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Nischal, Jivisha ka haanth khinch'kar wapas sine se lagaate.… "Pith par haath ferne ke dauran tumhari bra distrub kar rahi hai... Nikalo isse"
Jivisha minatten karti... "Please koi shararat nahi"…
"Main kahan koi shararat kar raha hun, bus hath firane me dikkat ho rahi hai"…
"Bahut din ke baad sukoon me hun, sone do na"…
"Isse nikal do, mere hathon ko samsya ho rahi hai"…
"Main so rahi hun, bina distrub kiye nikal sakte ho to nikal lo.… Pareshan karna band karo"…
"Had hai, suit pahan'kar aayi ho ab kya kainchi chala'kar kaat'te huye alag kar dun kya...
Jivisha gusse me aankhen dikhate hui baithi.… "Chain se mera rahna to dekha nahi jayega... Ab aage aur kisi baat ke liye pareshan karna fir main batati hun... Kuch samjhne ko taiyar hi nahi ki abhi ye sab nahi kar sakti"…
Jivisha barbarati hui apne hath piche le ja'kar suit ke upar se hi bra ke hook ko khol rahi thi aur aage Nischal apni aankhen badi kiya, Jivisha ke chhati ko ghure ja raha tha...
Jivisha ki jaise hi najar Nischal par gayi... "Hat besharm kahin ke... Kaise ghur rahe ho"…
"Ek ko hi to ghurne ka licence mila hai... Ab kya usse bhi na dekhun"…
"Ohhh hoo.. haan haan"..
"Ab ye ohhh, aannhhh mat karo... Dil kam aur ye jyada uchhal jata hai"… Nischal niche apne paint ke ore ishare karte huye hans diya...
Jivisha uski baat par sharmakar hasne lagi... Aur agle hi pal hath gale ke niche le ja'kar bra ko khinch'kar nikali aur Nischal ke muh par maarti... "Lo rakh lo apne distrubing element ko"…
Aur apni baat kahne ke baad wapas se Nischal ke sine par sar daal'kar so gayi... Haan lekin Nischal ke tadapti najron ka samna na ho isliye apna chehra paun ke ore ghumayi hui thi... Nischal bra hath me lekar thoda gusse se dekhte... "Ye tumne galat tarike se nikala hai"..
"Haan haan... Aur sahi tarika kya hai???"
Nischal samjh gaya ab kuchh dekhne tak ko nahi milega. Wo apni agli chaal chalte huye... Pichhe se suit ke ander hath ghus'kar, kisi tarah Jivisha ke khuli pith par hath ferte... "Pahle suit nikalti, fir bra aur uske baad tab suit pahan leti"…
"Ohhh hoo hasraten.. suniye mr husband ji kuchh din majboori aap bhi jheliye aur kuchh din main bhi jhelti hun... Aur kya ab mera suit faarne ka irada hai... Hath nikalo, aage se gala tight ho gaya hai... Mujhe shwans lene me taklif ho rahi hai"…
Nischal "pagal, nirdayi" kahte huye aaram se let gaya. Dono bilkul khamosh the. Ek khoya sa mahol tha jahan kewal dharkan aur shwans ki awaj hi sunai de rahi thi. Jivisha wapas se madhyam-madhyam shwans khinchti sukoon sa mehsus karti, Nischal me khoti ja rahi thi... Tabhi jhunjhlayi si awaj aayi, jisne Jivisha ke khoye se mahol me bhang daal diya...
"Tumne apni shaktiyon ka prayog kiya hai"…
"Aanhhh !!! Love sikayat karna band karo aur chupchap aankh mund'kar so jao"…
"Nahi tumne samanya jivan me bhi apni asamnya shaktiyon ka prayog ki ho"…
"Love !!!!!"
