Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

हुरियेंट प्लानेट की जर्नी काफी एडवेंचर्स है । भिगो विमान जो कि काफी हाई फाई टैक्नोलॉजी से लैस है और दो सौ किलोमीटर के दायरे में फैला हुआ है , शायद इस के अब टुकड़े टुकड़े हो जाए !
हुरियेंट प्लानेट एक आग का जलता हुआ गोला है और उसकी टेम्परेचर में सरवाइव करना बहुत ही मुश्किल है । शायद अगले आधे घंटे के अंदर भिगो विमान कई टुकड़ों में विभाजित हो जाए ! शायद उन्हीं किसी टुकड़ों में बैठ कर वो लोग वहां से निकलने में कामयाब हो जाए ।

गोपाल और बिट्टी का साथ में आना कोई संयोग नहीं लगता है । मुझे लगता है वो आगे चलकर निश्छल के सामने आने वाले खतरे पर ढाल का काम करेंगे । जैसे कि अभी वो विशालकाय और बड़े ही खतरनाक ड्रैगन से निश्छल को बचाने के लिए कर रहे हैं ।

अद्भुत अपडेट नैन भाई । आउटस्टैंडिंग ।

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations for completed 600 pages nain11ster bhai.

 

[The king]

for 600 page nain11ster bhai

 

[Asif khan]

Update:-82 ​

Nischal, Jivisha ka haanth khinch'kar wapas sine se lagaate.… "Pith par haath ferne ke dauran tumhari bra distrub kar rahi hai... Nikalo isse"


Jivisha minatten karti... "Please koi shararat nahi"…


"Main kahan koi shararat kar raha hun, bus hath firane me dikkat ho rahi hai"…

"Bahut din ke baad sukoon me hun, sone do na"…

"Isse nikal do, mere hathon ko samsya ho rahi hai"…

"Main so rahi hun, bina distrub kiye nikal sakte ho to nikal lo.… Pareshan karna band karo"…

"Had hai, suit pahan'kar aayi ho ab kya kainchi chala'kar kaat'te huye alag kar dun kya...


Jivisha gusse me aankhen dikhate hui baithi.… "Chain se mera rahna to dekha nahi jayega... Ab aage aur kisi baat ke liye pareshan karna fir main batati hun... Kuch samjhne ko taiyar hi nahi ki abhi ye sab nahi kar sakti"…


Jivisha barbarati hui apne hath piche le ja'kar suit ke upar se hi bra ke hook ko khol rahi thi aur aage Nischal apni aankhen badi kiya, Jivisha ke chhati ko ghure ja raha tha...


Jivisha ki jaise hi najar Nischal par gayi... "Hat besharm kahin ke... Kaise ghur rahe ho"…


"Ek ko hi to ghurne ka licence mila hai... Ab kya usse bhi na dekhun"…


"Ohhh hoo.. haan haan"..


"Ab ye ohhh, aannhhh mat karo... Dil kam aur ye jyada uchhal jata hai"… Nischal niche apne paint ke ore ishare karte huye hans diya...


Jivisha uski baat par sharmakar hasne lagi... Aur agle hi pal hath gale ke niche le ja'kar bra ko khinch'kar nikali aur Nischal ke muh par maarti... "Lo rakh lo apne distrubing element ko"…


Aur apni baat kahne ke baad wapas se Nischal ke sine par sar daal'kar so gayi... Haan lekin Nischal ke tadapti najron ka samna na ho isliye apna chehra paun ke ore ghumayi hui thi... Nischal bra hath me lekar thoda gusse se dekhte... "Ye tumne galat tarike se nikala hai"..


"Haan haan... Aur sahi tarika kya hai???"


Nischal samjh gaya ab kuchh dekhne tak ko nahi milega. Wo apni agli chaal chalte huye... Pichhe se suit ke ander hath ghus'kar, kisi tarah Jivisha ke khuli pith par hath ferte... "Pahle suit nikalti, fir bra aur uske baad tab suit pahan leti"…


"Ohhh hoo hasraten.. suniye mr husband ji kuchh din majboori aap bhi jheliye aur kuchh din main bhi jhelti hun... Aur kya ab mera suit faarne ka irada hai... Hath nikalo, aage se gala tight ho gaya hai... Mujhe shwans lene me taklif ho rahi hai"…


Nischal "pagal, nirdayi" kahte huye aaram se let gaya. Dono bilkul khamosh the. Ek khoya sa mahol tha jahan kewal dharkan aur shwans ki awaj hi sunai de rahi thi. Jivisha wapas se madhyam-madhyam shwans khinchti sukoon sa mehsus karti, Nischal me khoti ja rahi thi... Tabhi jhunjhlayi si awaj aayi, jisne Jivisha ke khoye se mahol me bhang daal diya...


"Tumne apni shaktiyon ka prayog kiya hai"…

"Aanhhh !!! Love sikayat karna band karo aur chupchap aankh mund'kar so jao"…

"Nahi tumne samanya jivan me bhi apni asamnya shaktiyon ka prayog ki ho"…

"Love !!!!!"

