamra tha......Main bas ussi ke baare mein soch raha tha......
Madhu - Ye kya bol raha hai Pankaj......
Pankaj to pahle bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha.......ekdum se shocked........
Madhu - Pankaj....kya hua......ye kya bol raha hai.....
Pankaj - isne mujhe bhai kaha......tumne sunna naa......aapne sunna Bhai kaha isne mujhe.....
Main - Ab bhai ko to Bhai hi kahenge naa......
Pankaj - Par main kaha tumhara bhai hu......tumhi ne kaha tha pahle dost banenge aur phir bhai....main to dost bhi nahi ban sakka Bhai to dur ki baat hai.....isko rahne dete hai.....
Mann to kiya abhi yahi pe apni talwaar se isko 1000 tukdon mein kaat du.......
Madhu - rukko.....isne kaha iski Maa yaha rahti thi.....to kya......
Pankaj - Maine tumhe ye sab bataya to tha......
Madhu - Hmm main iss baare mein bhul gayi......Iska naam kya tha......
jab usne puccha mera naam kya tha......main bas apne jagah se utha.......aas pass kya hai kaun hai kyun hai kisi chizz se matlab nahi raha tha mera......maine portal khola aur waha se nikal gaya......
Main nahi jaanta tha main kaha jaa raha hu.......bas khola aur nikal gaya waha se......
Ye bhi sayad ek park hi tha......Main baith gaya ek taalab ke saamne.....
Bahut ajeeb lag raha tha matlab kya hi kahu isko........naa accha kah sakta hu naa burra......gussa tha.....par dukh usse jyada tha.....
Wahi baitha taalab mein chote chote bijli ke tukde phenkne laga main.......
Wahi waha Madhu ke pass.......
unhone dekha ki Maine portal khola aur uske ander chala gaya.......wo bhi iss waqt.....jab park bhara hua tha......Madhu ko itna to pata tha ki ye sab insano ke saamne nahi karte hai......
Wo teeno aas pass dekhne lag gaye.......ki kahi kisi ne dekha to nahi abhi jo hua.......karib 10 minute tak wo dekhte rahe......aur jab unko laga kisi ne nahi dekha tab wo waha se wapas apne ghar jaane lage.....inka plan kuch aur tha par ho kuch aur gaya......
Madhu - usko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha......agar kisi Insan ne dekha hota to pareshani ho jaati......aare ek do hote to hum sambhal sakte the.....usne purre park ke samne ye kiya tha......
Pankaj ko thoda thoda samajh aa raha tha Prateek ne aisa kyun kiya.....aur abhi wo thoda sa ghabra bhi raha tha......Pujari ji ke kahe anusar.......kisi bhi kimmat pe Madhu aur Prateek ke bich nahi aana hai.....aur wo aa chuka tha......ab usko pata nahi tha aage kya ho sakta hai....
Pankaj - Humme iske baare mein ghar mein batana hoga.....Papa ko ye sab batana hoga.....wo inn sabko thoda aur baarikhi se dekhenge...
Leader - Main isme madad kar sakta tha par agar maine apni powers uss amount mein bahar nikale to dikkat ho sakti hai......Head office ko pata chal jaayega aur phir main....wapas chala jaaunga sayad......
Madhu - Humme bas jaake ye tumhare Papa ko bolna hai......par isme tumhari galti hai Pankaj......
Pankaj ne jab ye sunna uski fatt gayi thi......wo itne der se bas yahi to soch raha tha......Pujari ji ki baat.......dono ke bich mein nahi aana hai.....aur ab Madhu ne usko galat bol diya......ho sakta hai ye abhi kaabu se bahar jaaye aur.....kaam khatam......
Pankaj - nahi.....nahi.....dekho main galat tha....par tum bas iske liye mujhe kuch nahi kar sakti......Main bata raha hu tumko.....main usko yaha leke aaunga....tumhare saamne.....tumse milne ko......bas kuch karna mat mujhe......
Madhu ko samajh nahi aaya iska matlab....wo apna sar khujane lag gayi.......
Madhu - Ye kya bol rahe ho.....maine kab kaha main kuch karne wali hu......maine kaha tumhari galti thi......uski Maa rahti thi tumhare yaha.....aur usko uski Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....usko aane dena tha....baaki batein baad mein kar sakte the....par usko aane to dena tha......
Leader - Main bhi sayad yahi kahunga.....
Pankaj - haa....usko aane dena chahiye tha.....main khud leke aaunga usko......tum bas....bas mujhe kuch mat karna.....main leke aaunga usko......
Madhu - Pagal ho kya,......main kya karungi tumko......bekkar mein kuch bhi bole jaa rahe ho......chalo ghar aur jaake batao sab kuch......
Pankaj kaamp raha tha iss waqt......usne apni aakhon se dekha tha darwaja ukhadte hue......
Wo jaldi se ghar mein gaya.....Daksh ko dhundha aur sab kuch bataya......naa sirf ye sab,.......balki Strange world wala kissa bhi.....wo kissa jo school mein sab samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya tha.......School ke hisab se Madhu bas waha chali gayi aur uske baad jab wo wapas aayi to uske sath saath aadhe se jyada Nix bhi yaha aa gaye......
Sabko aisa laga wo bas apne logo ki madad karne gayi thi.....yaa aisa hi kuch......par jab saari sachayi Pankaj ne Daksh ko batayi to wo.....wo pareshan ho gaye......wo samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya karna chahiye......matlab aisa kuch unhone pahli baar sunna tha......
Aur jiss tarah se sab unko bataya gaya wo samajh rahe the sab sach hi hona chahiye......
Unhone isko bado ki tarah handle karne ka socha.......pahle to wo uss park mein gaye.....aur waha pe uss portal ke tukde dekhne lage......kyunki wo sabse pahle Prateek ko dhundhna chahte the.....
Par kuch bhi nahi milla waisa......wo waha se wapas aaye......dekha Leader Madhu aur Pankaj wahi hai......
Daksh - Pankaj ghar pe raho Madhu ke saath.....aur aapko main thoda parehsan karna chahta hu.....kya aap mere saath Meri Bahen ke yaha chalenge......mujhe lagta hai humme unse baat karni hogi isko leke......
Pankaj - Main bhi chalunga......main yaha pe.....
Daksh ko pata tha wo kya soch raha hai......unhone manna kar diya......
Pankaj ko ghar pe hi rahna tha Madhu ke saath.......aur usko bas yahi lag raha tha naa jaane kab......wo wapas se apna aapa kho degi aur usko.......agar ye nahi karegi to wo Prateek aa jaayega aur wo......yaa phir sayad dono milke......
Pankaj - Papa main Pujari ji ke pass.....haa unke pass chala jaata hu.....sayad......
Madhu ko ye bada ajeeb lag raha tha matlab itni si baat hui aur ye Pankaj usse itna darr raha tha....usne kuch kaha bhi nahi usko jyada......
Madhu - Main jaa rahi hu waha........Daksh sir aapne mujhe apne saath rakha bahut bahut aabhar uska.....par.....par ab sayad main iss jagah ke liye sahi nahi hu......waise bhi mere kabile ke log yaha aa chukke hai.....Main unke saath hi rahna pasand karungi......
Daksh - abhi ke liye iss baat ko yahi rahne dete hai Madhu......tum ek kaam karo......apne iss darpokh bhai ko leke jaau apne Pujari ji ke pass......aur tum.......darr kya rahe ho.......aaj tumhari Maa yaha hoti to....pata nahi kya sochti wo......
Pankaj darra hua tha......usne dekha tha kya hua tha darwaje ke saath.....iss wajahse wo darra hua tha.....par apne pita ki baat sunn ke usko khud se sharm aane lagi......
Pankaj - Main yahi rahunga.....madhu ke saath.....aap jaao......
Madhu - main jaa rahi hu Pujari ji ke pass......
Daksh - Beta kuch der rukk jaao......nahi to ye......
Madhu - ye meri wajah se to darr raha hai.....aur maine kaha kuch kiya iske sath....maine kuch bola tumko.....jo darr rahe ho.....
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha wahi ghar pe ab sabhi mujhe dundh rahe the.....kyunki main bahut der se bahar tha......Nikita ne Jwala ko bulana sahi nahi samjha sabhi ke saamne......par usko pata tha main kaha ho sakta hu........
To usne sabko bata diya......aur uski baat se lagbhag sab santust the......
Nikita - Wo pakka Madhu ke pass hoga......School mein bhi usko dekhta rahta hai bas.......
Bua - hmmm Mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hai....par kya humme....waha jaana chahiye......
Chachi - Main baat karti hu Daksh se......sayad unko pata ho Madhu kaha hai phir waha jaake dekh lenge.....
Chachi ne ye kaha aur call laga diya......
Waha Daksh samjha rahe the ghar pe hi raho....par Madhu mann nahi rahi thi......
Chachi - Hello......Daksh ji.......
Daksh - Hmm....bataiye Nitya kya kar sakta hu main aapke liye......
Chachi - Ek minute........(ye Daksh ji ko bhi pata hai ye sab yaa sirf humme hi pata hai...)
Bua - Pankaj tha waha pe pata nahi usne bataya hai yaa nahi.....
Halaki phone ko dhakk rakha tha par aawaj chali gayi......
Daksh - Nitya ji mujhe inn sab ke baare mein abhi hi pata chala hai......hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge.....waise mujhe aapse ek baat puchni thi.....
Chachi - Hmm iss baare mein milke ek saath baat karna hi sahi hoga.....aur haa puchiye kya puchna hai uske baad main bhi puch lungi.....
Daksh - Wo Kya Prateek waha pe hai abhi....
Chachi - Nahi to yaha nahi hai......Mujhe lagta hai aapke ghar ke pass hoga wo Madhu aapke yaha hi hai naa......
Daksh Mama ko samajh aa gaya tha ki wo ghar to nahi gaya hai......to pahle wo baaki sab se thoda dur ho gaye......
