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Fantasy Jindagi ke rangJindagi Ke Rang (The Revenge Of Rebal)

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Tabhi raj ki najar samne sofe pe padi waha raman baitha hua tha

Raj - papa ap jinda ho

raman or sikha ye sunker chonck gye

Sikha - kaha hai uncle

Raj - hamare samne sofe par hi to baithe hai

Sikha - waha koi nahi hai

Raj - tum mere sath majak kar rahi ho

tabhi raman bola

Raman - beta wo mujhe nahi dekh payegi

Raj - kyu

Raman - beta mai ab jinda nahi hu mai ek atma hu

Raj - phir mai kese dekh pa raha hu

Raman - yahi to meri samjh me nahi aaraha hai sayad formula ke wajah se tum mujhe dekh pa rahe ho

Raj sofe se uth kar apne papa ke pass gya or unhe chune ki koshish ki to uska haat unke sarir ke aar par ho gya

raman ye sab dekh kar muskura raha tha

Udher sikha raj ki harkat dekh kar pagal ho ja rahi thi

Raman - beta mujhe maf kardena

Raj - apko mafi mangne ki jarurat nahi hai aap hamesa mere papa the or papa rahenge

Raman - ja bete sikha ko samjha de warna wo pagal ho jayegi

Raj sikha ke pass jake raman se huyi sari bat use bata deta hai

sikha ko biswas nahi hua

Raj - ye baat tum kisiko nahi bataogi biswa ko bhi nahi

Sikha ne haan me sar hilaya

Raman - beta tumhare liye ek surprise hai

Raj - kesa surprize papa

Raman - garage me chalo dikhata hu

Raj ne sikha ko bhi ye bat batai or sab garage me chale gye

Raman - beta wo diwar me jo chota sa green colour ka button dekh rahe ho na use dabao

Raj ne waisa hi kiya tabhi us dewar me se ek kanch ka tukda bahar nikla jisse light nikal rahi thi or us pe left hand ke panjhe ka nisan tha

Raman - beta apne, apna left hand sahi tarike se ush par rakho

Raj ne waisa hi kiya tabhi samne ki dewar upar jane lagi neeche ki taraf sedia dikhne lagi

Raj - papa ye sab kya hai

Raman - beta mujhe chod ke tumhare fingerprint ke alawa yaha koi nahi aa sakta

phir teeno seediyo se utar ke neeche jane lage

neeche ek bike or car khadi thi or uske side me ek lab bana hua tha

Raman - beta ye raha tumhara gift pure world me ye bike or car tumhe nahi milegi or in dono ko sirf tum hi chala sakte ho. ye kisi or ko tumhare permission ke bina apne uper baithne nahi degi in dono ko khas maine tumhare liye banya hai inki full speed ko sirf tum hi control kar paoge or koi nahi kyuki tumhare pass formula power hai

Raj - papa ye bahut hi khubsurat hai kya mai inhe chala sakta hu

Raman - yes try karke dekho

Raj wo bike par baith gya

Tabhi bike se awaz aayi

Bike-welcome sir

Ye sun kar raj chonk gya


Raman - beta ghabrao mat ye tumse baat bhi kar sakti or voice command par bhi chalti hai ye dono sirf meri or tumhari bat manege ab mai nahi raha to ye sirf tumhari bat maanege. apna mobile isme connect kardo ye ek software tumhare mobile me install kardega jisse tum inhe kahi bhi or kabhi bhi bula sakto

Phir raj ne bike pe ek round use lab ke under ghuma ke bike sikha ke pass rook diya

Sikha thoda dari huyi thi ye sab dekh ke

Raj - sikha daro mat kuch nahi hoga

sikha kuch nahi bolti han mai apna sar helati hai

Tabhi raman raj se bolta hai

Note-Raman ko sirf Raj dekh sakta hai

Raman - beta waha table pe ek watch rakha hai use pahen lo ise kabhi apne se alag mat karna is se tum bahut kuch kar sakte ho ise tum ishe phone aur camera ki tarah istamal kar sakte ho isse tum apni nayi car or bike ko bhi bula sakte ho

Ab chalo yaha se tumhara surprise khatam ho gaya

Raj - papa apne ye sab mere liye kyu banaya

Raman - ye sab maine apne bete ke liye kiya hai

ye sab sun kar raj ke aankhe nam ho jati hai wo apne papa ko gale lagana chata hai magar laga nahi pata

Raman - beta ab me chalta hu tum aj america ke liye ticket book karlo kal tum america jaoge

Raj - papa par aap kaha ja rahe ho

Raman - beta tum jab tak mere hatyare ko mar nahi dete mujhe mukti nahi milegi kyuki yahi meri akhri ichchha thi

Magar abhi mujhe jana hoga mai hamesa tumhare sath nahi rah sakta jab tumhe meri jarurat hogi mai aa jaunga or us pendrive ko nast kardena me nahi chahta ke tumhare or formula ke bare me kisi ko pata chale itna kah kar raman gayab ho jata hai

Raj laptop me ticket book karne lagti hai

Ye dekh sikha bhi raj ke sath jane ki jid karti hai raj uske liye bhi ticket book karta hai

Phir dono khana khate hai uske bad raj sikha ko apne papa ki kahi hui bat ke bare me batata hai.

