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Guy's aap logo ko story kaisi lag rahi hai ?

  • Badiya hai

    Votes: 32 64.0%
  • Thik thak hi hai

    Votes: 2 4.0%
  • Story thodi aage bade tab pata lagega

    Votes: 21 42.0%

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Iron Man

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UPDATE 3

PICHLE PART ME DEKHA KI JAISE HI RASHMI JERRY SE BOLTI HAI KI KYA TUM BHI ALNE PITA KI TARAH BANOGE TABHI JERRY KA GUSSA CHARAM PAR AAJATA HAI OR AB AAGE....


Ek mard jab apni family ke baare me sochna chalu karta hai to uske paas 2 choice hoti hai ya to khud ko dekhe or apne biwi bachho ko dekhe ya fir apne khud ke pariwar ko dekhe aaj kal ka nanga naach to pata hi hai aap logo ko ki ladkia mint se pehle aadhi property mangleti hai lekin pehle aisa nahi hota tha kahi na kahi ladkio ko ladko se jayada upar kadia hai jab ki ye galat hai......kher ye to sabki apni choice hai Varna feminism aajayega.......

Kuch aisa hi jerry ke man me bhi tha na jaane kitni cheeje uske man me thi family ek baap jo sirf sharab ke nashe me rehta hai 2 betio jaisi behne ek maa yee sab cheejo se kitne saal se tadap raha hai ki kuch kre apne jeevan me lekin kuch bhi nahi hua shayaad vo akela tha kher vaise bhi hamare samaj me logo ne hame samjhaya hai ki sachha mard ro nahi sakta lekin (KYU MARD INSAAN NAHI KYA MARD KE ANDAR DIL NAHI KYA MARD SIRF SACRIFICE KRNE AAYE HAI BIWI FIR BACHHE FIR PARIWAR YA PEHLE PARIVAR FIR BIWI BACHHE KHUD KE LIYE TIME KAHA ) Lekin jab saamne koi aisa insaan ho jo uski jaan se bad kar ho tab?😞

Or jaisa ki hamesha hota hai mard ke sbara ka bhand bhi foot jata hai............😓


Jerry : Nahi"Nahi"Nahi Rote hue:- Nahi maa nahi main uske jaisa jhootha mard nahi hu main nahi hu main nahi hu maine nahi hu maa mujhe nahi samj aara ki main kya kru mujhe nahi pataaaaaaaaaaaa (chillate hue) mujhe nahi pata maaaaaaa mujhe nahi pataaaaaaaa mujhe maaf kardo main mard nahi ban paya main haar gya (jerry pagalo ki tarah ro raha tha) main haar gya maaaaaaa aapka jerry haar gya haarrrrr gyaaaa😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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RASHMI ye sab dekh kar behosh hi hone wali thi uska beta uske saamne pagalo jaise ro raha hai chikh raha hai aakhir ye kya ho raha hai usko kuch samaj nahi aata ki vo kya kre vo bas pagal si hone wali thi ki tabhi ushe ehsaas hota hai ki jerry bilkul toot gya hain or ek sirf wahi hai jo uski sambhal sakti hain or agar vo bhi toot gai to kahi jerry khud ke saath kuchhh,.....

Or guys yahi baat thi jo Rashmi soch rahi thi ki kahi uska beta khud khushi na karle Rashmi yahi soch ti hai ki ek mera pati mere jerry ka baap ushe koi matlab nahi mere jerry ne mere liye itna kiya hai meri betion ke lie apni behno ke liye kabhi mujhse koi shikayat nahi ki lekin nahi ab nahi main apne bete ko nahi khosakti nahi mera jerry mujhse door ho ye kabhi nahi hoga kabhi nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Or Rashmi bhag kar jaati hai or apne bete ko


crying-michaela-stone emotional-hug-kevin-pearson

Or Rashmi apne bete jerry ko hug karti hai or jerry apni maa se gale lag kar na jane kitni der tak ek doosre ki bahon me rote hai..........

Or yahi se hoti hai is kahani ki shuruwat....💕

Takriban 20 Min Baad....


Rashmi jerry dono shant ho jaate hai or dono jaise hi alag hote hai...


