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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Aakash.

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Don't know why I am very happy inside seeing the friendship of Nandini and Nischal. :bff: Jivisha's life is in danger, nothing should happen to that innocent. :pray: Now Nandini also has two types of power, wow. :yippi:Both lovers are worried about their problems, but the victory will be of love.:heart: Nischal's actions also makes a depressed person happy. :lol1:
Jivisha finally spoke her heart and that too in front of everyone. :love2: Today I am very happy, finally my dream is fulfilled, two lovers become one. :happyjump: You made a great scene that I liked. I want all updates to be just lovely. Now every night every day will be full of love. Plunge into the sea of love.
:smooch::girlkiss::married::kiss::love1::kiss2:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Kasak khush hoti hui Jatin ke gale lag gayi. Uska chehra bayan kar raha tha ki wo kitni khush thi… Kasak ko aisa lag raha tha, jaise bhagwan ne uski sun lee ho aur Jivisha ki samasya aaj sham disco me solve ho jani hai…


Kasak ander se kuch acha mehsus karti Jivisha ke pass pahunchi. Jivisha ke liye bhi khamosh sa sama tha, jaise anterman me andhera chha raha ho aur sab kala-kala dikh raha tha...


"Hmmmm ! Naraj hai mujhe se"… Kasak, Jivisha ke kandhe par hath deti hui kahne lagi…


"Nahi bus aise hi leti thi.. aur naraj main tum se ho sakti hun kya"… Jivisha uthkar baith'ti hui kahne lagi..


"Tere chehre par likha hai, kitna tension me hai tu.. Janti hai jab kuch nahi samjh me aaye to kya karna chahiye"… Kasak apni baat kahti hui, Jivisha ko dekhkar muskurane lagi…


Jivisha, bhi thodi si khushi ka izhar karti…. "Haan pata hai, jab kuch samjh me nahi aaye to… Go With Flow.… Shayad bite dino ki gahri chhap aisi pari hai Kasak, ki dimag ne kaam karna band kar diya ho jaise. Kabhi-kabhi to lagta hai, sara jahan mera hai aur main iss jahan me khushiyon ke rang bhar rahi hun. Wahin kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai jaise sab jar-jar ki stithi me hai, aur main kisi virane me kahin akeli pari hun".. ..


Kasak:- Sorry bahna, wo chhote papa ko sunkar main thodi paresan ho gayi thi, aur apni pareshani me ye tak bhul gayi ki yadi maine sabke samne tumhari jhuti shadi ki baat nahi kahi hoti to ho sakta tha Nischal yahan ka chaheta ban jata.


Jivisha:- Shayad wo meri kismat me hi nahi Kasak, isliye jab bhi mere karib aata hai, kuch aisi ghatna ghat jati hai ki wo mujhse dur chala jata hai… Uski chahat mujhe khinchti hai bahan…


Kasak thodi bhawuk hokar Kasak ke gale lagti apna dil halka karne lagi… kuch der tak dono bahan shant rahi. Fir Kasak, Jivisha ko khud se alag karti hui, uske aanshu ponchhti kahne lagi…. "Rone se koi samsya ka samadhan to hona nahi hai.. isliye….."


Jivisha hansti hui… "Isliye… Go With The Flow. Kismat ko apna kaam karne do, hum apna kaam karte hai aur parinam waqt par chhodna hi samjhdari hai"..


(Kasak ki ek theory, jise usne apni bahan ko bhi sikhaya tha. Aksar un mamlon ke liye, jab dono he shararat karti payi jati thi. Parinam ki parwah kiye bagair kuch bhi karte chale jana)


Kasak:- Acha sun, chhote papa ne tumhare aur Nischal ke riste se aitraj nahi jataya hai... Bus wo khud me santusht hona chahte hai.. ab sab tere upar hai..


Jivisha:- Dekhte hain Kasak, humari kahani kis mod par hume le jati hai… ab to jo hona hoga wo hokar rahega…


Dono bahano ko bich kafi lambi baat chit hoti rahi… sham ke 6.30 baje Nischal, Nandni ke sath unhe pick up karne pahunch gaya aur wahan se teeno disco nikal gaye…


Disco pahunch kar teeno ladkiyan bar counter par baith'kar 2 taqila shot marne ke baad dance floor par pahunch gayi, wahin Nischal bar counter par baith'kar Jivisha ko dekhne me vyast ho gaya…. Usse dekh'kar arman jaise bahen faila rahe ho. Aur hasrat sirf itni si thi ki Jivisha bus chand lamhe usse bhi dede. Chand lamha jo sirf un dono ka ho.


Haal-e-dil to Jivisha ka bhi, kuch Nischal ke jaisa hi tha... Uspar se jab wo taiyar hokar aaj samne aaye, na chahte huye bhi Jivisha ki tirchhi najar, baar-baar Nischal par hi rahti. Uska pyara sa chehra aisa lag raha tha, dhire-dhire dil me utar raha ho…


Kuch der dance karne ke baad Jivisha aakar Nischal ke pass baith gayi…. "Papa mujhe Shresh se shadi ke liye kah rahe the"… aate hi Jivisha, Nischal se apni baat kahi aur uske ore dekhne lagi..


Nischal:- Kal ka wada yaad hai na..


Jivisha muskurati hui… "Haan mujhe to yaad hai lekin tumhe pata hai na, kis shart par tum mujhe le ja rahe ho"..


