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Hahahahah bohot lambi chodi planing nahi karli ,Iski ending aise honi chahiye ki dono ke ek beta ho jo dono ke pyar ki nishani hogi dono betiya ek bhai ke liye jid kare
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Hahahahah bohot lambi chodi planing nahi karli ,Iski ending aise honi chahiye ki dono ke ek beta ho jo dono ke pyar ki nishani hogi dono betiya ek bhai ke liye jid kare
Bahut badiya likha raho ho bhai har bar sex aacha bhi nhi lagta story mainGuy's story apne mid me aa chuki hai ab bas aadhi story bachi hai i hope abhi tak jitna likha hai utna aapko pasand aaya hoga or agar nahi aaya ho to guy's isme main kuch nahi kahunga......
Kyuki isme sabki apni choice hoti hai kisko kya dekhna kya pehnna kya khana kya dekhna or kya padhna pasand hai.......
Lekin mujhe ye faaltu ki fantasy lust dhokha pasand nahi hope guy's you all understand.... Milte hai ASAP. Bye..... Or bata na kaisa laga update or story yaha tak kaisi lagi or kya kami thi ye bhi batana lekin ye Dihan me rakhte hue ki ye abhi half complete hui hai abhi half story bachi hai.....
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vai hum saab iss site me aate hey khusi pane ke liye... taki hamara man fresh ho jaye or hamara fantasy puri ho... lekin story agar sad ending hoti ha to hum sabka man tut jayega... umid hai aapne meri baat ko samje... hum eha pey srif khusi pane ke liye aaye hai... hame app nirash maat ki jiye... hame bass khusi ka ehe sass dena... hum appko dher sara pyar deng ge... reply karnaGuy's mera ek sawal tha ki kahi story bohot badi or bohot achhi hoti hai jisme koi sex lust ya fantasy nahi hoti lekin fir bhi vo kahaniyan end me adhuri reh jaati hai or adhuri se mera matlab hai ki story ko complete ho jaati hai lekin us kahani ke character's ki pyaar ki kahani adhuri reh jaati hai.....
To kya main koi aisi kahani likhu jisme ladka ya ladki ki pure love story' bohot buri tarah se ya fir kisi kr reason se jaise ki ladka ya ladki ki death ho jaye aisi kahani likhu kya??....
Kyuki mujhe ye pasand nahi hai to socha puch lu ki aap logo ko aisi kahaniyon me intrest hai ya sirf jo story me Happy Ending ho vo STORY chahiye.......
Batana ZAROOR....
Zabardast update bhaiKehte hai jab aurat ko apna man pasand mard mil jaata hai to vo is kadar pagal ho jaati hai ki pucho mat......haa main aaj kal ki baat nahi kar raha hu lekin ek zamana hota tha jaha dhokha dene ka apne partner ko ek bohot bada reason hota tha......aaj kal ki tarah nahi piasa,rang,power, personality and all sab bc.....
AB Rashmi ko hi dekhna na yaar agar manoj se pyaar Mila hota to kya vo aisa karti uske maa baap itne bhi gareeb nahi the achha khasa dahej diya tha uske sasural me bhi poora parivaar tha lekin jab bhagya me hi na ho to kisi ko dosh dene se kya fayeda...lekin thik bhi hai na itna kuch chin gaya lekin usse jayada mil bhi to gaya...
Update 19. Valentine's Special
Party khatam hone ke baad sab apne ghar chale jaate hai or priya/parul kafi thak gai thi kal raat ko bhi or aaj subha bhi jaldi uthi thi......
Sabke jaate hi Rashmi Jerry ke paas bhag kar aati hai......
Jerry Rashmi ke achanak liye hamle se bohot khush tha......
Jerry muskurate hue :- Kiasa laga gift meri jaan......
Rashmi kuch nahi kehti bas jerry ki baho me khud ko samarpit kar diya tha........
Jerry bohot pyaar se :- Rashmi.......
Or ab kahi jaa ke rashmi jerry ko dekhti hai or uski aankhe bhar aati hai...itna pyaar se naam to kabhi manoj ne bhi nahi liya tha.....Rashmi bas yahi sab soch soch ke khush ho rahi thi ki achanak kaise lekin kahi na kahi uske man me dar bhi tha......ki manoj ka kya hoga.......