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Jerry ko ek baar fir se Rona aata h or Rashmi usko sambhal rhi hai lekin kehte hai na ki kabhi kabhi pyaar se samjhana or pyaar se gusse krke samjhana bohot kuch kar deta hai.. Or ab ye ho bhi Raha tha...

KYuki ab Rashmi ek maa ki tarah nahi balki ek ladki ban jaati hai jo ki usko bhi samaj nahi aata us time ki ye kya hua...

Rashmi : kya samjhte ho tum khud ko huhh? Kisne kaha ki mera jerry kayar hai kisne kaha mera jerry haar gya kisne kaha mere jerry ne kuch nahi kiya huhhhhh?? Batao jerry (chillate hue ) bolo kisneeeeeee kaha bolo mera jerry sirf mera or meri betio ka hai sirf mera or meri betio ka or tumhe kya lagta hai mere jerry ne kuch nahi kiya aaj ye Neetu jo zinda hai mere jerry ki wajah se ye meri betiyan zinda hai mere jerry ki wajah se to kaise keh sakte ho ki mere jerry ne kuch nahi kiya....huh? BOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

giphy
Or ye sab baate sunkar jerry ko kafi releaf milta hai or Neetu ne jo kuch kaha vo ek sas me kaha or naa jaane kyu Rashmi ko kya hua usne achanak..lagta hai ki kuch usne aisa keh diya jo ushe nahi kehna tha lekin jerry ki shakal dekh kar uske man me ek ajeeb sa hua jaise uski body me kisi ne pinch kiya ho or achank se....

time-punch

Or jaise hi Rashmi jerry ki baho me aati hai or aaj shayad aaj vo apne bete ke nahi balki jerry ki baho me aai thi........

Or jerry bhi aaj yahi feel karta hai usne Aaj jis aurat ko gale se lagaye hua tha vo uski maa nahi balki Rashmi thi

Or dono ek doosre se kuch baat nahi kar rahe the dono nas ek doosre ki baho me the......

Rashmi man me : ye mujhe kya ho raha hai main to abhi cheej cheek kar ro rahi thi jerry ko bhashnd de rahi thi or y

Or vahi Jerry apne man me:-

Jerry man me :- ye abhi kya hua abhi to main cheek kar ro raha tha or abhi ek dam se ye kaise kya aaj mujhe ajeeb sa kyu lag raha hai or mere shareer me ajeed sa ye ahesaah ye kya hai..


OR JAISA KI PYAAR KA ARTH HI YAHI HAI KI AGAR ZINDAGI ME KOI AISA ACHHA PYAAR KARNE WALA JO TUMHARE SHAREER SE NAHI TUMHARI AATMA KO OR TUNHE CHATA HO AISA INSAAN MIL JAAYE TO YE KEHNA GALAT NAHI HOGA KI BHOOK PYAAS DARD SAB KUCH INSAAN BHOOL JATA HAI. OR SHAYAD IS PYAAR KA EHSAAS AAJ PEHLI BAAR RASHMI OR USKE JERRY NE KIYA THA❤️🤍❤️🤍


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Agar apko photos aur gifs hi post karne hai to uske liye PNV hai waha jaakar kariye....
SS mein writers ko isse pareshani ho sakti hai iss baat ka dhyaan rakhiye...
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Vo gana yaad hai aap logo ko...

Suhana safar or ye mausam hasi hame dar hai ham kho na jaye kahi.

Hum sabne apni life me kabhi na kabhi koi safar to kiya hi hoga or us safar me ya to kuch bohot achha hua hoga ya to kuch bhi nahi sirf normal ya to bohot hi bura.....


Update 23.

Jerry bhi aise hi ek safar par nikalta hai lekin vo safar jerry ko bohot kuch dene wala tha vo koi aisa waisa safar nahi tha kyuki us safar ke baad jerry ki zindagi me bohot kuch badalne wala tha...

Ab kya badalne wala tha ye to wakt batayega.............

Aise hi sabse aage ek gadi me jerry aage passenger seat par baitha hua tha........

US wakh aasman me ghane badal the or aas paas hare bhare khet bhi the or hawa me gemi gemi khushbu bhi aa rahi thi kyuki us WAKTH monsoon ka mausam chal raha tha............