Nischal:-.Chhodo ye sab, wo to bhawishya hai, aur bhawishya ke bare me koi kuch nahi kah sakta.. Abhi na to tumhari shadi ho rahi hai aur na hi tum mujhse dur ho..


Jivisha apni hath aage badhati… "Ek dance ho jaye fir"..


Shadi ki baat par Nischal ka utra chehra aise khila, jise dekhkar Jivisha pyari si muskan dene se khud ko rok nahi payi. Kuch lamhe dono ek dusre ko muskura'kar dekhte rahe. Nischal, Jivisha ke hath ko thamte chal diya.


Dono ek dusre ke sath dance floor par chal diye. Dhimi awaz ki wo madhur sangit, Jivisha, Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar apne paun dhire-dhire dance floor par chalane lagi aur Nischal uske kamar me hath dal'kar, uska sath dene laga. Dono ek dusre ko mehsus karte apne kadam chala rahe the aur uss pal me khote chale ja rahe the...


Dono ko sath dance karte dekh Nandni aur Kasak dono muskura rahi thi. Itne me Jatin bhi wahan pahunch gaya aur Kasak ke pass baith'te huye… "You are looking gorgious sweetheart"..


Nandni:- Acha !!! Kya yahan isklauti yahi gorgious hai, baki sab to asur kul ke hai na..


Jatin:- Hey Nandni.. shristhi par paida hua har jiv sunder hai.. lekin mere liye to meri ek hi duniya hai…


Kasak:- Hum log filmy hai aur ye pothi wale hain.. suno Jatin tunhari baten bhakti channel par hi achi lagegi.


Waqt shayad sach me Nischal ke anukul nahi tha aur virodhi apni chaal, chal chuke the. Kuch pal ek-dusre me Nischal aur Jivisha khoye huye honge, Kasak ne Jivisha ko bula liya. Dance ka mahol khatm hote hi Nischal aakar bar counter par baith gaya. Idhar Jivisha, Kasak aur Nandni ke pass jakar baith gayi aur Kasak, Nischal ke sath kaise uski shadi ho uske upay par puri charcha karne lagi.


Tabhi uss mahol me ek jordar hooting honi shuru ho gayi. Ansh bhi un sab ke bich pahunch gaya aur wo sab aapas me baat karne lage… Nischal dur se hi sabko hanste aur bolte dekh raha tha.. aur un sab ko aise hanste bolte dekh uska chehre par halki mayusi si aa gayi…


"Shayad ye shama kabhi mera tha hi nahi".. Nischal wine ka pyala ek jhatke me pite huye khud se hi kahne laga…. "Bahut dukhi lag rahe ho Nischal"… Shresh aka Apini uske karib baith'te huye kahne laga…


Apni baat samapt kar, Apini ne 2 large wishkey mangwaya aur ek glass Nischal ke ore badhate…. "Piyo aur jahan se aaye ho wahan laut jao, waise bhi Malkia to 2 din me udd jayegi.


Nischal, wishkey ka wo large peg pite…. "Koi nahi 2 din to hai na Jivisha mere pass, wahi kafi hai.. baki tu jara mujhse dur rah, kyonki tujhe dekhta hun to Sapna mujhe yaad aati hai… gaya tha tere adde par aaj kal tera pura kunwa gayab hai wahan se"..


Apini:- humne suna tha ki koi sanki hume maarne ka pran kar chuka hai. Samjhdari issi me thi ki jis'se jit na pao uss se bhag lo.


Nischal:- Viswas rakh jis din main pakdne aaunga na, bhagne ke liye sara bhrahmand kam par jayega. Tu uss din ko kosega jab tune khushi se yahan prithwi ka kaam apne jimme liya… main tere ander wo dar daalunga ki tu marne se pahle kai maut marega.. ye wada raha.. ..


Apini:- Main uss waqt ka itnzar karunga. Waise tere 2 fan, Ruki aur Suko to tujhe yaad hi honge na…


Nischal ne jaise hi Ruki aur Suko ka naam suna, wo hairani se Apini ko dekhne laga…. "Aise aakhen kyon faad raha hai.. acha shocked ho gaya. Khair tu apna expression continue rakh, main tujhe batata hun un dono ne kya kaha… dono ne kaha hai ki bus ek purn grah ki raat, ek toofan Aizem me aayega aur Nischal ka naam jan'ne wale har kisi ko mitti me mila diya jayega, siway tere Jaal Mahal ke. Kyonki tera bhai Sabaiyya, usse apne kabje me le chuka hai."


Apini ki baat sun'kar Nischal ki aakhon me khun utar aaya… baithe hi baithe usne Apini ka gardan apne ek hath se pakda aur utha kar bar counter par patak diya. Wo pakad itni majboot thi ki Nischal ke hath ka nishan Apini ke gale par chhap gaya.


Bar counter par rakhe kanch ke glass, fut kar jagah-jagah Apini ke pith me chubh chuke the, aur patakne ke karan aayi andruni chot ke bare me to Apini ko hi gyan hoga…


"Jaan hai wo meri… aur koi meri jaan ko chhu bhi le main barbaad kar dunga barbaad… Jakar bata dena sabko"… Nischal bilkul garjte huye aise bola ki wahan maujood logon me, bhay ke karan bhagdar mach gayi.


