ABHISHEK TRIPATHI
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Khoobsurat update...bhai..UPDATE 27
Aj kafi dinon ke intezar ke baad akhirkar Hamare hero Rahul ke liye ek good news thi. Halanki pichhle kuchh din kuchh bhari rahe hain kionk na toh Aditi baat kar rahi hai uper se Divya toh mano ruth hi gayi hai Rahul se. Khair aj khusi hi baat hai Rahul bhai ka loan jo kafi time aur mehnat ke baad aj finally aprove ho gaya tha aur uske paise v account mein a gaye the. Aur isi baat ke liye Rahul is waqt phone par apne mama ji yani Manager sahab ka shukriya ada kar rahe tha.
Rahul: thank you mama ji. Agar ap meri help nahi karte toh main shayad hamesha sapne hi dekhta rehta.
Sanjiv: are beta agar main hi tumhare sath khada nahi hounga toh aur kon hoga. Akhir tu meri behan ka eklauta beta hai. Aur vaise v mujhe yeh malaal puri life rahega k main apni behan ke sapne kabhi pure nahi kar paya par agar main tere kuchh kaam a paya toh man ko kuchh toh shanti milegi.
Rahul: mama ji to be honest apne mere liye thoda nahi bahut kiya hai. Is waqt main bata nahi sakta k apka kitna bada ahsaan hai mujh par.
Sanjeev: Rahul dekh abhi tu mujhe bura mehsus karwa raha hai. Yaar aj tak kisi ne kabhi apne bachon par v ahsaan kiya hai. Beta main tumhare liye jitna karun wo kam hi hai. Vaise v mera tumhare ilawa hai hi kon.
Yeh baat bolte huye Sanjeev kuchh bhawuk ho gaya tha aur yeh baat Rahul v achhe se jaanta tha.
Rahul: are mamu abhi ap mera mood kharab kar rahe ho. Yaar ap aise sad sad achhe nahi lagte ap hamesha haste huye hi achhe lagte ho. Aur ap bilkul v sad mat hoiye apki life v dheere dheere settle ho jayegi. Har kisi ki life mein ek bura daur ata hai but agar hum himmat aur samajhdari se kaam le toh insaan badi se badi musibat se v paar pa hi leta hai.
Sanjeev(halka sa hanste huye): han bhai sahi hai. Jo line maine kafi saal pehle ek chhote se bache se kahi thi ab wo bacha itna bada ho gaya hai k wahi line mujhe bol raha hai. Par achha hai k tune meri kahi huyi koi baat toh yaad rakhi.
Rahul: ab jo mujhe kaam ki lagi wo sambhal li.
Sanjiv: aur baaki ek kaan se daal kar dusre se nika di. Sabash beta yahi umeed hi mujhe tum se.
Sanjiv ki baat sunkar Rahul halka sa hans diya aur Sanjiv ka mood v wapis thoda sahi ho gaya. Khair aise hi kuchh der aur batein karne ke baad Rahul ne call cut kiya aur daud kar neeche chala gaya.
Rahul(seedion se neeche ate huye): mom…
Kiran Hall mein baithi Divya ke sath TV dekh rahi thi aur Rahul ki awaj sunte hi usne TV ki volume kam ki aur mundi ghuma kar uski taraf dekha. Wahin Divya ne bina kuchh khaas dhyan diye apne phone par dhyan laga diya.
Kiran: are kya baat hai bada khus lag raha hai.
Rahul(Kiran ke paas akar baithte huye): are mom baat hi itni khusi ki hai k agar ap sunengi toh ap v meri tarah khusi se pagal hi ho jayengi.
Kiran(excited hokar): achha fir mujhe v toh bata kya baat hai. Ruko! let me guess.
Itna bol kar Kiran sochne ki kosish karne lagi toh Rahul v pure excitement ke sath uske jawab ka intezar kar raha tha.udher Divya acting toh puri kar rahi thi k wo Rahul ki kisi baat nein interested nahi hai par ander se use v yeh janne ki chul mach rahi thi k akhir aisi kya baat hai jo Rahul itna khus hai.
