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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Nischal ek kahar sa barsha aur Nischal nam ka toofan jab thama tab Zoren se aaye sabhi mehman bhi shant ho chuke the. Jama lash ko narbhakshi banane ke aadesh dekar Nischal jaise hi jane laga… apne kadam rok'kar wo wapas aaya… "Apini, yaar tere se ek kaam to rah hi gaya"..


Apini:- Kaun sa kaam Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu aaj raat 9 baje pahunch jana mere sasural, aur jakar unko kah dena ki Jivisha ke liye Nischal se behtar ladka koi nahi. Aur jara tarifon ke bhi pul bandh dena.


Apini:- Kar deta shayad, lekin Tanisha ke sath aapne acha nahi kiya…


Tabhi Rijo, Apini ko apne piche lete…. "Wo abhi dard me hai Viggo usse maanf kar do. Aapka kaam ho jayega.


Nischal:- Yahan tera kaam hua ki nahi pahle wo bata..


"Khud hi dekh lo"… aur samne lash ke dher par Rijo ne ishara kiya..…


Nischal, un lashon ko dekhte…. "Sach me kide-makode jaise ho yaar, jao yahan se aaj raat ka waqt hai tumhare pass, apna taam- jham samet lo aur mera kaam karte huye niklo yahan se. Aur haan jo bhi bhagwan hai tumhara uss se dua karna ki kisi mod par fir hamari mulakat na ho."..


Nischal apni baat kah'kar wahan se pardarshi diwar ko hata diya. Turant hi usne Nandni ko call laga diya aur usse bhi wahan ki deewar hata kar bata diya ki aage kya karna hai, taki jitne bhi log behosh pare huye hain, wo jald hi hosh me aa jaye.


Idhar Nischal ne jab dekha ki Rijo aur Apini wahan se chala ja chuka hai, tab wo Sawalker ko call lagaya. Sawalker puri force ke sath wahan pahuncha. Nischal tabtak kuch special effect me sath, gande se dikh rahe janwaron aur narbhakshi ka kalpnik tasveer wahan chala diya.


Jaise hi Sawalker aur police ki puri team wahan pahunchi, vishalkay janwar aur ajib se insan ko dekhkar sab sadme me pahunch gaye. Unhe kuch samjh me nahi aaya. Tabhi un sab ko Nischal dikha jo Sawalker ke piche aakar kahne laga… "bade bhaiya ye to wahi janwar aur mutant hai jo kisi scientist ka experiment hai".


Ek kalpnik jaal Nischal ne bun diya tha aur usi jaal ke ander ghus kar Sawalker aur uski team shikar kar rahe the. Kamal ka set up kiya tha Nischal ne.. Sawalker aur uski team lagatar 2 ghate tak unko marne mein juti rahi. Kaam khatam hone ke baad media coverage aur sab kuch hua.. sabhi lash ko janch ke liye bhej diya gaya aur aaj ka hero to Sawalker hi bana… .


Nischal Sawalker ko dekh'kar hasne laga aur wahan se wapas chala aaya… Wapas aakar sabse pahle flat pahuncha, wahan Nandni se milkar sab kuch btaya, sath me yah bhi ki ab ghabrane jaisi koi baat nahi hai..


Nandni:- hmmmm ! Chalo bala tali… lekin Nischal..


Nischal:- kya ?


Nandni:- Rahne de fir kabhi baat kar lenge.. abhi to tu mara ja raha hoga Jivisha se milne ke liye..


Nischal, Nandni ke gaal khinchte…. "You are so sweet. Subah milta hun main tumse"..


Nandni se baat karke Nischal Jivisha ke ghar chala gaya. Pipe ke sahare wo ek bar sur khidki par khada tha. Jivisha aur Kasak samne film dekh rahi thi, aur sath hi sath Jivisha piche khidki par bhi dekh rahi thi…


Nischal khidki par khada hokar ander dekhna shuru hi kiya tha ki Jivisha ne Nischal ko dekh liya... Wo dhire-dhire piche khiskti hui khidki par gayi aur bilkul dhime awaz me apne honth hilati hui puchne lagi… "Abhi yahan kyon aaye ho. Subah to mil hi rahe the na"..


Nischal:- Chalo mere sath…

Jivisha:- Kahan le ja raho ho…

Nischal:- Bus chalo to sahi…


Jivisha:- lekin is waqt bahar kaise aaungi, sab lock hoga.. mujhe pakad lenge…

Nischal:- yakin hai mujh par…


Jivisha, Nischal ke chehre par pyar se hath ferti, haan me sir hilane lagi. Nischal ne ishare se khidki ke bahar aane ke liye bola… Jivisha khidki se lagi ussi patli railing par paun rakhi aur khidki ke bahar aa gayi..


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne kandhe par utha kar pipe ke sahare niche laya.. baat jab boundry kudne ki aayi tab Jivisha ko kuch kahna hi nahi para, wo pass ke ek ped ke sahare boundry par chadh gayi aur boundry ke pass ek thela lagi hui hoti hai, uske sahare uss par….


Nischal, Jivisha ko ghurte huye…. "Ye batao mujhe, tum pahle bhi khidki se niche aa chuki ho na"..


Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhkar hansti hui haan me sar hilati hui kahne lagi….. "Kisi ke sath ghar se kahin bhagna para to uske liye pahle se bahut practice kar rakhi thi"..


