manikmittalme07
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Thanks bhaiNice update again. I always eagerly wait for your updates
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.UPDATE 29
Toh dosto jaisa k humne last update mein dekha k Rahul jaise taise Aditi ko manane mein kamyab ho hi gaya par abhi uski musibat puri tarah se tali nahi thi kionk abhi v Divya usse bahut jyada naraz thi. Ab pata nahi k wo Aditi ke jaise asani se maan jayegi yah fir abhi Rahul ko aur papad velne padenge.
“Divya Darwaja toh kholo plz. Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.”
Rahul pichhle 10 minutes se bahar khada Darwaja peet raha hai par Divya hai k door khol hi nahi rahi. Yaar hadd hai iski, kitni nak chadi ladki hai yeh. Par kya kar sakte hain agar baat karni hai toh darwaja toh khulwana hi padega na.
Rahul: plz Divya. Ek baar door toh kholo main pakka sab kuchh explain karta hun.
Divya(ander se): mujhe apse baat nahi karni ap jaiye yahan se nahi toh main mom ko bol dungi k ap mujhe pareshan kar rahe the.
Rahul: yaar aise kion kar rahi ho. Dekh main sorry bol raha hun na. Tu toh meri pyari behan hai plz darwaja khol de.
Divya: mujhe apse koi baat nahi karni. Ap bahut bade jhuthe ho.
Rahul: Divya main sach bol raha hun Aditi meri gf nahi hai. Maine tumhe koi jhuth nahi bola.
Divya: han bhaiya main bachi nahi hun main sab janti hun. Aur abhi v ap jhuth hi toh bol rahe hain.
Rahul: yaar main sach bol raha hun. Aur agar tumhe yakeen nahi hai toh Aditi se puchh le. Wo meri GF nahi hai. Balki meri toh koi GF hai hi nahi.
Divya: main kisi se nahi puchhne wali. Agar mujhe apne bhaiya par trust nahi hai toh main kisi dusre par kion karun.
Rahul: yaar main jhuth nahi bol raha Divya mujhe Tumhari kasam. Wo meri GF nahi hai. Dekho tumhe pata hai na k main tumhari kasam jhuthi nahi kha sakta.
Divya kab se baithi Rahul ki batein sunkar ansuna kiye ja rahi thi par yeh kasam wali baat mein kuchh dum tha. Akhir bhaiya uski jhuthi kasam kion khayenge. Kya ek baar darwaja khol dun. Agar khol v diya toh kya tufaan a jayega agar baat pasand nahi ayi toh nahi karungi baat. Par ek chance toh de dun. Balki mujhe inhein samne se confront karna chahiye aur pata lagana chahiye k akhir chakkar kya hai. Aur vaise v mom ghar par nahi hain toh isse achha mauka nahi milega. Han yahi sahi rahega.
Rahul: Divya kya kar rahi hai. Darwaja khol na plz.
Divya: theek hai bhaiya main darwaja khol dungi par apko mujhe ek promise karna hoga.
Rahul: han bolo kya karna hai mujhe.
Divya: ap mujhe promise kijiye k main apko jo v puchhun ap mujhe uska sach sach jawab denge.
Divya ki baat sunkar Rahul ki literally fat gayi. Ab fatni banti v hai kionk ap toh jante hi hain k Divya kabhi v kuchh v puchh leti hai toh agar usne promise kardiya toh wo buri tarah se fasne wala hai. Par abhi Divya se baat karne ka yahi ek option hai. Nahi toh pata nahi aur kitna time minnatein karni padein.
Rahul: chalo theek hai main promise karta hun k main tumhare har swaal ka sahi sahi jawab dunga.
Rahul ka jawab sunte hi Divya ke chehre par ek badi si smile a gayi kionk uske toh man ki baat puri ho gayi ab wo jo chahe Rahul se jaan sakti hai. Toh usne aur time waste na karte huye jhat se darwaja khol diya. Isse pehle k Divya kuchh bol pati.usne dekha k Rahul apne chehre ke age apna hath kare khada tha aur us hath mein Divya ki favourite chocolate thi jise dekh kar toh Divya khusi ke mare uchhal hi padi.
Divya(Rahul ke gale lag kar): I love you bhaiya. You are the best brother in the world. Apko yaad hai k yeh meri favourite chocolate hai. I love you so much.
Rahul: achha! Abhi toh bol rahi thi k main jhutha hun aur pata nahi kya kya.
Divya: toh fir apne mujhe jhuth kion bola.
Rahul: han par maine toh tumhari kasam v khayi na k maine jhuth nahi bola.
