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This is my 2nd poem in punjabi. I hope to get reviews from my readers as they have given for fist poem
Mere ghar de kol aayi ha ek jaati navi vyahi
Poore mohalle vich payi unhe khhob tabahi
Uchi lambi gori chitti soni lagdi si oh aat di
Usnu dekh kehan sab kismat khul gayi jat di
Tikhe tikhe mamme usde bund puri si aag
Kaiya da dekh ke usnu pent vich janda vag
Turdi si bazar de vich jad sir te karke gund
Munde aaha barde usdi dekh ke hildi bund
Harkoi dekh ke soche usnu ek vaar mil jave
Poori raat pake thale changi tarahh vajave
Din o din chadadi jaandii usnu navi jawani lag raya si fudddi nu usdi dine rati hi paani
6 ku mahine jat ne usdi fuddi khoob vajai
Tur gaya fer pardes nu jat karan layi kamai
Suss de naal oh rek ke kali lagi karan gujara
Lekin jat de lan to bin fuddi da kaun sahara
Kendi jat nu ghar aa ja hun nahi lagda man
Roz raat nu gilli fuddi meri mangdi tera lan
Agli baisakhi nu jad ghar aavanga mutiyare
Apne lan te tenu baitha karwane roz nazare
Gau maj palan nu ghar vich rakhya ek bihari
Tagda jawan sharir da hega si poora shikari
Chup ke oh sekda akhan jati de dekh jawani
Smaj chuka jati de fudi mange lan da paani
Jad andi jati sham nu maj diya kadan dhara
Soche bhaiya pa ke lami jati di fuddi maara
Fir Ik din bhaiye ne chori to jatti di photo leli
Poori raat apne sapne vich nangi karke peli
Jad milda mauka phone te jati di photo lake
Apne lan nu ragde kache vich hath nu pake
Ikdin dekh laya jati ne bhaiya muth jad mare
Naale masale lan nale jati da naam pukare
Dekh eda lan bhiaye da jati nu aaya pasina
Meri photo te muth marda hay kive kamina
Dekh ke mota lan jati di fuddi vi ho gayi gilli
Garam ho ke jati ne apni salwar vi karti dhilli
Ungala nal lagi palosan apni fuddi da chola
Chud java bhaiye to lekin pe na jaye koi rola
Masti vich jati ne puri ungali fuddi vich kar li
Picho aa bhaiye ne fer Bahn jaati di fad layi
Bibi ji ichoti ungali se apka hoga nahi gujara
Apni fudi me leke dekho ye hathiyar hamara
Chad de marjanaya meri ho jayugi badnami
Meri fuddi choti jehi te tera lan hai tusnami
Samaj gaya bhaiya ki jati aive bhaldi nakhre
Dil vich o vi chahe hai koi kas ki usnu pakde
Bhaiye ne aake picho di jatti nu jaffi pa layi
Apne khade lan te usne jatti di bund taka lai
Sande ke tel se bibi ji malish karta hun roz
Ek baar jo chud gayi mujhse ho jayegi mouj
Khich ke bhiye ne fer jati kamre vich layi var
Thale nu hath pa jati de jhat khol deti salwar
Bibi ji jabse dekha apko humko lagti thi achi
Ena keh bhaiye ne cheti jati di khich tj kachi
Gar di gal gar vich reh jaye hondi hai chnagi
Jaldi se ab suit utaar ke ho jayo poori nangi
Jhat hi bahiye ne fir cheti hi apna kacha lata
Kad ke apnamota lan jati de munh vich pata
Chus ke dekh soni jatiye ayuga tenu swad
Ik var jad chud gayi isto karengj isnu yaad
Far ke jati nu balan to fir chuppe laga lawan
Fuddi di ki haal karu soch ke jati si pareshan
Lan kad moonh vicho fer jati nu paya lamme
Bulla nu fer laga chupan nap ke usde mame
Akda hoya lan apna usde fer fudi ute takaya
Bahan vich fer nap jati nu kas ke dhaka laya
Iko dhake vich bhaiye ne pura kila deta thok
Bibiji apko thokne se humko koi na pave rok
15 k minute vich hi bhaiye ne usdi rel banati
Mar mar ke lan de dhake jati di fuddi sujati
Jati vi hun bund chuk chuk fudi lagi marvan
Kai dina to dabe hoye aaj hoye poore arman
Jati boli masti vich bhaiye nu leke tera land
Meri tarsi payi fudi nuhun aaj pyai Hai thand
Bhaiye kehna bibiji ab jat jab tak nahi aate
Mere bistar me hi beetegi apki ab sab ratte
Aapki fuddi aur bund ka bajunga aisa baja
Roz raat ko bologi jaldi se chodo mere raja
Kodi kar jati nu bhaiye ne usdi banati ghodi
Sire tak thok ke lan fer bund vi karti chaudi
Sari raat bhaiye de thle bund apni marwake
Jati savere chaldi gahr thodi jayi langda ke
Jat de wapis aun di khabar jad tak na aayi
Bhaiye ne tad tak jatti di raj ke bund wajai
Jati vi kehndi bahiye nu leke tera mota lan
