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नमस्कार सर जी।
मैंने आज कहानी का पहला भाग ही पढ़ा और इसे पढ़ने के बाद मेरा दिमाग ही घूम गया।
लगता है पूरी कहानी पढ़ते पढ़ते मेरे दिमाग का दही हो जाएगा।
लेकिन एक बात है। आपकी कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है। मुझको ऐसी कहानियां और टीवी में आने वाले सीरियल जो दर्द भरे हों, जिनमे कुछ प्राकृतिक शक्तियां हो किसी इंसान में, भरपूर प्यार मोहब्बत हो कहानी में।
मुझे बहुत ज्यादा अच्छी लगती हैं
आपकी कहानी बहुत अच्छी है और मैं इसे पूरा पढूंगी। चाहे मेरे दिमाग का दही ही क्यों न हो जाय
मैंने आज कहानी का पहला भाग ही पढ़ा और इसे पढ़ने के बाद मेरा दिमाग ही घूम गया।
लगता है पूरी कहानी पढ़ते पढ़ते मेरे दिमाग का दही हो जाएगा।
लेकिन एक बात है। आपकी कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है। मुझको ऐसी कहानियां और टीवी में आने वाले सीरियल जो दर्द भरे हों, जिनमे कुछ प्राकृतिक शक्तियां हो किसी इंसान में, भरपूर प्यार मोहब्बत हो कहानी में।
मुझे बहुत ज्यादा अच्छी लगती हैं
आपकी कहानी बहुत अच्छी है और मैं इसे पूरा पढूंगी। चाहे मेरे दिमाग का दही ही क्यों न हो जाय
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Naina
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The story is turning according to the need, due to which the story is becoming more interesting..
The story has quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.
In truth, story is becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with romance, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story .
Maybe the screen will slowly be removed from some mystery. And the real appearance of some characters are also coming out.
Many new characters are also being seen. Those people are also playing their role properly with every aspect of the story.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills
The story has quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.
In truth, story is becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with romance, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story .
Maybe the screen will slowly be removed from some mystery. And the real appearance of some characters are also coming out.
Many new characters are also being seen. Those people are also playing their role properly with every aspect of the story.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills
Naina
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hmm..next mein manna lenge Nikita ko....agar kuch aur nahi ho jaata to.... 
Laughing is good for health.
Btw waiting for next update....
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UPDATE - 46
Ab tak
Bahut kuch ho gaya...
DB ko bachane ke liye bahut kuch karna pada tha...par kuch nayi powers ki aur saath mein Albus aur Cooper ki madad se sab sahi raha...aur DB bach gaya...lekin usse uski jagah cheen li gayi... ab wo apne desh ka yuvraj nahi raha...saath hi usko ab apne desh wapas nahi jaane diya jaane wala tha jb tak uski padhayi puri nahi ho jaati....inn sab ke alawa...uski halat kharab thi...wo apni sochne samajhn ki kshamta sayad kho diya tha...kuch aur bhi baatein hui...jaise Rupal Didi ki kulhadiyon se baat karna...aur unka illaz bhi mil gaya par...par Bijli kahi chali gayi thi...pata nahi kyun....sayad Jwala ke saath kuch hua ho...issi dauran ek ek aankh wali daanav se bhi mulakat hui ayr usne humme bhavishya mein kabhi bhi madad chahiye to usko yaad karne ke liye bola...
Ab aage
Raat bad muskil se katti thi....DB soya hi nahi....hum sab usko sambhalte rahe par kuch nahi ho raha tha....aur dusri Rupal didi...pata nahi sayad Kulhadi unpe wapas se haavi hone lagi thi issliye yaa kuch aur...wo thodi chidchidi ho gayi thi.....issi wajah se Master ko yaha aana pada tha...aur unhone Rupal didi ko apne room mein bhijwa diya....sab ready karne ke baad...Humme laga wo DB ko bhi thik kar degi...par ye unke sylabus se bhi bahar ka tha...isko bada sadma laga tha...par humme ye nahi pata tha ki iski jo halat hai uski wajah se iske Desh ki halat kharab hone wali hai...
Subah hui...sab thake hue the...sayad thodi thiodi der hi to sabhi soye the....aur subah subah darwaje pe dastak...
Bua - iss waqt kaun aa gaya.....Maa papa to kal aane wale the naa Bhabhi...
Chachi - Haa kal hi aane wale the...par sayad aaj hi aa gaye ho...waise bhi aaj tum sab aane wale the naa...Main dekh ke aati hu...
CHachi apni jagah se uthi aur darwaja khola....darwaje pe ek aurat thi..apni bacchi ke saath badi ghabrayi hui thi..
Chachi - Aap kon ho....kise milna hai...
Aurat - Prateek....Rajkumar....(aise hi kuch bhi bole jaa rahi thi....usne kapde bhi ajeeb pahen rakhe the....aise kapde ki bas uski aankhen hi dikhe chahra nahi...)
Chachi - aapko Prateek se milna hai...usko kaise jaanti hai aap...
Aurat - Raj kumar ko bulaiye...
Chachi - Raj kumar...yaha to koi Raj kumar nahi hai.....Prateek sahi naam bataya tha aapne....sayad galat patte pe aa gayi ho aap...
Itne mein Bua bhi gate pe chali jaati hai....aur saamne uss bacchi ko dekhti hai....ye koi aur nahi Lemmi ki beti thi...Bua ne usko pahchan liya...usne chare pe mask nahi laga rakha tha
Bua - Tum...tum yaha...aur ye kiske saath aayi ho....Tumhari Maa kaha hai....
Wo kuch nahi boli.....wo bas waise hi rahi....aisa lag raha tha jaise wo koi gudiya ho....
Leemi - Aap...Raj kumar ander hai kya..mujhe unse milna hai.....app sab ko kuch batana hai....
Chachi - Isko jaanti ho tum...
Bua - Haa BHabhi ye DB ke Desh se hai...aur ye to Leemi hai...ander aa jao...isko kya hua hai lemmi ye kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai...
Lemmi ander aati hai...aur aate hi DB ko dhundhne lagti hai....DB wahi sofe pe baitha tha badbada raha tha kuch....
Lemmi - Rajkumar...apko wapas chalna hoga....sab mushibat mein hai...sab khatam ho jaayega...
Bua - Kya bol rahi ho Lemmi...
Main abhi apne room mein gaya tha....fresh hone aur waha se nicche aaya to Dekha lemmi waha thi....
Main - Lemmi tum yaha...
Lemmi ne sayad mujhe sunna nahi wo to DB ko kuch batane mein hi lagi hui thi...
Main nicche gaya Bua aur baaki sab bhi aa gaye the...chacha chachi bhi...
Main - kYa baat hai Leemi batao humme...tum yaha kaise....
Leemi - Waha sab galat ho gaya hai.....Rajmukut ka heera chala gaya hai....ab uske binna sab tabah ho jaayega.....bimariyan failni shuru ho gayi hai....meri Bacchi....meri bacchi ab bolti nahi hai...naa hilti dulti hai.....Lemmo ne kaha tumlogo ke pass aaane ko...tum logo ko waha wapas aana hoga...hume bachane....hamare logo ko bachane...
Wo bas bolti gayi.....jo bhi wo bolna chahti thi...aur hum....humme se jinko bhi baatein samajh mein aa rahi thi wo sun ke shocked the.....aur jo iss baare mein nahi jaatne the wo kuch aur hi soch mein dubbe hue the...
