Hahaha Agar aisa hai to report maar de mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai bro......maine pehle hi kaha hai ki main kisi ko hate ya dikhane ya jalane ke liye story nahi likh raha bas man me jo aaya jo story banai vo likh di or doosri ki story churana kr likhna isme time waste karke mujhe kya milega ? Main to regular hi update de raha hu or kisi ki copy kri hoti to uske hisab se chalta meri story ka topic bhi bilkul alag hai .......ye baat first page par mention bhi ki hai..even jo story incomplete hai unko apne tarike se complete karunga ye bhi kaha but with credit.........jiski story vo hogiIs Stroy ka concept mera stroy ka concept jaisa lag raha hai, meri stroy jaisa 70% milta jhukta emotion sean bhi ho raha hai, ek hi chiz kahunga khud se likho bro!
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Sabka apne tarika hota hai likhne ka maine apne first page par yahi cheej mention bhi ki hai sabka apna apna tarika hai sab apni imagination ke hisab se likhte hai ........Nhi sahi likh rhe ye chutiya writer hai apna story ke l lga ke rakhe hue hai tum likho bhai
Ek baat bolunga sabko kahani pasand aa rahi hai or jo ye baat boli thi ki kuch update baad end ho jayega ye galat hai.........Bura jo dhudhand main chala bura na milya koi jab dil khoja aapna mujhse bura na koi.....
Lekin kehte hai karam achhe karo to sab kuch achha hota hai aapke jeevan me.....
Ishiliye kehte hai kar bhala to ho bhala.......
Aisa hi kuch jerry ke jeevan me bhi ho raha tha uska man saaf tha usne kabhi kisi ko dukh nahi diya kabhi kisi ka dil nahi dukhaya fir bhi vo apne jeevan me dukhi tha bohot dukhi tha lekin fir vahi baat aati hai kar bhala to ho bhala aaj bhale hi jerry ko sab kuch mil gaya ho lekin uske piche uska wahi vishwas wahi karam uska wahi sachha man jisse usne apne jeevan ke dukh ka kisi ko zimmedar nahi banaya sab kuch saha or logo ki jitni ho sake utni madad ki.........
Update 24.
Jerry rajendar baat kar hi rahe the ki bohot tej aawaj aati hai.....
Tabhi vo saamne dekhte hai ki saamne....
Ek bike or car ki bohot tej takkar hoti hai ab hala ki isme galti kisi ki bhi nahi thi kyuki barish ke mausam me sadke geeli rehti hai....
Tabhi jerry or rajendar gadi se utar unki help karte hai....
Actually vo ek married couple tha.....
Tabhi jerry or rajendar milkar unki help karte hai......
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Jerry dono ko utha tha hai lekin yaha jayada chot ladki ko aai thi uske haath or pairo me se khoon beh raha tha ladke ke bhi chot aai thi lekin vo khada ho kar khud ko sambhal ta hai tabhi......
Car wala bhi kuch nahi kehta kyuki galti kisi ki bhi nahi thi lekin uski car thi ishiliye usko kuch nahi hua.....
Lekin ye baat ye log jayada nahi badate kyuki jerry bichme hi.....
J :- OMG inko to bohot lagi hai rajendar jaldi se hame inhe hospital lekar Jana padega.....
Jerry abhi koi faaltu baat nahi karna chahta tha kyuki is bahes baaji me jayada der na hojaye or vaise bhi ek naya shadi shuda joda tha or thodi der pehle jerry bhi to apne biwi bachho ki soch raha tha...
Tabhi jerry us ladki ko apni god me utha car me baitha ta hai.....
Or rajendar uske husband ko sahara de apni car me baithane lagta hai tabhi.....
R :- Yaha koi aspatal hai kya...?
Waha khada ek aadmi :- Haa yaha se 5 km door hai....
J :- Rajendar hame jaldi karni hogi ladki ki halat kharab ho rahi hai.....
Husband ( ghabrate hue ) :- Meri biwi ko to kuch nahi hoga na...
J :- Ghabrao mat bhai sab thik hoga hame jaldi hi aspatal nikalna hoga rajendar jaldi chalo lekin thoda sambhal ke........
Or rajendar car ko bohot Dihan se lekin jitna ho sake utni tej aspatal ki taraf chal deta hai....
Tabhi raste me unhe ek aspatal jiske baare me us ladke ne bataya tha.....
Jaise hi hospital aata hai vo dono fata fat un dono ka ilaz kar wate hai.....
Lekin ye police case tha to treatment chal raha tha tabhi...
Inspector :- Ye sab kaise hua.....