Chhanik mamla tha… Apini dwara uksaye jane baad ki jo pratikriya thi, wo mahaj chand pal ka tha... Jabtak daudkar sab log pahunche, tabtak Nischal apni baat puri karke bar counter ke ander ghusa aur 2 bottol wine ki nikal kar bahar ka rasta pakad liya… piche se Nandni awaz deti rah gayi, lekin wo ansuna karke nikalte bana… aur Nandni bhi uske piche bhagi… Ab engine jahan jayega, wahan bogi to jayegi hi.. isliye Ansh bhi teji ke sath Nandni ke piche gaya…


Jivisha daud kar jab tak un dono ke pass pahunchi, tabtak Nischal apni baat kah'kar wahan se nikalte bana. Jivisha ko to kuch samjh me hi nahi aa rahi thi ki wo kya react kare..


Wahin in sab mamle ko hota dekh, Kasak bhi apni jagah se utne lagi, lekin Jatin uska hath pakad'kar bithate huye kahne laga…. "Ache dost banaye hain tumne Kasak. Is puri ghatna me yadi dosh main dusri party ka bhi maan lun, to bhi yahan aise gundon ki tarah jhagra karna… baki main tum par chhodta hun".


"Bhaad me gaya wo"… Kahti hui Kasak, Jivisha ke pass chali gayi… "Soch kya rahi hai Jivisha, kabhi-kabhi galat faisle ho jate hain.… Kuch waqt Shresh ko bhi tumhe dena chahiye… Jao isse hospital le jao"…


Jivisha, Kasak ki baat sun'kar khamosh hi rahi aur Shresh ko lekar wahan se hospital nikal gayi, aur Kasak wapas laut'kar Jatin ke pass wapas aa gayi... "Kya hua tum itni khamosh kyon ho"..


Kasak:- Chalo yahan se chalte hain Jatin, ye bhid aur ye shor mujhe ab pasand nahi aa raha.


Jatin muskurate huye Kasak ka hath thama aur apni bike par bitha ka usse ek bade se bunglow me le aaya.. Kasak uss bunglow ko dekh'kar puchhne lagi… "Ye tum kahan le aaye mujhe, Jatin"…


Jatin:- Yahi hai apna chhota sa aashiyana…


Kasak hansti hui…. "Iss hall me to football khela ja sakta hai aur tum kahte ho chhota sa aashiyana. Shandar bunglow hai Jatin."


Jatin:- So my would be, batao ki dinner me kya logi..


Kasak:- Ye koi bhut bunglow hai kya Jatin, yahan to kisi insan ki awaz tak nahi aa rahi..


Jatin:- hahaha.. nahi bhut bunglow nahi hai.. yahan kewal main rahta hun.. ek saaf safai wali aati hai, wo sham tak apna kaam karke chali jati hai.


Kasak:- Nah ye bakwas jagah hai… bada hua to kya hua, lekin yahan ghar wali feeling nahi hai.. jatak 5 log na ho ghar me.. chahal, pahal na ho tabtak wo maza nahi...


Jatin:- Koi baat nahi agar kosis achhi rahi to mehnat karke hum 4-5 bache jaldi-jaldi paida karke yahan bhi chahal, pahal wala mahol bana sakte hain…
Bahut hi behtreen akshro se pathik kshan bher me hi neeli aankho wali ke nayno se ek sapna chura laya hai jo digbramit kar raha hai jan man ko satye hai ya astay sunder sahib Atisunder.
 

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Tabhi achanak se pure class ke hasne ki awaz aayi. Nischal ki awesome entry se pure class me hansi ka mahol tha. Wo sidha jakar Jivisha ke pass baith gaya. Jivisha ab bhi sar jhukaye bus apne aashu hi saf kar rahi thi.


Tabhi class me jaise hi professor pahunche… "Ye humare class me pagal kaun aa gaya hai. Kaun ho tum aur apna huliya aisa kyon bana rakha hai. Bahar jao class se"..


Nischal apni jagah par khada hote… "Sir aap mere poshak ka apman nahi kar sakte. Ye humare community ki pahchan hai"..


Jivisha jaise hi Nischal ka awaj suni, wo sir jhukaye hi rote-rote hasne lagi aur hanste-hanste fir se rone.. Jivisha apna sar niche jhukaye Nischal ko sunna chah rahi thi.. itne me hi..


Professor:- Tum kya pagal ho, jo yahan aise kapde pahan kar aaye ho…


Professor ki baat par Jivisha halka najar tirchhi karke Nichal ke kapde ek baar dekhi… "Upar aur niche kewal black pahne hai.. fir ye professor itna garam kyon ho raha hai. Lagta hai Biwi se jhagra karke aaya hai"..


Nischal:- Sir apne biwi ka gussa mujh par mat nikalo… Yadi mere poshak ke bare me kuch kaha to ye bejjati hai humare community ki…


Jivisha, Nischal ki baat sunkar ander hi hansti hui... "Daring hai mere hero me, isse Naktode ke muh par bol diya.. hihihihihi..


Professor:- Are kaun si community..


Nischal:- wahi saar.. Ninja community.. kisi ne mujh se kaha apna chehra mat dikhao to maine Ninja community join kar liya
Alexa revo plz
Alexa - bekar entry chamayla :D
 

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Jatin:- Koi baat nahi agar kosis achhi rahi to mehnat karke hum 4-5 bache jaldi-jaldi paida karke yahan bhi chahal, pahal wala mahol bana sakte hain…


Kasak apni badi si aakhen ki … "Oyeee, Jyada bole to tumhara khun kar dungi… jao chup chap jaldi se kahan pakao, jabtak main fresh hokar aati hun…


Jatin:- Upar jakar left se pahla kamra…


Kasak:- Kya..


