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Non-Erotic It’s a hard rain
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Daammmnnn komaalrani ji....
Mannn i did not know I would enjoy non-erotica this much.... Such a beautiful piece... No full fledge introduction No chik chik aur pik pik
The story starts straight and the characters keep hop in. This simple yet rhetoric approach lets the readers explore the character themselves and identify their nature and appearance.
Such a creatively written prose. Loved it...
Like I said before, your command on language is exemplary (not sure if this superlative fits here, hehehe)
And the way you showed the corporate set up and the events around it and the characters living these events, I can simply resonate with it being a part of a corporate myself...
Kudos Komal ji....
Mannn i did not know I would enjoy non-erotica this much.... Such a beautiful piece... No full fledge introduction No chik chik aur pik pik
The story starts straight and the characters keep hop in. This simple yet rhetoric approach lets the readers explore the character themselves and identify their nature and appearance.
Such a creatively written prose. Loved it...
Like I said before, your command on language is exemplary (not sure if this superlative fits here, hehehe)
And the way you showed the corporate set up and the events around it and the characters living these events, I can simply resonate with it being a part of a corporate myself...
Kudos Komal ji....
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Thanks so much, i just wanted to share with you this story and was in response to a comment of yours, but i am happy that you liked it. Yes there is erotica in this story too Bilhan is a great erotic poet.
Thanks for introducing me to this story.... that's the true versatility of a creative and an imaginative write like yours.... keep writing
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“I’m Nobody! Who are you?
Are you – Nobody – too?”
And I completed,
Then there’s a pair of us!
Don’t tell! They’d advertise – you know.
We completed together, Emily Dickinson’s rest of lines,
How dreary – to be – Somebody!
How public – like a Frog –
To tell one’s name – the livelong June –
To an admiring Bog!
Damn, reference to Emily's poem...woow
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Your writing is not a prose but a poem literally. Phenomenal. Period.
“I’m Nobody! Who are you?
Are you – Nobody – too?”
And I completed,
Then there’s a pair of us!
Don’t tell! They’d advertise – you know.
We completed together, Emily Dickinson’s rest of lines,
How dreary – to be – Somebody!
How public – like a Frog –
To tell one’s name – the livelong June –
To an admiring Bog!
Damn, reference to Emily's poem...woow
..Your writing is not a prose but a poem literally. Phenomenal. Period.
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Thanks so much, only once in a while a discerning wandering reader like you pass through and take a glance. I really appreciate your kind words,
“I’m Nobody! Who are you?
Are you – Nobody – too?”
And I completed,
Then there’s a pair of us!
Don’t tell! They’d advertise – you know.
We completed together, Emily Dickinson’s rest of lines,
How dreary – to be – Somebody!
How public – like a Frog –
To tell one’s name – the livelong June –
To an admiring Bog!
Damn, reference to Emily's poem...woow
Your writing is not a prose but a poem literally. Phenomenal. Period.
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