Divya: Han par mujhe toh aisa hi laga na k apne jhuth bola hai. Par abhi ap us baat ko chhodiye aur ander aiye. Mujhe apse bahut kuchh puchhna hai.
Rahul: abhi?
Divya: han abhi.
Divya ne Rahul ka Hath pakda aur use apne kamre mein le gayi. Rahul ki yeh soch soch kar hi fat rahi thi k ab Divya usse kya puchhne wali hai. Usne promise toh kar diya tha par Ab uske fasne ka waqt ka chuka tha. Khair humein kya, hum toh apne maje lenge hi.
Toh Divya ne Rahul ko apne kamre mein kheench kar Bed par baith diya aur door band karke khud v uske paas ake baith gayi. Rahul bed par nervous sa huya baitha tha aur wo bas dhadakte dil ke sath pehle swaal ka intezar kar raha tha.
Divya: bhaiya ap aise nervous kion ho rahe hain. Apka koi interrogation nahi ho raha ap aram se baithiye.
Rahul: pata nahi feeling toh mujhe puchhtachh wali hi a rahi hai.
Divya: ab wo toh apke najriye par depend hai. Agar apke man mein koi chor hoga toh ise ap interrogation hi samajh lijiye.
Divya ki is baat se Rahul ki aur v fat gayi kionk ab yeh ek khuli warning thi k swaal kuchh tedha hi hone wala hai par kitna tedha ab yeh toh waqt hi batayega.
Divya: bhaiya sabse pehle toh main yahi janna chahti hun k apka aur Aditi ka akhir chakkar kya hai?
Rahul: yaar ismein chakkar ki kya baat hai. Wo meri dost hai.
Divya: bhaiya abhi ap mujhe bachi toh nahi samajh rahe na. Ap dono ke beech jo chal raha hai wo kisi dosti jaisa toh bilkul v nahi. Pehle maine party wale din dekha aur fir us din hamare jane ke baad v kuchh na kuchh toh jarur huya hoga ap dono mein.
Rahul Divya ka ishara saaf taur par samajh raha tha par uske paas is baat ka koi jawab nahi tha. Wo toh bas apni baglein jhank raha tha.
Divya: abhi ap aise kya idhar udhar dekh rahe hain. Dekhiye apne mujhe promise kiya hai toh apko mere sawal ka jawab dena padega.
Rahul: abhi main tumhe kaise samjhaun. Actually we are not in any kind of commitment but still we are doing everything. I know it’s quite weird but we just have that kind of understanding.
Toh dosto ab jo log yeh soch rahe hain k yeh sara kuchh english mein kion bol raha hai toh yeh ek ninja technique hai apni baat bolne ki kionk hindi mein bolne se jyada English mein bolna safe and easy hota hai. Toh basically yeh kehna chahta hai k Aditi aur main kisi v bandhan mein nahi hain par fir v humare beech sab kuchh ho raha hai. Yeh thoda ajeeb hai par hamare beech ek aisi understanding hai jiski wajah se yeh sab, bas ho gaya. Toh yeh baat jitna mere aur apki samajh mein ayi utna hi Divya ki v samajh mein ayi. Wo toh bas bechari dekh rahi thi aur sun rahi thi k Yeh akhir bolna kya chahta hai.
Divya: bhaiya mujhe na apki ek v baat samajh mein nahi ayi.
Rahul: yaar tum v na bachon jaisi jidd karti ho. Vaise v tum yeh sab jaan kar kya karogi?
Divya: abhi agar apko nahi batana toh apki marji. Pehle promise hi kion kiya tha?
Rahul: yaar nahi samjha sakta. Ab tum toh ek hi cheej ke peeche padi ho. Seedha seedha kahun toh hum friends hain but mujhe v sex ki jarurat thi aur may be use v hogi toh ho gya sab kuchh. Koi gunah thode na kiya hai. Dono ki marzi se huya hai toh sab theek hai. Ismein kya rishta hai kya nahi hai. Kya fark padta hai. Abhi ho gaya tumhara. Yahi sunna chahti thi na tum kab se. Abhi main ja sakta hun?
Rahul gusse mein pata nahi kya kya bole ja raha tha. Wo sach mein pareshan a chuka tha is baat se. Aur Divya ko v ehsaas huya k usne Ek chhoti si baat ke liye Rahul ko kuchh jyada hi pareshan kar diya hai. Rahul ko aise chidha sa dekh kar use achha nahi lag raha tha toh wo dheere se Rahul ke paas khiski aur usne Rahul ka hath apne hath mein le liya.
