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Bhai apko bura lagahoto sorry.par bhai maine dark season 1 aur 2 dekhi delhi thing jis wo dekh kat dimag ka bharta bangayatha. Aur apki story bhi thodi si inspire lagi kyunki wo sahi karne jata bade se bade jhata ke lagte hai. Again sorry bura laga to. Bhai ummid karta part2 jald jald aye.UPDATE 14
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Ab us ladki ko thappad
Shakti ne is liye maara tha
Kyunki use sab pata chal chuka tha
Thappad khaane ke baad koi bhi
Normal ladki roti ya
Phir wajah puchhti
Lekin Meenakshi ne in dono mein se kuch nahi kiya
Balki paaglo ki tarah hansne lagi
Shakti bas use dekhta raha
Shakti..hansle jitna hansna hai hans le
Kuchh der mein tere seene ko cheer ke
Tera dil nikaalunga
Tab dekhunga teri hansi mein kitna dum hai
Yeh sunke us meenakshi ne hansna band kar diya
Aur shakti ko ghurne lagi
Meenakshi..toh tumhein sab kuchh yaad aagaya
Maine toh socha tha
Ki tumhein dard ka woh ehsaas dilaungi
Ki dekhne aur sunne waalo ki rooh kaanp jaayegi
Main..main tujhse pyar karta tha
Aur tune mere sath yeh sab kiya
Haramzaadi laanat hai mujhpe
Jo tujh jaisi ladki se maine pyar kiya
Meenakshi..jubaan ko lagam do shakti chauhan
Tum ek dhokhebaaz insaan ho
Tumne mujhse shaadi ka vaada kiya
Lekin Shaadi nahi ki
Tumne mere mata pita ka khoon kiya
Main..dimaag kharab hai tumhara
Maine kab kiya tumhare mata pita ka khoon
Mujhe toh khud senapati haramzaade ne zeher deke maar diya tha
Meenakshi..jhuth bol rahe ho tum
Tum jhuthe the
Aur jhuthe hi rahoge
Tumhare munh se nikli hui har ek baat jhuthi hai
Shakti..tujhe jo sochna hai soch
Main ab tujhe upar pahuncha
Ke hi rahunga
Tune mujhe woh takleef di hai
Jiski maafi nahi milti hai
Milti hai toh sirf maut
Yeh bolke shakti aankho mein ansu liye
Meenakshi ke upar kuda
Lekin Meenakshi wahan se gayab ho gayi
Aur usse thodi door
Khadi hoke hansne lagi
Shakti Phir uske paas pahuncha
Aur use maarne ki koshish kiya
Lekin woh phirse wahan se gayab ho gayi
Meenakshi..kitna maza aayega na
Jab tum komal Anjali aur ansuhka se Shaadi karoge
Uske baad tumhein 2040 mein bhej dungi
Woh bhi bina tumhari memory ke
Uske baad tum apni hi teeno beti se Shaadi karoge
Aur jab tum un se Shaadi kar loge
Toh uske baad tumhein yaad aajayega
Ki tum khud un teeno ke pita ho
Kaisa lagega apni hi beti ke sath woh sab karke
Jo tum khud unki maa ke sath kar chuke hoge
Yeh sunke shakti cheekh pada
Aur Meenakshi pe jhapat pada
Lekin Meenakshi har baar usse gayab hoke bach jaati
Saali bhosdi kuchh der aur ruk.jaa
Mèenakshi..are itna cheekh kyun ro rahe
Jo tumne mere sath kiya hai
Uske mukable yeh toh kuchh bhi nahi hai
Mera bas chalta toh toh tumhein khud tumhari maa ka pati bana deti
Lekin woh thoda sahi nahi rehta
Jinhone. Tumhein janam diya
Past mein jaake tumne hi unhein janam diya
Aur ab yeh chalta hi rahega
Jab tak tumhari saza poori nahi ho jaati
Main tumhein tab tak tadpaungi
Jab tak tum mere dil ko sukun nahi mil jaata
Yeh bolke Meenakshi gayab hui
Aur seedha shakti ke saamne pahunch gayi
Isse pehle ki shakti kuchh kar paata
Meenakshi ne uska gala pakad liye
Aur use hawa mein utha di
Shakti ki ankhein band hoti chali gayi
Aur shakti ke behosh hote hi
Meenakshi ne use chhod diya
Shakti zameen pe gid pada
Meenakshi uske paas baith gayi
AUR Uske sar ko sehalne lagi
Uski ankho mein aansu aagaye
Kyun diya tumne mujhe dhokha
Aakhir mera gunaah kya tha
Ek witch hote hue bhi maine tumse pyar kiya
Aur uske badle mein tumne kya kiya
Tumne mere mata pita ka khoon karwaya
Aur uske baad apni jaan de di
Main tumhein saza nahi dena chahti