"Huhhh !! Waise to kya sexy gawn pahan'kar ghunti ho... Jiski jip picche se tumhari kamar tak hoti hai... Ya fir wo tumhara katilana look saree me... Hayyy kamar dekhun ya pallu ke niche se jo ubharkar manmohak roop tumhe deta hai.. tumhari chhati ko, usme comfuse kar jata hun"…

"So jao baby… koi nahi ghar ki hi baat hai"…

"Naahh !!! Tumne cheating ki hai... Lofa se nikalne tak to gawn me hi thi, lekin control room me aate waqt suit me. Wo bhi itna chhota gala ki cleavase tak na dikhe... Najren chori-chhipe kitni kosis karti rahi maloom hai tumhe"…

"Areeeee... Kahi to koi nahi ghar ki hi baat hai... Kuch din dhiraj dharo love"


"Huhhh !!! Tumhe iss moment ka pahle se gyan tha… dusre kapdon me main thode bahut armaan nikalta, isliye tumne ye suit pahan'kar aane ka plan banaya"…


Nischal ki baat sun'kar Jivisha hasnti hui apna chehra Nischal ke ore mod lee. Apne hath uske mathe se le'kar pichhe balon tak ferti... "Sooo sollyyy... Mere pahn'ne ke liye kapde select lena, raat ko unhi kaodon me tumhare sath rahungi... Ab happy mera baby... Chalo ab distrub nahi karo, aur achhe bacche ki tarah aakhen mund lo"…


Jivisha apni baat kah'kar wapas se apna chehra dusri ore ghuma li. Ek baar fir se wo Nischal ki dharkano ko sunti, aakhen mund lee... Dono ke bich kuchh der ki khamoshi rahi, bus ek dusre ki dharkan ko mehsus kar rahe the... Tabhi Nischal...


"Mujhe nahana hai... Chalo sath me nahate hain... Fir aaram se kha'kar so jayenge"..

"Kyonnn pareshan kar rahe ho.. kaho to yahan se chali jaun"…

Jivisha uth'kar baith chuki thi, tabhi Nischal uska haath pakad kar wapas apne sine se lagaate... "Kya dhamki deti rahti ho... Nisthur"…


Nischal mayus ho'kar apni baat kaha aur bistar se tek laga diya... Jivisha uske sine se sar tikayi, ander se khil khilati hui hans rahi thi. Kuchh soch'kar uska chehra sharm se laal hota ja raha tha... Aur agle hi pal Nischal hadbarate huye uthne ki kosis karne laga...


Jivisha uske sine par hath rakh'kar niche dhakelti hui... "Shiii !!! Bilkul khamoshi se lete raho"…


Nischal ke chehre ki bhavnayen badli si thi. Niche Jivisha ke hath uske aag ko bhadkate ja raha tha... Fir achanak hi.… "Uffff Jisa tunahre hath bilkul thade, jame huye hai"…


Jivisha niche apne hath ka kamal jari rakhti, apne chehre ko Nischal ke chehre ke ore karti... "Tum garam jalvayu wale... aur main bilkul thandi jalvayu wali... Mere bacchon ko main mishrit jalvayu ka abhyas karwa rahi hun... Shuhhhh.. tum maze lo"…


"Aahhhh... Ye to jaan lewa hai... Itne tanda hath... Jam jayega... Hatao.. aahhhh"..


"Hihihihi... Pagal, 1000, 2000 digree Celsius tak ka garmi hai tumhari, kahan tum minus 2⁰ nahi sambhal pa rahe"…


Dono khamosh ho gaye. Jivisha hansti hui Nischal ko dekh rahi thi aur niche le gayi haath ka kamal dikha rahi thi. Nischal apne dono hath failaye tha.. Uske kaanpte paun, aur lagatar uske ling par bilkul thande hath ka jordar humla.…


"Aahhhh... Ye pagal banane wala hai jisa janlewa... Aaahhhhhhhh... Ummmmmmmm... Aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh'


"Chhi... Bata na sakte the sab ganda kar diya"…


"Tum satak gayi ho.… Aisa humla hone wala hai tumne bataya tha kya??? Main masti ke bich me information nahi de sakta"..


"Kabhi-kabhi surprise bhi to chahiye jivan me... Main tumhari haalat samjh sakti hun... Sorry love.. bus 75 se 80 din aur uske baad kuchh din rest.. fir tum apni har naughty tamannayen puri kar sakte ho"… Jivisha, Nischal ki aakhon me jhankti, uske khule sine ko chumti hui apni baat kahi.


"Achha mere dimag me ek sawal aa raha hai"..

"Ruko ek minute"… Jivisha ek towel khinchi.. aur sab saaf karti… "haan abhi kaho"..

"Child birth ke baad kya tumhare lactation period shuru ho jayenge"...

"Shayad na ho.. ya shayad ho, wo to sab Bhagwan ki marji hai. Haan lekin ikchha jaroor hai ki mujhe purn mayritv chahiye."

"Chakl'kar medical section me dekhe, tumhare body ke physiological system ke changeg ko"…

"Haan chalenge… lekin baad me... Abhi tumhare sath rahne do.... Abhi kahin nahi jana"…


Jivisha thoda upar ho'kar, Nischal ke chehre ke thik upar apna chehra rakhi. Dono ke chehre khile aur muskaan phail rahi thi.. Nischal aaram se Jivisha ko apne pass lita diya. Dono karwat le'kar apna chehra aamne samne kiye... Ek dusre ko dekh'kar pyar umar sa raha tha aur honth se honth laga'kar apni aankhen mund liye...


Armaan the jo badte rahe aur dono sath me apni bhavnayen baant'te rahe.. ussi din kisi waqt Medical aur sabhi test ke baad Nischal ne alag-alag waqt ke liye alag-alag tarah ka liquid sewan karne ke liye diya, jo purntah natural tha...


Halanki Jivisha ke sharir me biologically kuchh bhi aisa change nahi tha, lekin Nischal yahi maan kar chal raha tha ki abhi uska science itna develope nahi hua jo nature ke iss rashashya ko suljha sake...


East point ke ore Viggo viman apni gati se badh rahi thi. Iss dauran har 4-5 din me kisi space station par hault lete. Jaisa pahla din Bailoo dwara bataya gaya tha ki up side east area poora viran hai... Lekin uske ulat tha yah universe ka hissa... Charo ore jivan aur sabhyta ka srijan tha aur jahan-jahan Nischal ne hault kiya, Space station wale apni service ke badle kimat wasool lete...


Haan ek baat jo sabhi hault me common thi, koi bhi Hurriyent planet ki baat nahi karta... Chup chap kaam karte aur kaam ke badle apni kimat lete… Kahin jyada to kahin bahut jyada kimat wasool ki jaati...