Itne mein Master jo raat mein wapas chali gayi thi wo wapas se ghar mein aati hai...wo bhi kuch ghabrayi hui si lag rahi thi...
Main - Master Leemi jo bol rahi hai kya wo sach hai....
Master ne kuch nahi bola...bas haa mein gardan hilayi...aur wahi baith gayi....
Main - Par ye sab hua kaise....wo Moti kisne churayi...
Master - Wo moti nahi tha...Element tha....Nature Element...Elf Kingdom mein ek bahut purani kahani hai....main nahi jaanti thi ki wo sach hai...mujhe nahi pata tha ki Moti sach mein gayab ho jaayegi...yaa bura maan jaayegi....bahut bura hua waha....
Bua - Kya hai wo kahani Madam......
Master - DB ka jab element check ho raha tha tum wahi thi naa...
Bua - Haa main thi waha....aur iska Element Nature Element tha...jo ki iske pariwar mein chalta aa raha hai....har 2 piddhi ke baad...
Master - Haa....kahte hai ki iske pariwar mein wo bas ek hi the....jinke pass ye Element thi.....aur wahi baar baar janam lete hai aur wapas se Raja ban jaate hai...par iss baar...inn sab ke karan...ye nahi hone wala...aur sayad iss baat se Elements gussa hai...aur ye sab ho gaya....
Main - Matlab DB jo hai wo DB nahi hai....wo khud ka purvaj hai....Master kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap...
Bua - Bacchu....Madam ye bol rahi hai kyunki isme sachayi hogi.....
Master - Ye inn logo ke granthon mein likha hai.....Prateek.....
Mujhe yakkin nahi ho raha tha iss baat pe par...sayad abhi iss baat se koi matlab nahi tha....humme madad karni thi inn logo ki....
Leemi - Meri Bacchi ko theek kar do...ye aakhri nishani hai unki...
Master - Isko kya hua....aur kab se ye aise hai.....
Leemi - Kal se....ye Leemo ke saath hi khel rahi thi.....accanak se kuch hua....aur ye girr gayi...aur fir hilne hi nahi lagi....hum jaldi se isko leke waha pe ilaz karane pahuche par waha iski tarah aur bhi bahut se log the.....wahi pe humko ye pata chala ki Raj Mukut se wo heera gayab ho gaya hai...Leemo waha se chala gaya...aur mujhe bhi iske saath ghar jaane ko bola.....fir wo raat mein jab aaya to usne mujhe waha se nikal jaane ko kaha.....wo bol raha tha waha bahut badi mushibat aane wali hai.....aur bahut se bacche....wo nahi rahe....
Main - Ye sab uss heere ki wajah se....
Bua - Heera nahi Element....
Rupal didi - Itna sab ho gaya waha wo bhi itni jaldi...begunah log maare gaye...ye accha nahi hua....
Chacha Chachi bhi kuch bolna chah rahe the...sayad puchna chah rahe the par wo puch nahi paa rahe the...
Kavita Madam aur Nikita jaake Leemi ki bacchi ko check karen lagte hai....usko room mein leke jaate hai aur waha sab check karna shuru kar diya...wahi usko humne pani diya pinne ke liye....wo DB ko dekhe jaa rahi thi....usko bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha isko hua kya hai...
Main - Ye sadme mein hai...par chinta mat kariye ye theek ho jaayega...
Leemi - Nahi...isko berry khilana padega...isko fever aaya hua hoga...maine dekha hai aisa pahle...meri bacchi ko bhi hota tha aisa....kab se hai ye aise....
Rupal didi - 2 din se...
Leemi - tab to jaldi karna hoga...agar ye fever jyada der tak rahe to aur khatarnaak ho sakta hai...aapko jaldi se inhe berry khilani chahiye...
Master - Kaun si berry...maine aise fever ke baare mein nahi sunna hai...
Leemi - ye koi aam fever nahi hai...ginne chunne logo ko hi hota hai ye...aur ilaz sirf ek hai...jungli berries....jo Bee forest mein milte hai...usko khilane se ye fever sahi ho jaata hai....
Chachi - Bee....Bee forest...kahi aur nahi milti kya wo berry....
Leemi - Nahi wahi ki beeries chahiye...
Main - ye kaun si jagah hai.....Main leke aata hu...
Chacha - Nahi tum rukko main dekhta hu kya kar sakte hai....
Rupal didi - Maine sunna hai iss jagah ke baare mein.....kahi ye wahi to nahi jaha wo bade bade bees aur....
Chachi - Rupal naam mat lena unka.....
wo gande bhadde se janwar....kitne ajeeb aur hote hai wo....main to soch ke hi....
Bua - Bhabhi kahi ye wo to nahi.... Bhaiya....berries ko acche se saaf karwane ko bolna...
Chachi - arre bas bhi karo....itne bhi gande nahi hote wo log....aur maine kah diya hai....
Main - kon hai wo log jisne aap dono ko itni chidd hai...
Chachi - koi nahi....aur Lemmi tumko pakka yakin hai naa ki ye fever hi hai....aur ye iske baad theek ho jaayega....
Leemi - Haa pura yakkin hai....
Tabhi room mein se Nikita bahar aati hai.....
Nikita - Kuch pata nahi chal raha hai usko hua kya hai...aisa kuch Kavita madam ne pahle nahi dekha hai....wo pata lagane ki koshish kar rahi hai...par...ek baat acchi hai....wo theek hai...maine uski energy ko mehsus kiya...wo ekdum se acchi hai...Leemi aapko uske saath rahna hoga...
Main - Kuch bhi pata nahi chala kya....
Nikita - Ye ekdum se nayi bimari hai sayad Madam ne bahut try kiya pata lagane ki par kuch samajh nahi aaya unko...
Lemmi - kya wo theek nahi ho sakti....
Nikita - Maine kaha naa uski energy bilkul theek hai....aisa lagta hai jaise Body bilkul jam ho gayi hai...
tabhi Chacha bolte hai...
CHacha - Maine baat kar li hai.....wo berry bas aati hogi...maine tum sab ki baatein sunni hai...maine ek Elf expert ko bhi bulaya hai...sayad unhe kuch pata chal jaaye...
Main - Master ab humme kya karna chahiye....
Master - Jaha tak mujhe pata hai...ab sab tabhi sahi hoga...jab gaddi wapas mille...
Main - ye sab pahle kyun nahi hua...matlab DB ke Papa ke pass to ye power hai nahi fir unke time mein kyun nahi shuru hua ye sab....
Master - iske baare mein main nahi jaanti...Main baad mein milti hu...sawal bahut hai...
Dhruv - Tum kya ek baar mujhe uss bacchi ko dikha sakte ho...
Main - Haa chalo....
Main uss room mein gaya jaha pe Kavita Madam usko check kar rahi thi....
Dhruv - tum jaante ho kya karna hai....
Main - Matlab...
Dhruv - Ye kuch dekha hua nahi lag raha tumhe...
Main - Dekha hua matlab...
Dhruv - Nikita ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua tha...yaad hai....wo bhi coma jaisi haalat mein jaane wali thi....uss waqt bhi sabko sab sahi hi lag raha tha....
Main - Kya ye wahi hai....