Nischal:- Kamal hai, aur kya taiyari hai… main to impress ho gaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ji.. chalo ye batao itni raat ko kya sochkar mujhe bahar lekar aaye ho…


Nischal:- Tumhe miss kar raha tha isliye tumhe le aaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ek baat batao tum mujhe padesan kyon karte the, aur kaise karte the…


Nischal:- Matlab main samjha nahi...


Jivisha:- Tum log mujhe pagal samjhte ho na, jise kuch bhi akal nahi…


Nischal, Jivisha ke thik samne khade hote huye kahne laga… "mujhe pata hai ki tumhe har baat ka aabhash hai jo kabhi tum bhrm manti ho, to kabhi satya. Jaise tum mujh me apne kayi sare sawalon ke jawab dhundh rahi ho is waqt, meri haalat tum se bhi jyada puzzle bani hui hai.... Vishwas karo main bhi bich mazdhar me hun"..


Jivisha:- bus mujhe ye bata do ki parinam jo bhi ho, lekin tum mujhe chhod kar to kabhi nahi jaoge na..


Nichal:- Tumhe aisi feeling kyon aayi jara bataogi..


Jivisha:- meri harkaten.. mujhe kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai main sabko khote ja rahi hun.. mammi, papa, bhabhi, bhai, Nandni .. sab mujhse kuch dino me dur ho jayenge… ..


Nischal:- Kisi ko andaja nahi tumhari haalat ka aur ab unhe pata bhi nahi chalega.. tum chulbuli aur natak karte hi achhi lagti ho… aise serious look me bilkul bakwas lagti ho..


Jivisha hanste huye Nischal ke gale lag gayi. Kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad wo kahne lagi…. "Aaj sham main fir tunhe dhakka de deti, ye jo tum mere balon me hath dene ke bahane jo mujhe behosh kar gaye the... Mar dala Sapna ke katilon ko, ya koi jinda bhi bacha hai".. ..


Nischal:- Ye tum kya kah rahi ho?


Jivisha:- wahi jo tum sun rahe ho. Mujhe ache se pata hai ki tum yahan is prithwi ke nahi ho.. aur na hi wo Shresh tha . Bus fark itna hai ki tum mere wahi sapno ke rajkumar ho, jo kahin dur se aaya hai aur wo koi jalil kism ke prani the. Jaise yahan prithvi par insano me bhi tarah-tarah ke insan hote hain…


Nischal:- hahaha… matlab tumhe apne bhrm par yakin hone laga hai haan… Jivisha mujhe sari baat janni hai.. shuru se.. kab tumhe kya laga tha…


Jivisha:- nah aise nahi.. mujhe pahle gode me uthao.. aur gode me utha'kar mujhe wahan le chalo jahan hum pahli baar mile the .. fir main bataungi…


Nischal:- sach me tum abhi pune se kalyan jana chahti ho.


Jivisha pyara sa chehra banati haan me apna sir hila di. Nischal bhi Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskuraya aur usse gode me utha'kar daud laga diya… Uski daud me itni raftar thi ki jagta aadmi uss gati ko na to dekh pata aur na hi sah pata.. aankh to uski band hi hoti lekin Jivisha, Nischal ki aakhon me dekh'kar muskura rahi thi.


Kuch hi der me Nischal apne thikane par tha aur wahan se viman lekar dono kalyan. Aur kuch hi der me dono kalyan junction par the… Jivisha apni ikchha anusar Nischal ko fir se wahin khadi hone kahi, jahan wo pahli baar khada tha..


Nischal Jivisha ki ikchha par kya kahe.. bus uske bachpana me wo bhi thoda bacha banta ja raha tha… fir se wahi sab dohraya ja raha tha… Nischal se Jivisha takrayi, chehre ke baal ko Nischal ne hataya aur Nischal ko dekh'kar punah wahi bhawana jaag gayi jo pahli mulakat me jagi thi.


Na to bhid dikha aur na hi Kalyan junction ki wo chahal pahal. Jivisha ke liye khamosh sama tha aur najron ke samne fir se wahi manmohak drishy tha jise dekh'kar Jivisha khud ko rok nahi payi thi...


Honth se honth lagati Jivisha ek bar fir Nischal ko chum rahi thi, fark sirf itna tha ki aaj bus ek chhote se sprash matr se wah anubhaw ho gaya jo us din adhura sa rah gaya tha... Nischal ka sath aur uske hone ka ehsas…


Jivisha Nischal ke kano me kahne lagi... "Kahin khamosh jagah mujhe le chalo.. jahan kewal hum tum ho"…


Nischal usse aise hi jagah par le aaya.. dono chandni raat me ek jhil kinare baithe the... Kuch khamoshi aur dher sara pyar dono ke aakhon me dikh raha tha… Jivisha nischint hokar Nischal ke sine se apne sar ko tikaye thi…


Nischal:- Tumhe ascharya nahi hua ki main ek alian hun..


Jivisha:- tunhare grah par main bhi ek alian hi rahungi… don't worry..


Nischal:- Hammm ! Ab mujhe shuru se batao… kya hua tha..


Jivisha:- Bahut pahle ki baat hai ye.. main bachpan se jawani ki dahlij par kadam rakh rahi thi… sarir me kuch badlaw ke bare me maa batayi thi, lekin usi dauran mere ander ajib si chijen hone lagi... Aisa lag raha tha mere ander koi soyi hui hai aur jagne ki kosis to kar rahi hai, lekin thik se jaag nahi pa rahj.. ..