Or rashmi ko emotional hota dekh jerry kuch soch tha hai....kyuki jerry bhi ye samjh chuka tha ki rashmi usse kitna pyaar karti hai kyuki in 4 saalo me rashmi ne ek maa se jayada ek biwi ki tarah hi uska khayal rakha tha kyuki manoj se to pyaar Mila nahj tha....
Ishi liye jerry aaj kuch aisa karta hai jiske baad rashmi to maano pagal si ho jaati hai......
Jerry Rashmi ke aansu se bhari hui aankho ko chum leta hai....
Or is harkat se rashmi ke sharir me naa jane kya kya ho jaata hai itne pyaar se kissushe zindagi me pehli baar mili thi or is tarah se to kabhi socha nahi hoga rashmi ne....
Rashmi nam aankhon se :- Itna pyaar karte ho apni rashmi se kyu?
Jerry :- Kyu Matlab.....
Rashmi :- Maine kiya hi kya hai aapke liye kiya to aapne hai mere liye or meri betiyo ke liye....
Jerry :- Kiske liye ?
Rashmi :- Ohhh SorryHamri betiyon ke liye.....
Jerry Rashmi ko bade pyaar se apni bahro me bhar leta hai....
Rashmi to maano jannat me thi itne pyaar dene wala jo mil gaya tha......
Rashmi man me :- Kash ke pal aise hi tham jaye kabhi na badhe aage main aise hi aapki baho me poori zindagi juzar rakti hu jerry I love you bas mujhe aise hi pyaar karte rehna aapke liye main sab kuch karungi jerry ek aadarsh patni banungi or aapko kabhi nirash nahi karungi....ye ehsaas Mujhe aaj tak nahi hua ye ehsaas apne mujhe diya main kaise aapko shukriya kahu mere paas shabad nahi hai mere jerry.
Tabhi Jerry :- Rashmi......
Rashmi Jerry ki baho me :- Hmmmmm
Jerry :- Jaao bachho ko sul dao...
Or ye sun rashmi bohot jayada sharma jaati hai.....
Rashmi :- Ky........ky.......ki.....ki......ku...kyuuuu...
Jerry :- Are isme sharmane wali baat kya hai bhai?.
Jerry :- dono subha ki uthi Hui hai unhe su laado fir ek or surprise hai tumhare liye.....
Rashmi......ne kuch or hi soch liya tha.......or apne man me :- dhatt......main bhi na.
Tabhi Jerry :- kya sochne lagi jaan....
Rashmi Sharmile andaaz me :- uu.....kuch.....nahi......bas aise hi main bachho ko sula deti hu......
Fir Rashmi bachho ke kamre me jaa kar unhe sula deti hai......
Or bahar aati hai tab jerry Rashmi ko dekh muskura raha tha....
Or Jerry ko dekh Rashmi sharma jaati hai....
Jerry uth kar rashmi ke paas aata hai....
Jerry :- Tumhare liye ek or surprise hai rashmi...
Rashmi halke aawaz me :- Kya.......Jerry.........
Jerry :- Aankhe band karo.....
Rashmi agle hi pal aankhe band kar deti hai....
Fir jerry ek box deta hai rashmi ko.......
Jishe Rashmi dekhti hai or jab kholti hai to kafi emotional ho jaati hai ....
Kyuki usme ye tha.......
Or ye koi aam saree nahi hai ye vo saree hai jo Rashmi hamesha pehnna chahti thi lekin mangi bohot thi lagbhag 5000 ki or us samay 5000 hazar ki saree pehnna matlab.......
Ishiliye rashmi :- Ye aap...
Tabhi jerry Rashmi ke hontho par ungli rakh deta hai or unhe....
Or is harkat se rashmi ko bhi hasi aati hai or haste hue....
Rashmi :- Lekin Itna kharcha kyu jerry aapko pata hai na mehngai kitni bad rahi hai....
Jerry :- Haa mehngai bard rahi hai lekin jerry ki hone wali biwi ke liye jerry kal bhi rahees tha aaj bhi rahees hai or kal bhi rahees hi rahega....
Or ye sun rashmi ek baar fir emotional ho jaati hai kyuki manoj ne to ushe jab bojh hi mana tha or apne liye aise shabad sunna kisi bhi aurat ke dil me izzat banhi jaati hai jaise Rashmi ke dil me ban gai jerry ke kehne par.....
Rashmi dord kar......