Jatin:- Arre upar jakar left se pahle kamre jao.. bus.. samajh jaogi…


Kasak, Jatin ke bataye kamre me chali gayi aur jaise hi wo kamre ke ander ghusi, charo ore ki deewar par apni badi-badi tasveere dekhkar khush ho gayi.. kayi sari tasveere thi.. kayi aise pal, jisme wo kabhi Jivisha ke sath khulkar hans rahi hai to kisi me pure pariwar ke sath baithi hui hai…


Kasak jod-jod se chillati hui Jatin ko awaz lagane lagi… Jatin teji se wahan pahuncha… "Kya ho gaya, itni ghabrayi hui awaz me kyon pukar rahi ho"..


Kasak:- Ghabrayi main hun aur kaanp tum rahe ho, kahin koi raaj to chhipa nahi rakhe yahan?


Jatin:- Ab tum aise chilla'kar pukar lagaogi, tab darna to swabhawik hai..


Kasak:- Chor !!! Tum meri jasoosi karwate ho. Jaldi batao ye sab tasveere tumhare pass kaise aayi..


Jatin Kasak ko khinch kar apne bahon me bharte, uske chehre par aaye laton ko apne hath se hata'te huye kahne laga…. "Jab tumhe dekhne ke liye pagal sa ho jata hun to ye kuch tasveere jo maine chupke se bina izazat ke khinchi hai.. usse dekh, khud ko shant kar leta hun…


"Achha, aur jab ye tasveren nahi thi, tab kya karte the"… Kasak apni bahen Jatin ke gale me dalti hui puchhne lagi…


Jatin apni aakhen mund'kar kahne laga… "Bus Yun hi aakhen mund'kar tumhare khyalon me kho jata hun"..


Jatin apni baat kah'kar apni aakhen khol'kar, Kasak ki najron se najar mila kar dekhne laga… Kasak kabhi apne palkon ko niche jhukati to kabhi Jatin ke najron par thehra leti… "Hume chalna chaiye ab"…


Jatin, Kasak se alag hote huye bilkul dhime se kahne laga… "Thik hai".. aur wo palat kar apna ek kadam aage badha liya.. Kasak thik piche se uska hath pakad lee… Jatin apne gardan ko ghuma kar piche dekha… dono ki najren jaise ek dusre par thehar kar bahut kuch kahna chah rahi ho…


Dono apni jagah thehar kar ek dusre ko kuch der dekhte rahe.. Kasak apne ek kadam aage badhati, thik Jatin ke samne pahunchi aur apni aeriyon ko uncha karke Jatin ke honth se honth lagakar chumne lagi..


Jatin jis baat ko nahi hone dena chah raha tha, wahi kahani hote ja rahi thi... Jatin ke sabhi sathiyon ne shikar kiye the, aur lagatar karte aa rahe the, isliye unki body santulit thi.. lekin Jatin ne kayi dino se Shikar nahi kiya tha aur Kasak ke chumte hi uski pyas bhi badhne lagi…


Uske sharir ka ek swabhawik pariwaratan jo sahwas ke waqt hota hai, wo abhi se dikhne laga tha… Jatin, Kasak ko khud se dur karte huye kahne laga… "Nahi Kasak ye sab thik nahi"..


"Haan ye sab thik nahi warna jaise hi tum sex me khoti chali jaogi, ye tumhari boti-boti noch lega.."


Nischal thik uske piche bistar par baith'kar apni baat kahne laga… Nischal ko dekh'kar Jatin teji se darwaje ke ore bhaga… zoom se ek hawa gujri aur darwaje ke aage Nischal khada tha… "Aaram se baith jao, jabtak tum Kasak ke sath ho wo tumhari sequrity hai… Kasak se dur gaye to tumhara patta saaf hai"..


Jatin ne jab Kasak ko dekha to wo bistar par behosh pari thi… Usse achet awastha me dekh'kar Jatin ghabrate huye puchhne laga…. "Usse kya kiya"..


Nischal, apni badi si aakhen kiye uske ek jangh par paun rakh'kar, uske gale ko daboch liye. Apna chehra thik uske chehre ke upar le jate huye, apni bhadi si awaz me kahne laga….

"Viggo jab samne aa jaye to jante ho kya hota hai… Viggo ko kabhi apne aas-pass mehsus kiya hai.. Kya hoga jise tum Aizem ka sahjada samjhte ho, wo ek Viggo ho.


Nischal ki pakad ka pahili bar Jatin ne maza liya tha. Jaise hi gala chhuta, wo hafte huye khasne laga. Viggo naam sunkar hi Jatin ke pasine chhutne lage… wo Nischal ke vikral roop ko dekhte huye kahne laga…. "Viiii.. Viggo.. lekin ye jan-samuh to kai varshon purv aapas me lad'kar samapt ho gayi thi"


Nischal:- Yahan tum mujhe mera istihas mat batao… mujhe jo jaan'na hai kewal wo batao. Wo bhi bina bhatkaye…


Jatin, apna hath jod kar sar ko niche jhukaye…. "Viggo, Kasak ko kya hua hai.. wo aise kyon pari hai"..