Lekin main tumse nafrat karti hoon
Nafrat ab main tumhein wapas 2020 mein bhej rahi hoon
Aur phir main aisi situation paida karungi
Ki tum majbur ho jaao
Unse shaadi karne ke liye
Aur jab tumhari teeno beti paida hongi
Toh main tumhein 2040 mein bhej dungi
Aur phir tum unse bhi Shaadi kaorge
Uske baad tumhein sab yaad aajeyga
Main 500 saal tumhara punarjanam hone ka intezaar kiya
Aur phir maine tumhein saza deni shuru ki
Main hi hoon woh maskman jisne anju ko tumhein maarne ka order diya tha
Main hi hoon woh maskman jisne Vijay ko majbur kiya tha
Ki yaa toh woh apni jaan de de
Ya phir tumhari
Tumhein yaad hai
Ki jab tumahre pita vijay ne dum toda
Aur tum ne apni gardan pe chaaku chalaya
Yeh sochke ki tum usi din ki subah mein jaagoge
Lekin aisa Nahi hua
Tum theek 5 minute pehle hi jaage
Vijay ke marne se pehle
Yahi hua alina ke sath bhi
Alina tumhein Andaman leke bhaag gayi
Aur jab shero ne use cheer faad diya
Tab bhi tumne khudko maar liya
Yeh sochke ki tum use bacha loge
Lekin tum usi waqt jaage
Jab alina ne dum toda tha
Woh ladki jo tumhein maarne ke liye
Jungle mein aayi thi
Use bhi maine hi bheja tha
Taaki woh tumhein anita chaudhry ka naam bataye
Aur tum apni barbadi ke raste pe khud chalte hua aajao
Lekin yeh mat samajhna
Ki maine rishi ko bola tha
Ki woh Anjali ko kidnap kare
Agar main Anjali ko maar deti
Toh tumhare aage ki saza poori kaise hoti
Kitne khwaab sajaye the maine
Lekin tumne sab khatam kar diya
Tumne meri zindagi barbaad kar di
Aur ab main tumhari karungi
Tumhein jitna tadpaya hai
Usse kayi jayada aur tumhein tadpaungi
Yeh bolke Meenakshi rone lagi
Tabhi shakti ki ankh khul gayi
Aur Meenakshi ke gale mein ek ajeeb sa necklace tha
Shakti ne use Uske gale se kheench liya
Meenakshi cheekhne lagi
Uska sharir Jalne laga
Aur kuchh hi der mein woh Apne asli roop mein aagayi
Shakti..ab kya karegi
Haramzaadi ab yeh necklace mere paas hai
You bitch
Tu chahti toh iski madad se sach ka pata laga sakti thi
Lekin tune aisa nahi kiya
Tune badle ki aag mein mujhe woh saza di
Jiska main haqdaar nahi tha
Yeh sunke Meenakshi hansne lagi
Tum mujhe maar bhi daalo
Lekin tum kuchh nahi badal paaoge
Kyunki agar tumne kuchh bhi badalne ki koshish ki
Toh Vijay paida nahi hoga
Shalini paida nahi hogi
Aur woh dono tumhein janam nahi denge
Aur tum gayab ho jaaoge
Kam se kam Tum jaisi haramzaadi se toh chhutkara milega
Shakti yeh bolke
Woh necklace khud pehen liya
Lekin woh pehente hi
Uske dimaag gussa nafrat
Paagalpan badhne laga
Woh samajh gaya ki is necklace mein kaali shakti hain
Isi liye toh Meenakshi sach nahi dekh paayi
Lekin mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aarahi hai
Ki tumhein sab kuchh kaise yaad aagaya
Mèenakshi boli
Toh uska jawab humne diya
Swagat toh karo
Rahulwa ka
Aur main un dono ke saamne aagaya
Woh dono mujhe ghur ghur ke dekhne lage
Saala writer bada betichod hai
Guest appearance bhi diya toh last mein
Shakti..tum kaun hai
Rahul..yeh jaanke tu kya karega
Betichod writer ne shuru se aakhir tak
Tera chutiya kaata hai
Mujhe aana hi PADA
Beech bachaw mein
Shakti..kya bak rahe ho
Writer kaun writer
Rahul..chhod tu nahi samjhega
Haan toh boorchodi tu
Bhosdi itna harami toh main bhi nahi hoon
Woh kya hai
Ki mujhe sab pata hai yahan kya chal raha hai
Aur yeh bolke maine shakti ki taraf hath kiya
Aur uske gale se necklace nikalke
Mere hath mein aagaya
Mèenakshi mujhpe jhapti
Main maara saal ko ek hath
Woh wohin dher ho gayi
Yeh madarchod necklace usi harami ka hai
Bad baba ka
Yeh saali usi ki puja karti rahi kayi saalo tak
Aur aakhir mein us madarchod ne ise yeh necklace diya
