Romance Ittefaaq

[kartik]

Kaha pe lake rok diya re baba...aur 2 line likh dete to kyaaa jata

 

[kamdev99008]

bahut achchhi theme
aur usse bhi achchhi shuruat

keep it up

 

[Qaatil]

for starting new Story

Shaandar Shuruwat ki he Story ki, dekhne me maza ayega ke aage kya hota he. Waiting for next Update

 

[The_InnoCent]

Hello Guys,
Ye XF pe Meri Paheli Story hai.

Ye Story sirf imagination pe based hai. Is ke Characters, Locations aur Incidents ka Real life me kisi se koi connection nahi hai. Agar koi bhi Connection nikalta hai to ye bhi Story ke name ke jese sirf ek Ittefaaq hai.

Ye Story ek typical Love Story hai.
Ye Story me Aapko Romance aur Drama milega aur Little bit Action aur Suspense bhi hoga.

Agar baat karu Updates ki to wo Random rahege. Jis ke liye mein maafi chahuga. Mein har roj Updates nahi de pauga. Par Mein Koshish karuga ke week me at least 2 Updates ho jaye.

Bhai new story ke liye,,,,,

Bahut hi khubsurat story likh rahe hain. Sare update padh liye maine, yakeenan behtareen tarike se likh rahe hain. Ittefaaq ek aisa shabd hai jise padhte hi zahen me hazaro tarah ke khayaal aane lagte hain aur un khayaalo ke sath hi aankho ke saamne alag alag tasveer nazar aane lagi hai,,,,

Khair filhaal abhi to shuruaat huyi hai is liye zyada kuch kah nahi sakte magar haan itna zarur samajh aa gaya hai ki ye story behtareen stories me se ek hogi. Aapka wrting style bahut achha hai aur ittefaaq subject par based ye story bhi achhi hogi. Aarav ke bare me jaisa aapne bataya hai waisa incident to mehul aur ravi ki help se aapne dikha diya magar ab kaun jaani pahchaani awaaz aarav ke kaano me padi hai jise sun kar jab usne palat kar dekha to wo dekhta rah gaya tha use.??? Khair dekhte hain aage kya hota hai,,,,

 

[Goofy]

Update 4​

" What!!! Charvi !! Ye Yaha!!! Kaise?!! " Aarav ne Door ke taraf dekhne ke bad sochne laga. Wo kaafi khush tha aur surprised bhi.

I think abhi aap sabhi ko in sab ka (Mehul aur uski Family ka) Introduction de hi dena chahiye, varna kaafi Confusion ho jayega.

To pahele Start karte hai Mehul se.

Mehul

Mehul ek 19 Saal ka ladka hai. Abhi College me hai. Chemical Engineering ki padhai kar raha hai.
Padhai me kaafi Tej hai.
Aur Swabhav ka bhi kafi achha banda hai.


Jayesh

Ye hai Mehul ke Papa. Inki Age hai 50 Saal.
Kaafi kadak swabhav ke hai. Ghar me sab inse darte hai sivay inki Chhoti beti ke. Par esa kyun? Kyuki Chhoti beti ko ye bahot Pyar karte hai. Iska matlab ye bilkul bhi nahi hai ke baki kisi ko wo pyar nahi karte. Bas unka swabhav esa hai. Sirf Unki chhoti beti ke liye wo alag hai. Wo Baki sab ko bhale hi chhoti chhoti baato pe dant de par apni Chhoti Beti ko kabhi nahi dant te. Isi liye unki chhoti beti unse darti nahi hai. Chhoti Beti ki har ichha ko wo pura karte hai.

Vese Gaav me Jayesh ki Sugar factory hai aur ek dusre gaav me Saw mill bhi hai. So Paiso ki koi kami nahi hai. Gaav me sab se amir he Jayesh.


Premila

Ye Hai Mehul ki Maa, Jayesh ki wife. Inki age hai 46 Saal.
Kaafi Shant swabhav hai inka. Apne Parivar se bahut pyar karti hai. Apne bachho se badhkar kuch bhi nahi hai inke liye. Pure Parivar ka bakhubi dhyan rakhti hai.


