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Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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KALYUG... Part 15...


( Something Is cooking )




Morning Time... 7 : 35 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Sir ab aapko aaram kar lena chahiye aap raat bhar soye nahi hai... Yaha mai sab dekh lungi...


Aadmi... Nahi... Mai theek hun... Meri beti kaise hai ab... Use jab tak hosh nahi aa jata mai kahi nahi Jane waala... Tum jao jaa kar dekho use hosh aaya ki nahi...


Aurat... Ji sir maine abhi usko check kiya sab normal hai hosh aane mai time lag sakta hai... Magar keh nahi sakte kitna...


Aadmi... Theek hai... ( Thoda ruk kar ) aur woh ladka...


Aurat... Ji usko normal chote aayi hai ghaav bharne mai time lagega... Baaki abhi behosh hi hai kabhi bhi hosh aa sakta hai...


Aadmi... ( Gehri saans chodte hue ) aur wohhh aurat uska kuch pta chala...


Aurat... ( Kuch ghabrate hue ) Ji sir uske gharwaalon ko khabar kar di gayi hai... Uska naam Yashoda hai woh yahi paas ki basti mai rehti hai jise yha kaam karne waali ek nurse ne pehchaan liya jo usi basti mai rehti thi... Uske Ghar waale kabhi bhi aate hi honge... ( Rukkar ) isliye mai chahti hoon aap ghar chale Jaye aaram kare yaha sab kuch mai sambhal lungi...


Aadmi... ( Gambhir hote hue ) kya humne jo kiya woh sahi kiya... Kahi humse koi chook toh nahi ho gayi... Jo aage chalkar humare liye pareshani khadi kare...



Aurat... ( Hakalate hue ) hummare paas yehi ek raasta thaaa sirrrr...


Aadmi... Huhhhh theek hai... Mai apne cabin mai jaa raha hoon abhi thodi der yahi hoon jaise hi uss ladke yaa meri beti ko hosh aaye mujhe khabar kar dena...


Aurat... Ji sir...


Morning Time... 7:45 AM...


Location... Basti...


...Tonyyyyy kya hua kuch pta chala Yashoda ka... Beta kya hua bol na... Tonnnnyyyy... Kab se yahi khada hai bolta kyun nahi kuch.... Tonnnnyyyy....




Vimala kab se Tony ko awaaz de rahi thi lekin Tony gate ke bahar khada kisi aur hi duniya mai chala gya tha... pass mai Roshan Tony ko dekh Ro raha tha... Shayad uske liye Tony ka kya mahatv hai yeh woh hi jaata hai... ( Iske baare mai baad mai baat karenge ) Vimala Tony ko jhakjhor kar puchti hai jisse Tony ke shareer mai koi hulchal nahi hoti bas hoth khulte aur band hote hai... Aur unme se kuch sab nikalte hai...


Tony... Yashoda ab hume chod kar jaa chuki hai...


Tony ke muhh se Yashoda ka sun Vimala jo ab tak thodi ummed thi woh bhi Tut jaati hai aur phut padti hai... Uske Rone ki awaaz sun ander se Kanta bhi aa jati hai Sweety bhi jo abhi bhi siskak rahi thi.... woh dono aaker Vimala ko chup karane lagti hai toh Vimala aur Rone lagti hai... Aur un dono ko bhi Yashoda ke baare mai bta deti hai... Jisse unki tez rulayi phut padti hai... Sath mai basti ki kuch mahilayen bhi Rone lagti hai...



Aas paas kaafi jamavda ikktha ho jata hai... Sabhi mahilayen ro rahi thi saaathh hi hi Kamala aur Kanta ko sahara de chup Kara rahi thi... Sweety ki alag buti halat thi use ab Nandu ki fikar bhi ho rahi thi kahi uske saath bhi kuch galat toh nahi ho gya... Yeh sochkar bahaar ki taraf bhaagne lagti hai lekin sab log use pakad lete hai... Woh rote hue chodd dene ko kehti hai...


Tony chup chap ek hi jagh par khada tha jaha woh kya karne jaa raha sab bhool chuka tha... Uske dimaag Mai lagataar Yashoda ki tasveer chal rahi thi... Jiss din woh pehli baar mili kaise usne uska pariwar poora kiya... Kaise jo ghar band pada tha use ghar banaya kaise use ek bete ka pyaar mila... abhi woh soch hi Raha tha ki sweety ki baat sun chink gaya...


Sweety.... ( Rote hue ) chooddd dooo mujjjheee.... Mujjjheee mereee Nanduuuuu ke paas jaanaaa haiiii choodddd do kahi useeee kuch hooo gya tohhhhhh mai jiii nahiiiii paungiiiiii choddddd doooo mujhe meeere Nanduuuuu ke paasss jaane do....



Nandu ka naam sun Tony ke saath saath Kanta ke bhi kaan khade ho gaye... Woh ek nazar Tony ko dekhti hai... Jise Tony nazarandaaz kar wapas Roshan ki taraf dekhta hai...


Tony... ( Dheere awaaz mai ) woh iss waqt kaha hai...


Roshan... Wwoohhh iss waqqqt ****** Aspataal maiiii hai...


Tony uske muhhh se Aspataal ka naam sun bina kisi ki taraf mude chal deta hai uske peeche peeche Kanta bhi saath Mai Sweety bhi khud ko sabse chuda kar bhaag jati hai... Vimala wonhi reh jati hai... Jise Nandu ki fikar bhi ho rahi lekin use pata tha Tony sab sambhal lega saath hi use Tony ka sawaal bhi yaad aata hai Tony ne mujhse yeh kyun pucha...



Nazim ke baare mai... Kahi iss sab ke peeche Nazimmm.... Soch kar uski ruhhhh kaamp jati hai... Use Nazim ki baatein yaad aane lagti hai achanak se usne mujhe yaha se kyun bhej diya... Nahi nahi mera beta aisa nahi kar sakta magar agar usne yeh sab kiya hoga toh mai use kya saza dungi... Use kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha... Kya mai apne bete ko maaf kar sakungi haan woh jaisa bhi hai mera beta hai... Usse galti ho gayi hogi mai Tony se baat karungi...


Abhi woh soch hi Rahi thi ki uske saamne Yashoda ka chehra aa jata hai... Jise dekhte hi uski rulayi phut padti hai... Nahiiiii mai use kabhi maaf nahi karungi... Usne jo meri phul si bacchi ki jaan li hai... Mai use kabhi maaf nahi karungi.... Kabhi nahi... Basti ki mahilaye use sambhalne ki koshish karti hai magar uska Rona tez hota jaa raha tha... Pehle Yashoda aur fir Nazim ka soch kar... Aakhir woh uska apna beta jo tha... Khair...



Morning Time... 8 : 15 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...maa... Tumhe kuch nahi hoga maaa mai sab theek kar dunga... Tumhe kuch nhi hoga aankhein kholo maaa... Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....


Cheenkhte hue mujhe hosh aa jata hai poore shahir mai dard ho raha tha khud ko ek anzaan jagah par dekh mai chonk jata hun yeh mai kaha aa gya... Mai aankhon ko poore kamre mai idher udher daudata hun toh mujhe... Pass mai hi laga moniter aur hath mai lagi drip dihayi deti hai... Mai pair hilane ki koshish karta hun... Magar mere ghutno mai kaafi tez dard hota hai... mujhse mere pair bhi nahi hile jaa rahe the...


Tabhi mujhe raat ka yaad aata hai... maaa... Mujhe yaad aate hi mai hilne ki koshish karta hun... Dard se meri cheenkh nikal jati hai lekin mujhe uski parwah nahi thi... Mujhe meri maa ke paas jana tha wapas... Woh kha hai iss waqt Theek toh hongi na... Mujhe unke paas jana hoga maa mai aa raha hun...


Mai dard ki parwaah na karte hue tezi se palat jata hun.. Aaaahhhh bhut tezz dard ho rha lekin mujhe Maa ke paas jana tha mai dard ko darkinaar kar... Bister par baithta hun.. pair zameen par rakhne ki koshish karta hun gutno par paatti badhi hui thi... mai jaise taise kar pair zameen par rakhta hun poora zor lagakar khada hone ki koshish karta hun ki aaaaahhhhhhh.... Bhut zor ka dard hota hai mai gir padta hun...

Aaahhhhh mmaaaaa.... Mere muhhh se cheenkh nikal jati hai mai fir uthne ki koshish karta hun magar mai hil bhi nahi paa raha tha... Tabhi...
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Tadakkkkkkk... Karke awaaz hoti hai mai uss taraf dekhta hun toh gate open ho chuka tha waha iss waqt ek aadmi aur aurat khade hue the... Mai gour se dekhne ki koshish karta hun toh yeh wohi dono hai jo kal raat mere saamne khade the... Jiske baad kya hua mujhe yaad nhi...



Aadmi mujhe zameen par gira dekh daudker mere pass aata h... Aur mujhe uthake bed par lita deta hai... Aurat tab tak nurse ko bula laayi thi jo pass me hi thi... Woh aaker mujhe check karti hai saath hi meri drip jo mere girne se bigad gayi thi use ek baar fir theek se laga deti hai...


Aadmi ko dekh mujhe itna samjh aa gya meri maa bhi yahi kahi hogi... Mujhe fir bhi usne milna tha...


Mai... ( Rote ghabrate hue ) Aahhhhh maaa... Uncle... Meriii maaa kaha hai woh theek toh hai na... mujheee unke paasss le chalo please uncleeee... Mai aapke hath jodta hun... Unko bhut chot aayi hai...


Aadmi... ( Paas aaker mere haath par hath rakhte hue ) sshhhhh... Abhi tum aaram Karo tumhe aaram ki jarurat hai tumhari maa yahi hai...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) Woh theek toh hai na unhe bhut chot aayi hai uncle...


Aadmi... Maine tumse kaha na abhi tumhe aaram ki jarurat hai... Tum kamjor ho abhi tumhe waha nahi ke jaa sakte...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) nahiiiii mujhe maa ke paas jana hai... Babaaaaaaa.....


Tadakkkkkkk... Iss baar mere saath sabka dhyan darwaze ke taraf gaya jaha Baba khade hue the... Mujhe aise rote dekh woh mere paas aaye mai bhi unhe dekh aur tezzz rone laga...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) baba maaaa.... Unko bhut chot aayi hai uncle mujhe unse milne nahi de rahe... Aap mujhe le chalo na mujhe maa ke paas jana hai... baaba....


Baba bas Mujhe dekh rahe the unhone mujhe gale se laga liya... Mai kaafi der tak rota raha... Maa ke paas le jane ko bolta raha magar unhone mujhe nahi choda bas gale se lagaye rakha maine bhi unhe jor se kaass liya... Woh ek hath mere sir per ferte rahe... Jisse thodi der mai mera Rona Kam ho siskiyon mai badal gya...