Jerry :- Tumhe kya lagta hai main tumhe biwi kya bas aise hi dikhawe ke liye bana raha hu huh??? Nahi rashmi main tumse bohot pyaar karta hu tumhari or bachho ki zimmedari uthana mera farz hai.......
Lekin Rashmi ne to maano jerry ko jakad liya tha.....
Or jerry bade pyaar se :- Rashmi........
Rashmi or Jerry ek doosre ki bohot kareeb ho chuke the maano ki abhi kiss kar lenge....
Tabhi jerry :- I Love You Rashmi
Rashmi Kapte hue :- I Love You Too Jerry
DONO ek doosre ko hi dekh rahe the...
Maano dono me se koi ek chah raha ho ki saamne wala kuch kare or shayad ye sach bhi tha kyuki Rashmi ne bhi na jaane pichle kitne saal se sex nahi kiya tha......or agar usse pehle Kiya tha to vo bas manoj ka manoranjan tha na ki pati patni ka pyaar.....
Or Jerry bhi itne time se akela tha lekin ab sab kuch mil gya hai usko....itne time se saari baato ka bojh tha uske man par lekin ab aisa kuch nahi tha...
Or Yahi Baate soch soch kar dono dheere dheere aage bard the hai or......
Dono ke hoth aapas me jud jaate hai......
Or ye.....Jerry......Or Rashmi......ki first kiss thi.....
Dono ek doosre ko bade pyaar se chum rahe the jisse samne wale ko zara bhi takleef na ho......
Rashmi ko ye ehsaas pehli baar hua tha or is kiss ka jo maza tha vo usko kahi or hi le gaya tha ishi liye vo jerry ke sir ko piche se pakad thi hai jaise vo chahti hi nahi ki jerry se alag ho vo jerry ko apne or kareeb kar leti hai.....
Or Yahi haal Jerry ka bhi tha zindagi ki pehli kiss thi or vo bhi uske saath jo uske liye sab kuch hai jiske liye jerry kisi se bhi lard jaae....Jerry bhi apne host kho Raha tha or aise hi vo bhi rashmi ko be intehaan choomne lagta hai....
DOno is kadar ke doosre ko kiss kar rahe the jaise kabhi dobara nahi milenge....
Or tabhi jerry Rashmi se alag hota hai jo ki rashmi nahi chahti thi lekin agle hi pal.....
Jerry Rashmi ka chehra pakad apne hoth uske hoth se chipka deta hai or apni jeebh uske mooh me de deta hai.......
Or Is harkat se to mano Rashmi pagal si hi ho gai thi jerry ki garam jeebh apne mooh me aate hi rashmi itni kas ke jerry se chipki or apni jeebh bhi jerry ke mooh me dene lagi....
Dono bas pagal ho ho gaye the mano Rashmi jisko ye ehsaas pehli baar hua vahi Jerry ka bhi haal tha lekin jerry ne to kisi ko chuha nahi tha ishiliye uska ye haal tha lekin Rashmi ke 3 bachhe hone ke baad bhi rashmi pagal si ho gai thi.... Or shayd ishe hi pyaar kehte hai jab hota hai to kuch nahi dikhta kuch nahi samjh aata or dekhte hi dekhte....
Dono ek doosre ki jeebh nikal ke chatne lagte hai dono me koi sharma ko lajjah bachi hi nahi thi or ye sil sila naa jaane kitni der chalata hi raha........
Kaisa laga Aaj ka update milte hai next update me......
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Superb brotherKehte hai jab aurat ko apna man pasand mard mil jaata hai to vo is kadar pagal ho jaati hai ki pucho mat......haa main aaj kal ki baat nahi kar raha hu lekin ek zamana hota tha jaha dhokha dene ka apne partner ko ek bohot bada reason hota tha......aaj kal ki tarah nahi piasa,rang,power, personality and all sab bc.....
AB Rashmi ko hi dekhna na yaar agar manoj se pyaar Mila hota to kya vo aisa karti uske maa baap itne bhi gareeb nahi the achha khasa dahej diya tha uske sasural me bhi poora parivaar tha lekin jab bhagya me hi na ho to kisi ko dosh dene se kya fayeda...lekin thik bhi hai na itna kuch chin gaya lekin usse jayada mil bhi to gaya...
Update 19. Valentine's Special
Party khatam hone ke baad sab apne ghar chale jaate hai or priya/parul kafi thak gai thi kal raat ko bhi or aaj subha bhi jaldi uthi thi......