Khush hoke
Ruk ja madarchod
Waise tum log jyada mat socho
Main time travel kar sakta hoon
Ab tum log sochoge ki
Agar mai. Time travel kar sakta hoon
Toh apni siya ko apni maa ko kyun nahi bacha leta
Toh yeh harami Lucifer mujhe yeh karne nahi deta
Pata nahi kyun
Shakti..tum ho kaun
Rahul..tera dost
Shakti..woh necklace mujhe de do
Mujhe wapas jaana hai
Main sabse pehle jaake
Apne pita ko bachaunga
Rahul..abe halwa hai kya
Agar tu Apne pita ko bachata hai
Toh uske baad tu jungle nahi jaayega
Yeh bhosdi ladki nahi bhejegi
Tujhe maarne ke liye
Tu wapas 1980 mein nahi jaa payega
1975 mein nahi jaa payega
Na Apne baap ko paida karega
Na apni maa ko
Aur agar aisa hua toh tu paida hi nahi hoga
Gayab ho jaayega
Shakti.. I don't fucking care
Do mujhe jaldi se woh necklace
Rahul...abe chutiye
Sab bhool ja
Aur jaake un teeno se pyar kar shaadi kar
Jo ho gaya so ho gaya
Dekh rahe ho madarchodi
Main khud siya aur apni maa ko zinda karna chahta hoon
Lekin ise mana kar raha hoon
Shakti..mujhe matlab nahi
I want that necklace right now
Please mujhe de do woh
Rahul..abe samajhta kyun nahi hai
Tu Apne baap ko zinda nahi kar sakta
Kyunki uske baad kuchh hi palo mein tera baap phir gayab ho jaayega
Kyunki woh tera hi beta hai
Shakti wohin apna sar pakadke baith gaya
Main bhi uske paas baith gaya
Rahul..achcha chal ek kaam karte hain
Mujhe 9 mahine ka time de
Main tere baap ko zinda kar dunga
Shakti..tum koi bhagwaan ho kya
Rahul..nahi
Main woh hoon jise bhagwaan bhi nahi maar sakta
hell king Lucifer
Shakti kuchh der tak sochta raha
Shakti..main kaise normal life jee sakta hoon
Itna sab kuchh hone ke baad
Komal meri poti hai
Rahul.. betichod writer
Shakti..yeh baar baar writer kyun bol rahe ho
Ab tujhe kya batau
Ki tu aur main ek character hain
Ek baar infinity stones mil jaane de
saale writer ki bhi maarunga
Betichod ne shuru se aakhri tak teri bhi maari
Aur readers ki bhi
Behenchod koi bhi paagal ho jaayega
Saala khud ka nana bhi hai
Khud ka dada bhi hai
Hat behenchod
Rahul..ek kaam karte hain
Main tere dimaag se mita deta hoon
Ki tu khud ka dada hai
Aur khud ka nana hai
Shakti..tum agar aisa kar sakte ho
Toh ek kaam karo
Mujhe waisa hi bana do
Jaisa meri memory jaane ke baad main tha
Baat toh sahi keh raha tha
Shakti chalo achcha hai kam se kam bechara khush toh rahega
Main uske sar pe apna hath rakhkha
Aur use sab bhula diya
Hosh mein aate hi woh mujhe ajeeb najro se dekhne laga
Aur jaise hi usne Meenakshi ko dekha
Shakti..yeh kaun budhiya hai
Aur tum kaun ho
Aur main yahan kaise aagaya
Main toh Anjali ke paas tha
Main..main tera dost hoon
Aur yeh le
Yeh bolte hi mere hath mein ring aagaya
Main..ungli de apna
Shakti..hanste hue..main koi ladki hoon kya
Jo tum mujhe yeh ring pehna rahe ho
Main..happ
Hath la jaldi se
Shakti ne apna hath meri taraf kiya
Main use woh ring pehna diya
Aur kuchh log soch rahe honge
Ki woh bomb blast kisne kiya tha
Toh yeh saale madarchodo terrorist ki harkat thi
Behenchod kayi log maare gaye the
Sirf shakti Anjali aur baaki sab nahi
Ab yeh mera waala earth nahi tha
Jahan main rehta tha
Yeh koi dusra earth tha
Uske baad main uska hath pakda
Aur Phir main pahunch gaya
Usi din ki subah jab rishi Anjali ka kidnap karne waala tha
Shakti ne meri taraf dekha
Rahul..aaj hi rishi Anjali ko kidnap karne waala hai
Ab tu dekh tu kaise use bachayega
Main chalta hoon
By by
Shakti.. thank you
Mujhe yeh powers dene ke liye
Rahul..free mein nahi di hai
Waqt aane pe tu mere kaam aayega
Shakti..jo bhi ho sakega
Main karunga
Uske baad main gayab ho gaya
Phir shakti pahunch gaya
Police station