Tumhe sunne me ajib lag raha hoga kyonki ye baat maine tab sabko batayi thi aur kisi ne meri baat par dhyan tak nahi diya, lekin wo baat sach hai. Uske baad sab dhundhla sa ho gaya. Jindgi maze me hanste-khelte kat rahi thi. Lekin achanak hi meri jindgi ne karwat li. Papa meri shadi ki baat kar rahe the. Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha aur mere sabhi ghar wale ek sur me the. Yahan tak ki Nandita bhabhi bhi.


Mujhe shak hua aur maine Kasak se baat ki.. jab usse phone ki tab mujhe ek bhawihshyawani ke bare me wo batayi, jisme kaha gaya tha ki yadi meri shadi sahi samay par nahi hui to is prithvi par anarth aayega… aur jis waqt mere papa paglon ki tarah meri shadi karwana chahte the tab sahar me ajib ghatna hona shuru ho chuka tha.. logon ki lash ajib tarike se mil rahi thi.


Ussi dauran Kasak bhi kahin gayab ho gayi. Sabko yahi dar tha ki ye ho na ho mere hi karan ho raha hai. Shadi to karni hi thi aur kewal ek shadi se sab kuch thik ho jata hai to shadi karne me harj hi kya hai.


Main raji ho gayi. Pata na mere gharwale kyon uss Shresh ki baton se khush ho jate, lekin pahli najar se hi wo mujhe ek behrupiya najar aata tha. Jaymala stage par jaise hi usne apna phone apne jeb se nikala tha.. mere dimag me ajib hi tasveer ban rahi thi.


Kahin dur jungle me ek ladki ko jinda chabaya ja raha tha. Aisi ladki jo apni khushi se apna sab kuch sunpkar ek Prem milan me thi. Us taveer me wo kuch ajib tarike ka wo narbhakshi tha, aur waisa hi taveer uss Shresh ki bhi mujhe dikhne lagi... Main bhag aayi wahan se.. dar ke sath iss baat ki bhi anubhuti ho rahi thi ki ye mere pure pariwar ko mar dalega…


Haan uss waqt ye sab mere liye kewal ek bhrm hi tha, jo itna majbut tha ki mujhe koi bhi step lene me majboor kar deta tha… aur ussi bhagne ke kram me kuch aisa hua jo maine pahle kabhi anubhaw nahi kiya tha…


Main Pune Mumbai train me thi.. Kalyan junction utarne ki koi wajah nahi thi, ulta main agar kalyan paar karke mumbai pahunch jati to koi dhundh bhi nahi pata... Lekin mere kadam khud-w-khud darwaje par chale gaye….. train dhimi hokar ruk rahi thi, aur mera man bechain hua ja raha tha..


Main darwaje par aakar idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.. pata nahi kya hua tha mujhe uss waqt, lekin jo bhi bhawna thi wo bahut hi strong thi, aur mere kadam khud-w-khud tunhare ore khinche ja rahe the… aisa lag raha tha, main chal nahi rahi hun, balki koi hanth pakad kar mujhe khinchte huye tunhare pass jabardasti le ja rahi hai… dimag sunya ho gaya tha .. main apni aakhen puri jor se mund chuki thi… mujhe bus itna yaad tha ki main train se utri.. aur jab aakhen khuli to main tumhare bahon me thi…
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Eventually Jivisha also understood everything and we understood what was on Jivisha's mind. But how and what strength is inside Jivisha and why she is so special, it is not known yet.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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Nischal ek kahar sa barsha aur Nischal nam ka toofan jab thama tab Zoren se aaye sabhi mehman bhi shant ho chuke the. Jama lash ko narbhakshi banane ke aadesh dekar Nischal jaise hi jane laga… apne kadam rok'kar wo wapas aaya… "Apini, yaar tere se ek kaam to rah hi gaya"..


Apini:- Kaun sa kaam Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu aaj raat 9 baje pahunch jana mere sasural, aur jakar unko kah dena ki Jivisha ke liye Nischal se behtar ladka koi nahi. Aur jara tarifon ke bhi pul bandh dena.


Apini:- Kar deta shayad, lekin Tanisha ke sath aapne acha nahi kiya…


Tabhi Rijo, Apini ko apne piche lete…. "Wo abhi dard me hai Viggo usse maanf kar do. Aapka kaam ho jayega.


Nischal:- Yahan tera kaam hua ki nahi pahle wo bata..


"Khud hi dekh lo"… aur samne lash ke dher par Rijo ne ishara kiya..…


Nischal, un lashon ko dekhte…. "Sach me kide-makode jaise ho yaar, jao yahan se aaj raat ka waqt hai tumhare pass, apna taam- jham samet lo aur mera kaam karte huye niklo yahan se. Aur haan jo bhi bhagwan hai tumhara uss se dua karna ki kisi mod par fir hamari mulakat na ho."..


Nischal apni baat kah'kar wahan se pardarshi diwar ko hata diya. Turant hi usne Nandni ko call laga diya aur usse bhi wahan ki deewar hata kar bata diya ki aage kya karna hai, taki jitne bhi log behosh pare huye hain, wo jald hi hosh me aa jaye.


Idhar Nischal ne jab dekha ki Rijo aur Apini wahan se chala ja chuka hai, tab wo Sawalker ko call lagaya. Sawalker puri force ke sath wahan pahuncha. Nischal tabtak kuch special effect me sath, gande se dikh rahe janwaron aur narbhakshi ka kalpnik tasveer wahan chala diya.


Jaise hi Sawalker aur police ki puri team wahan pahunchi, vishalkay janwar aur ajib se insan ko dekhkar sab sadme me pahunch gaye. Unhe kuch samjh me nahi aaya. Tabhi un sab ko Nischal dikha jo Sawalker ke piche aakar kahne laga… "bade bhaiya ye to wahi janwar aur mutant hai jo kisi scientist ka experiment hai".


