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Maza agaya bahut badhiya update bhai
UpDaTe PoStEd guys. Sorry for the delay mujhe neend lag gayi thi update to lagbhag raat mein hi complete ho gaya tha, kuchh bacha tha jise maine abhi complete kar post kar diya.
Bhai sabar kar le office me hu review raat ko
Nice update....
Shaandar jabardast Romanchak Update
Arjun ne Williams se badla le liya auruse use buri tarh se maut de diya .
Daniel ka agla waar kafi ghatak hogaa dekhte kaise nipatata hai
nice update
Superb excellent work but baar -2 English conversation likhne se achchha hai ek baar likh do ki yahan baat English me hogi bt Hindi me likha ja raha hai isse hoga ye word count kam hoga or time bhi bachega likhne ka baki aapki marji waiting for next
Msst update bro
Laffi chije clear ho gyi h
Well done
Ab bss wait h ki agge kya kya hoga
Next update me Arjun kese bChe ga?
Yhi ek question h abhi kr lie to
Nice update
Superb
Bahut hi mazedar update
Mast
Aik dam mast pharo update tha Maza agya
Fight scene acha rha or ab wapsi ka wait hai joh attack hona he os ka logo ko bi koi plain se dhond kr khatam kr do or ragov kutta ko bi jaldi se
Zabardast update Bhai
Ab to jeet ka jasn aur husn Ka tadka lagna bhi jaruri bnta hai
Intjaar rahega next update ka
Bro tum ko vishwas hi nahi hai hum par
Kuch cheeze clear karo
1) kaal ke jo boss hai vo kabhi Arjun ke papa hote hai kabhi vo Arjun ke mama please clear once .
2) William ki maa bhen ek kar the the king of beast ne
3);300 cr is this for real sala vm ke ghar par raid marwao ge
4) ab agla number kiska hai mahender ji ka ya ragahav ka
5) till now story se clear hai shivangi and kriti dono hi biwi hai Arjun ki but what about sri leela
6) Arjun and Rohan are like super hero till now in 102 updates
7) anu ko bahut dino baad dekha apne saviour ke pass
8)kya William ko Arjun hi mare ye jaruri tha bhai kyu ki jiska baap cm ho or chacha RAW me usko khud Jane ki kya jarurat thi
Aey confusion mat create karo vo wala part tha na jisme baat ho Rahi thi Arjun or anupma ke bare me
Nice and superb update....
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai dhalchandarun bhai....
Nice and lovely update.....
Jabardast update. Waiting for next update
Awesome update
Nice update....
Shandar update bro
Mere one liner par story ka word count karne ki dhamki yaha sab ke coments par appreciation galat baat I am hurted
Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Mast update h bhai...
Mast update h bhai...
Mast
Sex is not important in the story apart from sex story can be made beautiful by adding such a thrillful scenes like these in update 102. I am a big fan of such stories.
Waiting eagerly for next update.
Abe chal ab to Mai bhul bhi gya apni wish ko mujhe nahi lagta agle 10-12 update me bhi tum meri wish puri karoge and if you are planning so do it with gifs
Hahahha mujhe pata tha tum Aisa hi kuch bologe bhagwan se dar balak apne reader ka dil dhukha rahe ho
No guesses bro this time
Spoiler ho jae ga nhi to lol
Next update kab milega
Vj4u ki story me bahut fight scene hai take help from there sanveer and Arjun fight common hai
Nahi tumne bola tha na fight ka to us hisab se fight ke bare me likhne ke liye use refer karo bahut mast and details fight sequel hai try it once
Are nahi par haaine abhi tak jo fight sequel padhe hai abhi tak he was best
Konsa fighting style hai mujhe bhi batao
Hmmm....hand 2 hand fighting
Nice...jabs...hook vagrah dekh lena maza aa jayega
Ooh...thoda freestyle aur kickboxing bhi mix kar dena...Yuri Boyka wali feeling aa jayege
Actually this is my second comment on this form.
intezaar rahega....
Sriya
Sara
Anushka
Sriya ya phir Keerti
Besabari se intezaar rahega next update ka dhalchandarun bhai....
I am reading this story from the starting.
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