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nice updateUpdate 1
ye story start hoti hy rajgad se jaha pe rehti he humare hero ki family yani k ali ki family ji ha ali anaath ni tha
balki usko anaath jesa rehna pada apni family ki wajah se.
ali ke papa ka naam saleem tha
ali ki maa ka naam ruksana
saleem-sabse bada businessman he ye top 3 rich businessman ki list me ata he
ruksana-apne pati se bhut pyaar krti hy vo jesa kahe uski ha me haa miladeti hy
to chaliye ab story ki taraf vapis ate hy
sabhi log or naukar chaakar idhar udhar bhaag rahe the kisi ko koi khyaal ni kya ho rha hy
tabhi achanak se kisi ke rone ki aawaj ati hy
ye or koi ni humara hero tha jisne abhi abhi janm liya tha
sabhi log khush the or khaas kar ali ke dada
ali ke dada ek mahaan insaan he ye saari daulat unhi ki he
ali ke dada ka naam-Abdul he
saleem ne ali ko apni god me liya or use ek tak dekhne laga
or bola
saleem-ruksana aaj hum bhut khush hy tumne hume is ghar ka waaris diya hy hume
ruksana bhi bhut khush thi akhir kon apni aulad dekhke khush ni hota
mgr ye khushi sirf ek pal ki hi thi jo baad me chali jaani thi
saleem ek baba ke chakkar me bhut hi andhwishwashi tha vo baba jo kehde uske lie patthar ki lakeer tha
or vo baba usi ke kisi dushman se mila hua tha islie usne inko khushia barbad krne ki sochi
saleem-Are aao baba hum ap hi ka intezaar kr rhe the aapko hi idka naam rakhna hy
baba-lao hum pehle isko dekhle
saleem-ye lijie baba
baba- hmm bacha bhut hi tandurust hy mgr iski aankhe kuch or kehti hy
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baba-beta tumhe meri baat dhyaan se sunni hogi jo me kahu vo ek dam sach hy
saleem-baba aap chinta na kare aapka jo fesla hoga hum uske saath rahenge
baba-to theek he suno ye ek manhoos bacha hy isne sirf tumhari barbadi ke lie is duniya me janm liya hy
saleem-baba ye aap kya kah rhe hy
baba-haa beta me jo kah raha hu vo ek dam sach hy
saleem-baba ab me kya karu aapne to mujhe badi dhuvidha me daal diya hy
baba-beta iska ek hi rasta hy isko yaa to tumhe khatm krna hoga ya fir isko apne se alag kahi chodna hoga
saleem-baba esa ni ho skta me esa ni kr paunga ye is ghar ka hone vala waris hy
baba- dekho mene jo kehdia so kehdia ab tumhari marji hy me tumhari khushi hi chahta hu
saleem-baba mujhe samay chahie kal tak ka
baba-theek hy beta
uske baad saleem ye baat apne pure parivar ko bta deta hy jise sunke sabke paisro tale jameen khisak gyi
mgr ali ke dada us baba ko ni mante the or vo ye bhi jante the saleem us baba ki bat jrur manega to unhone ek faisla liya
ali ka dada ne bola me is bache ko kahi door chod dunga tab to tum khush ho ge na vese bhi me ise ek ache hatho me hi dunga
ali ki maa iss baat ko inkaar krti rahi mgr apne pati se pyaar bhi bhut krti thi to usne bhi isko dada ke hath me dena hi sahi samjha
fir dada ne ali ko apne hath me lia or apne room me agye or room bad krdiya
uske baad unhone jo kia vo bhut shocking tha.....