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Or jerry us haseen wadiyon me maano kho sa gaya tha bas aankhe band karke us mausam us hawa or hawa me aati gemi gemi khushboo ka aanand le raha tha tabhi uske andar se ek aawaj aati hai...

YE AASMA JHUK RAHA HAI ZAMEEN PAR.........🖤

YE MILAN HAMNE DEKHA YAHI PAR...............🤍

MERI DUNIYA MERE SAPNE
MILENGE SHAYAD YAHI PAR.........................❤️


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Jerry ke andar ye baate aate hi jerry ke chehre par ek alag hi khushi thi vo khidki se bahar dekh in wadiyon ko dekh khud se kehne lagta hai....

Jerry :- ye mausam ye wadiyan ye raaste ye hare bhare khet kitni shanti hai yaha par kash koi aisi hi jagah par main apna ashiyana bana saku jaha mere biwi mere bachhe meri maa or meri bahene ho.......

( Ye 2 saal pehle ki baat ho Rahi hai yaad rakhna ).

Jerry aage kehta hai :- Meri biwi or main shadi bhi kisi aisi hi jagah karenge jaha kudrat apne asli roop me kudrat ke bich jaha aisa hi mausam bade bade pahad ho haseen wadiyan ho..........tabhi jerry apne ghar me chal rahi problem ko soch chup ho jaata hai........(´•︵•`)


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Tabhi Ravindar ( driver ) Jerry ko pareshan dekh tha hai or puchta hai..........

R :- Kya hua HIM bhai badi gehri soch me ho kuch baat hai kya...

J :- Kuch nahi bas aise hi.....

R :- Agar nahi baata chahte to koi baat nahi main nahi puchunga.....lekin ek baat zaroor kahunga ki itni tension lene se koi fayda nani hai....Isse depression,sugar,anxiety, stress jaisi bimariya ho jaati hai.......

Jerry jo abhi bhi gehri soch me tha bas itna hi kehta hai.......

J :- Hmmm...............

Ravindar kuch soch ta hua....

R :- Vaise HIM bhai ek baat puchu.....

J :- Hm.......

R :- Aapke liye is duniya me sabse jayada zaroori kya hai....

Jerry ek alag tone me :- Mera Pariwar........

R :- Pariwar kyu........

J :- Kyuki vo mere sab kuch hai.

R :- To aap unko khush dekhna chahte ho haina?.

J :- Hmmm......

R :- To aise dukhi hokar agar bimar ho gaye or kuch ho gaya aapko to kya aapko lagta hai vo kabhi khush reh payenge......

Or ye sun Jerry Ravindar ki taraf dekhta hai......

R ( Muskurate hue ) :- Mujhe Galat mat samajhna bhai main aapki besti nahi kar raha hu bas itna bata raha hu ki agar pariwar ki soch khud itne dukhi hoge to na aap khush reh paoge or na aapka pariwar socho jab unhe pata lagega ki aap jo unse itna pyaar karte ho vahi andar se dekhi or pareshan hai to kya vo khush reh paayenge......?

Or jerry ye sun excited/Sad/Confused mixed expression :- To mujhe kya karna chahiye....

R (smile) :- Bhai ye gaadi jo abhi chal rahi hai kya ye apne aap chal rahi hai......

J :- Nahi......

R :- Kyuki isko main chala raha hu....Varna ye khud se to chalegi nahi ishe jaha jaana hai ishe chalane wala hi le jaa sakta hai varna chalna chordo ye apni jagah se bhi nahi hilegi haina?.

J ( Confused ) :- Hm........

R :- Hame jaha jaana hai uska rasta hame pehle se hi pata hai....

J :- Hmmm.....

R :- Agar raasta nahi pata hota or ye gadi chahe main hi kyu na chalau kya ham waha Jaa pate.....

J :- Nahi....

Or achanak ye baat sunte hi jerry chup ho jaata hai or kuch sochne lagta hai.......jaise vo kuch samjh gaya ho.....

R :- Ab samjhe ZINDAGI bilkul is gaadi ki tarah hai jisko khud se chalana pardta hai or apni manzil tak poochna pardta hai. Haa raste zaroor tede mede honge ya fir lambe ya fir kabhi kabhi bohot lambe ya fir mushkilo se bhare lekin us safar ka apna hi maza hoga or jab apni manzil par pohoch jaaoge tab sirf khushiyan or sirf khushiyan..........