Sabke jaate hi Rashmi Jerry ke paas bhag kar aati hai......
Jerry Rashmi ke achanak liye hamle se bohot khush tha......
Jerry muskurate hue :- Kiasa laga gift meri jaan......
Rashmi kuch nahi kehti bas jerry ki baho me khud ko samarpit kar diya tha........
Jerry bohot pyaar se :- Rashmi.......
Or ab kahi jaa ke rashmi jerry ko dekhti hai or uski aankhe bhar aati hai...itna pyaar se naam to kabhi manoj ne bhi nahi liya tha.....Rashmi bas yahi sab soch soch ke khush ho rahi thi ki achanak kaise lekin kahi na kahi uske man me dar bhi tha......ki manoj ka kya hoga.......
Or rashmi ko emotional hota dekh jerry kuch soch tha hai....kyuki jerry bhi ye samjh chuka tha ki rashmi usse kitna pyaar karti hai kyuki in 4 saalo me rashmi ne ek maa se jayada ek biwi ki tarah hi uska khayal rakha tha kyuki manoj se to pyaar Mila nahj tha....
Ishi liye jerry aaj kuch aisa karta hai jiske baad rashmi to maano pagal si ho jaati hai......
Jerry Rashmi ke aansu se bhari hui aankho ko chum leta hai....
Or is harkat se rashmi ke sharir me naa jane kya kya ho jaata hai itne pyaar se kissushe zindagi me pehli baar mili thi or is tarah se to kabhi socha nahi hoga rashmi ne....
Rashmi nam aankhon se :- Itna pyaar karte ho apni rashmi se kyu?
Jerry :- Kyu Matlab.....
Rashmi :- Maine kiya hi kya hai aapke liye kiya to aapne hai mere liye or meri betiyo ke liye....
Jerry :- Kiske liye ?
Rashmi :- Ohhh SorryHamri betiyon ke liye.....
Jerry Rashmi ko bade pyaar se apni bahro me bhar leta hai....
Rashmi to maano jannat me thi itne pyaar dene wala jo mil gaya tha......
Rashmi man me :- Kash ke pal aise hi tham jaye kabhi na badhe aage main aise hi aapki baho me poori zindagi juzar rakti hu jerry I love you bas mujhe aise hi pyaar karte rehna aapke liye main sab kuch karungi jerry ek aadarsh patni banungi or aapko kabhi nirash nahi karungi....ye ehsaas Mujhe aaj tak nahi hua ye ehsaas apne mujhe diya main kaise aapko shukriya kahu mere paas shabad nahi hai mere jerry.
Tabhi Jerry :- Rashmi......
Rashmi Jerry ki baho me :- Hmmmmm
Jerry :- Jaao bachho ko sul dao...
Or ye sun rashmi bohot jayada sharma jaati hai.....
Rashmi :- Ky........ky.......ki.....ki......ku...kyuuuu...
Jerry :- Are isme sharmane wali baat kya hai bhai?.
Jerry :- dono subha ki uthi Hui hai unhe su laado fir ek or surprise hai tumhare liye.....
Rashmi......ne kuch or hi soch liya tha.......or apne man me :- dhatt......main bhi na.
Tabhi Jerry :- kya sochne lagi jaan....
Rashmi Sharmile andaaz me :- uu.....kuch.....nahi......bas aise hi main bachho ko sula deti hu......
Fir Rashmi bachho ke kamre me jaa kar unhe sula deti hai......
Or bahar aati hai tab jerry Rashmi ko dekh muskura raha tha....
Or Jerry ko dekh Rashmi sharma jaati hai....
Jerry uth kar rashmi ke paas aata hai....
Jerry :- Tumhare liye ek or surprise hai rashmi...
Rashmi halke aawaz me :- Kya.......Jerry.........
Jerry :- Aankhe band karo.....
Rashmi agle hi pal aankhe band kar deti hai....
Fir jerry ek box deta hai rashmi ko.......
Jishe Rashmi dekhti hai or jab kholti hai to kafi emotional ho jaati hai ....
Kyuki usme ye tha.......
Or ye koi aam saree nahi hai ye vo saree hai jo Rashmi hamesha pehnna chahti thi lekin mangi bohot thi lagbhag 5000 ki or us samay 5000 hazar ki saree pehnna matlab.......
