I liked the way you started the story. The hero of the story is Nischal and perhaps the heroine is Jivisha. I have seen this forced marriage many times and I do not like it. Jivisha is very beautiful and lovely.
One thing is not understood, why does Nischal not understand what someone is saying, or Nischal is mad. Jivisha is a good family girl. Seeing the love of Chirag and Jivisha makes my heart happy.
Everything was understood in a flashback from where it started. Jivisha's antics make me laugh, she is like a small child and is good in gimmick. Another story is being told to hide a story.
Sure, Jivisha is not giving up. Fortunately, the two are back once again. I request you, I am reading this story for the first time, so if you slow down the speed of the update, otherwise I will not be able to read it properly and review it.
All the updates I read so far were very good. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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.. baki intzar hai aap ke comment ka
.. jivisha ajab karname ki list lambi hai .. dhire dhire sabhi aap tak pahunchenge .. aap bus story enjoy karte rahiye 