Kiran(bilkul thoda sa sochne ke baad): toh i think k tera Loan aprove ho gaya hoga. Maine sahi bola na?
Rahul: are wah mom. Apne toh nishana ek dum bull’s eye pe mara hai.
Kiran: ismein v koi badi baat hai. Obviously is waqt tere liye isse badi baat koi ho hi nahi sakti jisse tu itna khus ho jaye.
Rahul: apka answer toh sahi hai but logic galat hai. Kionk mere liye koi cheez hai jo isse v bahut badi hai aur wo hai apka ashirwaad.
Rahul jaise hi Kiran ke age uske pair chhune ke liye jhuka toh Kiran ek dum se khadi huyi aur use kandhon se pakad kar rok liya. Rahul ne nazar utha kar Kiran ki taraf dekha toh Kiran ki ankhein nam thi. Rahul ne apne hath se uski ankhon ke ansoo saaf kiye aur Kiran ne uske mathe ko chumte huye use gale laga liya.
Udher Divya jo k Rahul se pehle hi gussa thi use is baat se aur v bura laga k Rahul ne uske sath itni badi khusi ki baat ke liye v koi baat nahi ki. Halanki wo v khus thi k wo mom se ab achhe se pesh a raha tha but iska matlab yeh toh nahi hai na k wo uske hisse ka pyar v bas apni maa pe hi luta de. Akhir uski v toh kuchh feelings hai. Jise Rahul baar baar hurt kar raha tha kabhi Usse apni gf ki baat chhupa kar aur kabhi khuleaam ignore karke. Aur is baar ki chot toh kuchh jyada hi karari thi k Divya ka pura man hone ke bawjud k wo apne bhaiya ki itni badi khusi ka hissa bane, wo wahan se uth kar chali gayi aur usne ek baar v un dono ki taraf nahi dekha.
Udher Kiran toh apna pura pyar apne pyare bete par lutane mein lagi thi. Use toh itna dhyan v nahi tha k usne Rahul ko itni jor se apni bahon mein jakad rakha hai k uske bade aur gol chuche Rahul ki chhati mein dab kar uske lallu laal ko nidra se jaga rahe hain. Khair Rahul ka mood filhal bada achha tha toh wo v is maje ka thoda lutf utha raha tha uper se Divya ka aise uda sa chehra dekh kar uske chehre ki khusi hi alag thi. Aisa nahi tha k wo Divya ko pareshan karna chahta tha but after all wo uski behan thi toh thoda toh banta hi tha.
Ab aisa v nahi hai k Divya kuchh kam hai. Abhi kal ki hi baat hai k puri family dinner kar rahi thi. Obviously Rajiv inmeim shamil nahi tha aur mujhe batane ki jarurat v nahi hai k wo kahan hoga. Vaise insaan ki fitrat hi aisi hai agar use bahar ki Bhel puri khane ki gandi aadat pad jaye toh ghar par chahe chhappan bhog bane ho par use toh bas thele pe jake hi marwani hai. Ab ap hi socho k aadmi isko chhod kar.
Kahan jana chahega. Khair agar apka v isko dekh kar khada huya hai toh main apko bata dun k ap v Rajiv jaise hi ho. Salo yeh Hamare hero Rahul ki maa hai. Aur vaise v hum yeh kidhar a gaye main apko Ek kissa batane laga tha.
Toh Baat aisi hai k Kal sham ko jab sab log khana khane ko baithe the toh Divya pichle kuchh dinon ki tarah hi munh fulaye baithi thi aur chup chap apna khana khaye ja rahi thi. Wahin Rahul kab se try kar raha tha k Divya usse kuchh toh baat kare. Mana k wo use kafi pareshan karti hai par shayad use v is sab mein maja ata hai. Aur bina is sab ke uski life aise ho gayi thi jaise bina jalebi fafde ke jethalal. Toh Rahul ne Divya ke sade se munh ko dekhte huye socha k thoda try kare toh shayad wo usse baat kar paye.