Kayi dino ke yatra ke baad ye log upside east Univese ke hisse se aage badh'kar extream East Universe ke kshetr me dakhil ho gaye the… Universe ka yah poora hissa nirjan tha.. Raste me kuchh grah the jahan Nischal ne hault liya, lekin wo poora nirjan grah tha, jahan koi aabadi nahi basti thi... Na hi kisi bhi prakar ki vanaspati thi..


Extream East Universe me lagatar 8 din ki yatra poori hui thi aur lagbhag 28 din ki poori yatra ke baad Nischal ne Viggo viman ko aakhri hault diya... Extream East Universe me jahan gine chune jagah par hi aabadi basti thi, wahin iss space station ko kafi khoobsurat tarike se devlope kiya gaya tha...


Roffa space station aakhri point tha. Iske aage east ke ore jo pahla grah aata wo Hurriyent hi tha aur uske thik aage aag ka gola Sooraj tha..


Roffa service station, kafi aakarshak aur temprature ko maintain karne ke liye kafi sare equipment laga rakhe the... Bahar ki jalvayu wakai garam thi...


Viggo viman jaise hi space station ke bahar ruka... Ek sandesh aaya... "Apni pehchan batao"…


Nischal ne apni poori pahchan batayi aur in logon ne hari jhandi dikhate huye Viman ko service station se connect kar'ke apne yaham aane ka nimantran diya...


Kamal ka service station tha ye..... Viman aur space station ke bich ek lamba tunnel comnect hua... Tunnel ke jariye jaise hi ye log service station me dakhil huye... Samne hi bade sa welcome board liye kayi sare yuvak aur yuvtiyon ka group khada tha...


Nandni:- Ye aise 8-10 group me khade ho'kar kya kar rahe hain...


Jivisha:- Pata nahi, Nischal aur Ansh jiju gaye hai na... Pata kar'ke aate honge...


Tabhi Ansh puchhe mud'kar thoda uncha bola.… "Iss space station ka guide service hai… kisi ko bhi chun sakte hai"..


Sabne mil'kar ek group ko hiar kiya... Jiska team leader tha Inova. Inova sabke samne apni service batate huye puchhne laga ki kaun si service chahiye...


Nandni:- Full access jisme sari suvidha ho... Fir baad me koi extra charge na joda jaye...


Inova:- Hyper class, isme kewal betting ke liye aapko alag se pay karna hoga... charge 5000 coin per hour...


Nischal:- Aur tumhare yahan ka coin exchange kaise hoga...


Inova:- Per kg food ke liye, 5 coin. Super harvesting food ke liye.. par piece 20 coin, aur metal scrape ka ek rate, per 100kg 10 coin...


Nischal mere pass super harvesting hai, lekin 1 piece ka 100 coin lunga...


Inova:- Hum bargen nahi karte…


Nischal:- Thik hai fir 40 hazar kg metal scrap hi lo fir...


Inova:- Wo bade se sahar jaisa viman aapka hi hai na...


Nischal:- Haan...


Inova kuchh sochte huye Nischal ko apne superior ke pass le gaya... Uske superior ne puchha ki aisa kya hai tumhare pass super harvesting jiski kimat 10 guna bata rahe.


Nischal usse apne viman ke ander faile 20 km ka talab, aur uss talab ki machhli dikhane ke baad... Uske bade hone ka video demonstration diya... Uske growth dekhkte huye... 150 coin per piece baat tay ho gayi, lekin unhe kam se kam 10 hazar pieces machhli chahiye thi....


Sab tay ho gaya... Nischal ne wahan commanding incharge se sampark kiya aur 20 hazar piece machhli ke sath, kayi gallan pani bhi supply kar diya.... 4 card bane aur har card par 7 lakh 50 hazar coin jama the...


Inove ne service start karne se pahle, lagbhag kitne ghante ki service chahiye wo puchh liya… sabse pahle in logon ne 24 ghante ki service lete huye l lakh 20 hazar ka payment kiya...

Mast zabardast shandar update

 

[Asif khan]

Update:-84 ​

Nischal apne viman ke kuchh crew members ko, Vaiman ke alag-alag hisson ke secondry control panel me bhej'kar, khud Mukhya control pannel me tha... "Computer Ji Settelite image clear kijiye Hurriyent palnet se 2000 kilometer ke bich ki"…


Settelite sabhi abhi postion par nahi thi... Moving settilete se utni dur ki image postion nahi ho pa rahi thi… udhar se nirdesh aaye ki lagbhag 8 ghantey aur lagenge settelite viman ko pisition karne me... Roffa se le'kar Viggo me baitha har insan se le'kar pashu pakchhi tak thode tension me the... Waqt ki ke sath-sath Nischal bhi aage badh raha tha... Aur ab waqt aa chuka tha, uss Last Line ko cross karne ka, jahan se bhay ki seama shuru hoti...


Nischal sabhi crew ko active karte... "Boys poora system on kar'ke, Last Line ke bahar hum ek trail lenge aur uske baad Last Line cross karenge... Sabhi ready….. Sabhi secondry control panel se "ok" ka reply aaya aur Nischal ne command dena shuru kiya...


200km me faila hexagonal viman, jiski rachna lagbhag ek star ki tarah thi… iski motai matlab niche satah se le'kar upar roof ki jo unchai thi, wo takriban 12km kilometer ki thi...


200 kilometer me faile hexgonal viman me, aage se 16 km uncha teer ke nok ka shape tha. Ye viman ke kul unchai se 4 kilometer jyada uncha rakha gaya tha, taki samne se yadi ko ulka se bhada rasta ho to bich ki body surakhit rahe .. Teer ke ek shape ke khatm hone ke baad ussi se lage dusra shape shuru ho jata... aur iss tarah se aage ka pura hexagonal dhancha bana...