Raj

Mehul ka bada Bhai. Iski Age hai 26 Years.
Ye Ek bigda hua Ladka hai. Padhai me to kabhi man nahi laga. 10th fail hai.
Filhal Apne Papa ki factory hai to usi me Labours ko handle karne ka kaam karta hai. Baki time dosto ke sath ghumnta raheta hai.


Dhara

Raj ki wife. Iski Age hai 22 Saal.
Teen Saal hue hai Raj aur Dhara ki Shadi ko.
Jaha Raj jitna Bigda hua hai wahi Dhara utni hi sulzi hui ladki hai. Dhara ne Shadi ke bad bahu bankar kuch hi samay me sab ka dil jit liya aur Ghar ko bakhubi sambhala.
Ghar me sabhi se achhi banti he Dhara ki.


Priya

Mehul ki Badi Bahen. Iski age hai 23 Saal.
Ye Same apne Maa ke jesi hai. Shant aur Sab ka khyal rakhne wali. Abhi Do saal pahele hi Priya ki Shadi hui hai.

Navin

Priya ke husband. Inki Age hai 26 Saal.
Kaafi Achhe aur Milansaar swabhav ke insaan hai. Government Job hai. Apni Patni Priya ko kaafi Pyar karte hai. Inke achhai aur Milansaar swabhav ke vajah se sab inki kaafi respect karte hai.

Charvi

Mehul ki Dusri Badi bahen. Iski Age hai 21.
Ghar ki Ronak aur Apne Ghar me sab se alag. Jaha Baki sab shant hai wahi par Charvi ek dam Chulbuli aur Shararati. Sab ke sath ghulmil jaati hai. Sabki Ladli hai Charvi. Har time kuch na kuch shrarate karti raheti hai. Apne Parivar ko kaafi Pyar karti hai Charvi.
Charvi 12th Arts tak padhi hai.

So Dosto ye Tha ek chhota sa Introduction.
Abhi Aur bhi Important characters hai par un characters ka introduction bad me dunga jab unka koi scene hoga.

So aap ko aur confusion na ho is liye abhi mera ye batana jaruri hai ke Jo Teen log abhi door pe aaye the wo hai Navin, Priya aur Charvi. Darasal Navin Ka abhi abhi Transfer hua hai dusre shahar me, To Navin aur Priya ne wha naya Ghar kiraye pe liya hai. To Saman waha Arrange karna tha to Charvi Apni Bahen ki Help karne ke liye gai thi Ek Week ke liye. Aur Abhi Navin aur Priya Charvi ko wapas Ghar chhodne aaye the khud hi, Taki wo log bhi Sab se mil shake.

Filhal Dhara bhi apne Mayke gai hai. Jabki Raj Factory ke kaam ke silsile me Dusre Shahar gya hai.

Abhi chalte he Story ki or.

Idhar Door pe Navin, Priya aur Charvi khade the.

Fir teeno hall me aa gye aur idhar Charvi ki najar padi apne Chhote Bhai Mehul pe aur usne apne bhai ke Sharir pe bandhi pattiya dekhi. Wo turant bhag ke Mehul ke pass pahunch gai.

" Mehul, Mehul, Ye kya hua tumhe? " Charvi ne bade hi chintit swar se Mehul ke sharir pe bandhi pattiyo ko dekhte hue kaha.

" Di ye, Ye kuch nahi, Bas thodi si chot aai thi. Jyada nahi hai. Mein ekdam thik hu Di. Aap tension mat lo. " Mehul ne Charvi ki or dekhte hue kaha.

" Kese lagi tuje ye chot? " Charvi ne bhi Mehul ki or dekhte hue pucha.

" Di, Bas wo Bike se gir gya tha. "

" Jara dhyan se chalaya karo na Bike. " Charvi ne kaha.

Fir Charvi ne apna Muh Mehul ke kan ke pass le jakar dhire se kaha, " Aur Bike chalate time ladkiyo pe kam aur raste par jyada dhyan do. "

" Kya Di Aap bhi! " Mehul ne muskan ke sath kaha. Charvi bhi Muskurane lagi.

