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Crocodile

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Wow mast mast bole toh ekdum jhkaas , so finally ek saathi mil gya shiva ko apna purana , abb toh tabaahi hogi

lekin ho sakta hai yeh ek trap ho ho sakta hai david he boss ho

hone ko toh kuch b ho sakta hai

Lekin jo b hoga voh toh ho k rahega

abb dekhte hai kia hota hai
 

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Dono log bate kar hi rahe the ki achanak David ki nazar nisha pe padti hai wo shiva se kahta hai .

David – ye kaun hai .

Shiva – dost hai .

David hairani se shiva ki taraf dekhta hai jaise use shiva ki baat pe yakeen karna kuch mushkil ho .

David – milwaoge nahi .

Shiva ishare se nisha ko paas aane ko kahta hai nisha shiva ke paas aayi hai toh shiva kahta hai .

Shiva – nisha ye hai david humare hunting group ke leader .

Aur phir david ki taraf rukh karke kahta hai .

Shiva – ye hai nisha meri dost .

david aage badhta hai aur nisha ki taraf apna haath badha deta hai nisha kuch sakuchate hue david se hath mila leti hai phir shiva kahta .

Shiva – mujhe lagta hai ab hume chalna chahiye .

Kah kar wo nisha aur david ko ishara karta hai aur aage badh jata hai david aur nisha bhi uske peeche peeche chal dete hai kuch door chalne je baad david shiva se kahta hai .

David – tum yaha is jungal me kya rahe ho kya tumhe bhi contract mila hai .

Shiva – nahi koi contract nahi mila waise tumhe kis ka contract mila hai

David – Adamkhor sher ka .

David ki baat sunke nisha ghbra jati hai to shiva usse kahta hai

Shiva – ghabrao mat ye iske liye roz ka kaam hai .

David – waise tum ne bataya nahi ki tum yaha kya kar rahe ho .

Shiva – mai yaha apni team ke saath camping pe aya hun .

David – tumhari team tum kar kya rahe ho aaj kal.

Shiva – baad me bataunga .

Dono log bate karte karte camps ke paas pahuch jate hai sabhi log david ko dekh kar hairan the ki akhir ye hai kaun shiva david aur bakiyon ka introduction karwata hai kuch hi der david sab se thi mil jata hai wo dikhne me bilkul shiva ki taraf tha waisa hi jism waisi hi kad kathi bas teen cheeze shiva se nahi milti thi ek toh rang use dekh kar kisi ko bhi ye dhokha ho sakta hai ki wo American ya Swedish hai aur dusra wo bilkul bhi rude nahi tha aur teesara uski umr shiva se kak se kak 8 saal jyada thi sabhi log baith ke baat kar rahe the ki surya david se kahta hai .

Surya – david ji aap yaha kya kar rahe ho .

David – dekho yar ye ji wi aap waap mat bolo bada ajeeb lagta hai buddhon wali feeling aati hai call me only david .

Aslam – toh david tum yaha kya kar rahe ho .

David – shikar .

Deva – matlb kiska shikar .

David – Adamkhor sher ka.

Sabhi log chauk jate hai aziz jo is waqt pani pee raha tha jaise hi usne david ki baat suni apne muh ka sara paani fuwware ke roop me surya ke ke upar ulat diya .

Rahul – Adamkhor sher yaha kya baat kar rahe ho .

David – ghabrane ki jarurat nahi maine pahle bhi kaiyon ko mara hai .

Aslam – pahle bhi matlab

David – rengers hunting group ka naam suna hai mai usi group ka leader tha jab tak wo group raha aur ye shiva humare group ka sabse youngest member tha isne tuk logon ko bataya nahi

Aziz – bas itna hi bataya hai .

David shiva ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta.

David – kya tumne in logo ko kuch nhi bataya .

Shiva – kya batata kuch bhi khas nahi jo bataya jaye .

David – khas kyu nahi hai tum log jante ho jab isne group join kiya tha toh ye sirf 17 saal ka tha magar iska nishana hum sab me sabse bahter tha aur toh aur bina hathiyar ke jangli suar ko akele hi kabo me kar leta tha was the best in our group aur maut uska toh ise koi dar hi nahi tha .