Fir Jerry or Rajendar poori baat bata te hai....
Inspector :- Dekhiye ye accident ka case hai kiski galti hai ya kiski galti nahi ye to chaan bin karne ke baad hi pata chalega vaise road geeli thi main Manta hu lekin aaj kal logo ka Bharosa nahi hota.....Or aap hi kyu inko lekar aaye ye aapke lagte kon hai dekh kar to aap log achhe ghar ke lagte ho or yaha ke bhi nahi lagte to fir aapko inse aisa konsa pyaar umad gaya jo aap inhe yaha lekar aa gaye kahi aap hi ne to kuch......
Jerry is baat se bohot naraz hota hai ki kisi ki zindagi khatam hote bachi or ye hami par ilzam laga raha hai or agar hamne accident kiya hota to hamari gadi bhi to damage hoti.....
Or jerry kuch bolta tabhi waha....Ek Aadmi aajata hai or uske saath kuch or log bhi the jo shayad uske pariwar Wale the.....
Tabhi Ek ladki....
Ladki ( ghabrate or rote hue ) :- Kaha hai mere bhai bhabhi bolo jaldi....
Inspector :- Aap kon....
Tabhi....Chillate hue.....
Bhavesh ( gusse me ) :- Tumse jitna pucha utna bolo samjhe.....
Inspector uski tone or uska attitude dekh samjh jata hai ki wo koi bada aadmi hai...lekin fir bhi apni dohs dikhane ke liye.....
Inspector :- Oh hello ek inspector se kaise baat ki jaati hai pata hai......
Tabhi.....Ek sabse tej aawaj.....
Bharat ( Gusse ki aag me ) :- Inspector.............How dare you tumhari himmat kaise hui mere bete ke baare me baat karne ki huh?.. Ye mera yani bharat mehta ka beta hai samjhe.....
Or shayad ab inspector ki fatne wali thi kyuki usko nahi pata tha ki uske saamne kon khada hai.......
Kyuki Bharat Mehta koi aisa waisa nahi balki jaipur ke mashhur business men's me se ek tha jiska apna khud ka import export ka business tha.....
Bharat :- tum nahi jaante officer tum kisse baat kar rahe ho.......
Inspector gusse me :- Achha ho kon tum!!!!.....
Bharat :- Ek Min ruk......
Bharat kisi ko call lagata hai.....
Bharat :- Ye le baat kar.....
Inspector phone par jaise hi bolta hai........
Tabhi saamne se......
Commissioner :- Abe saale gandu thuje pata bhi hai jo tere saamne khada hai vo teri vardi utar dega.....
Inspector ye sun kafi ghabra jaata hai........
I :- Lekin sir accid......
Tabhi Commissioner usko rokte hue.....
C :- Abe chutiye vo jiska accident hua vo unki Bahu ka bhai or uski bhabhi hai.....yani unke bete ka sala or uski biwi.....
Inspector ye sun uski gandfat chuki thi kyuki commissioner ka phone aana koi hasi majak ki baat nahi hai or uspar commissioner khud aisi baat bole to samjh lo saamne koi tagda banda khada hai.......
Inspector :- Ji.....Ji.....Ji sahab...
Inspector darte hue :- Mafi mangta hu sir maaf kardijiye mujhse badi galti hogai maine to ishiliye pucha kyuki ye dono inhe yaha laye the......
Tabhi Bhavesh :- To chutiye unhone uski jaan bachai hai gandu.....agar inhone accident kiya hota to ye yaha kyu aate highway tha nikal nahi jaate kya kitni khabre aati hai akhbar me.....lodu..........
Tabhi doctor aate hai waha...
D :- Dekhiye aap log aise ladiye mat.......doc ek dam ruk bharat ki or dekh.....
D :- are sir aap yaha aap yaha kaise.......
Bharat :- Ji doctor andar jo petient hai vo meri Bahu ambika ke bhai or bhabhi hai....
Tabhi ambika rote hue :- Doc mere bhai bhabhi thik hai na unhe kuch......
Vaise Ambika ke bhai bhabhi ke naam...
Bhai ( Avi )
Bhabhi ( Alka )
Tabhi doc ( smile ) :- Hahaha are beta ji chinta mat kijiye vo dono khatre se bahar hai bas aapki bhabhi ke thoda jayada khoon baha hai ishiliye unhe hosh aane me time lagega.....
Tabhi ambika chain ki saans leti hai......
Tabhi doc :- vaise bharat ki aapko in dono to shukriya aada karna chahiye kyuki inhi dono ki wajah se aaj aapki Bahu ki bhabhi bachi hai varna agar or der hoti to........