Fir Navin aur Priya ne bhi Mehul ka halchal pucha.

Idhar Aarav chupchap khade hue sab dekh aur sun raha tha.

Fir Navin ka dhyan Aarav ki or gya.

" Arey Aarav Ji, Aap yaha? " Navin ne Aarav ki or dekhkar pucha.

" Damad ji, Kya aap inhe pahechante ho? " Premila ne Navin ki aur dekhte hue pucha.

Tabhi Charvi ne kaha, " Mumma, Sirf Jiju hi nahi, Mein aur Didi bhi inhe pahechante hai. "

Aarav ko Charvi ki baat sunke aur jayada khushi hui.

" Chalo achha hai, Mein Yaad to hun. " Aarav ne man hi man socha.

Idhar Jayesh bhi soch raha tha ke ye sab Aarav ko kaise jante hai?

" Di, Aap sab kaise Jante ho Aarav Ji ko? " Mehul ne Pucha.

" Wo Mehul, Darasal Baat ye hai ke Ek baar hum XXXX Palace Ghumne gye the. Yaad hai? Tumhare college me Exams the to tum nahi aaye the. " Navin ne kaha.

" Haan, Yaad hai. "

" To us Time Palace dekh ke hum jab wapas laut rahe the tab raste me achanak Hummari Car kharab ho gai. 7 baj chuke the. Wha se last bus bhi nikal chuki thi. Ab Subah tak wha se koi bus jane wali nahi thi. Fir Meine Apne Dost ko call lagaya par Wha se use aane me 3 Ghante Ho jate. Meine Fir whi kisi ki help lene ki socha. Par kisi ne help nahi ki. Ek aadmi ne Apni Car roki par Uski Car me hummare liye bethne ki jagah nahi thi. Par fir bhi us Aadmi ne bola ke aage ke ek gaav se mechanic ko bhejega. Kuch der baad Mechanic aaya to usne bataya ke Abhi Shop band ho chuki hai to jo Parts use chahiye abhi Car ko thik karne, Wo milege nahi to Car fir next day hi thik hogi. Humne to fir Aasha hi chhod di. Par tabhi Luckily Aarav Ji wha se Gujar rahe the. Unhone mujhe Help ke liye hath hilate dekh apni Car roki aur unki Car me wo akele the to fir Hum teeno unhi ki Car se Shahar tak pahunche. Aarav ji us Din na milte to us din Raat tak wahi akele rukna padta. " Navin ne puri baat sabko batai.

" Us Din to mein sach me dar gai thi. Kyuki ese Raste me akele Raat ke time, bahot daravne khyal aa rahe the mujhe to. " Priya ne kaha.

" Ek bar Fir se mein aapko us din madad karne ke liye dhanyawad kehna chaunga Aarav Ji. " Navin ne Aarav ki or dekhte hue kaha.

" Arey Navin Ji, Meine aap se us din bhi bola tha na, Is me Dhanyawad ki koi baat nahi he. Meine sirf apna farz ada kiya aur kuch nahi. " Aarav ne muskurate hue kaha.

" Vese Aarav ji, Aap yahan keise? " Priya ne Aarav se pucha.

" Didi, Wo Darasal aaj Mein aur Ravi Shahar gye the Movie dekhne, To whi shahar me humara ek chhota sa accident ho gya. Ye chot usi vajah se lagi hai. To Aarav Ji ne hi hummari help ki, hume clinic bhi leke gye aur Hummari Bike kaafi damage ho chuki thi to hume yaha special chhodne bhi aaye. " Mehul ne kaha.

 

[Goofy]

Kaha pe lake rok diya re baba...aur 2 line likh dete to kyaaa jata

Hehe ?, Decide to kiya tha ke Next Day hi Update de dunga to whi pe stop kiya tha wo Update. Par Work Load jyada ho gya to fir Update late ho gya. ?