lovely updateupdate 2
Recap: uske baad saleem ye baat apne pure parivar ko bta deta hy jise sunke sabke paisro tale jameen khisak gyi
mgr ali ke dada us baba ko ni mante the or vo ye bhi jante the saleem us baba ki bat jrur manega to unhone ek faisla liya
ali ka dada ne bola me is bache ko kahi door chod dunga tab to tum khush ho ge na vese bhi me ise ek ache hatho me hi dunga
ali ki maa iss baat ko inkaar krti rahi mgr apne pati se pyaar bhi bhut krti thi to usne bhi isko dada ke hath me dena hi sahi samjha
fir dada ne ali ko apne hath me lia or apne room me agye or room bad krdiya
uske baad unhone jo kia vo bhut shocking tha
Ab Age: ali ke dada kamre me ake kamro ko lock krliya or fir balcony me agaye or kuch padne lag gye uske baad vo aasman ki or dekhne lag gye
thodi hi der me koi unke samne ajata hy or kehta hy or btao abdul kaise yaad kiya humne ye or koi ni jinn tha
Abdul-aaj mujhe tumhari jruat hy tumne kaha tha tum meri madad kroge ek din to aaj samjho vo din agya hy
ji ha ali ke dada ne us jinn ki madad kri thi bottle se nikalne me mgr vo unse 3 wish puri krne ka kehta hy jisse ali ke dada mana krdete hy ye kehke fir kabhi jruat padne pe mangega
jiss baat pe jinn ne ek mantar diya jise padne pe vo chahe kahi bhi hoga chala ayega
jinn-haa mujhe yaad hy mene kaha tha tum chinta mat kro jo kahoge krdunga
abdul-dekho ye mera pota hy or abdul use vo saari baat btadeta hy jo bhi baat thi jise sunke jinn thodi der shant hojata hy or fir bolta hy
jinn-thik hy me tumhari madad krdunga tum yahi chahte ho na ki me ise ek achi jindgi du or iski raksha kru to thik hy me tumhari madad krne ke lie tayyar hu me ise apne hi pariwar me jagah dunga ise bilkul apne bete ki tarah hi rakhunga
abdul-bas mujhe yahi sunna tha tumse or me ummeed krta hu k tum iska pura khyal rakhoge
jinn-dekho tum bilkul nishchint ho jao mera bhi pariwar hy or mere pariwar me sab khush ho jayenge ise dekhke
uske baad abdul apni nam aankho se us bache ko jinn ko dedeta hy jise jinn apne hath me rakhke ud jata hy or vapis pari lok aajata hy
jinn ka naam sheryar tha or bhut hi acha tha uski family me uski biwi hy jiska naam shabnam tha or ek beti hy jo 2 saal ki thi or naam jasmine tha
jin lok ka ek niyam bhi tha vaha kisi insaan ka jaana mana tha mgr fir bhi jinn apne vade ke mutabik use apne ghar le aya
jin lok me har admi ka ghar ek mahal se kam ni tha sabhi vaha rajao jesi jindgi gujarte hy mgr fir bhi inme bhi ek raja hota hy jo sabhi ko hukm deta hy
vo us bache ko ghar le aya jise dekhke uske ghar me sab shocked ho jate hy kyunki vo insaan ka bacha tha
shabnam- aap ye kisko le aye hy aapko pta hy na agar kisi ne dekh lia to kya galt ho jayega ye log hume khatm krdenge
sheryar-are kisi ko pta lagega tab na or vese bhi jin or insan dikhte to ese hi hy na or fir jo me tumhe btane vala hu vo sunke tumhe pta lag jayega me kya kehna chahta hu
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fir sheryar use saari baat btadeta hy ki kese uske maa baap ne hi use akela chod diya jise sunke shabnam ki aankhe bhi nam ho jati hy or us bache ko uthake apne gale se laga leti hy or ye dekhke sheryar bhi khush ho jata hy
fir to shabnam use humesa apne bache jesa hi pyaar deti
shabnam-apne ek baat to btayi hi ni iss bache ka naam kya hy
sheryar-are ye to mujhe bhi ni pta mene bhi unse ni pucha ki is bache ka naam kya hy
shabnam-are ese kese ab iska kuch naam to rakhna hi hoga na ab humne ise apne god liya hi hy to me to ise naam dungi hi
fir ese hi dono pati patni use ali naam dene ka faisla krte hy
ese hi din gujarne lagte hy or shabnam bhi use maa ka pyaar hi deti thi or ab to vo use apna beta hi manti thi
dono khushi khushi jindgi kaat hi rahe or dusri taraf bhi kuch esa hi hua
rajgad me bhi ali ke jaate hi sab bhut dhukhi ho gye unse to bardasht bhi na ho paaya k unka ek hi beta tha vo bhi chala gya
mgr uper vale ko kuch or hi manjur tha kyunki saleem ka bhai apni biwi ke sath kahi jaa rha tha unki ek beti thi jiska naam pari tha jo unhone ghar me nanny ko diya tha jab vo car se k