Nischal ne jaise hi command diya poora viman re suffle hua... Viman karwat le'kar takriban 4 minute me khada ho gaya.… Ab shape kuchh aisi thi ki pade huye star ko khada kar diya gaya ho...


Star shape ko agar dhyan se dekhen to aisa lagta hai mano kisi circle ke edge par charo ore se triangle shape ko rakh diya gaya hai… Nischal poore aaklan aur viman ko uss bhishan heat se bachane ke liye poore pukhta intzam ke sath nikla tha...


Viman ke aage chhote se triangle shape ke bich me, banti poore circular body ko poora 2 complete sheet se cover kiya gaya tha.. Aur jo aage ki vayvastha thi, wo aur bhi jyada kamal ki thi….


Hexagonal shape jisme 6 points the.. Isse aage se nikla 6 triangle shape bhi maan sakte hain, jo dekhne par bilkul nukile teer ki bhanti dikhta hai... Yun samjhiye ki ek cricke ke upar 6 teer ko sabhi ore se banaya gaya tha... Nischal ne un sabhi teer ke shape ke upar ek ke baad ek 30 teer ko laga diye jo complete sheet ke bane the... Taki ek-ek karke sabhi aage ke capping wale teer jabtak jale, tabtak ye log Hurriyent planet pahunch jaye...


To Nischal ne Bhisham aag se bachne ke liye teer ke shape par aage se 30 complete sheet ka cap chadha diya tha... Aur ye sabi 6 tikono ke liye kiya gaya tha... Uske alawa jo 2 triangle ke upri hisse ka gape ban raha tha, usse ulta triangle space kahna galat nahi hoga...


Yadi star ke shape ko dhyan se dekhenge to pata chalega ki 2 nukile point ke bich me jo khali space hai... Wo bhi khali space triangle jaisa hi hai... Bus wo ulta triangle hai… Aur Nischal ne 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko ek ulte triangle se fill kar diya tha, aur ye khali space bhi 30 complete sheet metal se bhada hua tha...


Ek complete metel sheet ko inlogon ne taiyar kaise kiya tha, wahi sabse jyada rochak tha… 2 meter² ki chhoti-chhoti metal sheet tayar ki gayi thi, jo 1 fit mota tha... Uske alawa jo dusri bhatti me jala, wo thi haddiyan. Wo haddiyan jo poori tarah jalne ke baad bhatti me bacha, ya jo dhuan ban'kar raakh chimni se nikla aur floor par dhul ke saman aakar jamta gaya, usse samet liya gaya tha... Jise kisi bhi tapman par dobara jalaya nahi ja sakta. Yadi un raakh ki 1 inch ki bhi deewar bana de, to aage ka tapman jo bhi rahe wo pichhe pass nahi ho sakta tha.. aur unhi raakh ke bhandar ko ye log bsttiyon se samet liye..


1 fit mote aur 2 meter² ke metel sheet ke upar, hard chipkane wala padarth laga'kar raakh chipkaya gaya... Ek metel ke shit par, layer by layer karke takriban 4 inch ka raakh chipkaya gaya... Aur 2 meter² ke 10 metel sheet ko nut-volt se tight karke 1 complete metel sheet ka nirman kiya gaya tha... Chunki Nilbhut wale kisi bhi surface ke aar, paar ho sakte the, isliye 90000 log, plus poori technical team milkar ye sara kaam Viman ke roof par hi kar rahe the...


2 metel sheet se viman ke bich ki body ko cover kiya gaya tha… Star ki tarah dikhne wale Viggo viman ko khada bhi isliye kiya gaya tha, taki body par heat ka imapact na pade, balki sara head aage ke ore hi rahe jahan 30 layer complete metel sheet chadhaya gaya tha. Sath hi sath 2 triangle ke bich ke space ko bhi cover kar dene se, ab aage se viman complete round shape le chuka tha...


Chunki Viggo viman ki sanrachna part by part ko jod'kar hui thi, aur iske charo ore ki deewar 20 fit ke layer se bana tha. Uss 20 fit layer ke ander itne moving channels the ki kisi bhi section ko move kiya ja sakta tha... Jaise hi Viggo viman ko khada kiya gaya, wo kisi bade tire ki bhanti dikhne laga tha...


Tire ke saman sanrachna wale Viggo viman ke aage ka 500 miter ka hissa, seperately kafi tej gati se gol-gol ghumta, taki heat ka asar distribute hota rahe.


Nischal sari testing ke baad kafi relax sa mehsus karne laga… Viggo viman ki gati ko kuchh kam kar'ke auto pilot mode par dal diya aur hall me aa'kar wo Bitti aur Gopal ke bade se gang ki baten sunn'ne laga.... Bahut hi jyada pyare the ye log...


Nischal ne Bitti ko Jivisha aur baki sabse contact karne ka charge de'kar, Bitti se kah diya ki wahan apni maa ko bol dene "relax kare aur maze kare... Sabhi testing safal raha hai... Jaldi se kaam khatam kar'ke milte hain"...


Bitti apne aaram se pankh faila'kar chair par baithi... Wo to aur bhi kamal ki nikli... Apne pankh ke nichle kinare se bhi wo key-board par khitir-pitir kar sakti thi... Bitti ne sabse turant sampark kiya... "Kaisi ho maa, ye chehre ki hawaeyan kyon udi hai... Hi massi... Hello mausa ji"…


Jivisha:- To contact karne ki jimmedari humari Bitti ko mili hai.…


Bitti:- Maa, Maasi, aur mausa ji... Aap teeno relax karo, kyonki yahan sab parikashan safal raha hai... Baba aap sab se kaam khatm karne ke baad aaram se milenge... Right baby..


Jivisha hansti hui... "Yes my sweeto, tum sab apne baba ko pareshan to nahi kar rahe"…


Bitti:- Ohkey bye...


Jivisha:- Areee kya hua…


Bitti:- Faltu ki sawal puchhogi to yahi aayega...