Mai... Baba... Mujhe maa ke paas le chalo... Maa ko bhut chot aayi hai...


Baba ne mujhe khudse alag kiya ek baar meri aakhon me dekha... Jab meri nazrein unse mili toh unki aankhon mein aansun the... Baba ko maine aaj se pehle kabhi rote hue nahi dekha tha... unko aise rota dekh mera ji ghabrane laga...


Mai.. ( ghabrate hue ) kya hua babaaa... Aap ro kyun rahe hai...


Tony... Nandu... Betaaaa... Teri maa hum dono ko chod kar ja chuki hain...


Aur ek baar fir mujhe bahon mai kass rone lage... Mai toh sunnnnnn ho gaya tha... Baba ne mujhe bahon mai kass rakha tha lekin mere muhhh se ek awaaz bhi nahi nikli... Bas Aankhon se aansun beh rahe the... Mere saamne maa ki yaadein ghoom rahi thi...


Woh unki Lori jo mujhe neend na aane par sunati thi... Woh unki kahani jo mujhe khana khilane ke liye sunati thi... Woh unki daant jo mujhe galat raste par bhatakne nahi deti thi... Woh unki Mamta jo mere bimaar hone par saari raat mujhpar lulati thi... Bhool jata tha Pareshani saari jab woh mera sir apni goad mai rakhti thi...


Mai... Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...


Tadakkkkkkk... Ek baar fir gate khulta hai iss baar aur do log ander aate hai... Mai unko dekhta hun... Toh Aayi aur Sweety the jo mujhe aise rote dekh daud kar mere paas aate hai... Sweety mujhe peeche se gale laga leti hai... Aayi chalte hue mere pass aati hai... Mere sir par hath ferti hai... Mere muhhh se kuch nhi nikal raha mai basss unhe dekh raha tha peeche se sweety mujhe kass kar pakde hue sisak rahi thi...


Baba mujhse alag hote hai ki Aayi aage badh mujhe baahon mai le leti hai...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) Nanduuuuu... Mai teri maa nahi hun...



Maine peeche hatke ek baar unke chehre per dekha jo aansun se bheeg chuka tha... Mere muhh se sabd nahi nikal rahe the bas maine Haan me sir hila diya...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) bassss... Fir maaainnn huunnn na Terese sattthhh main tujhe kahi chodkar nahi jaane waali...


Unki baatain sun meri awaaz jo chali gayi thi wapas aa jati h... Main unko baahon mein kass rone lagta hoon...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) aayiii... Maaaa...


Mujhse aur kuch nahi bola gya mai rote rote behosh ho gaya... Aage kya hua mujhe yaad nahi...


Evening Time... 5 : 15 PM...


Location... ****** Hospital...




...aaahhhh... Huhhh... Tu yeh kya kar rahi hai... Uth mere upar se... Aur Baba kha hai...


Sweety... ( Jo mere uper hi so gayi thi neend se uthte hue ) kya hai sone bhi nahi deta mai kitna aacha sapna dekh rahi thi...


Mai... ( Khejte hue ) aaahhhh uth na... Waise kam dard ho raha kya...


Sweety... ( Jhat se uthte hue ) sorry woh mai bhool gayi thi... Ab kaise tabiyat hai tumhari...


Mai... Ab thoda theek hai bas sir ghoom raha hai... Baba kha hai... Aayi bhi...


Sweety... ( Haklate hue ) woo Baba woo mausssiii ko le kar gye hai... Maa bhi unkeee sath chali gayi... Subh hi... Dekho tum rona mat warna mujhe bhi rona aa jayega aur subh se Ro ro kar meri aankhein laal ho gayi hai... Meri aankhein tumhari wajah se kharab Hui toh mai tumhe nahi chodungi bta deti hun...


Mai maa ke baare mein ek baar fir yaad mai chala gya tabhi sweety ki baatein sun uska mere liye itna pyaar dekh meri aankhein bhar aayi... Maine ek baar aur use kass kar gale se laga liya... Aur subukne laga woh bhi siskiyan lene lagi...

Thode time gale lage rehne ke baad maine use khud se dur kiya uski iski abhi bhi chaalu thi usne meri taraf dekha aur mere seene Mai mukke maarne lagi...


Mai... Aaahhhhh kya kar rahi hai...


Sweety... Tune mujhe kyun rulaya... mana kiya tha na tujhe rone ke liye...



Mai... Aacha theek hai dekh nahi ro raha me... Ab tu bhi Rona band kar rote hue bilkull bandariya lagti h...


Sweety... Kya kaha tune tujhe mai bandariya lagti hun... Ruk tujhe abhi btati hun aaj teri khair nahi... ( Mere pait par baith jaati hai sath me mukke maar rahi thi... )


Mai... Aaahhhh koi toh bacha warna yeh bandariya mujhe maar dalegi...


Tadakkkkkkk... Huhhhh... Gate khulta hai aur usme se ek nurse ander aati hai jo shayad check up karne aayi thi...


Nurse... ( Kadak aawaz me... ) Yeh sab kya ho raha hai... Aur tum ladki patient ke uper kya kar rahi ho utho uske ghav abhi tak nahi bhare h...


Sweety... Wohhh maiii woooohh isne mujhe pehle bandariya kaha...


Nurse... Haan toh kya galat kha abhi jo harkate kar thi woh bandariya hi karti hai... Chalo utho mujhe check up karna hai...


Nurse ke muhh se bandariya sun meri hasi nikal gayi... Waise hi Sweety ne mujhe ghoor kar dekha aur uth kar door khadi ho gayi... Mujhe uska fula muhh dekh kar hasi aa rahi magar iss waqt mai chup hi raha... Wanhi Nurse apna kaam Kari rahi usne meri patti change ki mujhe uss wakt kaafi dard hua mujhe dard mai dekh sweety waha se mere paas aayi aur mera hath pakad khadi ho gayi... Maine uski taraf dekha usne apna chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya...


Nurse apna kaam khatam karke chali gayi... uske jaate hi Sweety ne apna hath jhatk mujhse chuda liya... Mai aage badh use pakadne ko hua woh door hui mai aur aage hua woh aur door ho gayi... Main ghutne modne ki koshish ki tabhi mere pairon ke paas kuch mehsoos hua...


Maine sir uper kar dekha toh ek file rakhi thi jo shayad nurse bhool gayi thi...



( Well finally update aa gya... Rebus kam ho gye hai like bhi... 😒 Thoda kar do yr... Bhut mehnat ho gayi... 39 like.. 😁😁 )


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Nice update

Kuch time se kisi bhi story par koi review nahi diya maine, busy tha.

Nazim apne plan main kamyab to nahi ho paya, lekin sab kuch barbad kar gya.

Jo nahi chahta tha vahi hua, yashoda ki death. Dekhte hai ye incident kahani me konse mod le kar aati hai.

Kahani ke background me bahut kuch chal rha hai. Nazim ko marne vala vo ladka yaa phir yashoda ki maut ki vajah.

Pichle update me iss aadmi ki beti ki jaan khatre me thi. Aur ab yahan yashoda ki death hona. Aur uss aadmi aur aurat ki baat se lag rha hai ki shayad apni beti ko bachane ke liye unhone yashoda ke sath kuch Kiya hai. Ab kya Kiya hai ye to aage hi pta chalega. Aur dekhte hai bhavishya me iske kya parinaam honge.

Baat karu reviews yaa view kam hone ke to uske 2 reasons lag rhe hai mujhe.
1. Update ka time par naa aana aur unke bich ka badhta gap.

2. Kahani ab tak apne plot ko establish nahi kar payi. Yu to kahani me koi kami nahi hai writing style aur plot acha hai. Lekin unexplained hai.

Aapne hi kaha tha ki kahani me fantasy aur supernatural powers ka bhi role hai, lekin ab tak kahani puri tarah se emotional rahi hai, ab aise me thodi boriyat to hone hi lagti hai. Emotional, action, thriller sabka cocktail ho to maja aata hai, jyada vakt tak agar ek hi tarah ki tone me story chale specifically emotional tone me to ubaupan ho jata hai.

Don't take it wrong, sirf mujhe Aisa lagta hai. It's upto you totally ki kahani kaise likhni hai.

Nice update, eagerly waiting for update

Thanks
 

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Yashoda mar gayi to Tony nazim ko chhodega nahi. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
 

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KALYUG... Part 15...


( Something Is cooking )




Morning Time... 7 : 35 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Sir ab aapko aaram kar lena chahiye aap raat bhar soye nahi hai... Yaha mai sab dekh lungi...


Aadmi... Nahi... Mai theek hun... Meri beti kaise hai ab... Use jab tak hosh nahi aa jata mai kahi nahi Jane waala... Tum jao jaa kar dekho use hosh aaya ki nahi...


Aurat... Ji sir maine abhi usko check kiya sab normal hai hosh aane mai time lag sakta hai... Magar keh nahi sakte kitna...


Aadmi... Theek hai... ( Thoda ruk kar ) aur woh ladka...


Aurat... Ji usko normal chote aayi hai ghaav bharne mai time lagega... Baaki abhi behosh hi hai kabhi bhi hosh aa sakta hai...


Aadmi... ( Gehri saans chodte hue ) aur wohhh aurat uska kuch pta chala...


Aurat... ( Kuch ghabrate hue ) Ji sir uske gharwaalon ko khabar kar di gayi hai... Uska naam Yashoda hai woh yahi paas ki basti mai rehti hai jise yha kaam karne waali ek nurse ne pehchaan liya jo usi basti mai rehti thi... Uske Ghar waale kabhi bhi aate hi honge... ( Rukkar ) isliye mai chahti hoon aap ghar chale Jaye aaram kare yaha sab kuch mai sambhal lungi...


Aadmi... ( Gambhir hote hue ) kya humne jo kiya woh sahi kiya... Kahi humse koi chook toh nahi ho gayi... Jo aage chalkar humare liye pareshani khadi kare...



Aurat... ( Hakalate hue ) hummare paas yehi ek raasta thaaa sirrrr...


Aadmi... Huhhhh theek hai... Mai apne cabin mai jaa raha hoon abhi thodi der yahi hoon jaise hi uss ladke yaa meri beti ko hosh aaye mujhe khabar kar dena...


Aurat... Ji sir...


Morning Time... 7:45 AM...


Location... Basti...


...Tonyyyyy kya hua kuch pta chala Yashoda ka... Beta kya hua bol na... Tonnnnyyyy... Kab se yahi khada hai bolta kyun nahi kuch.... Tonnnnyyyy....