Ek kalpnik jaal Nischal ne bun diya tha aur usi jaal ke ander ghus kar Sawalker aur uski team shikar kar rahe the. Kamal ka set up kiya tha Nischal ne.. Sawalker aur uski team lagatar 2 ghate tak unko marne mein juti rahi. Kaam khatam hone ke baad media coverage aur sab kuch hua.. sabhi lash ko janch ke liye bhej diya gaya aur aaj ka hero to Sawalker hi bana… .


Nischal Sawalker ko dekh'kar hasne laga aur wahan se wapas chala aaya… Wapas aakar sabse pahle flat pahuncha, wahan Nandni se milkar sab kuch btaya, sath me yah bhi ki ab ghabrane jaisi koi baat nahi hai..


Nandni:- hmmmm ! Chalo bala tali… lekin Nischal..


Nischal:- kya ?


Nandni:- Rahne de fir kabhi baat kar lenge.. abhi to tu mara ja raha hoga Jivisha se milne ke liye..


Nischal, Nandni ke gaal khinchte…. "You are so sweet. Subah milta hun main tumse"..


Nandni se baat karke Nischal Jivisha ke ghar chala gaya. Pipe ke sahare wo ek bar sur khidki par khada tha. Jivisha aur Kasak samne film dekh rahi thi, aur sath hi sath Jivisha piche khidki par bhi dekh rahi thi…


Nischal khidki par khada hokar ander dekhna shuru hi kiya tha ki Jivisha ne Nischal ko dekh liya... Wo dhire-dhire piche khiskti hui khidki par gayi aur bilkul dhime awaz me apne honth hilati hui puchne lagi… "Abhi yahan kyon aaye ho. Subah to mil hi rahe the na"..


Nischal:- Chalo mere sath…

Jivisha:- Kahan le ja raho ho…

Nischal:- Bus chalo to sahi…


Jivisha:- lekin is waqt bahar kaise aaungi, sab lock hoga.. mujhe pakad lenge…

Nischal:- yakin hai mujh par…


Jivisha, Nischal ke chehre par pyar se hath ferti, haan me sir hilane lagi. Nischal ne ishare se khidki ke bahar aane ke liye bola… Jivisha khidki se lagi ussi patli railing par paun rakhi aur khidki ke bahar aa gayi..


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne kandhe par utha kar pipe ke sahare niche laya.. baat jab boundry kudne ki aayi tab Jivisha ko kuch kahna hi nahi para, wo pass ke ek ped ke sahare boundry par chadh gayi aur boundry ke pass ek thela lagi hui hoti hai, uske sahare uss par….


Nischal, Jivisha ko ghurte huye…. "Ye batao mujhe, tum pahle bhi khidki se niche aa chuki ho na"..


Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhkar hansti hui haan me sar hilati hui kahne lagi….. "Kisi ke sath ghar se kahin bhagna para to uske liye pahle se bahut practice kar rakhi thi"..


Nischal:- Kamal hai, aur kya taiyari hai… main to impress ho gaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ji.. chalo ye batao itni raat ko kya sochkar mujhe bahar lekar aaye ho…


Nischal:- Tumhe miss kar raha tha isliye tumhe le aaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ek baat batao tum mujhe padesan kyon karte the, aur kaise karte the…


Nischal:- Matlab main samjha nahi...


Jivisha:- Tum log mujhe pagal samjhte ho na, jise kuch bhi akal nahi…


Nischal, Jivisha ke thik samne khade hote huye kahne laga… "mujhe pata hai ki tumhe har baat ka aabhash hai jo kabhi tum bhrm manti ho, to kabhi satya. Jaise tum mujh me apne kayi sare sawalon ke jawab dhundh rahi ho is waqt, meri haalat tum se bhi jyada puzzle bani hui hai.... Vishwas karo main bhi bich mazdhar me hun"..


Jivisha:- bus mujhe ye bata do ki parinam jo bhi ho, lekin tum mujhe chhod kar to kabhi nahi jaoge na..


Nichal:- Tumhe aisi feeling kyon aayi jara bataogi..


Jivisha:- meri harkaten.. mujhe kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai main sabko khote ja rahi hun.. mammi, papa, bhabhi, bhai, Nandni .. sab mujhse kuch dino me dur ho jayenge… ..


Nischal:- Kisi ko andaja nahi tumhari haalat ka aur ab unhe pata bhi nahi chalega.. tum chulbuli aur natak karte hi achhi lagti ho… aise serious look me bilkul bakwas lagti ho..


Jivisha hanste huye Nischal ke gale lag gayi. Kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad wo kahne lagi…. "Aaj sham main fir tunhe dhakka de deti, ye jo tum mere balon me hath dene ke bahane jo mujhe behosh kar gaye the... Mar dala Sapna ke katilon ko, ya koi jinda bhi bacha hai".. ..


Nischal:- Ye tum kya kah rahi ho?


Jivisha:- wahi jo tum sun rahe ho. Mujhe ache se pata hai ki tum yahan is prithwi ke nahi ho.. aur na hi wo Shresh tha . Bus fark itna hai ki tum mere wahi sapno ke rajkumar ho, jo kahin dur se aaya hai aur wo koi jalil kism ke prani the. Jaise yahan prithvi par insano me bhi tarah-tarah ke insan hote hain…


Nischal:- hahaha… matlab tumhe apne bhrm par yakin hone laga hai haan… Jivisha mujhe sari baat janni hai.. shuru se.. kab tumhe kya laga tha…


Jivisha:- nah aise nahi.. mujhe pahle gode me uthao.. aur gode me utha'kar mujhe wahan le chalo jahan hum pahli baar mile the .. fir main bataungi…


Nischal:- sach me tum abhi pune se kalyan jana chahti ho.