awesome update but last main update ki line cut ho rahi hai writer ji thoda us per bhi dhiyan dijiyeupdate 3
recap:ese hi din gujar rahe the ki kisi ko pta lag gya k ye insaan ka bacha hy or usne jaake maharaj ko btadiya jise sunke maharaj ko bhut gussa aya
fir maharaj apna gussa leke chal diye sheryar ke ghar or fir age jo hua uska kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha
ab aage:
maharaj apne sainik bhi sath le gye or pahunch gye sheryar ke ghar mgr ghar ke andar jaan aasan ni tha kyunki jese insaan apne ghar ko lock krte hy vese hi zinn
bhi apne ko lock krne ke lie ek surakhsa kawach lagate hy kyunki zinn to kahi bhi kese bhi andar aa sakte hy islie sabhi suraksha kawach rakhte the apne ghar pe
ese hi maharaj ne uske ghar age chillana shuru kr diya
Maharaj- aakhir kab tak chupe rahoge bahar niklo ghar se vrna me iss kawach ko tod ke aunga agar chup chap bache ko humare hawale krdiya to tumhe jaane dunga vrna
agar mene is suraksha kawach ko toda or tab andar aaya to tum sab ko khatm krdunga
ye baat jese hi sheryar or uski biwi ne suni vo bahar dekhke dar gye or bhut pareshan ho gye or jasmine bhi bhut darr gyi mgr ab vo badi ho gyi thi or bhut samajhdaar bhi
sheryar ye baat ache se janta tha k vo iss bache ko jaan se maardega islie vo bhut hi pareshan ho gya ab uske paas ek hi chaara tha k vo iss bache ko apne se kahi door
surakshit jagah pe chod aye jaha ise koi na janta ho or ye apni ek nayi pehchan bnaye tabhi usko ek acha idea hy jise sochke vo thoda niraash bhi ho gya or ye idea usne shabnam ko bhi btadiya jise sunke
vo ro padi mgr usko bhi yahi krna sahi laga or iske alawa koi chara bhi na tha
sheryaar bhut hi samajhdaar tha kyunki jab vo bache ko ghar laya tha to usne pehle hi puri tayyari kr rakhi thi ki vo bache ko surakshit kese bachaega islie usne ek secret raasta tayyar kra tha zin-lok se bahar jane ka
ab maharaj bhi intezaar krke thak gya to usne surakshit ghere ko bhedna shuru krdiya mgr zinlok ka ghera itni aasani se ni toot ta hy usne apne saare sainik laga diye ise bhedne ke lie
sheryar apna plan apni biwi or jasmine ko bhi samjha deta hy kyunki vo bhut hi samjhdaar thi
fir sheryaar us secret raaste se sab ke sath khud bhi bahar nikal jata hy or plan ke mutabik sabse surakshit jagah thi anaathashram kyunki ek yahi jagah thi jaha pe iski koi bhi pehchan ni puchi jayegi
mgr sheryar ek baat janta tha k iska akela iss anaath ashram me rehna thik nhi hy or vese bhi agar vo jasmine ko apne sath vapis le jata to ho skta hy k vo jasmine ko bhi haani pahunchate
islie sheryar ne ye faisla kiya ki usko ab humesha ali ka saaya banke hi rehna ho ga ab use hi ali ki pehredaarni banna hoga
fir sheryar ne ye baat shabnam ko bhi batayi jo puri tarah se toot gyi thi kyunki vo apni puri zindgi apne ali or jasmine ko hi manti thi vo un dono ke bagair apni jidgi ke baare me soch bhi ni sakti thi vo pyaar bhut krti thi uun dono se
sheryar- dekho jasmine me janta hu ye tumhare liye bhut hi mushkil hoga mgr mene bhi kisi ko vaada kiya hy ki me iski suraksha krunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaye islie me ye chahta hu tum iska saya ban jao tumhe hi ab iski raksha krni hogi iske siwa or koi rasta nhi hy beta
tumhe ab iski pehredaarni banna padega iska har kadam pe sath dena hoga chahe kuch bhi ho jaye
jasmine-me samajhti hu ye baat mgr me ap logo ke bina ni reh paungi
sheryar apni nam aankho se kehta hy- beta tumhe ye karna hoga me apna vachan ni tod skta hu or ab ye humari life ka bhi hissa hy
jasmine bhi roti hui boli- thik hy papa aap esa hi chahte ho to thik hy me krungi iski raksha aap jesa chahoge me vesa hi krungi me aap dono se vada krti hu isko kabhi akela ni chodunga
shabnam-beta mujhe pta hy ki tu puri tarah toot chuki hy mgr tujhe apne aap ko sambhalna hoga vrna tu ali ko kese sambhal payegi tujhe iske sath sath apna bhi pura khyal rakhna hoga mujhse vaada kr k tu rakhegi apna or ali ka khyaal
jasmine apne aasu phunchte hue kehti hy -thik hy me apse vaada krti hu me apne aapko sambhalungi or iska khyaal bhi rakhungi