Nischal:- Ye jinda rahe ya mar jaye, tumhe koi fark parna hai kya…


Jatin:- Viggo aap jaisa soch rahe hai, waisa sabhi Zoren niwasi nahi hote…


Nischal:- Jinda maans to tumne bhi khaya hai.. nocha to tumne bhi hai kaiyon ko… Jatin kuch naya batao…


Jatin:- Hmmm ! Aap sahi ho.. Main kuch bhi kar lun rahunga unme se ek hi..


Nischal:- Tum jante ho maine uss raat tumhari jaan kyon baksh di thi...


Jatin:- Koi idea nahi… waise aapne pahchana kaise mujhe...


Nischal:- Ajib si ghinn wali badbu aati hai tum logon se.... Kabhi us ghrina ke gandh ko mehsus kiya hai ki nahi..


Jatin, khud me ander se bebas aur lachar mehsus karte huye…. "Viggo aap ko kya jaan'na hai mujhse"…


Nischal:- Malkia ki jankari do mujhe..


Jatin:- "Viggo main bus itna janta hun ki Malkia ki shaktiyan asim hoti hai. Ek Malkia huamare mahamahim ko kayi varshon tak jivit rakhti hai aur unhe asim takat pradan karti hai"…

"Ab tak hum prithvi se 12 Malkia, Zoren ki seema tak le ja chuke hain… lekin Mahamhim aur Rijo, Malkia Jivisha ke liye pagal bane huye hain... Inki shakti Zoren tak mehsus ho rahi hai. Unka ye kahna hai ki ye Pahli (first) hai.. Aur ek baar yadi Juvisha hath lag gayi, fir pure bhrhmand me kewal Mahamahim ka jhanda lahrayega"…


Nischal:- Aisi kaun si shaktiyan hain Jivisha ke ander, jo tumlog usse chain se rahne nahi de rahe…


Jatin, Nischal ki baat sunkar jor jor se hanste huye kahne laga…. "Ek Viggo Malkia ke prem me hai… hahaha… Viggo ka dil bhi prithwi par dhadkne laga"…


Nischal:- Mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki main apne hath ka dawab tere gardan par dala aur tera gardan tamatar ki bhanti kachumar hokar ajib si haalat me hai.


Jatin:- Maf karna Viggo.. Jahan tak Malika ki shatiyon ki baat hai, uska namuna aap dekh chuke ho, Jab Malkia apni soyi ikcha shakti se aap par humla ki thi. (Jatin kuch pal khamosh rahkar Nischal ko gaur se dekhne ke baad)

"Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai, wo afwah sahi hai jisme ek Viggo ka jikr aata hai… Purn santulit.. shakti ke hote huye bhi shaktiyon ka prayog na karne wala… to wo cross mutant aap hi ho… Ek Viggo rani aur Aizem ke sabse surveer aur shanti priya shasak ka bacha… Nischal"..


Nischal:- Tere yahan ke school book me hai kya Viggo ka chepter, ya ek research subject hi Viggo ke upar rahta hai tumhare yahan… Ye batao Malkia ki itni shaktishali prajati ke bare me hume kaise pata nahi… inka itihas kya hai.. inke log kahan hai... Aur ye Malkia apne samaj me na paida hokar aise aam insano ke bich kahan se paida ho jati hai..


Jatin:- Iski jankari mujhe to kya pure Zoren me koi nahi bata sakta siway Mahamahim ke. Rijo tak ko iski puri jankari nahi hai. Upar se Malkia, Prithvi par basse, kamjor prajati ke yahan paida leti hai, jiski shaktiyan bahar aane se pahle hi hum Zoren ki seema tak pahuncha dete hain… Aisi shurat me Malkia ki jankari kahan se kisi anya grah par hogi….


Nischal:- "Ha ha ha… Teri Malkia, Prithvi par hai aur tu yahin ke mul niwasi ko kamjor bata raha hai. Sach me jitna suna tha, uss se kahin adhik gire huye prajati ke tum log ho… Yahan ki jalvayu kisi vardan se kam nahi.. yahan ki technology wakai kamal ki hai.. aur sabse kamal ke to yahan ke log hai… Lekin tu aur tere log nahi samjhenge.. bahut hi nich kism ke ho na"..

"Khair tu ye bata mere rahte Jivisha ko 2 din me le jane ki baat ho rahi thi … iski wajah…….."


Jatin:- Viggo, humara Rijo sabse khatrnak tukdi ke sath aa raha hai… aur uske sath kayi adrishi janwar kal raat tak yahan pahunch jayenge… Malkia ke pure pariwar ko mar'kar, sab uska roop lenge aur Malkia ko bharmakar apne sath le jaynge..


Nischal:- hahahaha… aur mere bare me kya yojna thi…


Jatin:- Viggo wo .. wo..


Nischal:- Kya wo..


Jatin:- wo kal aap ke doston ko marne ke liye samst sena toot paregi, jabtak aap udhar vyast rahenge… tabtak wo Malkia ko le jayenge…


"Hahahaha…. Ja jakar mere liye 1 bottol daru le aa aur apna mobile dete jana"… Jatin chala gaya yah kahte ki.. "bus aakhri bottol hai mere pass" aur mobile dete chala gaya…


Nischal, ne Nandni ko call lagaya, lekin iss'se pahle ki wo kuch bolta, Nandni usse ghar wapas na aane ka bol'kar call disconnet kar di. Idhar Jatin bhi apni aakhri bottol lakar Nischal ko bhent kar diya… Nischal puri bottol ek baar me samapt karte...