Jerry Ravindar ki kahi baat par muskurate hue....

J :- Baat to sahi kahi hai lekin akele raaste bohot lambe or bore ho jaate hai.....

Is baat par ravindar has deta hai kyuki usko jerry ki life ka nahi pata tha....usko lagta hai jerry ne aise hi kaha hoga.....

R :- Ha ye baat bhi hai vaise main bhi aaj aapke saath hu Varna main bhi bore hi hota hu........

Or Tabhi Saamne Ek Bhayankar Aawaj aati hai.......

Vo Aawaj kya thi agle part me...

Tab tak ke liye....Peace......✌🏻⭕
 

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Ek update raat me dunga jaha ye 2 saal ki story khatam kardunga........or guys kuch logo ke suggestions ko dekh story me kuch add Kiya hai uske liye thanks jo aap logo ne ideas diye.......✌🏻❤️
 

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UPDATE 3

PICHLE PART ME DEKHA KI JAISE HI RASHMI JERRY SE BOLTI HAI KI KYA TUM BHI ALNE PITA KI TARAH BANOGE TABHI JERRY KA GUSSA CHARAM PAR AAJATA HAI OR AB AAGE....


Ek mard jab apni family ke baare me sochna chalu karta hai to uske paas 2 choice hoti hai ya to khud ko dekhe or apne biwi bachho ko dekhe ya fir apne khud ke pariwar ko dekhe aaj kal ka nanga naach to pata hi hai aap logo ko ki ladkia mint se pehle aadhi property mangleti hai lekin pehle aisa nahi hota tha kahi na kahi ladkio ko ladko se jayada upar kadia hai jab ki ye galat hai......kher ye to sabki apni choice hai Varna feminism aajayega.......

Kuch aisa hi jerry ke man me bhi tha na jaane kitni cheeje uske man me thi family ek baap jo sirf sharab ke nashe me rehta hai 2 betio jaisi behne ek maa yee sab cheejo se kitne saal se tadap raha hai ki kuch kre apne jeevan me lekin kuch bhi nahi hua shayaad vo akela tha kher vaise bhi hamare samaj me logo ne hame samjhaya hai ki sachha mard ro nahi sakta lekin (KYU MARD INSAAN NAHI KYA MARD KE ANDAR DIL NAHI KYA MARD SIRF SACRIFICE KRNE AAYE HAI BIWI FIR BACHHE FIR PARIWAR YA PEHLE PARIVAR FIR BIWI BACHHE KHUD KE LIYE TIME KAHA ) Lekin jab saamne koi aisa insaan ho jo uski jaan se bad kar ho tab?😞

Or jaisa ki hamesha hota hai mard ke sbara ka bhand bhi foot jata hai............😓


Jerry : Nahi"Nahi"Nahi Rote hue:- Nahi maa nahi main uske jaisa jhootha mard nahi hu main nahi hu main nahi hu maine nahi hu maa mujhe nahi samj aara ki main kya kru mujhe nahi pataaaaaaaaaaaa (chillate hue) mujhe nahi pata maaaaaaa mujhe nahi pataaaaaaaa mujhe maaf kardo main mard nahi ban paya main haar gya (jerry pagalo ki tarah ro raha tha) main haar gya maaaaaaa aapka jerry haar gya haarrrrr gyaaaa😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

crying-broken

RASHMI ye sab dekh kar behosh hi hone wali thi uska beta uske saamne pagalo jaise ro raha hai chikh raha hai aakhir ye kya ho raha hai usko kuch samaj nahi aata ki vo kya kre vo bas pagal si hone wali thi ki tabhi ushe ehsaas hota hai ki jerry bilkul toot gya hain or ek sirf wahi hai jo uski sambhal sakti hain or agar vo bhi toot gai to kahi jerry khud ke saath kuchhh,.....