sheryaar- beta tuje ye sab duniya se chupke krna hoga tu jab tak badi ni ho jaati tab tak tujhe ki
good updateUpdate 4
Recap-
jasmine- ji papa me samjhti hu apki baat ko me bhi bina jruat ke kisi ke samne ni aaungi or ali ka pura khyaal rakhungi
or fir sheryaar or shabnam apni nam aankho se dono ko anathashram me chod ke aajate h jaha pe ali ki puri zindgi badalne vaali thi
Ab aage-
sheryar ne jaate wakt ek kaam or kiya tha usne ali ki yaddhast mita di thi vese to vo bacha tha use kuch bhi ache se yaad ni tha mgr fir bhi vo use purani jindgi se door rakhna jaata tha vo ni chahta tha k uspe koi bhi bura saya pade
or ye baat jasmine bhi jaanti thi
dusri taraf rajgad me-
idhar ali ki family apni zindgi ais or aaram se gujar rhi thi unhe to sayad ali yaad bhi ni tha ali maa bhi paiso ke rang pe puri tarah dhal gyi thi late night parties or drugs or sabhi bure kaam krne lagi or pari ki har zid puri ki jaati or saleem bhi apni jindgi paiso me gujar rha tha
mgr ali ke dada humesha ali ke baare me hi sochte the ki abhi vo kya kr rha hoga kyunki vo use bhut hi chahta tha usne ali me apne baap ki ek chavi dekhi thi
ab pari bhi badi hone lagi thi or kaafi jiddi or paiso ka rang bhi uspe chad rha tha
idhar zin lok me-
sheryar or shabnam jese hi zin lok me apne ghar me pahunche unhone dekha saare sainik idhar udhar bhag rhe the mgr jese hi unhone sheryar or uski biwi ko dekha unhone maharaj ko bulaliya
tabhi maharaj unke pas ata hy or sirf ek hi sawal bade gusse punchta hai
kaha chupa rakha hy tumne uss bache ko
sheryar-kis bache ko mujhe kuch samajh ni aya
maharaj- dekho mere samne naatak krne ki jruat ni hy mujhe sab pta lag gya hy tumne yaha bache ko rakha tha
sheryar- maharaj ye baat apko kis ne btaya
maharaj-thode shant swar me ,mujhe ye baat pehredaar ne btayi usne khud apne kaano se kisi insaan ke bache ki rone ki aawaaj suni thi
sheryar-maharaj apko koi galt fehmi hui hy esa kuch bhi ni hy aap kahi bhi dekh lijie vo to mene hi ye aawaaj nikali thi me apne chehra badalne ka abhyaas kar rha tha or me bache ke charitra ko puri tarah nibha raha tha islie esi aawaj nikali thi
aap khud uss pehredaar se kyu ni puchlete kya usne us bache ko apni aankho se dekha tha k ni agar usne dekha hota to use pta lag jata vo or koi ni vo me hi tha
maharaj- pehredaar kya ye baat sahi kah rha hy kya tumne us bache ko apni aankho se dekha tha
pehredaar-maaf kijie maharaj mene to sirf bache ki aawaaj hi suni thi mujhe bilkul bhi ni pta tha k ye harkat koi zinn kr rha hoga
sheryar-dekha aapne maharaj jo aap soch rhe hy vo ek galt fehmi thi aap khud pure ghar me dekhlo agar aapko koi insaani bacha dikhe
maharaj-to fir jab me tumhe bula rha tha to tum bahar kyu ni aye
sheryar-maharaj vo to me bahar gya tha apni biwi ke saath
maharaj-oh to kya tum sach kah rhe ho dekho agar mujhe kabhi bhi bhanak bhi lagi to tumhare sath bhut bura hoga
sheryar- maharaz aap bilkul nischint ho jayie esi koi bhi baat ni hy
maharaj- thik hy ab mujhe chalna chahie
sheryaar-ji maharaj jesi apki ichha
maharaj or uske sainik ke jaane ke baad sheryar ne shabnam ko bola
sheryar-dekho me janta hu tum unhe bhut yaad krogi mgr ab hum unse milne kabhi ni jayenge kyunki maharaj hume lekar bhut satark ho gya hy mujhe maaf krdena hum ab unse milne kabhi ni ja payenge
shabnam-dekhiye aap dukhi mat hoie aap jesa kahenge me vesa hi krungi me apne bacho ki jindgi khatre me ni daal sakti hy
aaiye ab najar daalte hy orphanage (anathalya)
jaha ali ko apni aham jindgi ka ek hissa is anathalya me gujarna tha vahi jasmine ko bhi apna bachpan ali ke lie qurbaan padega jo vo bhi janti thi
ab ali tha to 4 saal ko or use anathalya me aye 1 mahina bhi ho gya tha vaha ki zindgi bhut ghatiya thi use vaha rehna bilkul bhi pasand ni tha use niche jameen pe letna ke sona padta or vaha usse abhi jyada kaam ni karna pad rha tha par fir bhi vo 1 mahine me hi toot gya tha use vaha ka khana bhi bilkul bhi pasand ni ata vaha ki halat jail jesi hi thi
vaha bacho pe kaafi julm bhi kre jaate agar koi kaam ni krta to mgr ali bacha tha or naya use abhi koi jyada pareshan ni krta mgr jabbhi
superb updateupdate 5
