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Guy's aap logo ko story kaisi lag rahi hai ?

  • Badiya hai

    Votes: 32 64.0%
  • Thik thak hi hai

    Votes: 2 4.0%
  • Story thodi aage bade tab pata lagega

    Votes: 21 42.0%

  • Total voters
    50
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sharma ji_91

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Guy's mera ek sawal tha ki kahi story bohot badi or bohot achhi hoti hai jisme koi sex lust ya fantasy nahi hoti lekin fir bhi vo kahaniyan end me adhuri reh jaati hai or adhuri se mera matlab hai ki story ko complete ho jaati hai lekin us kahani ke character's ki pyaar ki kahani adhuri reh jaati hai.....

To kya main koi aisi kahani likhu jisme ladka ya ladki ki pure love story' bohot buri tarah se ya fir kisi kr reason se jaise ki ladka ya ladki ki death ho jaye aisi kahani likhu kya??....

Kyuki mujhe ye pasand nahi hai to socha puch lu ki aap logo ko aisi kahaniyon me intrest hai ya sirf jo story me Happy Ending ho vo STORY chahiye.......

Batana ZAROOR....
 

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Guy's mera ek sawal tha ki kahi story bohot badi or bohot achhi hoti hai jisme koi sex lust ya fantasy nahi hoti lekin fir bhi vo kahaniyan end me adhuri reh jaati hai or adhuri se mera matlab hai ki story ko complete ho jaati hai lekin us kahani ke character's ki pyaar ki kahani adhuri reh jaati hai.....

To kya main koi aisi kahani likhu jisme ladka ya ladki ki pure love story' bohot buri tarah se ya fir kisi kr reason se jaise ki ladka ya ladki ki death ho jaye aisi kahani likhu kya??....

Kyuki mujhe ye pasand nahi hai to socha puch lu ki aap logo ko aisi kahaniyon me intrest hai ya sirf jo story me Happy Ending ho vo STORY chahiye.......

Batana ZAROOR....
Nhi wo achi lagti waisi honi chahiye ki last me bache paida kar ke apna ghar basa le
 
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Aar am

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Is kahani me please request hai waisi ending nhi dena bhai
 
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Iski ending aise honi chahiye ki dono ke ek beta ho jo dono ke pyar ki nishani hogi dono betiya ek bhai ke liye jid kare
 
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Duniya me saari khushiya or saari daulat ek taraf or pariwar ek taraf jab insaan javan hota hai tab tak usko parivaar ki ehmiyat samjh nahi aati lekin jab vo budha hota hai or us WAKTH jab usko uske parivaar ki sabse jayda zaroorat thi tab uska parivaar uske paas nahi...........

Lekin ye galti jerry ne nahi ki jerry khoob paisa kama raha tha vo chahta to kisi or ko apne jeevan me laa sakta tha. lekin usne apni maa ko dekha jo bechari akele kab se seh rahi hai kitna kuch or upar se uski do nanhi pariyan vo to usse itna pyaar karti hai jitna shayad uski khud ki betiyan bhi na kare.....or rashmi to shuru se hi jerry ko apna sab maan ti thi.......

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Charo enjoy karke apne ghar aajate hai...

TAbhi taxi me.....

RAshmi :- are ye dono to so gai ab kya kare....

Jerry :- are to isme kya main in dono ko utha leta hu...

Rashmi :- aap to rehne hi do ek to pehle hi haath me lagi hai...

TAbhi Driver :- Sahab main kuch madad Karu kya....

Jerry kuch sochte hue :- thik hai bhai aap hamara saman nikal ke rakh do hum dono bachiyon ko andar lekar jaate hai....

Driver :- Ji sahab.

Fir jerry or rashmi......


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Dono ek ek beti ko apni godi me utha kar room me le jaa kar bed par sula dete hai....

TABHI jerry :- Tum inke paas ruko main driver se saman lekar or usko paise de kar aata hu......

Rashmi :- Ji......

Fir jerry driver se saman le kar or paise dekar kamre me aata hai jaha Rashmi dono bachiyon ko blanket udha rahi thi or ye dekh jerry.....

Jerry :- Kitni pyaari lag rahi hai na dono....

Rashmi :- Hmmmm aaj khoob kheli hai masti kari hai ab dekho kaise so Rahi hai.....


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Rashmi or Jerry dono bachiyon ko dekh rahe the...