Jivisha pyara sa chehra banati haan me apna sir hila di. Nischal bhi Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskuraya aur usse gode me utha'kar daud laga diya… Uski daud me itni raftar thi ki jagta aadmi uss gati ko na to dekh pata aur na hi sah pata.. aankh to uski band hi hoti lekin Jivisha, Nischal ki aakhon me dekh'kar muskura rahi thi.


Kuch hi der me Nischal apne thikane par tha aur wahan se viman lekar dono kalyan. Aur kuch hi der me dono kalyan junction par the… Jivisha apni ikchha anusar Nischal ko fir se wahin khadi hone kahi, jahan wo pahli baar khada tha..


Nischal Jivisha ki ikchha par kya kahe.. bus uske bachpana me wo bhi thoda bacha banta ja raha tha… fir se wahi sab dohraya ja raha tha… Nischal se Jivisha takrayi, chehre ke baal ko Nischal ne hataya aur Nischal ko dekh'kar punah wahi bhawana jaag gayi jo pahli mulakat me jagi thi.


Na to bhid dikha aur na hi Kalyan junction ki wo chahal pahal. Jivisha ke liye khamosh sama tha aur najron ke samne fir se wahi manmohak drishy tha jise dekh'kar Jivisha khud ko rok nahi payi thi...


Honth se honth lagati Jivisha ek bar fir Nischal ko chum rahi thi, fark sirf itna tha ki aaj bus ek chhote se sprash matr se wah anubhaw ho gaya jo us din adhura sa rah gaya tha... Nischal ka sath aur uske hone ka ehsas…


Jivisha Nischal ke kano me kahne lagi... "Kahin khamosh jagah mujhe le chalo.. jahan kewal hum tum ho"…


Nischal usse aise hi jagah par le aaya.. dono chandni raat me ek jhil kinare baithe the... Kuch khamoshi aur dher sara pyar dono ke aakhon me dikh raha tha… Jivisha nischint hokar Nischal ke sine se apne sar ko tikaye thi…


Nischal:- Tumhe ascharya nahi hua ki main ek alian hun..


Jivisha:- tunhare grah par main bhi ek alian hi rahungi… don't worry..


Nischal:- Hammm ! Ab mujhe shuru se batao… kya hua tha..


Jivisha:- Bahut pahle ki baat hai ye.. main bachpan se jawani ki dahlij par kadam rakh rahi thi… sarir me kuch badlaw ke bare me maa batayi thi, lekin usi dauran mere ander ajib si chijen hone lagi... Aisa lag raha tha mere ander koi soyi hui hai aur jagne ki kosis to kar rahi hai, lekin thik se jaag nahi pa rahj.. ..


Tumhe sunne me ajib lag raha hoga kyonki ye baat maine tab sabko batayi thi aur kisi ne meri baat par dhyan tak nahi diya, lekin wo baat sach hai. Uske baad sab dhundhla sa ho gaya. Jindgi maze me hanste-khelte kat rahi thi. Lekin achanak hi meri jindgi ne karwat li. Papa meri shadi ki baat kar rahe the. Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha aur mere sabhi ghar wale ek sur me the. Yahan tak ki Nandita bhabhi bhi.


Mujhe shak hua aur maine Kasak se baat ki.. jab usse phone ki tab mujhe ek bhawihshyawani ke bare me wo batayi, jisme kaha gaya tha ki yadi meri shadi sahi samay par nahi hui to is prithvi par anarth aayega… aur jis waqt mere papa paglon ki tarah meri shadi karwana chahte the tab sahar me ajib ghatna hona shuru ho chuka tha.. logon ki lash ajib tarike se mil rahi thi.


Ussi dauran Kasak bhi kahin gayab ho gayi. Sabko yahi dar tha ki ye ho na ho mere hi karan ho raha hai. Shadi to karni hi thi aur kewal ek shadi se sab kuch thik ho jata hai to shadi karne me harj hi kya hai.


Main raji ho gayi. Pata na mere gharwale kyon uss Shresh ki baton se khush ho jate, lekin pahli najar se hi wo mujhe ek behrupiya najar aata tha. Jaymala stage par jaise hi usne apna phone apne jeb se nikala tha.. mere dimag me ajib hi tasveer ban rahi thi.


Kahin dur jungle me ek ladki ko jinda chabaya ja raha tha. Aisi ladki jo apni khushi se apna sab kuch sunpkar ek Prem milan me thi. Us taveer me wo kuch ajib tarike ka wo narbhakshi tha, aur waisa hi taveer uss Shresh ki bhi mujhe dikhne lagi... Main bhag aayi wahan se.. dar ke sath iss baat ki bhi anubhuti ho rahi thi ki ye mere pure pariwar ko mar dalega…


Haan uss waqt ye sab mere liye kewal ek bhrm hi tha, jo itna majbut tha ki mujhe koi bhi step lene me majboor kar deta tha… aur ussi bhagne ke kram me kuch aisa hua jo maine pahle kabhi anubhaw nahi kiya tha…


Main Pune Mumbai train me thi.. Kalyan junction utarne ki koi wajah nahi thi, ulta main agar kalyan paar karke mumbai pahunch jati to koi dhundh bhi nahi pata... Lekin mere kadam khud-w-khud darwaje par chale gaye….. train dhimi hokar ruk rahi thi, aur mera man bechain hua ja raha tha..