Dhruv - Hmm wahi hai par pata nahi kaise ye kuch jyada hi effective hai....tum isko abhi sahi kar sakte ho....
Main - Matlab mujhe wo sab karna hoga...
Dhruv - Haa aur iss baar bhi akele hi....mujhe lagta hai mujhe ek nazar maar leni chahiye waha...jaisa Leemi ne bataya hai ki wo bacche nahi rahe....ye sach hai yaa fir issi bimari ke karan hai.....ye pata lagana jaruri hai...
Main - hmm thik hai tum jao main yaha dekhta hu....
Dhruv - Sabko apni powers nahi deni hai samjhe.....Nikita ki baat aur thi...ye bacchi hai....
Main - Fir mujhe kya karna chahiye...
Dhruv - jis wajah se inki ye halat hui hai usko samjho...aur khatam karne ki koshish karo....Main ja raha hu...tum ab yaha sambhalo...
Main - ek minute par yaha pe kya....main kya kahunga inko ki main kaha gaya....
Dhruv - wo sab baad mein dekhenge...
Usne mujhe mere hi body se nikal diya aur mujhe....aur wo khud waha se nikal gaya....
Maine uss bacchi ka haath pakda...aur dekhna shuru kiya ki kya chal raha hai uske dimmag ke ander....
Yaha pe ek alag hi duniya thi...Leemi bhi thi yaha....aur koi aur bhi hai...jo Leemi aur iss bacchi ke saath khel raha hai...sayad iske pita honge...aur waha pe Leemo bhi hai....pata nahi kyun par aisa lag raha hai jaise ye jo bhi cheez hai jo sabko iss halat mein laa deti hai wo sabke dimmag mein hi ek manchahi duniya bana deti hai jaha ye kaid ho jaate hai...
Maine pahle sab kuch dekh liya...aur fir maine iske iss sapno ki duniya mein jaane ka tay kiya....main ander gaya sab kuch maine dekh rakha tha...main jaanta tha abhi ye kaha hai...to main wahi pe chala gaya....waha pe Leemo Leemi...aur iske Pita bhi the.....
Main- ye Nikita ke dimmag mein jo tha usse thoda bahut milta to hai par ye wo nahi lagta....
Dhruv - Prateek sun rahe ho....yaha sirf baccho ke saath aisa hua hai.....Leemi ki baatein sach hai....
Main - Haa Dhruv main sun raha hu....aur Main abhi iske dimag mein hi hu....ye to aasan lag raha hai...isse main nipat lunga....
Dhruv - sambhal ke....aur apne talwar ka use karna....wo chizon ko sokh leta hai aur fir...r.r..
Aawaj kat gayi...ye bilkul aisa tha jaise phone pe baat karte waqt network chala jaaye....yaha bhi yahi hua tha par iski wajah kuch aur thi...
Main uss bacchi ki oor badh raha tha aur wo mujhse hi darne lagi...sayad main iske sapne mein kuch aur hi dikhayi de raha hunga....wo darr ke Leemi ke pass chali gayi thi...
Main - darro mat main tumhe tumhari mummy ke pass le jaane aaya hu....
Ab maine to yahi kaha....usko pata nahi kya sunayi diya...wo chilane lagi....aur ussi ke saath waha jo Leemo aur ek aur banda tha....dono hi meri oor badhe...
Ye dono jis tarah se badh rahe the...aisa lag raha tha jaise ab mera khel khatam....par ek baat clear thi ki ye jo bhi hai...asli to nahi hai...to agar inko kuch kar bhi du...koi dikkat nahi hai...Nikita wale case se to yahi lag raha tha....
Maine bhi apni nayi talwar ko pukara...wahi jo Albus aur Cooper ne di thi...talwar ke handal pe dragon pani hui thi...saath mein blade pe bhi do dragons banne hue the.....maine usko chu ke dekha to aisa laga jaise wo hilne lagi ho...ajeeb tha ye.....
wo dono mere pass pahuch gaye the....aur abhi jo hua wo sach mein ajeeb tha.....unka haath khud talwar ban gaya....matlab...pahle haath hi tha..fir haath kuch bada hua aur fir waha ek talwar aa gayi....ye sach mein bahu kammal ka tha...main to dekhta rah gaya....aur sayad issi wajah se unme se ek ko mauka mil gaya aur usne mujhpe war kiya....par meri bhi training khatam ho chukki thi...koi naushikhiya nahi tha main mujhe to yahi bataya gaya tha....Maine uske hamle ko roka....par ussi waqt dusre wale ne dusri oor de halma kar diya...main usko rok nahi paaya....wo meri oor aaya aur mujhe laga....par mujhe kuch hua nahi.....
Main ek pal ko dekhta raha apni body ko ki kaha pe lagi hai...par kahi pe nahi lagi thi....ulta uski talwar toot gayi thi.....
Main - wow ye kya tha....
Main ek dum se chauka hua tha...matlab abhi ek talwar meri body ko laga aur talwar hi toot gaya....
Main to ye soch hi raha tha ki tab tak uski tooti talwar wapas se judd gayi thi...aur ye dekh ke Leemi jo abh tak Bachi ke pass se humme dekh rahi thi aur gurra rahi thi...wo bhi meri oor aa gayi...aur ab wo bacchi waha pe akeli bachi hui thi....
Maine iss baar khud hamla karne ke baare mein socha...main khud bhi dekhna chahta tha iss talwar mein kitna dum hai....
Leemi mere saamne apne haath mein talwar liye khadi thi...maine apne talwar se....uski talwar ko 2 tukdon mein kaat diya...tej to thi ye talwar....iske baad kuch der....bas talwarbazi check kar raha tha main....kabhi ek ke saath kabhi 2 ke saath...par aise karte hue ek chizz hui...jo wapas se bahut kammal ki thi....meri talwar Leemo ko jaake lagi....main usko iss waqt to nahi marna chahta tha...ain pahle check karna chahta tha ki ye aur kya kya karti hai....par jaise hi aisa hua....uski jo body thi....wo pighal gayi.....kichad mein badal gayi...par talwar mein kuch hua tha...uss waqt aisa laga jaise usme kahi se energy aa gayi ho...aur iss wajah se talwar chalane ki speed meri khud se hi badh gayi....aur issi wajah se wo dono jo bache hue the wo bhi maare gaye....aur issi ke saath main kuch kar pata...maine chillane ki aawaj sunni...maine uss taraf dekha to ye wahi bacchi thi...wo cheekhi...aur wahi gir gayi.....
Main waha bhag ke gaya to dekha ki wo gayab ho gayi waha se....aur main abhi jaha pe tha....wo jagah bhi dheere dheere gayab hone lagi....aisa lag raha tha jaise waha kuch ho hi nahi...ekkdum ghup andera tha waha pe ab...
Main - Dhruv....Dhruv tum sun rahe ho....
Dhruv - Haa main sun raha hu....tum waha se niklo abhi....
Main - Par kaise yaha to kuch bhi nahi hai.....
Dhruv - Jwala ko bulao wo nikal lega tumhe....
Main - par wo to...
Dhruv - Jo kaha karo....
Main - Jwala mujhe yaha se bahar nikalo...
Maine aisa bola aur mujhe uss jagah ek raushni dikhne lagi....ye Jwala tha...wo waha turant pahucha aur mujhe waha se bahar nikala.....main abhi wahi...ussi room mein tha...jaha pe Kavita madam aur wo bacchi the...apni body mein....