recap:
jasmine ne ab faisla karliya tha k ab kuch bhi ho vo ali ko akela ni chodegi or ab vo uski haalat ko sudharegi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye
ab aage:
jasmine ne ab apni nafrat ko ek taraf krke ali ka khyaal rakhne ka faisla karliya tha vo use ab sahi krna chahti thi kaise bhi krke
jasmine ye jaanti thi ki vo ali ko direct khana ya koi bhi cheez ni de payegi kyunki vo kisi ke saamne ni aasakti thi to usne yah faisla kra ki use hi do logo ka khana akela khaana padega tabhi vo apni uske khane me bhi nutrition daal paye
jasmine apna khana shikaar krke or ese cheezo se leti thi jinme kaafi proteins hota tha jisko insaano ne bhi kabhi ni dekha tha vo junglo me hi proteins or nutrition vala khana khaya krti thi or esi cheeze khati thi jinka insaano ne kabhi zikar bhi ni kiya tha
jasmine ne apne faisle ke baad khaana dhundna shuru krdiya or usne kaafi proteins or nutrients ki cheeze bhi khai jisse use power bhi mile mgr vo bechari jyada se jyaada 1.5 logo kahi khana kha pai jisme se use pure 1 admi ka khana apne body me se dena padega
jasmine ko khana dhunde or pet bharne me dopahar ka ssamay laga uske baad vo sidha ali ko dekhne gyi ki uska kya haal hy or kya kar rha
jese hi jasmine anathalya gai usne dekha vaha ka manager usse kaam krwa rha hy abhi or thodi der me hi lunch time bhi ho jayega
jasmine ne apni najre ali pe rakhi to paya ki ali puri shiddat se kaam kr rha tha vo ye dekhke heraan thi ki itni si umar me bhi vo apne kaam ko bhakhoobi kr rha hy
jese hi lunch time hua ali apni thaali leke bacho ki line me hi lag gya or apni baari ane ka intezaar krne laga jese hi uski baari aayi vo khana leke seedha ek kone me beth gya
par tabhi hi jasmine ne apni 100% body nutrients me se 75% ko uske khane me laga diya or tabhi jese hi ali ne muh bigad ke khana apne muh me dala vo heraan ho gya
ali heraan tha ki khana pehle se kuch alag swaad tha uska mgr uska taste pehle se kaafi acha laga use or usne iss baat pe jyaada gaur bhi ni kra or us khane ko khane laga or pehli baar usne apni plate puri tarah se saaf kri thi or vese bhi vo
khana khane ke ek ghante baad use us khane ka asar dikhne laga tha physically to ni mgr mentally or internally
Raat me bhi usi tarah jasmine ne khana dia
jasmine bhut hi jyaada samajhdaar ab vo ali ka khyaal ek maa ki tarah krne lagi thi
vo ab roj ese hi krti or ali ko uski quantity jitna nutrition usko diya krti jisse ali ki health din ba din sudharne lagi thi vo ab pehle se bhi jyada hone laga tha or ek hairat ki baat ye bhi thi sila jati zinn ki khoobsoorti ka raaj uska khaana hi tha jo ab ali ke sharir pe puri tarah nasha krne laga tha
uski health ke sath sath uski khubsurti bhi rojana nikharne lagi thi
ab jasmine ka bhi roj ka yahi kaam ho gya tha vo ali ka ek maa ke jaisa pura khyaal rakh rhi thi mgr ek zinn hone ke naate uski body breakdown hone lagi thi kyunki ab uski body me growth kam ho rha tha mgr apni taakat ke balbute pe vo body aaram se recover kar jaati
ese hi dhire dhire din beetne lage the or jasmine ko uska dhyaan rakhte rakhte pure 4 saal or ho chuke the jaha ali 8 saal ka hua vahi jasmine 10 ki thi ali ab apni puri growth pe tha or jawan hota jaa rha tha uski skin kaafi fair hui uska har ek body part buri tarah se apne jalw dikhane laga tha aakhir uski body kisi tarah jasmine ki hi to den thi
iss sab ke bawjood jasmine ki nafrat jesi thi vesi hi rahi balki vo use pehle se bhi jyaad nafrat krti or bhut chidti bhi mgr vo kisi tarah apne maa baap ke diye hue vaade se nikalna chahti thi jab tak ali bada ni ho jata or apne pairo pe khada ni ho jata
ab ali bhut hi sundar dikhne lag gya tha jiski koi sima nhi or dhire vo nikharta hi jaa rha aakhir usme vahi sab qualities aane lagi jo ek sila zinn me hoti hy ek tarah se usme alag hi khoon daud rha tha vo bhut hi acha mehsoos krta tha mgr isi beech vo akela rehna bahut pasand krta tha vo kisi ko apne najdeek tak ni ane deta tha use is baat ka khud ni pata tha k vo dost kyu ni bnana chahta tha mgr use esa lagta th
awesome updateupdate 6
after 3 years