Daksh - Ji darasal baat aisi hai.......Prateek tha yaha pe.....par baccho mein kuch baatein ho gayi.....aur wo yaha se chala gaya......mujhe laga aapke pass hoga to main aane wala tha.....par aapne call kar diya....wo yaha nahi hai.....aur naa hi uske portal ka koi tukda mujhe milla hai jisse main bata paaun wo kaha hai....
Chachi - Hmm.....ye to chinta ki baat hai.....Hum aa rahe hai waha pe.......
Call cut aur Chachi ne ye baat sabhi ko batayi...
Chachi ki baat sunne ke baad sabhi jaane ko ready ho gaye.....par Bua ne Nikita ko ghar pe rukne ko kaha......ek to Didi thi apne kamre mein iss wajah se aur dusra....wo chahti thi Nikita waha pe Jwala ko bulaye aur usko dhundhne kahe......
Sabhi ko ye sahi laga ki Nikita ghar mein rahi to agar Prateek wapas aaya to wo bata degi.....saath mein Rupal ko bhi dekh legi......sab usko waha chod ke nikal gaye.......
Nikita ne bhi sabke jaane ke baad jaldi se Jwala ko bulaya......aur usko Prateek ko dhundhne ko bola......
Jwala bhi chal diya......
Sab Mujhe dhundh rahe the......par main ek taalab ke pass baitha taalab mein bijli ke chote chote tukde paani mein fenk raha tha.....usse waha pe wo paani garam hota jaa raha tha......aur aas pass baadal jaisa ban gaya tha.......
"Aee ladke ......kya kar rahe ho yaha......band karo ye badal banana......"
Maine mudd ke dekha......ek budha.....haa Budha hi tha.....yaa pata nahi matlab baal aise safed ki uske saamne dudh bhi ganda lage......aur chahra bhi bahut attractive tha......ek pal ko laga ki ye Orion ka hi banda hoga.....par phir.....uske kapde dekh ke laga nahi ye nahi hai waha ka....ye koi aur hi hai.....
"jaao yaha se.....mera mood sahi nahi hai.....bhago...."
Maine aise hi usko kah diya.......
Jaane ke wajaye wo mere bagal mein aake baith gaya......maine ek baar uski taraf dekha....phir laga bekkar mein kya karna......main ab pattar utha ke fenkne wala tha ki......
"bijli khatam ho gayi kya.....jo patther utha liya....."
Main - to tum bhi koi jaadui jeev ho.....
"hmm main.......haa main bhi hu....."
Ajeeb tha......aisa laga pahle wo kuch aur kahne wala tha aur phir socha kya samjhana mujhe.....usne bas haa kah diya......ye mujhe bewakoof samajh raha hai.....
Main - tum jaao kahi aur jaake baitho.....main yaha akela rahna chahta hu......
Nadi ke upar badal banne hue the.....meri wajah se......usne apna haath aage kiya....aur ek tezz hawa ka jhoonka aaya aur usse wo puri jagah saaf ho gayi.....bas raha to.......paani ke upar machliyan.....
Ye machliyan paani ke upar kyun thi pata nahi.......
" ye sab dekh rahe ho......tumne inn sab ko maar diya.....inko maine banaya tha.....ye sab tumne khatam kar diya......."
Maine jab sunna wo saari machliyan marri hui hai mujhe bura laga......main yaha apne dukh ko mitane aaya tha ye to dusro ko mitta baitha.....
Main - maaf karna mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch ho jayega.......Main chala jaata hu yaha se......
Wo - sunno.....baitho.....chalo baatein karte hai kuch....thoda bahut tum batao....thoda bahut main bataunga......
Main - tum mujhe nahi jaante aur naa Main tumko......humme kya baat hogi......
Wo - to jaan lete hai naa......Main Viraj hu.....
Next update mein inki baatein sunenge......Viraj batane wala hai kaise usko Sofia na jhoot bola aur Slayer ko bana diya.....Matlab Slayer ka pura itihaas pata chalne wala hai usko.....aur saath hi wo kiss jagah pe hai wo bhi.....insano ko laane ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai.....
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Tum to bde heavy driver nikle brother
brother mere comment ko to thik se pdh lete...ki maine bolna kya chaha h...kya abhi tak prateek ke paas koi maqsad dikha h itne updates ke baad bhi...phle use kuchh pta nhi hota tha ki wo kya kr rha h..hmesha dhruv usko guide krta tha aur jb dhruv deactivate hota to kuchh na kuchh hadkamp macha rhta...us waqt wo naushikhiya tha sikh rha tha ...ek baccha hi tha jo phle khud ko normal insaan smjhta tha baad me usko uska sach pta chla ki wo koi sadharan insaan nhi ek magical creature h.. Uske baad bhi uske paas koi maqsad tha kya...nhi na..abhi tk prateek ne jo bhi kiya wo sab aisa lg rha tha jaise usne wo kiya nhi usse wo ho gya. Haan usne kuchh achhe kaam bhi kiye jaise elf kingdom me aur jawala aur bears ke kabile ki dosti kra kr...nikita ki trha baki elf kingdom ke baccho ki jaan bachana...ye sab kaam usne apne hosh me kiye bss dhruv ne uska thoda margdarshan kiya..baki aise hi chhote mote kaam...pr kya use ek maqsad mil gya nhi na...kya use apni mom dad ki maut ki sachai slayer ke baare me pta chla kuchh ...story ke startng me hi btaya gya tha ki ye baccha slayer ko rok skta h...beshak main villain koi bhi ho chahe wo murti wala ho ya slayer ...ya koi aur ...pr is story me jo hero h wo prateek h baad me writer kisi aur ko bhi hero bna de wo baat unpr h..pr abhi tk to prateek hi h..pr kya uske paas koi motive h kya use pta h ki dark energy uske paas hi kyu h..kya aur bhi cheezo ka use pta h kya use pta h ki uske paas hi itni powers kyu h uske pichhe kya maqsad h...ab jab uski purani yaddast aayi h tb bhi kya uska maqsad clear hua h...wo fasa hua h ki kaise wo madhu ko pa ske dobara..bss itna ..wo immortal h riston ki use samjh nhi h utni...abhi tk to ye bhi pta nhi ki aakhir hua kya tha ki in dono yani prateek aur madhu ka janam dobara kyu hua h kya bss dono ka ek dusre se dobara milne ke liye ya us murti me bnd insaan ko dnd dene ke liye....wo murti wala shakhs villain h kya ye baat bhi clear h kya.... Kya pta wo un dono ka dost rha ho aur ek galatfahmi ke karan ye sab hua ho..ya kuchh aur bhi wajha ho skti h pr maqsad h kya abhi bhi uske paas agr yhi maqsad hota ki murti wale ko maarna h to kya prateek purani yaadein aane ke baad use maarne nhi jata kya.. Aur uske bad story khatam villain khatam to sb khatam happy ending..baki characters bhajiya talenge
Ye h mera view brother ki sayd viraj se mulaqat ke baad prateek ka chutiyapa khatam ho aur wo kuchh kaam kre iss kahani ko uske ant tk pahuchane ke liye yaani iss kahani ke motive ko pura krne ke liye....i hope brother ki tum meri baat samjh paaye hoge ab...
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Ha main samajh geya bhai....aap ek common baat ko dheyan dena sabhi story ke khash kar supernatural power wali ko...or jab hero heroin ka dobara janam hua...tab usko guide karne ke liye koi chahiye....master ne Prateek jab chota tha tab guide ki or ab use guide karne wale chahiye...or mujhe lagta hai viraj hi wo guide karne wale hai jo Prateek ko apni maqshad ka batay...ap sahi kahi ko murti main villain nhi bhi ho sackta hai...jaisa apne kaha hai ki wo uske dost ho sackta hai to wo pehle madhu ke pash main uska sirf dost hu yehi baat kehkar madhu ke pash rehta or madhu ko apni lana chaha sirf itna pata hai ek update se.....uske baad kya hua ye to pata nhi....dekhte hai kkya hota haiTum to bde heavy driver nikle brother
Ye h mera view brother ki sayd viraj se mulaqat ke baad prateek ka chutiyapa khatam ho aur wo kuchh kaam kre iss kahani ko uske ant tk pahuchane ke liye yaani iss kahani ke motive ko pura krne ke liye....i hope brother ki tum meri baat samjh paaye hoge ab...
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nice update ..madhu ko dekhne ke liye park me gaya prateek par waha leader aa gaya aur shayad behas karne ke mood me tha ,pankaj ko bhai kehke bulaya prateek ne kyunki wo madhu ki najro me apni image achchi rakhna chahta tha ..UPDATE - 94
Hum ghar pe the.......Main aur Rupal didi bich mein baithe the.......aas pass sabhi khade the aur baithe the......
Chachi - dono ke dono ander gaye hi kyun.......kya jarurat thi jaane ki......
Didi - waha pe aawajein aa rahi thi.......humme laga.......sayd koi musibat mein hai.......hum aise kaise.....usko rahne dete.....
unhone mujhe bachane ko jhoot bol diya.......Maine aisa to nahi socha tha.......
Chachi - kya tumhe nahi laga wo wahi saitaan hoga.......kya milla tha ander koi.......wo insan milla tha kya......
Chachi - ussi ke wajah se to behosh hui main......tu chup kyun baitha hai bata jaldi.......
Main -main.....wo.....hmmm......haa ussi se.....ussi hua tha.....ye sab ussi ki wajah se hua tha......
Dadi - to wo insan kaha gaya......kahi usko.......
Didi - Nahi wo to waha se bhag gaya........ander ki taraf........wo camera leke aaya tha sayad wo bhoot dekhne aaya ho.....aur humko dekh ke wo bhag gaya.....par jaane se pahle usne...... tu chup kyun hai bolega.......baitha hai aise hi......Mummy main jaa rahi hu mera sar dard kar raha hai......Mujhe sona hai......
Chachi - baitho chup chap kya lagta hai sab mann lungi main......Kavita isko check karo jarra......
Didi - Haa ye sahi hai......har waqt check karte jaao ye Doctor ko issi ke liye to rakha hai ghar mein naa........thoda der hua Rupal ko check karo......mujhe nahi karana kuch......
