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Update to dhashu hai....but update aane me late kyu ho raha hai bhai....
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Story kyo rok di bhai...bahut achchi story likh rahe the...please atleast koi reply dene ki koshish karna...bahut baar check karta hu ki koi update aaye...ya aapka reply hi aa jaaye..please notify us soon restricted bro.
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UPDATE 123
Chachi ghar pe aa chukki thi aur wo aage kuch bolti usse pahle hi room ke ander kisi cheez ke girne ki aawaj aayi....
Ab aage
Chachi ne ek baar humme dekha......aur hum ghabraye hue the.......Humme pata tha.....unse ye baat kabhi nahi chup sakti ki hum kisi ko ghar pe laaye hai.....yaa koi ghar pe aaya hai....
Ek to wo unka aur dadi ka jaaduyi kawach aur dusra.....unko pata chal hi jaata.....kisi naa kisi tarah se.....
Aur ab jab unko pata chala.....
Chachi - Ghar pe koi aaya hai kya.....
Pata nahi kyun......sayad wo jaan bujh ke humse ye puch rahi thi......
P.Bua - Haa Bhabhi.....wo....
Abhi Bua kuch bolti usse pahle phir se koi saman gira aur phir uss room ka darwaja khul gaya......
Samne Pankaj tha......uska hath uske sar pe tha.....aur dekhne mein uski halat kharab lag rahi thi......
P.Bua - Wo....Pankaj yaha aaya tha.....
Chachi ne jab Pankaj ko waise dekha to wo turant uske pass gayi aur usko pakad ke pass ke sofe pe bithaya......
Chachi aksar ye saare kaam jaadu se nahi kiya karti thi.....par unhone apne jaadu ka istemmal Pankaj ke liye paani laane ko kiya......
Chachi - Pankaj.....tum theek ho naa....
Pankaj bas apne sar pe haath liye sofe pe baitha yaha waha dekhe jaa raha tha......
Chachi ne wapas se usse puccha ki wo theek hai ki nahi.......par Pankaj jawab ne jawab nahi diya.....wo bas.....usss paani ke glass ko dekh raha tha jo abhi waha pe kahi se aa gaya tha......
Chachi ne usko wahi pe baithe rahne diya aur......
Baaki sab ko waha se thoda dur leke gayi......Nikita ko uske pass chod ke......
Chachi - Poonam.....kya hua hai Pankaj ko.....wo aise hamare ghar pe kyun hai......
Rupal didi - Mummy, Kya maltab hai aapka....kya wo aise hamare ghar pe nahi aa sakta.....
Chachi ne ghoor ke Rupal didi ko dekha.....aur bas Rupal didi chup ho gayi......
P.bua - Wo Bhabhi.....darasal......
Chachi - ab bolo bhi....Main kya jawab dungi Daksh ko.....
Abhi yaha pe ye sab chal raha tha wahi dusri taraf Fumos pe......
Lucifer ek pathar ke sahare baitha hua tha kyunki usse utha nahi jaa raha tha......
Dhruv yaa Justin jiska bhi iss waqt pe Slayer ke body pe control tha wo waha se thodi duri pe khada hua tha......sayad dono ka hi control tha uss waqt uspe......yaa ye kaha jaaye ki kisi ka bhi control nahi tha.....
Yun to Sofia ne Slayer ke body ko aisa banaya hi tha ki wo dher saari saktiyan apne ander samma sakke.....lekin har ek chizz ki ek kshamta hoti hai.....aur sayad aaj Slayer ke body ki kshamta khatam hone wali thi.....
Lucifer apni jagah se dekh raha tha.....kaise uske saamne jo banda khada tha wo achanak se vibrate hone lag gaya tha......aur wo bhi buri tarah se.......
Lucifer dekh hi raha tha ki acchanak se......waha pe bahut tezz roshni ho gayi.......
Lucifer ko apni aankhen band karni pad gayi......
Ye jo roshni thi....wo roshni koi aam roshni nahi thi.......wo roshni uss Immortal ke uss jagah pe aane ki wajah se hui thi......
Lucifer ko iss baat ka pata nahi chalne wala tha ki ab kuch der tak jo bhi hoga......wo naa to usko dekh paayega naa hi mehsoos kar paayega.....