Jerry :- Jab jagi hui hoti hai tab kaise uchal kood karti hai ❤️ or ab dekho chup chap kaise so gai....

Rashmi :- Hmmmmm

Jerry :- Kal inko subha mat uthana kal inki school ki chutti karwa denge...

Rashmi :- Kyu Bhala nahi school ki chuttiyan nahi karni vaise bhi inka next month birthday hai or exam bhi aane wale hai..... Samjhe aap....

Jerry :- Are baba dekho na kaise thaki Hui thi or dono so gai..ab tumhe lagta hai ki kal ye subha uthne wali hai.....

Rashmi :- Aap uski chinta mat karo vo main utha dungi Varna..

Jerry :- Varna kya...

Rashmi :- Varna mar mar kar uthaungi or school bhejungi....

Jerry :- Ohh hello khabardar agar jo meri Betiyon ko haath bhi lagya tha.....

Tabhi Rashmi Jerry ke mooh se apni betiyon ki parvah dekh bohot khush hoti hai 🥰...

Rashmi :- Achha bada pyaar aaraha hai aapko.....


Jerry :- Haa to kyu na aaye meri betiyan jo hai....koi dikkat..

Rashmi :- Nahi mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai....

Or rashmi dheere se jisse jerry ko na sunai de....

Rashmi :- Bachiyon ko to pyaar de doge lekin mujhe mera kya....


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Jerry Jo Rashmi Ki or dekhta hai or samjh jaata hai ki Rashmi kya soch rahi hai.....

Tabhi jerry :- Vaise bachho ka tution kitne baje hota hai...

Rashmi soch se bahar aate hue.....

Rashmi hadbada te hue :- kya........kya....vo......vo......kya kaha apne....

Jerry :- Bachho ki tution kitne baje ki hai....

Rashmi :- Roj to 3 se 5 hoti hai jab school jaati hai.....

Jerry :- Or jab nahi jaati.....

Rashmi kuch sochte hue jerry ko dekhti hai kyuki aaj tak aise sawal to manoj ne bhi nahi puchte the to Rashmi thoda khush bhi hoti hai ki koi to hai ye sab sawal puchne wala....

Rashmi :- Ji woo fir to bachhe subha tution jaate hai.....

Jerry kuch sochte hue.....


Jerry :- To thik hai fir kal bachho ki school ki chutti kar wado and bachho ko din me tution bhej dena jitne baje vo jaati hai or haa mujhe or bachho ko subha mat uthana kyuki main bhi aaj bohot thak gaya hu.....🤭 Or tum bhi mat uthna.....

Tabhi Rashmi thoda udas ho jaati hai....



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Or jerry ki taraf dekhti hai jisme dekh jerry samajh jaata hai......

Jerry :- Ohh sorry""""sorry*""""" mujhe maaf kardo main to bhool hi Gaya vo kameen bhi to hai.......

Tabhi Rashmi kuch nahi kehti or tabhi jerry uske paas jaata hai...


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Jerry :- tumhe maine kitni baar kaha hai..huh?.... Ki main tumhe udas nahi dekh sakta kya tum meri kabhi nahi sunogi.......huh????

Rashmi nam aankhon se :- Main kon hu aapki or aap mere kon hai jo main aapki sunu????

Or ye sun jerry :- Tum meri kya ho vo mujhe batane ki zaroorat nahi hai....main tumse pyaar karta hu samjhi or ye mera farz hai.....

Rashmi gusse me :- Achha Pyaar Karta hu!!!? Huh?? Konsa Pyaar Bolo Kon Sa Pyaar::!!!!

Jerry jo bolna to bohot kuch chahta tha lekin kisi sharam ki wajah se bol nahi pata......

Tabhi jerry :- Agar aise hi chillaogi to bachchiya uth jaayegi......

Rashmi bhi khud par thoda control karti hai.... Or Nam aankho se jerry ko dekhti hai...


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Tabhi jerry :- Tumhe maine kaha hai na main tumhe rota nahi dekh sakta.....

Rashmi :- Kyu?

Jerry :- Kyuki Main Tumse!!!!!!!

Or ye keh vo chup ho jaata hai...

Lekin Rashmi :- Tumse kya?? Bolo tumse kya??

Jerry :- Kuch....."" kuch.........Nahi...Vo To Bas mujhe tumhari fikar hai....