Main darwaje par aakar idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.. pata nahi kya hua tha mujhe uss waqt, lekin jo bhi bhawna thi wo bahut hi strong thi, aur mere kadam khud-w-khud tunhare ore khinche ja rahe the… aisa lag raha tha, main chal nahi rahi hun, balki koi hanth pakad kar mujhe khinchte huye tunhare pass jabardasti le ja rahi hai… dimag sunya ho gaya tha .. main apni aakhen puri jor se mund chuki thi… mujhe bus itna yaad tha ki main train se utri.. aur jab aakhen khuli to main tumhare bahon me thi…
Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... To jivisha or nischal ke bich jo hua wo sab dohra rahe hai taki dono dono ko samajh paye....or dekhte hai aage kya hota hai......or jivisha ka shakti puri trah jagti hai dekhte hai.... Tab kya hoga jab jivisha ke ichha shakti jag jayegi....
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Nandni…. Bhagwan jane ki unhone humshakal kaise banaye. Par maksad saaf hai ki unka ek aadmi Jivisha ke bilkul karib rahe. Tum kya sochne lage Nischal.


Nischal…. In logoṅ ki kahani to samjh me aa gayi, lekin ek baat samjh me nahi aayi ki aakhir ye log Jivisha se chahte kya haiṅ. Kyonki ye itne to saksham hai ki sab ke bich se Jivisha ko uṭha kar le jaye aur koi kuch kar bhi nahi sakta hai… fir ye log aakhir itni planning kyoṅ kar rahe haiṅ.


Nandni…. To hume sabse pahle unke maksad ka pata lagana hoga. Kuch socho Nischal, kuch socho.. tumhara pyar khatre me hai.


Nischal…. Chup kar, kaam nikalwane ke liye dobara ye word use kiya to main bhag jauṅga.


Nandni…. Nischal dekh ṭo teri aur Jivisha ki kundli bhi kitni milti hai, tu bhi bhagoḍa, wo bhi bhagodi. Dono ek ho gaye to bhagte he rahoge.


Nischal…. Bakwas ho gayi tumhari….


Nandni….. Karela kha kar paida hua tha kya jo kaḍwa he bolta hai. Haaṅ ho gaya mera, par please tu kisi tarah Jivisha ko in sari musibatoṅ se nikal na. Un logoṅ ko to pata bhi nahi iss Shresh kaminey ki asaliyat.


Nischal…. Aur pata chalna bhi nahi chahiye. Warna raat ke andhere me wo janwar aayega, aur aage se apna punchh ghusa kar pichhe tak fad dega. Hume ek khabri ki jaroorat hai jo hum tak jaroori information de sake.


Nandni…. Uss se kya fayda hoga..


Nischal…. Fayda ye hoga, ki hum aage ka plan kar ke un alians ko trap kar sakte haiṅ.


Nandni…. To uss ke liye khabri ki kya jaroorat hai. Main Jivisha se he har baat puch liya karungi na.


Nischal…. Duffer kahin ki. Jivisha ke har movement par to unki najar hogi. Hume koi aur chahiye.


Nischal…. Idea, kyoṅ na hum Chirag beṭu se mile. Usse agar jhasan me le liya to wo apna pakka khabri banega.


Nischal…. Great idea. To ye sahabjaḍe kab milenge, jarra pata to karna.


Nandni…. 3:20 Pm par uss ke school ki chuṭti hogi… chalo chalte haiṅ. Aaj he usse apne jhasen me lete haiṅ.


Nischal ne bhi hami bhar diya aur dono Chirag ke school nikal gaye. Jab school ki chuṭti hui aur Chirag ko ye log dhuṅdh rahe the, tab Chirag bhi ek rashmayi laḍka ban kar inke samne aaya.


Nischal ne bhi hami bhar diya aur dono Chirag ke school nikal gaye. Lekin jab school ki chuṭti hui aur Chirag ko ye log dhuṅdh rahe the, tab Chirag bhi ek rashmayi laḍka ban kar inke samne aaya.



Puri class nikal aayi, lekin in dono ne Chirag ko nikalte nahi dekha. Tabhi Nandni ko “hi didi” kahta ek laḍka wahan se gujra. Nandni ko achanak yaad aaya, ye to Chirag ka dost hai. Nandni usse rokti… “Ae, ae, ae… sun sun”


Uss ladkey ne aage baḍh kar datoṅ tale aise jibh dabayi, mano uss se koi bhul ho gayi ho…. “Haaṅ didi”


Nandni….. Ye Chirag kahaṅ hai, pura school bahar aa gaya, wo abhi tak nahi aaya.


Laḍka…. Mujhe kya pata didi. Main dusre section me huṅ aur wo dusre section me. Ok, bye didi meri bus aa gayi hai.


Nischal….. Chirag ki mammi hospital me hai, ab jaldi batao kahaṅ hai wo.


Laḍka….. Mere bhi papa hospital me haiṅ. Mujhe bhi jaldi jana hai.. ok, bye.


Nandni…. Nischal, ye jaroor kuch hum se chhipa raha hai. Baḍa chalu banta hai. Le kar chalo isse.