ali 11 saal ka ho gya aadate pehle hi jaise thi mgr dekhne ka najariya badal gya ab ali har cheez ko dusre najariye se dekhne ki koshish krta tha vo baaki bacho se kaafi alag tha adato me bhi
jasmine bhi 13 saal ki ho gyi thi or pehle jaisi hi napchadi ho gyi thi akhir ho bhi kyu na uska koi dost ni tha
rajgad me-
pari ab sabse bade school me padti thi
pari ghar ki bhut hi laadli thi or sab use bhut pyaar krte the isi pyaar ki vajah se vo apni jid manwaleti thi
ab ate he vapis anathalya me
ali abhi so rha tha or jasmine vahi pass me thi tabhi pari ki najar ek saanp pe gai jo green color ka tha
vo saanp ali ke passs gya or uske jism pe chalne laga or hath me lipat gya ye dekhke jasmine bhut dar gyi kahi ali ko kuch ho gya to
jaise hi jasmine ne saanp ko apne hath me lene ki koshish ki vo sab ali ke hath me ek tattoo ki tarah chap gya jasmine to bhut darr gyi uski to haalat kaafi patli ho gyi
ek ladka dusre se baat kr rha tha
ladka-maharaj kaha chale gye the aap humne aapko kaha ni dhunda or tabhi koi maharaj ke peet ke peeche ek waar krta or jaise hi waha piche muda koi ladki ne uspe waar kiya mujhe maaf krna mere raja mere pass koi rasta ni tha tabhi
ali ek jordaar cheez ke sath apni need se utha pura sharir paseene se bhiga hua aakhir kon tha vo mujhe esa sapna kyu aya kon tha vo maharaj or us ladki ne use kyu mara
tabhi manager ali ki cheez sun ke room me bhag ke aya
manager-kya hua ali ese kyu cheekhe
ali-ni uncle esi koi baat ni hy vo bas darawna sapna dekhliaislie achanak se neend khul gyi
manager-thik hy agar koi pareshani ho to mujhe btana ab jao or jaldi se tayyar hoke padne ke lie jao teachers aagye he na jao ab jaldi
ali-thik hy me bhi tayyar hoke pahunchta hu
ali ka haath thoda dard kr rha tha use ni pata ki esa kyu hua jab usne apne hath pe najar daali vaha kisi saanp ka tattoo bna hua tha ali bhut darr gya tattoo dekhke
mgr usne socha sayad in sab me se hi kisine pen se bnaya hoga vo washroom gya or hath me bne tattoo ko mitane ki koshish krne laga mgr mita na saka ab use padne ke lie bhi jaana tha to vo jaldi hi padhayi krne ke lie nikal gya
ali do se teen din tattoo se pareshan hota hy fir tattoo pe koi jyada khaash dhyaan ni deta
jasmine ne ise kaafi serious liya tha usko ye baat samajh ni aayi ki aakhir uss saanp ne ali ko kuch kra kyu ni or vo uske haath me gayab kaha ho gya
ese hi kuch din bad vo saanp tattoo se nikal ke uske haath pe pura lipat gya or idhar udhar jaane laga or thodi der ese krne baad vo fir apni jagah vapis aagya
ye sab jasmine dekh rhi thi use to kuch samajh hi ni aaraha tha k iss saanp kaa raaaz kya hy or vo ali se chahta kya hy
ali savere utha or washroom gya or bath lene laga tabhi uski najar haath pe fir se gyi iss baar saanp kisi or hi posture me najar aya iss baar vo hath pe thoda ge ki taraf najar aaraha tha ali ko kaafi hairat to hui fir bhi iss baat ko usne jyada dhyaan ni diya
kahi door ek jagah pe
sardaar- kya tumne apna kaam krdiya
aadmi-sardaar humne apna kaam krdiya maharaj ko uski amanat vapis krdi hy
sardaar-
ye tumne bhut hi acha kiya aakhir humne maharaj ko uski power dedi mgr abhi unko is baat ka pta ni lagna chahie ki vo ek mahaaraj he hume abhi unke 21 sal ke hone ka intezaar krna hoga tabhi vo apni shaktiya istemaal kr payenge usse pehle ni
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Ye story he ek ese ladke ki jiska is duniya me koi ni tha vo humesha se hi akela raha hy mgr usko ye ni pta tha tha k uska khyal rakhne vala koi or tha jo usko uski jaan se bhi jyada pyaar krta vo or koi ni vo thi jinny ye kahani me kese ek jinny apne hero ki jindgi badal deti hy or kese vo puri umar usi ke sath rahi hy jiska us ladke ko bhi ni pta tha jo bad me use pta chlta hy
Kese Vo jinny humesha uske lie bhut possessive rahi hy or vo possessive kyu thi ye apko story ke dauran hi pta lag jayega
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ye story start hoti hy rajgad se jaha pe rehti he humare hero ki family yani k ali ki family ji ha ali anaath ni tha
balki usko anaath jesa rehna pada apni family ki wajah se.