Wo jhootha gussa dikha ke waha se nikal li........ab main bacha tha sirf.......
Chachi - isko main baad mein dekhungi.....tum batao.....kya kya hua tha waha pe........aur dhyaan rahe......jo bhi bologe wo sab usse confirm karaungi.....agar dono ki baatein alag hui.....to samajh lena......
Maine bas unki hi baatein batayi thoda badha chadha ke......aur phir main bhi waha se khishak liya.......
Bua - Kavita tu uski baaton ka bur.......
K.Bua - kya bol rahi hai......uski baaton ka bura kaise lag sakta hai......wo bhi to apni hi hai naa......tu bhi.....Bhabhi isko check karu kya.....mujhe isme bhi dikkat lag rahi hai......
Bua - jyada udd mat......samjhi.....
Maine dekha ye log khud mein lage hue hai main waha se nikal gaya.......
Bahar aaya tha main.......mujhe iss waqt uss Rian se baat karna tha.......uss Old Owl ke baare mein uska kaam kiya yaa nahi........
Maine usko ek do baar aawaj di......par aaya hi nahi wo........ek number ka chutiya hai ye bhi.......Immortals mein sayad ye sabse bewakoof ho......par jitna ye bewakoof hai iski muhboli bahen
Ab ye aaya nahi to main chal diya aise hi aas pass ghumne ko wo bhi binna kisi ko bataye.........
Ghar pe Bua sabko wo sab bata rahi thi jo kuch din pahle hua tha.......hamara Strange world mein chale jaana waha pe Nix logo ka alag ho jaana......ye sab.......
Unhone iske baare mein bahut socha ki bataya jaaye yaa naa jaaye......par jab unhone mera behaviour dekha to ek tarah se unko laga ki sayad isse problem ho sakti hai.......to aage kuch bura naa ho iske liye wo sabko batana hi sahi samjhi.......par bas utna h jo pata hona chahiye.......haa Madhu ke baare mein bhi bata diya inhone jo bhi inko pata tha.......
Chachi - Matlab kya hai......ye pichle janam jaisa hai kya kuch......
Bua - Pujari ji ne jaisa kaha tha usse to mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai Bhabhi.......bas aap sab thoda usko ab bado jaisa treat karna.......
Dadi - wo ladki kaun hai......usko dekha hai naa tunne.......
Bua - Haa main usko.......ye aap abhi se kya leke baith gayi......
Dadi - Kya leke baith gayi se kya matlab hai......ab khud ki bhi age dekho......kya pata agar tumhare bhatije ki shadi ho jaaye to tumhara dimmag khule ki tumko bhi kar lena chahiye......
Bua - Maaa........kya kabhi bhi kuch bhi shuru kar deti ho.......
K.Bua - Kya bol rahi hai......sahi to kaha inhone.......ab umar ho gayi hai teri.......
Chachi chay ka pyaala apne honton se lagate hue......
Chachi - waise umar to tumhari bhi ho gayi hai.......kaho to tumhare yaha iski khabar de du.......
K.Bua ki aankhen ek dum se badi ho gayi......wo ekdum Chachi ko dekhne lagi.......
Bua - hmm ye bhi sahi hai Bhabhi......
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha,......Main aaj wapas se jaake baitha hua tha park mein......ab ghar jaa nahi sakta tha main......to bas waise hi baitha uske ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha ki sayad.......galti se......bas ek baar......wo dikh jaaye.....aur main usko dekhu......kass wo rukk jati......waise hi kisi murat ki tarah....aur main bas usko dekhta rahta........
"aaee Bacche tum yaha......"
pata nahi kaun tha......pahle to maine ignore maara.......par wo mere pass aa gaya.....jab dekha usko to wo leader tha.......
Leader - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho......
Main - tumse matlab.......
Leader - dekho uss din jaan naa bachai hoti to abhi yahi pe.....
Main - mujhe tumse koi ladayi nahi karni main bas yaha pe baith.......
Bol hi raha tha ki uske dusre taraf se......Madhu aur wo Pankaj aate hue dikhe.......
Dhadkane ekdum se tezz ho gayi......sar pe pasina aa gaya......waha hawa acchi khassi chal rahi thi....aur main to chaaw mein baitha tha......
Main - Agar wo aa rahi hai to main binna darre yaha rah sakta hu.......mujhe kuch nahi hoga......main usko itne pass se wapas se dekh paaunga......
Main bas yahi to soch raha tha......aur wo dono aaye.....
Pankaj - aap yaha ho hum uss taraf dekh rahe the.....
Leader - arre main wahi tha.....wo to isko dekha........sach kahte the tum......ye log.....
Wo baat puri karta usse pahle mujhe kahna tha kuch warna ye leader meri image aur kharab kar deta Madhu ke samne......
Main - Pankaj mere bhai......wo main......mujhe Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....yaad hai tumne mujhe kaha tha wo yahi rahti thi.....unka ek kamra tha......Main bas ussi ke baare mein soch raha tha......
Madhu - Ye kya bol raha hai Pankaj......
Pankaj to pahle bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha.......ekdum se shocked........
Madhu - Pankaj....kya hua......ye kya bol raha hai.....
Pankaj - isne mujhe bhai kaha......tumne sunna naa......aapne sunna Bhai kaha isne mujhe.....
Main - Ab bhai ko to Bhai hi kahenge naa......
Pankaj - Par main kaha tumhara bhai hu......tumhi ne kaha tha pahle dost banenge aur phir bhai....main to dost bhi nahi ban sakka Bhai to dur ki baat hai.....isko rahne dete hai.....
Mann to kiya abhi yahi pe apni talwaar se isko 1000 tukdon mein kaat du.......
Madhu - rukko.....isne kaha iski Maa yaha rahti thi.....to kya......
Pankaj - Maine tumhe ye sab bataya to tha......
Madhu - Hmm main iss baare mein bhul gayi......Iska naam kya tha......
jab usne puccha mera naam kya tha......main bas apne jagah se utha.......aas pass kya hai kaun hai kyun hai kisi chizz se matlab nahi raha tha mera......maine portal khola aur waha se nikal gaya......
Main nahi jaanta tha main kaha jaa raha hu.......bas khola aur nikal gaya waha se......
Ye bhi sayad ek park hi tha......Main baith gaya ek taalab ke saamne.....
Bahut ajeeb lag raha tha matlab kya hi kahu isko........naa accha kah sakta hu naa burra......gussa tha.....par dukh usse jyada tha.....
Wahi baitha taalab mein chote chote bijli ke tukde phenkne laga main.......
Wahi waha Madhu ke pass.......
unhone dekha ki Maine portal khola aur uske ander chala gaya.......wo bhi iss waqt.....jab park bhara hua tha......Madhu ko itna to pata tha ki ye sab insano ke saamne nahi karte hai......
Wo teeno aas pass dekhne lag gaye.......ki kahi kisi ne dekha to nahi abhi jo hua.......karib 10 minute tak wo dekhte rahe......aur jab unko laga kisi ne nahi dekha tab wo waha se wapas apne ghar jaane lage.....inka plan kuch aur tha par ho kuch aur gaya......
Madhu - usko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha......agar kisi Insan ne dekha hota to pareshani ho jaati......aare ek do hote to hum sambhal sakte the.....usne purre park ke samne ye kiya tha......
Pankaj ko thoda thoda samajh aa raha tha Prateek ne aisa kyun kiya.....aur abhi wo thoda sa ghabra bhi raha tha......Pujari ji ke kahe anusar.......kisi bhi kimmat pe Madhu aur Prateek ke bich nahi aana hai.....aur wo aa chuka tha......ab usko pata nahi tha aage kya ho sakta hai....
Pankaj - Humme iske baare mein ghar mein batana hoga.....Papa ko ye sab batana hoga.....wo inn sabko thoda aur baarikhi se dekhenge...
Leader - Main isme madad kar sakta tha par agar maine apni powers uss amount mein bahar nikale to dikkat ho sakti hai......Head office ko pata chal jaayega aur phir main....wapas chala jaaunga sayad......
Madhu - Humme bas jaake ye tumhare Papa ko bolna hai......par isme tumhari galti hai Pankaj......
Pankaj ne jab ye sunna uski fatt gayi thi......wo itne der se bas yahi to soch raha tha......Pujari ji ki baat.......dono ke bich mein nahi aana hai.....aur ab Madhu ne usko galat bol diya......ho sakta hai ye abhi kaabu se bahar jaaye aur.....kaam khatam......
Pankaj - nahi.....nahi.....dekho main galat tha....par tum bas iske liye mujhe kuch nahi kar sakti......Main bata raha hu tumko.....main usko yaha leke aaunga....tumhare saamne.....tumse milne ko......bas kuch karna mat mujhe......
Madhu ko samajh nahi aaya iska matlab....wo apna sar khujane lag gayi.......
Madhu - Ye kya bol rahe ho.....maine kab kaha main kuch karne wali hu......maine kaha tumhari galti thi......uski Maa rahti thi tumhare yaha.....aur usko uski Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....usko aane dena tha....baaki batein baad mein kar sakte the....par usko aane to dena tha......
Leader - Main bhi sayad yahi kahunga.....
Pankaj - haa....usko aane dena chahiye tha.....main khud leke aaunga usko......tum bas....bas mujhe kuch mat karna.....main leke aaunga usko......
Madhu - Pagal ho kya,......main kya karungi tumko......bekkar mein kuch bhi bole jaa rahe ho......chalo ghar aur jaake batao sab kuch......
Pankaj kaamp raha tha iss waqt......usne apni aakhon se dekha tha darwaja ukhadte hue......
Wo jaldi se ghar mein gaya.....Daksh ko dhundha aur sab kuch bataya......naa sirf ye sab,.......balki Strange world wala kissa bhi.....wo kissa jo school mein sab samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya tha.......School ke hisab se Madhu bas waha chali gayi aur uske baad jab wo wapas aayi to uske sath saath aadhe se jyada Nix bhi yaha aa gaye......
