Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[nain11ster]

Ab apun ye new story read karne ke bad ..apna keemti review post karega...

Wokey shreeman... Jab tak new story nahi aati sasta sunder tikau revoo hi daal.dijiye... middle class aadmi issi me khush ho jayega

Waise "The Sex Game" naya taja chalu hua hai

 

[nain11ster]

Kamal karte ho nainu bhai hamesha ki tarah is bar bhi dil khush kar diya. Wese ye nishchal he bohot tez, jaha jata hai waha ke logo ko apni taraf khinch leta hai. Kahi ye dark universe me bhi jakar kisi ki shadi na karwa ke aa jaye . Pata chala ki idhar yuddh ka bigul baj chuka ho aur ye mahashay dusri taraf full speed me 7 fere lagwa rahe ho

Hahaha... Main na isse jab earth wapas launga na to marriage bureau ka hi kaam dunga ... Je final hai ...

Hahaha ... Aa rahe hain hum sab abhi ussi ore aa rahe hain waise maine to yudhh shuru kar diya hai but aap tak shayad next Sunday tak poori baat pahunche

 

[Naina]

Main jarra end likhne me vyast hun... Isliye bade dhyan puravak ussi ko likh raha hun.... Chutti ke samay bhi kam hote hain isliye Friday night se baith'kar likhna edit karna... Fir likhna fir edit karna chalu hai...

10 update bhandar grih me aise karke jama ho gaye hain ... 4 update edit ko taras rahe hai... Yuddh me ghayal chinkh rahe hai....maar do ya ilaj karwa do...

So main jarra dhyan se udhar likhta hun... Pichhle kayi dino se 2-2 update lagatar dekar compansation kiye hun... Isliye dhiraj dharen

too old too young

 

[nain11ster]

Bhai aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad ki aap mere comment ko gour karte he. Rahi baat bitti naam ka to yah meri jaan jo ki meri badi daughter he uska nik name he jo me yaha use karta hu. Me aapke har update bade hi shiddat k sath padta bhi hu aur jab kahi aapki lekhni mere dil k kisi kone ko chhu leti he tab hanth apne aap comment k liye utha jate he. Esa koi din nahi raha jaha aapki story ko mene open nahi kiya. Jo shikayat beginning me thi wo to aapne kuch updates me hi dur kar di thi. Ha aap meri murkhta ya jaldbaji bhi kah sakte ho kyoki aapki story se jud jo gaya tha so passion nahi rakh paya. Badhti story aap please jaldbaji me end na kar dena. Abhi to ashtak ke abhiman ko tulana he un chaar languro ko jo apne aap me vish jivisha k barabar manate he unka ant dekhna he sath hi wo rahasyamay mahal ki paheli ka suljhna bhi to intazaar me he. Vese orja aur uski bahan ko kyo silent kar rakha he bhai. Is story me emotion, drama, action, thrill, suspense aadi sab kuch he full on dhamal he jo mujhe bandh kar rakhe hue he. Is forum par Enigma bhai ki story aapki story, vj bhai ki attitude, jay suthar bhai ki god and demons aur kuch aur writer he unka kuch bada hi fan ban gaya hu. You are all superb. God bless you.

Areeee waahhh... Fir to aapne Bitti aur Gopal ke natkhat section poore enjoy ke sath padhe honge... Btw cute Nick name hai... One of my niece name is Bitti... Ek bhanji hai usse bhi Bitti hi pukarte hain... Neice ke sath main khelta hun to ussi ko dhyan me rakh'kar maine bhi Bitti ko likha tha...

Baharhaal har comment dhyan me rahta hai Bittu ji aur har reader bhi... Aur haan na to murkhta thi kuchh bhi aur na hi jaldbaji... Wo sudden emotion change the.. aur jo ishq risk part 1 padh aaye the unke liye kafi mushkil tha wo shurwat ke 40-45 update... Isliye koi jaldbaji nahi thi... Vishwas na ho to uss daur ke comment utha le...

Sabko daantna pada ek din ki bus bahut hua... Chup chap story padhne ka aur padhkar revoo karne ka... Khunchatani hum end ke baad karenge pet bharke...

Joke a part ... Aise anubhav pahle bhi kayi stories par aisa ho chuka hai... Romance likhne ka aisa bitter experience raha tha ki maine dar se dobara slow romance ke section ko touch nahi kiya..

Khair thanks for sharing your feelings... Abhi to humara aur aapka lamba karvan chalna hai... Sath bane rahe

 

[nain11ster]

too old too young

Samjha nahi main

 

[nain11ster]

Nice update brother aapki mehanat dikhti he jo aap story k liye kar rahe he.

Thankooo soo much battu ji

 

[nain11ster]

Awesome update

Ayush bhai kaim chho...

Btw thanke for your revoo

 

[nain11ster]

Super se upar har ek pehlu har ek mod aur kaafi dilchasp, mahattvapoorn aur sath hi thrilling se bharpur..... sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...... totally amazing dono hi update... bole to

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji

Thankoo so much for your beautiful words

 

[nain11ster]

Sapno mein

Hahaha... Sab apne keypad ka kamal hai ... Aur sapno me main key press nahi marta

 

[nain11ster]

Nice update bhai

Thankooo so much Nevil bhai