"Achhi yojna hai … lekin main kyon na aisa karun ki tumhare khatrnak tukdi ke pahunchte hi, main unpar humla kar dun aur sabka safaya ek sath kar dun"…..


Jatin:- Viggo wo humari khatrnak tukdi hai… uske samne tik nahi paoge..


Nischal:- "Chalo maan liya main tik nahi paunga, lekin yadi main aisa micro device bana kar, yahan ke prashashan ko de dun, jo tumhare micro practical ko orignal shape me dikha sake. Fir to tum.. tumhara wo kamjor sa adrishi janwar aur tumhara sare viman, unke najar me hoga…"

"Aukkad to mujhe tum logon ki pata hi hai… ek ladki par jhund me humla karte ho. Jab tum logon se akeli si ek ladki nahi sambhalti, fir tum inke latest hathiyar aur ache trained officier se kya ladoge re Gotiya.. Tu to lut jayega re Gotiya..


Jatin:- Hammm ! Iska matlab aap wo device bana chuke ho… Mujhe Ruko aur Suki ne Jaal Mahal ke vishay me bataya tha, yakin nahi hua.. ab samjh me aa raha hai ki unhone sahi kaha tha… Waise bhi pata to ab chal raha hai ki aap ek Viggo ho. Jahan tak mujhe lagta hai, aap prithvi par bhi apni jigyasa ke karan hi aaye ho"..


Nischal:- Pata nahi kyon tu mujhe pahle din se pasand hai. Tujh se abhi baat kiya, tera dimag bahut sharp hai.. iska matlab tera Mahamahim aur Rijo kafi buddhiman log hain, jo logon ko uske talent ke hisab se kaam saunpta hai… Ek chaalak shasak aur uske sath ek yogya mantri.. Kamal ka combo hai…


Jatin:- Haan Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu apni Malkia aur uski shaktiyon ko janta hai… Mere yani ek Viggo ke bare me bhi tu suna hai. Ab tu hum dono ki shakti se tulna karke andaza laga ki Jivisha ki shakti mujh se kitne guna jyada bhadi hogi..


Jatin hanste huye…. "Bahut chahne lage ho aap Malkia ko… Khair hume Malkia ki shakti ko dekhne ka kabhi mauka nahi mila.. to kya kahun main kis tarah ki shaktiyan hai. Bus jo sunta aa raha hun wo itna ki Malkia ke pass asim shaktiyan hoti hai. Unki ikchha shakti ke virudh koi tik nahi pata…

"Main tulna karne ki stithi me nahi hun.. kyonki ek to aap Viggo upar se aise cross mutant ho jiski shaktiyon ki kalpan hi ki ja sakti hai bus. Dekhne wala to kabhi bata bhi nahi sakta, kyonki wo jivit bhi nahi bacha hoga… Ek kaam karna Viggo, aap aur Malkia ek din aamne samne ki ladai ladna fir main Judge karke bataunga"..


Nischal:- Tu to bada hi close ho raha hai.. ladwa kar dobara meri pasli tudwane ka plan hai, ya mujhe marwa dene ka…
Nischal ka parda uth hi gaya aakhir.
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"What.. ye kale kapdon me Ninja bankar aaya hai".. Jivisha fatak se apna sar upar karke uske chehre ko dekhi aur uska hath pakad kar bahar khinch kar le aayi… "Ye sab kya hai Nischal"..


Nischal:- Tumse wada jo kiya tha apna chehra nahi dikhaunga.. so ye Ninja look… aaj ek mauka aur milega kya..


Jivisha:- Aur aaj bhi fail ho gaye to…


Nischal:- Wade me tod nikal'kar, kal fir samne aa jaunga..


Jivisha, ander se khush hoti hui… "Aur kahin gayab hone ke liye kah di to"..


Nischal:- Fir Mike par jor jor se chillaunga… main Laila laila chillaunga kurta far ke…


Jivisha:- Pagal kahin ke.. upar ka mask hatao..


Nischal:- Dekho wade ke mutabik main tumhe apna chehra nahi dikhaunga, lekin yadi tum khud mask utarogi to iska matlab hoga ki main apne kaam se kahin bhi ghum sakta hun bina mask lagaye. Fir chahe tum hi kyon na ho wahan aas-pass.


Jivisha uska mask utar'ti hui… "Nautanki karna mera department hai, tumhara nahi.. ab ye batao ki ander kya pahne ho..


Nischal:- Itne tight kapde ke niche bhi koi kuch pahan sakta hai kya… only three kapde the sharir par... Ek utar diya tumne. Do tumhe dikh rahe honge..


Jivisha:- Pagal, fir main aise kapdon me tumhare sath nahi ghumne wali..


Nischal:- Thik hai fir kal ka program rakhte hain .. chalo class me..