Veenu – kya tumne kabhi padhai bhi ki hai ya yahi aab karte rahe ho .

Veenu ne shiva se shikayati laheje me kaha jiska shiva pe koi asar nahi hua magar david bol padta hai .

David – ye topper hai english aur accounts hum dono jis academy me the waha sab kuch tha waha hathiyaron aur martial arts ke alawa acadamic study bhi hoti hai aur tum logo ko maloom nahi hoga magar shiva ko likhne aur padhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai ye internet pe exbii pe kahaniyan padhta hi rahta tha romance aur thriller iske favorite genre the ise sirf do hi cheezon se pyar tha apni dairy aur apne phone se .

Shiva – bas karo bahut bata diya tumne .

Shiva ne david ko tokte hue kaha jispe deva bola .

Deva – kyu kya hume janne ka haq nahi hai .

Shiva – mai beeti zindgi bhool jana chahta hun chalo david mujhe tumse kuch baat karni .

Kahkar shiva uth jata hai uske saath david bhi uth jata hai aur kahta hai .

David – chalo .

Dono chak dete hai magar tabhi peeche se charu kahti hai .

Charu – ruk .

Shiva aur david ruk jate hai charu shiva ke paas aati aur kahti hai

Charu – tu apne aap ko samjhta kya hai chupchap baith ja aur david ko teri kahani sunane warna .

Charu ne gusse air adeshamtmak swar me kaha jise sun ke shiva use ghor ke dekhta hai aur kahta hai

Shiva – warna kya .

Shiva ne bhi apne chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me jawab diya.

David – shiva batane do na akhir unhe bhi pata chale ki tum aise kyu ho .

Shiva – magar .

Charu – koi agar magar nahi chal baith chupchap

Shiva chupchap wapas apni jagah pe baith jata hai aur saath me david bhi unke baithte hi nisha bolti hai .

Nisha – toh bataiye shiva ki life ke bare me .

Devid ek nazar shiva ki taraf dekhta hai aur phir bolna shuru karta hai



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Indrajeet

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Wahh bhai matlb ab shiva ke sare Raaj khulne wale h aur isi ke sath Veenu ka bhi Naya chapter dekhne Ko milega lag rha .....ho na ho is past se in dono ka kuch na kuch scene jarur banega
 

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Wahhh Bhai mjaa aagya Sach to ye hai. Bhai Siva ko reders v nhi smjh aakhir aisa kiw hai. Aakhirkar utna to nhu kuch had tk Shiva ko ab smjh jayenge. ..
 

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David – mujhe wo din aaj bhi acchi tarah se yaad jab humari shiva se pahli mulakaat hui thi us din him log archan se milne academy gye aur

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Archan – are aaj tum sabhi log yahan kaise Kya baat hai david .

Archan ne khush hote hue kaha

David – kya hum log apne guru se milne nahi aa sakte .

David ne bade adab aur apnepan se jawab dete hue apna sar jhuka liya .

Archan – kyu nahi bilkul aa sakte ho aur bilkul sahi waqt pe aye ho aaj mai tumhe apni academy ke best student se milta hun .

David – best student mujhse bhi best hai .

David ki is baat pe archan muskura diye aur bole .

Archan – han tumse bhi best .

Unhone bade hi garv ke saath kaha unki baat sunke david bolta

David - toh bulaiye use mai bhi toh dekhun ki mere baad meri jagah kis ne li hai.

David ke laheje me jalan saaf nazar aa rahi thi archan ek ladke se kahte hai .

Archan – jao shiva ko bula lao .

Kuch der baad shiva waha pahuchta hai is waqt bhi uske chahre pe koi bhaw nahi tha matlb jaisa shiva aaj hai waisa hi tab tha wo akar archana ke pair chhuta hai toh archan david se kahte hai .

Archan – david ye hai shiva jiske bare me mai bol raha tha aur shiva ye hai david .

David shiva ki taraf haath bhadata hai magar shiva koi pratikriya nahi deta hai aur waise hi khada rahta hai is waqt shiva david ki ankhon me ghoore ja raha tha jaise kuch khoj raha tha wahi david ko aisa mahsoos ho raha tha ki shiva ki nazar uski ankhon se hote hue uske dil tak pahuch rahin hai kuch der baad david shiva se bolta hai .