Vimala kab se Tony ko awaaz de rahi thi lekin Tony gate ke bahar khada kisi aur hi duniya mai chala gya tha... pass mai Roshan Tony ko dekh Ro raha tha... Shayad uske liye Tony ka kya mahatv hai yeh woh hi jaata hai... ( Iske baare mai baad mai baat karenge ) Vimala Tony ko jhakjhor kar puchti hai jisse Tony ke shareer mai koi hulchal nahi hoti bas hoth khulte aur band hote hai... Aur unme se kuch sab nikalte hai...


Tony... Yashoda ab hume chod kar jaa chuki hai...


Tony ke muhh se Yashoda ka sun Vimala jo ab tak thodi ummed thi woh bhi Tut jaati hai aur phut padti hai... Uske Rone ki awaaz sun ander se Kanta bhi aa jati hai Sweety bhi jo abhi bhi siskak rahi thi.... woh dono aaker Vimala ko chup karane lagti hai toh Vimala aur Rone lagti hai... Aur un dono ko bhi Yashoda ke baare mai bta deti hai... Jisse unki tez rulayi phut padti hai... Sath mai basti ki kuch mahilayen bhi Rone lagti hai...



Aas paas kaafi jamavda ikktha ho jata hai... Sabhi mahilayen ro rahi thi saaathh hi hi Kamala aur Kanta ko sahara de chup Kara rahi thi... Sweety ki alag buti halat thi use ab Nandu ki fikar bhi ho rahi thi kahi uske saath bhi kuch galat toh nahi ho gya... Yeh sochkar bahaar ki taraf bhaagne lagti hai lekin sab log use pakad lete hai... Woh rote hue chodd dene ko kehti hai...


Tony chup chap ek hi jagh par khada tha jaha woh kya karne jaa raha sab bhool chuka tha... Uske dimaag Mai lagataar Yashoda ki tasveer chal rahi thi... Jiss din woh pehli baar mili kaise usne uska pariwar poora kiya... Kaise jo ghar band pada tha use ghar banaya kaise use ek bete ka pyaar mila... abhi woh soch hi Raha tha ki sweety ki baat sun chink gaya...


Sweety.... ( Rote hue ) chooddd dooo mujjjheee.... Mujjjheee mereee Nanduuuuu ke paas jaanaaa haiiii choodddd do kahi useeee kuch hooo gya tohhhhhh mai jiii nahiiiii paungiiiiii choddddd doooo mujhe meeere Nanduuuuu ke paasss jaane do....



Nandu ka naam sun Tony ke saath saath Kanta ke bhi kaan khade ho gaye... Woh ek nazar Tony ko dekhti hai... Jise Tony nazarandaaz kar wapas Roshan ki taraf dekhta hai...


Tony... ( Dheere awaaz mai ) woh iss waqt kaha hai...


Roshan... Wwoohhh iss waqqqt ****** Aspataal maiiii hai...


Tony uske muhhh se Aspataal ka naam sun bina kisi ki taraf mude chal deta hai uske peeche peeche Kanta bhi saath Mai Sweety bhi khud ko sabse chuda kar bhaag jati hai... Vimala wonhi reh jati hai... Jise Nandu ki fikar bhi ho rahi lekin use pata tha Tony sab sambhal lega saath hi use Tony ka sawaal bhi yaad aata hai Tony ne mujhse yeh kyun pucha...



Nazim ke baare mai... Kahi iss sab ke peeche Nazimmm.... Soch kar uski ruhhhh kaamp jati hai... Use Nazim ki baatein yaad aane lagti hai achanak se usne mujhe yaha se kyun bhej diya... Nahi nahi mera beta aisa nahi kar sakta magar agar usne yeh sab kiya hoga toh mai use kya saza dungi... Use kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha... Kya mai apne bete ko maaf kar sakungi haan woh jaisa bhi hai mera beta hai... Usse galti ho gayi hogi mai Tony se baat karungi...


Abhi woh soch hi Rahi thi ki uske saamne Yashoda ka chehra aa jata hai... Jise dekhte hi uski rulayi phut padti hai... Nahiiiii mai use kabhi maaf nahi karungi... Usne jo meri phul si bacchi ki jaan li hai... Mai use kabhi maaf nahi karungi.... Kabhi nahi... Basti ki mahilaye use sambhalne ki koshish karti hai magar uska Rona tez hota jaa raha tha... Pehle Yashoda aur fir Nazim ka soch kar... Aakhir woh uska apna beta jo tha... Khair...



Morning Time... 8 : 15 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...maa... Tumhe kuch nahi hoga maaa mai sab theek kar dunga... Tumhe kuch nhi hoga aankhein kholo maaa... Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....


Cheenkhte hue mujhe hosh aa jata hai poore shahir mai dard ho raha tha khud ko ek anzaan jagah par dekh mai chonk jata hun yeh mai kaha aa gya... Mai aankhon ko poore kamre mai idher udher daudata hun toh mujhe... Pass mai hi laga moniter aur hath mai lagi drip dihayi deti hai... Mai pair hilane ki koshish karta hun... Magar mere ghutno mai kaafi tez dard hota hai... mujhse mere pair bhi nahi hile jaa rahe the...


Tabhi mujhe raat ka yaad aata hai... maaa... Mujhe yaad aate hi mai hilne ki koshish karta hun... Dard se meri cheenkh nikal jati hai lekin mujhe uski parwah nahi thi... Mujhe meri maa ke paas jana tha wapas... Woh kha hai iss waqt Theek toh hongi na... Mujhe unke paas jana hoga maa mai aa raha hun...


Mai dard ki parwaah na karte hue tezi se palat jata hun.. Aaaahhhh bhut tezz dard ho rha lekin mujhe Maa ke paas jana tha mai dard ko darkinaar kar... Bister par baithta hun.. pair zameen par rakhne ki koshish karta hun gutno par paatti badhi hui thi... mai jaise taise kar pair zameen par rakhta hun poora zor lagakar khada hone ki koshish karta hun ki aaaaahhhhhhh.... Bhut zor ka dard hota hai mai gir padta hun...

Aaahhhhh mmaaaaa.... Mere muhhh se cheenkh nikal jati hai mai fir uthne ki koshish karta hun magar mai hil bhi nahi paa raha tha... Tabhi...
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Tadakkkkkkk... Karke awaaz hoti hai mai uss taraf dekhta hun toh gate open ho chuka tha waha iss waqt ek aadmi aur aurat khade hue the... Mai gour se dekhne ki koshish karta hun toh yeh wohi dono hai jo kal raat mere saamne khade the... Jiske baad kya hua mujhe yaad nhi...



Aadmi mujhe zameen par gira dekh daudker mere pass aata h... Aur mujhe uthake bed par lita deta hai... Aurat tab tak nurse ko bula laayi thi jo pass me hi thi... Woh aaker mujhe check karti hai saath hi meri drip jo mere girne se bigad gayi thi use ek baar fir theek se laga deti hai...


Aadmi ko dekh mujhe itna samjh aa gya meri maa bhi yahi kahi hogi... Mujhe fir bhi usne milna tha...


Mai... ( Rote ghabrate hue ) Aahhhhh maaa... Uncle... Meriii maaa kaha hai woh theek toh hai na... mujheee unke paasss le chalo please uncleeee... Mai aapke hath jodta hun... Unko bhut chot aayi hai...


Aadmi... ( Paas aaker mere haath par hath rakhte hue ) sshhhhh... Abhi tum aaram Karo tumhe aaram ki jarurat hai tumhari maa yahi hai...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) Woh theek toh hai na unhe bhut chot aayi hai uncle...


Aadmi... Maine tumse kaha na abhi tumhe aaram ki jarurat hai... Tum kamjor ho abhi tumhe waha nahi ke jaa sakte...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) nahiiiii mujhe maa ke paas jana hai... Babaaaaaaa.....


Tadakkkkkkk... Iss baar mere saath sabka dhyan darwaze ke taraf gaya jaha Baba khade hue the... Mujhe aise rote dekh woh mere paas aaye mai bhi unhe dekh aur tezzz rone laga...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) baba maaaa.... Unko bhut chot aayi hai uncle mujhe unse milne nahi de rahe... Aap mujhe le chalo na mujhe maa ke paas jana hai... baaba....


Baba bas Mujhe dekh rahe the unhone mujhe gale se laga liya... Mai kaafi der tak rota raha... Maa ke paas le jane ko bolta raha magar unhone mujhe nahi choda bas gale se lagaye rakha maine bhi unhe jor se kaass liya... Woh ek hath mere sir per ferte rahe... Jisse thodi der mai mera Rona Kam ho siskiyon mai badal gya...



Mai... Baba... Mujhe maa ke paas le chalo... Maa ko bhut chot aayi hai...


Baba ne mujhe khudse alag kiya ek baar meri aakhon me dekha... Jab meri nazrein unse mili toh unki aankhon mein aansun the... Baba ko maine aaj se pehle kabhi rote hue nahi dekha tha... unko aise rota dekh mera ji ghabrane laga...


Mai.. ( ghabrate hue ) kya hua babaaa... Aap ro kyun rahe hai...


Tony... Nandu... Betaaaa... Teri maa hum dono ko chod kar ja chuki hain...


Aur ek baar fir mujhe bahon mai kass rone lage... Mai toh sunnnnnn ho gaya tha... Baba ne mujhe bahon mai kass rakha tha lekin mere muhhh se ek awaaz bhi nahi nikli... Bas Aankhon se aansun beh rahe the... Mere saamne maa ki yaadein ghoom rahi thi...


Woh unki Lori jo mujhe neend na aane par sunati thi... Woh unki kahani jo mujhe khana khilane ke liye sunati thi... Woh unki daant jo mujhe galat raste par bhatakne nahi deti thi... Woh unki Mamta jo mere bimaar hone par saari raat mujhpar lulati thi... Bhool jata tha Pareshani saari jab woh mera sir apni goad mai rakhti thi...


Mai... Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...


Tadakkkkkkk... Ek baar fir gate khulta hai iss baar aur do log ander aate hai... Mai unko dekhta hun... Toh Aayi aur Sweety the jo mujhe aise rote dekh daud kar mere paas aate hai... Sweety mujhe peeche se gale laga leti hai... Aayi chalte hue mere pass aati hai... Mere sir par hath ferti hai... Mere muhhh se kuch nhi nikal raha mai basss unhe dekh raha tha peeche se sweety mujhe kass kar pakde hue sisak rahi thi...


Baba mujhse alag hote hai ki Aayi aage badh mujhe baahon mai le leti hai...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) Nanduuuuu... Mai teri maa nahi hun...



Maine peeche hatke ek baar unke chehre per dekha jo aansun se bheeg chuka tha... Mere muhh se sabd nahi nikal rahe the bas maine Haan me sir hila diya...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) bassss... Fir maaainnn huunnn na Terese sattthhh main tujhe kahi chodkar nahi jaane waali...


