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Romance Just Friends (Pure romantic,suspense,thriller and fantasy)

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UPDATE 1
Oh my god! This is tremendous. Never in my dream had I thought I'd get this type of welcome.

My grandmom got the aarthi thali.

This is unbelievable. First, World Cup. Now, this.

I touched my grandmom's feet after she was done.

"Shabash puttar! Aaj tune humare khaandaan ka naam roshan kar diya." She told me, while wiping her tears away.

"Arre dadi, ro kyu rahi ho? Agar mujhe pata tha ki aapka yeh haal hoga, toh main World Cup laata hi nahi." I joked, cheering her up.

"Chup badmaash." She laughed.

I hugged my dad, mom and my sisters. They were all so proud of me. I could see tears of happiness in my Sania didi's eyes.

"Arre Sania didi, aap bhi?"

"I'm proud of you, Abhishek Sharma. Very proud of you." She kissed my forehead.

My entire family was here. And by entire, I mean, ENTIRE. From all the parts of the world.

Everyone was busy celebrating my victory. They were all dancing, eating sweets and having fun.

"So, Mr. Abhishek, how are you feeling after lifting the trophy?" My cousin, Aaradhya, asked me.

I laughed at her, but nontheless, answered her.

"Ah, it feels great, getting the trophy back home. It's like a dream come true. Everyone's happy. It's an amazing feeling!"

"Whom do you want to dedicate this win to?" She questioned like an interviewer.

"Interview hai kya?" I laughed.

"Arre bhaiya! Answer na."

"Okay, okay. Well, I'd like to dedicate this to my parents, my sisters and my grandmom. They've been really supportive. And ofcourse, Rahul sir. He's been our backbone."

They indeed have. I'm really grateful to them.

"Well, no dedication to girlfriend?" She asked wiggling her eyebrows.

This caught everyone's attention. They all stopped what they were doing and looked at me.

"Why would I dedicate it to someone I don't have? I don't have girlfriend, dude." I answered, honestly.

Everyone looked at me with a look saying Don't-Lie.

"I'm serious. I don't have one. Aur agar hoti bhi, toh main sabse pehle Komal didi aur Sania didi ko batata." I replied and hugged my sisters.

When everyone continued doing what they left in between, Komal didi asked me, "Hai kya?".

I facepalmed myself.

"No! I know I'm smoking hot, and 17 and shit. But, I'm single." I told her.

"Hot hoga dusro keliye. Humare liye toh bhais ki pooch ki tarah hai tu." Sania Didi shot back.

I just rolled my eyes at her comment and chuckled.

"Acha, you know what! Mithali is coming tomorrow." She informed me.

"What? Isn't she in boarding?"

"Well, yeah, she is. But she's coming here for a few weeks with her friends."

"Friends?" I asked, with an eye brow raised.

"Oh, you haven't met them, right? You'll love them! They'd come last time and all of us totally enjoyed their company. Especially Vashi. She's total pataka!" Komal Didi said grinning widely.

I laughed at her eagerness.

"Didi, pataka?" I laughed.

"Yes! Pataka! Her craziness will light up anyone's day." She smiled broadly.

"Then let's meet your pataka tomorrow." I said, still laughing.

She looked like a child while blabbering those.

Honestly, I can't wait to meet Mithali. It's been a year since I last saw her.

And speaking about her friends, well, hope it goes good. Especially that pataka these both were talking about.
Really Nice Update:adore:

Bohot achchhi family darshai hai aapne jo aapas me sab itna pyaar karte hain...
Or khas kar ki behen bhaiyyon me bohot pyaar hai..
Or unka aise ek duare ki khichai karna bhi bohot achchha laga..

After all 1st update bohot achchha tha... Or isme 90% english thi..
but aapne easy words use kiye hain..
Jo aaram se samajh aa rahe hain..

KEEP POSTING
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Ʀ Discrimination padhkar achchha laga..

Ʀ Or jaisa ki aapne bataya ki yahan par magic stories zyada chal rahi hain,
Actually, zyadatar readers yahi pasand karte hain.. to unka taste Dekh kar stories likhni padti hai..

Ʀ Ye jaankar bohot khushi hui ki aap ki story sabse hatke hai..
That is "Better than best".

Ʀ Or jaisa ki aapne bataya ki aap apni story me 60% english use karengi.
To main kehna chahunga ki aap english 40% above hi use karen..
Jisse readers ko comfortable feel ho.

Chaliye read karte hain aapki story or uske hisaab se review bhi dete hain...

KEEP IT UP
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Hope story also will loved by you like this only:peace::peace:..
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Aapne sahi kaha readers ko jo pasand ho wahi likna chahiye..
Mea b yahi kosis karungi ki meri story aap sabi ke dil ko chuye...
Bhale he mea english mea likhu thora jada par language ko jitna hosake utna simple rakhungi..

Or jaha complicated hote honge dialogues waha hindi jarur use karungi..
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..

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Really Nice Update:adore:

Bohot achchhi family darshai hai aapne jo aapas me sab itna pyaar karte hain...
Or khas kar ki behen bhaiyyon me bohot pyaar hai..
Or unka aise ek duare ki khichai karna bhi bohot achchha laga..
N aapsabi ko acha lagraha he ye jaankar behad khusi hui..
Aap toa jaante hoge ek writer ko uski likhi hui chij kisi ko achi lagge tab kesa mehsoos hota hea..


After all 1st update bohot achchha tha... Or isme 90% english thi..
but aapne easy words use kiye hain..
Jo aaram se samajh aa rahe hain..

KEEP POSTING
KEEP SMILING
Thnx for ur beautiful review:hi::hi:..
Acha laga jaankar ki aapko 1st update acha laga..