Tabhi ambika dord kar jaati hai or haath jord ke jerry or rajendar se......
Ambika nam aankhon se :- aap dono ka bohot bohot shukriya agar aap nahi hote to aaj.....
Tabhi R :- are are ye aap kya keh rahi hai ye to hamara farz tha.....
J :- Hamne to insaaniyat ke naate kiya hai....or dono khatre se bahar hai ab kya hi chaiye....
Tabhi Bhavesh......
Bhavesh :- Ek min...... Aapko maine kahi dekha hai......
J ( confuse ) :- Ji.....mujhe......kaha....
Bhavesh :- uh....tum sabjiyon ki supply karte ho na.....Alag alag jagah or shayad tum delhi se ho......
J ( shoked hote hue ) :- ji..ji..haa lekin aapko kaise...
Rajendar bhi ye sab dekh or sun raha tha....tabhi
Bharat :- beta kya tum inhe....
Bhavesh :- Yes dad aman mera school friend hai uske papa ka vegetable's ka business hai jo alag alag shero se sabjiyan mangwate hai or yaha supply karte hai...main ek baar Aman ke saath delhi gaya tha or waha koi karanveer karke hai jinke saath aman ka business chalta hai vo ek retired army officer hai inhe wahi dekha hai unhone inki bohot tarif ki thi....lekin main inhe nahi pehchanta.....sorry...vaise aapka naam kya hai...
R :- uh..ji.... Main rajendar...
Tabhi bharat :- Aap dono ka bohot bohot shukriya.....
Tabhi Jerry kuch sochte hue :- vaise Bhavesh ji kya aap hamari madad kar sakte hai.....
Bhavesh,Bharat,Or Ambika teeno ek saath ajeeb tarike se dekhte hai Rajendar Or Jerry ko jab ki abhi thanks kar rahe the......
Actually unhe laga ki ye dono unse madad ke badle paise mangenge....
Lekin Tabhi.... Bhavesh Ek kadak aawaj or mooh banate hue.....
Bhavesh :- Kaisi madat....
J :- Vo kya hai na hum log yaha pehli baar aaye the or aate wakt ye sab ho gaya....to kya aap apne dost aman ji se baat kar ki vo gussa na kare kyuki vo abhi gusse me honge ki maal abhi tak pohcha nahi ishiliye kahi vo hame daante na or agar hm unhe bataye or unhone hamari baat nahi maani to......
Tabhi ye sun vo teeno jerry ki sachhai imandari ko dekh sharmindagi mehsus karte hai tabhi.....
Ambika :- are are aise kaise koi daant dega.....suniye jara apne dost ko call lagaiye or unhe bata dijiye....
Bhavesh :- uh..ha ha isme kya abhi kar deta hu kr vo thoda door jaa kar aman se baat karta hai or saari baat bata deta hai......Or ek khas baat bhi kart hai ab vo khas baat kya hai vo aage pata lagega.....
Bharat :- Main aap logo ka jitna shukriya karu utna kam hain....agar hamse koi madad chahiye to zarur bataiye ga.....
Tabhi J :- Are uncle ji ye aap kya keh rahe ho hamne aap logo ki madad is liye nahi ki thi ki hame badle me kuch chaiye....agar ek insaan insaan ki madad nahi karega to vo kis baat ka insaan or vaise bhi koi nahi dekhta bagwan to dekhta hai.....
Bharat jo jerry ki yee bato se kafi impressed hota hai.....
Bharat Smile karta hai or jerry ke kandhe lar haath rakh....
Bharat :- Bohot aage jaoge beta bhagwan kare tumhe jeevan me vo sab mile jo tum chahte ho.....
Tabhi Bhavesh aata hai or....
Bhavesh :- Maine baat karli hai aap log chinta na kare.........befikar ho kar jaiye.....
Tabhi J :- Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya.....
Bharat :- Are shukriya to hame karna chahiye....
Or teeno ek baar fir Jerry or Karanveer ko shukriya karte hai.....
Tabhi Jerry :- To thik hai fir ham chalte hai bhagwan kare aapke pariwar waale jaldi thik hojaye.....
Fir jerry or rajendar un sab se vida lekar chale jaate hai.....
Or inspector jisko kisi ne pucha tak nahi or jo case ke baat kar raha tha sada sa mooh le waha se nikal jaata hai.....
Fir jerry Aman ke pass jaa saara kaam nipta deta hai....
Or Fir Jerry apne sabhi logo ke saath wapis delhi ke liye nikal jaata hai........