Main - Dhruv wo kon si jagah thi...
Dhruv - Pata nahi.....par aise jagahon se abhi dur hi raho...wo theek ho gayi hai...
Maine bacchi ki oor dekha wo theek thi...Leemi uske pass thi....aisa lag raha tha jaise kuch hua hi naa ho usko.....wahi Kavita madam bhi soch mein padi thi...aakhir ye hua kya...
Main - Dhruv tumhe sab pata chal gaya hai kya...
Dhruv - nahi main sab dekh raha tha...par fir kuch der ke liye kuch nahi dikhne laga aur fir wo andhera...batao mujhe kya kya hua tha waha....
Maine usko sab kuch bataya....aur issi dauran ghar pe wo ELf expert saath mein wo berries leke aa gaya tha....ajeeb baat ye thi ki ye expert ek insan tha.....ye mere kiye sach mein alag tha.....isse pahle ke jitne bhi insan se mein milla unko hamare baare mein kuch pata nahi tha...par sayad meri knowledge abhi bahut kam rthi inn insano ke baare mein bh....
Chacha ji ne usko ander bulaya aur usko Leemi aur uski beti ke pass leke gaye....wo chahte the ek baar ye bhi usko check kar le taaki bhavishya mein koi gadbad naa ho...wo room mein aaye....apni thaili ko nicche rakha....Main bas usko ghoore jaa raha tha....
"kya hua...insan hu to ajeeb lag raha hai..."
Main - Nahi mujhe lagta tha ki insano ko pata nahi hai hamare baare mein...
"haa galatfehmiyan ban jaati hai....koi baat nahi....waise bata du...mujhe Elf ke baare mein sayad Elfs se jyada pata hai...maine naa jaane kitne saal adhyayan kiya hai unpe..."
Main - Par kyun....matlab aap kyun karoge aisa....
Chacha - Prateek abhi rukko unko check kar lene do fir baatein karte rahna.....
"koi baat nahi....Mr. Veer baccha hai...bacchon mein jigyasa bahut hoti hai....aur ye to waise bh..."
Chachi - Aapke liye paani leke aaun....
Wo insan ek dum se ruk gaya,...jaise kuch yaad aa gaya ho....wo thoda pareshan ho gaya...fir halke se muskura ke haa kaha....
Main - Aap kuch kah rahe the...
"ummm...haa main kah raha tha abhi check kar lene do isko....fir baatein hoti rahegi...."
aur fir wo Bacchi ko check karne lage....jaise jaise wo check kar rahe the unke chahre pe ajeeb akeeb tarah ke bhav utpann ho rahe the...
Kavita madam unko gaur se dekh rahi thi....ki kaise wo check kar rahe hai bacchi ko....wo sikh rahi thi ye sab....
Wo - Ajeeb baat hai....ye jo bhi tha...wo hona nahi chahiye tha...iss waqt to bilkul nahi.....Mr. Veer aapko mera ek kaam karna hoga....
Chacha - Haa bataiye...
Wo - AApko mere liye Crowned Elf family ke baare mein khabar pahuchani hogi....ye jo bhi tha wahi se shuru hua tha....aur ab wapas aa gaya hai...unko waps se isko rokna hoga....aur iss baar hamesha ke liye...aapko meri baat unse karani hogi....
Leemi - Heera gayab ho chukka hai....Raj mukut adhura hai...
Ye sabd jaise hi uss aadmi ne sunne wo ekdum se ghabra gaya....
Wo - Ye bahut galat hua....par ye hua kaise...aisa hona hi nahi chahiye tha....
Humne usko puri kahani shunayi saath mein DB ke baaree mein bhi bataya abhi tak usko pata nahi tha DB prince hai....jab usko sab pata chala to pahle to usne wo berries taiyaar kari..DB ko khilane ke liye...aur fir usko wo khilayi....
"Itna sab ho gaya aur hume kuch khabar tak nahi....Archery Society kya kar rahi hai...wo to Raj pariwar ke liye hi hai...unka kya hua..."
Main - aapko kaise pata iske baare mein...aap hai kon....
Leemi - Main Lemmo ki bahen hu...aur wo hai iss society ke head....par aapko kaise pata iske baare mein....
Wo - Hum Elflord ko taiyaar karte hai....
Main - Elf Lord ab ye kya hai...
Lemmi - wo raja jinke pass Nature Element hota hai....to kya wo yaha aaya karte the....
Wo - haa....hamare aasram mein....humse sikhne.....
Main - ek minute....elf Lord...Earth pe insano se sikhne aaya karte the.....ye koi majak cha raha hai kya....
Wo - Earth pramukh grahon mein kitne number pe aata hai bacche...pata hai naa.....log bhul gaye hai ki kis wajah se aata hai ye....ye Earth hai yaha pe pure Universe ke raaz dafan hai...tumhare raaz bhi...samjhe...aur Insan...hum insan uski rakhwali karte hai....
Chacha - aap shant ho jaaiye...ye bas jaana chah raha tha..ye aapka apmaan nahi karna chahta tha....
Wo - Haa pata hai ye apmaan kar bhi nahi sakte....ab Main iss Prince ko apne saath keke jaa raha hu....isko jo sikhana hoga...main khud sikha dunga....aur bacche niyati hai ye...ki inka Earth pe aana hua...warna batai jara....kitne saal pahle koi Crowned ELf aaya tha iss planet pe.....
Main kuch nahi bol paya..mujhe pata hi nahi tha....par ek baat clear ho gayi thi....knowledge kam thi mujhme....
Nikita - to ab hum isse mil nahi paayenge...
Wo - kaas aisa kar pata main....par nahi....Strange world ke logo ki khass nazar hogi ispe....to ye School mein aata jata rahega...waise waha kisi prof. ki jarurat hai kya...
Bua - aap waha nahi aa sakte...aur wo bhi Prof. ban ke....
Wo - Beta abhi aap bahut kuch nahi jaanti hai...aur main nahi aa raha waha...koi aap jaisa hi hoga...par wo mere liye kaam karta hai...uska kaam hoga inko mere pass lana aur wapas school bhejna...tum sab se bhi ek baat kahni hai....yaha abhi jo kuch bhi bataya maine sab bhul jao.....
WO itna bolke waha se nikal gaye...par apne saath Leemi aur uski bacchi ko leke chale gaye....aur ye bata ke gaye ki hum unse mil sakte hai...wahi Berry khane ke baad behosh pada....DB hosh mein aata hai....
DB - Main yaha kya kar raha hu....mujhe Papa ko bachana hai....
Nikita ne usko sab kuch acche se samjhaya....jisko sunke wo bhawuk bhi ho gaya tha.....
Ye sab bahut der tak chala....
ab Shaam hone wali thi...kisi ne ek waqt ka khana nahi khaya tha.....Chachi aur bua kitchen mein chali gayi khana banane wahi main apne room mein chala gaya.....
Main - Dhruv insano ko itna kuch pata hai hamare baare mein...pahle kyun nahi bataya....
Dhruv - ye jaan ke kya kar loge....abhi to pahle Nikita ko manao....waqt gujarta jaa raha hai.....humme powers jaldi hi transfer kar dena chahiye...
Main - Haa par abhi tak mauka hi nahi mil raha tha...aur ab pata nahi kaise samjhau usko...