Bas kosis ki thi story padte waqt sabi reader's ko ye sab real me hua ho aisa lagge..
Mea aage b yahi kosis karungi ki aapko meri kahani aise he achi lagge..
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..

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UPDATE 5

From here conversation will be as vashi..

I was currently speaking to Mithali about the IPL auctions- yes, we do speak about that- when I suddenly saw dadi entering the house.

"Sexxyyyyy!" I squeeled while hugging her.

"Hottie!" Dadi said while hugging me back.

I called her sexy and she called me hottie.

"Kaise ho aap?" I asked her after I touched her feet.

"Jeeti reh puttar. Main theek hu, tu kaisi hai? " Dadi replied, while sitting on the couch.

"Ek dum badiya!" I smiled at her.

"Tabiyat kaisi hai aapki?"

"Arre beta, tu kyu tension leti hai. Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe." She replied with a genuine smile and kissed me on the cheek.

"Itni jaldi bhool gayi dadi?" The arrogant hot guy asked dadi, sitting on her other side.

I rolled my eyes at him.

Dadi laughed and kissed him on the cheek too.

"Tum dono toh mile hi honge, hai na?" She asked us.

We both nodded our heads.

"We met in the morning and immediately clicked. We've become pretty close." Abhishek smirked at me.

"Yeah, we're JUST FRIENDS." I added, glaring at him.

"Acha hai. Both of you carry on, I'll meet others." Saying this, she left me alone with the arrogant hot guy.

It was then I took his outfit in account.

He wore a pair of denim jeans, with a white shirt and black blazer.

Arrogant VERY hot guy.

"Done checking me out?" He smirked.

"You know, you-" I pointed at him. "should shut up." I glared at him.

"Thanks. You look great yourself." He said rolling his eyes.

I was wearing a yellow dress. It was cute.

"I know." I stuck out my tongue at him.

"Abhay!" Mithu called him.

"See you later."

He winked at me and left.

Arrogant hot guy...

From here the conversation will be as abhishek..

After leaving vashi I was roaming in the house here and there and was about to pass mithalis room but suddenly one hand came from her room and pulled me inside..

[Let's check what they are speaking]

"You're kidding, right?" I asked Mithu in disbelief.

"No! I'm serious. Please Abhay!" Mithu begged me.

"Please Abhay! We know she's hard to get and stuff. But just try." Akanksha requested.

"Guys, she hates me! You think she'll fall for me? Ofcourse not!" I stated.

"There's no harm in trying." Adithi said.

"But why me?" I whined.

These girls want me to make Vashi believe in love.

But why do I have to? I don't get the point!

"Because we think you guys are cute." Mithu pointed out.

"Woah dude. Listen, I tease or flirt with her to annoy her and that's it. There's no liking or shit like that." I stated clearly.

I don't want them to think I like her and all. Surely she's beautiful, but at the moment I just want to concentrate on my career.

"We didn't say that. See dude, guys in our school are scared of her. I don't blame them. Like after a girl beats up a guy with a bat which guy on Earth wouldn't be afraid of that girl. But come on, she hasn't even laid a finger on you, though you annoy the shit out of her. We just want you to try. Not saying to like her or something. But just make her believe in love. And that'll be possible only when she falls in love with YOU. So, please Abhay." Akanksha said.

"Did she actually beat that guy or are you people making me scared?" I asked them, slightly afraid.

"Dude! We're not kidding. She's punched so many guys before. I kind of feel bad for them, but at the same time they deserved those." Mithu said.

It took me time to digest this fact.

"But she looks all cool going." I spoke.

"That's until you piss her off." Adithi shrugged.

I mentally thank Mithali to save me from Vashi earlier. If she hadn't opened the door at the right time, I'd probably get punched.

"But what will I get in return?" I smirked, jokingly. I obviously don't want anything in return. I was just playing around with them.

"Fine. I'll do whatever you say for the next two weeks. Deal?" Mithali brought her hand forward.

Well, this sounds good.

"Deal." I shook her hand.

"Good. Go now!" Mithu pushed me out of the door.

"All the best!"

"Be careful."

"Don't get punched."

Wow guys. What a way to encourage me. Thanks.

Okay. Where is Vashi now?

My eyes roamed the entire hall until they found her. She was talking to Aaradhya.

"Aaradhya, could you please leave me and Vashi alone for some time?" I asked her.

"Why?" She asked.

"Mujhe kuch baat karni hai isse." I told her.

"Mujhe nahi karni." Vashi stated.

"She doesn't want to talk to you. So, I won't go." Aaradhya shrugged.

"Aaru, please, bohot important hai." I told her.

"Fine." She glared at me and left.

"Va-" I saw her leaving so I caught her wrist.

"I want to talk to you."

"I don't want to."

"Please Vashi."

"No."

"Yaar teri problem kya hai? Tabse dekh raha hu, merse theek se baat kyu nahi kar rahi?" I asked her, looking in her eyes.

"Problem? Problem yeh hai ki tu ladka hai. Aur kya problem hai? Problem yeh hai ki main chahti hu ki meri life mein koi problem hi na ho. Lekin agar meri life mein koi problem nahi hai toh yeh ladko ke life ki sabse badi problem hai!" She said.

"Bohot filmy tha." I told her.

"Pata hai. Kartik Aaryan ke monologue ka ek part tha. But yeah, his monologue was for girls. I just changed it to guys." She shrugged.

"But honestly, what's your problem with guys?" I asked.

"I hate guys." She looking me in the eye.

That was a cue for me to leave her wrist. And so I did.

This is going to be difficult I said to myself..

 
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