Jivisha:- Haan thik hai nahi puchhti…


Sabhi baith'kar gappe ladane lage... Inki baten thi ki khatm hi nahi ho rahi thi... Tabhi Jivisha ke hall me ek sandesh aaya... Usse Roffa Space Center ke Chief ki party me aane ka nimantran mila tha...


Jivisha line disconnect karti… "Hmmmm, thik hai, dekh lete hain yahan ke chief ki bhi party… kya kahti hai Nandu…


Nandni:- Haan haan kyon nahi...


Sahamti bani aur teeno party ke liye taiyar hone lage… 37 ghante bit chuke the aur jis hisab se Viggo viman ki gati thi, lagbhag ek ghante aur kuchh minton me Last Line tak pahunch jate, jahan se viggo viman apni poorn kshmta me aage badhta aur takriban 1 ghante me wo 3000 km ka safar tay karta…


Choonk hone ki koi gunjaish nahi thi, isliye Nischal viman ko slow kar chuka tha taki ek baar aur achhe se wo sab kuchh check kar sake ..


Nischal bacchon ke sath baith'kar takribam 45 minute bitane ke baad, viman ki gati lagbhag 5km/hr kar chuka tha... Hall me hi meeting hui, jahan Nilbhut samuday ke logon ko aadesh mila ki jaise hi Hurriyent planet par viman land hoga, poori viman hi bhumigat ho jani chahiye… Khair viman bhumigat ke liye Nilbhut samuday ke sainikon ne haan to kah diya tha, lekin viman ke regular shape aur khade tire wali position me kya fark tha, wo ander baith'kar koi samajh nahi paya tha….


Nischal ke kahte hi Viggo viman ko bhumigat karne ke liye, Nilbhut sainik viman ke alag-alag hisson me postion le chuke the... Kaam thoda muskil tha, lekin utni hi safai ke sath teji se karna tha... 500 Nilbhut sainik jo dragon babies ke liye extra aaye the... Unhone bacchon ko apne bich samet rakha tha... Ek baar sab kuchh set hone ke baad viman ne ab dhire-dhire gati badhana shuru kiya...


Idhar nimantran milte hi, Roffo space station ke chief ki party me Jivisha, Nandni aur Ansh ne shirkat kar rahe the... Teeno jaise hi wahan pahunche, chief unke pass baithne ka aamatarn dete.… "Jivisha, tumhe kya lagta hai... Kitni dur jane ke baad tumhara ye bada sa viman jalega"…


Jivisha:- Itna vishawas kaise...


Chief:- Itihaas me ek hi viman hai jo ab tak Hurriyent planet tak pahunchi thi, wo bhi bus kuch der ruke, thodi si dhatu samet'kar nikal gaye... Yahan har dusre din ek viman Hurriyent ke ore nikalta hai. Kabhi kabhi to 3-4 viman Hurriyent ke liye ek sath nikalte aur unme me ek bhi laut'kar nahi aaya... Kayi aise viman hai jo Hurriyent planet tak bhi pahunche bus sirf hume itna hi pata hai. Aage wahan unke sath kya hua ye batane ke liye koi lauta hi nahi...


Nandni:- bhav kya hai aaj ka wo to batao....


Chief:- Mission successful hone par, 1 sikke ke 5000 sikke... kyonki ye viman to last line ke thik pichhe hi khada ho gaya... Lagta hai aage jaye ki na jaye ussi soch me doobe hain... Achha hi hoga wapas laut aaye to.… Insan to roj hi marte hain, lekin tumhara viman, wo poore Universe me apne jaisa eklauta hoga... Kayi sare viman dekhe hain lekin aaj tak uss jaisa viman nahi dekha...


Nandni:- Koi baat nahi tum to humare 10 lakh coin abhi laga do mission successful par…


Chief:- Tunhare pass yahan rukne ke liye mere khyal se 6 din se jyada ke coin nahi bache hai... Usme se bhi 10 lakh sikka laga rahi...


Jivisha:- 10 lakh main bhi laga deti hun mission successful par...


Chief:- Haar gaye to bahut hi jayada afsos hoga.… Soch lo...


Ansh:- Total hum teeno ka mila'kar 50 lakh coin laga do...


Chief:- 50 lakh coin dene ke baad to tumhare kal ke baad ke liye bhi coin nahi bachenge... aur iss betting ka result to Hurriyent se lautne ke baad hi declare hoga... So yahan rukne ke minimum 2 din ke paise to hone hi chahiye...


Nandni:- Wo to hum coin exchange kar lenge...


Chief:- Wo kaise.…


Ansh:- Machhliyan bech'kar


Chief:- Mazak to nahi kar rahi... Main bahut jyada kimat dunga to 1 piece machhli ka 10 coin dunga...


Ansh:- Main kam se kam 10 hazar coin lunga 1 piece ka...


Chief:- Rakh lo apne pass...


Nandni:- Yahan 200 guest lag rahe hain iss hall me... Aaj 800 fish jayegi... 20 hazark piece shayad abhi jyada lag raha hoga... Lekin kewal nar aur nar lene se kaun wo char din me 20 hazar machhli se 1 lakh honge, isliye ab kimat badh gayi... 40000 coin 1 piece ke...


Chief:- Ye humare sath cheating hui hai... Aur kisi ke ghar me ghus'kar usse hi cheat karna mahnga par sakta hai...


Jivisha:- 20 hazar piece bola gaya tha hume... Na ki usme nar kitne honge ya mada... Hume dhamkao mat... Ab to kimat hogi 1 lakh coin 1 piece ki aur kam se kam 10 hazar piece leni hogi...