Ishiliye rashmi :- Ye aap...
Tabhi jerry Rashmi ke hontho par ungli rakh deta hai or unhe....
Or is harkat se rashmi ko bhi hasi aati hai or haste hue....
Rashmi :- Lekin Itna kharcha kyu jerry aapko pata hai na mehngai kitni bad rahi hai....
Jerry :- Haa mehngai bard rahi hai lekin jerry ki hone wali biwi ke liye jerry kal bhi rahees tha aaj bhi rahees hai or kal bhi rahees hi rahega....
Or ye sun rashmi ek baar fir emotional ho jaati hai kyuki manoj ne to ushe jab bojh hi mana tha or apne liye aise shabad sunna kisi bhi aurat ke dil me izzat banhi jaati hai jaise Rashmi ke dil me ban gai jerry ke kehne par.....
Rashmi dord kar......
Jerry :- Tumhe kya lagta hai main tumhe biwi kya bas aise hi dikhawe ke liye bana raha hu huh??? Nahi rashmi main tumse bohot pyaar karta hu tumhari or bachho ki zimmedari uthana mera farz hai.......
Lekin Rashmi ne to maano jerry ko jakad liya tha.....
Or jerry bade pyaar se :- Rashmi........
Rashmi or Jerry ek doosre ki bohot kareeb ho chuke the maano ki abhi kiss kar lenge....
Tabhi jerry :- I Love You Rashmi
Rashmi Kapte hue :- I Love You Too Jerry
DONO ek doosre ko hi dekh rahe the...
Maano dono me se koi ek chah raha ho ki saamne wala kuch kare or shayad ye sach bhi tha kyuki Rashmi ne bhi na jaane pichle kitne saal se sex nahi kiya tha......or agar usse pehle Kiya tha to vo bas manoj ka manoranjan tha na ki pati patni ka pyaar.....
Or Jerry bhi itne time se akela tha lekin ab sab kuch mil gya hai usko....itne time se saari baato ka bojh tha uske man par lekin ab aisa kuch nahi tha...
Or Yahi Baate soch soch kar dono dheere dheere aage bard the hai or......
Dono ke hoth aapas me jud jaate hai......
Or ye.....Jerry......Or Rashmi......ki first kiss thi.....
Dono ek doosre ko bade pyaar se chum rahe the jisse samne wale ko zara bhi takleef na ho......
Rashmi ko ye ehsaas pehli baar hua tha or is kiss ka jo maza tha vo usko kahi or hi le gaya tha ishi liye vo jerry ke sir ko piche se pakad thi hai jaise vo chahti hi nahi ki jerry se alag ho vo jerry ko apne or kareeb kar leti hai.....
Or Yahi haal Jerry ka bhi tha zindagi ki pehli kiss thi or vo bhi uske saath jo uske liye sab kuch hai jiske liye jerry kisi se bhi lard jaae....Jerry bhi apne host kho Raha tha or aise hi vo bhi rashmi ko be intehaan choomne lagta hai....
DOno is kadar ke doosre ko kiss kar rahe the jaise kabhi dobara nahi milenge....
Or tabhi jerry Rashmi se alag hota hai jo ki rashmi nahi chahti thi lekin agle hi pal.....
Jerry Rashmi ka chehra pakad apne hoth uske hoth se chipka deta hai or apni jeebh uske mooh me de deta hai.......
Or Is harkat se to mano Rashmi pagal si hi ho gai thi jerry ki garam jeebh apne mooh me aate hi rashmi itni kas ke jerry se chipki or apni jeebh bhi jerry ke mooh me dene lagi....
Dono bas pagal ho ho gaye the mano Rashmi jisko ye ehsaas pehli baar hua vahi Jerry ka bhi haal tha lekin jerry ne to kisi ko chuha nahi tha ishiliye uska ye haal tha lekin Rashmi ke 3 bachhe hone ke baad bhi rashmi pagal si ho gai thi.... Or shayd ishe hi pyaar kehte hai jab hota hai to kuch nahi dikhta kuch nahi samjh aata or dekhte hi dekhte....
Dono ek doosre ki jeebh nikal ke chatne lagte hai dono me koi sharma ko lajjah bachi hi nahi thi or ye sil sila naa jaane kitni der chalata hi raha........
Kaisa laga Aaj ka update milte hai next update me......
Peace.........![]()