Rashmi Man Me :- Kaisi fikar hai ye kaisi fikar hai jerry ye kaisa pyaar hai huh?? Jiska koi naam nahi hai...? Aakhir kyu ek dam se khushiya dekar chin lete ho kyu karte ho huh???..

Jerry dekhta hai rashmi bohot gehri soch me hai or ushe hi ghoor rahi hai ..


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Jerry Rashmi ko dekh samajh to raha tha bolna bhi bohot kuch chahta tha lekin......

Jerry ( fake smile ke saath ) :- ab aise hi khadi rahogi......sona nahi hai......

Or rashmi jerry ke ye jawab sun gusse me waha se jaane hi wali thi tabhi.....


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JErry Rashmi ka haath pakad leta hai or jerry ka sparsh paste hi rashmi ke sharir me kuch ho jaata hai.....

Jerry :- Aise naraz ho kar jaaogi to mujhe neend nahi aayegi....

Or jerry ke ye kehte hi rashmi jerry ko dekhti hai......

Jerry Rashmi ko dekhte hue :- Haa mujhe neend nahi aayegi kya tum ab bhi jaana chahti ho.....


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Rashmi jerry ko Nam aankho se dekhti hai....

Rashmi :- To main kaha jaau...

Jerry :- kyu yaha do bed hai so jaao.......

Rashmi :- Lekin ek bed par to dono badhiya soi hui hai.......

Jerry :- To doosre kar so jaoo doosra bed bhi to hai......

Rashmi :- Lekin aap kaha soge..?

Jerry :- Kyu Kya main tumhare saath nahi so sakta...?

Or ye sun rashmi ke man me to laddu footne lagte hai lekin ushe sharam bhi aarahi thi....

JErry :- bolo nahi so sakta kya......

Rashmi sharmate hue :- Vo.......vo....ha.....haaa........ha kyu.....kyu naahi ..........vo vo.....

Jerry :- itna hakla kyu rahi ho...koi dikkat hai kya...

Rashmi :- Nahi ..nahi...

Tabhi jerry....


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Jerry :- tum chinta mat karo main kabhi koi aisa kaam nahi karunga jisse tumhe TAKLEEF ho RASHMI....❤️

OR apna naam sun rashmi jerry ko dekhti hai or....

Rashmi :- Mujhe aap par khud se jayada bharosa hai......

Jerry muskurate hue :- To chale so jaaye raat bohot ho gai hai subha uthna bhi hai.....

Rashmi :- Ji.....

Or dono bed par chale jaate hai or jaise hi dono ek doosre ki taraf peeth karke sone lagte hai tabhi....

Rashmi apne man me :- Mujhe aap par hamesha se bharosa raha hai or rahega aankh band karke aap par bharosa karti hu lekin kaise kahu ki ek aurat ko or bhi kuch chaiye hota hai.....Ye kehte hue Rashmi ki aankhe nam ho jaati hai....


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Rashmi sisakne lagti hai or ye aawaj jerry ko sunai de jaati hai......

Or jerry samjh jaata hai ki Rashmi ro rahi hai.....

Ab jerry kuch sochta hai or ek dam se.....


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Jerry Rashmi ko apni baho me pakad leta hai or rashmi Bina kuch bole apne aasu poch te hue jerry ke sine par sir rakh deti hai.....

Jerry :- maine tumhe kaha hai na ki tum roya mat kro lekin tum meri baat kabhi nahi maan ti.....

Rashmi jo ek dam se hui harkat se hairan or usse jayada khush thi :- Sorry' mujhe maaf kardo lekin.....

TAbhi Jerry :- shhhhhhhhh ab bas bohot hua ab so jao....

Rashmi bhi kuch nahi kehti......

Bas jerry ke sine par sir rakh kar sochne lagti hai......



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Rashmi man me :- Kaise kahu jerry aapko kaise kahu ki mujhe aapse pyaar ho gya hai or aisa vaisa nahi balki ek patni ko apne pati se jis tarah ka pyaar hota hai vaisa pyaar or sab soch kar vo rone hi wali thi lekin khud ko control krti hai......or ye sab soch te soch te Rashmi ki aankh lag jaati hai....

OR rashmi jo jerry ke sine par so Rahi thi jerry usko dekhta hai...