Ab aap soch rahe honge ki isme jerry or karanveer ko kya fayeda hua.........
Vo aapko agle part me pata legega.....
Or haa isme jayada gif pic add nahi ki kyuki update hi kuch aisa tha....jiske pic gif milna mushkil the or jo mile vo sahi nahi lage to manage kar lena.....
Kher Milte Hai Agle Update Me......
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Shaandar jabardast Romanchak UpdateHey everyone maine pichle 6 update me jaha jaha important tha waha waha gif or pic add kardi hai lekin log keh rahe hai ki pic add Karo ab jab zaroorat nahi hai to kaise kru or vaise bhi story likhne baitho tab gif nahi milte jaise chaiyeis liye nahi add ho pate hope you understand.
And ek or important baat ki story incest hai jaha ek dam se kuch bhi nahi hota main dobara bata raha hu ki jo log kehte hai ki pyaar ho gya ek dam se aise nahi hota guy's khud socho ek aisa rishta jo duniya me samj me bohot alag hai pavitra mana gya hai us rishte ko ek dam se kaise badal sakte hai or agar badal bhi de to samaj duniya parivaar rishtedar aas padosi or karibi kya kahenge vo to isko galat hi bolenge na? Ishi liye bol raha hu ye sab cheeje itni aasani se nahi hoti bohot kuch dekhna padta hai or sabse badki baat ki jis insaan ke jeevan me itni problems hoti hai waha par sex jayada important hota hai ya khushiyan? Batao obviously khushiyan future sab kuch dekhna padta hai HAA main Manta hu ki kudrat ne sex jaisi cheej di hai sab krte hai sabko apne tan ke lie santushti chaiye lekin paristhiti bhi to honi chaiye itni problems me bhi agar koi aurat sex ki soch ti hai to ya to vo majboori me ya to kisi or wajah se sex karti hai na ki apni khushi se.........
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To Ab Story Start Karte Hai....
Update 7.
Kehte hai kabhi kabhi khushiyon ko khud ki nazar lag jaati hai or aisa hota bhi hai...ishi liye bade bhude kehte the ki jayada khus nahi hona chaiye kuki zindagi me sukh dhokhe baaz hota hai or dukh hamesha wafadar kyuki sukh kuch time ke lie or kabhi kabhi aata hai lekin dukh to jab marzi kisi na kisi roop me aahi jaat hai or sukh aae ya na aaye garanty nahi lekin dukh ki garanty hamesha rehti hai ki vo aayega har koi apne jeevan me kisi na kisi roop se dukhi hi hai chahe kitne hi ameer ke ghar chale jaao vo bhi kisi na kisi dukh ka shikar hoga hi hoga shayad ishe hi to jeevan kehte hai......
Kuch aisa hi jerry ke jeevan me bhi hota hai maine aapko bataya ki 3 saal me jerry ne kya kya kiya usne apne ghar ko bohot achha kar liya tha vo manager ki job kar raha tha hamesha apni maa beti jaisi baheno ke liye kapde khane pine ka saman lekar aata tha 3 saal me usne 3 khas or baki Kai logo ke dil me jagah bana li thi....
1.Rashmi (jerry ki maa)
2.priya parul (jerry ki behne)
3.karanveer (jerry ka malik)
4.vo sabhi log jinki jerry ne madat ki thi jaise transport par kaam karne wale workers or gareeb logon ki....
Ab aap puchenge kaise aisa kya kar diya to simple hai vo kisi par gussa nahi karta tha jab tak bohot badi baat na ho jaye...
Ishi liye transport par kisi se koi galti ho bhi jaati thi to jerry us situation ko muskurate hue pyaar se handle karta tha na ki gali or ladai se..
Ishi liye sab uski bohot izzat karte the or gareeb koi bhi ushe dikhta tha to vo unki madad karta tha jaise kisi ke paas kapde nahi to kapde,bhooke ko khana,chappal,ya thode bohot paiso ki madad.
Karanveer jerry ki in sab baato se hamesha kush rehta tha or jerry ke aane se uske kaam me tarakki bhi khoob hui thi.
Or Rashmi Or uski Betiyon ki to aap logo ko pata hi hai.
Lekin kehte hai na ki upar wale ke raste par chalo to mushkile to aati hi hai jerry ke jeevan me bhi aai thi lekin ishwar kehte hai ki agar tera karam achha hai to kisi bhi musibat me main thuje girne nahi dunga karmo ka fal hamesha milta hai kabhi jaldi to kabhi der se hi sahi lekin milta zaroor hai...............
TO AB AAGE....
