Fantasy Invincible - Too strong to defeat

[ashish_1982_in]

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update 1:

Raat dheere-dheere shaant tareeke se basane lagee aur chamakeele taare dikhaee dene lage.

Pahaadee par, lagabhag 7 saal ka ek bachcha ek ajeeb sthiti mein khada tha. bachche ke pair alag ho gae the, pair kee ungaliyon ko jameen se chhoote hue oonchee edee ke joote, haathon ko sir ke oopar ooncha uthaaya, usaka sir jhuka hua tha, aur behosh.

Aadhyaatmik oorja lagaataar usake chhote shareer ke bheetar chakkar laga rahee thee.

Bachche ke shareer ko dhankate hue chaandanee chamak uthee.

Ladake ne is vichitr sthiti mein apana abhyaas jaaree rakha, apane shareer mein aadhyaatmik oorja ka sanchaar karate hue ise apane madhyaahn mein pravaahit kiya.

Raat dheere-dheere beet gaee. jaise-jaise chaandanee pheekee padati gyi, dhoop kee pahalee kiranon kee jagah bachche ne dheere-dheere apanee hatheliyon ko neeche kiya.

Uskee aankhen gaharee, gaharee putaliyon ko prakat karane ke lie khuleen, jinase prateet hota tha ki unake bheetar ek gaharee sunaharee chamak hai.

Vikram ne munh se durgandh bharee hava se saans lee, usakee aankhen ugate sooraj ko dekh rahee theen.

Jis din uska janm hua tha us din se lekar aaj tak use is duniya mein aae saat saal ho chuke hain.

Unhonne teen saal kee umr mein the Body Metamorphose Scripture ka abhyaas shuroo kar diya tha.

Ab chaar saal baad, vo third stage: Palm propping the sky gate tak pahunchane mein saphal rahe.

Apane pichhale jeevan mein, unake poorvajon ne shaolin mandir ke banner tale prashikshan liya tha aur the Body Metamorphose Scripture unhe unke poorvajon se viraasat mein mila tha.

Ab tak, Vikram is kaaran ko samajhane mein asamarth rahe the ki unake jaisa koee, jo apane samay mein martial art vilakshan ke roop mein pratishthit tha, ko is duniya mein laaya gaya tha.

Aur Vikram ko sabase jyaada udaas karane vaalee baat yah thee ki vah ek navajaat bachche ke shareer mein jaga tha.

Vikram ne apanee chhotee patalee bhujaon ko dekha aur khatta muskuraaya “vah apane pichhale jeevan mein satrah varsh kee aayu tak pahunch chuke the, aur chaudah saal kee kadee mehanat ke baad, unhonne the Body Metamorphose Scripture mein nauven charan tak prashikshan praapt karane mein kaamayaabee haasil kee thee, lekin kabhee bhee unhonne yah nahin socha hoga ki unhen shuroo karana hoga phir se”.

Is pal mein, vikram ne pahaadee kee disha se aane vaale nakshekadam kee naram sarasaraahat sunee

Vikram jaanata tha ki yah kaun hai aur nishchit roop se, jald hee ek pyari si masoom si aawaz aayi: "big brother, mujhe pata hai ki aap yahaan sooryoday dekhane ke lie hain. pitaajee aur maan aapakee talaash kar rahe hain."

Vikram ne dayi taraf ko dekha aur ek chhotee si paanch saal ki bachchee dikhayi di jisakee badee-badee gol aankhen theen aur baal do lambi chotiyon mein latake hue the,

Ye chhoti ladaki Vikram ki bahan thi, Arushi.

Aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2850)

very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent (continue)

Update - 2

Arushi ke alaava, Vikram ka ek aur bhai tha, jo arushi se teen saal chhota tha.

"maa aur pitaajee mujhe dhoondh rahe hain?" Vikram ne poochha. "kya baat hai?"

"mujhe nahin pata." Arushi ne maasoomiyat se bola, "bhai, vaapas chale, agar hamen der ho gai, to maan aur pitaajee aapaki peeth thapathapaenge!"

jab vikram ne yeh suna, to vah muskuraaya aur Chalne se pahale Arushi k pyaare chhote gaalon ko Kheench diya, "chalo chalen".