David – archan kah rahe the ki tum is waqt academy ke best student ho .

Shiva – agar archan ne kaha hai toh sach hi kaha hoga waise aap ke liye bhi archan yahi kahte hai .

Shiva bade hi thande aur rookhe laheje me jawab diya david ko ye baat shyad acchi nahi lagi tabhi wo kahta hai

David – theek hai kal annual compitition me dekh lenge ki tum me kitna dam hai .

Kah kar wo archan ko pranam karta hai aur waha se nikal jata hai uske peeche peeche uske saathi bhi nikal jate hai shiva uski baat ki koi pratikriya nahi deta toh archan usse kahte hai.

Archan – tum uski baat ka bura mat manna wo dil ka bahut accha hai bas pareshan kuch jaldi ho jata .

Shiva – mujhe sirf apki baat se matlb gai jo aap kahenge wo sahi hoga .

Shiva ka laheja abhi bhi bilkul waisa hi tha magar ab shabdon me adar ke bhaw bhi the .

Archan – aao mere saath.

Archan shiva ke saath ek walk pe chal padte hai 4 5 kadam chalne ke baad wo kahte hai .

Archan – shiva tumahri padhai kaisi chal rahi .

Shiva – ye toh board exams hi batayenge .

Archan – shiva maine aaj tak tumse kabhi nahi poocha ki tum kaun ho aur aise kyu ho lekin itna jarur janta tha ki tum jung ke liye hi bane ho tum apne liye nahi dusron ke liye jeete ho isliye mera sujhaw hai ki apni training poori karne ke baad tum david ka group join kar lo .

Kahkar wo shiva ki taraf dekhte hai ki shyad wo koi pratikriya de magar shiva bilkul sapat muh se saath unke saath chal raha tha .

Archan – tumne jawab nahi diya .

Shiva – jab aap ne socha hai toh theek hi socha hoga .

Archan – aaj mujhe tum me bhishm pitamah dikh raha jo apne guru ke har adesh ko manta hai .

Shiva – mai sirf shiva hun mujhe shiva hI rahne dijiye .

Archan muskurate hai aur kahte hai .

Archan – annual compitition ki taiyari kaisi chal rahi .

Shiva – ye toh usi din pata chalega .

Shiva ki baat pe archan kahte hai .

Archan – mai toh bhool hi gya ki mai shiva se baat kar raha hun jao aram karo .

Shiva unhe pranam karta hai aur waha se nikal jata hai wahi raste use mis james mil jati hai mis james ki umr shiva 2 3 sal hi jyada thi yahan academy me wo english padhati thi aur shiva pe fida thi kyuki shiva ki english acchi thi aur grammar bahut acchi thi wo shiva se kahti hai .

Mis james – shiva kaha ja rahe ho .

Unhone kuch apnepan kuch atmiyata aur bahut sari ada ke saath shiva se poocha .

Shiva – apne room me archan ne aram karne ko kaha hai .

Shiva ne apne chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me jawab diya

Mis james – tumne William shakespeare ka play a merchant in Venice padha .

Shiva – nahi abhi mai othalo padh raha hun .

Mis james – waise tumhe kya lagta hai othalo ka pyar saccha tha ya nahi .

Shiva – pyar saccha ya jhootha nahi hota ya toh hota hai ya nahi hota darasal mere hisaab se pyar ki paribhasha bahut alag hai .

Shiva ne kisi professor ki tarah apni rai di jispe mis james kahti hai .

Mis james – aur tumhare hi hisab se pyar ki paribhasha kya hai can you elaborate .

Shiva – yes of course the real love is origins from from soul not from body there is nothing like love at first sight but now a days the importance of love just depends on the physical needs not kore than that .

Mis james – toh tumhare hisaab se love at first sight nahi hota aur aaj ke daur me kisi ko kisi se pyar bhi nahi hota toh phir ho hum log dekhte hai wo kya hai .

Shiva – it just an exchange of services nothing else

Lena dena hi zindgi hai ab
Koi kis ko hai chahta yun hi

Shiva apni baat khtm kar ke nikal jata hai mis james use hasrati ankhon se bas dekhti rahti hai


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