3 SAAL BAAD JAB SAB SAHI CHAL RAHA THA TABHI EK DIN......
(KAHANI ABHI BHI PAST ME CHAL RAHI HAI)
Ek din Rashmi soch ti hai ki 3 saal se upar hone ko aae mere jerry ne mere liye or apni baheno ke liye kitna kuch kiya hai. Lekin uski padhai ka kya vo kabhi padta bhi nahi hai kahi aisa na ho ki hamri wajah se Mera beta apne jeevan me kuch kar na paaye....
RASHMI apne man me:- nahi mujhe jerry se baat karni hogi lekin vo bhi tak aaya kyu nahi Rashmi ghadi ki taraf dekhti hai....
Vo sochti hai 11 baje gaye or jerry or uske papa abhi tak nahi aaye kher manoj ka to itna nahi tha lekin jerry ka vo kyu nahi aaya tabhi bell bajti hai...
Rashmi door kholti hai or door kholte hi...
Aadmi 1 :- madarchod agar paise nahi mile fir dekhio...
Aadmi 2 :- saale okat teri ek paise ki nahi hai aaya bada abhi ke abhi bulwa jaldi..
Aadmi 3 :- main to pehle hi mana kar raha tha is par bharosa mat kro lekin tum logo ne meri suni nahi...
Manoj (Nashe me dhuth) :- maine tum logo ko bola na ki main paise de dunga abhi dil waunga paise rukjao...
Rashmi :- ye sab kya hai aapko kya hua or ye log kon hai....
Aadmi 1 :- aaiye bhabhi ji aaiye lijiye sambhalie apne pati parmeshwar ko saala do kodi ka.
Aadmi 2 :- Abe kya sambhaliye or kayki bhabhi ehhh sun abhi ke abhi 60 hazar rupee de chal.
Rashmi heran ho jati hai lekin vo samj bhi gai thi ki uske pati ne fir se satta ya juaa kehla hai isiliye..
Rashmi :- dekhiye main aapke paise lota dungi jald se jald.
Tabhi jo teesra aadmi hota hai vo batta meezi par utar aata hai
Aadmi 3 :- sun ri saali kutiya yaha ter kehne par nahi chalega samjhi ye paise hare hue ishe 1 mahine se jayada ho gya hai koi abhi nahi liye hai samjhi or isne sabke saamne chohde me mujhe kaha tha ki meri biwi paise degi to fta fat paise de varna tere pati ko jaan se maar dunga or tera kya haal karunga Rashmi ke body ko touch karta hua
To Rashmi thoda dar jaati hai or piche hathte hue ghabrate hue.
Rashmi :- dekhiye main'man'apke paise de dungi lekin mere paas paise nahi hai to aap mera mangalsutra le lijiye ye sone ka hai kr iske aapko 60hazar se jayada hi mil jaiyenge
Or tabhi vo aadmi khush ho jata hai or vo magal sutra leta hai or ye kehta hua...
Aadmi :- ye hui na baat chal le pakad apne sadiyal pati ke or haa aaj ke baad agar isme paise mange ya ye mere yaha kahi bhi dikha to iska kya haal karunga vo thuje batane ki zaroorat nahi...chalo be.
Or vo teeno waha se chale jaate hai or Rashmi kuch kehti usse pehle manoj.
Manoj. :- ye sab teri wajah se hai saali agar tere baap ne mujhe dahej diya hota to aaj main bhi paise wala hota...
or tabhi waha jerry aajata hai jo bohot thaka hua tha ishi liye Rashmi manoj se kuch nahi kehti or apne aashu pochte hue aagya beta chal jaldi khana khale tabhi manoj..
Manoj :- sali mujhse bhi puchle ki khana khana hai ya nahi.
Tabhi jerry:- agar khana khaanaa hai to mang lo gali kyu de rahe ho or ye sharab pine se foorsat bhi milti hai Sharabiyo ko ???or maine to suna hai ki sharabiyo ko bhookh nahi lagti...
Manoj se sab sunta rehta hai lekin kuch bolta nahi kuki jerry bada ho raha tha or tagda bhi kyuki vo akhade jaata hai isiliye manoj chup chap chala jata hai or bina khaye so jaat hai..
Rashmi :- beta kaha reh gya tha huh? Mujhe kitni chinta ho Rahi thi thuje pata bhi hai kuch?
Jerry muskurate hue Rashmi ka haath pakad kar ghr me le jaata hai kr room me jaha dono bachiya soi hui thi unke paas jaakr.