Chief chillaya "guards"... Aur agle hi pal uss hall me sabhi dragon babies katar me khade ho gaye. Upar dragon babies ki katar, niche 12 dus futiya sher ke bachhe line lagaye aur unke pichhe 20 futiya Sher aur Sherni Adhmya aur Admee samne se sabko ghurti hui khadi thi...

badhiya

 

[Asif khan]

Update:-86 ​

Jald hi viman ko surakhit nahi kiya jata to mahaj 15 minute me viman ki body jal jati... Ye body itni badi thi ki kin-kin hisson me ander se aag pakadta, yah nischal ko bhi nahi pata tha... Haan lekin jo dar tha wo aankhon se dikh raha tha... Viggo viman khone ka dar…


Pahle jaal mahal gaya ab Viggo viman. Nischal engine, medical section, aur viman se tarikaban 1200 section ko lagbhag alag karne ka command de chuka tha… bus final command dene ki der thi... Poora viman na sahi, jitna bachaya ja sakta tha usse bacha'kar bhumigat kiya ja sakta tha... Master control room me baita Nischal gahri soch me dooba... Aankhon ke umde aanshu kab aabkhon se chhalak aaye pata bhi nahi chala...


Aankhon se uske lagaatar aanshu aa rahe the, lekin aur koi chara nahi tha... Gopal aur Bitti, apni toliyon ke sath masti me lage the. Na jane unhe bhi shayad Nischal ki pira ka aabhash hua ho. Nokha ke sath aaye baki ke Nilbhut sainik jo kewal Dragon babies ko sambhale huye the, wo sabhi dragon babies ko rokte rah gaye lekin kisi bacche ne unki na suni aur sab ke sab mukhya controle room me pahunch gaye...


Bitti aur Gopal dono Nischal ke kandhe par baith'kar uske lagatar bahte aanshu ko apne se pochhte huye...


"Baba main kuchh din baad bahut badi ho jaungi, fir apne pith par bitha'kar poore antriksh ki shair karwaungi. Tum ro mat...

"Nahi baba mere sath sawari karenge"…


Jaise hi Bitti aur Gopal ne apna-apna prastav diya, baki ke bhi sabhi dragon wahan halla machane lage... Nischal apna baanh failate…. "Tumhari maa ki tarah to main ek sath pyar nahi dikha sakta, lekin machine aur jamin se badi sapatti to tum sab ho"…


Viggo viman jane ka afsos kahin gayab sa ho gaya. Dragon babies ko dekh'kar Nischal kafi sukoon mehsus kar raha tha... Tabhi Nilbhut samuday ke khoji wahan pahunch gaye. Khoji ke wahan pahunchte hi Nischal unhe jigyasavash dekhne laga...


Khoji yahan rukne ke khatre ko bhanpte huye... "Sahjade yahan thodi si samsya hai... Planet ke jin-jin hisson me jivan basta hai, wo 2 pahadiyon ke bich ki sankari ghati hai... Ye ghati lagbhag 4 se 5 kilometer gahra, aur ghati ki chaurai 1 kilomter se le'kar 20 kilometer tak ka hai"..


Nischal:- Hmmmm... Koi baat nahi hai... Lagta hai hum viman nahi bacha sakte... Maine viman ke 1200 khand kiye hain, unhe lekar nikalte hain...


Nilbhut sainikon ke mukhiya, Bhoro... "Sahjada 2 ghatiyon ke bich yadi viman ko wapas lita de to hum bhumigat kar sakte hain...


Nischal:- "Bhoro jo samsya khade viman ko bhumigat karne ke sath hota, wahi iss me bhi hoga... 200 kilometer me faila ye viman.… Yahan ke surface ko jaise hi ye viman cover karega, kam se kam 2000 jwalamukhi ke muhane ko hi cover kar dega... Tum jabtak iska aadha hissa yani 10 kilometer ka hissa ander le ja rahe hoge tab wo jwalamukhi blast kar chuka hoga"...

"Jamin ke 10 se 15 kilometer ke garv me ye viman. Aur iss viman me itne barood load hai, ki kewal iska engine section me aag lagti hai, to ye poora planet ko le doobega... Main chah kar bhi ye risk nahi le sakta... Dekho baat karte-karte aage ka 6th layer bi ja raha hai... Ab to viman ki body bhi heat ke sampark me hogi...


Bhoro:- Ek ilaaka to hai jiska maidani bhaag kayi lakh varg kilometer tak faila hai aur uss ilake ka tapman bhi lagbhag 200⁰ celcius ka hoga... Lekin..


Niachal:- Lekin kya Bhoro…


Bhoro:- Wo ek bura sapna jaisa kshetr hai kyonki wo ilaka shayad iss planet ke sabse khatarnak kaal jivon ka ilaka hai...


Nischal:- Koi baat nahi hai fir to... Tum location share karo …


Jaise hi location sajha hua... Nischal viman ke left aur right wing ka engine start karte huye.… "Bhoro sabhi bacchon ko aur sainikon ke sath secure chember me jao.… 20 secure chember tumhe satah par hi milenge… sucure chember sahit bhumigat hona... Jab tak main na lautun tab tak koi bhi secure chember se bahar nahi niklenge"…


Bhoro:- Aapke aane me waqt laga tab Sahjade...


Nischal:- Ek secure chember me viman hai aur ek secure chember me yahan ke dhatu ko kaise uss viman par cover karna hai, uske sare equipment aur uss equipment ko chalane ke liye poora manual mil jayega... Koi sawal...


Bhoro:- Nahi Sahjade...


Nischal:- Sabko le'kar abhi niklo... Ek bhi yahan chhute na... Computer ji... Yahan maujood har ek life ko mere screen par dikhaeye"


Computer ji jab'tak screen par har life ki live location dikhata, tabtak Bhoro aur Nilbhut samuday ke kul 8500 sainik, sabhi bacchon ko secure chember ko le'kar bhumigat ho chuke the… Haan lekin Nischal ko aaschrya aur ussi ke sath 2 ke upar utna hi jyada gussa tab aa gaya, jab wahan computer par 3 life aur dikh rahe the... aur ab koi Nilbhut sainik bhi nahi tha viman me...