Inspector ranjit baitha bas soche ja raha tha
Ki yeh behenchod rishi toh innocent nikla
Shakti ko dekhte hi Ranjit khada ho gaya
Ranjeet.. shakti chauhan aur yahan
Shakti..aap mujhe jaante ho
Ranjeet..kyun bhool gaya kya mujhe
Shakti..woh meri memory chali gayi hai
Aapse kuchh baat karni hai
Idhar side mein aaiye na
Uske baad ranjit shakti ke sath side mein aagaya
Uske baad shakti ne Ranjit ko bataya
Ki rishi ne un dono ladki ko kahan qaid kar rakhkha hai
Ranjit..main kaise maan loon
Ki tu sach bol raha hai
Shakti..aap wahan chalo
Woh ladki aapko khud sab kuchh bata dengi
Ranjit ne bhi socha
Check karne mein harj hi kya hai
Ranjit wahan pahunch gaya baaki police waalo ko leke
Jaise hi woh us room mein ghusa
Dono ladki bina kapdo ke bandhi padi thi
Dono ke sharir pe bahut hi bhayanak zakhm the
Ranjit dono leke hospital pahunch gaya
Dono ladki ne rishi ka hi naam liya
Ranjit ne usi waqt commissioner ko phone lagaya
Commissioner ne rishi ko arrest karne ka order diya
Aur uske baad use samajh mein aaya
Ki yeh sab uska hi kiya dhara hai
Agar woh rishi ko bachpan se abuse nahi karta
Toh rishi kabhi aisa nahi banta
Commissioner ne apni gun Apni kanpatti pe lagaya
Aur trigger daba diya
Ranjit ne rishi ko arrest kar liya
College mein hi
Shakti uske sath hi tha
Shakti..ek aur baat batani hai
Ranjit..kya
Shakti..woh usi area mein do ghante mein bomb blast hone waala hai
Tabhi Ranjit ka.maatha thanka
Ranjit..abe tu wohi toh nahi hai
Jisne kuchh din pehle fine dine restaurant mein bomb blast hone ki khabar di thi
Shakti..bhool gaye kya
Meri memory jaa chuki hai
Ranjit..lekin tujhe yeh kaise pata
Shakti..aap aam Khao
Guthliya gin ke kya karoge
Uske baad ranjit us area mein bomb squad leke pahunch gaya
Kuchh hi der mein bomb mil gaya
Aur defuse bhi kar diya gaya
Ranjit..waah kya baat hai
Tu toh bahut badhiya aadmi nikla
Pata hai kitne logo ki jaan bachayi hai Tune
Shakti..aap mere freind ban jaao
Main aapki isi tarah help karta rahunga
aap aur hum milke
Logo ki jaan bachayenge
Ranjit ne apna hath shakti ki taraf badha diya
Shakti Aur ranjit ne handshake kiya
Uske baad shakti Anjali ke paas aagaya
Jaise hi Anjali use Dekhi
Shakti bina kuchh bole anjali ke honto pe Apne hont rakh diya......
THE END
haan toh dosto aap sab soch rahe hoge
Ki writer ne yeh story itni jaldi kyun close kar di
Toh main aapko batata hoon
Writer ne socha tha
Ki woh yeh story 50 Update tak le jaayega
Lekin jab usne 13th Update diya
Toh main us bande ka naam nahi bataunga
Lekin usne Apne comment mein likha
Exactly yahi likha
Predestination aur edge of tomorrow ka concept copy kar raha hai
Bilkul yahi woh words the uske
Isse pehle ek big dog bhai hai apna
Usne likha tha
Ki bhai mujhe kyun lag raha hai
Ki aapki yeh story dark series se inspired hai
Inspired copy nahi
Inspiration kahin se bhi mil sakti hai
Inspiration aur copy dono mein bahut antar hai
Toh writer ne socha ki kya fayda jab yeh story copy lag rahi hai sabko
Toh usne yeh story khatam karne ka soch liya
ek aur banda hai
usne likha
Kahani mein koi sequence hi nahi hai
ab suspence story hai
upar se dark psychological thriller
toh dimaag ka bharta toh hoga hi
khair koi baat nahi
Aur yeh raha final Update
Ummid hai aap sabko pasand aayega
Kuchh bhool chuk ho gayi ho
Toh maaf kar dena writer ko
Bahut mehnat karta hai writer
Ek Update likhne mein do ghante jaate hain uske
Aur na use isse koi fayda hota hai
Woh toh bas Apne shauk ke liye likhta hai
aur sorry agar aap sabko koi bhi dukh pahunche
Ki itni jaldi story khatam kar di
maaf kar dena writer ko
apna chhota bhai samajhke
Thanks to all of you ?.......