Unki baatain sun meri awaaz jo chali gayi thi wapas aa jati h... Main unko baahon mein kass rone lagta hoon...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) aayiii... Maaaa...


Mujhse aur kuch nahi bola gya mai rote rote behosh ho gaya... Aage kya hua mujhe yaad nahi...


Evening Time... 5 : 15 PM...


Location... ****** Hospital...




...aaahhhh... Huhhh... Tu yeh kya kar rahi hai... Uth mere upar se... Aur Baba kha hai...


Sweety... ( Jo mere uper hi so gayi thi neend se uthte hue ) kya hai sone bhi nahi deta mai kitna aacha sapna dekh rahi thi...


Mai... ( Khejte hue ) aaahhhh uth na... Waise kam dard ho raha kya...


Sweety... ( Jhat se uthte hue ) sorry woh mai bhool gayi thi... Ab kaise tabiyat hai tumhari...


Mai... Ab thoda theek hai bas sir ghoom raha hai... Baba kha hai... Aayi bhi...


Sweety... ( Haklate hue ) woo Baba woo mausssiii ko le kar gye hai... Maa bhi unkeee sath chali gayi... Subh hi... Dekho tum rona mat warna mujhe bhi rona aa jayega aur subh se Ro ro kar meri aankhein laal ho gayi hai... Meri aankhein tumhari wajah se kharab Hui toh mai tumhe nahi chodungi bta deti hun...


Mai maa ke baare mein ek baar fir yaad mai chala gya tabhi sweety ki baatein sun uska mere liye itna pyaar dekh meri aankhein bhar aayi... Maine ek baar aur use kass kar gale se laga liya... Aur subukne laga woh bhi siskiyan lene lagi...

Thode time gale lage rehne ke baad maine use khud se dur kiya uski iski abhi bhi chaalu thi usne meri taraf dekha aur mere seene Mai mukke maarne lagi...


Mai... Aaahhhhh kya kar rahi hai...


Sweety... Tune mujhe kyun rulaya... mana kiya tha na tujhe rone ke liye...



Mai... Aacha theek hai dekh nahi ro raha me... Ab tu bhi Rona band kar rote hue bilkull bandariya lagti h...


Sweety... Kya kaha tune tujhe mai bandariya lagti hun... Ruk tujhe abhi btati hun aaj teri khair nahi... ( Mere pait par baith jaati hai sath me mukke maar rahi thi... )


Mai... Aaahhhh koi toh bacha warna yeh bandariya mujhe maar dalegi...


Tadakkkkkkk... Huhhhh... Gate khulta hai aur usme se ek nurse ander aati hai jo shayad check up karne aayi thi...


Nurse... ( Kadak aawaz me... ) Yeh sab kya ho raha hai... Aur tum ladki patient ke uper kya kar rahi ho utho uske ghav abhi tak nahi bhare h...


Sweety... Wohhh maiii woooohh isne mujhe pehle bandariya kaha...


Nurse... Haan toh kya galat kha abhi jo harkate kar thi woh bandariya hi karti hai... Chalo utho mujhe check up karna hai...


Nurse ke muhh se bandariya sun meri hasi nikal gayi... Waise hi Sweety ne mujhe ghoor kar dekha aur uth kar door khadi ho gayi... Mujhe uska fula muhh dekh kar hasi aa rahi magar iss waqt mai chup hi raha... Wanhi Nurse apna kaam Kari rahi usne meri patti change ki mujhe uss wakt kaafi dard hua mujhe dard mai dekh sweety waha se mere paas aayi aur mera hath pakad khadi ho gayi... Maine uski taraf dekha usne apna chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya...


Nurse apna kaam khatam karke chali gayi... uske jaate hi Sweety ne apna hath jhatk mujhse chuda liya... Mai aage badh use pakadne ko hua woh door hui mai aur aage hua woh aur door ho gayi... Main ghutne modne ki koshish ki tabhi mere pairon ke paas kuch mehsoos hua...


Maine sir uper kar dekha toh ek file rakhi thi jo shayad nurse bhool gayi thi...



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Hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...


Ek ** saal ka ladka Jo dikhne se greeb lag raha hai badan par fate purane kapde h... Saath uski maa jise ladke ne peeth par utha rakha hai jinki haalat kahi se theek nahi lag rahi sir par gehri chot khoon paani ki tarah beh raha hai... Aakhon se aasun beh rahe hai apne bete ko uski chinta karte dekh kar... Dard mai baar baar behosh hone ke bawajood bete ki baatain unhe hosh khone nahi de rahi hai... Uski saasain dhere dhere kamjor ho rahi hai jo pta nahi kab band ho jayen... Woh apne bete se baatein Karna chahti hai lekin uske muhh se kuch lafs bhi nikalana sambhav nahi ho paa raha hai... Aasun bahane ke alawa woh kuch aur nahi kar sakti... Saath hi woh apne betain palo ko yaad kar rahi hai...


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Location government hospital... Time 4:35AM...



....Doctor doctor jaldi chaliye 217 bed waali lady ko pain shuru ho gaya hai..... Nurse


Doctor... ( Jo gehri neend mai tha ) chilla kyun rahi hai... Yeh government hospital hai pata hai na... Chal mai aata hoon thodi mai..


Nurse.. magar doctor woh pait***


Doctor... ( Beech mai hi ) suna nahi tune maine kya kaha... Chal jaa ab yaha se aata hun mai...


Uske baad doctor gate band kar leta hai fir ek gehri neend sone ke liye let jata hai... Wohi nurse jo yeh sab sun kar jara bhi aacharya nahi hua quki jab se woh yaha kaam kar rahi roz aise kitne hi cases usko dekhne ko milte hai... Soch kar ek bund aansun ki uski nikal jaati hai fir dusre hi pal woh bhaagi bhaagi normal ward mai enter karti hai...


Lady jise dekh kar lag raha hai pet se hai... Dard mai tadap rahi magar madat karne waala koi nahi hai... Poora ward khaali pada hua hai... Jisse anumaan laga sakte hai government hospital ki kya sthiti chal rahi hai... Jaha ek doctor ek nurse aur ek hi compounder poora hospital chala rahe hai... Isliye yaha koi mareez dekhne ko nahi mill raha jiske pass thoda bhut bhi Paisa hai private hospital mai jata hai...


Lady jiske pass na ilaaj ke liye paise hai na koi rishtedar madat karne waala... Aasun bahate hue tadapte hue apne pet par hath fer apne bete se baatein kar rahi hai... Shayad usne bhi haar maan li hai nurse ko bhi gye kaafi samay ho chala hai dard mai uski aankh band ho hi rahi hai magar baar baar uske pet mai dard use aankhen band nahi karne de raha sayad uska beta uski maa ki sthiti samjh raha hai... Jo abhi duniya mai aaya hi nahi.... dard mai karahte hue woh haar maan chuki hai magar fir uske chehre par ek muskaan dikh hi jati hai jab woh pet par haath rakh bete ko 'natkhat' Nand kishore keh pukaarti hai....


Tabhi Nurse ward mai enter karti hai lady ko iss halat mai dekh uski aankhon se bandh Tut padta hai.. woh bhi gareeb thi lady ki problem samjh sakti thi... Ameer log gareeb ko kede makode se jayada nahi samjhte... Jitna jayada Ameer utna jayada dard woh gareebon ko dete hai... Jiska natija uske saamne lady ** saal pregnant hai aage peeche koi nahi... Woh bhi gareeb hai magar kam se kam uska pariwar hai... Jinki madat se woh aaj government hospital mai naukri kar rahi hai... ** Saal ki bina shaadi ke kaise apne ko bachaya hai woh khud jaanti hai... Kai ameerjade uske peeche pade hai... Raaste Mai rok kar kabhi uska haath pakd lete hai kabhi uske angon ko chu lete hai woh chatpata kar kaise bhi wanha se baag jaati hai... Rote waqt woh yahi sab soch rahi thi ki ek cheeckh ne uska dhyaan kheencha jo lady ki thi...


Bhaag kar woh ward mai jaati hai lady haath pakad check karti hai nabs dheme chal rahi thi... Use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare... kya ek baar fir doctor ke paas jaya jaye yeh vichar uske man mai jise uske jatak diya.. aur khud lady ko jaise taise karke moving bed par shift kar deti hai.. aur fouran use Operation Theatre mai le jane lagti hai...


OT mai woh lady ko check karti hai saare equipment lagati hai... Lady ko hosh mai lane ki koshish karti hai... Magar baar baar woh behosh ho rahi thi dard ke maare.. woh ek injection lady ko deti hai jisse woh hosh mai aaye magar woh bhi nakamyab ho jaata hai... Iss halat mai normal delivery nahi ho sakti thi... Cesarean delivery woh bina permission ke kar nahi sakti thi... Woh kya kare kya kare kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...


Dewaar par tangi gadhi ki taraf woh baar baar dekh rahi thi... Subh ke 6 baj chuke the doctor abhi tak nahi aaya woh gate gadhi lady teeno ko baar baar dekh rahi thi... Kya kare isi muskill mai fasi rehne ke baad woh kuch faisla karti hai... Aur OT ki light Lady ke upar kar deti hai paas mai pade gloves mask aur kenchi padke woh ek nazar lady ki taraf dekhti hai... Jiska ek hath uske pet par abhi bhi hota hai... kaapte haath se woh lady ke hath ko pakad pet se alag karti hai aur shuru ho jaati hai....


Kareeb ghante bhar ki mehnat ke baad woh operation karne mai sucessful ho jati hai... goad mai bacche lo liye woh ek tak use niharti hai... Jo gulabi rang chote chote haath pair idher udher maar kar kilkaari maar raha hai... dikhne mai kisi shehzade ki tarah behad khubsurat dikh raha tha... Woh ek tak use niharti rehti hai baccha roye jata hai woh chupp karane ki koshish karti hai magar ladka roye jaa raha tha... woh jaldi se baache ko ek kapde mai lapet kar maa ki taraf dekhti hai toh uske hosh hi udd hate hai....


Lady ka hath bed se neeche latka hua tha aakhen bhi band padi thi dekhne se lag raha tha shayad saasain bhi ruk chuki hai... Woh jaldi se baache ko apne se alag kar ek palne mai rakh deti hai... Aur lady ke paas ja use check karti hai toh dhaak se neeche gir jati hai... Woh sunya ki awastha mai phunch gayi thi... Lady aur dard na seh saki usne dum toad diya tha.... Uske chehre par jaha pehle muskaan thi wohi marte waqt chinta ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi... Jo sayad apne bete ke liye thi...


Sab apni soch mai gum the magar ladka roye jaa raha tha shayad woh apni maa ka dhoondh raha tha... Jiski awaaz sun Nurse ko hosh aata hai aur bacche ko apni goad mai utha leti hai phut phut kar rone lagti hai...