Wo Immortal waha pe nicche aaya aur wo sidha Slayer ke body ke pass gaya jo abhi bahut buri tarah se hil raha tha......
"Hmm......Maine socha nahi tha....par ye sarir......ye kaafi sahi halat mein hai iss waqt bhi......"
Dhruv ne jab ye aawaj sunni to wo samajh gaya ki waha pe koi immortal aaya hua hai........par wo usko jaanta nahi tha......
Justin - Tum kaun ho.....aur ye sab kya ho raha hai......Mere Pita kaha hai.....
"Ooh ghabrane ki baat nahi hai......wo ussi halat mein hai jis halat mein tum dono ne usse chodda hai......Main ab bas ek hi sawal puchna chahta hu tum dono se......"
Dhruv - Tumhe pata hai main kaun hu.....kya hu......
"Sayad.....haa......yaa......sayad......naa par pata hai.....ye jo tum dono ki jodi hai......ye kamal ki hai.....Main....main bahut waqt se...yaha waha bhatakta aa raha hu.....chizzon ko dekhta unko samajhta aa raha hu....par aaj tak.....ye jo tum dono ka nahi nahi tum tinno ka sambhandh hai.....wo samajh nahi paa raa hu....aur tumhe to pata hoga jab hum bahut waqt kahte hai to wo kitna waqt hota hai......"
Dhruv - to kya tumhe pata tha.....ki main kaun hu......aur phir bhi....phir bhi tum mere pass nahi aaye.....mujhe isse bahar nikalne ko....
"Sayad tumne sunna nahi.....Main ye kah raha tha ki tum tinno ka ye sambandh bahut hi ajeeb hai aur kammal ka bhi hai.....Main tumhe train karna chahta hu.....taaki tum ek sath kaam kar sakko..."
Dhruv - kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum......
Justin jo abhi tak bas sun raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kiye jaa raha tha usko thodi thodi baatein samajh mein aayi.....jaise ki.....
Uske saamne ye jo koi bhi khada tha wo chahta hai ki wo aur Dhruv uski baat maan le......par Dhruv uski baat nahi manne wala....
Justin ne jab dekha ki ye mauka sahi hai Lucifer ko uss jagah se bahar nikalne ki maang karne ke liye to usne turant haa bol diya......
Ye koi aise hi liya gaya faisla nahi tha uske anusar uss waqt ke liye.....
Justin ne iske bare mein soch liya wo jaanta tha......uske pass abhi apne Pita ko bachane ka aur koi rasta nahi hai.....wo khud uss sarir pe puri tarah se control kar nahi paa raha tha.....aur usne koshish kar rakhi thi uss planet se bahar jaane ki par wo bekkar thi.....
Issi wajah se....
Justin - Main taiyar hu.....par meri ek shart hai.....
"Bahut khub......chalo theek hai Main iss janab ko wapas se iske jagah pe bhej deta hu.....yahi thi naa tumhari iccha...."
Justin ek baar ko chauk gaya par jyada der ke liye nahi usko samajh aa gaya tha ye jo bhi uske saamne khada hai wo koi pahucha hua banda hai.....
Dhruv - Nahi.....mujhe manzoor nahi....aur tum jaante ho agar maine iss baat ko uss jagah pe uthaya to kya hoga.....
"Pahli baat kya tum ab bhi soch rahe ho ki tum uss jagah pe jaa sakte ho ?? sapne dekhna band kardo.....aur dursi....rahne do ye kabhi aur kar lenge......ab ya to tum mujhe haa mein jawab do.....yaa main tumhe iss sarir mein kaidi bana ke ye pura sarir hi iss Justin ke hawale kar dunga....."
Dhruv - tum ye kabhi nahi kar sakte.....
"Accha.....phir ye batao aakhir kaar.....Justin jaise kamzoor bura mat manna Justin par tum kamzoor to ho.....kaise tumhare saamne tikka hua hai iss saarir mein...."
Dhruv - Nahi.....nahi...tumne....ye sab tumne kiya hai....hai naa....Main tumhe chodunga nahi......
"Mere pass waqt nahi hai jyada ab bas jaldi se haa bolo aur main apna kaam shuru kar dunga..."