Jivisha:- Oye ruko… Kal kyon .. kal meri engagement hai.. aaj ka hi mauka hai tumhare pass…


Nischal:- Fir tum hi kuch solution batao…


Jivisha:- Ammm ! Ek kaam karte hai, yahan se shopping mall wahan se change aur fir wahan se tumhare adhure samay ko pura mauka dena…


Nischal:- Haan kal raat 10 baje ka bol'kar mujhe sham ke 4 baje tak hi samay mila tha… ye baat dimag me rahti to Ninja look nahi lena parta.. waise tumhe yaad tha fir kyon kahi ab muh mat dikhana…


Jivisha:- Off O ab chalo bhi pakao mat…


Dono shopping mall pahunche, wahan Jivisha ne apne pasand ke kapde kharidi aur Nischal ko trial room bhej'kar change karke aane ke liye boli.. jab wo change kar'ke bahar aaya.. Jivisha usse dekhti rahi gayi… Dil kiya fatak se gale lag kar jhatak se apne arman kah de. Fir muskurati wo apne hi sar par hath marti khud se kahne lagi… "thoda usse hi mauka deti hun"


Jivisha bill counter par aage badh kar bill dene lagi aur piche se Jivisha ka pura khandan pahunch gaya… "Baap yahan hone wale dulhe ke liye shopping karne aaya hai.. aur beti ek nakara ke liye shopping kar rahi hai"..


Bill counter par kuch jyada hi bhid hoti hai.. har koi iss family drame me intrest lene laga… Jivisha jab apne papa ki baat suni to wo sah nahi payi.. juban ladana nahi chahti thi aur Nischal ki bejjati sun'na usse gawara nahi. Ander se usse mehsus ho raha tha ki wo na jane kya kar de abhi, khud usse bhi pata nahi. Isliye wo bina kuch bole wahan se chali gayi.


Idhar Nischal ke liye yah apman jaise jamir par chhap gaya tha. Pahne huye kapdon par sawal uthana.. khud me apmanit mehsus karte Nischal apna gussa pikar rah gaya. Un logon ke tane kewal aur kewal aisa lag raha tha jaise uske nakarepan ki kahani bayan kar rahi ho…


Kisi bhi chij ki hadd hoti hai, lekin kuch log bolne ke kram me har haden paar kar jaate hain. Ghar ke mahol ko pichhle kayi dino se Nandita bhi bhanp rahi thi... Wo bhi bahut kuch soch to rakhi thi, lekin majboori me kadam wahan par thehar jate jahan bus dimag me yahi chalta ki ab tak uski bachi ne kabhi apni khwaish nahi jatayi, ki usse Nischal ye pyar hai ya Nischal se vivaah hi karna hai...


Lekin abhi ka uske saas-sasur aur pati ki harkaten kisi bajaru se kam nahi tha.. aur yahi ladka hai jo apni izzat utarte dekh'kar bhi samne wale ko kuch kah tak nahi raha tha... Apne pariwar ke logon ka vaywahar dekh'kar Nandita ka para apne charam par pahunch gaya….


"Aap jise nakara kah rahe hain, aaj se, infact abhi se wo mera bhai hai.. mere pita ke dusri santan. Jaise wo Shresh apne baap ke paise par ek bahut bada kaam kaji ladka ho gaya waise hi aaj se ye bhi hai. Aur agar ab kisi ne mere bhai ke liye kuch bhi bola to acha nahi hoga".


Nandita apne hath jodti sabse kahne lagi… "Ab chalo sab yahan se, sabne bahut drama kar liye. Wo to bus shopping kar rahi thi, lekin aap sabko jaan bujhkar drama karna tha. Bhid me bejjati kar rahe ho.. ab chaliye aap log yahan se warna beti ko to khote ja rahe hain, kahin aisa na ho ki main bhi chirag ko lekar nikal jaun aur dobara kabhi uss chaukhat par kadam na rakhun"…


Nandita ne jab apne tevar badle tab jakar kahin sabko hosh aaya. Pura pariwar wahan se laut gaya. Idhar Nichal bhi apne dhime kadmon se parking ke ore badhne laga. Usse khud me ander se acha nahi lag raha tha... Nischal khud ki haalat par khud hi hans raha tha… Aaj tak jisne ek ulte shabd nahi sune the, wo baar-baar bejjat huye ja raha tha…


Vida lene se pahle apne aakhri kuch shabd Jivisha se kahne the, isliye uske kadam Jivisha ke piche chal diye… Yun to chand duri ke faslon par Jivisha najar aa rahi thi, lekin ander ke fasle jo paida ho gaye the, uski duriyan ab tay kar pana mushkil tha...


Jivisha, ki najar jaise hi Nischal par gayi, wo bhag kar uske pass pahunchi aur bechaini se uske chehre ko tham kar…… "Mujhe maaf kar do, mujhe tumhe yahan lekar nahi aana chahiye tha… bahut kuch suna gaye na… main maafi mangti hun.. please Nischal, aise udas na ho"..


Nischal, Jivisha ke hath ko hatate huye, uske chehre ko dekhne laga… Jivisha ko dekh'kar Nischal muskuraya…

"Main ek bhatkaw tha aur tum thehraw. Kash tum mili na hoti to mere yahan hone ki wajah nahi hoti. Ye dil bechain hona, kisi se na mil pane ki tarap aur haan, kisi ke baton ki chubhan kya hota hai kabhi pata hi nahi chalta, yadi tum se na mila hota."

"Mere yahan hone ki wajah tum thi. Shyad itna hi tumhe dekhna aur mehsus karna, meri kismat me tha Jivisha. Main ek aise khwaish ke piche para raha, jiski khwahishon kabhi main tha hi nahi."