Nischal ne badi safai se uss ladkey ko kidnap kar ke car me le aaya. Aur dobara uss se Chirag ka pata puchne lage. Lekin kai baar puchne ke baad bhi wo kahta raha… “main nahi janta”


Nischal…. Nandni, ye aise nahi manega. Lagta hai isse torture karna he paṛega.

Laḍka…. Sir ji bhale he aap mujhe maar dalo, lekin mujh se kuch ugalwa nahi sakte.


“Teri to” kahte huye Nischal aur Nandni dono ne apni uṅgaliyaṅ uss ke pet aur gardan ke aas-pass laga kar gudagudi karne lagi… aur anth me uss ne sare raaj ugal diye. Chirag to aaj school aaya he nahi, wo to school se guṭhali maar kar gf ghumane gaya tha.


Uss ladke ki baat sun kar Nischal aur Nandni ek dusre ka muh dekhte…. “Itni si umaṛ me he”… teeno he fir Chirag ki talash me nikle. Jyada mehnat nahi karni pari, dono he ek cafeteria me baiṭhe, hathoṅ me hath dal kar baten kar rahe the.


Nischal…. Wo raha Chirag, chalo chalte haiṅ…


Nandni, shararti muskaan apne chehre par lati…. “Nischal, jarra in piḍdiyon ki love story hum bhi to sune. Jao jarra apna jasusi mobile un ke table ke niche laga kar aao”


Laḍka…. Do premiyoṅ ki chhip kar baten sun’na ġalat hai.


Nandni…. Iss ladkey ka naak chhod kar baki ka chehra ḍhako….


Nischal pahle uss ladkey ko pack kiya, fir hawa ki tarah gaya aur uss ke table ke niche mobile laga kar aa gaya. Nischal aur Nandni ab dusre mobile me apna kaan lagaye, aur samne se dono ka aakhon dekha visuals mil raha tha…..


Chirag ke kandhe se sir tikaye, uss ki gf kahne lagi…. “Chirag, baby aisa kab tak chalega. In baḍe logoṅ ke chakkar me humari love life barbaad ho rahi hai”


Chirag…. Sakshi, itne tension se to achha hai ki hum kahin bhag jaye.


Sakshi…. Haaṅ chalo yahiṅ se bhag chalte haiṅ. Ye ghar wale humare masoom pyar ko kabhi nahi samjhenge.


Chirag….. Ṭhik hai Sakshi chalo bhagte haiṅ.


Sakshi…. Ruko to Chirag. Main school dress me huṅ, koi make up bhi nahi kiya. Track suit bhi na pahne aur na he paun me sport shoe haiṅ. Hum bhagenge kaise?


Chirag, Sakshi ko kiss karta…. Good point Sakshi. Tum kitni samjhdar ho. Kal hum track suit aur sport shoe alag se le kar aayenge, fir bhagte haiṅ…


Dono fir apne-apne mukke bhiḍate….. “done …. done”


Hairani ke sath-sath Nischal aur Nandni, dono ki baat par hans bhi rahe the. Dono ko jab laga ki Chirag aur Sakshi ab yahaṅ se uth kar bhagne wale haiṅ, tab Chirag ke dost ko sath le kar Nischal aur Nandni unke pass pahunch gaye.


Un logoṅ ko apne samne dekh Chirag unhe ghurte huye khada ho gaya. Chirag ko khadey hote dekh, Sakshi bhi khadi ho gayi…. “Kaun hai ye Chirag”


Chirag…. Humare pyar ke dushman aa gaye Sakshi, tum jarra bhi mat ghabrana, main tumhare liye har mushkil ko khatam kar ke aauṅga. Kuch hote haiṅ aise vibhishaṇ jo hum jaise chahne waloṅ ki khushi nahi dekh sakte.


Laḍka….. Chirag, meri koi ġalti nahi. Yadi mujhe marte-marte mar bhi ḍalte to bhi main apna muh nahi kholta. Par inhone mujhe bhar pet gudagudi kiya hai… main kya karta….


Chirag….. Baat chahe jo bhi thi Parag, lekin aaj ke baad humari dosi me darar aa gayi.


Sakshi…. Tum hume maar bhi dalo to bhi lahoo ke aakhri katre se yahi aawaz aayegi…. “I love Chirag”


Nandni…. Dono ab ek sabd bhi bole to khinch kar ek rafta lagauṅgi, pyar ka bhoot abhi utar jayega. Chupchap baiṭho apni jagah par. Ṭhik se khada hona aata nahi, aur ye ghar chhod kar bhagenge. Ek dum chup ek jarra awaz nahi.


Nandni jaise he garji, teeno ke teeno shant ho kar chupchap chair par baiṭh gaye. Nandni teeno se puchti…. “Kuch khaoge tum log”


Teeno ne menu card se dekh kar apna-apna order de kar fir se shant baiṭh gaye. Nischal Chirag ko dekh kar haste huye kahne laga…. “Tum bilkul apne bua ki parchhayi ho. Sahi ja rahe ho”



Chirag…. Kam se kam aap ki tarah to nahi huṅ na, jisne meri didi se uss ki haṅsi chhin li.


Nandni…. Kya hua Jivisha ko, wo ṭhik to hai na.


Chirag…. Bilkul ṭhik nahi hai. Pura din khamosh aur apne kamre me pari rahti haiṅ. Aur to aur wo Shresh bhi dobara shadi karne aa gaya. Kahta hai pahle meri di ka dil jitega fir un se shadi karega.


Nischal…. Beta Chirag, tum aur Sakshi ek dusre se pyar karte ho.