Dhruv ne kuch der socha.....aur uske baad haa kar diya....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhte hai Fumos pe kya chal raha hai saath hi Pankaj ko kya hua hai aur Nikita ka Leader se milna
Chachi ghar pe aa chukki thi aur wo aage kuch bolti usse pahle hi room ke ander kisi cheez ke girne ki aawaj aayi....
Ab aage
Chachi ne ek baar humme dekha......aur hum ghabraye hue the.......Humme pata tha.....unse ye baat kabhi nahi chup sakti ki hum kisi ko ghar pe laaye hai.....yaa koi ghar pe aaya hai....
Ek to wo unka aur dadi ka jaaduyi kawach aur dusra.....unko pata chal hi jaata.....kisi naa kisi tarah se.....
Aur ab jab unko pata chala.....
Chachi - Ghar pe koi aaya hai kya.....
Pata nahi kyun......sayad wo jaan bujh ke humse ye puch rahi thi......
P.Bua - Haa Bhabhi.....wo....
Abhi Bua kuch bolti usse pahle phir se koi saman gira aur phir uss room ka darwaja khul gaya......
Samne Pankaj tha......uska hath uske sar pe tha.....aur dekhne mein uski halat kharab lag rahi thi......
P.Bua - Wo....Pankaj yaha aaya tha.....
Chachi ne jab Pankaj ko waise dekha to wo turant uske pass gayi aur usko pakad ke pass ke sofe pe bithaya......
Chachi aksar ye saare kaam jaadu se nahi kiya karti thi.....par unhone apne jaadu ka istemmal Pankaj ke liye paani laane ko kiya......
Chachi - Pankaj.....tum theek ho naa....
Pankaj bas apne sar pe haath liye sofe pe baitha yaha waha dekhe jaa raha tha......
Chachi ne wapas se usse puccha ki wo theek hai ki nahi.......par Pankaj jawab ne jawab nahi diya.....wo bas.....usss paani ke glass ko dekh raha tha jo abhi waha pe kahi se aa gaya tha......
Chachi ne usko wahi pe baithe rahne diya aur......
Baaki sab ko waha se thoda dur leke gayi......Nikita ko uske pass chod ke......
Chachi - Poonam.....kya hua hai Pankaj ko.....wo aise hamare ghar pe kyun hai......
Rupal didi - Mummy, Kya maltab hai aapka....kya wo aise hamare ghar pe nahi aa sakta.....
Chachi ne ghoor ke Rupal didi ko dekha.....aur bas Rupal didi chup ho gayi......
P.bua - Wo Bhabhi.....darasal......
Chachi - ab bolo bhi....Main kya jawab dungi Daksh ko.....
Abhi yaha pe ye sab chal raha tha wahi dusri taraf Fumos pe......
Lucifer ek pathar ke sahare baitha hua tha kyunki usse utha nahi jaa raha tha......
Dhruv yaa Justin jiska bhi iss waqt pe Slayer ke body pe control tha wo waha se thodi duri pe khada hua tha......sayad dono ka hi control tha uss waqt uspe......yaa ye kaha jaaye ki kisi ka bhi control nahi tha.....
Yun to Sofia ne Slayer ke body ko aisa banaya hi tha ki wo dher saari saktiyan apne ander samma sakke.....lekin har ek chizz ki ek kshamta hoti hai.....aur sayad aaj Slayer ke body ki kshamta khatam hone wali thi.....
Lucifer apni jagah se dekh raha tha.....kaise uske saamne jo banda khada tha wo achanak se vibrate hone lag gaya tha......aur wo bhi buri tarah se.......
Lucifer dekh hi raha tha ki acchanak se......waha pe bahut tezz roshni ho gayi.......
Lucifer ko apni aankhen band karni pad gayi......
Ye jo roshni thi....wo roshni koi aam roshni nahi thi.......wo roshni uss Immortal ke uss jagah pe aane ki wajah se hui thi......
Lucifer ko iss baat ka pata nahi chalne wala tha ki ab kuch der tak jo bhi hoga......wo naa to usko dekh paayega naa hi mehsoos kar paayega.....
Wo Immortal waha pe nicche aaya aur wo sidha Slayer ke body ke pass gaya jo abhi bahut buri tarah se hil raha tha......