Jerry:- Kal children's day hai maa or main in dono nanhi pariyo ke liye gift lene gya tha kyuki in dono ne bataya tha ki inhe doll house chaiye or teddy bearto dekho main inke liye ye sab laya..
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Rashmi ye sab dekhti hai or kush ho jaati hai lekin abhi ke haadse se thodi dukhi bhi thi lekin vo bolti hai..
Rashmi :- ye dono ye sab dekh kar bohot kush ho jayegi sachme ye bohot achhe giftshai ...
Jerry :- sorry maa main aapke liye kuch nahi laa pata kaam bohot jayada.....or ye bolkar vo ruk jata hai.
Rashmi :- konsa kaam jerry.
Jerry:- (ghabrate hue) are maa vo school ka kaam kar wata hu na bachho ko to uska project banwana tha ishi liye.
Tabhi Rashmi ko yaad aat hai ki ushe bhi jerry ki studies ke baare me puchna tha lekin 12 bajne wale the or Jerry ne khana bhi nahi khaya tha ishi liye...
Rashmi : ye sab chodo pehle tum khana khalo kab se bhooke ho chalo...
Or fir jerry khana khane lagta hai or Rashmi uske paas thi khodi khush thodi dukhi or dukhi kyu thi aapko pata hi hai.
Lekin jerry ye note karta hai.
Jerry :- kya hua maa aap itni pareshan (or tabhi uski nazar Rashmi ke gale par padi or usne aawaj me chinta bhare swar me pucha) :- maa apka mangalsutra?
Rashmi darte hue :- are'"!vo!ha main:*'"v";jerry: vo main Aaj bahar gai thi bazar me vaha maine suna ki kisi aurat ki chain chori hogai thi ishi liye maine apna mangalsutra utar kar rakh dia kahi chori na ho jaye (fake smile ke saath)
Jerry ko Rashmi par vishwas nahi hua kyuki vo transport me kaam karta hai vo market ke paas me hi tha or agar aisa kuch hota hai to baate sunai padti hai..
Aap logo ko pata hi hai pehle phone wagera nahi hote the ishiliye insaan insaan se juda hua tha aaj kal ki tarah nahi social media jaisi cheeje..
Jerry : kya aapko such me lagta hai maa? Ki aap ki is baat par main yakin karunga main bhi market se hi jaata hu mujhe to kisi ne nahi kaha???
Rashmi ghabrate hue:- vo voooo"!'!'!'!'!'!'!'";:" or uski aakhne nam ho jaati hai or aasu behne lagta hai
Jerry ye dekh kar thoda ghabrate hue Rashmi se puchta hai :- kya hua maa aap ro kyu rahi hai kya papa ne kuch kiya???
OR fir Rashmi saari baat jerry ko bata deti hai.
Jerry gusse me :- is aadmi ne to mera dimag kharab kardia hai man to karta hai sale...
Tabhi jerry ruk jata hai or rashmi...
Rashmi :- nahi jerry vo tumhare papa hai aisa mat bola mana unhone galti ki hai iska matlab ye nahi tum unhe gali do.
Jerry ye baat sunkar bohot gusse me khada hota hai or chillate hue..
Jerry :- bas bohot hua vo aadmi mera baap nahi hai nahi haiiiiiiii samjhi aap
Or ye dekh kar rashmi thoda dar jaati hai or jaise hi kuch bolne wali thi tabhi jerry bahar chala jata hai...Rashmi bas dekhti reh jaati hai kyuki usme pehli baar jerry ko aise dekhna tha....
Bahr ka scene..
Jerry man me :- bahn chodo ko chodunga nahi saalo ne meri maa ka mangalsutra le liya ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........
OR jerry gusse se apne malik ke ghar jaata hai or unhe saari baat bata deta hai..
Jerry : main aapko paise lauta dunga kal bank se nikal kar abhi aap mujhe de dijiye uncle pls.
Karna : dekho himanshu pls ki baat nahi hai paise to main de dunga lekin aise logo ke mooh lagna bekar hai vo bhi is time kal dekh lenge main chalunga saath me..
Jerry gusse me tha to thodi kadak aawaz me:- nahi uncle maine kha na aap mujhe paise de do maine unhe nahi chodunga unhone meri maa ka mangal.............
Karanveer jerry ka ye gussa pehli baar dekh raha tha kyuki usne Aaj Tak jerry ko haste hue or dukhi roop se dekha tha lekin ye kafi naya tha or usse bhi badi baat ki uske dil me uski maa ke liye kitna pyaar or parvah thi vo sab ek saath dikh raha tha to karanveer.
Karan: thik hai jerry main Paisa Lata hu lekin ek shart par ki main bhi tumhare saath chalunga un kamino ke paas....
