Ji dekhiye kahani hai aur kahani me thoda bahut aise chie far wale scene na dunga to log mujhe brutal writer kaise samjhnege.. unhe lagega .. har baar ladki fans jati hai aur ye writer har bar bacha leta hai... U know readers ka viswas uth jayega aise me .. wo pridict kar lenge..Apini is doing wrong things with innocent girl, I did not like it at all, such a painful incident is happening again, I can't see this happening, innocent girls dying one after the other, You don't care, I want to see the painful death of their entire group. Nishchal was too late to arrive, I did not like anything.
Innocent Jivisha does not understand anything. How did Jivisha beat her so hard or how much strength was there in her? And if she is a fake Jivisha, then where is the real Jivisha or is it a real Jivisha and also a Alien. By the way I love Jivisha.
I completely agree with Nandita. There is only one sensible who understood my problem. Now Nandini will have a show in the flat.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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ye meri favorite story hai
Jis shukriya as bhai...
hai ji aap ka aur ummid karta hun ki .. jis ummid se aap kahani padh rahe hain .. un ummidon par khadi utre 
Ji bahut bahut shukriya nilam ji.. ummid karta hun ki aap ko ye kahani aur bhi mazedar lage.. aise hi padhte rahen aur apne vichar dete rahen
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