Adultery Jab mast wife hue parai

[Roni01]

I have just one request. Please dedicate your time to finish this story. I sense that this story won't get complete or will be abruptly ended. There was a good potential with both father and father in law. I hope this is not the end of their characters.

Bro me kahani ke ant karne ke mood me bilkul nahi hnu.. Or na kisi patr ke ant karne ki soch hai..
Bas bro taim jab bhi milta hai to me likhta hnu.. Me story ka ant mene jaha socha hai bahi karuga..
Mene es story ke suru se lekar ant har chij soch liya tha..
Shruti ka fast sex se lekar last sex tak..
Har ek ek chij ko aache se socha tha... Es story ke lagbhag mene 100 update soche hai...
Ye story ko me aachanak bhi band nahi kar sakta..
Or na es story ke alwa koi or story likhne ke mood me hnu...
Sayad aap samjh gye ho...
Jab se mene story likhna start ki hai.. Jab se mene sayad hi es forum me koi story padh paya hnu..
kabhi kabhi to esa lagta hai ki mene story likh kar galti kar di.. Par likha hai to pura bhi karuga

 

[FallenAngel]

Bro me kahani ke ant karne ke mood me bilkul nahi hnu.. Or na kisi patr ke ant karne ki soch hai..
Bas bro taim jab bhi milta hai to me likhta hnu.. Me story ka ant mene jaha socha hai bahi karuga..
Mene es story ke suru se lekar ant har chij soch liya tha..
Shruti ka fast sex se lekar last sex tak..
Har ek ek chij ko aache se socha tha... Es story ke lagbhag mene 100 update soche hai...
Ye story ko me aachanak bhi band nahi kar sakta..
Or na es story ke alwa koi or story likhne ke mood me hnu...
Sayad aap samjh gye ho...
Jab se mene story likhna start ki hai.. Jab se mene sayad hi es forum me koi story padh paya hnu..
kabhi kabhi to esa lagta hai ki mene story likh kar galti kar di.. Par likha hai to pura bhi karuga

Esa kuch nhi hai roni Bhai actually baat ye hai ki jab bhi update Mai gayab means time limit cross ho jati hai to readers ko story se interest khatam hona shuru ho jata hai to Esa bhi bol dete hai but ap story continue krke puri kro sabka interest wapis bhi aa jayega

 

[dragonslair]

Esa kuch nhi hai roni Bhai actually baat ye hai ki jab bhi update Mai gayab means time limit cross ho jati hai to readers ko story se interest khatam hona shuru ho jata hai to Esa bhi bol dete hai but ap story continue krke puri kro sabka interest wapis bhi aa jayega

Exactly. When there are long delays between updates then the interest slowly wanes of every reader. This story has grabbed a lot of eyeballs but late updates is ruining the fun. Even after the delay of 2-3 weeks a small update is given.

 

[dragonslair]

Sandar.. Update par story me ab maza nahi aa raha

You should focus on updating the story you started. You promised 3-4 updates a week but in two weeks only the first update was posted

 

[Anyone]

You should focus on updating the story you started. You promised 3-4 updates a week but in two weeks only the first update was posted

Me ab story nahi likhuga dost.. Mene us story ka update delete kar chuka hnu

 

[Rajkumar100]

Me ab story nahi likhuga dost.. Mene us story ka update delete kar chuka hnu. Why?

 

[FallenAngel]

Bro me kahani ke ant karne ke mood me bilkul nahi hnu.. Or na kisi patr ke ant karne ki soch hai..
Bas bro taim jab bhi milta hai to me likhta hnu.. Me story ka ant mene jaha socha hai bahi karuga..
Mene es story ke suru se lekar ant har chij soch liya tha..
Shruti ka fast sex se lekar last sex tak..
Har ek ek chij ko aache se socha tha... Es story ke lagbhag mene 100 update soche hai...
Ye story ko me aachanak bhi band nahi kar sakta..
Or na es story ke alwa koi or story likhne ke mood me hnu...
Sayad aap samjh gye ho...
Jab se mene story likhna start ki hai.. Jab se mene sayad hi es forum me koi story padh paya hnu..
kabhi kabhi to esa lagta hai ki mene story likh kar galti kar di.. Par likha hai to pura bhi karuga

Bhai next update kab de rhe ho

 

[Kinqraja]

Ayse update doge to story ka flow hi chala jayega bhai

 

[malikarman]

Ab update dete rehna

 

[dragonslair]

Next update will come next month.