Aage ka 6th layer lagbhag damage hone ke kagar par tha... Complete metal sheet ab khulna shuru ho chuka tha... Nischal waqt ganwa nahi sakta tha, isliye viman ko teji ke sath hawa me lena shuru kiya aur Computer ji ko command dete.… "Computer ji teeno ko yahan master control room me lekar aao"…


Teeno jaise hi pahunche…. Bitti aur Gopal pankh ke pichhe muh chhipaye, Nischal ke daantne ka intzar kar rahe the... Wahin nischal location set kar'ke viman ko auto-pilot command de raha tha...


Viman poori raftar se aage badhi aur idhar Nischal….. "Bittiiiii, Gopallll..."


Dono:- Baba wo ladki se pahle inquiry kar lo na... Hum to yahin rahenge...


Nischal:- Usse to main baad me dekhunga lekin tum dono...


Bitti:- Gopal tu bol...


Gopal:- Main kyon akela fansoon...


Bitti:- Baba mujhe Gopal ne roka tha..


Niachal:- Tumne baat nahi maani apne commander ki..


Gopal:- Usse humari baat maan'ni pari..


Nischal:- Jarra samjhaoge kaise...


Jaise hi Gopal ne muh khola... Nischal haath dikhate... "Baad me baat karta hun... Tum dono nahi tum teeno yahin raho"…


Bitti aur Gopal dono ek sath... "Inse parichay to karwao"


Nischal:- Ye hai Vardali… Astak ki vansaj. Bahut shaktishali... Iss universe me kewal ek inka hi samuday sarv'shresth hai… paricahy karte raho… main viman land karwa raha... Bahar ka kaam samapt kar'ke milta hun. Aur dono kisi tarah ke raham ki ummid mat karna mujhse… computer ji teeno me se koi bhi bahar nahi aane chahiye... Sabko bandi room me quid karo...


Bitti aur Gopal ek sath... "Baba hume mujrim bana rahe..."


Nischal unki baat ansuni karte apna kaam karta raha... Issi bich Bitti... "Baba kam se kam iss aunty ka to muh khol do... Hum inhi se baat karenge"…


"Dekho baba main kah raha hun hume bhi le chalo sath... Warna main maa ko kah dunga, aap ka chakkar hai iss aunty ke sath"… Gopal dhamkate huye kaha...


"Tum sab ko jo teri maa aur maasi film dikha'kar abhi se paka aam bana rahi hai, uski khabar main baad me lunga.. Oye comouter ji... In dono ka muh khula kyon chhod diye"…


Computer ji... "Mere bolne par pratibandh laga dete ho, isliye in dono ka muh khula chhod diya"…


Idhar jab'tak set location par viman land hone lagi... Nischal ne sabka muh band karwate… Bandi grih yani ki secure jail me dal diya... Viman land kar chuki thi... Nischal viman se bahar aaya...


Nilbhut khoji shayad galat temprature aakalan karke gaye the, ya jab Nilbhut khoji yahan aaye ho, tab alag temprature tha, lekin iss waqt iss maidan ka atmospheric temprature 300⁰ celcius ke aas pass tha...


Garmi ke karan poora maidan jhulsa hua tha... Khusk aur garam hawaye chehre ko poora sek rahi thi... Swans lo to aisa lagta jaise garam aag hi shwans me khinch rahe ho... Lagatar heat ke karan atomispheric burn ho raha tha... Iss vajah se oxygen ki kafi kami thi iss jagah par...


Nischal tej-tej shwans khichta, khada ho'kar idhar, udhar dekh raha tha... Dhul bhi raakh jaisi kali-kaali udd rahi thi... Poori jamin pak'kar kaali par chuki thi... Haan uss maidan me kuchh ajib tarah ke jhadiyan jaroor thi...


Gadhe hare rang ki jhadiyan jo lagbhag 2 fit lambi hogi... Jhariyan dekhne me bilkul hard lag rahi thi aur jamin se bilkul sidha upar ke ore nikla hua tha...


"Kaisi darawani jagah hai baba"…. "Yahan hum kya karne aaye hain baba"…


Niachal ke ek kandhe par Bitti aur dusre kandhe par Gopal baith'kar, apni-apni baat kaha. Nischal ek baar dayen to ek baar bayen ghum'kar…. "Tum dono ko kuchh kahne ka fayda bhi hai... Ab ye computer ji ka sequrity bridge khali tumne toda, ya uss madam ne bhi"…


Gopal:- Baba humare pass computer chicha ka complete access hai.


Nischal:- Aur wo kaise...


Gopal:- Bachapan me ek din hum Viggo viman par khel rahe the… Main, Bitti… Hum dono ke hi gardan atak kisi chij me atak gayi. Juban bahar aa gaye aur pran halakh me. Hum chillate rahe par computer chicha ne nahi suna... Bus fir kya tha... Maa gusse ma pahunchi... Hume bachaya aur computer chicha ko dantaan diya. Fie hume de diya computer chicha ka full access...


Nischal ek baar left dekha, ek baar right aur fir upar aasman me.… "Hey uparwale ye Nandni aur Jivisha kam thi, jo ye dono ussi ki parchhayi bante ja rahe"….


"Wowwwwwwww.… Ye to kamal ke hain"…..

"Itssss Awesomeeee"…

"Ye tum dono…. Woooooo... Namaste sir, how you"


Nischal jabtak upar aasmaan me dekh raha tha, thik uss waqt ek bada sa laal dragon uss maidan me utra.. Bhayanak aur Vishalkay…. Shwans bhi chhode to naak se hawa nahi balki aag nikal rahi thi.. Wishper planet ke dragon se bilkul alag...


Pankh jaise chattan ke bane ho. Poore sarir ka koi aisa hissa nahi jo mulayam ho... Sabse darawani to uske ridh ke haddi ki line bana rahi thi, jiske upar 2 fit ka nukila haddi ka kil laga hua tha, jo punchh se le'kar uske sar tak khada tha...