Sabko aisa laga wo bas apne logo ki madad karne gayi thi.....yaa aisa hi kuch......par jab saari sachayi Pankaj ne Daksh ko batayi to wo.....wo pareshan ho gaye......wo samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya karna chahiye......matlab aisa kuch unhone pahli baar sunna tha......
Aur jiss tarah se sab unko bataya gaya wo samajh rahe the sab sach hi hona chahiye......
Unhone isko bado ki tarah handle karne ka socha.......pahle to wo uss park mein gaye.....aur waha pe uss portal ke tukde dekhne lage......kyunki wo sabse pahle Prateek ko dhundhna chahte the.....
Par kuch bhi nahi milla waisa......wo waha se wapas aaye......dekha Leader Madhu aur Pankaj wahi hai......
Daksh - Pankaj ghar pe raho Madhu ke saath.....aur aapko main thoda parehsan karna chahta hu.....kya aap mere saath Meri Bahen ke yaha chalenge......mujhe lagta hai humme unse baat karni hogi isko leke......
Pankaj - Main bhi chalunga......main yaha pe.....
Daksh ko pata tha wo kya soch raha hai......unhone manna kar diya......
Pankaj ko ghar pe hi rahna tha Madhu ke saath.......aur usko bas yahi lag raha tha naa jaane kab......wo wapas se apna aapa kho degi aur usko.......agar ye nahi karegi to wo Prateek aa jaayega aur wo......yaa phir sayad dono milke......
Pankaj - Papa main Pujari ji ke pass.....haa unke pass chala jaata hu.....sayad......
Madhu ko ye bada ajeeb lag raha tha matlab itni si baat hui aur ye Pankaj usse itna darr raha tha....usne kuch kaha bhi nahi usko jyada......
Madhu - Main jaa rahi hu waha........Daksh sir aapne mujhe apne saath rakha bahut bahut aabhar uska.....par.....par ab sayad main iss jagah ke liye sahi nahi hu......waise bhi mere kabile ke log yaha aa chukke hai.....Main unke saath hi rahna pasand karungi......
Daksh - abhi ke liye iss baat ko yahi rahne dete hai Madhu......tum ek kaam karo......apne iss darpokh bhai ko leke jaau apne Pujari ji ke pass......aur tum.......darr kya rahe ho.......aaj tumhari Maa yaha hoti to....pata nahi kya sochti wo......
Pankaj darra hua tha......usne dekha tha kya hua tha darwaje ke saath.....iss wajahse wo darra hua tha.....par apne pita ki baat sunn ke usko khud se sharm aane lagi......
Pankaj - Main yahi rahunga.....madhu ke saath.....aap jaao......
Madhu - main jaa rahi hu Pujari ji ke pass......
Daksh - Beta kuch der rukk jaao......nahi to ye......
Madhu - ye meri wajah se to darr raha hai.....aur maine kaha kuch kiya iske sath....maine kuch bola tumko.....jo darr rahe ho.....
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha wahi ghar pe ab sabhi mujhe dundh rahe the.....kyunki main bahut der se bahar tha......Nikita ne Jwala ko bulana sahi nahi samjha sabhi ke saamne......par usko pata tha main kaha ho sakta hu........
To usne sabko bata diya......aur uski baat se lagbhag sab santust the......
Nikita - Wo pakka Madhu ke pass hoga......School mein bhi usko dekhta rahta hai bas.......
Bua - hmmm Mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hai....par kya humme....waha jaana chahiye......
Chachi - Main baat karti hu Daksh se......sayad unko pata ho Madhu kaha hai phir waha jaake dekh lenge.....
Chachi ne ye kaha aur call laga diya......
Waha Daksh samjha rahe the ghar pe hi raho....par Madhu mann nahi rahi thi......
Chachi - Hello......Daksh ji.......
Daksh - Hmm....bataiye Nitya kya kar sakta hu main aapke liye......
Chachi - Ek minute........(ye Daksh ji ko bhi pata hai ye sab yaa sirf humme hi pata hai...)
Bua - Pankaj tha waha pe pata nahi usne bataya hai yaa nahi.....
Halaki phone ko dhakk rakha tha par aawaj chali gayi......
Daksh - Nitya ji mujhe inn sab ke baare mein abhi hi pata chala hai......hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge.....waise mujhe aapse ek baat puchni thi.....
Chachi - Hmm iss baare mein milke ek saath baat karna hi sahi hoga.....aur haa puchiye kya puchna hai uske baad main bhi puch lungi.....
Daksh - Wo Kya Prateek waha pe hai abhi....
Chachi - Nahi to yaha nahi hai......Mujhe lagta hai aapke ghar ke pass hoga wo Madhu aapke yaha hi hai naa......
Daksh Mama ko samajh aa gaya tha ki wo ghar to nahi gaya hai......to pahle wo baaki sab se thoda dur ho gaye......
Daksh - Ji darasal baat aisi hai.......Prateek tha yaha pe.....par baccho mein kuch baatein ho gayi.....aur wo yaha se chala gaya......mujhe laga aapke pass hoga to main aane wala tha.....par aapne call kar diya....wo yaha nahi hai.....aur naa hi uske portal ka koi tukda mujhe milla hai jisse main bata paaun wo kaha hai....
Chachi - Hmm.....ye to chinta ki baat hai.....Hum aa rahe hai waha pe.......
Call cut aur Chachi ne ye baat sabhi ko batayi...
Chachi ki baat sunne ke baad sabhi jaane ko ready ho gaye.....par Bua ne Nikita ko ghar pe rukne ko kaha......ek to Didi thi apne kamre mein iss wajah se aur dusra....wo chahti thi Nikita waha pe Jwala ko bulaye aur usko dhundhne kahe......
Sabhi ko ye sahi laga ki Nikita ghar mein rahi to agar Prateek wapas aaya to wo bata degi.....saath mein Rupal ko bhi dekh legi......sab usko waha chod ke nikal gaye.......
Nikita ne bhi sabke jaane ke baad jaldi se Jwala ko bulaya......aur usko Prateek ko dhundhne ko bola......
Jwala bhi chal diya......
Sab Mujhe dhundh rahe the......par main ek taalab ke pass baitha taalab mein bijli ke chote chote tukde paani mein fenk raha tha.....usse waha pe wo paani garam hota jaa raha tha......aur aas pass baadal jaisa ban gaya tha.......
"Aee ladke ......kya kar rahe ho yaha......band karo ye badal banana......"
Maine mudd ke dekha......ek budha.....haa Budha hi tha.....yaa pata nahi matlab baal aise safed ki uske saamne dudh bhi ganda lage......aur chahra bhi bahut attractive tha......ek pal ko laga ki ye Orion ka hi banda hoga.....par phir.....uske kapde dekh ke laga nahi ye nahi hai waha ka....ye koi aur hi hai.....
"jaao yaha se.....mera mood sahi nahi hai.....bhago...."
Maine aise hi usko kah diya.......
Jaane ke wajaye wo mere bagal mein aake baith gaya......maine ek baar uski taraf dekha....phir laga bekkar mein kya karna......main ab pattar utha ke fenkne wala tha ki......
"bijli khatam ho gayi kya.....jo patther utha liya....."
Main - to tum bhi koi jaadui jeev ho.....
"hmm main.......haa main bhi hu....."
Ajeeb tha......aisa laga pahle wo kuch aur kahne wala tha aur phir socha kya samjhana mujhe.....usne bas haa kah diya......ye mujhe bewakoof samajh raha hai.....
Main - tum jaao kahi aur jaake baitho.....main yaha akela rahna chahta hu......
Nadi ke upar badal banne hue the.....meri wajah se......usne apna haath aage kiya....aur ek tezz hawa ka jhoonka aaya aur usse wo puri jagah saaf ho gayi.....bas raha to.......paani ke upar machliyan.....
Ye machliyan paani ke upar kyun thi pata nahi.......
" ye sab dekh rahe ho......tumne inn sab ko maar diya.....inko maine banaya tha.....ye sab tumne khatam kar diya......."
Maine jab sunna wo saari machliyan marri hui hai mujhe bura laga......main yaha apne dukh ko mitane aaya tha ye to dusro ko mitta baitha.....
Main - maaf karna mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch ho jayega.......Main chala jaata hu yaha se......
Wo - sunno.....baitho.....chalo baatein karte hai kuch....thoda bahut tum batao....thoda bahut main bataunga......
Main - tum mujhe nahi jaante aur naa Main tumko......humme kya baat hogi......
Wo - to jaan lete hai naa......Main Viraj hu.....
Next update mein inki baatein sunenge......Viraj batane wala hai kaise usko Sofia na jhoot bola aur Slayer ko bana diya.....Matlab Slayer ka pura itihaas pata chalne wala hai usko.....aur saath hi wo kiss jagah pe hai wo bhi.....insano ko laane ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai.....
madhu ne naam yaad nahi rakha is wajah se bheed wali jagah par hi portal kholke kahi chala gaya prateek .
viraj se mulakat ho gayi uski talab ke paas ..
viraj baate karna chahta hai prateek se ..
pankaj ka darrna kuch jyada hi ho gaya
.. madhu se dur rehna chahta hai wo ,.
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Hum ghar pe the.......Main aur Rupal didi bich mein baithe the.......aas pass sabhi khade the aur baithe the......
Chachi - dono ke dono ander gaye hi kyun.......kya jarurat thi jaane ki......
Didi - waha pe aawajein aa rahi thi.......humme laga.......sayd koi musibat mein hai.......hum aise kaise.....usko rahne dete.....
unhone mujhe bachane ko jhoot bol diya.......Maine aisa to nahi socha tha.......
Chachi - kya tumhe nahi laga wo wahi saitaan hoga.......kya milla tha ander koi.......wo insan milla tha kya......
Chachi - ussi ke wajah se to behosh hui main......tu chup kyun baitha hai bata jaldi.......
Main -main.....wo.....hmmm......haa ussi se.....ussi hua tha.....ye sab ussi ki wajah se hua tha......
