Thriller Kahani

[Shivay chauhan]

Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne kimti reviews dijiye

 

[Indrajeet]

Bhai update bahut badhiya h but sach Kahu to Aisa Laga jaise jaldi khatm ho gya .....you know I need more information in this update....but jo bhi ho it was fantastic

 

[Agrawal ji]

bahut hi shandar update Bhai ab Shiva ka past b pata chal jayega aur mujhe lagta hai David hi underworld ka boss hai

 

[Raj142]

Lajwab update bhai

 

[Last benchers]

Update continue

David – mujhe wo din aaj bhi acchi tarah se yaad jab humari shiva se pahli mulakaat hui thi us din him log archan se milne academy gye aur

FLASHBACK

Archan – are aaj tum sabhi log yahan kaise Kya baat hai david .

Archan ne khush hote hue kaha

David – kya hum log apne guru se milne nahi aa sakte .

David ne bade adab aur apnepan se jawab dete hue apna sar jhuka liya .

Archan – kyu nahi bilkul aa sakte ho aur bilkul sahi waqt pe aye ho aaj mai tumhe apni academy ke best student se milta hun .

David – best student mujhse bhi best hai .

David ki is baat pe archan muskura diye aur bole .

Archan – han tumse bhi best .

Unhone bade hi garv ke saath kaha unki baat sunke david bolta

David - toh bulaiye use mai bhi toh dekhun ki mere baad meri jagah kis ne li hai.

David ke laheje me jalan saaf nazar aa rahi thi archan ek ladke se kahte hai .

Archan – jao shiva ko bula lao .

Kuch der baad shiva waha pahuchta hai is waqt bhi uske chahre pe koi bhaw nahi tha matlb jaisa shiva aaj hai waisa hi tab tha wo akar archana ke pair chhuta hai toh archan david se kahte hai .

Archan – david ye hai shiva jiske bare me mai bol raha tha aur shiva ye hai david .

David shiva ki taraf haath bhadata hai magar shiva koi pratikriya nahi deta hai aur waise hi khada rahta hai is waqt shiva david ki ankhon me ghoore ja raha tha jaise kuch khoj raha tha wahi david ko aisa mahsoos ho raha tha ki shiva ki nazar uski ankhon se hote hue uske dil tak pahuch rahin hai kuch der baad david shiva se bolta hai .

David – archan kah rahe the ki tum is waqt academy ke best student ho .

Shiva – agar archan ne kaha hai toh sach hi kaha hoga waise aap ke liye bhi archan yahi kahte hai .

Shiva bade hi thande aur rookhe laheje me jawab diya david ko ye baat shyad acchi nahi lagi tabhi wo kahta hai

David – theek hai kal annual compitition me dekh lenge ki tum me kitna dam hai .

Kah kar wo archan ko pranam karta hai aur waha se nikal jata hai uske peeche peeche uske saathi bhi nikal jate hai shiva uski baat ki koi pratikriya nahi deta toh archan usse kahte hai.

Archan – tum uski baat ka bura mat manna wo dil ka bahut accha hai bas pareshan kuch jaldi ho jata .

Shiva – mujhe sirf apki baat se matlb gai jo aap kahenge wo sahi hoga .

Shiva ka laheja abhi bhi bilkul waisa hi tha magar ab shabdon me adar ke bhaw bhi the .

Archan – aao mere saath.

Archan shiva ke saath ek walk pe chal padte hai 4 5 kadam chalne ke baad wo kahte hai .

Archan – shiva tumahri padhai kaisi chal rahi .

Shiva – ye toh board exams hi batayenge .

Archan – shiva maine aaj tak tumse kabhi nahi poocha ki tum kaun ho aur aise kyu ho lekin itna jarur janta tha ki tum jung ke liye hi bane ho tum apne liye nahi dusron ke liye jeete ho isliye mera sujhaw hai ki apni training poori karne ke baad tum david ka group join kar lo .

Kahkar wo shiva ki taraf dekhte hai ki shyad wo koi pratikriya de magar shiva bilkul sapat muh se saath unke saath chal raha tha .

Archan – tumne jawab nahi diya .