Fudi vi khul gayi puri ho gai mai dhan dhan
End…
This is my 2nd poem in punjabi. I hope to get reviews from my readers as they have given for fist poem
Mere ghar de kol aayi ha ek jaati navi vyahi
Poore mohalle vich payi unhe khhob tabahi
Uchi lambi gori chitti soni lagdi si oh aat di
Usnu dekh kehan sab kismat khul gayi jat di
Tikhe tikhe mamme usde bund puri si aag
Kaiya da dekh ke usnu pent vich janda vag
Turdi si bazar de vich jad sir te karke gund
Munde aaha barde usdi dekh ke hildi bund
Harkoi dekh ke soche usnu ek vaar mil jave
Poori raat pake thale changi tarahh vajave
Din o din chadadi jaandii usnu navi jawani lag raya si fudddi nu usdi dine rati hi paani
6 ku mahine jat ne usdi fuddi khoob vajai
Tur gaya fer pardes nu jat karan layi kamai
Suss de naal oh rek ke kali lagi karan gujara
Lekin jat de lan to bin fuddi da kaun sahara
Kendi jat nu ghar aa ja hun nahi lagda man
Roz raat nu gilli fuddi meri mangdi tera lan
Agli baisakhi nu jad ghar aavanga mutiyare
Apne lan te tenu baitha karwane roz nazare
Gau maj palan nu ghar vich rakhya ek bihari
Tagda jawan sharir da hega si poora shikari
Chup ke oh sekda akhan jati de dekh jawani
Smaj chuka jati de fudi mange lan da paani
Jad andi jati sham nu maj diya kadan dhara
Soche bhaiya pa ke lami jati di fuddi maara
Fir Ik din bhaiye ne chori to jatti di photo leli
Poori raat apne sapne vich nangi karke peli
Jad milda mauka phone te jati di photo lake
Apne lan nu ragde kache vich hath nu pake
Ikdin dekh laya jati ne bhaiya muth jad mare
Naale masale lan nale jati da naam pukare
Dekh eda lan bhiaye da jati nu aaya pasina
Meri photo te muth marda hay kive kamina
Dekh ke mota lan jati di fuddi vi ho gayi gilli
Garam ho ke jati ne apni salwar vi karti dhilli
Ungala nal lagi palosan apni fuddi da chola
Chud java bhaiye to lekin pe na jaye koi rola
Masti vich jati ne puri ungali fuddi vich kar li
Picho aa bhaiye ne fer Bahn jaati di fad layi
Bibi ji ichoti ungali se apka hoga nahi gujara
Apni fudi me leke dekho ye hathiyar hamara
Chad de marjanaya meri ho jayugi badnami
Meri fuddi choti jehi te tera lan hai tusnami
Samaj gaya bhaiya ki jati aive bhaldi nakhre
Dil vich o vi chahe hai koi kas ki usnu pakde
Bhaiye ne aake picho di jatti nu jaffi pa layi
Apne khade lan te usne jatti di bund taka lai
Sande ke tel se bibi ji malish karta hun roz
Ek baar jo chud gayi mujhse ho jayegi mouj
Khich ke bhiye ne fer jati kamre vich layi var
Thale nu hath pa jati de jhat khol deti salwar
Bibi ji jabse dekha apko humko lagti thi achi
Ena keh bhaiye ne cheti jati di khich tj kachi
Gar di gal gar vich reh jaye hondi hai chnagi
Jaldi se ab suit utaar ke ho jayo poori nangi
Jhat hi bahiye ne fir cheti hi apna kacha lata
Kad ke apnamota lan jati de munh vich pata
Chus ke dekh soni jatiye ayuga tenu swad
Ik var jad chud gayi isto karengj isnu yaad
Far ke jati nu balan to fir chuppe laga lawan
Fuddi di ki haal karu soch ke jati si pareshan
Lan kad moonh vicho fer jati nu paya lamme
Bulla nu fer laga chupan nap ke usde mame
Akda hoya lan apna usde fer fudi ute takaya
Bahan vich fer nap jati nu kas ke dhaka laya
Iko dhake vich bhaiye ne pura kila deta thok
Bibiji apko thokne se humko koi na pave rok
15 k minute vich hi bhaiye ne usdi rel banati
Mar mar ke lan de dhake jati di fuddi sujati
Jati vi hun bund chuk chuk fudi lagi marvan
Kai dina to dabe hoye aaj hoye poore arman
Jati boli masti vich bhaiye nu leke tera land
Meri tarsi payi fudi nuhun aaj pyai Hai thand
Bhaiye kehna bibiji ab jat jab tak nahi aate
Mere bistar me hi beetegi apki ab sab ratte
Aapki fuddi aur bund ka bajunga aisa baja
Roz raat ko bologi jaldi se chodo mere raja
Kodi kar jati nu bhaiye ne usdi banati ghodi
Sire tak thok ke lan fer bund vi karti chaudi
Sari raat bhaiye de thle bund apni marwake
Jati savere chaldi gahr thodi jayi langda ke
Jat de wapis aun di khabar jad tak na aayi
Bhaiye ne tad tak jatti di raj ke bund wajai
Jati vi kehndi bahiye nu leke tera mota lan
Fudi vi khul gayi puri ho gai mai dhan dhan
End…