Rahul: Divya Yaar jara chawal paas kar na please.
Divya bina Rahul ki baat sune apna mast khana thuse ja rahi hai. Halanki wo behri nahi hai aur na hi uske hath tute hain par wo janti hai k Rahul jabardasti ke bahane bana kar usse baat karna chahta hai toh ab konsi kanya aisi hogi jise yeh faltu ke nakhre karna achha nahi lagta toh yeh madam v unhi mein se ek hi hain.
Rahul(dobara apni beizzati karwane ke irade se): yaar Divya plz Chaawal paas kar na.
Isse pehle k Rahul ki is humble request ko sun kar Divya ka dil pighlta aur wo is bhukhe gareeb ko chawal paas karne ke bare mein sochti tabhi Kiran jo k kab se TV ki taraf ankhein gadaye apna dinner kar rahi thi uska dhyan bhai behan ki is conversation ki taraf gaya.
“Divya tu behri hai kya? Wo bechara kab se chawal maang raha hai aur tu hai k aram se baithi hai. Aur tum dono ka yeh chal kya raha hai pichhle kuchh dinon se. Jab dekho Rahul tumhe bulane ki kosish karta rehta hai aur tu hai k isse baat hi nahi karti. Pehle toh jab dekho bhaiya bhaiya karti rehti thi aur ab us bechare se baat karne ko v tyar nahi hai.”
Divya(chidhte huye): mom ap na hamesha bhaiya ki hi side leti ho. Aur yeh aise hi drame kar rahe hain. Itne paas toh pade hain chawal yeh khud nahi le sakte kya?
Kiran: par agar tu de degi toh fir kya ho jayega.
Divya: mujhe nahi karni hai inse baat.
Rahul: par kion. Bata toh sahi k maine kiya kya hai?
Divya: abhi ap yahan pe mera munh na hi khulwao toh achha hai. Behtar yahi hoga k hum apna dinner karlein.
Kiran(TV ko mute karte huye): abhi Dinner ka rehne do Pehle mujhe batao k akhir chal kya raha hai is ghar mein. Aur Rahul tune aisa kya kiya k yeh itna munh fulaye ghum rahi hai aj kal.
Rahul: mom yaar plz. Ab ap apna alag se shuru mat karo. Pehle mujhe toh pata chale k huya kya hai.
Divya: ap na sab jante ho. Par anjaan banne ka natak kar rahe ho. Vaise v apse aur kya expect kar sakte hain. Jhuth toh ap bolte hi ho ab acting v karne lage.
Kiran: hadd hai tum logon ki. Main yahan par apna itna important serial chhod kar baithi hun aur tum dono ho k pata nahi kya baatein kar rahe ho. Mujhe toh sab bouncer hi ja raha hai.
Rahul: mom yeh bouncer nahi. Yeh wide daal rahi hai. Iski batein meri khud ki samajh mein nahi a rahi. Yaar batao toh sahi k maine kiya kya hai.
Divya: mujhe nahi batana kuchh. Aur mujhe koi dinner-winner v nahi karna main ja rahi hun apne room mein.
Itna bol kar Divya gusse mein munh fulaye wahan se nikal gayi aur Kiran aur Rahul ek dusre ki shakal dekhte reh gaye. Toh Rahul ne uske baad yeh decide kiya k ab wo v Divya ko uski bhaasha mein hi jawab dega. Matlab k jaise wo use ignore kar rahi hai vaise hi wo v use aise ignore karega jaise Kedar bhai T20 mein full toss ball ko karte hain. Isiliye usne abhi v Kiran ko yeh baat batate huye kuchh jayada hi emotional tadka lagaya taki thodi aag Divya ke dil mein v lage.