 

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Agli subha raj or sikha uthke apni taiyari karne lage tabhi biswa aa gaya

Biswa - tumlog kaha jane ki taiyari kar rahe ho

Sikha kuch bolne bali hoti hai ki raj bolta hai

Raj - meri jo yadast chali gayi hai uske ilaaj ke liye papa ke dost ke pass america ja rahe hai

Iske bad biswa kuch nahi bolta hai

Sab airport jate hai jate samay raj biswa ko bolta hai

Raj - yar bura nahi man na hum tujhe nahi le ja rahe hai mai to akela jana chahta tha magar sikha ne jid ki mujh ko akela nahi jane degi or yaha par collage bhi hai hum logo ka toh collage band hoga tum notes bana lena

Iske bad raj sikha biswa ko bye bolker nikal jate hai america waha ponchkar raj apne dad ke dost ke pass jata hai

unhone bola ki do din bad operation hai

raj ne yaha pe ek flat bhade pe le liyaa

Do din bad Raj ka operation ho gya or uske ek din bad raj apne liye huye flat me aa gya


aaj wo baith ke apne atit ke bare me soch raha tha


Note - yahi pe flashback khatam hota hai


Present


Raj baitha huya tha ki tabhi room me sikha aati hai

Sikha - kuch yaad aaya apne bare me

Raj - han bahut kuch yad aaya ye kahte hue uske chare pe udasi aa jati hai or ankho se aansu nikalne lagte hai sikha uske aansu pochti hai or puchti hai

Sikha - to bolo kuch apne bare me tumhare ghar kaha hai tumhare
mummy, daddy

Raj - unhone hi toh mujhe chod diya or toh or mere dad ne hi mujhe marne ki koshish ki thi

Fir raj rote hue sikha sab kuch bata deta hai

ye sab waha dur khada raman bhi sun leta hai joki sikha room me aayi thi tabhi raman aaya tha magar raj ne use dekh nahi tha

tabhi raj ki najar raman pe jati he

Raj raman ke pass jata hai or bolta hai

Raj - ap ne kyu mujhe bola mere dimag me chip hai mai waisa hi bahut acha tha ye bolker raj fut fut ke rone laga, raman or sikha ne use bahut mahnat se sant kiya or sula diya


Agli subha raj utha fhir use rat ki bat yad aa gayi phir usne socha ki jinhone uski kadar nahi ki woh wapas lot ke unloge ke pass nahi jayega

raj apna mode fresh karne ke liye kahi ghumne jane ka socha

raj ready ho gya sikha ko bhi ready hone ko bola raj ka ye badla huya roop dekh kar woj bahut khus thi

dono pahle ek indian restaurant gaye or waha pe nasta kiya

Phir ghumne ke liye nikal gye phale woh log Walt Disney World gaye waha ghumne ke bad tak saam ho gayi thi to inhone wahi ek hotel me khana khaya


Phir inhone Golden Gate Bridge jane ka phaisla kiya andhera hone ke bad waha ka najara bahut acha hota hai

Raj or Sikha banha phonch gye tabhi ek 3/4sal ki america bachi aati he or raj or sikha ko kuch khane ko mangti hai

Raj or Sikha use pass ke restaurant me le jate hai use khana khilate he


Note - ye bachi jo bhi bat kar rahi hai woo english me hai me woh hindi me likh raha hu

Raj us ladki puchta hai

Raj - tumhara nam kya hai

bachi - Angel

Sikha - lagata hai ye apna nam nahi janti ise iske ghar me Angel khaker bulate honge is liye ye apna nam Angel bol rahi hai

Raj - beta tumhare mom dad kaha hai

Angel - rote huye mere mom dad nahi hai or mere uncle aunty mujhe marte hai or khana bhi nahi dete hai isliye mai waha se chali aayi

Raj ko woh bachi bahut achi lagti hai

Raj - tum hamare sath chalogi

Angel - aap mujhe khana doge or chocolate doge

Raj - jo tumhe chahoge woh sab denge

Angel - han chalungi

Raj or sikha ne kesi ne niswa ke papa ko bolke Angel ko india lejane ke taiyari karta hai or america ke govt se bhi permission leleta hai

Phir raj or sikha Angel ko leke india ke liye nikal gaye
 

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