Divya: bhaiya I am sorry main apko pareshan nahi karna chahti thi pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha k main bas isi baat ko lekar baith gayi. Apko jhutha v kaha and apse baat v nahi ki. Main hun hi gadhi.
Divya ki baat sunkar Rahul ka karodh kuchh shant huya.
Rahul: chal koi baat nahi. But abhi kabhi v yeh mat sochna k main tumhe jhuth bolunga.
Divya: nahi sochungi. Par kya main apse ek baat puchh sakti hun. Plzzzz
Rahul: chal theek hai puchh le par aisa kuchh puchhna jiska main jawab de paun.
Divya: bhaiya ap Aditi ko apni GF kion nahi bana lete?
Rahul: yeh kaisi baat huyi. Abhi uske liye dil mein koi feeling v toh honi chahiye. Aise thode na bana sakta hun GF.
Divya(Rahul ke thoda aur najdeek khisak kar): bhaiya apko kaisi ladki pasand hai?
Rahul: pata nahi. Kabhi is bare mein socha hi nahi. Abhi sochnunga toh tumhe bataunga.
Divya: vaise agar ap bura na mane toh ek baat puchhun?
Rahul(halka sa hanste huye): abhi sab kuchh toh puchh liya hai tumne. Aur kya puchhna hai?
Divya: bhaiya plzz.. ek last sawal. Fir apko pakka pareshan nahi karungi.
Rahul: pakka na?
Divya: han pakka.
Rahul: toh theek hai puchho.
Divya(thora hichkate huye): bhaiya but ap promise karo k ap gussa nahi karoge.
Rahul: are han bhai, nahi karunga gussa. Tum puchho kya puchhna hai.
Divya: bhaiya wo main.
Abhi Divya ne bolna shuru hi kiya tha k tabhi door bell ki awaj ayi toh mano use kisi ne sapno ki duniya se kheench kar bahar nikala ho. Usne dekha k wo Rahul ke sath ek dum sati baithi hai toh wo ek dum se uchhal kar usse dur ho gayi aur uski shakal par aise expressions the jaise kisi ne use chori karte huye pakad liya.
Rahul: kya huya tum kion itna ghabra rahi ho. Lagta hai mom ayi hongi main jakar darwaja kholta hun.
Divya: han bhaiya ap jaiye. And plz jate huye door band karte jana.
Rahul(bed se uth kar): han theek hai but tum theek toh ho na?
Divya: han main toh ek dum theek hun mujhe kya hona hai. Ap jaldi jayie mom wait kar rahi hongi bahar.
Rahul(Divya ke ajeeb se behavior ko note karte huye): han chalo theek hai. Main chalta hun.
Fir Rahul wahan se bahar nikla aur Jate jate wo Room ka darwaja band kar gaya. Rahul ke jate hi Divya ne chain ki saans li par uske chehre par abhi v ek ajeeb sa guilt tha wahin Rahul Divya ke aise achanak se badle behavior ko dekh kar soch mein pad gaya. Abhi pata nahi yeh Divya ke man mein kya chal raha hai aur aisa kya hai jo use itna pareshan kar raha hai. Par kuchh toh locha chal raha hai. Pata toh lagana hi padega par filhal ke liye itna hi. Next update mein dobara mulakat hogi tab tak ke liye ap maje kijiye aur khus rahiye.
Uhhhh, you didn't understand what i meant... Anyways waiting for the update bro ❤Thanks bhai and ismein bura kya manna apka jo opinion ho ap rakh sakte hain and bhai main hamesha update likhte waqt length dekhta hun kionk agar mere ko lagta hai update already kafi lengthy hai aur next jo hone wala hai wo v lamba hoga toh fir main use agle part ke liye chhod deta hun. Otherwise main kabhi v day wise update nahi likhta kionk hum konsa bigg boss bana rahe hain. Story mein toh hum incident to incident hi chalte hain. Aur han agar apko update mein kuchh faltu ki batein dikhein jaise "fir wo nahane gaya aur usne achhe se sabun lagaya". Aisa kuchh v ho toh ap mujhe behichak batayein main use puri tarah se hata dunga. Vaise thanks bhai aise hi swaal jawab se cheejein achhe se chalti hain. Keep supporting Bro.
Thanks bhai.Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Sorry bhai. Ap mujhe dm karke explain kar dijiyega. Main try karunga usko samjhne ki aur story mein implement karne ki.Uhhhh, you didn't understand what i meant... Anyways waiting for the update bro ❤