Adultery Kagaz ke phool

[Mr. Marvel]

Oh yes! Just lovely and fantastic update!

Thanks bhai

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

UPDATE 21​

Riya Ab tak Sharma ke office pahunch chuki thi.

Riya: Toh kya ap hamare offer mein interested hain.

Sharma: Dekhiye ek toh market mein hamari v kuchh izzat hai aur dusra main Sinha saab ke bete ke sath deal cancel karke unse dushmani nahi palna chahta.

Riya: lekin agar mein apse kahun k mujhe yahan khud Sinha sir ne hi bheja hai toh?

Sharma: lekin Sinha saab apne hi bete ki deal todne ke liye mujhe double paise kion denge bhala?

Riya: apko usse kya lena dena. Apko toh paise se matlab hona chahiye na.

Sharma: dekhiye baat toh apki theek hai but mujhe sochne ke liye kuchh waqt chahiye.

Riya: kitna waqt?

Sharma: kal dopehar tak apko bata dunga.

Riya: han par Rahul sir ko is bare mein kuchh v pata nahi chalna chahiye.

Sharma: Ap fikar mat kijiye main kisi ko kuchh nahi bataunga. Aur bataiye ap kuchh chai coffee bagera lengi.

Riya: nahi thanks bas ap hamare offer ke bare mein dhyan se sochiyega.

Sharma: ji jarur.

Riya: thank you so much, I think k ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Sharma(apni chair se uth kar): aiye main apko bahar tak chhod deta hun.

Riya: that’s ok Sharma ji main chali jaungi.

Sharma: theek hai ji jaisi apki marji. Apse mil kar khusi huyi.

Riya: thanks Sharma ji and I hope k hamari jald hi fir se mulakat hogi.

Riya ki baat ke jawab mein Sharma halka sa muskura diya aur fir Riya wahan se bahar chali gayi. Uske jate hi Sharma ne apna phone nikala aur seedha Rahul ko call kiya. Rahul is waqt khana kha kar apne room mein aram kar raha tha.

Rahul(call pick karne ke baad): hlo han boliye sharma ji.

Sharma: actually mujhe apse ek jaruri baat karni thi.

Rahul: han boliye Sharma ji.

Sharma: Dekhiye ap mujhe galat mat samjhiyega but abhi abhi ek mohtrama ayi thi koi Riya naam tha uska. Aur same wahi property ke liye deal karna chahti thi jismein apne interest dikhaya hai. Aur bol rahi thi k use apke pita ji ne mere paas bheja hai.

Rahul: Riya, naam toh kuchh suna suna sa lag raha hai. Khair ismein galat samjhane ki baat hi nahi hai balki mujhe toh hairani thi k abhi tak mere baap ne aisi koi harkat kion nahi ki. Vaise kitne ka offer diya hai apko usne.

Sharma: bola hai k apse double dene ko v tyar hain.

Rahul(halka sa hanste huye): are wah Sharma ji apki toh chandi hai fir. Par afsos main isse jyada paise nahi de sakta apko, toh shayad apko unka offer maan lena chahiye.

Sharma: yeh ap kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Bhale hi main thoda lalchi type ka dikhta hun but main kamina nahi hun aur hamare dhandhe mein sabse jyada value agar kisi cheez ki hai toh wo hai jubaan.

Rahul: matlab k ap mere baap ke offer ko thukrana chahte hain.

Sharma: ji ap ne bilkul sahi samjha. Vaise v mujhe pata hai k mujhe kahan dost banane hain. Ab bura mat maniyega par jo insaan apne bete ka nahi huya wo kisi aur ka kya hoga. Isse achha hai k apke sath dosti ki jaye kionk ap bade jubaan wale aur saaf dil insaan lage mujhe.

Rahul: par soch lijiye isse apka kafi nuksaan ho jayega.

Sharma: koi baat nahi ek baar thoda nuksaan seh lete hain. Bhagwan kare apka business fale fule uske baad ap hi se iski bharpayi kar lenge.

Sharma ki baat sunkar Rahul halka sa hans pada.

Rahul: thank you Sharma ji. Apne mere liye jo aj kiya uska ehsaan main zindagi bhar nahi bhulunga.

Sharma: ismein bhala kaisa thank you. Akhir hamare dhandhe ke v toh kuchh asool hote hain na.

Rahul: nahi fir v thank you toh kehna banta hi hai.

Sharma: chaliye jaisi apki marji par subah time par cheque pahuncha dijiyega. Samne wali party ko v dena hai.

Rahul: han koi baat nahi apka cheque time par pahunch jayega. Toh rakhta hun and thanks again.