ali ke papa ka naam saleem tha
ali ki maa ka naam ruksana
saleem-sabse bada businessman he ye top 3 rich businessman ki list me ata he
ruksana-apne pati se bhut pyaar krti hy vo jesa kahe uski ha me haa miladeti hy
to chaliye ab story ki taraf vapis ate hy
sabhi log or naukar chaakar idhar udhar bhaag rahe the kisi ko koi khyaal ni kya ho rha hy
tabhi achanak se kisi ke rone ki aawaj ati hy
ye or koi ni humara hero tha jisne abhi abhi janm liya tha
sabhi log khush the or khaas kar ali ke dada
ali ke dada ek mahaan insaan he ye saari daulat unhi ki he
ali ke dada ka naam-Abdul he
saleem ne ali ko apni god me liya or use ek tak dekhne laga
or bola
saleem-ruksana aaj hum bhut khush hy tumne hume is ghar ka waaris diya hy hume
ruksana bhi bhut khush thi akhir kon apni aulad dekhke khush ni hota
mgr ye khushi sirf ek pal ki hi thi jo baad me chali jaani thi
saleem ek baba ke chakkar me bhut hi andhwishwashi tha vo baba jo kehde uske lie patthar ki lakeer tha
or vo baba usi ke kisi dushman se mila hua tha islie usne inko khushia barbad krne ki sochi
saleem-Are aao baba hum ap hi ka intezaar kr rhe the aapko hi idka naam rakhna hy
baba-lao hum pehle isko dekhle
saleem-ye lijie baba
baba- hmm bacha bhut hi tandurust hy mgr iski aankhe kuch or kehti hy
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baba-beta tumhe meri baat dhyaan se sunni hogi jo me kahu vo ek dam sach hy
saleem-baba aap chinta na kare aapka jo fesla hoga hum uske saath rahenge
baba-to theek he suno ye ek manhoos bacha hy isne sirf tumhari barbadi ke lie is duniya me janm liya hy
saleem-baba ye aap kya kah rhe hy
baba-haa beta me jo kah raha hu vo ek dam sach hy
saleem-baba ab me kya karu aapne to mujhe badi dhuvidha me daal diya hy
baba-beta iska ek hi rasta hy isko yaa to tumhe khatm krna hoga ya fir isko apne se alag kahi chodna hoga
saleem-baba esa ni ho skta me esa ni kr paunga ye is ghar ka hone vala waris hy
baba- dekho mene jo kehdia so kehdia ab tumhari marji hy me tumhari khushi hi chahta hu
saleem-baba mujhe samay chahie kal tak ka
baba-theek hy beta
uske baad saleem ye baat apne pure parivar ko bta deta hy jise sunke sabke paisro tale jameen khisak gyi
mgr ali ke dada us baba ko ni mante the or vo ye bhi jante the saleem us baba ki bat jrur manega to unhone ek faisla liya
ali ka dada ne bola me is bache ko kahi door chod dunga tab to tum khush ho ge na vese bhi me ise ek ache hatho me hi dunga
ali ki maa iss baat ko inkaar krti rahi mgr apne pati se pyaar bhi bhut krti thi to usne bhi isko dada ke hath me dena hi sahi samjha
fir dada ne ali ko apne hath me lia or apne room me agye or room bad krdiya
uske baad unhone jo kia vo bhut shocking tha.....