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Jerry man me :- mujhe pata hai rashmi tum kyu ro rahi ho main sab jaanta hu tumhari takleef lekin mujh par bharosa rakho main dheere dheere sab kuch theek kar dunga...ye mera tum se wada hai......main tumhe vo har khushi dunga jo tumhe chaiye ro har ek hak dunga jo tumhara hai mujh par sirf tumhara..........

Or jerry...


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Rashmi ke baalo me haath ferte ferte kab so jaat hai pata nahi lagta.......

Ab agli subha.....

Rashmi uth ti hai... angdaiya lete hue or ghadi ki taraf dekhti hai jaha 10 bajne waale the...


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Ye dekh Rashmi hairan ho jaati hai kyuki ye uski life me doosri baae tha ki vo itne gehri neend me so gai ki uski time ka pata nahi laga pehle jab jerry ki godi me soi thi or ab ye.....

Lekin isse bhi jayada hairani usko ye thi ki abhi tak manoj ne aawaj kyu nahi di.....

Or bacchiya bhi nahi thi bistar par or jerry bhi nahi.....

Tabhi Rashmi ka dil jor jor se dhadak ne lagta hai......

Ki kahi kuch ho to nahi gya.....


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Or Rashmi dord kar bhar bhagti hai......

Or jaise hi bahar aati hai bahar ka nazara dekh kar hairan reh jaati hai......



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Kyuki bahar jerry ne Rashmi ke birthday ke liye decoration kar ke rakhi thi or ye dekh Rashmi hairan ho jaati hai ki jerry ko uska birthday 🎈 🎂 aaj bhi yaad tha lekin Rashmi ye baat bhool gai thi ki uska birthday hai jaise har saal hota aaya hai.....

Darasal Rashmi apni birthday celebration nahi karti thi manoj ki wajah se lekin jerry ko sabke birthday yaad rahte the.......

SURPRISEE......................

Or ek dam se har jagah party bomb foot ne lagte hai.......

Happy Birthday Rashmi..............


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Or jaise hi Rashmi saamne dekhti hai saamne karanveer uska beta or parivaar yani uski beti damad or bachhe or jerry or uski dono betiyan hoti hai.......

Tabhi dono betiyan bhag kar rashmi ko gale lagati hai.....


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Dono ek saath :- Happy Birthday Mummy 🥰 🎂I Love You ❤️❤️ or dono ushe gifts deti hai.....

Rashmi nam aankhon se :- Than.....Thank you beta.......

Or ye Surprise dekh Rashmi rone lagti hai.....

TAbhi karanveer ki beti aati hai or rashmi ko gale lagati hai......

Mahek :- Are are ye kya bhabhi to rone lagi.......hahahaha..

Or rashmi mahek ko nahi pehchanti thi or mahek ne bhabhi bola ishi liye vo jerry ko dekhti hai........

Jerry : Ye mahek di di hai rashmi......

Or sabke saamne apna naam jerry ke mooh se sunta dekh Rashmi hairani se jerry ko....


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Tabhi karanveer :- are isme itna chokne waali baat kya hai rashmi beta ab tum jerry ki biwi ho to meri beti to tumhe bhabhi hi bolegi na.......hahahahah

Or sab hasne lagte hai......

Or ye sab Rashmi samjh nahi paa rahi thi ki ye sab log hai kon......vo jerry ko ghoorti hai....


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Tabhi jerry darte hue :- are..........are......are are bhai haso mat bhai vo mujhe maar daalegi........

Tabhi parth :- Kyu bhai abhi to shadi bhi nahi hui abhi se biwi se darne lage.....😂😂

Or sab kr zor se haste hai..........

Or ji haa parth jo karanveer ka beta tha vo vapis aagya tha ab vo kaise aaya aage pata lagega.......

Fir jerry sabke baare me bata deta hai.......

Tabhi mahek :- chalo bachho mami ko birthday wish Karo....or aap bhi aajaiye....Mahek apne pati ko kehti hai....

Jiska naam ( Nitin hai )

Tabhi mahek ke dono bachhe or nitin uska pati aata hai or vo sab Rashmi ko gifts dete hai or happy birthday bhi wish karte hai.......