Time 9:25 AM...


Nurse bacche ko haath mai liye apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi thi... Tabhi use raaste mai dairy dikati hai jisse use yaad aata hai ladke ne subh se kuch nahi khaya aur woh uske liye kuch paise se doodh khareed leti hai.. aur saath hi rikshaw kar apne ghar ki taraf chal deti hai... Poore Raaste uski aankhon nam hi thi aasun rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the saath hi use poori raat ki kahani uske saamne dimaag Mai ghoom rahi thi.. tabhi use subh ki hui baat yaad aati hai...


Earlier 1 hour ago...


...Aahhh hhhhh hmm Yashoda kaha ho ek chai pila do jara...


Doctor ubasi lete hue ward mai enter karta hai aur Nurse jiska naam yashoda hai use chai ke liye kehta hai... jaha ward mai yashoda na pakar chaaro taraf use dhoondne ki koshish karta hai.. tabhi uska dhyaan OT ki taraf jata hai jiski light abhi tak jal rahi hoti hai... Woh ander jaake dekhta hai toh use nurse ek kone mai khadi dikhayi deti hai jiske haath mai baccha rehta hai... Tabhi ek nazar woh lady ki taraf daalta hai aur use check karta hai... jisse use pta chahta hai lady dum toad chuki hai tabhi woh nurse ko khoya hua dekh kehta hai...


Doctor... Kya hua yeh toh mar gayi tum kyun muh latka ke baithi ho jao aur apna kaam karo mere liye chai banao tab tak mai Manoj ko phone kar deta hun body ko hatane ke liye yaha se...


Doctor ki baat sun woh ek baar fir hosh mai aati hai aur laanat bari nazron se use dekhti hai.... Magar woh kar bhi kya sakti thi agar use yaha rehna hai toh doctor ki baat na maane ka sawaal hi nhi uthta.. magar ek problem uske saamne yeh thi ki ladka Jo rote rote badi mushkil se abhi hi soya tha uske haath ki ek ungli abhi bhi uske haath mai hi thi... Agar woh chai banane jaati hai toh use baache ko yahi chod kar jana padega... Abhi woh apni soch mai ghum hi thi tabhi use doctor ki baat sun jor ka dhakka lagta hai... Aur uske maathe par paseena aur chinta ubhar aati hai...


Doctor... Aur haan 10 bje tak Ravi aayega Usko operation ka saman aur injection de Dena jo maine tumhe kal rakhne ko diya tha.. saath mai woh ****rs bhi dega woh le lena... Ab jaldi karo tumhe pta hai na mujhe uthane ke baad chai der se peene ki aadhat nahi hai warna Mera sir dard karta hai... Chalo jao khadi kyun ho... Yashoda sunayi de raha hai tujhe...


Yashoda jo iss samay doctor ki baat sun khoyi hui thi.. tabhi doctor use jhakjhor kar hilata hua kaam ki dubara kehta hai... Magar use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare kya jawaab de.. qki woh injection toh usne raat ko hi lady ko laga diya tha.. jise doctor ne Ravi ko bech diya hai... Ab woh injection kaha se laye abhi kuch soche usse pehle ek bar fir doctor use jhakjhor deta hai...


Doctor... Kha khoi ho tabiyat toh theek hai tumhare... Yaa kaan behnre ho gye hai jaldi se apne kaam par lag jao mujhe ek baat baar baar kehne ki aadat nahi hai....


Doctor ki baat se uska gussa saaf pta chal raha tha tabhi yashoda kapte hotho se use raat ki poori baat batati hai jisse sun doctor gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur apna gussa yashoda par nikaal deta hai... Ek rakh ke tappad use maarte hue kehta hai...


Doctor... Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui bina mujhse puche... Cesarean delivery krne ki kisse permission li tumne... Jawaab do kisse puch kar yeh sab kiya... Pta bhi hai jo injection tumne ise diya uski keemat kya thi... Jawaab do hai koi jawaab tumhare paas...


Yashoda aakhon mai aasun liye maar kha rahi thi... Qyuki use khud nahi pata tha uski keemat usne bas lady ki madat ke liye woh injection use de diya tha... Doctor ek baar fir thappad uske gaal par jadd deta hai... Aur cheenkhta hua kehta hai...


Doctor... Nikal jao iss hospital se warna mai kuch kar dunga tumhe... Aur jo mera nuksaan hua hai woh tumhari salary se kaat lunga jao dafa ho jao yaha se abhi isi waqt mai tumhe nokri se nikalta hun...


Yashoda use kuch kehna chahti thi magar doctor uski nahi sunta... Woh pairon mai girkar doctor ko hospital na nikalane ke liye mana rahi hoti hai magar doctor ek nahi sunta aur pair jhatk deta hai jisse sir paas table se lagta hai.... Jisse uski pakad chooth jati hai uske pairon se... Aur doctor wanha se chala jata hai...


Peeche Yashoda roti rehti hai magar uski sunne waala koi nahi tha... Usse reh rehkar yaad aata hai uske maa papa ne use nurse banane ke liye kitni mehnat ki thi... Yaha tak uski padhai ke liye unke paas ek matr jo zameen ghar ki aur kuch gehne the woh bhi girwi rakh diye the.. yeh sochkar ki unki beti padh likh kar unki gareebi ko door karegi... magar aaj use yaha se nikaal diya gaya yeh baat kaise kaise woh apne maa papa ko bataegi....


Abhi woh Soch me gum hi thi ki Tabhi use baache ki rone ki awaaz sunayi deti hai.... jisse uska dhyaan Tut jata hai aur Nazar utha kar jab woh use dekhti hai toh use lady ki yaad bhi aati hai... Usse baache ki fikar bhi hoti hai ki ab iska kya hoga doctor shayad ise bhi... Nhi nhi... Yeh sochkar hi uske rongte khade ho jate hai... Aur woh aage badh baache ko apni goad mai utha leti hai...

Baacha bhi uski goad mai aa Rona kam kar deta hai magar hath pair abhi bhi maar raha tha jise dekh rote hue bhi uske chehre par ek muskurahat aa jati hai uske masoom Surat par woh ek kiss kar deti hai... Aur natakhat Nandkishor kehti hai jo uski maa pet mai jab tha usse baatain karte waqt keh rahi thi... jisse sun ladka bhi kilkaari leta hua hass deta hai aur yashoda ki ungli pakad leta hai... Jisse woh chudane ki koshish krti hai magar ladka nahi chodta... Ab uske chehre par muskaan aur gehri ho jaati hai... Woh ek tak use dekhti rehti hai tabhi woh Uth khadi hoti hai aur bacche ko saath le ghar ki taraf nikal padti hai...


To be continued...


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...Kamlaaaa.. ooo... Kamlaaa.... Dekh toh teri ladli ne kya gul khilaya hai... ek adedh umer ki aurat gate khat khtate hue Keh rahi hai jiske peeche peeche moholle ki kuch aurtain bhi jama ho chuki hain... Jo ghar ka kaam chod kar tamasha dekhne ke liye jama ho chuki thi... Aur aapas mai khusur pusur ki baatein bhi chal rahi thi...



Tabhi kamla gate kholti hai... kya hua Padma kyun chilla rahi hai... ( tabhi woh saamne khadi aurton ki itni saari bheed ko dekh chonk jaati hai... ) Tum sab yaha kyun jama hue ho kya hua...


( Tabhi uski nazar bheedh mai khadi apni beti par padti hai jise dekh use bhi jor ka dhakka lagta hai use samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kya chal raha hai... )



Kamla... Yashu.. yeh sab kya hai... Yeh baacha tumhare hath mai kiska hai aur yeh itni bheedh kyun ikkatha kar rahi hai...




Yashoda apni maa ko safayi de hi Rahi thi ki Tabhi Padma beech mai hi uski baat kaat deti hai...



Padma... Are usse kya puch rahi hai mujhse puch karmjali pta nahi kaha se muh kala karwa kar aayi hai... Chii tumhari ladki aisa kaam karti hai mujhe pata nahi tha maine toh ise sati Savitri samjh rakha tha... aacha hua Aaj hi mujhe iske baare mai pta chal gaya warna mere bete ki zindagi mai khud barbaad kar deti...



Kamla... ( hosh hi udh gaye the yeh sunkar ) Yeh sab kya keh rahi hai Padma aisa kuch nahi hai... Mai janti hun meri beti ko woh aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti... Hum ander chal kar baat karte hai iss baare mai... Aise sabke saamne tamasha toh na banao.....



Padma... Aahhh haa toh main jhooth bol rahi hun.... Aur yeh teri beti pta nahi kiska paap liye ghar aayi hai kuch jawab hai tumhare paas iss baat ka... Kiska baacha hai iski goad mai bata... Aur kya gharme kya baat karni hai.. yahi bol jawaab de hai tere paas jawaab kiska baccha hai yeh aakhir baaki sabko bhi toh pata chale teri beti kitni badi ran*..



Kamala aur kuch sun na saki aur ghar ke ander chali gayi... Abhi aage Padma kuch kehti usse pehle ek tezz awaaz goonjhti hai..

Basss bhut ho gaya tum sab ka kab se bole jaa rahe ho tum log... Ek baar meri beti se toh puch lo ki sacchai kya hai... Bina poori baat sune baat ka batangadh banaye jaa rahi ho... Mujhe poora bhorsha hai meri beti aisa koi kaam nahi kar sakti jaisa tum keh rahi ho... Agar tumhari baat sahi sabit hui toh main tumhare pairon mai girkar maafi maangunga aur nahi toh tumhe meri beti se sabke saamne maafi maangni hogi... ( Yeh awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki yashoda ke pita Tej Singh ki hai )

Yashoda jo itni der se sab kuch sun rahi thi sehh nahi paati aur apne pita ke gale lag fut fut kar rone lagti hai... TejSingh bhi apni beti ko dulaar kar shant krne ki koshish kar raha tha...

Yashoda bhi apne pita ke seene se lag kuch had tak himmat bator leti hai... Aage poori kahani sabke saamne suna deti hai... Jise sun kar sabke muhh khule ke khule reh jate hai.. kisi se kuch bolte nahi ban raha tha... Sab jaha yashoda ko pehle galat nazron se dekh rahe wanhi ab hairan the jo usne kal raat se le kar ab tak kiya hai... Padma ke toh muhh par tamacha pada aisa haal ho gya tha... Usne kitna kuch nahi keh diya tha yashoda ko... uske charitr ke baare mai ab woh kis muh se maafi maange yehi soch rahi tabhi woh dekhti hai sabka dhyan yashoda par hai... Jo abhi bhi bacche ko hath me liye apne pita keseene se lag roye jaa rahi aur sabka dhyan bhi un dono ki taraf dekh woh chupke se ghar se nikal jati hai bina kisi ki nazron mai aaye...