Dadi - to wo insan kaha gaya......kahi usko.......
Didi - Nahi wo to waha se bhag gaya........ander ki taraf........wo camera leke aaya tha sayad wo bhoot dekhne aaya ho.....aur humko dekh ke wo bhag gaya.....par jaane se pahle usne...... tu chup kyun hai bolega.......baitha hai aise hi......Mummy main jaa rahi hu mera sar dard kar raha hai......Mujhe sona hai......
Chachi - baitho chup chap kya lagta hai sab mann lungi main......Kavita isko check karo jarra......
Didi - Haa ye sahi hai......har waqt check karte jaao ye Doctor ko issi ke liye to rakha hai ghar mein naa........thoda der hua Rupal ko check karo......mujhe nahi karana kuch......
Wo jhootha gussa dikha ke waha se nikal li........ab main bacha tha sirf.......
Chachi - isko main baad mein dekhungi.....tum batao.....kya kya hua tha waha pe........aur dhyaan rahe......jo bhi bologe wo sab usse confirm karaungi.....agar dono ki baatein alag hui.....to samajh lena......
Maine bas unki hi baatein batayi thoda badha chadha ke......aur phir main bhi waha se khishak liya.......
Bua - Kavita tu uski baaton ka bur.......
K.Bua - kya bol rahi hai......uski baaton ka bura kaise lag sakta hai......wo bhi to apni hi hai naa......tu bhi.....Bhabhi isko check karu kya.....mujhe isme bhi dikkat lag rahi hai......
Bua - jyada udd mat......samjhi.....
Maine dekha ye log khud mein lage hue hai main waha se nikal gaya.......
Bahar aaya tha main.......mujhe iss waqt uss Rian se baat karna tha.......uss Old Owl ke baare mein uska kaam kiya yaa nahi........
Maine usko ek do baar aawaj di......par aaya hi nahi wo........ek number ka chutiya hai ye bhi.......Immortals mein sayad ye sabse bewakoof ho......par jitna ye bewakoof hai iski muhboli bahen
Ab ye aaya nahi to main chal diya aise hi aas pass ghumne ko wo bhi binna kisi ko bataye.........
Ghar pe Bua sabko wo sab bata rahi thi jo kuch din pahle hua tha.......hamara Strange world mein chale jaana waha pe Nix logo ka alag ho jaana......ye sab.......
Unhone iske baare mein bahut socha ki bataya jaaye yaa naa jaaye......par jab unhone mera behaviour dekha to ek tarah se unko laga ki sayad isse problem ho sakti hai.......to aage kuch bura naa ho iske liye wo sabko batana hi sahi samjhi.......par bas utna h jo pata hona chahiye.......haa Madhu ke baare mein bhi bata diya inhone jo bhi inko pata tha.......
Chachi - Matlab kya hai......ye pichle janam jaisa hai kya kuch......
Bua - Pujari ji ne jaisa kaha tha usse to mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai Bhabhi.......bas aap sab thoda usko ab bado jaisa treat karna.......
Dadi - wo ladki kaun hai......usko dekha hai naa tunne.......
Bua - Haa main usko.......ye aap abhi se kya leke baith gayi......
Dadi - Kya leke baith gayi se kya matlab hai......ab khud ki bhi age dekho......kya pata agar tumhare bhatije ki shadi ho jaaye to tumhara dimmag khule ki tumko bhi kar lena chahiye......
Bua - Maaa........kya kabhi bhi kuch bhi shuru kar deti ho.......
K.Bua - Kya bol rahi hai......sahi to kaha inhone.......ab umar ho gayi hai teri.......
Chachi chay ka pyaala apne honton se lagate hue......
Chachi - waise umar to tumhari bhi ho gayi hai.......kaho to tumhare yaha iski khabar de du.......
K.Bua ki aankhen ek dum se badi ho gayi......wo ekdum Chachi ko dekhne lagi.......
Bua - hmm ye bhi sahi hai Bhabhi......
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha,......Main aaj wapas se jaake baitha hua tha park mein......ab ghar jaa nahi sakta tha main......to bas waise hi baitha uske ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha ki sayad.......galti se......bas ek baar......wo dikh jaaye.....aur main usko dekhu......kass wo rukk jati......waise hi kisi murat ki tarah....aur main bas usko dekhta rahta........
"aaee Bacche tum yaha......"
pata nahi kaun tha......pahle to maine ignore maara.......par wo mere pass aa gaya.....jab dekha usko to wo leader tha.......
Leader - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho......
Main - tumse matlab.......
Leader - dekho uss din jaan naa bachai hoti to abhi yahi pe.....
Main - mujhe tumse koi ladayi nahi karni main bas yaha pe baith.......
Bol hi raha tha ki uske dusre taraf se......Madhu aur wo Pankaj aate hue dikhe.......
Dhadkane ekdum se tezz ho gayi......sar pe pasina aa gaya......waha hawa acchi khassi chal rahi thi....aur main to chaaw mein baitha tha......
Main - Agar wo aa rahi hai to main binna darre yaha rah sakta hu.......mujhe kuch nahi hoga......main usko itne pass se wapas se dekh paaunga......
Main bas yahi to soch raha tha......aur wo dono aaye.....
Pankaj - aap yaha ho hum uss taraf dekh rahe the.....
Leader - arre main wahi tha.....wo to isko dekha........sach kahte the tum......ye log.....
Wo baat puri karta usse pahle mujhe kahna tha kuch warna ye leader meri image aur kharab kar deta Madhu ke samne......
Main - Pankaj mere bhai......wo main......mujhe Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....yaad hai tumne mujhe kaha tha wo yahi rahti thi.....unka ek kamra tha......Main bas ussi ke baare mein soch raha tha......
Madhu - Ye kya bol raha hai Pankaj......
Pankaj to pahle bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha.......ekdum se shocked........
Madhu - Pankaj....kya hua......ye kya bol raha hai.....
Pankaj - isne mujhe bhai kaha......tumne sunna naa......aapne sunna Bhai kaha isne mujhe.....
Main - Ab bhai ko to Bhai hi kahenge naa......
Pankaj - Par main kaha tumhara bhai hu......tumhi ne kaha tha pahle dost banenge aur phir bhai....main to dost bhi nahi ban sakka Bhai to dur ki baat hai.....isko rahne dete hai.....
Mann to kiya abhi yahi pe apni talwaar se isko 1000 tukdon mein kaat du.......
Madhu - rukko.....isne kaha iski Maa yaha rahti thi.....to kya......
Pankaj - Maine tumhe ye sab bataya to tha......
Madhu - Hmm main iss baare mein bhul gayi......Iska naam kya tha......
jab usne puccha mera naam kya tha......main bas apne jagah se utha.......aas pass kya hai kaun hai kyun hai kisi chizz se matlab nahi raha tha mera......maine portal khola aur waha se nikal gaya......
Main nahi jaanta tha main kaha jaa raha hu.......bas khola aur nikal gaya waha se......
Ye bhi sayad ek park hi tha......Main baith gaya ek taalab ke saamne.....
Bahut ajeeb lag raha tha matlab kya hi kahu isko........naa accha kah sakta hu naa burra......gussa tha.....par dukh usse jyada tha.....
Wahi baitha taalab mein chote chote bijli ke tukde phenkne laga main.......
Wahi waha Madhu ke pass.......
unhone dekha ki Maine portal khola aur uske ander chala gaya.......wo bhi iss waqt.....jab park bhara hua tha......Madhu ko itna to pata tha ki ye sab insano ke saamne nahi karte hai......
Wo teeno aas pass dekhne lag gaye.......ki kahi kisi ne dekha to nahi abhi jo hua.......karib 10 minute tak wo dekhte rahe......aur jab unko laga kisi ne nahi dekha tab wo waha se wapas apne ghar jaane lage.....inka plan kuch aur tha par ho kuch aur gaya......
Madhu - usko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha......agar kisi Insan ne dekha hota to pareshani ho jaati......aare ek do hote to hum sambhal sakte the.....usne purre park ke samne ye kiya tha......
Pankaj ko thoda thoda samajh aa raha tha Prateek ne aisa kyun kiya.....aur abhi wo thoda sa ghabra bhi raha tha......Pujari ji ke kahe anusar.......kisi bhi kimmat pe Madhu aur Prateek ke bich nahi aana hai.....aur wo aa chuka tha......ab usko pata nahi tha aage kya ho sakta hai....
Pankaj - Humme iske baare mein ghar mein batana hoga.....Papa ko ye sab batana hoga.....wo inn sabko thoda aur baarikhi se dekhenge...
Leader - Main isme madad kar sakta tha par agar maine apni powers uss amount mein bahar nikale to dikkat ho sakti hai......Head office ko pata chal jaayega aur phir main....wapas chala jaaunga sayad......
Madhu - Humme bas jaake ye tumhare Papa ko bolna hai......par isme tumhari galti hai Pankaj......
Pankaj ne jab ye sunna uski fatt gayi thi......wo itne der se bas yahi to soch raha tha......Pujari ji ki baat.......dono ke bich mein nahi aana hai.....aur ab Madhu ne usko galat bol diya......ho sakta hai ye abhi kaabu se bahar jaaye aur.....kaam khatam......
Pankaj - nahi.....nahi.....dekho main galat tha....par tum bas iske liye mujhe kuch nahi kar sakti......Main bata raha hu tumko.....main usko yaha leke aaunga....tumhare saamne.....tumse milne ko......bas kuch karna mat mujhe......
Madhu ko samajh nahi aaya iska matlab....wo apna sar khujane lag gayi.......
Madhu - Ye kya bol rahe ho.....maine kab kaha main kuch karne wali hu......maine kaha tumhari galti thi......uski Maa rahti thi tumhare yaha.....aur usko uski Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....usko aane dena tha....baaki batein baad mein kar sakte the....par usko aane to dena tha......
Leader - Main bhi sayad yahi kahunga.....
Pankaj - haa....usko aane dena chahiye tha.....main khud leke aaunga usko......tum bas....bas mujhe kuch mat karna.....main leke aaunga usko......
