Fantasy Invincible - Too strong to defeat

[Avir]

Waiting next

 

[ankuraggar]

Waiting next

bhai... likh raha hu,complete hote hi post krunga may be aaj raat tkk....

 

[ankuraggar]

very nice update bhai

Thanks brother... stay tuned for further updates.. more interseting thngs yet to come

 

[ankuraggar]

nice update And where is arushi

Thanks brother... stay tuned for further updates.. more interesting things yet to come
Arushi role is limited in starting, but later on she will play a huge role in Vikram life.....

 

[ankuraggar]

Very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

Thanks brother... stay tuned for further updates.. more interesting things yet to come

 

[ankuraggar]

Awesome update bro

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[ankuraggar]

Nice update

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[ankuraggar]

Very nice update bhai Lekin update thoda chhota lag rha hai

Thanks brother... stay tuned for further updates.. more interesting things yet to come

Brother i will take care of it... from next more lengthy updates will be there.

 

[ankuraggar]

arre waah...

VIKRAM,JAIRAJ,MINAKSHI,DHAWALGARH aur ab AKSHAANT...aapne toh mujhe mere on going story ka first part yaad dila diya..

woh part jisse ATTITUDE ka safar shuru hua tha...

khair,plot kaafi acha hai Brother.. narration bhi sahi hai.bas length zara sa kam lag raha hai..ho sake toh is taraf dhyan dijiyega..

ye baat isiliye bol raha hun kyunki fantasy story writing ke waqt har update me jitna zyada aur important points aap shuru se dikhayenge,aage chalkar wahi points MEGA update ke roop me saamne aate hain aur sabko surprise karte hain...

baaki likh aap acha rahe hain..views aur reviews ki chinta mat kijiye..maine bhi nahi ki...

kahani me dum hua aur aap regular rahe toh log automatically aapse judte chale jaayenge...

all the best...

VJ Bhai.....

Pehle to thanks story ko visit krne k liye

Aap role model ho mere liye writing k to in stories mein jitne bhi characters hai wo aapke liye ek chotta sa tribute hai meri taraf se.

Aapke advice k liye thanks bhai , mai dhyan rkhunga aage se length k baare mein.

Aur please story ko apna kimti waqt dete rahiyega please.

Thanks a lot

 

[ankuraggar]

behatrin update bro...............mohit ko apna spirit mil gya.........ab uske bhai ki bari...dekhte h use kya milta h.................

Thanks brother... stay tuned for further updates.. more interesting things yet to come