"Huhhh !! Waise to kya sexy gawn pahan'kar ghunti ho... Jiski jip picche se tumhari kamar tak hoti hai... Ya fir wo tumhara katilana look saree me... Hayyy kamar dekhun ya pallu ke niche se jo ubharkar manmohak roop tumhe deta hai.. tumhari chhati ko, usme comfuse kar jata hun"…
"So jao baby… koi nahi ghar ki hi baat hai"…
"Naahh !!! Tumne cheating ki hai... Lofa se nikalne tak to gawn me hi thi, lekin control room me aate waqt suit me. Wo bhi itna chhota gala ki cleavase tak na dikhe... Najren chori-chhipe kitni kosis karti rahi maloom hai tumhe"…
"Areeeee... Kahi to koi nahi ghar ki hi baat hai... Kuch din dhiraj dharo love"
"Huhhh !!! Tumhe iss moment ka pahle se gyan tha… dusre kapdon me main thode bahut armaan nikalta, isliye tumne ye suit pahan'kar aane ka plan banaya"…
Nischal ki baat sun'kar Jivisha hasnti hui apna chehra Nischal ke ore mod lee. Apne hath uske mathe se le'kar pichhe balon tak ferti... "Sooo sollyyy... Mere pahn'ne ke liye kapde select lena, raat ko unhi kaodon me tumhare sath rahungi... Ab happy mera baby... Chalo ab distrub nahi karo, aur achhe bacche ki tarah aakhen mund lo"…
Jivisha apni baat kah'kar wapas se apna chehra dusri ore ghuma li. Ek baar fir se wo Nischal ki dharkano ko sunti, aakhen mund lee... Dono ke bich kuchh der ki khamoshi rahi, bus ek dusre ki dharkan ko mehsus kar rahe the... Tabhi Nischal...
"Mujhe nahana hai... Chalo sath me nahate hain... Fir aaram se kha'kar so jayenge"..
"Kyonnn pareshan kar rahe ho.. kaho to yahan se chali jaun"…
Jivisha uth'kar baith chuki thi, tabhi Nischal uska haath pakad kar wapas apne sine se lagaate... "Kya dhamki deti rahti ho... Nisthur"…
Nischal mayus ho'kar apni baat kaha aur bistar se tek laga diya... Jivisha uske sine se sar tikayi, ander se khil khilati hui hans rahi thi. Kuchh soch'kar uska chehra sharm se laal hota ja raha tha... Aur agle hi pal Nischal hadbarate huye uthne ki kosis karne laga...
Jivisha uske sine par hath rakh'kar niche dhakelti hui... "Shiii !!! Bilkul khamoshi se lete raho"…
Nischal ke chehre ki bhavnayen badli si thi. Niche Jivisha ke hath uske aag ko bhadkate ja raha tha... Fir achanak hi.… "Uffff Jisa tunahre hath bilkul thade, jame huye hai"…
Jivisha niche apne hath ka kamal jari rakhti, apne chehre ko Nischal ke chehre ke ore karti... "Tum garam jalvayu wale... aur main bilkul thandi jalvayu wali... Mere bacchon ko main mishrit jalvayu ka abhyas karwa rahi hun... Shuhhhh.. tum maze lo"…
"Aahhhh... Ye to jaan lewa hai... Itne tanda hath... Jam jayega... Hatao.. aahhhh"..
"Hihihihi... Pagal, 1000, 2000 digree Celsius tak ka garmi hai tumhari, kahan tum minus 2⁰ nahi sambhal pa rahe"…
Dono khamosh ho gaye. Jivisha hansti hui Nischal ko dekh rahi thi aur niche le gayi haath ka kamal dikha rahi thi. Nischal apne dono hath failaye tha.. Uske kaanpte paun, aur lagatar uske ling par bilkul thande hath ka jordar humla.…
"Aahhhh... Ye pagal banane wala hai jisa janlewa... Aaahhhhhhhh... Ummmmmmmm... Aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh'
"Chhi... Bata na sakte the sab ganda kar diya"…
"Tum satak gayi ho.… Aisa humla hone wala hai tumne bataya tha kya??? Main masti ke bich me information nahi de sakta"..