Kuch der baad TejSingh jab Padma ko wanha nahi dekhta toh baaki sab bheed ko. Bhi bhaga deta hai... Tamasha laga rakha hai kya yaha jao sab apna apna kaam karo majak bana rakha hai sabne meri masoom bacchi ka jao sab... ( Yeh sabd sunte hi sab aise bhaage apne ghar ko jaise snaap dekh liya ho kuch hi der mai poora angan Khali ho jata hai aur TejSingh apni beti ko le ander chal padta hai.. )

Ander ghar mai ek chota sa kamra tha jisse lag kar charpai thi ek pankha latka hua jo ghoom raha hai... Ek choti si kitchen aur bathroom aur chota sa aangan yeh hai yashoda ka ghar jisme woh apne maa papa ke saath rehti hai... Dekhne se lag raha hai Jane kab se colour tak nahi hua ghar mai paint ki papdi har taraf se utar chuki hai... aur chath par seelen bhi dekh sakte hai jo raat mai shayad paani se pad gayi ho...


Kher TejSingh apni beti yashoda ko charpayi par bithata hai... Jo abhi tak aasun Baha rahi uski aankhein saaf darsha rahi aakhir uski kya galti thi jo yeh sab uske saath hua... Woh bas iss masoom ko bachana chaah rahi thi magar samaj ki yeh halat dekh use Rona aa raha tha... Jo Padma uske maa saman thi woh aaj usper itna bada iljaam sabke saamne daal di thi... Kyun kisliye sirf samaaj mai apna naam bada karne ke liye... Unhone ek baar mere baare mai nahi socha mai toh unki beti thi na... Yehi soch uske man mai rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi...

Jaise taise woh khud ko shant karti hai apne pita ko tab se usko sambhal rahe the unko ek baar fir bahon Mai bhar chup ho jati hai... TejSingh bhi apni beti ko pyaar de rahethe woh samjh rahe the beti kya shithi se gujar rahi hogi... Woh bhi samaaj mai rehte hai har dusre din aise batain unhe sunne ko milti hai... Kisi ki ladki bhaag gayi kisi ki bahu ka dusre ke saath sambhadh yeh toh roz ki kahani thi iss samaaj ki jo aaj use apne ghar tak phunch gayi thi magar use apni beti par poora yakeen hi in sabme himmat de raha tha jisse usne datkar saamna kar samaaj ke muh par rakh kar tamacha diya hai... Jo shayad abhi ke liye kaafi tha sab kuch shant rakhne ke liye...


Kher kuch der mai Yashoda shant ho jati hai lekin shayad uski kismat mai aaj Rona likha hua tha.... TejSingh apni beti ko chup Kara apni dharampatni Kamla ko awaaz deta jo kaafi der se use dikh nahi Rahi thi jab se drama shuru hua usne kamla ko dekha nahi tha... Woh idher udher Kamla ko na Parker kitchen mai jaaker dekhta hai toh dhaak se neeche gir padta hai... Jane kitni hi takleefo mai TejSingh himaat se datkar lada tha kabhi uski aakhon ne uska saath nahi choda tha magar aaj uski aankhein bhi uska saath chod deti hai woh phut phut kar rone jagta hai...



Apne pita ki awaaz sun Yashoda bhi baache ko khaat par chod kar kitchen mai jaaker dekhti hai toh uska bhi haal apne pita se bura ho jata hai... Uski maa kitchen ke fash par giri hui hai jiske muh se jhaag nikal raha hai... Jo pata nahi kab se jhagda ke beech mein yaha punch kar yeh kadam utha li thi... Dono baap beti ek baar fir bahon mein rone lagte hai... Unki pukaar khokle samaaj tak nahi jaa rahi thi... Jo kuch der pehle uske ghar mai mojoud tha... Yashoda kuch der baad age badh maa ko check karti hai magar uski maa duniya chod jaa chuki thi...



Shayad Kamla samaaj ke samne beti ka iss tarah dutkaar dena Seh nahi paayi... Gereeb ghar mai ek ijjat hi hoti hai jiske sahare woh ab tak khadi hui thi... Paristhiti kaise bhi thi apni beti aur pati ke saath usne har cheez ka datkar saamna kiya... Magar shayad uska wishwas kamjor pad gaya ya yeh keh sakte hai ki jo samaaj uske saamne nahi peeth peeche auron par baat karta... wohi aaj usse uska saamna hua toh woh jhel nahi paayi... Kaise apni jaan se pyaari beti ko sablog gher kar doshi thera rahe the... Kaise ek maa apni baachi jise nazo se paala usne kaise yeh dard seh paati... Samaaj ke jhoothe iljaam ne usse uski saanse tak cheen li... Aur usko woh kadam uthane par majboor kar diya...



Time 2:39...



TejSingh apne kuch Doston ka sahara lekar apni patni jise woh behad pyaar karta uski Chita ke saamne khada hua hai... Uske hath mai jal rahi lakdi use kaise woh apni patni ko aag ke hawale kar de.. jise kabhi chot tak na phunchayi ho usne... Aaj usi kamla ki Chita ko aag dene ke samay uske haath kaamp rahe hai.. reh reh kar use kamla ki baatain yaad aa rahi ki... Jo kabhi majaak mai usse kha karti thi ki woh suhagan marna chahti thi... TejSingh ek nazar Kamla ke chehre par daalta hai use kamla ki maang mai sindoor haath mai chudi payal dekh khud ko rok nahi pata aur lakdi Chita par daal kar rone lagta hai... Jise uska dost sahara deta hai...



Kaafi samay tak sab khade kamla ki Chita ko jalte hue dekhte rehta hai... Fir ek ek kar sab TejSingh ko santavana ke aakhiri sabd keh apne apne ghar nikal jate hai... Magar ek shaks abhi wohi ruka hua tha woh usse kuch kehna chahta magar shayad yeh jagah sahi na lagi use... Ya sabke saamne kehne se Katra raha tha... Woh TejSingh ko sahara de kar khada karta hai..aur saath lekar ghar ki aur chal deta hai...



Ghar par auraton ka jumawada ek baar fir laga hua tha.. magar iss baar sabki aankhon Mai jhoothi sahanubhuti thi... Jo TejSingh samjh chuka aur kuch na kehte hua ghar ke ander phunch jata hai..wanha uski beti abhi tak roye jaa rahi thi... Kya hua uske saath ek hi din Mai sab kuch ujad gya... Har koi usse sambhalne ki koshish kar rahe the magar uska dukh koi nahi samjh sakta jispe bitti hai wohi jaanta hai...



Kher Kaafi samay tak jamawaada bana raha fir sab ek ek kar apne apne ghar ko chal diye... ab wanha sirf TejSingh aur uski beti reh gayi thi woh ek nazar apne beti ko dekhta aur dewaar se peeth tika kar baith jata uski beti bhi kuch shaant si ho gayi thi... Aankh se aansun sookh gye the woh khaat par baithi kal raat se abhi tak hui ghatanao ke baare mai soch rahi thi...


Kaafi samay tak kamre mai sannata pasra hua tha tabhi... Baccha ki rone ki awaaz se baap beti dono ka dhyan Tut jata hai... Yashoda jo soch mai gum thi bahar nikal kar baache ko ek Nazar dekhti hai toh use yaad aata hai subh se usne kuch bhi nahi khaya hai jabki paida hota hi sabse pehle use maa ka doodh ki zaroorat hoti hai... Yashoda use utha kar check karti hai toh uska badan bhi garam ho raha hota hai... Woh bhaag kar baache ko le kitchen mai jaati hai aur uske liye doodh garam karti hai... Jo woh saath mai layi thi magar itna sab ho gaya jisse uska dhyaan hi nahi gaya...



Garam doodh karne baad use paani mai daal thada kar rahi ho hai.. tabhi use yaad aata hai woh kaha par hai jiss jagah thodi der pehle uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi... Yeh yaad aate hi uski aankhein bheeg jaati hai jisse tapak kar kuch boond doodh mai bhi gir rahi hoti hai magar uska dhyaan kahi aur hi tha... Tabhi baacha ek baar fir kilkaari maar rota hai jisse uska dhyaan tutta hai aur woh apne aansun ponch ek nazar use dekhti hai wahi baith katori aur chammach ki madat se use doodh pilati h...



Baacha bhi chup chaap dhoodh peene lagta lgta subh se bhookha hone ke karan woh doodh Peeta rehta hai kab woh so jata hai pta nahi rehta... Yashoda bhi jab dekhti hai baacha so Gaya hai toh use le wapas kamre mai dakhil hoti hai jaha uske pita use dekh rahe the.. jaise puchna chaah rahe the kya hua...


Yashoda kuch na keh bacche ko khaat par litane ko hoti hai ki tabhi uska dhyaan apne hath ki ungli par jata hai jise baache ne kass kar padke hue tha... Jise dekh Yashoda ke chehre par ek baar fir muskaan tair jaati hai woh ungli chudane ki koshish krti hai magar baacha use chodne ko raazi nahi hota... Woh ek tak use niharti hai fir ek kiss use maathe par kar ' natkhat nand kishore ' kehti hai... Jise bolte waqt uske chehre par muskaan thi...



TejSingh kaafi samay se dono ko dekh raha tha usko apni beti ko dekh thoda khush hua magar aage aane waale samay bhi uski chinta badhaye jaa raha tha... Ab uske paas na ghar hai na naukri na gehene sab kuch usne apni beti ko nurse banne ke liye daav par laga diya tha... Yaha tak ki apni patni ki antim kriya ke liye bhi usne paise apne dost se udhar liye the jo woh kaise dega soch raha tha... Qyuki usse yeh baat pata hai udhaar dene wala lene waale ke saath kaisa salook karta yeh sab usne mai samaaj rehkar dekha hai... Abhi woh sab chup hai qyuki woh khud bure nahi Banna chahte lekin aaj nahi toh kal woh firse yaha aayenge jaroor...


Yahi sab baatain soch hi Raha tha saath uski nazar beti par tiki hui thi... Jise thodi der pehle dekh lag raha tha iske shareer mai Jaan nahi hai... Abhi ek pyaari si muskan tair rahi hai.....



Aise hi baithe kaafi samay beet jata hai baacha jo so raha tha use fir se bhookh lag uthtati hai woh rone lagta hai.. jisse Yashoda ki aankh bhi khul jati hai jo uske sir par hath fer baithe baithe hi so gayi thi... Yashoda dekhti hai baacha fir se rone laga hai toh laad pyaar use chup karne ki koshish karti hai... Magar bacha jab chup nahi hota toh doad kar kitchen mai jaakr dekhti hai toh doodh khtam ho chuka tha... Woh turant wapas kamre mai aake apni chunni doodnti hai use daal chappal pehen bahar jaane ko hoti hai ya hi uske pita use aawaj dete hai...