 

[Goofy]

bahut achchhi theme
aur usse bhi achchhi shuruat

keep it up

Bahut Bahut Dhanyawad.
Mein puri koshish karunga ke jaise aapko kahani ki shuruat achhi lagi vese hi aage ki kahani bhi achhi lage. ?

 

[Goofy]

for starting new Story

Shaandar Shuruwat ki he Story ki, dekhne me maza ayega ke aage kya hota he. Waiting for next Update ❤❤❤

Sukriya. ?
Meri Puri Koshish rahegi ke Aapka kahani me interest aage bhi bana rahe. ?

 

[Goofy]

Bhai new story ke liye,,,,,

Bahut hi khubsurat story likh rahe hain. Sare update padh liye maine, yakeenan behtareen tarike se likh rahe hain. Ittefaaq ek aisa shabd hai jise padhte hi zahen me hazaro tarah ke khayaal aane lagte hain aur un khayaalo ke sath hi aankho ke saamne alag alag tasveer nazar aane lagi hai,,,,

Khair filhaal abhi to shuruaat huyi hai is liye zyada kuch kah nahi sakte magar haan itna zarur samajh aa gaya hai ki ye story behtareen stories me se ek hogi. Aapka wrting style bahut achha hai aur ittefaaq subject par based ye story bhi achhi hogi. Aarav ke bare me jaisa aapne bataya hai waisa incident to mehul aur ravi ki help se aapne dikha diya magar ab kaun jaani pahchaani awaaz aarav ke kaano me padi hai jise sun kar jab usne palat kar dekha to wo dekhta rah gaya tha use.??? Khair dekhte hain aage kya hota hai,,,,

Sabse pahele to aapko Kahani Pasand aai aur aapne Muje Motivate kiya us keliye aapka bahut bahut Dhanyawad. ?

Maine jab yaha pe story likhne ka faisla kiya tab maine sirf yahi socha ke atleast koi ek reader ho jo muje guide kare, honest reviews de, Suggestions de, Taki Me aage aur achha likh pau. Aur aapka reply padh kar laga ke aap Muje kaafi guide kar paoge achha likhne me. Har Update ke bad aapke Review ka mein Besabri se wait karunga. ?

 

[Goofy]

Update 5​

Mehul ki baat sunkar Charvi ne Aarav ki or dekha aur fir kaha, " Aapka Bahot bahot dhanyawad Aarav Ji mere chhotu ki help karne ke liye. "

Aarav ne Muskurate hue kaha, " Aap sab ko baar baar dhanyawad kahene ki koi jarurat nahi hai. (Varna Readers bhi bore ho jayege, Lol) Mene wahi kiya hai jo mera farz hai, Ek Insan ke nate. "

Tabhi Premila ne kaha, " To beta, Hummari bhi ek baat maan lo na. Kaafi der ho chuki hai. Aaj raat Hummare sath khana kha lo aur Raat ko yaha Hummare ghar ruk jao. Itni raat yaha se kese gaadi chalake jaaoge? Is se achha hai ke Kal subah Mehul ke sath Gaav dekh ne ke bad chale jana. Is se Hume bhi achha lagega. "

Aarav Fir se soch me pad gya, " Yaar, Ese kisi ajnabi ke ghar rukna sahi nahi lag raha. Par wait, Jis ladki ko me ek baar aur dekhne ke liye taras raha tha, ittefaaq se aaj fir se us se Mulakat hui hai. I think Muje ye chance miss nahi karna chahiye. Varna fir Zindagi bhar afsos karta firunga. Aur waise bhi Ek hi raat ki to baat hai."

Aarav ne yahi sab soch ke faisla kar liya ke wo aaj Raat ko yaha ruk jayega.

" Thik hai Aunty Ji, Mein Ruk jaunga yaha. " Aarav ne Premila ki or dekhkar muskurate hue kha.

" Ye Hui na baat. " Mehul ne bhi haste hue kaha.

" kaafi der ho gai hai Premila, Khana laga do ab. Sab bhukhe honge. " Jayesh ne kaha.

" Ji, Aap sab Beth jaiye. Me khana lagana shuru karti hu. " Premila itna bolkar kitchen ke taraf jane lagti hai.