"Kabhi-kabhi surprise bhi to chahiye jivan me... Main tumhari haalat samjh sakti hun... Sorry love.. bus 75 se 80 din aur uske baad kuchh din rest.. fir tum apni har naughty tamannayen puri kar sakte ho"… Jivisha, Nischal ki aakhon me jhankti, uske khule sine ko chumti hui apni baat kahi.
"Achha mere dimag me ek sawal aa raha hai"..
"Ruko ek minute"… Jivisha ek towel khinchi.. aur sab saaf karti… "haan abhi kaho"..
"Child birth ke baad kya tumhare lactation period shuru ho jayenge"...
"Shayad na ho.. ya shayad ho, wo to sab Bhagwan ki marji hai. Haan lekin ikchha jaroor hai ki mujhe purn mayritv chahiye."
"Chakl'kar medical section me dekhe, tumhare body ke physiological system ke changeg ko"…
"Haan chalenge… lekin baad me... Abhi tumhare sath rahne do.... Abhi kahin nahi jana"…
Jivisha thoda upar ho'kar, Nischal ke chehre ke thik upar apna chehra rakhi. Dono ke chehre khile aur muskaan phail rahi thi.. Nischal aaram se Jivisha ko apne pass lita diya. Dono karwat le'kar apna chehra aamne samne kiye... Ek dusre ko dekh'kar pyar umar sa raha tha aur honth se honth laga'kar apni aankhen mund liye...
Armaan the jo badte rahe aur dono sath me apni bhavnayen baant'te rahe.. ussi din kisi waqt Medical aur sabhi test ke baad Nischal ne alag-alag waqt ke liye alag-alag tarah ka liquid sewan karne ke liye diya, jo purntah natural tha...
Halanki Jivisha ke sharir me biologically kuchh bhi aisa change nahi tha, lekin Nischal yahi maan kar chal raha tha ki abhi uska science itna develope nahi hua jo nature ke iss rashashya ko suljha sake...
East point ke ore Viggo viman apni gati se badh rahi thi. Iss dauran har 4-5 din me kisi space station par hault lete. Jaisa pahla din Bailoo dwara bataya gaya tha ki up side east area poora viran hai... Lekin uske ulat tha yah universe ka hissa... Charo ore jivan aur sabhyta ka srijan tha aur jahan-jahan Nischal ne hault kiya, Space station wale apni service ke badle kimat wasool lete...
Haan ek baat jo sabhi hault me common thi, koi bhi Hurriyent planet ki baat nahi karta... Chup chap kaam karte aur kaam ke badle apni kimat lete… Kahin jyada to kahin bahut jyada kimat wasool ki jaati...
Kayi dino ke yatra ke baad ye log upside east Univese ke hisse se aage badh'kar extream East Universe ke kshetr me dakhil ho gaye the… Universe ka yah poora hissa nirjan tha.. Raste me kuchh grah the jahan Nischal ne hault liya, lekin wo poora nirjan grah tha, jahan koi aabadi nahi basti thi... Na hi kisi bhi prakar ki vanaspati thi..
Extream East Universe me lagatar 8 din ki yatra poori hui thi aur lagbhag 28 din ki poori yatra ke baad Nischal ne Viggo viman ko aakhri hault diya... Extream East Universe me jahan gine chune jagah par hi aabadi basti thi, wahin iss space station ko kafi khoobsurat tarike se devlope kiya gaya tha...
Roffa space station aakhri point tha. Iske aage east ke ore jo pahla grah aata wo Hurriyent hi tha aur uske thik aage aag ka gola Sooraj tha..
Roffa service station, kafi aakarshak aur temprature ko maintain karne ke liye kafi sare equipment laga rakhe the... Bahar ki jalvayu wakai garam thi...