DHruv - Samjhana to hoga hi....aaj raat ko baat karo usse....
Main - haa thik hai.....par lagta nahi wo maanegi....main to soch raha hu Rupal....
DHruv - Nahi mujhe ye sahi nahi lagta....unke pass abhi ek power hai jo unko musibat mein daalne wali hai ek aur ki jarurat nahi hai....
Main - To main Nikita ko bhi nahi dal sakta mushibat mein....
Dhruv - Tum meri baat nahi samjh rahe....accha chodo hum raat mein hi baat karte hai...mujhe lagta hai abhi aaram karne ki jaruart hai tumhe....
Main- Haa sahi kaha....main bahut thak gaya hu..
Main aise bolte hue bed pe jaa girra....aur fir kab neend aayi pata nahi....ye neend hi thi....kuch aur nahi....
AAj ke liye itna hi next update mein Nikita aur Rupal didi dono ki hi Jwala se mulakat hone wali hai...aur wahi jo hona hoga wo hoga...saath mein kal DB jaayega uss insan ke saath....aur uske saath main bhi jaunga dekhne...inn sab ke alawa....Slayer ko kuch khass milne wala hai jisse uski takat kuch had tak badhne wali hai....
Ab tak
Bahut kuch ho gaya...
DB ko bachane ke liye bahut kuch karna pada tha...par kuch nayi powers ki aur saath mein Albus aur Cooper ki madad se sab sahi raha...aur DB bach gaya...lekin usse uski jagah cheen li gayi... ab wo apne desh ka yuvraj nahi raha...saath hi usko ab apne desh wapas nahi jaane diya jaane wala tha jb tak uski padhayi puri nahi ho jaati....inn sab ke alawa...uski halat kharab thi...wo apni sochne samajhn ki kshamta sayad kho diya tha...kuch aur bhi baatein hui...jaise Rupal Didi ki kulhadiyon se baat karna...aur unka illaz bhi mil gaya par...par Bijli kahi chali gayi thi...pata nahi kyun....sayad Jwala ke saath kuch hua ho...issi dauran ek ek aankh wali daanav se bhi mulakat hui ayr usne humme bhavishya mein kabhi bhi madad chahiye to usko yaad karne ke liye bola...Ab aage
Raat bad muskil se katti thi....DB soya hi nahi....hum sab usko sambhalte rahe par kuch nahi ho raha tha....aur dusri Rupal didi...pata nahi sayad Kulhadi unpe wapas se haavi hone lagi thi issliye yaa kuch aur...wo thodi chidchidi ho gayi thi.....issi wajah se Master ko yaha aana pada tha...aur unhone Rupal didi ko apne room mein bhijwa diya....sab ready karne ke baad...Humme laga wo DB ko bhi thik kar degi...par ye unke sylabus se bhi bahar ka tha...isko bada sadma laga tha...par humme ye nahi pata tha ki iski jo halat hai uski wajah se iske Desh ki halat kharab hone wali hai...
Subah hui...sab thake hue the...sayad thodi thiodi der hi to sabhi soye the....aur subah subah darwaje pe dastak...
Bua - iss waqt kaun aa gaya.....Maa papa to kal aane wale the naa Bhabhi...
Chachi - Haa kal hi aane wale the...par sayad aaj hi aa gaye ho...waise bhi aaj tum sab aane wale the naa...Main dekh ke aati hu...
CHachi apni jagah se uthi aur darwaja khola....darwaje pe ek aurat thi..apni bacchi ke saath badi ghabrayi hui thi..
Chachi - Aap kon ho....kise milna hai...
Aurat - Prateek....Rajkumar....(aise hi kuch bhi bole jaa rahi thi....usne kapde bhi ajeeb pahen rakhe the....aise kapde ki bas uski aankhen hi dikhe chahra nahi...)
Chachi - aapko Prateek se milna hai...usko kaise jaanti hai aap...
Aurat - Raj kumar ko bulaiye...
Chachi - Raj kumar...yaha to koi Raj kumar nahi hai.....Prateek sahi naam bataya tha aapne....sayad galat patte pe aa gayi ho aap...
Itne mein Bua bhi gate pe chali jaati hai....aur saamne uss bacchi ko dekhti hai....ye koi aur nahi Lemmi ki beti thi...Bua ne usko pahchan liya...usne chare pe mask nahi laga rakha tha
Bua - Tum...tum yaha...aur ye kiske saath aayi ho....Tumhari Maa kaha hai....
Wo kuch nahi boli.....wo bas waise hi rahi....aisa lag raha tha jaise wo koi gudiya ho....
Leemi - Aap...Raj kumar ander hai kya..mujhe unse milna hai.....app sab ko kuch batana hai....
Chachi - Isko jaanti ho tum...
Bua - Haa BHabhi ye DB ke Desh se hai...aur ye to Leemi hai...ander aa jao...isko kya hua hai lemmi ye kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai...
Lemmi ander aati hai...aur aate hi DB ko dhundhne lagti hai....DB wahi sofe pe baitha tha badbada raha tha kuch....
Lemmi - Rajkumar...apko wapas chalna hoga....sab mushibat mein hai...sab khatam ho jaayega...
Bua - Kya bol rahi ho Lemmi...
Main abhi apne room mein gaya tha....fresh hone aur waha se nicche aaya to Dekha lemmi waha thi....
Main - Lemmi tum yaha...
Lemmi ne sayad mujhe sunna nahi wo to DB ko kuch batane mein hi lagi hui thi...
Main nicche gaya Bua aur baaki sab bhi aa gaye the...chacha chachi bhi...
Main - kYa baat hai Leemi batao humme...tum yaha kaise....
Leemi - Waha sab galat ho gaya hai.....Rajmukut ka heera chala gaya hai....ab uske binna sab tabah ho jaayega.....bimariyan failni shuru ho gayi hai....meri Bacchi....meri bacchi ab bolti nahi hai...naa hilti dulti hai.....Lemmo ne kaha tumlogo ke pass aaane ko...tum logo ko waha wapas aana hoga...hume bachane....hamare logo ko bachane...
Wo bas bolti gayi.....jo bhi wo bolna chahti thi...aur hum....humme se jinko bhi baatein samajh mein aa rahi thi wo sun ke shocked the.....aur jo iss baare mein nahi jaatne the wo kuch aur hi soch mein dubbe hue the...
Itne mein Master jo raat mein wapas chali gayi thi wo wapas se ghar mein aati hai...wo bhi kuch ghabrayi hui si lag rahi thi...
Main - Master Leemi jo bol rahi hai kya wo sach hai....
Master ne kuch nahi bola...bas haa mein gardan hilayi...aur wahi baith gayi....
Main - Par ye sab hua kaise....wo Moti kisne churayi...
Master - Wo moti nahi tha...Element tha....Nature Element...Elf Kingdom mein ek bahut purani kahani hai....main nahi jaanti thi ki wo sach hai...mujhe nahi pata tha ki Moti sach mein gayab ho jaayegi...yaa bura maan jaayegi....bahut bura hua waha....
Bua - Kya hai wo kahani Madam......
Master - DB ka jab element check ho raha tha tum wahi thi naa...
Bua - Haa main thi waha....aur iska Element Nature Element tha...jo ki iske pariwar mein chalta aa raha hai....har 2 piddhi ke baad...