Madhu - Pagal ho kya,......main kya karungi tumko......bekkar mein kuch bhi bole jaa rahe ho......chalo ghar aur jaake batao sab kuch......
Pankaj kaamp raha tha iss waqt......usne apni aakhon se dekha tha darwaja ukhadte hue......
Wo jaldi se ghar mein gaya.....Daksh ko dhundha aur sab kuch bataya......naa sirf ye sab,.......balki Strange world wala kissa bhi.....wo kissa jo school mein sab samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya tha.......School ke hisab se Madhu bas waha chali gayi aur uske baad jab wo wapas aayi to uske sath saath aadhe se jyada Nix bhi yaha aa gaye......
Sabko aisa laga wo bas apne logo ki madad karne gayi thi.....yaa aisa hi kuch......par jab saari sachayi Pankaj ne Daksh ko batayi to wo.....wo pareshan ho gaye......wo samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya karna chahiye......matlab aisa kuch unhone pahli baar sunna tha......
Aur jiss tarah se sab unko bataya gaya wo samajh rahe the sab sach hi hona chahiye......
Unhone isko bado ki tarah handle karne ka socha.......pahle to wo uss park mein gaye.....aur waha pe uss portal ke tukde dekhne lage......kyunki wo sabse pahle Prateek ko dhundhna chahte the.....
Par kuch bhi nahi milla waisa......wo waha se wapas aaye......dekha Leader Madhu aur Pankaj wahi hai......
Daksh - Pankaj ghar pe raho Madhu ke saath.....aur aapko main thoda parehsan karna chahta hu.....kya aap mere saath Meri Bahen ke yaha chalenge......mujhe lagta hai humme unse baat karni hogi isko leke......
Pankaj - Main bhi chalunga......main yaha pe.....
Daksh ko pata tha wo kya soch raha hai......unhone manna kar diya......
Pankaj ko ghar pe hi rahna tha Madhu ke saath.......aur usko bas yahi lag raha tha naa jaane kab......wo wapas se apna aapa kho degi aur usko.......agar ye nahi karegi to wo Prateek aa jaayega aur wo......yaa phir sayad dono milke......
Pankaj - Papa main Pujari ji ke pass.....haa unke pass chala jaata hu.....sayad......
Madhu ko ye bada ajeeb lag raha tha matlab itni si baat hui aur ye Pankaj usse itna darr raha tha....usne kuch kaha bhi nahi usko jyada......
Madhu - Main jaa rahi hu waha........Daksh sir aapne mujhe apne saath rakha bahut bahut aabhar uska.....par.....par ab sayad main iss jagah ke liye sahi nahi hu......waise bhi mere kabile ke log yaha aa chukke hai.....Main unke saath hi rahna pasand karungi......
Daksh - abhi ke liye iss baat ko yahi rahne dete hai Madhu......tum ek kaam karo......apne iss darpokh bhai ko leke jaau apne Pujari ji ke pass......aur tum.......darr kya rahe ho.......aaj tumhari Maa yaha hoti to....pata nahi kya sochti wo......
Pankaj darra hua tha......usne dekha tha kya hua tha darwaje ke saath.....iss wajahse wo darra hua tha.....par apne pita ki baat sunn ke usko khud se sharm aane lagi......
Pankaj - Main yahi rahunga.....madhu ke saath.....aap jaao......
Madhu - main jaa rahi hu Pujari ji ke pass......
Daksh - Beta kuch der rukk jaao......nahi to ye......
Madhu - ye meri wajah se to darr raha hai.....aur maine kaha kuch kiya iske sath....maine kuch bola tumko.....jo darr rahe ho.....
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha wahi ghar pe ab sabhi mujhe dundh rahe the.....kyunki main bahut der se bahar tha......Nikita ne Jwala ko bulana sahi nahi samjha sabhi ke saamne......par usko pata tha main kaha ho sakta hu........
To usne sabko bata diya......aur uski baat se lagbhag sab santust the......
Nikita - Wo pakka Madhu ke pass hoga......School mein bhi usko dekhta rahta hai bas.......
Bua - hmmm Mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hai....par kya humme....waha jaana chahiye......
Chachi - Main baat karti hu Daksh se......sayad unko pata ho Madhu kaha hai phir waha jaake dekh lenge.....
Chachi ne ye kaha aur call laga diya......
Waha Daksh samjha rahe the ghar pe hi raho....par Madhu mann nahi rahi thi......
Chachi - Hello......Daksh ji.......
Daksh - Hmm....bataiye Nitya kya kar sakta hu main aapke liye......
Chachi - Ek minute........(ye Daksh ji ko bhi pata hai ye sab yaa sirf humme hi pata hai...)
Bua - Pankaj tha waha pe pata nahi usne bataya hai yaa nahi.....
Halaki phone ko dhakk rakha tha par aawaj chali gayi......
Daksh - Nitya ji mujhe inn sab ke baare mein abhi hi pata chala hai......hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge.....waise mujhe aapse ek baat puchni thi.....
Chachi - Hmm iss baare mein milke ek saath baat karna hi sahi hoga.....aur haa puchiye kya puchna hai uske baad main bhi puch lungi.....
Daksh - Wo Kya Prateek waha pe hai abhi....
Chachi - Nahi to yaha nahi hai......Mujhe lagta hai aapke ghar ke pass hoga wo Madhu aapke yaha hi hai naa......
Daksh Mama ko samajh aa gaya tha ki wo ghar to nahi gaya hai......to pahle wo baaki sab se thoda dur ho gaye......
Daksh - Ji darasal baat aisi hai.......Prateek tha yaha pe.....par baccho mein kuch baatein ho gayi.....aur wo yaha se chala gaya......mujhe laga aapke pass hoga to main aane wala tha.....par aapne call kar diya....wo yaha nahi hai.....aur naa hi uske portal ka koi tukda mujhe milla hai jisse main bata paaun wo kaha hai....
Chachi - Hmm.....ye to chinta ki baat hai.....Hum aa rahe hai waha pe.......
Call cut aur Chachi ne ye baat sabhi ko batayi...
Chachi ki baat sunne ke baad sabhi jaane ko ready ho gaye.....par Bua ne Nikita ko ghar pe rukne ko kaha......ek to Didi thi apne kamre mein iss wajah se aur dusra....wo chahti thi Nikita waha pe Jwala ko bulaye aur usko dhundhne kahe......
Sabhi ko ye sahi laga ki Nikita ghar mein rahi to agar Prateek wapas aaya to wo bata degi.....saath mein Rupal ko bhi dekh legi......sab usko waha chod ke nikal gaye.......
Nikita ne bhi sabke jaane ke baad jaldi se Jwala ko bulaya......aur usko Prateek ko dhundhne ko bola......
Jwala bhi chal diya......
Sab Mujhe dhundh rahe the......par main ek taalab ke pass baitha taalab mein bijli ke chote chote tukde paani mein fenk raha tha.....usse waha pe wo paani garam hota jaa raha tha......aur aas pass baadal jaisa ban gaya tha.......
"Aee ladke ......kya kar rahe ho yaha......band karo ye badal banana......"
Maine mudd ke dekha......ek budha.....haa Budha hi tha.....yaa pata nahi matlab baal aise safed ki uske saamne dudh bhi ganda lage......aur chahra bhi bahut attractive tha......ek pal ko laga ki ye Orion ka hi banda hoga.....par phir.....uske kapde dekh ke laga nahi ye nahi hai waha ka....ye koi aur hi hai.....
"jaao yaha se.....mera mood sahi nahi hai.....bhago...."
Maine aise hi usko kah diya.......
Jaane ke wajaye wo mere bagal mein aake baith gaya......maine ek baar uski taraf dekha....phir laga bekkar mein kya karna......main ab pattar utha ke fenkne wala tha ki......
"bijli khatam ho gayi kya.....jo patther utha liya....."
Main - to tum bhi koi jaadui jeev ho.....
"hmm main.......haa main bhi hu....."
Ajeeb tha......aisa laga pahle wo kuch aur kahne wala tha aur phir socha kya samjhana mujhe.....usne bas haa kah diya......ye mujhe bewakoof samajh raha hai.....
Main - tum jaao kahi aur jaake baitho.....main yaha akela rahna chahta hu......
Nadi ke upar badal banne hue the.....meri wajah se......usne apna haath aage kiya....aur ek tezz hawa ka jhoonka aaya aur usse wo puri jagah saaf ho gayi.....bas raha to.......paani ke upar machliyan.....
Ye machliyan paani ke upar kyun thi pata nahi.......
" ye sab dekh rahe ho......tumne inn sab ko maar diya.....inko maine banaya tha.....ye sab tumne khatam kar diya......."
Maine jab sunna wo saari machliyan marri hui hai mujhe bura laga......main yaha apne dukh ko mitane aaya tha ye to dusro ko mitta baitha.....
Main - maaf karna mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch ho jayega.......Main chala jaata hu yaha se......
Wo - sunno.....baitho.....chalo baatein karte hai kuch....thoda bahut tum batao....thoda bahut main bataunga......
Main - tum mujhe nahi jaante aur naa Main tumko......humme kya baat hogi......
Wo - to jaan lete hai naa......Main Viraj hu.....
Next update mein inki baatein sunenge......Viraj batane wala hai kaise usko Sofia na jhoot bola aur Slayer ko bana diya.....Matlab Slayer ka pura itihaas pata chalne wala hai usko.....aur saath hi wo kiss jagah pe hai wo bhi.....insano ko laane ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai.....
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Hum ghar pe the.......Main aur Rupal didi bich mein baithe the.......aas pass sabhi khade the aur baithe the......
Chachi - dono ke dono ander gaye hi kyun.......kya jarurat thi jaane ki......
Didi - waha pe aawajein aa rahi thi.......humme laga.......sayd koi musibat mein hai.......hum aise kaise.....usko rahne dete.....
unhone mujhe bachane ko jhoot bol diya.......Maine aisa to nahi socha tha.......