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Fir karanveer aata hai : Rashmi beta abhi to tum meri beti hi ho ishi liye ek beti ki hesiyad se tumhara ye baap saman karanveer ki taraf se ye chotha sa tofa or haa janamdin ki dher saari shub kaam naye.... Or haa aaj tum nahi hoti to himanshu nahi hota or himanshu nahi hota to mera beta mere paas nahi hota (karan nam aankhon se) bhagwan tumhara hamesha khayal rakhe beta or tumhe jeevan me saari khushiyan mil jaaye or karanveer Rashmi ko aashirwad deta hai......

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Tabhi waha parth aata hai :- Happy Birthday Rashmi Vaise mera man to bhabhi bolne ka hai kyuki himanshu ki body dekh lagta nahi vo mujhse chotha hai hahahahahah 🤭 lekin umar or rishta Mera bada ho jayega ishi liye Rashmi Janamdin ki dher saari shubhkamnaye 🥰 hamesha khoos raho or haa maine suna hai tum roti bohot ho abse rona mat haaahahaah 🤭 or parth bhi rashmi ko gift de deta hai.....

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Ab baari aati hai hai jerry ki....

Rashmi jo kuch bol nahi Rahi thi bas ye sab jo hua ushe samjhne me time lag raha tha...

To vo dekhti hai jerry kahi dikhai nahi de raha ki tabhi....

Rashmi ki aankhe achanak koi band karta haii...


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Janam Din Mubarak Ho Rashmi.......

Or ye sun rashmi murd ti hai or......


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OR rashmi dekhti hai ki uske side me jerry gift lekar khada hua hai jisne dekh Rashmi......

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Thoda emotionally smile karti hai.....tabhi jerry.....

Jerry :- are meri jaan aise udas nahi hote aaj to kitna khushi kaa din hai or tum kase myus ho rahi ho......

Tabhi ohhhhhhooooooooo........

Jann..............

Or sab log jerry ne jo bola Rashmi ko jaan uspar cherd ne lagte hai.....

Mahek :- Are bas bhai sharam karo hum bhi hai yaha...........

Tabhi Rashmi bohot jayda sharma jaati hai...


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Or Rashmi sidha jerry ke gale lag jaati hai.........Or ye dekh....sabhi hasne lagte hai....

Tabhi Mahek :- Are........are........dekho to sahi meri hone wali bhabhi sharma gai.........hahhahahah 🤭

Or firse sab hasne lagte hai......

Tabhi jerry Rashmi ko khud se alag karta hai or kuch aisa karta hai jiski kalpana bhi rashmi apni zindagi me nahi kar sakti thi.....


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Or jerry sabke saamne Rashmi ka ek haath pakad ek ghutne ke bal baith jaata hai...... Or ye dekh sab bohut khuch the lekin Rashmi kuch samajh nahi paa rahi thi......

Tabhi Rashmi :- Kya hua jerry.....?

Jerry kuch nahi kehta......Or fir....Jerry apni pocket me se ek box nikalta hai.......


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Or us box me ek heere ( diamond 💎 ) ki ring 💍 thi jise dekh rashmi kuch samajh paati usse pehle jerry.........

Jerry :- I Love You Rashmi ❤️ Main Tumse Bohot Pyaar Karta Hu Kya Tum Mujhse Shadi Karogi........🤗

Or ye sab sun or dekh rashmi mano ek alag hi duniya me pahuch chuki thi uske armaan jo kal tak be rang pade the usme mano Holi ke rangoli ki tarah rang ghul gaye the.......

Rashmi kuch jo pehle hi nahi keh paarahi thi or upar se ye dekh uski saanse ruk si jaati hai.....

Vo apne aap me hi pagal ho gai thi ki achanak se aisa kaise uske jeevan me ho gya kya se kya ho gya itna bada surprise pehle hi mil gya birthday ka or upar se jerry ka u sabke saamne purpose karna......

RASHMI Jo apni aankh me aansu liye ye sab soch hi Rahi thi......

Jerry :- Bolo Rashmi Kya Tum Bhi Mujhse Pyaar Karti Ho.......

Rashmi...


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Bas apna sir hila deti hai.....

Tabhi Jerry :- To kya tum mujhse shadi karogi....

Rashmi ki dhardkane bohot tezi se chal rahi thi jaise mano usk adil fat ke bahar aajayega......

Lekin Rashmi Khusi Se....


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Rashmi :- Ha......ha.......ha.......Main karungi tumse shadi........(Crying 😭 ) I Love You Too ❤️❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️....

Or ye sun Mahek Jo Ladki hone ke naate rashmi ke mooh se haa sunne ke liye jerry se jayada excited thi 🤭


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Or sabhi log ....