Arushi ne us sthaan ko ragad diya, jahaan Vikram ne uska chhota sa chehara kheencha tha, usane chutakee lete hue kaha: "bhai, tum sach mein gande ho.

mainne tumase kaha hai na, mere gaalon ko mat kheencha karo!"

haalaanki, jaise hee Arushi ne bolana samaapt kiya, usake gaal ko ek baar phir vikram dvaara kheencha gaya au raise karte hi wo bhaagane laga aur us dauran dil kholakar hansa tha.

Arushi ne chillaate hue usaka peechha kiya, pakadane kee koshish kee. "bhai, bhaago mat!"

jab tak ve pahaadee par sthit Dawalgarh kabeele ki sarhad mein vaapas nahin aae, tab tak bhai-bahan ne pahaadee ke neeche ki aur doaud laga di.

Yadyapi vikram apane pichhale jeevan mein pahale se hi satrah varsh ka tha, lekin usaki bahan Arushi ke saath hone ke kaaran vah us bachche ko baahar le aaya, jo abhi wo tha.

jald hi, bhai-bahan Dawalgarh kabeele ki sarahd mein aa gye. Kabeele mein aate hi, Vikram seedhe poorvee kortayaard ke mukhay hole kei aur jaata hai.

jab veh mukhay hole mein pahunchta hai, to vahaan ek vidvaan vyakti jo madhyam aayu varg ka tha aur ek uch kursi par baitha tha.

unake bagal mein ek sundar mahila thi. Ye shaadeeshuda joda aurkoi nhi Vikram ke maata-pita the.

Unke pita Jairaj, aur unakee maa, Minakshi.

"pitaajee, maan, aap mujhe dhoondh rahe the?" Vikram ne holemein aate hi pucha.

Jairaj ne apani tej talavaar kee tarah bhoye uthai aur bole "aap itanee subah kahaan bhaage the?"

"yah theek hai kya, bachche ko darao mat." Minakshi ne muskuraate hue jairaj se kaha aur phir vikram ki taraf palti aur boli ki tumhare pitaji tums eek jruri baat krna chahte hai.

Jairaj ne muskurate huye kaha “ nhi Minakshi iss baat ko batane ka hak tumahara hai mera nhi isliye tum hi batao”

Minakshi ne vikram ki aur muskurate huye dekhkr kaha. "Vikram, kuch hi dinon mein aap saat saal ke ho jayenge. Aapake shareer mein martial art ki bhaavana jaagrit karane ka samay aa gaya hai. aapake pita aur main aapako martial world mein laane ki yojana bana rahe hain aur wo samaroh hai “Martial art jaagrti samaaroh. ”

Abhi k liye itna hi.....

very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update - 3

martial art bhaavana jaagrti?

Vikram ek pal ke lie chonk gaye.

wo jante the ki Is duniya mein, manushyon ke shareer mein martial art ka astitv aatmaon ke roop mein hai. Maanav yoddhaon ki taakat in martial art aatmaon ki pratibha aur nikatata se sambandhit thi. Aur unhen nimn, ausat aur uchch shrenee mein vargeekrt kiya gaya tha.

Martial art aatmaon ko dus aur usse upar vargeekrt kiya gaya tha aur jo sabse shaanadaar pratibha martial art aatmaon ke roop mein maana jaata thaw o tha ek svargeey astitv.

Duniya ki aadhyaatmik oorja ko avashoshit karane aur ek majaboot yoddha banane ke lie unke shareer ke lie jaruri tha, unkee pratibha jitanee ho ske adhik ho.

Phir bhi vahaan martial art aatmaon ke bina paida hue log bhi the aur wo log bhee jinki martial art aatmaon ko apang kiya gaya tha, un sabko prashikshit karane mein asamarth the sabhi aur wop urn rup se waste krar diye gaye the. Ye ek tarah ka label tha waha pr in jaiso k liye.

martial art spirit ... Vikram ki aankhon mein ek roshanee kaundh gayi, kyonki vah jaanana chaahata tha ki kya usake shareer mein koi martial art aatma hai, aur agar hai, to vah kaun see martial art spirit hogee?