Chirag… Haaṅ fufa ji, hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyar karte haiṅ. Lekin jab se di ka haal dekha hai hume dar hai ki kahin hum pyar karne waloṅ ko bhi ye jalim duniya alag na kar de.


Nandni…. Tum dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta ye mera wada hai. Lekin Chirag tum yadi bhag jaoge to tumhari di ka kya hoga wo nahi socha. Wo to bechari akeli he ho jayengi, aur unke dushman jit jayenge.


Chirag…. Hooooo, ye to maine socha he nahi. Fir ab main kya karuṅ.


Nandni…. Chirag tumhe humara intelligence officer ban’na hai. Humare har dushman par kaḍi najar rakhni hai aur koi bhi doubtful activity ho to turant hume batana hai.


Chirag…. Nandni Di, deal done. Aap mujhe dushman ki list do, main aap ko puri information duṅga.


Nandni ne fir ek-ek kar ke pure pariwar ko he dushman ke suchi me dal di, aur sath he sath Shresh ko bhi. Chirag ab sab ki jausi karne ke liye taiyar ho gaya. Nandni aur Nischal ne aakhirkar Chirag ko apni ore mila he liya. Sabha samapti ke waqt…. Jab sab uth kar khadey huye jane le liye…


Chirag, Sakshi se…. Sakshi paun chhu lo in dono ke. Aaj se yahi dono humare godfather aur godmother haiṅ, humari pyar ki nayya ko yahi paar lagayenge. Chirag itna kah kar khud dono ke kadmoṅ me gir gaya aur uss ke sath-sath Sakshi bhi unke kadmoṅ me gir gayi.


Dono ke natak ko dekhkar Nischal aur Nandni dono hanste huye kahne lage…. "Ye pakka Jivisha ki parchhayi hai".. wahan se Nischal ne Nandni ko wapas flat bhej diya aur kuch sochkar wahin school ke pass khada raha.



Subah ke samay… Jivisha ke ghar…


Chahakne wali Jivisha puri tarah khamosh ho gayi thi, aisa lag raha tha jaise achanak se uski shararten kisi ne chhin li ho aur usme gambhir ladki ki aatma dal di hon. Bina uthaye na uthne wali Jivisha subah-subah uth chuki thi, aur ghar ke kuch kamo me apni maa aur bhabhi ka hath bata rahi thi.


Priya aise usse kaam karte huye dekhkar kahne lagi…. "Agar aise sanskar suru se tere ander aaye hote to tumhare karan hume sabke samne aise sharminda nahi hona parta. Fir bhi koi baat nahi, der aaye durust aaye. Ab koi aur galti mat karna."


Jivisha fiki si muskan dikhati.. "ji maa" .. kahkar apna kaam karne lagi. Wahan par Nandita bhi kaam kar rahi thi, usne jab Priya ki baten suni to usse bilkul bhi acha nahi laga. Nandita jab shadi karke aayi thi, tab Jivisha kafi chhoti thi, bilkul Chirag jitni, shuru se Jivisha, Nandita ke liye bachi hi rahi thi.


Nandita:- Jisa, ye kaam chhod, main kar lungi.. tum jao Chirag ko taiyar kar dena ..


Jivisha kaam chhodkar Chirag ko taiyar karne nikal gayi. Chirag ab tak soya hua tha, jaise hi uski aankh khuli aur Jivisha ko apne samne dekha, wo Jivisha se lipat kar usse jodon se bhinch liya…. "Didi, aap mujh se ab pyar nahi karti na"..
Waaah nain bahut hi khoob. Behtareen se bhi behtareen kahani aur usme jo siyapa chal raha hai uske to kahme hi kya. Kamaal ki rachna hai,,,,, :claps:

Yaha tak padh liya nain bhai aur yakeen maaniye mujhe bahut achha laga padh kar. Shuru me to jivisha ne siyapa kiya aur ab do aur shaamil ho gayi. Family wale bhi inke chakkar me pareshaan hain. :D

Kuch log jo dusre planet se aaye hain wo jivisha ke pichhe pade hain aur iske liye wo planning kar rahe hain magar kya is bare me abhi nischal ko pata nahi hai. Khair ye to alag matter hua kintu yaha par jivisha aur nischal ke bich love bhi hai jiske liye nandini nischal ki puri help kar rahi hai magar kyo ki maamla khud jivisha ne bigada hua hai is liye gaadi aage badhne me time lagega. :dazed:

Ansh ko nischal shak hua magar nischal ne badi khubsurti se ansh ka dimaag ghuma diya. Ansh to nandini ke pyar me paagal hai jise wo jaise chaahe sata bhi rahi hai aur ghuma bhi rahi hai,,,,,:D

Nischal aur nandini ki chemistry mast hai. Idhar nischal aur jivisha ko milane aur ghar me sabki jasusi karane ke liye chiraag ko lagaya gaya. Yaha par sabse mazedaar baat ye lagi ki jinhe abhi hagne ke baad saunch karna bhi thik se nahi aata hoga wo duniya ki sabse khubsurat aur sabse khatarnaak kaam kar rahe hain...yaani ki pyaar.,,, :hehe:

Ab dekhna ye hai ki chiraag ki jasusi kya rang laati hai. Dushman bahut khatarnaak hain aur kab kya kar daale iska abhi pata karna baaki hai. Nain bhai kahani to kafi aage tak ja chuki hai is liye aage jald hi pata chal jayega kya hua hai. Writing style zabardast hai aapka aur imagination bhi kamaal ki hai. Bas aise hi lage rahiye. Milte hain break ke baad,,,,, :dost:
 
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