TejSingh... Tum rehne do beti doodh mai le aata hun...



Shayad woh bina kahe samjh gaye the beti kya karne jaa rahi hai... Abhi mamla garam hi tha isliye woh apni beti ko ghar se bahar nahi jaane dena chahte the... Qki bhookhe bhediye aise hi moke ki talash mai rehte hai... Unhe fark nahi padta samne waala kya mehsoos kar raha hai... Bas akele paakar raat ke andhere mai apni hawas kisi na kisi se mita kar unhe chod dete hai... Fir dusre din dusre shikaar ki talaash mai baith jaate hai... Pta nahi kitni zindagi inlogo ne barbaad kar chuke honge... Magar koi inke khilaaf kuch nahi kar sakta ameeron ko kaha fark padta hai police tak khareed lete hai...


Kher itna keh TejSingh dukaan ki taraf chal deta hai.. aur doodh ka packet le ghar ko chal deta hai... Ghar mai ghuste samay ek baar woh apne ghar ko bahar se dekh kuch soch raha hota hai... Shayad yeh ghar bhi ab uska saath chod dega jald hi apne aapne waale zindagi ke baare mai soch raha tha tabhi use Yashoda ki awaaz sunayi deti hai jo kab se apne pita ka intezar kar rahi thi... Jab bahar nikal usne pita ko gate par khade sochte dekh toh usne hosh mai lane ke liye une jhakjhor diya... TejSingh bhi soch se bahar nikal jald hi ghar ke ander chal deta hai.. doodh ka packet bina kuch kahe Yashoda ko pakada deta hai... Jise Yashoda bhi bina kuch soche jaldi se lekar kitchen ki taraf bhaagti hai...



Yashoda ek baar fir doodh garam kar use thanda karke bacche ko pilane lagti hai.. thodi der jab baacha so jata hai toh use le kamre mai khaat par lita deti hai aur uske baaju mai khud let use niharti rehti hai... Ek haath sir par ferte kab uski neend lag jaati pata nahi chalta... Raat bhi bhut ho chuki poora din jo kuch bhi hua sab uske dimag mai chal raha tha... Wahi TejSingh bhi paas mai padi kursi par baith apni beti ko dekh raha tha... Fir aane waale kal kebaare mai ek baar fir sochte sochte kab uski neend laggayi pta hi nahi chala...


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Morning... 7:34AM...



Thhhkkk thkkk thkkkk... TejSingh... TejSingh... Ander ho yaa bhaag gye... Darwaza kholo mai kehta hoon... Thkkkk thkkkk... TejSingh.



TejSingh jo kursi par baithe baithe hi so gya tha uska dhyaan darwaje par jata toh uth kar use khol deta hai... Khat khat se Yashoda ki neend bhi khul gayi thi... Woh bhi uth kar baith jaati hai tabhi kamre mai do log ander aate hai... Jimse se ek ko woh pehchanti thi... Yeh wohi ladka tha jo aaye din usse chedta rehta tha... Uske sath uska baap tha shayad... Jisse woh pehchanne ki koshish karti hai.. tabhi ek kadak awaaz use sunayi deti hai jo woh shakhs kehta hai...



Aadmi... TejSingh... Mujhe dukh hai jo kuch bhi kal hua uske baare mai sunkar magar uska mai kuch nahi kar sakta... Mai jaha yeh jaane aaya hoon ki mere paise ka kya hua... Jise tumne 2 maheene pehle dene ka wada kiya ab jo kal hua usme meri toh koi galti nahi hai na... Tum keh rahe the meri beti naukri kar Paisa chuka degi ab use bhi wanha se nikaal diya gaya hai... Ab Mera Paisa kon dega yeh batao... kal ko agar tum bhaag Gaye toh mere paise toh latke reh jayenge na batao kon dega Mera Paisa tum yaa tumhari beti....



TejSingh... ( Jo kaafi der tak sab baatain sun raha tha use pta tha yeh sab hoga lekin itni jaldi hoga usne yeh ummeed nahi ki thi... Kal hi toh patni ki Chita ko aag ke hawale kiya hai usne... Aaj apne saamne khade shaks ko dekh woh kya bole kuch samajh nahi aa raha yeh wahi dost tha uska jo saath dene ka dawa karta tha aaj muskill time mai yeh bhi uske saath bartaav dekh uski aankhein jawaab de gayi... ) Shersing mujhe thoda samay aur dedo... tum jante hi ho kal kya hua tha mujhe thoda samay dedo.. mai dost hun tumhara tum mujhe bachpan se jaante hai mai tumhari paayi paayi chuka dunga...



Shersing... Dost mera hai paise ka toh nahi na... Woh kisi ka dost nahi hota na... Kal ko tu na de paya aur tune bhi kuch kar liya toh apna paisa kisse manunga yeh bata... teri beti se jo ab naukri bhi nahi karti toh Mera Paisa kon dega... Hai kuch jawab tumhare paas...



TejSingh... ( Gidgidate hue ) Nahi nahi.. tum mujhpar bharosa rakho mai kahi nahi jaunga mai jubaan deta hun mujhe 1 maheene ki mohlat dedo mai tumhara saara karza chuka dunga...


Shersing... Mere maathe par chutiya likha hai kya.. yaa mujhe banane chale itne dino se paisa nahi chuka paye toh ek mahine mai kaha se doge batao mujhe... Hai koi jawaab tumhare pass... Mai yaha apna paisa lene aaya hun aur Paisa leke jaunga warna tum aache se jaante ho mujhe mai kya karsakta hun...



Yeh kehte waqt ek kameeni muskaan uske chehre par utar aate hai jise TejSingh samjh jata hai... Woh uske bete ko dekhta jo hawas ki najron se uski beti ko dekh raha hota hai... Woh samjh jata hai baap bete Jaan kar yaha jhagda karne aaye hai jiska woh fayda utha sake.. abhi woh kuch bolta uske pehle woh dekhta hai shersing ka beta uske kaan mai kuch kehta jise sun..ek kameeni muskaan se ek nazar woh Yashoda ko dekhta hai neeche nazron kiye aakh se aasun Baha rahi thi...



Shersing... Theek hai mai tujhe ek mahine ka time aur deta hun agar paise ka intzaam nahi hua toh yaad rakhna agli baar yaha se khali haath nahi jaunga.. ( ek nazar yashoda par daal dono baap bete nikal jaate hai... Aane wale kal ki planning karne unko pta tha TejSingh kabhi ek mahine mai unka Paisa nahi de sakta fir woh jo karenge uske baare mai soch dono khushi se ek tahaaka maar dete hai aur apne ghar ki taraf nikal padte hai... )
TejSingh bhi unki baatain unke haav bhaav se samjh chuka tha ki woh aage kya karne waale hai.... Usne apni zindagi jee li thi use apni beti ki fikar hoti hai woh kaise bachayega apni beti ko un haiwaano se.... Qyuki aaj nahi toh kal woh yaha fir se aayenge... Aur ek mahine mai itni badi rakam ka intjaam karna bhi muskill hai... Ek nazar woh apni beti ko dekhta hai... Abhi tak nazrein zameen par gadaye hue thi.. dar se hath kaamp rahe the uske... Usko bhi andaja tha ki woh log kya karne ka keh gaye hai...



Aane wale pal ka soch uski ruhhh tak kaamp chuki thi... Usko apna kal dikh raha tha kya hoga uske saath woh abhi se dekh paa rahi thi... Tabhi ek haath uske kapte hathon par use mehsus hota hai... Woh nazar utha kar dekhti hai toh uske pita use sab theek hone ka aasvasan de rahe the... Woh dikha rahe the main tumhare saath hoon tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... Jisse Yashoda bhi thodi bhut sambhal gayi thi... Uske pita uske saath hai yeh dekha usme thodi himmat aayi magar ek mahine mai itna paisa dena sambhav nahi yeh khyaal bhi uske dimag Mai ghoom raha tha...


Aage aane pal ne ek baar fir use soch mai gum kar diya tabhi.. baacha ek baar fir roone laga jisse Yashoda ka dhyaan bhi uspar jata hai woh aage badh use goad me utha leti hai ek nazar apne pita ko dekhti hai... Jise dekh TejSingh samjh jaata hai aur ghar se bahar nikal chal deta hai...
Poore Raaste Tej Singh ka dimaag chalta rehta hai... Kal hi beti ka rista tuta hai aur shayad woh log bhi uski madat na kare na shaadi ke liye maane... Usko bas apni beti ko kaise bhi kar surakshit karna tha ... Jo iss sheher mai rehkar toh hona sambhav hi nahi tha... Ek khyaal uske man mai yeh bhi aa raha tha ki use khud se door karke sahi kar raha hai ki nahi.... Kya uski beti Jo abhi ** saal ki hai bhale hi badi hai magar bin maa baap ke kaise surakshit reh sakti hai... pita se saaye se jayada kya surakshit ho sakta hai bacchon ke liye... Magar wo haalat ko bhi andekha nahi kar sakta tha abhi ke haalat mai uska saath rehne se jayada door rehna behtar lag raha tha...



Tabhi dukaan aa jati hai aur woh doodh ka packet le ghar ki taraf chal deta hai... Wohi lautate waqt woh doodh ke packet ko dekh sochta hai... Ab akeli toh nahi hai beti meri ek zimmedari bhi aa gayi hai uske upar... Yehi uske akele mai uska saath degi... Aur jeene ki wajah bhi.... Soch kar uske chehre par muskaan aa jati hai aur woh ghar mai kadam rakh deta hai... Beti toh uski gate par hi moujood thi ki kab uske pita aaye kab woh unse paket le doodh garam kare baacha bhookha hai subh se... Woh yeh bhool gayi thi ki usne aur uske pita ne bhi kal se kuch nahi khaya tha... Magar use khud ki bhookh na dikh baache ke liye vyakul hote dekh TejSingh ki aankhe bhi nam ho gayi... Fir man hi man TejSingh kuch faisla karta hai...



Apne pita ko soch mai gum dekh Yashoda kuch nahi kehti bas hath se doodh ka Packet le kitchen mai chali jaati hai... TejSingh bhi Yashoda ko jaata dekh kuch sochte hue ghar se bahar nikal jata hai...
Late night... 11:27 PM...
Location... Bus Service Station...