Jerry bhi Maan jaat hai fir dono idhar udhar dhundte hai lekin kuch nahi milta (or ye kahani 2005 ki hai to aap logo ko pta hi hai road par itni chehal pehle nahi hoti thi mobiles bhi nahi the or itna devlopment bhi nahi tha) lekin unhe ek dukan khuli dikhti hai gutke or bidii ki or vo us dukandar se puchte hai jo dukan band kar raha tha..
Jerry: uncle hum 3 logo ko dhund. Rahe hai .
Fir jerry un teeno ke baare me kuch kuch bata ta hai jisse unki pehchan ho sakte..tabhi dukandar.
Dukandar : dekhiye bhaisahab jaise aap log bata rahe hai aise to vo teeno dost hi hai jo yahi piche ke moholle me rehte hai lekin abhi vo kaha hai ye nahi pata or main poore yakin ke saath nahi keh sakta kyuki aise sharabi log juee ke adde par hi hote h or ye sab kalesh china chani to aam baat hai aise logo ke liye....
Karanveer : vo jue ka adda kaha hai bata sakte hai kya...
Dukandar: haa vo vaha samne se jaoge to ek sun saan road milegi vaha ek bada sa khamba hai pille(yellow) rang ka wahi sab juari baithe hai...
Karanveer kuch kehta usse pehle..
Jerry gusse :- Un bahen ke lodo ne meri maa ka mangalsutra liya main unhe nahi chodunga........chaliye uncle jaldi se...
Karanveer sab jaanta tha vo jerry se kuch nahi bolta bolta bhi kya vo uske saath jaata hai or vo dono us theke or jue ke adde par pochte hai jo ab band hone wala thi tha waha jyada nahi sirf 12 ya 15 log hi the.....
Isse aage kya hua agle bhag me bataunga tab tak ke liye bataiyaga zaroor ki ye update kaisa laga or apni raye batana na bhuliyega......
Peace.......milte hai jald hi........![]()
Hero kuch jyada hi apne upar jimmedari lekar baitha hai behen,maa aur baap ki daru sabka Paisa khud hi deta hai aur bechare ko apni padhai bhi chhodni padiUpdate 2
Pichle Update Me Bohot Si Cheeje Reh Gai Thi Unme Se Kuch Aapko Abhi Bata Deta Hu Or Kuch Aage Kahni Me Pata Lagega
1: Sabse pehle Jerry ke baare me bata du jerry 10th ke baad se hi kaam kar raha tha lekin kya kaam karta tha ye kisi ko nahi pata tha jab Rashmi ne poocha to jerry ne bola ki vo kuch bachho ka homework krta hai paiso ke badle lekin vo kya kaam karta tha ye kisi ko nahi pata....
Lekin sabse badi baat ki jerry ne aaj tak apne liye kuch nahi kamaya tha usme apni betiyon jaisi baheno ke lie or apni jaan se jayada maa ke liye kamata tha....
Darasal jab 10th ka result aane ke baad jerry ne socha tha ki Ghar par baat krunga ki jis school me uske dost ja rahe h usme jaaye lekin jab vo ghar me aaya to usne dekhna ki uska baap uski maa ko maar raha tha or us din jerry pehle se hi tension me tha or vo gusse me aagya or usme apne baap ki aankhon ke gusse se dekha lekin kuch kaha nahi apni maa ko lekar vaha se chla gya us din vo bohot dukhi hua tha...
Uske baad usne school bhi chod diya.
Ji haa usne school chod diya tha or ye baat usne kabhi kisi ko pata nahi lagne di lekin vo karta kya tha...... Iska jawab to aage milega or rahi baat paiso ki to maine batau hi diya h ki kaise paise aate the...