Is prakaar, Vikram ka netrtv Minakshi aur jairaj ne Dawalgarh ke kile mein sithith martial art hole mein kiya.

Jab ve pavitar hole ke baaharee kshetr mein pahunche, to yaha pahale se hi un logon se bhara hua tha jo apane bachchon ke saath intajaar kar rahe the taaki ve apanee martial art aatmaon ko jaagrt kar saken.

Vikram ke alaava, Dawalgarh kabeele ya clan ke aur bhi log ya bhai bhandu maujood the. ...

Martial art hole ke kendre mein ek adhed umar ka aadamee khada tha;

Uske paas ek chaukor chehara aur motee, ghanee bhauhen thi, aur ek damanakaaree aabha thi.

Yeh aadami Jairaj ka bada bhai Vijayraj tha.

Wo Vikram ke sabase bade chaacha bhi the.

Vijayraj ke bagal mein ek ladaka kadha tha jiska naam tha Rohit aur wo vikram ki hi umar ka tha aur chaacha Vijayraj ka doosara beta, Mohit bhi unke saath tha, jo martial art bhaavana jaagaran samaaroh ke lie yahaan aaye the.

Abhi k liye itna hi......

nice update And where is arushi

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update - 4

Jairaj aur Minakshi ne martial art hole ke kendre mein Vikram ka netrtv kiya.

Vijayraj ko abhivadan karte huye hue Jairaj ne kaha: "big brother."

Vikram ne bhi apne chacha ka abhivaadan kiya aur bade hi addar se bulaaya: "sabase bada chaacha."

Jab Vijayraj ne dekha ki yah Jairaj aur Minakshi hai, to usaka abhivyaktiheen chehara thoda dheela ho gaya, usane halke se sir hilaaya aur kaha: "aap yahaan hain."

Vikram kee smrti ke anusaar, usane apane chaacha ke haste huye chehre ko kabhee nahin dekha tha.

Vijayraj kile ke saja aur anushaasan hole ke prabhaaree the; isliye, vah bahut hi sakht vyakti the.

Vijayraj ne usake baad ek aur shabd nahin bola, aur Jairaj ne apane bhaee ke svabhaav ko jaanate hue, koi aparaadh nahin kiya.

Vikram ke aane ke lambe samay baad, ek haardik hansee hole ke baahar se goonjatee rahee.

Vikram aur doosaron logon ne dekha ki logon ke ek samooh se ghira hua ek svasth dikhne vaala boodhe aadamee ne hole mein pravesh kiya.

yah boodha koi aur nahin, pichhale 40 saalon se Dawalgarh Kile ki sthaapana karane vaala vyakti tha jiska naam “Bhanu Pratap” tha aur saath hi saath wo vikram k dada jib hi the.

"Old lord!"

Bhanu Pratap ke aagaman par, hole mein maujood nivaasiyon ne jaldee se apane apane saro ko jukahaya jo ki Lord k prati unke sammaan ko darshata tha.

Vijayraj, Jairaj aur Minakshi bhi jaldi se aage badhe: "pitaajee!"

Vikram aur Mohit donon aage aae: "daadaaji."

Bhanu Pratap muskuraaye aur phir Vijayraj samooh ke baakee logon ka saamana karane se pahale apana sir hilaaya aur usane muskuraate hue kaha: "samaaroh mein khade mat raho.

Aaj, main sirf ek nazar rakhane ke lie aaya tha."

Aamtaur par, old lord martial art hole mein, martial art aatmaon ke jaagaran samaaroh ke dauraan upasthiti nahin banaate the, haalaanki, yah saal Mohite aur Vikram ke kaaran vishesh tha.

Abhi k liye itna hi.....

Very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[ROOKIE彡MENTAL]

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update - 4

Jairaj aur Minakshi ne martial art hole ke kendre mein Vikram ka netrtv kiya.

Vijayraj ko abhivadan karte huye hue Jairaj ne kaha: "big brother."

Vikram ne bhi apne chacha ka abhivaadan kiya aur bade hi addar se bulaaya: "sabase bada chaacha."

Jab Vijayraj ne dekha ki yah Jairaj aur Minakshi hai, to usaka abhivyaktiheen chehara thoda dheela ho gaya, usane halke se sir hilaaya aur kaha: "aap yahaan hain."