Shiva – jab aap ne socha hai toh theek hi socha hoga .

Archan – aaj mujhe tum me bhishm pitamah dikh raha jo apne guru ke har adesh ko manta hai .

Shiva – mai sirf shiva hun mujhe shiva hI rahne dijiye .

Archan muskurate hai aur kahte hai .

Archan – annual compitition ki taiyari kaisi chal rahi .

Shiva – ye toh usi din pata chalega .

Shiva ki baat pe archan kahte hai .

Archan – mai toh bhool hi gya ki mai shiva se baat kar raha hun jao aram karo .

Shiva unhe pranam karta hai aur waha se nikal jata hai wahi raste use mis james mil jati hai mis james ki umr shiva 2 3 sal hi jyada thi yahan academy me wo english padhati thi aur shiva pe fida thi kyuki shiva ki english acchi thi aur grammar bahut acchi thi wo shiva se kahti hai .

Mis james – shiva kaha ja rahe ho .

Unhone kuch apnepan kuch atmiyata aur bahut sari ada ke saath shiva se poocha .

Shiva – apne room me archan ne aram karne ko kaha hai .

Shiva ne apne chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me jawab diya

Mis james – tumne William shakespeare ka play a merchant in Venice padha .

Shiva – nahi abhi mai othalo padh raha hun .

Mis james – waise tumhe kya lagta hai othalo ka pyar saccha tha ya nahi .

Shiva – pyar saccha ya jhootha nahi hota ya toh hota hai ya nahi hota darasal mere hisaab se pyar ki paribhasha bahut alag hai .

Shiva ne kisi professor ki tarah apni rai di jispe mis james kahti hai .

Mis james – aur tumhare hi hisab se pyar ki paribhasha kya hai can you elaborate .

Shiva – yes of course the real love is origins from from soul not from body there is nothing like love at first sight but now a days the importance of love just depends on the physical needs not kore than that .

Mis james – toh tumhare hisaab se love at first sight nahi hota aur aaj ke daur me kisi ko kisi se pyar bhi nahi hota toh phir ho hum log dekhte hai wo kya hai .

Shiva – it just an exchange of services nothing else

Lena dena hi zindgi hai ab
Koi kis ko hai chahta yun hi

Shiva apni baat khtm kar ke nikal jata hai mis james use hasrati ankhon se bas dekhti rahti hai


Update continue

What a update bidu...Sach Mai pyar ab bas physical need krne ke liye hota hai...
But Sach btau Dil se apki writing skills bahut hi achi hai..Mai apko kisi SE campare nhi krunga kiw ki aap sirf aap ho..apke aisa koi nhi .

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Aap sabhi logon ka bahut shukriya jo meri is kahani Ko pasand kar rahe hai last benchers mujhme koi writing skill nahi hai bas scenes Ko dimaag me rakh kar likhta hun aur is forum pe pahle itni suspense aur thriller padh Chuka hun ki jyada dikkat nahi Hoti bas mujhe afsos hai toh ek hi baat mai apni shayri aur niji mashroofiyat ke chalte update jaldi nahi de pata iske liye rahe Dil se mafi chahunga

 

[Crocodile]

Bahut time de shiva ka flashback ka wait tha toh finally flashback chalu ho gya , but try not to extend flashback more than 10 updates , well best of luck for ur story

 

[Avir]

Waiting next

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Bahut time de shiva ka flashback ka wait tha toh finally flashback chalu ho gya , but try not to extend flashback more than 10 updates , well best of luck for ur story

Ok I will try

 

[Indrajeet]

Aap sabhi logon ka bahut shukriya jo meri is kahani Ko pasand kar rahe hai last benchers mujhme koi writing skill nahi hai bas scenes Ko dimaag me rakh kar likhta hun aur is forum pe pahle itni suspense aur thriller padh Chuka hun ki jyada dikkat nahi Hoti bas mujhe afsos hai toh ek hi baat mai apni shayri aur niji mashroofiyat ke chalte update jaldi nahi de pata iske liye rahe Dil se mafi chahunga

Koi baat nhi bhai bs ek do din me ek update chipka diya karo bhai khush