Khair is chakkar mein use ek fayada yeh v ho gaya k Kiran ko wo dil se khus kar paya aur inaam ke roop mein use is naram aur mulayam hug ka swaad mila. Halanki wo mom hai par theek hai thode time ke liye chalta hai. Usne konsa kuchh jyada fayad uthaya hai. Sahi kaha na maine?
Par jaise Kiran usse alag huyi toh use aise laga jaise kisi ne uski naram aur garam blanket ko utaar fenka ho. Khair is sab ke beech Kiran ke chehre par wo khusi dekh kar Rahul ko sabse jyada maja aya kionk bhale hi usne aj tak Kiran ko kafi pareshan kiya tha par ab wo dil se chahta tha k wo jitna ho sake utna apni maa ko khus rakhega.
Rahul(emotional hokar): thank you mom.
Kiran(halka sa hanste huye): ab yeh thank you kiske liye?
Rahul: pata nahi. Bas aise hi. Just to be my mom. And thanks for everything, you have done for me. And to stay with me even when you had to go against your husband. Mom yeh sach hai k maine mom ka sapna pura karne ke liye yeh sab shuru kara tha but jaise jaise mujhe realise huya k apne mere liye jitna kiya hai utna koi v maa apne bache ke liye nahi kar sakti toh now i just want to dedicate everything to you.
Rahul jab yeh sab bol raha tha toh wo bas bole hi ja raha tha use kuchh sochne ki jarurat nahi pad rahi thi kionk jaane anjane usne apne dil ke wo taar chhed diye the jo shayad wo kafi din se dabaye baitha tha. Uski ankhon mein jo izzat aur sneh is waqt Kiran ke liye tha use dekh kar Kiran ki ankhein v dobara se bhar ayi thi. Use lag raha tha k usne apni life mein jo v sacrifice kiye , jo kuchh v kiya aur jitna v saha agar us sab ka end result aisa hone wala hai toh wo sab kuchh v nahi hai iske samne.
Khair is baar Rahul ne age badh kar Kiran ko gale lagaya aur uski ankhon mein v halki nami a gayi. Halanki usne use bahar ane hi nahi diya aur ek baar fir se Kiran ke us naram ahsaas ne uske chhote miyan ki neend kharab kardi. Ab kya kare chahe kitna v jazbati ho jaye par iske lallu laal ko thoda na pata hai k yeh hot milf uski maa hai. Uske liye toh aurat bas aurat hi hai na jo bani hi uske maje ke liye hai. Khair abhi hum v is maa bete ko is emotional “cum” sexy moment pe chhodte hain aur milte hain next update mein. Tab tak ke liye like comment and subscribe jarur kar dijiye. Are bhai majak kar raha hun yahan yeh sab nahi chalta aur comments mein gaali toh bilkul v nahi chalti warna koi mod ake pel degaisliye bas nice update likhiye aur maje lijiye.
(Khair dosto mujhe pata hai k yeh ek risky idea hai par main shuru se chahta tha k main story ko kuchh isi tarah se likhun k bas padh kar maja a jaye. Mujhe nahi pata k ap sab ko yeh kaisa laga hoga. But to be honest mujhe aise likh kar bada maja aya aur sach bataun toh yahan pehle 1000 words likhne mein v fat jati thi abhi sala dekha toh 2400+ words ho gaye toh na chahte huye v rukna pada k kahin keyword ki puri jaan aj hi na nikal dun. But at the end this story is yours. So agar ap logon ko mera yeh andaz pasand nahi aya ho toh behichak bataiye. But i am pretty sure k ap sab ko us boring katha se jyada maja is light hearted narration mein aya hoga. I am waiting for your opinion guys. Ab agla update tabhi ayega jab ap sab bataoge k ap sab ko konsa tarika jyada achha laga toh jaldi jaldi se comments ke jariye yah fir DM karke mujhe apna opinion bataiye. And one thing more… I Love you guys.)