Master - Haa....kahte hai ki iske pariwar mein wo bas ek hi the....jinke pass ye Element thi.....aur wahi baar baar janam lete hai aur wapas se Raja ban jaate hai...par iss baar...inn sab ke karan...ye nahi hone wala...aur sayad iss baat se Elements gussa hai...aur ye sab ho gaya....
Main - Matlab DB jo hai wo DB nahi hai....wo khud ka purvaj hai....Master kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap...
Bua - Bacchu....Madam ye bol rahi hai kyunki isme sachayi hogi.....
Master - Ye inn logo ke granthon mein likha hai.....Prateek.....
Mujhe yakkin nahi ho raha tha iss baat pe par...sayad abhi iss baat se koi matlab nahi tha....humme madad karni thi inn logo ki....
Leemi - Meri Bacchi ko theek kar do...ye aakhri nishani hai unki...
Master - Isko kya hua....aur kab se ye aise hai.....
Leemi - Kal se....ye Leemo ke saath hi khel rahi thi.....accanak se kuch hua....aur ye girr gayi...aur fir hilne hi nahi lagi....hum jaldi se isko leke waha pe ilaz karane pahuche par waha iski tarah aur bhi bahut se log the.....wahi pe humko ye pata chala ki Raj Mukut se wo heera gayab ho gaya hai...Leemo waha se chala gaya...aur mujhe bhi iske saath ghar jaane ko bola.....fir wo raat mein jab aaya to usne mujhe waha se nikal jaane ko kaha.....wo bol raha tha waha bahut badi mushibat aane wali hai.....aur bahut se bacche....wo nahi rahe....
Main - Ye sab uss heere ki wajah se....
Bua - Heera nahi Element....
Rupal didi - Itna sab ho gaya waha wo bhi itni jaldi...begunah log maare gaye...ye accha nahi hua....
Chacha Chachi bhi kuch bolna chah rahe the...sayad puchna chah rahe the par wo puch nahi paa rahe the...
Kavita Madam aur Nikita jaake Leemi ki bacchi ko check karen lagte hai....usko room mein leke jaate hai aur waha sab check karna shuru kar diya...wahi usko humne pani diya pinne ke liye....wo DB ko dekhe jaa rahi thi....usko bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha isko hua kya hai...
Main - Ye sadme mein hai...par chinta mat kariye ye theek ho jaayega...
Leemi - Nahi...isko berry khilana padega...isko fever aaya hua hoga...maine dekha hai aisa pahle...meri bacchi ko bhi hota tha aisa....kab se hai ye aise....
Rupal didi - 2 din se...
Leemi - tab to jaldi karna hoga...agar ye fever jyada der tak rahe to aur khatarnaak ho sakta hai...aapko jaldi se inhe berry khilani chahiye...
Master - Kaun si berry...maine aise fever ke baare mein nahi sunna hai...
Leemi - ye koi aam fever nahi hai...ginne chunne logo ko hi hota hai ye...aur ilaz sirf ek hai...jungli berries....jo Bee forest mein milte hai...usko khilane se ye fever sahi ho jaata hai....
Chachi - Bee....Bee forest...kahi aur nahi milti kya wo berry....
Leemi - Nahi wahi ki beeries chahiye...
Main - ye kaun si jagah hai.....Main leke aata hu...
Chacha - Nahi tum rukko main dekhta hu kya kar sakte hai....
Rupal didi - Maine sunna hai iss jagah ke baare mein.....kahi ye wahi to nahi jaha wo bade bade bees aur....
Chachi - Rupal naam mat lena unka.....
wo gande bhadde se janwar....kitne ajeeb aur hote hai wo....main to soch ke hi....Bua - Bhabhi kahi ye wo to nahi....
Bhaiya....berries ko acche se saaf karwane ko bolna...Chachi - arre bas bhi karo....itne bhi gande nahi hote wo log....aur maine kah diya hai....
Main - kon hai wo log jisne aap dono ko itni chidd hai...
Chachi - koi nahi....aur Lemmi tumko pakka yakin hai naa ki ye fever hi hai....aur ye iske baad theek ho jaayega....
Leemi - Haa pura yakkin hai....
Tabhi room mein se Nikita bahar aati hai.....
Nikita - Kuch pata nahi chal raha hai usko hua kya hai...aisa kuch Kavita madam ne pahle nahi dekha hai....wo pata lagane ki koshish kar rahi hai...par...ek baat acchi hai....wo theek hai...maine uski energy ko mehsus kiya...wo ekdum se acchi hai...Leemi aapko uske saath rahna hoga...
Main - Kuch bhi pata nahi chala kya....
Nikita - Ye ekdum se nayi bimari hai sayad Madam ne bahut try kiya pata lagane ki par kuch samajh nahi aaya unko...
Lemmi - kya wo theek nahi ho sakti....
Nikita - Maine kaha naa uski energy bilkul theek hai....aisa lagta hai jaise Body bilkul jam ho gayi hai...
tabhi Chacha bolte hai...
CHacha - Maine baat kar li hai.....wo berry bas aati hogi...maine tum sab ki baatein sunni hai...maine ek Elf expert ko bhi bulaya hai...sayad unhe kuch pata chal jaaye...
Main - Master ab humme kya karna chahiye....
Master - Jaha tak mujhe pata hai...ab sab tabhi sahi hoga...jab gaddi wapas mille...
Main - ye sab pahle kyun nahi hua...matlab DB ke Papa ke pass to ye power hai nahi fir unke time mein kyun nahi shuru hua ye sab....
Master - iske baare mein main nahi jaanti...Main baad mein milti hu...sawal bahut hai...
Dhruv - Tum kya ek baar mujhe uss bacchi ko dikha sakte ho...
Main - Haa chalo....
Main uss room mein gaya jaha pe Kavita Madam usko check kar rahi thi....
Dhruv - tum jaante ho kya karna hai....
Main - Matlab...
Dhruv - Ye kuch dekha hua nahi lag raha tumhe...
Main - Dekha hua matlab...
Dhruv - Nikita ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua tha...yaad hai....wo bhi coma jaisi haalat mein jaane wali thi....uss waqt bhi sabko sab sahi hi lag raha tha....
Main - Kya ye wahi hai....
Dhruv - Hmm wahi hai par pata nahi kaise ye kuch jyada hi effective hai....tum isko abhi sahi kar sakte ho....
Main - Matlab mujhe wo sab karna hoga...
Dhruv - Haa aur iss baar bhi akele hi....mujhe lagta hai mujhe ek nazar maar leni chahiye waha...jaisa Leemi ne bataya hai ki wo bacche nahi rahe....ye sach hai yaa fir issi bimari ke karan hai.....ye pata lagana jaruri hai...
Main - hmm thik hai tum jao main yaha dekhta hu....
Dhruv - Sabko apni powers nahi deni hai samjhe.....Nikita ki baat aur thi...ye bacchi hai....
Main - Fir mujhe kya karna chahiye...
Dhruv - jis wajah se inki ye halat hui hai usko samjho...aur khatam karne ki koshish karo....Main ja raha hu...tum ab yaha sambhalo...
Main - ek minute par yaha pe kya....main kya kahunga inko ki main kaha gaya....
Dhruv - wo sab baad mein dekhenge...
Usne mujhe mere hi body se nikal diya aur mujhe....aur wo khud waha se nikal gaya....
Maine uss bacchi ka haath pakda...aur dekhna shuru kiya ki kya chal raha hai uske dimmag ke ander....