Vikram kee smrti ke anusaar, usane apane chaacha ke haste huye chehre ko kabhee nahin dekha tha.

Vijayraj kile ke saja aur anushaasan hole ke prabhaaree the; isliye, vah bahut hi sakht vyakti the.

Vijayraj ne usake baad ek aur shabd nahin bola, aur Jairaj ne apane bhaee ke svabhaav ko jaanate hue, koi aparaadh nahin kiya.

Vikram ke aane ke lambe samay baad, ek haardik hansee hole ke baahar se goonjatee rahee.

Vikram aur doosaron logon ne dekha ki logon ke ek samooh se ghira hua ek svasth dikhne vaala boodhe aadamee ne hole mein pravesh kiya.

yah boodha koi aur nahin, pichhale 40 saalon se Dawalgarh Kile ki sthaapana karane vaala vyakti tha jiska naam “Bhanu Pratap” tha aur saath hi saath wo vikram k dada jib hi the.

"Old lord!"

Bhanu Pratap ke aagaman par, hole mein maujood nivaasiyon ne jaldee se apane apane saro ko jukahaya jo ki Lord k prati unke sammaan ko darshata tha.

Vijayraj, Jairaj aur Minakshi bhi jaldi se aage badhe: "pitaajee!"

Vikram aur Mohit donon aage aae: "daadaaji."

Bhanu Pratap muskuraaye aur phir Vijayraj samooh ke baakee logon ka saamana karane se pahale apana sir hilaaya aur usane muskuraate hue kaha: "samaaroh mein khade mat raho.

Aaj, main sirf ek nazar rakhane ke lie aaya tha."

Aamtaur par, old lord martial art hole mein, martial art aatmaon ke jaagaran samaaroh ke dauraan upasthiti nahin banaate the, haalaanki, yah saal Mohite aur Vikram ke kaaran vishesh tha.

Abhi k liye itna hi.....

Nice update

 

[ankuraggar]

Update - 5

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Part -5

Bhanu Pratap mukhay hole ki saamane ki or chala gaya, usaki aankhen hole mein bheed par bhi gayi.

Wo ek grey robe mein ek boodhe aadamee k pass ruk jaate hai aur haste hue, Bhanu Pratap ne kaha: "kyonki har koi pahale se hi yahaan hai, chalo shuroo karate hain."

"haan, prabhu." Grey robe mein boodhe vyakti ne sammaanapoorvak uttar diya, aur phir vah hole ke kendr mein chala gaya.

Grey robe mein boodha aadami Dawalgarh Kile ka mukhay senpati Akshant tha;

Vikram ne apane pita ko yah kahate suna ki Akshant lambe samay se dadaajee ke anuyaayee the.

Akshant hole ke kendr mein khada tha, ek prakaash usake haathon mein chamak raha tha, jisane hole ke chaaron or ek jabaradast force phaila diya tha.

Vikram kee aankhen jilhmila gayi; itana majaboot! yahaan tak ki apne pichhale jeevan kee taakat ke saath, body metamorphos shaastr mein nauven charan tak prashikshit hone ke baavajood, vah abhi bhi Akshant ke pratidvandvee nahin honge.

hole ke kendr mein, ek ujjval hexagonal pattern chamak gaya, jisase prakaash kee kiran ban gyi.

"Mohit, aap pahale." Bhanupratap ne Mohite ko dekha.

"haan, dada ji." Mohite ne javaab diya aur hexagonal pattern wale prakash kiran mein aage badha.

jaise hi prakaash ka kiran Mohit par gira, hole ke sabhi log Mohit par dhyaan kendrit karate hai jo ab prakaash ki kiran ke bheetar khade the.

Mohite roshni se ghira hua khada tha aur tabhi ek baagh ki kaali chhaaya dheere-dheere Mohit ke peechhe se ubhari.

Ye teen aankhon vaala ek kaala baagh tha. jaise-jaise kaale baagh ka aakaar ghaneebhoot hota gaya aur adhik ho gaya, mukhy hole mein ek kroor baagh ki dahaad goonj uthi.

sab log dang rah gaye.