Or ek baat or ki jerry ki personality bohot achhi thi....dekhlo khud hi
Ek dam hoo ba hu aise hi dikhta hai Jerry lekin uski is body ke baare me uski maa yani Rashmi ko nahi pata reason jaise ki vo bechari ko kabhi hasne ki foorsat nahi mili to body to kya hi dekhegi bas Ghar ke kalesh bete ka ghar chalana or ghr me rashan bhi jerry hi bharta tha or uske baap ki daaru ka kharcha bhi jerry hi karta tha. Ishi lie uska baap apne bete ko kuch nahi kehta tha lekin sach to ye tha ki vo apne bete se darta tha kyuki bhali hi Rashmi ne uski body na dekhi ho lekin ek din Manoj ne apne bete ko tarece kar push-up
Marte dekha tha kr upr usne jo punching bag rakha hai upr
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IShi li liye vo apne bete se darta hai lekin ye baat usne kabhi samne nahi aane di (kyuki uski jhooti mardangi na samne aajaye ishi liye kyuki vo nahi chata tha ki rashmi ko pata lage ki vo apne bete se darta hai )
Abbb aage kya hua vo dekhte hai
Rashmi jaise hi upr aati hai vo dekhti hai ki jerry ke haath se bleeding ho rahi hai uska haath bhot ghayal hai
Vo kuch bolti lekin usse pehle uski nazar apne bete ke chehre par or uske doosre haath or or upar ki manzil (floor par ud rahe cigrate ke dhooe ko or vo jerry ko dekhti hai jo kuch soch raha tha or apne man me kuch soch raha tha
Rashmi ye dekh kafi shoked ho jaati hai hai kyuki usne Aaj se pehle kabhi apne jerry ko smoke karte nahi dekha tha uske aashu ek dam se ruk jaate hai vo sirf jerry ko gore se dekh rahi thi uske man me lakho sawal chl rahe the ushe samj nahi aar tha ki kya kre
Rashmi ko samj nahi aara tha vo kya bole uske mooh se ghabrahat dukh mix hokar bas itna hi nikal ta hai dheere se ( ye mera jerry nahi hai ye mere jerry ko kya hogya hai)
Vo bas jerry ko dekh rahi thi fir Achanak jerry ki cigrate khatam ho jaati hai or vo doosri cigrate jalane lagta hai usko ye tak nahi pata tha ki uski maa uske piche aa chuki hai uska man or vo jaise aapas me lad rahe the....Jerry apne man me:-
Man me :- Main kayar hu*" main kayar hu kya fayeda mere mard hone ka kya fayeda mere jeene ka jab meri maa meri bahene har pal roti hai kya fayeda hua mera school chodne ka or jab maa ko ye bataunga ya ushe pata legega to kya hoga main kya socha tha lekin main kuch nahi kar paya or jab maa puchegi tab kya bolunga huh? Ki aapka jerry haar gya aapka jerry kuch nahi kar paya kuch nahi kar paya (or ye soch te hue uski aankhein nam hogai)
Tabhi vo doosri cigrate jala hi raha hota hai ki Rashmi gusse me chillati hai JERRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY or tab kahi jaakar jerry hosh me aata hai or piche mudke dekhta hai.
Or Rashmi jerry ki ye harkat dekh kar he ran Rehgai ki abhi bhi usne apne mooh se cigrate nahi faiki or doosri cigrate jala li Rashmi ko samj nahi aara tha ki ye achank ho kya raha hai uska poora sharir kaap raha tha vo samaj hi nahi paati ki uske jerry ko ho kya gya hai kya ho gya h ushe aaj kya kami Rehgai uski mamta me kya uska pyaar kam rehgaya kya usne apne bete ke dil me vo jagah nahi banai jo banani thi ya uska beta kisi moosibat me hai ye kya uska beta ye sab dekh kar depression me jaa rha hai ya fir................or itna soche hi vo rook jaati hai ab vo kya tha vo pata chalega abhi
Jerry abhi bhi cigrate pi raha tha or ye dekh Rashmi uske paas aati hai or kheech kar ek thappad marti hai.
Jerry jo apni duniya me tha vo ek dam se shoked ho jaata hai ki ye hua kya kyuki aaj pehli baar uski maa ne ushe maara tha lekin jab usne apni halat dekhi to ushe samaj aaya ki ye maine kya kiya ushe bohot bura laga usne cigrate faiki or tab ushe apne kate hue haath ka ehsas hua or jaise hi ushe dard hua vo haath rakhni ne dekhna vo jerry ko rote hue vaha bethaya or niche jaakar first-aid lekar aaio or uski bandages krne lag gai lekin ye sab karte hue vo to rahi thi bas ro rhi thi or rote rote jerry se:-
Rashmi : ye kya hua kaise hua main nahi jaanti jerry tumne Aaj jo kiya hai uske lie main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi krungi apne haath ko itna kaat diya poora kanch ghoos gya hai aakhir kya baat hai jo tumhne aisa kiya tumhe isk jawab dena hoga or upar se cigarete pee rahe ho aaj tak to tumne aisa nahi kiya kya tum bhi apne pita ke jaise....
OR BAS itna bolna tha ki jerry gusse khada ho jata hai......
Age kya hua agle part me jo ki kal aaega aaj election ki wajah se itna hi likha hai Varna or likhta hope aapko pasand aaya hoga batana kaisa likh raha hu![]()