Sharma: theek hai Sir. Fir milte hain kal ko.

Rahul(call cut karne ke baad): wah Rahul Sinha ji kya baap paya hai apne. Khud ke hi bete ki kamyabi mein roda bane huye hain Sinha saab. Khair yeh toh hona hi tha. Achha huya k Sharma bhala aadmi nikla nahi toh bani banayi deal hath se jati. Khair abhi in sab mein dimag ka dahi kion karna. Bahar mausam bada suhana lag raha hai, do minute balkani mein chalta hun.

Rahul apne ap se hi batein karta huya balkani mein jakar khada ho gaya. Abhi wo balkani mein gaya hi tha k tabhi Kiran room mein ayi aur usne Rahul ko balkani mein khade dekha.

Kiran: kya baat hai akele akele mausam ke maje le rahe ho.

Rahul(Kiran ki taraf dekh kar): are mom ap. Ap v ayiye aur dekhiye kitni khubsurat sham hai. Ek dum shant aur pyari.

Kiran(Rahul ke bagal mein akar): han lagta hai aj bhagwan ka mood v achha hai tumhe muskurata dekh kar.

Rahul(halka sa muskura kar): han shayad is dhalti sham ke sath meri life ke dukh v dhal jayein.

Kiran: beta life mein kuchh ho chahe na ho but yeh dukh naam ki bimari hamara kabhi peecha nahi chhodti. Abhi yeh toh hum par depend karta hai k hum ise aise handle karte hain. Chahe toh hum kone mein rone baith jayein yah fir himmat se uska samna karein.

Rahul: agar ap mere sath ho toh main kisi v dukh se ladne ko tyar hun.

Kiran: beta main toh hamesha se tumhare sath hi hun. Aur hamesha yahin rahungi.

Rahul: mom apse ek baat kahun?

Kiran: han bolo.

Rahul: mujhe na kabhi kabhi bahut gussa ata hai khud par k maine itne saal apko kitna pareshan kiya.

Kiran: beta tumne mujhe bilkul v pareshan nahi kiya. Isliye faltu ki baton ke bare mein mat socho aur vaise v jo beet gayi wo baat gayi.

Rahul: Han sahi kaha apne. Pehle v toh maine yahi galti ki thi k apne past ki wajah se kabhi apne present ko nahi apna paya. Aur abhi main wo galti dobara nahi karna chahta. Bas abhi apke sath aur Divya ke sath apni life mein khus rehna chahta hun.

Kiran(majak mein): han fir tumhari biwi v toh ayegi is ghar mein.

Rahul: Uska toh abhi kya pata. Aur vaise v pehle khud ka pet palne ke layak ho jaun fir kisi aur ke bare mein sochunga.

Kiran: koi baat nahi. Ek baar tumhara Restaurant ban jaye fir tum life mein aur v age badhoge aur bhagwan kare k mera beta apne baap se v jyada ameer aadmi bane.

Rahul: Ameer ka toh pata nahi but unse achha aadmi jarur banna chahunga.

Kiran: beta aisa nahi sochte. Chahe kaise v hon par hain toh wo tumhare papa hi na.

Rahul: mom plz abhi mujhe is bare mein baat nahi karni. Achhi khasi sham ka satyanash ho jayega.

Kiran(hanste huye): chal theek hai tu shanti se is khubsurat sham ke maje le aur main jakar thoda kaam karlun.

Rahul: ok mom.

Kiran: aur han aise hi khus raha kar. Tension mein tu achha nahi lagta.

Rahul: ji mom, vaise v shayad ab aur kus v bura nahi hoga.

Kiran: han bhagwan kare aisa hi ho. Chal theek hai abhi main chalti hun.

Fir Kiran wahan se bahar chali gayi aur Rahul wahin balkani mein khada us nazare ko niharta raha. Bas is umeed ke sath k ab aur pareshani uski life mein na aye.

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

bhai aap bas likhte raho. bahut achha likh rahe ho. aap wakai bahut achhe writer ho. yeh aapko kisi ke certificate ki jararuat nahi hai. but haan writer ka dil khush ho jata hai jab readers uski tarif karte hain. aap story ko aur aage badhao, mujhe pata hai aapke man mein bahut achhe great ideas honge jinhe aap shabdon ke roop mein yahan likhenge. aapke next update ka intzaar rahega...dhanyavaad

waise shayad main december mein fir se canada jaun....