Awesome updateupdate 2
Recap: uske baad saleem ye baat apne pure parivar ko bta deta hy jise sunke sabke paisro tale jameen khisak gyi
mgr ali ke dada us baba ko ni mante the or vo ye bhi jante the saleem us baba ki bat jrur manega to unhone ek faisla liya
ali ka dada ne bola me is bache ko kahi door chod dunga tab to tum khush ho ge na vese bhi me ise ek ache hatho me hi dunga
ali ki maa iss baat ko inkaar krti rahi mgr apne pati se pyaar bhi bhut krti thi to usne bhi isko dada ke hath me dena hi sahi samjha
fir dada ne ali ko apne hath me lia or apne room me agye or room bad krdiya
uske baad unhone jo kia vo bhut shocking tha
Ab Age: ali ke dada kamre me ake kamro ko lock krliya or fir balcony me agaye or kuch padne lag gye uske baad vo aasman ki or dekhne lag gye
thodi hi der me koi unke samne ajata hy or kehta hy or btao abdul kaise yaad kiya humne ye or koi ni jinn tha
Abdul-aaj mujhe tumhari jruat hy tumne kaha tha tum meri madad kroge ek din to aaj samjho vo din agya hy
ji ha ali ke dada ne us jinn ki madad kri thi bottle se nikalne me mgr vo unse 3 wish puri krne ka kehta hy jisse ali ke dada mana krdete hy ye kehke fir kabhi jruat padne pe mangega
jiss baat pe jinn ne ek mantar diya jise padne pe vo chahe kahi bhi hoga chala ayega
jinn-haa mujhe yaad hy mene kaha tha tum chinta mat kro jo kahoge krdunga
abdul-dekho ye mera pota hy or abdul use vo saari baat btadeta hy jo bhi baat thi jise sunke jinn thodi der shant hojata hy or fir bolta hy
jinn-thik hy me tumhari madad krdunga tum yahi chahte ho na ki me ise ek achi jindgi du or iski raksha kru to thik hy me tumhari madad krne ke lie tayyar hu me ise apne hi pariwar me jagah dunga ise bilkul apne bete ki tarah hi rakhunga
abdul-bas mujhe yahi sunna tha tumse or me ummeed krta hu k tum iska pura khyal rakhoge
jinn-dekho tum bilkul nishchint ho jao mera bhi pariwar hy or mere pariwar me sab khush ho jayenge ise dekhke
uske baad abdul apni nam aankho se us bache ko jinn ko dedeta hy jise jinn apne hath me rakhke ud jata hy or vapis pari lok aajata hy
jinn ka naam sheryar tha or bhut hi acha tha uski family me uski biwi hy jiska naam shabnam tha or ek beti hy jo 2 saal ki thi or naam jasmine tha
jin lok ka ek niyam bhi tha vaha kisi insaan ka jaana mana tha mgr fir bhi jinn apne vade ke mutabik use apne ghar le aya
jin lok me har admi ka ghar ek mahal se kam ni tha sabhi vaha rajao jesi jindgi gujarte hy mgr fir bhi inme bhi ek raja hota hy jo sabhi ko hukm deta hy
vo us bache ko ghar le aya jise dekhke uske ghar me sab shocked ho jate hy kyunki vo insaan ka bacha tha
shabnam- aap ye kisko le aye hy aapko pta hy na agar kisi ne dekh lia to kya galt ho jayega ye log hume khatm krdenge
sheryar-are kisi ko pta lagega tab na or vese bhi jin or insan dikhte to ese hi hy na or fir jo me tumhe btane vala hu vo sunke tumhe pta lag jayega me kya kehna chahta hu
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fir sheryar use saari baat btadeta hy ki kese uske maa baap ne hi use akela chod diya jise sunke shabnam ki aankhe bhi nam ho jati hy or us bache ko uthake apne gale se laga leti hy or ye dekhke sheryar bhi khush ho jata hy
fir to shabnam use humesa apne bache jesa hi pyaar deti
shabnam-apne ek baat to btayi hi ni iss bache ka naam kya hy
sheryar-are ye to mujhe bhi ni pta mene bhi unse ni pucha ki is bache ka naam kya hy
shabnam-are ese kese ab iska kuch naam to rakhna hi hoga na ab humne ise apne god liya hi hy to me to ise naam dungi hi
fir ese hi dono pati patni use ali naam dene ka faisla krte hy
ese hi din gujarne lagte hy or shabnam bhi use maa ka pyaar hi deti thi or ab to vo use apna beta hi manti thi
dono khushi khushi jindgi kaat hi rahe or dusri taraf bhi kuch esa hi hua
rajgad me bhi ali ke jaate hi sab bhut dhukhi ho gye unse to bardasht bhi na ho paaya k unka ek hi beta tha vo bhi chala gya
mgr uper vale ko kuch or hi manjur tha kyunki saleem ka bhai apni biwi ke sath kahi jaa rha tha unki ek beti thi jiska naam pari tha jo unhone ghar me nanny ko diya tha jab vo car se k