Or guys yahi baat thi jo Rashmi soch rahi thi ki kahi uska beta khud khushi na karle Rashmi yahi soch ti hai ki ek mera pati mere jerry ka baap ushe koi matlab nahi mere jerry ne mere liye itna kiya hai meri betion ke lie apni behno ke liye kabhi mujhse koi shikayat nahi ki lekin nahi ab nahi main apne bete ko nahi khosakti nahi mera jerry mujhse door ho ye kabhi nahi hoga kabhi nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Or Rashmi bhag kar jaati hai or apne bete ko


crying-michaela-stone emotional-hug-kevin-pearson

Or Rashmi apne bete jerry ko hug karti hai or jerry apni maa se gale lag kar na jane kitni der tak ek doosre ki bahon me rote hai..........

Or yahi se hoti hai is kahani ki shuruwat....💕

Takriban 20 Min Baad....


Rashmi jerry dono shant ho jaate hai or dono jaise hi alag hote hai...


436a55f037227f0adbb0d1f57afdfabc

Jerry ko ek baar fir se Rona aata h or Rashmi usko sambhal rhi hai lekin kehte hai na ki kabhi kabhi pyaar se samjhana or pyaar se gusse krke samjhana bohot kuch kar deta hai.. Or ab ye ho bhi Raha tha...

KYuki ab Rashmi ek maa ki tarah nahi balki ek ladki ban jaati hai jo ki usko bhi samaj nahi aata us time ki ye kya hua...

Rashmi : kya samjhte ho tum khud ko huhh? Kisne kaha ki mera jerry kayar hai kisne kaha mera jerry haar gya kisne kaha mere jerry ne kuch nahi kiya huhhhhh?? Batao jerry (chillate hue ) bolo kisneeeeeee kaha bolo mera jerry sirf mera or meri betio ka hai sirf mera or meri betio ka or tumhe kya lagta hai mere jerry ne kuch nahi kiya aaj ye Neetu jo zinda hai mere jerry ki wajah se ye meri betiyan zinda hai mere jerry ki wajah se to kaise keh sakte ho ki mere jerry ne kuch nahi kiya....huh? BOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

giphy
Or ye sab baate sunkar jerry ko kafi releaf milta hai or Neetu ne jo kuch kaha vo ek sas me kaha or naa jaane kyu Rashmi ko kya hua usne achanak..lagta hai ki kuch usne aisa keh diya jo ushe nahi kehna tha lekin jerry ki shakal dekh kar uske man me ek ajeeb sa hua jaise uski body me kisi ne pinch kiya ho or achank se....

time-punch

Or jaise hi Rashmi jerry ki baho me aati hai or aaj shayad aaj vo apne bete ke nahi balki jerry ki baho me aai thi........

Or jerry bhi aaj yahi feel karta hai usne Aaj jis aurat ko gale se lagaye hua tha vo uski maa nahi balki Rashmi thi

Or dono ek doosre se kuch baat nahi kar rahe the dono nas ek doosre ki baho me the......

Rashmi man me : ye mujhe kya ho raha hai main to abhi cheej cheek kar ro rahi thi jerry ko bhashnd de rahi thi or y

Or vahi Jerry apne man me:-

Jerry man me :- ye abhi kya hua abhi to main cheek kar ro raha tha or abhi ek dam se ye kaise kya aaj mujhe ajeeb sa kyu lag raha hai or mere shareer me ajeed sa ye ahesaah ye kya hai..


OR JAISA KI PYAAR KA ARTH HI YAHI HAI KI AGAR ZINDAGI ME KOI AISA ACHHA PYAAR KARNE WALA JO TUMHARE SHAREER SE NAHI TUMHARI AATMA KO OR TUNHE CHATA HO AISA INSAAN MIL JAAYE TO YE KEHNA GALAT NAHI HOGA KI BHOOK PYAAS DARD SAB KUCH INSAAN BHOOL JATA HAI. OR SHAYAD IS PYAAR KA EHSAAS AAJ PEHLI BAAR RASHMI OR USKE JERRY NE KIYA THA❤️🤍❤️🤍


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Is Stroy ka concept mera stroy ka concept jaisa lag raha hai, meri stroy jaisa 70% milta jhukta emotion sean bhi ho raha hai, ek hi chiz kahunga khud se likho bro!

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Khud ki story to likhi nhi Jaa rhi hai dusro ko bolne aa jate hai kaha hai tumhari jaise tumse aage nikal chuke tum abhi tak parpose bhi nhi kiya gai
 
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