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Wooooooooo......... Congratulations 🎉.......

Or Rashmi ye sab dekh itni emotional ho jaati hai ki.....


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Or dono ek doosre ki baho me aakar ek doosre ko jakad lete hai.....or kafi der tak aise hi khade rehte hai.....

TAbhi Mahek :- Are Ohhh Laila Majnu ho gya tum dono ka to mere pyaare bhai meri bhabhi ko anguthi 💍 to pehna de......

Or fir Jerry Rashmi Ko.....


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Jerry :- I Love You Rashmi ❤️

Rashmi :- I Love You TOO mere Jerry 💕

Or ye bol Rashmi itni zor se or tightly jerry ko gale lagati hai jaase ki jerry ushe chord kahi bhag jaayega.....


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Or Waha Khade Sabhi Log Jerry Or Rashmi Ke Liye Bohot Khush The.....

Lekin Kab Tak Kahi Aisa To Nahi Ki Inki Khushiyon Ko Kisi Ki Nazar Lag Jaye......


Kyuki Aksar logo ko kehte suna hai ki jayada khush nahi hona chahiye kyuki jayada khush hone se khud ki hi nazar lag jaati hai..............⭕

Milte hai agle update me.....

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Guy's mera ek sawal tha ki kahi story bohot badi or bohot achhi hoti hai jisme koi sex lust ya fantasy nahi hoti lekin fir bhi vo kahaniyan end me adhuri reh jaati hai or adhuri se mera matlab hai ki story ko complete ho jaati hai lekin us kahani ke character's ki pyaar ki kahani adhuri reh jaati hai.....

To kya main koi aisi kahani likhu jisme ladka ya ladki ki pure love story' bohot buri tarah se ya fir kisi kr reason se jaise ki ladka ya ladki ki death ho jaye aisi kahani likhu kya??....

Kyuki mujhe ye pasand nahi hai to socha puch lu ki aap logo ko aisi kahaniyon me intrest hai ya sirf jo story me Happy Ending ho vo STORY chahiye.......

Batana ZAROOR....
Bhai happy ending hi rakhna achhi shi💫
 
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Jab bhi life me khushiyan aati hai tab pata nahi kyu vo kuch palo ke liye hi aati hai or fir vahi pareshani jeevan me aai jaati hai......lekin jab ye baat pata ho tab??.....

Ishiliye kehte hai future ko secure karne ke liye present me mehnat karo kyuki future kisne dekha hai or maan lo agar kuch bura bhi hoga to kya tension lene se vo sahi ho jayega ???...Nahi na to fir ishiliye kehte hai ki apna karam achha rakho or bas mehnat karte jaao future apne aap hi sahi ho jayega..... Tension lene se sugar hi badhega or haa sugar bohot gandi bimari hai mat lo inti tension......⭕


Ye baat jerry bhi jaanta tha kyuki manoj abhi bhi inke bich me tha or vo sharabi nashedi ganjedi type ka hai vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....ishi liye jerry ne bohot kuch soch rakha tha jo ki sirf ushe hi pata tha ab vo kya tha vo to wahi jaane.....

Update 18.


Rashmi ne apne life ka pehla or shayad marte dam tak yaad rehne wala Janamdin manaya tha....

Or yahi haal Jerry ka bhi tha kyuki vo Rashmi ke man ki feelings ko pehle hi samjh gaya tha. Lekin usme jab dono behno ke beti banaya tha to ushe ye baat pata thi ki usko Rashmi ko biwi banana padega jo ki vo chahta bhi tha kyuki koi doosri ladki aati or uski baheno par ungli utha thi kyuki vo 10 saal choti thi ab ye. Jayada difference aaj ki date me nahi hoga lekin pehle ke time me aap samajh sakte hain or aisa kyu tha ye bhi aapko baad me pata lag hi jayega.....

Rashmi jo ye sab dekh bohot jayda emotional ho rahi thi.....


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Rashmi nam aankhon se :- Aap sab ka bohot bohot shukriya main ye din marte dam tak nahi bhool sakti aaj aisa lag raha hai mera poora pariwar mere paas hai🙏🏻 aap sabka bohot bohot shukriya....

Tabhi Mahek :- Are bhabhi aise kyu haath jod Rahi ho pagal ho kya abhi aapne hame parivaar bola or ab paraya kar rahi ho....