"yah ek grade 10 martial art spirit hai, three-eyed black tiger!" chief steevard Akshant ne kampte sawar mein kaha

teen aankhon wale black tiger martial spirit ko uchch shrenee ki martial spirit mein se ek maana jaata tha; yah aseem roop se ek shaanadar pratibha martial spirit ke sabase kareeb tha.

Mohit ki martial spirit grade 10 martial spirit, three-grade black tiger ban gyi hai!.

Abhi k liye itna hi...............

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update - 5

Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Part -5

Bhanu Pratap mukhay hole ki saamane ki or chala gaya, usaki aankhen hole mein bheed par bhi gayi.

Wo ek grey robe mein ek boodhe aadamee k pass ruk jaate hai aur haste hue, Bhanu Pratap ne kaha: "kyonki har koi pahale se hi yahaan hai, chalo shuroo karate hain."

"haan, prabhu." Grey robe mein boodhe vyakti ne sammaanapoorvak uttar diya, aur phir vah hole ke kendr mein chala gaya.

Grey robe mein boodha aadami Dawalgarh Kile ka mukhay senpati Akshant tha;

Vikram ne apane pita ko yah kahate suna ki Akshant lambe samay se dadaajee ke anuyaayee the.

Akshant hole ke kendr mein khada tha, ek prakaash usake haathon mein chamak raha tha, jisane hole ke chaaron or ek jabaradast force phaila diya tha.

Vikram kee aankhen jilhmila gayi; itana majaboot! yahaan tak ki apne pichhale jeevan kee taakat ke saath, body metamorphos shaastr mein nauven charan tak prashikshit hone ke baavajood, vah abhi bhi Akshant ke pratidvandvee nahin honge.

hole ke kendr mein, ek ujjval hexagonal pattern chamak gaya, jisase prakaash kee kiran ban gyi.

"Mohit, aap pahale." Bhanupratap ne Mohite ko dekha.

"haan, dada ji." Mohite ne javaab diya aur hexagonal pattern wale prakash kiran mein aage badha.

jaise hi prakaash ka kiran Mohit par gira, hole ke sabhi log Mohit par dhyaan kendrit karate hai jo ab prakaash ki kiran ke bheetar khade the.

Mohite roshni se ghira hua khada tha aur tabhi ek baagh ki kaali chhaaya dheere-dheere Mohit ke peechhe se ubhari.

Ye teen aankhon vaala ek kaala baagh tha. jaise-jaise kaale baagh ka aakaar ghaneebhoot hota gaya aur adhik ho gaya, mukhy hole mein ek kroor baagh ki dahaad goonj uthi.

sab log dang rah gaye.

"yah ek grade 10 martial art spirit hai, three-eyed black tiger!" chief steevard Akshant ne kampte sawar mein kaha

teen aankhon wale black tiger martial spirit ko uchch shrenee ki martial spirit mein se ek maana jaata tha; yah aseem roop se ek shaanadar pratibha martial spirit ke sabase kareeb tha.

Mohit ki martial spirit grade 10 martial spirit, three-grade black tiger ban gyi hai!.

Abhi k liye itna hi...............

Very nice update bhai Lekin update thoda chhota lag rha hai

 

[vj4u]

arre waah...

VIKRAM,JAIRAJ,MINAKSHI,DHAWALGARH aur ab AKSHAANT...aapne toh mujhe mere on going story ka first part yaad dila diya..

woh part jisse ATTITUDE ka safar shuru hua tha...

khair,plot kaafi acha hai Brother.. narration bhi sahi hai.bas length zara sa kam lag raha hai..ho sake toh is taraf dhyan dijiyega..

ye baat isiliye bol raha hun kyunki fantasy story writing ke waqt har update me jitna zyada aur important points aap shuru se dikhayenge,aage chalkar wahi points MEGA update ke roop me saamne aate hain aur sabko surprise karte hain...

baaki likh aap acha rahe hain..views aur reviews ki chinta mat kijiye..maine bhi nahi ki...

kahani me dum hua aur aap regular rahe toh log automatically aapse judte chale jaayenge...

all the best...

 

[ragish7357]

behatrin update bro...............mohit ko apna spirit mil gya.........ab uske bhai ki bari...dekhte h use kya milta h.................