Chachi - kya tumhe nahi laga wo wahi saitaan hoga.......kya milla tha ander koi.......wo insan milla tha kya......
Chachi - ussi ke wajah se to behosh hui main......tu chup kyun baitha hai bata jaldi.......
Main -main.....wo.....hmmm......haa ussi se.....ussi hua tha.....ye sab ussi ki wajah se hua tha......
Dadi - to wo insan kaha gaya......kahi usko.......
Didi - Nahi wo to waha se bhag gaya........ander ki taraf........wo camera leke aaya tha sayad wo bhoot dekhne aaya ho.....aur humko dekh ke wo bhag gaya.....par jaane se pahle usne...... tu chup kyun hai bolega.......baitha hai aise hi......Mummy main jaa rahi hu mera sar dard kar raha hai......Mujhe sona hai......
Chachi - baitho chup chap kya lagta hai sab mann lungi main......Kavita isko check karo jarra......
Didi - Haa ye sahi hai......har waqt check karte jaao ye Doctor ko issi ke liye to rakha hai ghar mein naa........thoda der hua Rupal ko check karo......mujhe nahi karana kuch......
Wo jhootha gussa dikha ke waha se nikal li........ab main bacha tha sirf.......
Chachi - isko main baad mein dekhungi.....tum batao.....kya kya hua tha waha pe........aur dhyaan rahe......jo bhi bologe wo sab usse confirm karaungi.....agar dono ki baatein alag hui.....to samajh lena......
Maine bas unki hi baatein batayi thoda badha chadha ke......aur phir main bhi waha se khishak liya.......
Bua - Kavita tu uski baaton ka bur.......
K.Bua - kya bol rahi hai......uski baaton ka bura kaise lag sakta hai......wo bhi to apni hi hai naa......tu bhi.....Bhabhi isko check karu kya.....mujhe isme bhi dikkat lag rahi hai......
Bua - jyada udd mat......samjhi.....
Maine dekha ye log khud mein lage hue hai main waha se nikal gaya.......
Bahar aaya tha main.......mujhe iss waqt uss Rian se baat karna tha.......uss Old Owl ke baare mein uska kaam kiya yaa nahi........
Maine usko ek do baar aawaj di......par aaya hi nahi wo........ek number ka chutiya hai ye bhi.......Immortals mein sayad ye sabse bewakoof ho......par jitna ye bewakoof hai iski muhboli bahen
Ab ye aaya nahi to main chal diya aise hi aas pass ghumne ko wo bhi binna kisi ko bataye.........
Ghar pe Bua sabko wo sab bata rahi thi jo kuch din pahle hua tha.......hamara Strange world mein chale jaana waha pe Nix logo ka alag ho jaana......ye sab.......
Unhone iske baare mein bahut socha ki bataya jaaye yaa naa jaaye......par jab unhone mera behaviour dekha to ek tarah se unko laga ki sayad isse problem ho sakti hai.......to aage kuch bura naa ho iske liye wo sabko batana hi sahi samjhi.......par bas utna h jo pata hona chahiye.......haa Madhu ke baare mein bhi bata diya inhone jo bhi inko pata tha.......
Chachi - Matlab kya hai......ye pichle janam jaisa hai kya kuch......
Bua - Pujari ji ne jaisa kaha tha usse to mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai Bhabhi.......bas aap sab thoda usko ab bado jaisa treat karna.......
Dadi - wo ladki kaun hai......usko dekha hai naa tunne.......
Bua - Haa main usko.......ye aap abhi se kya leke baith gayi......
Dadi - Kya leke baith gayi se kya matlab hai......ab khud ki bhi age dekho......kya pata agar tumhare bhatije ki shadi ho jaaye to tumhara dimmag khule ki tumko bhi kar lena chahiye......
Bua - Maaa........kya kabhi bhi kuch bhi shuru kar deti ho.......
K.Bua - Kya bol rahi hai......sahi to kaha inhone.......ab umar ho gayi hai teri.......
Chachi chay ka pyaala apne honton se lagate hue......
Chachi - waise umar to tumhari bhi ho gayi hai.......kaho to tumhare yaha iski khabar de du.......
K.Bua ki aankhen ek dum se badi ho gayi......wo ekdum Chachi ko dekhne lagi.......
Bua - hmm ye bhi sahi hai Bhabhi......
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha,......Main aaj wapas se jaake baitha hua tha park mein......ab ghar jaa nahi sakta tha main......to bas waise hi baitha uske ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha ki sayad.......galti se......bas ek baar......wo dikh jaaye.....aur main usko dekhu......kass wo rukk jati......waise hi kisi murat ki tarah....aur main bas usko dekhta rahta........
"aaee Bacche tum yaha......"
pata nahi kaun tha......pahle to maine ignore maara.......par wo mere pass aa gaya.....jab dekha usko to wo leader tha.......
Leader - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho......
Main - tumse matlab.......
Leader - dekho uss din jaan naa bachai hoti to abhi yahi pe.....
Main - mujhe tumse koi ladayi nahi karni main bas yaha pe baith.......
Bol hi raha tha ki uske dusre taraf se......Madhu aur wo Pankaj aate hue dikhe.......
Dhadkane ekdum se tezz ho gayi......sar pe pasina aa gaya......waha hawa acchi khassi chal rahi thi....aur main to chaaw mein baitha tha......
Main - Agar wo aa rahi hai to main binna darre yaha rah sakta hu.......mujhe kuch nahi hoga......main usko itne pass se wapas se dekh paaunga......
Main bas yahi to soch raha tha......aur wo dono aaye.....
Pankaj - aap yaha ho hum uss taraf dekh rahe the.....
Leader - arre main wahi tha.....wo to isko dekha........sach kahte the tum......ye log.....
Wo baat puri karta usse pahle mujhe kahna tha kuch warna ye leader meri image aur kharab kar deta Madhu ke samne......
Main - Pankaj mere bhai......wo main......mujhe Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....yaad hai tumne mujhe kaha tha wo yahi rahti thi.....unka ek kamra tha......Main bas ussi ke baare mein soch raha tha......
Madhu - Ye kya bol raha hai Pankaj......
Pankaj to pahle bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha.......ekdum se shocked........
Madhu - Pankaj....kya hua......ye kya bol raha hai.....
Pankaj - isne mujhe bhai kaha......tumne sunna naa......aapne sunna Bhai kaha isne mujhe.....
Main - Ab bhai ko to Bhai hi kahenge naa......
Pankaj - Par main kaha tumhara bhai hu......tumhi ne kaha tha pahle dost banenge aur phir bhai....main to dost bhi nahi ban sakka Bhai to dur ki baat hai.....isko rahne dete hai.....
Mann to kiya abhi yahi pe apni talwaar se isko 1000 tukdon mein kaat du.......
Madhu - rukko.....isne kaha iski Maa yaha rahti thi.....to kya......
Pankaj - Maine tumhe ye sab bataya to tha......
Madhu - Hmm main iss baare mein bhul gayi......Iska naam kya tha......
jab usne puccha mera naam kya tha......main bas apne jagah se utha.......aas pass kya hai kaun hai kyun hai kisi chizz se matlab nahi raha tha mera......maine portal khola aur waha se nikal gaya......
Main nahi jaanta tha main kaha jaa raha hu.......bas khola aur nikal gaya waha se......
Ye bhi sayad ek park hi tha......Main baith gaya ek taalab ke saamne.....
Bahut ajeeb lag raha tha matlab kya hi kahu isko........naa accha kah sakta hu naa burra......gussa tha.....par dukh usse jyada tha.....
Wahi baitha taalab mein chote chote bijli ke tukde phenkne laga main.......
Wahi waha Madhu ke pass.......
unhone dekha ki Maine portal khola aur uske ander chala gaya.......wo bhi iss waqt.....jab park bhara hua tha......Madhu ko itna to pata tha ki ye sab insano ke saamne nahi karte hai......
Wo teeno aas pass dekhne lag gaye.......ki kahi kisi ne dekha to nahi abhi jo hua.......karib 10 minute tak wo dekhte rahe......aur jab unko laga kisi ne nahi dekha tab wo waha se wapas apne ghar jaane lage.....inka plan kuch aur tha par ho kuch aur gaya......
Madhu - usko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha......agar kisi Insan ne dekha hota to pareshani ho jaati......aare ek do hote to hum sambhal sakte the.....usne purre park ke samne ye kiya tha......
Pankaj ko thoda thoda samajh aa raha tha Prateek ne aisa kyun kiya.....aur abhi wo thoda sa ghabra bhi raha tha......Pujari ji ke kahe anusar.......kisi bhi kimmat pe Madhu aur Prateek ke bich nahi aana hai.....aur wo aa chuka tha......ab usko pata nahi tha aage kya ho sakta hai....
Pankaj - Humme iske baare mein ghar mein batana hoga.....Papa ko ye sab batana hoga.....wo inn sabko thoda aur baarikhi se dekhenge...
Leader - Main isme madad kar sakta tha par agar maine apni powers uss amount mein bahar nikale to dikkat ho sakti hai......Head office ko pata chal jaayega aur phir main....wapas chala jaaunga sayad......
Madhu - Humme bas jaake ye tumhare Papa ko bolna hai......par isme tumhari galti hai Pankaj......
Pankaj ne jab ye sunna uski fatt gayi thi......wo itne der se bas yahi to soch raha tha......Pujari ji ki baat.......dono ke bich mein nahi aana hai.....aur ab Madhu ne usko galat bol diya......ho sakta hai ye abhi kaabu se bahar jaaye aur.....kaam khatam......
Pankaj - nahi.....nahi.....dekho main galat tha....par tum bas iske liye mujhe kuch nahi kar sakti......Main bata raha hu tumko.....main usko yaha leke aaunga....tumhare saamne.....tumse milne ko......bas kuch karna mat mujhe......
Madhu ko samajh nahi aaya iska matlab....wo apna sar khujane lag gayi.......