" Mein Maa ki madad karti hu. " Priya bhi itna bolkar Premila ke piche piche kitchen me chali jaati hai.

Idhar Jayesh aur Navin hall me sofe pe bethkar baate karne lage.

Jab ki Mehul aur Charvi Aarav ke pass khade the.

" Chhotu, Dard ho raha hai kya abhi bhi? "
Charvi ne Mehul ko dekhkar pucha.

" Nahi Di. Abhi jyada nahi. "

"To fir Thik hai. " Charvi ne Mehul ki taraf dekhkar kaha.

" Aarav Ji, Aap bhi Bethiye na. Khade kyun hai? Hummare ghar me bethne pe koi charge nahi lenge hum log. " Charvi ne Aarav ki taraf dekhkar haste hue kaha.

Charvi ki baat sunkar Aarav aur Mehul dono hi muskurane lage.

Aarav Charvi ko haste hue dekh raha tha aur man hi man soch raha tha, " Wahi muskan, jise fir se real me dekhne ke liye mein tadap raha tha. Ye Ittefaaq, Mein Thankful rahunga. "

" Hello, Kya soch rahe ho Aarav Ji? "

Aarav achank se Charvi ki awaj sunkar apne khyalo se bahar aaya.

" Amm… Wo bas mein kal ke bare me soch raha tha. " Aarav ne khud ko sambhalte hue kaha.

" Kal ke baare me? Kya? " Mehul ne pucha.

" Yahi ke Kal Gaav dekh kar jau ya nahi. "

" Aapko Gaav dekhkar hi jana chahiye na ! Yaad he jab hum sab us din mile the to meine aapko mere is gaav ke baare me bataya tha to aap ko gaav dekhne ki ichha hui thi. To agar aap yaha aaye ho to kal Gaav dekhkar hi jana chahiye na! Ab Itna bada Gaav bhi nahi hai ke pura Mahina lag jaye dekhne me. " Charvi ne ek Pyari muskan ke sath kaha.

" Haan, Aarav Ji, Kal hum sab jayege na sath me. Meri vese bhi chhuti rahegi aur hum ghum bhi lenge aapke bahane. " Mehul ne bhi muskurate hue kaha.

" Okay, To kal Gaav ki Tour. Pakka. " Aarav ne bhi muskurate hue kaha.

Tabhi Kitchen me se Premila ki awaj aai, " Khana laga diya hai, Sab aa jaiye. "

" Chaliye Aarav Ji, Khana laga diya hai Mummy ne. " Mehul ne kaha.

Yaha Jayesh aur Navin bhi sofe se uthkar jane lage kitchen ke taraf.

" Chaliye Aarav Ji, khana lag gya hai. " Navin ne jate hue Aarav se kaha.

" Ji, Aata hu. " Aarav ne muskukar Navin se kaha.

Fir Mehul, Aarav aur Charvi bhi Jayesh aur Navin ke piche piche kitchen me aa gye.

Kitchen ke piche ki side ek washroom bana hua tha wha sab ne hath pair dhoye aur fir Sab jameen pe khane ke liye beth gye.

Premila ne sab ko khana parosa aur fir sab sath khana khane lage.

Aarav Khana khate hue kuch kuch baar Sab se najare bachakar Charvi ki taraf dekh raha tha.

Par ek baar Jab Aarav ne jeise hi Charvi ki taraf dekha to thik usi time Charvi ne bhi Aarav ki taraf dekha. Dono ki najar aapas me mili. Yaha Charvi ke chahere pe ek pyri muskan jo ki uski ek pahechan thi wo aa gai par dusri taraf Aarav thoda sakpaka gya aur usne apni najar hata li. Dono fir se Khana khane lage. Fir Aarav ki himmat hi nahi hui Charvi ke taraf dekhne ki. Use lag raha tha ke agar wo fir se Charvi ke taraf dekhega aur fir se Charvi ne use ese dekhte hue dekh liya to beshaq uski impression achhi nahi rahegi. Aur fir usne Apna dhayn sirf khane pe hi lagaya.