Thanks bhai. And bhai vaise v certificate toh critics dete hain. Yahan par toh sirf ap logon ka pyar milta hain. Mujhe sabse achhi baat yeh lagti hai k koi story ki technicalities mein nahi ghusta bas emotions ko pakadte hain. Nahi toh shayad main duniya ka pehla writer hounga jisne chalti story mein pura flow aur narration change kar diya aur fir v gaalian nahi padi. Kionk hum sab yaha KRK banne toh ate nahi. Apka, mera aur baki sab readers ka ek hi funda hai k bas maja ana chahiye fir chahe wo kaise v aye. Baki ap sab ki tareefein fuel ka kaam karti hain mere liye. Toh wahin ap logon ke sujhav mujhe galat jaane se bachate hain. Toh last mein bas itna kehna chahunga k bhai ap jarur ayein canada. Achha desh hai bas sala Alfonso nahi milta yahan. Ho sake toh mere liye leke ana.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Thanks bhai.

 

[Sunlife]

Mast update hai bro

 

[Lucky@khan]

Thanks bhai. And bhai i am not completely agree with you because emotional scenes toh last update mein v the aur pyar toh hai hi. Par main apki baat samajh raha hun k ap ka matlab wo ishq wale love se hai aur ap fikar mat kijiye wo v apko 100% dekhne ko milega. Main bas chahta hun k kuchh v fake sa yah jaladbaji na lage. Khud wa khud kuchh rishte panpane lagenge and bhai main clearly bata kar apko story ke spoiler nahi batana chahta but apne jarur notice kiya hoga k is kahani ke kuchh characters hain jo Ishq mein pad rahe hain. Ab age chal kar kya pata kya pakk raha ho inmein. Bas ap thoda aur sabar kijiye. And i really appreciate k apne mujhe apna opinion diya aur wo v ek achhe way mein. Agar fir v apko kuchh aur shikayat ho toh ap behichak mujhe DM kar sakte yah fir comments mein v bol sakte hain. And bhai maine apni taraf se puri kosish ki hai k apko apke sawal ka uchit jawab se paun. But galti ho toh maaf kariyega. And aise hi story ko dil se padhte rahiye.

Thank you.

Ok thanx bro
Or
Best pic bhi add kro

 

[manikmittalme07]

Thanks bhai. And bhai vaise v certificate toh critics dete hain. Yahan par toh sirf ap logon ka pyar milta hain. Mujhe sabse achhi baat yeh lagti hai k koi story ki technicalities mein nahi ghusta bas emotions ko pakadte hain. Nahi toh shayad main duniya ka pehla writer hounga jisne chalti story mein pura flow aur narration change kar diya aur fir v gaalian nahi padi. Kionk hum sab yaha KRK banne toh ate nahi. Apka, mera aur baki sab readers ka ek hi funda hai k bas maja ana chahiye fir chahe wo kaise v aye. Baki ap sab ki tareefein fuel ka kaam karti hain mere liye. Toh wahin ap logon ke sujhav mujhe galat jaane se bachate hain. Toh last mein bas itna kehna chahunga k bhai ap jarur ayein canada. Achha desh hai bas sala Alfonso nahi milta yahan. Ho sake toh mere liye leke ana.

bhai aap apne hisab se likhte raho...readers to itni variety mein ray denge ke aap preshan ho jaoge...maine ek kahani shuru kar rakhi hai. itni mehnat kar raha hun. par itna nuks nikalte hain usme ke lagta hai band hi karni padegi. yeh log yeh nahi samajhte ke isme kitni mehnat kitna dimag kitna keemti time lagta hai. kuchh ehsas nahi inko sirf apna maza chahiye aur do bhi tab bhi tasalli nahi hoti.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Mast update hai bro

Thanks bhai

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Ok thanx bro
Or
Best pic bhi add kro

Thanks bhai and yaar pics ka thoda tension bhara kaam lagta hai mujhe but i will try my best.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

bhai aap apne hisab se likhte raho...readers to itni variety mein ray denge ke aap preshan ho jaoge...maine ek kahani shuru kar rakhi hai. itni mehnat kar raha hun. par itna nuks nikalte hain usme ke lagta hai band hi karni padegi. yeh log yeh nahi samajhte ke isme kitni mehnat kitna dimag kitna keemti time lagta hai. kuchh ehsas nahi inko sirf apna maza chahiye aur do bhi tab bhi tasalli nahi hoti.

Are bhai tension nahi lete. Agar ap apna kaam enjoy kar rahe ho toh bolne do jise bolna hai aur vaise v hamare thread par koi aisa negative banda nahi hai. Jise koi shikayat v hoti hai wo achhe aur constructive way mein batata hai. And bhai main baat hai k apko maja ana chahiye.