Tabhi Karanveer :- Dekho Rashmi ab tumne hame parivaar bol hi Diya hai to ab ushe poora karne ke liye jaldi se shadi karlo or dono pati patni hamare ghar aao khana khane....hahahah 🤭🤭

Tabhi Parth :- Chinta mat karo rashmi tumhare liye jethani ka bhi jugad kar raha hu bas Milne me time lag raha hai 🥺🤭......



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Or ye sunte hi sab jor jor se hasne lagte hai...tabhi...

Nitin :- Are chalo bhai ab baate hi karni hai ya khana bhi kahana hai....

Jerry :- Are par pehle cake to cut karo......

Rashmi :- Kya aap logo ne cake bhi laya hai...


Jerry :- Or nahi to kya ab mere hone wali biwi ka janamdin hai or cake na aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya....Kyu?.........jorse....

Sabhi ek saath :- Nahiiii..............hahahahaahh

Tabhi Nitin Cake lekar aata hai.


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Or cake dekh Rashmi bhi hairan reh jaati hai kyuki aaj tak aisa cake uske liye koi nahi laya tha lekin uske naye parivaar ne uske liye itna kiya jis he dekh uski aankhe nam ho jaati hai.....

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Mahek Rashmi ko dekh :- Are bhabhi kya hua....

Rashmi :- Itna....pyaar......dekh kar kon nahi roega didi......aap hi batao.....

Or rashmi ne DIDI kaha ishi liye mahek thoda mahol ko tha da karte hue...

Mahek :- Oh.......ho..... dekho bhai sabhi logo bhabhi ne to abhi se didi bana liya shadi se pehle hi........hahahah


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Or ye dekh waha sabhi log bhi.khas kar jerry......

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Tabhi jerry chalo Rashmi cake cut karte hai.....

Rashmi Jerry ko dekh...


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Rashmi :- Ab itna kuch kar hi Diya hai to ye bhi aap hi kar waado.....

Tabhi sab :- Oh..........Ho...........

Tabhi Rashmi Sharma Jaati Hai Kr Jerry Ke saath milkar cake cut karti hai....


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Or sachme Rashmi aaj bohot bohot zayada khus thi itni ki usko ab apni life me kuch bhi nahi chaiye tha ushe sab mil chuka tha bas ab usko or kuch nahi chahiye siwaye ek cheez ke......Jerry ❤️.

( Inke pariwar ko kisi ki nazar na lage 🤗 )

Tabhi ab sab kuch hone ke baad sab khana khane lagte hai..

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Or ye sab dekh Rashmi apne man me :- Pata nahi shadi ke baad maine kabhi aise apne pariwar ke saath khana nahi khaya main hamesha soch ti thi ki ek pariwar ke saath khana khau apne pariwar ke saath bahar jaau mera priwar mera janamdin manaye dhoom dham se or Jerry ki taraf dekhti hui......

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OR rashmi apne aap se :- Sabhi sapne 2 din me poore kar diye 🥺 kitna kiya hai mere liye aapne 🥺🥺 itna pyaar mujhe kabhi nahi mila aapne diya ek pariwar jo kabhi mujhe chord kar nahi jayega vo aapne diya meri Betiyon ko Khushi aapne di mujhe khushi aapne di I LOVE YOU MERE JERRY I LOVE YOU ❤️❤️❤️❤️.

Tabhi sabka khana ho jaata hai...

Tabhi Rashmi :- Vo huh? Mujhe kuch puchna hai..

Tabhi sab huh pucho....

Rashmi bachho ki taraf dekhte hue :- Bachho aap log jaakar kehlo...

Charo bachhe ek saath :- Chalo chupan chupai khelte hai ye...........


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OR bachhe waha se khelne ke liye chale jaate hai...tabhi..

Jerry :- Haa pucho Rashmi...Kuch puchna tha tumhe?....

Rashmi :- Haa vo main kabse soch rahi thi ki aapki wajah se aisa kya hua jo mujhe bade bhaiya ki baat par papa ji keh rahe the.....

Tab Parth Bolta Hai :- Ye Main batata hu.....

Or parth lambi saans leta hai or kaise vo apne pita se door hua vo batata hai jo ham sab jaante hai.....