Madhu - Ye kya bol rahe ho.....maine kab kaha main kuch karne wali hu......maine kaha tumhari galti thi......uski Maa rahti thi tumhare yaha.....aur usko uski Maa ki yaad aa rahi thi.....usko aane dena tha....baaki batein baad mein kar sakte the....par usko aane to dena tha......
Leader - Main bhi sayad yahi kahunga.....
Pankaj - haa....usko aane dena chahiye tha.....main khud leke aaunga usko......tum bas....bas mujhe kuch mat karna.....main leke aaunga usko......
Madhu - Pagal ho kya,......main kya karungi tumko......bekkar mein kuch bhi bole jaa rahe ho......chalo ghar aur jaake batao sab kuch......
Pankaj kaamp raha tha iss waqt......usne apni aakhon se dekha tha darwaja ukhadte hue......
Wo jaldi se ghar mein gaya.....Daksh ko dhundha aur sab kuch bataya......naa sirf ye sab,.......balki Strange world wala kissa bhi.....wo kissa jo school mein sab samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya tha.......School ke hisab se Madhu bas waha chali gayi aur uske baad jab wo wapas aayi to uske sath saath aadhe se jyada Nix bhi yaha aa gaye......
Sabko aisa laga wo bas apne logo ki madad karne gayi thi.....yaa aisa hi kuch......par jab saari sachayi Pankaj ne Daksh ko batayi to wo.....wo pareshan ho gaye......wo samajh nahi paa rahe the ki kya karna chahiye......matlab aisa kuch unhone pahli baar sunna tha......
Aur jiss tarah se sab unko bataya gaya wo samajh rahe the sab sach hi hona chahiye......
Unhone isko bado ki tarah handle karne ka socha.......pahle to wo uss park mein gaye.....aur waha pe uss portal ke tukde dekhne lage......kyunki wo sabse pahle Prateek ko dhundhna chahte the.....
Par kuch bhi nahi milla waisa......wo waha se wapas aaye......dekha Leader Madhu aur Pankaj wahi hai......
Daksh - Pankaj ghar pe raho Madhu ke saath.....aur aapko main thoda parehsan karna chahta hu.....kya aap mere saath Meri Bahen ke yaha chalenge......mujhe lagta hai humme unse baat karni hogi isko leke......
Pankaj - Main bhi chalunga......main yaha pe.....
Daksh ko pata tha wo kya soch raha hai......unhone manna kar diya......
Pankaj ko ghar pe hi rahna tha Madhu ke saath.......aur usko bas yahi lag raha tha naa jaane kab......wo wapas se apna aapa kho degi aur usko.......agar ye nahi karegi to wo Prateek aa jaayega aur wo......yaa phir sayad dono milke......
Pankaj - Papa main Pujari ji ke pass.....haa unke pass chala jaata hu.....sayad......
Madhu ko ye bada ajeeb lag raha tha matlab itni si baat hui aur ye Pankaj usse itna darr raha tha....usne kuch kaha bhi nahi usko jyada......
Madhu - Main jaa rahi hu waha........Daksh sir aapne mujhe apne saath rakha bahut bahut aabhar uska.....par.....par ab sayad main iss jagah ke liye sahi nahi hu......waise bhi mere kabile ke log yaha aa chukke hai.....Main unke saath hi rahna pasand karungi......
Daksh - abhi ke liye iss baat ko yahi rahne dete hai Madhu......tum ek kaam karo......apne iss darpokh bhai ko leke jaau apne Pujari ji ke pass......aur tum.......darr kya rahe ho.......aaj tumhari Maa yaha hoti to....pata nahi kya sochti wo......
Pankaj darra hua tha......usne dekha tha kya hua tha darwaje ke saath.....iss wajahse wo darra hua tha.....par apne pita ki baat sunn ke usko khud se sharm aane lagi......
Pankaj - Main yahi rahunga.....madhu ke saath.....aap jaao......
Madhu - main jaa rahi hu Pujari ji ke pass......
Daksh - Beta kuch der rukk jaao......nahi to ye......
Madhu - ye meri wajah se to darr raha hai.....aur maine kaha kuch kiya iske sath....maine kuch bola tumko.....jo darr rahe ho.....
Yaha ye sab chal raha tha wahi ghar pe ab sabhi mujhe dundh rahe the.....kyunki main bahut der se bahar tha......Nikita ne Jwala ko bulana sahi nahi samjha sabhi ke saamne......par usko pata tha main kaha ho sakta hu........
To usne sabko bata diya......aur uski baat se lagbhag sab santust the......
Nikita - Wo pakka Madhu ke pass hoga......School mein bhi usko dekhta rahta hai bas.......
Bua - hmmm Mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hai....par kya humme....waha jaana chahiye......
Chachi - Main baat karti hu Daksh se......sayad unko pata ho Madhu kaha hai phir waha jaake dekh lenge.....
Chachi ne ye kaha aur call laga diya......
Waha Daksh samjha rahe the ghar pe hi raho....par Madhu mann nahi rahi thi......
Chachi - Hello......Daksh ji.......
Daksh - Hmm....bataiye Nitya kya kar sakta hu main aapke liye......
Chachi - Ek minute........(ye Daksh ji ko bhi pata hai ye sab yaa sirf humme hi pata hai...)
Bua - Pankaj tha waha pe pata nahi usne bataya hai yaa nahi.....
Halaki phone ko dhakk rakha tha par aawaj chali gayi......
Daksh - Nitya ji mujhe inn sab ke baare mein abhi hi pata chala hai......hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge.....waise mujhe aapse ek baat puchni thi.....
Chachi - Hmm iss baare mein milke ek saath baat karna hi sahi hoga.....aur haa puchiye kya puchna hai uske baad main bhi puch lungi.....
Daksh - Wo Kya Prateek waha pe hai abhi....
Chachi - Nahi to yaha nahi hai......Mujhe lagta hai aapke ghar ke pass hoga wo Madhu aapke yaha hi hai naa......
Daksh Mama ko samajh aa gaya tha ki wo ghar to nahi gaya hai......to pahle wo baaki sab se thoda dur ho gaye......
Daksh - Ji darasal baat aisi hai.......Prateek tha yaha pe.....par baccho mein kuch baatein ho gayi.....aur wo yaha se chala gaya......mujhe laga aapke pass hoga to main aane wala tha.....par aapne call kar diya....wo yaha nahi hai.....aur naa hi uske portal ka koi tukda mujhe milla hai jisse main bata paaun wo kaha hai....
Chachi - Hmm.....ye to chinta ki baat hai.....Hum aa rahe hai waha pe.......
Call cut aur Chachi ne ye baat sabhi ko batayi...
Chachi ki baat sunne ke baad sabhi jaane ko ready ho gaye.....par Bua ne Nikita ko ghar pe rukne ko kaha......ek to Didi thi apne kamre mein iss wajah se aur dusra....wo chahti thi Nikita waha pe Jwala ko bulaye aur usko dhundhne kahe......
Sabhi ko ye sahi laga ki Nikita ghar mein rahi to agar Prateek wapas aaya to wo bata degi.....saath mein Rupal ko bhi dekh legi......sab usko waha chod ke nikal gaye.......
Nikita ne bhi sabke jaane ke baad jaldi se Jwala ko bulaya......aur usko Prateek ko dhundhne ko bola......
Jwala bhi chal diya......
Sab Mujhe dhundh rahe the......par main ek taalab ke pass baitha taalab mein bijli ke chote chote tukde paani mein fenk raha tha.....usse waha pe wo paani garam hota jaa raha tha......aur aas pass baadal jaisa ban gaya tha.......
"Aee ladke ......kya kar rahe ho yaha......band karo ye badal banana......"
Maine mudd ke dekha......ek budha.....haa Budha hi tha.....yaa pata nahi matlab baal aise safed ki uske saamne dudh bhi ganda lage......aur chahra bhi bahut attractive tha......ek pal ko laga ki ye Orion ka hi banda hoga.....par phir.....uske kapde dekh ke laga nahi ye nahi hai waha ka....ye koi aur hi hai.....
"jaao yaha se.....mera mood sahi nahi hai.....bhago...."
Maine aise hi usko kah diya.......
Jaane ke wajaye wo mere bagal mein aake baith gaya......maine ek baar uski taraf dekha....phir laga bekkar mein kya karna......main ab pattar utha ke fenkne wala tha ki......
"bijli khatam ho gayi kya.....jo patther utha liya....."
Main - to tum bhi koi jaadui jeev ho.....
"hmm main.......haa main bhi hu....."
Ajeeb tha......aisa laga pahle wo kuch aur kahne wala tha aur phir socha kya samjhana mujhe.....usne bas haa kah diya......ye mujhe bewakoof samajh raha hai.....
Main - tum jaao kahi aur jaake baitho.....main yaha akela rahna chahta hu......
Nadi ke upar badal banne hue the.....meri wajah se......usne apna haath aage kiya....aur ek tezz hawa ka jhoonka aaya aur usse wo puri jagah saaf ho gayi.....bas raha to.......paani ke upar machliyan.....
Ye machliyan paani ke upar kyun thi pata nahi.......
" ye sab dekh rahe ho......tumne inn sab ko maar diya.....inko maine banaya tha.....ye sab tumne khatam kar diya......."
Maine jab sunna wo saari machliyan marri hui hai mujhe bura laga......main yaha apne dukh ko mitane aaya tha ye to dusro ko mitta baitha.....
Main - maaf karna mujhe pata nahi tha aisa kuch ho jayega.......Main chala jaata hu yaha se......
Wo - sunno.....baitho.....chalo baatein karte hai kuch....thoda bahut tum batao....thoda bahut main bataunga......
Main - tum mujhe nahi jaante aur naa Main tumko......humme kya baat hogi......
Wo - to jaan lete hai naa......Main Viraj hu.....
Next update mein inki baatein sunenge......Viraj batane wala hai kaise usko Sofia na jhoot bola aur Slayer ko bana diya.....Matlab Slayer ka pura itihaas pata chalne wala hai usko.....aur saath hi wo kiss jagah pe hai wo bhi.....insano ko laane ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai.....
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