Yaha pe ek alag hi duniya thi...Leemi bhi thi yaha....aur koi aur bhi hai...jo Leemi aur iss bacchi ke saath khel raha hai...sayad iske pita honge...aur waha pe Leemo bhi hai....pata nahi kyun par aisa lag raha hai jaise ye jo bhi cheez hai jo sabko iss halat mein laa deti hai wo sabke dimmag mein hi ek manchahi duniya bana deti hai jaha ye kaid ho jaate hai...
Maine pahle sab kuch dekh liya...aur fir maine iske iss sapno ki duniya mein jaane ka tay kiya....main ander gaya sab kuch maine dekh rakha tha...main jaanta tha abhi ye kaha hai...to main wahi pe chala gaya....waha pe Leemo Leemi...aur iske Pita bhi the.....
Main- ye Nikita ke dimmag mein jo tha usse thoda bahut milta to hai par ye wo nahi lagta....
Dhruv - Prateek sun rahe ho....yaha sirf baccho ke saath aisa hua hai.....Leemi ki baatein sach hai....
Main - Haa Dhruv main sun raha hu....aur Main abhi iske dimag mein hi hu....ye to aasan lag raha hai...isse main nipat lunga....
Dhruv - sambhal ke....aur apne talwar ka use karna....wo chizon ko sokh leta hai aur fir...r.r..
Aawaj kat gayi...ye bilkul aisa tha jaise phone pe baat karte waqt network chala jaaye....yaha bhi yahi hua tha par iski wajah kuch aur thi...
Main uss bacchi ki oor badh raha tha aur wo mujhse hi darne lagi...sayad main iske sapne mein kuch aur hi dikhayi de raha hunga....wo darr ke Leemi ke pass chali gayi thi...
Main - darro mat main tumhe tumhari mummy ke pass le jaane aaya hu....
Ab maine to yahi kaha....usko pata nahi kya sunayi diya...wo chilane lagi....aur ussi ke saath waha jo Leemo aur ek aur banda tha....dono hi meri oor badhe...
Ye dono jis tarah se badh rahe the...aisa lag raha tha jaise ab mera khel khatam....par ek baat clear thi ki ye jo bhi hai...asli to nahi hai...to agar inko kuch kar bhi du...koi dikkat nahi hai...Nikita wale case se to yahi lag raha tha....
Maine bhi apni nayi talwar ko pukara...wahi jo Albus aur Cooper ne di thi...talwar ke handal pe dragon pani hui thi...saath mein blade pe bhi do dragons banne hue the.....maine usko chu ke dekha to aisa laga jaise wo hilne lagi ho...ajeeb tha ye.....
wo dono mere pass pahuch gaye the....aur abhi jo hua wo sach mein ajeeb tha.....unka haath khud talwar ban gaya....matlab...pahle haath hi tha..fir haath kuch bada hua aur fir waha ek talwar aa gayi....ye sach mein bahu kammal ka tha...main to dekhta rah gaya....aur sayad issi wajah se unme se ek ko mauka mil gaya aur usne mujhpe war kiya....par meri bhi training khatam ho chukki thi...koi naushikhiya nahi tha main
mujhe to yahi bataya gaya tha....Maine uske hamle ko roka....par ussi waqt dusre wale ne dusri oor de halma kar diya...main usko rok nahi paaya....wo meri oor aaya aur mujhe laga....par mujhe kuch hua nahi.....Main ek pal ko dekhta raha apni body ko ki kaha pe lagi hai...par kahi pe nahi lagi thi....ulta uski talwar toot gayi thi.....
Main - wow ye kya tha....
Main ek dum se chauka hua tha...matlab abhi ek talwar meri body ko laga aur talwar hi toot gaya....
Main to ye soch hi raha tha ki tab tak uski tooti talwar wapas se judd gayi thi...aur ye dekh ke Leemi jo abh tak Bachi ke pass se humme dekh rahi thi aur gurra rahi thi...wo bhi meri oor aa gayi...aur ab wo bacchi waha pe akeli bachi hui thi....
Maine iss baar khud hamla karne ke baare mein socha...main khud bhi dekhna chahta tha iss talwar mein kitna dum hai....
Leemi mere saamne apne haath mein talwar liye khadi thi...maine apne talwar se....uski talwar ko 2 tukdon mein kaat diya...tej to thi ye talwar....iske baad kuch der....bas talwarbazi check kar raha tha main....kabhi ek ke saath kabhi 2 ke saath...par aise karte hue ek chizz hui...jo wapas se bahut kammal ki thi....meri talwar Leemo ko jaake lagi....main usko iss waqt to nahi marna chahta tha...ain pahle check karna chahta tha ki ye aur kya kya karti hai....par jaise hi aisa hua....uski jo body thi....wo pighal gayi.....kichad mein badal gayi...par talwar mein kuch hua tha...uss waqt aisa laga jaise usme kahi se energy aa gayi ho...aur iss wajah se talwar chalane ki speed meri khud se hi badh gayi....aur issi wajah se wo dono jo bache hue the wo bhi maare gaye....aur issi ke saath main kuch kar pata...maine chillane ki aawaj sunni...maine uss taraf dekha to ye wahi bacchi thi...wo cheekhi...aur wahi gir gayi.....
Main waha bhag ke gaya to dekha ki wo gayab ho gayi waha se....aur main abhi jaha pe tha....wo jagah bhi dheere dheere gayab hone lagi....aisa lag raha tha jaise waha kuch ho hi nahi...ekkdum ghup andera tha waha pe ab...
Main - Dhruv....Dhruv tum sun rahe ho....
Dhruv - Haa main sun raha hu....tum waha se niklo abhi....
Main - Par kaise yaha to kuch bhi nahi hai.....
Dhruv - Jwala ko bulao wo nikal lega tumhe....
Main - par wo to...
Dhruv - Jo kaha karo....
Main - Jwala mujhe yaha se bahar nikalo...
Maine aisa bola aur mujhe uss jagah ek raushni dikhne lagi....ye Jwala tha...wo waha turant pahucha aur mujhe waha se bahar nikala.....main abhi wahi...ussi room mein tha...jaha pe Kavita madam aur wo bacchi the...apni body mein....
Main - Dhruv wo kon si jagah thi...
Dhruv - Pata nahi.....par aise jagahon se abhi dur hi raho...wo theek ho gayi hai...
Maine bacchi ki oor dekha wo theek thi...Leemi uske pass thi....aisa lag raha tha jaise kuch hua hi naa ho usko.....wahi Kavita madam bhi soch mein padi thi...aakhir ye hua kya...
Main - Dhruv tumhe sab pata chal gaya hai kya...
Dhruv - nahi main sab dekh raha tha...par fir kuch der ke liye kuch nahi dikhne laga aur fir wo andhera...batao mujhe kya kya hua tha waha....
Maine usko sab kuch bataya....aur issi dauran ghar pe wo ELf expert saath mein wo berries leke aa gaya tha....ajeeb baat ye thi ki ye expert ek insan tha.....ye mere kiye sach mein alag tha.....isse pahle ke jitne bhi insan se mein milla unko hamare baare mein kuch pata nahi tha...par sayad meri knowledge abhi bahut kam rthi inn insano ke baare mein bh....