Bitti aur Gopal to iss look wale dragon ko dekh'kar hi flat ho gaye... Haan Nischal jab apna sar aakash ke ore kiye apni bhavna upar wale ko suna raha tha, thik ussi waqt in dono ki baten sun'kar jab usne samne najar diya, tab Nischal harbara gaya.…


Bitti aur Gopal to bacche the, lekin Nischal thehra ek universe traveller, usse shikari aur aam jibon me fark karna aata tha... Aur ye iss grah ka aam sa jiv to nahi hi tha, balki ek shikari tha...


Laal dragon ke samne teeno kisi chhote teddy ke saman dikh rahe the... Nischal apni baat kah'kar dhime se Bitti aur Gopal ko wapas viman me jane ke liye kaha, lekin jabtak Nischal dono ko viman me jane kahta, tab tak dono uddte-uddte uss laal dragon ke aakhon ke samne ja pahunche the…


Dono jaise hi uske aankhon ke samne pahunche, wah laal dragon apna bada sa muh khol liya... Nischal ko bhanpte der na lagi ki aage kya hone wala hai...


Nischal ne apni chain nikali aur agle hi pal wo dragon ek jordar takkad kha'kar ludakta hua kahin dur jakar gira... Dur ja'kar girne ke dauran, usne jo muh khola tha uss se ek tarah ke laal rang ki tej hight wave nikli thi...


Takkar ke karan uss laal dragon ka muh ka nishana badal gaya aur wo wave jaise hi bhumi se takrayi, tej visphot jaisa awaj hua...

Nischal chilla'kar Bitti aur Gopal ko viman me jane ke liye kaha. Jab tak Bitti aur Gopal apne chhote chhote pankh se uddan bhar'kar viman ke ore bhagte... Tab'tak wo dragon fir uth khada hua... Usne dur se hi wo laal wave fir se chala diya...

Nischal teji dikhate huye ek lamba chauda vayumandaliya aavran banaya jiske piche Bitti aur Gopal ko usne surakshit kiya... Vayumandaliya aavran se usne Bitti aur Gopal ko surakhit to kar liya lekin Nischal ko bhi aabhash ho gaya ki uska paala aam kaal jiv se nahi para hai.…

Kyonki uske laal wave ne ek baar me hi uske vayumandaliya aavran ki dhajjiyan udda kar rakh dee. Sirf itna hi nahi balki uss laal wave ka sampark kuchh kuchh uske sharir se bhi hua.… Kuchh aisa sampark jisme pani ke chhinten saman wo laal wave nichal ke sharir par para lekin jahan bhi pada, kapde samet chhed kar dale...

Atayant hi pida me Nischal dikh raha tha... Kisi tarah khud ko balance kiye wah khada raha... Aur tirchhi najaron se Bitti aur Gopal ko viman ke ander jate dekh raha tha...

"Lagta hai musibat badhne wali hai"... Samne ka najara hi kuchh kuchh aisa tha... Poore aakash me laal aur kaale dragon mandra rahe the... Aur samne to ek tha hi, aur koi bhi dragon baat karne ke mood me nahi lag raha tha..

Shhaayannnnnnn... Ki awaj charo ore se gunjne lagi... Yah hawa ko chid'kar niche aate uss teji se girne wale wave ki awaj thi jo wo dragon apne muh se chhod rahe the... Kala dragon kala wave chhod raha tha aur laal dragon laal wave... Sab bilkul satika nishana par...

Itne tej hote humle se Nischal bachne ke liye Nischal ke pass ek hi upay tha… Wo tha uska chain... Apni chain ko tej gati se lahra'kar Nischal bhumi se connect karta aur khud ko khinch'kar utni hi teji se kabhi aage to kabhi dayen bayen karke khud ko bachata…

Chain ke sath khinchne ki gati to Nischal ke pahle prapt gati se bhi 4 guna jyada thi, isliye kisi bhi dragon ke liye Nischal ko bhagte huye dekh pana kafi muakil sa ho gaya tha... Unke najron ko bhi wahi najar aata jo bakiyon ko chain ke sath Nischal ko dekh'kar mehsus hota... Abhi ek point par khada tha aur najar ghuma kar dekha to kahin aur khada hai...

Shayannn ke tej vissil sound charo hi disha se aa rahi thi…. Boom, boom, boom, boom... Charo ore bhumi par tej tej bomb phootne jaisi awaj... Bitti screen par roti hui... "Gande dragon... Baba ko maar rahe hai... Gopal humla kar dun kya"…

"Mera khoob khaul raha hai... Baba yahan se wahan bach kyon rahe hai... Marte kyon nahi"…

Bitti:- Computer chicha missile load karo, aur koi barf jamane wala missile load karo chicha... Ye to garam aur toofani pahle se hai...

Gopal:- Computer chicha sath me inke parkhache udd jaye... Aise talvar bhala aur hathiyar type blade bhi load karo... Ek baar jam jaye to inke tukde tukde kar dun...


Bitti aur Gopal poore aawesh me aate huye, apni hath khitir-pitir command board par chalate huye command dene lage aur computer ji inke hisab se missile loading ka kaam kar rahe the…

Wah bro kia khene ye hurrynuet planet ka safar to Kamal ka h
Lafz nahi tareef kliye such u r a genius man

 

[Kaminaraj]

Next update pls

 

[nain11ster]

Khubsurti ki ek aur missal ish adbhut update me

Thanks a lot Nevil bhai

 

[nain11ster]

Gajab ki bahaduri ka pradarshan kiya mahabali ne ish nayi update me

Ji shukriya abhi to action shuru hua hai

 

[nain11ster]

Wah bhai lagta hai gopal or bitti apne balbute pe poora hi jang jeet jayenge.

Hahaha... Haan shayad aisa hi ho... Abhi clear ho jayega