"Janti ho tumhare papa ne kuch kaha, wo baat utni nahi chubhi, jitna tumhara wahan se chup-chap chale aana chubha. Aur ye chubhan koi pahli baar maine mehsus nahi kar raha tha. Lekin baat fir wahi ho jati hai, ek tarfa chahaten aur ek tarfa pyar. Main nahi janta, kabhi chhoti si feeling bhi tumhare ander thi ya nahi, bus aisa laga jaise tumhe apne manoranjan ke liye ek khilona chahiye tha… jab ji me aaya thode se pyar se baat karne ke baad uske satha ho liye aur uski bewakoofi par bahut enjoy kiya, aur baad me fir dhutkar bhi diye"

"Khair … Maine tumhe chaha hai .. aur chahta rahunga.. ye Sathya hai… thik waise hi, jaise aaj raat ke baad fir yahan rukne ki koi wajah nahi hogi. Alvida"…


Nischal apni baat kah'kar mud chala. Sab kuch luta'kar khud me khoya sa wo chala. Aise chala jaise sab alvida kah chala ho.


Nischal apne khoye se aalam me bahar ke ore ja raha tha aur Jivisha bhagti hui usse na khone ki chahat me announcing room mein pahunch gayi… Shopping mall me lage har speaker se ab Jivisha ke arman nikal rahe the jise sab sun rahe the….


"Oye Jungli, apni chahat bata gaye.. jane se pahle meri chahat to sunte jao.…. Tum khade the kisi deewano ki tarah, charo ore aise dekh rahe the jaise ye jahan tumne pahli baar dekh rahe the… main train se bhag rahi thi anjano ki tarah.. aur meri kismat mujhse takra rahi thi"..

"Wo pahli najar ka hi pyar tha jab tum mujhse takraye the... Koi second thought nahi tha, isliye apne pyar ko main chum rahi thi… be-jhijhak aur be-hichak…"



"Haan galtiyan hui mujhse. Thodi duriyan thi lekin kuch meri majbooriyan thi. Tumse kitni chahte hain, ye dil me dabi thi, najron me chhipa tha. Lekin haal-e-dil kabhi izhar nahi kar payi aur najron se kabhi wo pyar jata nahi payi."

"Main nahi janti ki tum mujhe chhod'kar kahan jaoge, lekin yadi tum dur jaoge to wo tarap main jhel na paungi. Wada hai tumse kabhi tumhara dil na dikhaungi.. Jahan itni baar mujhe maaf kar chuke, kya ek baar aur maafi nahi milegi."

"Rok lo apne kadam, mud jao piche, aaj fir ek baar, jahan tarpe hain ek duje ke bina itne din, sath jine ka bhi maza lete hain. Bus ek tum mil gaye to samjhungi sara jahan mil gaya."

"Ab aa bhi jao Nischal, tumhare liye bahut royi hun, ab aur rone ki himmat nahi bachi hai. Ab aa bhi jao na.. please.. Ya fir wo chand shabd hi sunkar samjhoge jo log izhar me kahte hain"…


"Aur mukhiya ji ka kya, jo mujhe bhadi sabha me nakara kahte hain".. Nischal thik Jivisha ke samne, muskurate huye khada tha…


Wo najron ke samne jaise Jivisha ki puri khushiyan khadi thi… fir to khud ko rok pana bhi muskil ho raha tha… kadam daud chale khushiyon ke ore… yun lipti aaj dub kar Nischal me, ki uski ho kar rah jana hai… tej dhadkane Jivisha ki bechani bata rahi thi wahin paglon ki tarah uske chehre ko chumna uske vyakul mann ki shanti ko jata raha tha…


Fir se wahi sama tha, ek baar fir wahi najara tha.. Jivisha apni vyakulta shant karke, poori tarah toot chuki thi. Nischal apna ek hath uske kamer me dal'kar Jivisha ko thame khada tha aur dusre hath se chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hata raha tha..


Aakhon ke samne wahi najara pahli mulakat ki thi bus fark itna tha ki aaj dono ek dusre ko dekh'kar itni pyari muskan de rahe the ki in muskano me dub'kar puri umr kati ja sakti thi..


Jivisha apni aeriyon ko unchi karti Nichal ke hothon tak apni honth lekar aayi aur apne hoton se Nischal ke hont ko sparsh karti, apne pyar ke sparsh ka wo pahla ehsas Nichal ko kara gayi.


Hont ko saparsh karke kuch inch dar fasle par dono ke honth alag the. Shwans ek dusre ke chahere se takra rahi thi aur aakhen aaj band hokar iss pyare se ehsaas me dub chuka tha…


Jivisha ke hothon ka pyara asprash ab bhi Nischal ke dil me utar raha tha. Chahten fir se deewani hokar hoton ke sparsh ko mehsus karne ke arman jaga gaye aur dono ke honth ke inch dar fasle khatm hokar, ek dusre ke hoton ko chumte chale gaye… shwans lambi aur gahri hoti rahi.. dhadkane bekabu hokar dhadkane lage aur dono ke pyar ko wahan maujood log mehasus karte taliyan banane lage..


Taliyon ke aawaj ne dono ke bojhil aakhon ko kholne par majboor kar diya.. Jivisha khadi bhid ko jab samne dekhi to sharmakar apne chehre ko Nischal ke sine me chhipa lee.. tabhi bhid ko side karte wahan police pahunch gayi…
chaliye ant bhala toh sab bhala...
Dono ek ho gaye
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