"Hmm......Maine socha nahi tha....par ye sarir......ye kaafi sahi halat mein hai iss waqt bhi......"
Dhruv ne jab ye aawaj sunni to wo samajh gaya ki waha pe koi immortal aaya hua hai........par wo usko jaanta nahi tha......
Justin - Tum kaun ho.....aur ye sab kya ho raha hai......Mere Pita kaha hai.....
"Ooh ghabrane ki baat nahi hai......wo ussi halat mein hai jis halat mein tum dono ne usse chodda hai......Main ab bas ek hi sawal puchna chahta hu tum dono se......"
Dhruv - Tumhe pata hai main kaun hu.....kya hu......
"Sayad.....haa......yaa......sayad......naa par pata hai.....ye jo tum dono ki jodi hai......ye kamal ki hai.....Main....main bahut waqt se...yaha waha bhatakta aa raha hu.....chizzon ko dekhta unko samajhta aa raha hu....par aaj tak.....ye jo tum dono ka nahi nahi tum tinno ka sambhandh hai.....wo samajh nahi paa raa hu....aur tumhe to pata hoga jab hum bahut waqt kahte hai to wo kitna waqt hota hai......"
Dhruv - to kya tumhe pata tha.....ki main kaun hu......aur phir bhi....phir bhi tum mere pass nahi aaye.....mujhe isse bahar nikalne ko....
"Sayad tumne sunna nahi.....Main ye kah raha tha ki tum tinno ka ye sambandh bahut hi ajeeb hai aur kammal ka bhi hai.....Main tumhe train karna chahta hu.....taaki tum ek sath kaam kar sakko..."
Dhruv - kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum......
Justin jo abhi tak bas sun raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kiye jaa raha tha usko thodi thodi baatein samajh mein aayi.....jaise ki.....
Uske saamne ye jo koi bhi khada tha wo chahta hai ki wo aur Dhruv uski baat maan le......par Dhruv uski baat nahi manne wala....
Justin ne jab dekha ki ye mauka sahi hai Lucifer ko uss jagah se bahar nikalne ki maang karne ke liye to usne turant haa bol diya......
Ye koi aise hi liya gaya faisla nahi tha uske anusar uss waqt ke liye.....
Justin ne iske bare mein soch liya wo jaanta tha......uske pass abhi apne Pita ko bachane ka aur koi rasta nahi hai.....wo khud uss sarir pe puri tarah se control kar nahi paa raha tha.....aur usne koshish kar rakhi thi uss planet se bahar jaane ki par wo bekkar thi.....
Issi wajah se....
Justin - Main taiyar hu.....par meri ek shart hai.....
"Bahut khub......chalo theek hai Main iss janab ko wapas se iske jagah pe bhej deta hu.....yahi thi naa tumhari iccha...."
Justin ek baar ko chauk gaya par jyada der ke liye nahi usko samajh aa gaya tha ye jo bhi uske saamne khada hai wo koi pahucha hua banda hai.....
Dhruv - Nahi.....mujhe manzoor nahi....aur tum jaante ho agar maine iss baat ko uss jagah pe uthaya to kya hoga.....
"Pahli baat kya tum ab bhi soch rahe ho ki tum uss jagah pe jaa sakte ho ?? sapne dekhna band kardo.....aur dursi....rahne do ye kabhi aur kar lenge......ab ya to tum mujhe haa mein jawab do.....yaa main tumhe iss sarir mein kaidi bana ke ye pura sarir hi iss Justin ke hawale kar dunga....."
Dhruv - tum ye kabhi nahi kar sakte.....
"Accha.....phir ye batao aakhir kaar.....Justin jaise kamzoor bura mat manna Justin par tum kamzoor to ho.....kaise tumhare saamne tikka hua hai iss saarir mein...."
Dhruv - Nahi.....nahi...tumne....ye sab tumne kiya hai....hai naa....Main tumhe chodunga nahi......
"Mere pass waqt nahi hai jyada ab bas jaldi se haa bolo aur main apna kaam shuru kar dunga..."
Dhruv ne kuch der socha.....aur uske baad haa kar diya....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhte hai Fumos pe kya chal raha hai saath hi Pankaj ko kya hua hai aur Nikita ka Leader se milna
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