Viggo viman jaise hi space station ke bahar ruka... Ek sandesh aaya... "Apni pehchan batao"…
Nischal ne apni poori pahchan batayi aur in logon ne hari jhandi dikhate huye Viman ko service station se connect kar'ke apne yaham aane ka nimantran diya...
Kamal ka service station tha ye..... Viman aur space station ke bich ek lamba tunnel comnect hua... Tunnel ke jariye jaise hi ye log service station me dakhil huye... Samne hi bade sa welcome board liye kayi sare yuvak aur yuvtiyon ka group khada tha...
Nandni:- Ye aise 8-10 group me khade ho'kar kya kar rahe hain...
Jivisha:- Pata nahi, Nischal aur Ansh jiju gaye hai na... Pata kar'ke aate honge...
Tabhi Ansh puchhe mud'kar thoda uncha bola.… "Iss space station ka guide service hai… kisi ko bhi chun sakte hai"..
Sabne mil'kar ek group ko hiar kiya... Jiska team leader tha Inova. Inova sabke samne apni service batate huye puchhne laga ki kaun si service chahiye...
Nandni:- Full access jisme sari suvidha ho... Fir baad me koi extra charge na joda jaye...
Inova:- Hyper class, isme kewal betting ke liye aapko alag se pay karna hoga... charge 5000 coin per hour...
Nischal:- Aur tumhare yahan ka coin exchange kaise hoga...
Inova:- Per kg food ke liye, 5 coin. Super harvesting food ke liye.. par piece 20 coin, aur metal scrape ka ek rate, per 100kg 10 coin...
Nischal mere pass super harvesting hai, lekin 1 piece ka 100 coin lunga...
Inova:- Hum bargen nahi karte…
Nischal:- Thik hai fir 40 hazar kg metal scrap hi lo fir...
Inova:- Wo bade se sahar jaisa viman aapka hi hai na...
Nischal:- Haan...
Inova kuchh sochte huye Nischal ko apne superior ke pass le gaya... Uske superior ne puchha ki aisa kya hai tumhare pass super harvesting jiski kimat 10 guna bata rahe.
Nischal usse apne viman ke ander faile 20 km ka talab, aur uss talab ki machhli dikhane ke baad... Uske bade hone ka video demonstration diya... Uske growth dekhkte huye... 150 coin per piece baat tay ho gayi, lekin unhe kam se kam 10 hazar pieces machhli chahiye thi....
Sab tay ho gaya... Nischal ne wahan commanding incharge se sampark kiya aur 20 hazar piece machhli ke sath, kayi gallan pani bhi supply kar diya.... 4 card bane aur har card par 7 lakh 50 hazar coin jama the...
Inove ne service start karne se pahle, lagbhag kitne ghante ki service chahiye wo puchh liya… sabse pahle in logon ne 24 ghante ki service lete huye l lakh 20 hazar ka payment kiya...
फैंटेसी में आप का जवाब नहीं है नैन भाई ! कहां से सोच लेते हैं इतना सब ! पुरे युनिवर्स के साथ साथ अजीबोगरीब जानवर , उसके बाद करिश्माई हैरतअंगेज कारनामे.....सब कुछ ऐसा लगता है जैसे कोई हाॅलीवुड मूवी देख रहे हों ।
और कैरेक्टर का नाम भी तो वैसा ही लगता है ।
मुझे तो लगता है कि आप हाॅलीवुड मूवी से बहुत ही ज्यादा प्रभावित हो । ऐसे ऐसे कल्पना करना और फिर लिखना सब के वश का नहीं है ।
कहानी के बीच अचानक कामेडी लाना जिससे एक बार मुड हंसी खुशी हो जाय , में भी आप का कोई सानी नहीं है ।
काफी टेलेंटेड व्यक्ति है आप । इसी तरह हम रीडर्स को अपने जादुई लेखनी से एंटरटेन करते रहें ।
hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...
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