Chacha ji ne usko ander bulaya aur usko Leemi aur uski beti ke pass leke gaye....wo chahte the ek baar ye bhi usko check kar le taaki bhavishya mein koi gadbad naa ho...wo room mein aaye....apni thaili ko nicche rakha....Main bas usko ghoore jaa raha tha....
"kya hua...insan hu to ajeeb lag raha hai..."
Main - Nahi mujhe lagta tha ki insano ko pata nahi hai hamare baare mein...
"haa galatfehmiyan ban jaati hai....koi baat nahi....waise bata du...mujhe Elf ke baare mein sayad Elfs se jyada pata hai...maine naa jaane kitne saal adhyayan kiya hai unpe..."
Main - Par kyun....matlab aap kyun karoge aisa....
Chacha - Prateek abhi rukko unko check kar lene do fir baatein karte rahna.....
"koi baat nahi....Mr. Veer baccha hai...bacchon mein jigyasa bahut hoti hai....aur ye to waise bh..."
Chachi - Aapke liye paani leke aaun....
Wo insan ek dum se ruk gaya,...jaise kuch yaad aa gaya ho....wo thoda pareshan ho gaya...fir halke se muskura ke haa kaha....
Main - Aap kuch kah rahe the...
"ummm...haa main kah raha tha abhi check kar lene do isko....fir baatein hoti rahegi...."
aur fir wo Bacchi ko check karne lage....jaise jaise wo check kar rahe the unke chahre pe ajeeb akeeb tarah ke bhav utpann ho rahe the...
Kavita madam unko gaur se dekh rahi thi....ki kaise wo check kar rahe hai bacchi ko....wo sikh rahi thi ye sab....
Wo - Ajeeb baat hai....ye jo bhi tha...wo hona nahi chahiye tha...iss waqt to bilkul nahi.....Mr. Veer aapko mera ek kaam karna hoga....
Chacha - Haa bataiye...
Wo - AApko mere liye Crowned Elf family ke baare mein khabar pahuchani hogi....ye jo bhi tha wahi se shuru hua tha....aur ab wapas aa gaya hai...unko waps se isko rokna hoga....aur iss baar hamesha ke liye...aapko meri baat unse karani hogi....
Leemi - Heera gayab ho chukka hai....Raj mukut adhura hai...
Ye sabd jaise hi uss aadmi ne sunne wo ekdum se ghabra gaya....
Wo - Ye bahut galat hua....par ye hua kaise...aisa hona hi nahi chahiye tha....
Humne usko puri kahani shunayi saath mein DB ke baaree mein bhi bataya abhi tak usko pata nahi tha DB prince hai....jab usko sab pata chala to pahle to usne wo berries taiyaar kari..DB ko khilane ke liye...aur fir usko wo khilayi....
"Itna sab ho gaya aur hume kuch khabar tak nahi....Archery Society kya kar rahi hai...wo to Raj pariwar ke liye hi hai...unka kya hua..."
Main - aapko kaise pata iske baare mein...aap hai kon....
Leemi - Main Lemmo ki bahen hu...aur wo hai iss society ke head....par aapko kaise pata iske baare mein....
Wo - Hum Elflord ko taiyaar karte hai....
Main - Elf Lord ab ye kya hai...
Lemmi - wo raja jinke pass Nature Element hota hai....to kya wo yaha aaya karte the....
Wo - haa....hamare aasram mein....humse sikhne.....
Main - ek minute....elf Lord...Earth pe insano se sikhne aaya karte the.....ye koi majak cha raha hai kya....
Wo - Earth pramukh grahon mein kitne number pe aata hai bacche...pata hai naa.....log bhul gaye hai ki kis wajah se aata hai ye....ye Earth hai yaha pe pure Universe ke raaz dafan hai...tumhare raaz bhi...samjhe...aur Insan...hum insan uski rakhwali karte hai....
Chacha - aap shant ho jaaiye...ye bas jaana chah raha tha..ye aapka apmaan nahi karna chahta tha....
Wo - Haa pata hai ye apmaan kar bhi nahi sakte....ab Main iss Prince ko apne saath keke jaa raha hu....isko jo sikhana hoga...main khud sikha dunga....aur bacche niyati hai ye...ki inka Earth pe aana hua...warna batai jara....kitne saal pahle koi Crowned ELf aaya tha iss planet pe.....
Main kuch nahi bol paya..mujhe pata hi nahi tha....par ek baat clear ho gayi thi....knowledge kam thi mujhme....
Nikita - to ab hum isse mil nahi paayenge...
Wo - kaas aisa kar pata main....par nahi....Strange world ke logo ki khass nazar hogi ispe....to ye School mein aata jata rahega...waise waha kisi prof. ki jarurat hai kya...
Bua - aap waha nahi aa sakte...aur wo bhi Prof. ban ke....
Wo - Beta abhi aap bahut kuch nahi jaanti hai...aur main nahi aa raha waha...koi aap jaisa hi hoga...par wo mere liye kaam karta hai...uska kaam hoga inko mere pass lana aur wapas school bhejna...tum sab se bhi ek baat kahni hai....yaha abhi jo kuch bhi bataya maine sab bhul jao.....
WO itna bolke waha se nikal gaye...par apne saath Leemi aur uski bacchi ko leke chale gaye....aur ye bata ke gaye ki hum unse mil sakte hai...wahi Berry khane ke baad behosh pada....DB hosh mein aata hai....
DB - Main yaha kya kar raha hu....mujhe Papa ko bachana hai....
Nikita ne usko sab kuch acche se samjhaya....jisko sunke wo bhawuk bhi ho gaya tha.....
Ye sab bahut der tak chala....
ab Shaam hone wali thi...kisi ne ek waqt ka khana nahi khaya tha.....Chachi aur bua kitchen mein chali gayi khana banane wahi main apne room mein chala gaya.....
Main - Dhruv insano ko itna kuch pata hai hamare baare mein...pahle kyun nahi bataya....
Dhruv - ye jaan ke kya kar loge....abhi to pahle Nikita ko manao....waqt gujarta jaa raha hai.....humme powers jaldi hi transfer kar dena chahiye...
Main - Haa par abhi tak mauka hi nahi mil raha tha...aur ab pata nahi kaise samjhau usko...
DHruv - Samjhana to hoga hi....aaj raat ko baat karo usse....
Main - haa thik hai.....par lagta nahi wo maanegi....main to soch raha hu Rupal....
DHruv - Nahi mujhe ye sahi nahi lagta....unke pass abhi ek power hai jo unko musibat mein daalne wali hai ek aur ki jarurat nahi hai....
Main - To main Nikita ko bhi nahi dal sakta mushibat mein....
Dhruv - Tum meri baat nahi samjh rahe....accha chodo hum raat mein hi baat karte hai...mujhe lagta hai abhi aaram karne ki jaruart hai tumhe....
Main- Haa sahi kaha....main bahut thak gaya hu..
Main aise bolte hue bed pe jaa girra....aur fir kab neend aayi pata nahi....ye neend hi thi....kuch aur nahi....
AAj ke liye itna hi next update mein Nikita aur Rupal didi dono ki hi Jwala se mulakat hone wali hai...aur wahi jo hona hoga wo hoga...saath mein kal DB jaayega uss insan ke saath....aur uske saath main bhi jaunga dekhne...inn sab ke alawa....Slayer ko kuch khass milne wala hai jisse uski takat kuch had tak badhne wali hai....
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