Parth :- Fir jab kal papa aaye the tab main bachho ke saath bahar se khel kar aaya tha tabhi maine papa jiju or didi ki baate sun li jo tumhare or jerry ke baare me thi tab mujhe ehsas hua ki jerry tumhare liye itna kar raha hai vo tumse or bachiyon se kitna pyaar karta hai....or jerry ne jo mere papa ki help ki thi......or ye sab sun mujhe lagne laga ki shayad main galat tha jaise jerry tumse pyaar karta hai vaise hi mere papa bhi meri mummy se pyaar karte the or shayad aaj bhi karte hai main hamesha yahi soch ta tha ki mere papa ki wajah se meri mummy hamare saath nahi maine samjhne ki koshish hi nahi ki shayad iska reason ye tha kyuki aaj jaise tumhara birthday hai vaise hi meri mummy ka bhi ek din birthday tha lekin main exam ki wajah se unke saath nahi tha ishiliye jab main vapis aaya or unke saath jhoomne jane ka plan Kiya or ushi din vo hadsa hua shayad yahi reason tha jo main apne papa par bohot jayda gussa ho gya lekin jaisa jerry ne kaha tha mere papa ko ki agar aapne kisi ke saath bura nahi kiya to aapke saath bura nahi hoga or mere papa ne meri mummy ke sath bura nahi kiya tha or shayad tabhi vo jerry se mile or tumhari story mujhe pata lagi or shayad ishi wajah se main aaj tum charo ke pariwaar or pyaar ki wajah se hi main apne pariwaar ke saath wapis aa paya or jerry ne to mujhe apna karazdaar bana liya.....kyuki ye ushi ka vishwas tha jo mere papa me jaha Varna mere papa meri bahen ke ghar nahi aate or ye baate nahi hoti or aaj bhi hum saath nahi hote kyuki main kal hi hamesha ke liye american jaane wala tha lekin ab nahi ab main apne pariwar yani hum sab ke saath hi RAHUNGA.....🤗❤️

Or ye sun sab emotional ho jaate hai or karanveer...


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Or ye dekh waha sabhi log emotional ho jaate hai or jerry....

Jerry :- Bhai ye baat galat hai aapki...

Parth :- Kya himanshu...


Jerry :- Ek to aap ne mera ye parivaar kaha or upar se karazdaar jaisi baate kar rahe ho 🤭.galat baat hai ..hahahaa..

Or sabhi hasne lagte hai.....

Lekin Rashmi se sab sun dekh apne jerry ke liye jo izzat pyaar hai logo ke man me ye dekh man hi man....


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Rashmi man me :- Itna kuch kiya hai ye to nahi bataya tha aapne or kitni achaiya hai aapme huh? Sachme aap bohot achhe ho mere jerry aapne mere liye jo kiya hai usse kisi or ka pata nahi lekin main zindagi bhar aapke ehsaano ke tale dab gai.....or shayad ab kabhi bahr bhi nahi nikalpau or sach kahu to main chahti bhi nahi mujhe bas aap chaiye ho uske liye chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pade Main karungi or mujhe jo parivaar aapne diya hai or mere pariwar ko aapne apna banaya hai....in sabke liye main aapko kya bolu mere paas shabad nahi hai....

Lekin Itna Zaroor Kahungi..

I LOVE YOU JERRY ❤️
I LOVE YOU JERRY 💖
I LOVE YOU JERRY 💞

In sabke baad sab apne ghar chale jaate hai kyuki mahek ke bachho ke school bhi the or
exam bhi or saath hi Priya/Parul Ke Bhi......

Milte hai agle update me....

Tab tak ke liye Peace.......✌🏻⭕
 

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Guy's story apne mid me aa chuki hai ab bas aadhi story bachi hai i hope abhi tak jitna likha hai utna aapko pasand aaya hoga or agar nahi aaya ho to guy's isme main kuch nahi kahunga......

Kyuki isme sabki apni choice hoti hai kisko kya dekhna kya pehnna kya khana kya dekhna or kya padhna pasand hai.......

Lekin mujhe ye faaltu ki fantasy lust dhokha pasand nahi hope guy's you all understand.... Milte hai ASAP. Bye..... Or bata na kaisa laga update or story yaha tak kaisi lagi or kya kami thi ye bhi batana lekin ye Dihan me rakhte hue ki ye abhi half complete hui hai abhi half story bachi hai.....

Peace.....✌🏻❤️
 

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