TejSingh.... Kamalnath.. bhut ehsaan hai tera mujhpar Pata nahi iss janam mai main tera karz chuka paunga yaa nahi... Bas iss zanam mere upper ek aakhri upkar aur karde... Meri beti ko sahi salamat yaha se door le jaa warna woh bhediye meri beti ko noch dalenge... Main jaanta hun un kameeno ko aache se aaj nahi toh kal woh meri gair mojudgi mai Agar mere ghar aa gye toh mai kaise apni baachi ki raksha kar paunga... Pasion se woh kuch bhi kar sakte hai main unka saamna nahi kar paunga... Meri aakhiri umeed lekar mai tumhare paas aaya hun... Yeh madat karde mere bhai mai tera zindagi bhar ehsaan mand rahunga...


Yashoda jo kaafi der se apne pita ki baat sun Rahi thi... Hairaan thi ki akhir yeh sab ho kya raha hai... Woh raat mai baache ko doodh pila so rahi thi tabhi uske pita usko yaha le aaye... Woh pita se puchti rahi ki hum kaha Jaa rahe hai itni raat ko pitaji.. magar TejSingh ne use kuch na bataya aur yashoda ka kuch samaan ek puraane se bakse mai rakh ghar se nikal yaha uske chachere bhai kamalnath ke paas aa phuncha.... Jaha yashoda hairan sab kuch samjhne ki koshish kar rahi thi wohi TejSingh Kamalnath ko sabkuch bta deta hai jo kuch woh kal aur aaj hua...



Asal me Kamalnath bus service mai kaam krta tha aur apni patni ke saath dusre sheher mai rehta hai... Kabhi kabhi jab sheher ka chakkar lgta tha toh yaha apne bhai se milne aa jaya karta tha... Kamalnath ne apne bhai TejSingh ki kayi baar paiso se madat bhi ki thi... Waise toh woh bhi middle class family se hai do baache uske dono beti Yashoda ke Umr ke lagbhag hi hongi... paison ki jarurat use bhi rehti thi magar uska gujar basar chal jata tha... Bus se aachi khaasi kamayi ho jaati thi uski... jo ghar chalane ke liye paryapt thi...



Yashoda apne pitaji ko dekhti toh kabhi apne chacha ko... Woh soch hi Rahi thi abhi kuch bolne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi usme...



Wahi Kamalnath TejSingh ki baatain sun jaha hairan hua bhabhi ka sun use dukh bhi hua ki itna sab kuch ho gya.. woh aaj iss sheher mai bhut samay baad aaya tha... Uski biwi ko uska yaha aana aur TejSingh se milna pasand nahi tha... Karan yehi tha ka kahi na kahi use lagta tha TejSingh uske pati ka fayda utha raha hai.. Meethe meethe baaton Mai fasa use loot leta hai... woh bhi gareeb ghar se aayi thi shaadi ke bhut din usne aise bhi dekhe jab ghar mai khane ko kuch nahi tha... Magar uska pati uske saath khada raha aur apni mehnat se aaj uske sir par chath aur aachi naukri hai... Aise mai woh nahi chahti thi ki TejSingh ki wajah se use fir se woh din dekhne pade... TejSingh uski nazar mai berojgar kisi kaam ka nahi tha... Na uske saath rista rakhne ke liye uske paas paise the...



Ji haan is kalyug mai riste bhi paise dekh kar rakhe jaate hai... Jitna jayada paise waale utne Jayda cahhne waale uske...


Kher Kamalnath abhi soch hi Raha tha ki kaise woh apni Yashoda ko ghar leke jayega... Aur jab uski biwi ko pta chalega toh woh kya bakheda karegi woh yahi soch raha tha... Pichli baar bhi jab woh TejSingh se mila tha aur uski kuch madat ki thi paise de kar... Yeh baat uski biwi ko pta chal gayi uss din dono mai kaafi kaha suni Hui thi.. kafi din tak biwi ne usse baat bhi nahi ki thi... Ab firse woh yeh sab nahi chahta tha apne ghar mai... Magar halaat ko madde Nazar rakhte hue use TejSingh se Na karna bhi sahi nahi laga...



Kamalnath... Kya Yashodha sirf teri beti hai meri kuch nahi lagti kya... Chinta Mat kar mere do nahi teen beti hai... Tu bas apna khayal rakhna.. iska mujhspar chod de...

Thodi himmat jama kar kamalnath itna hi bol pata hai jise sun TejSingh jo chinta bhare nazron se kamalnath ke bolne ka intzaar thodi Rahat hoti hai... Wahi isse palat Yashoda ki haalat ek baar fir kharab ho gayi apne pita ko akela chod kar jana use pasand nhi aa raha tha... jab use pta tha uske jaane ke baad yaha kya hona hai...



Yashoda... ( Aankh seaansun bahate hue apne pita ki kalayi pakad leti hai himmat krke ) Nahi pita ji mai aapko chodd kar kahi nahi jaungi... Agar Jana hi hai toh aap bhi humare saath chalo warna mai kahi nahi jaungi...



TejSingh... ( Apni beti ka pyaar dekh aakhen nam ho jaati hai beti ke sir par ek haath ferte hue kehta hai ) beti tujhe yaha ke halat pata hi hai kaise hai agar mai bhi tere saath chal dunga toh sabko pata chal jayega hum kaha gaye hai... Paison ki madat se woh hume dhoondh nikalenge.. fir mai chah kar bhi tumhari madat nahi kar paunga... Mera yakeen maan beti mai jo kar raha hun hum teeno ki bhalayi ke liye kar raha hoon.. ( ek ishara baache ki taraf kar deta jisse woh apni family ka sadasya maan liya tha.. ) aur jaise hi halat theek honge mai waha tumhe lene wapas aa jaunga bas kuch din intjaar kar lo Mai wada karta hun tumse jald hi mai waha tumhe lene aa jaunga...



Yashoda... ( Ki chinta abhi bhi khtam nahi hui thi ) lekin pita ji yaha woh.....


TejSingh... ( Hath ko majboot pakad bana kar ) Bharosa rakh sab theek ho jayega... Tu chinta mat kar mai bhi yaha se jaldi door chala jaunga... Waada kiya hai na jald hi tujhse milne aaunga....



Yashoda abhi kuch aur kehti ki bus driver Kamalnath ko awaaz de chalne ko bolta hai... TejSingh bhi apni beti ke kandhe ko pakad bus ki taraf chal padta hai... Aur apni beti ko bus Mai baitha pyaar se uske sir par hath fir jhuk kar maathe par ek kiss karta hai aur baache par bhi ek kiss kar deta hai... Baacha neend mai uski ungli jor se pakad leta hai.. jaise use jane se rok raha ho.. jise dekh TejSingh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat aa jati hai... Aur woh apna haath baache se chuda bus se neeche utar jata hai...


Yashoda apne pitaji ko khidki se dekh rahi thi... uske pita ne wada kiya tha woh jald hi usekene aayenge.. par pta nhi Uska man vyakul ho raha woh uthkar bahar aane ko hoti hai ki bus chal deti hai... Yashoda ek baar fir aasun bahate hue pitaji ko dekhti hai pukarti hai magar bus jaate hi TejSingh palat jata hai shayad apne aansun chipa raha ho...



TejSingh... Mujhe maaf kar dena beti shayad humhara saath yahi tak likha tha... Shayad mai aacha pita aacha pati na ban saka... Magar pyaar kabhi kam nahi hua tumhare liye... Yaad hai mujhe jab tumhe pehli baar goad mai uthya tha aur woh pal bhi jab pehli baar tumhare muh se maa ki jagah papa nikal tha... ( Aankhon se aasun bhahate hue wahi paas ki dewaar se sir tika baith jata hai ) mai tumhe kuch nahi de saka beti meri itni haisiyat hi nahi ki mai tujhe kuch de sakun.. bass pyaar mai koi kami nahi hone di.. jo kuch tha sab daav par laga tujhe doctor banana chahta tha... Magar dene ko ghuus nahi thi toh nurse hi sahi.... Mujhe maaf kar dena maine tujhse jhooth bola ab shayad hi tu apne baap ko kabhi dekh sake... Agr mai aisa nahi karta toh woh bhookhe bhediye tum tak phunch jaate aur mai apni phool si beti ke saath aisa kaise hone de sakta hun... Mujhe maaf kar dena...



Kaafi der baithe rehne ke baad uthkar chal deta hai apne ghar ki taraf... Jo poora Khali pada tha kamre mai ander jaa woh gate ko band kar leta hai...




Next Day Morning... 6:35 AM
Location... ****** Kamalnath house...


Kamalnath apni biwi Manju ke saamne baitha tha paas mai hi Yashodha khadi dono ko dekh rahi thi... Manju subh apne pati ko wapas aaya dekh khush hoti hai aur ander bula chai banane ko chali jati hai bina peeche mude... Kamalnath bhi Yashodha ke saath ghar mai ande chal deta hai... Tabhi Manju bhi kitchen se chai lekar aa jati hai.... Aur apne pati ko ek ladki ke saath aaya dekh hairaan hoti hai.. saath mai pareshan bhi qki ladki ke hath mai baccha tha... Use dekh pta nahi kitne khyaal aa rahe the uske man jise woh rok nahi paa rahi thi aur chalti hui apne pati ke saamne baith jati hai...



Manju... Mujhe btaoge yeh kon hai... Aur yaha kyun hai...



Kamalnath ko samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya bole... Qki use pta tha abhi kya hone wala hai... Tabhi woh Manju ko kamre mai chalne ka ishara karta hai... Jise dekh Manju kuch soch uthkar apne kamre mai chali jati hai... Yashoda ek nazar dono ko dekh rahi thi... Kamalnath bhi uske peeche phunch gate band karta hai... Aur use shuru se laker ab tak jo kuch bhi hua sab bta deta hai... Jaise hi Manju yeh sunti hai ki Yeh TejSingh ki beti hai gusse mai aag babola ho jati hai... Aur bhar bhar kar TejSingh ko galiya dene lagti hai... jiski awaaz bahar baithi Yashoda ko bhi sunayi padti hai...



Manju... Are paal nahi sakte toh paida kyu kiya tha apni beti ko... Aur beti bhi aisi ki chi chi... Pta nahi kiska paap goad mai liye ghoom rahi hai... aur tum itne Mahan banne ki koi jarurat nahi hai... Yeh yha nahi rahegi abhi ke abhi ise bahar nikaal do warna tum jaante ho mai kya kar dungi pichli baar maaf kardiya uska natija yeh nahi ki aaj tum uski ladki ko ghar le aao... Are kam kam se kam yeh toh dekho uska charitr kaisa hai... Ab agar isne yaha bhi yeh sab kaam shuru kar diya jiski wajah se iske baap ne ise bhaga diya hai tou kya hoga jawaab hai tumhare paas tumhari bhi 2 betiya hai... Kal ko koi iska aashiq yaha tak phunch gya usne meri beti ko bhi iske jaise samjh kuch harkat karne ki koshish ki toh tum kya karoge jawaab do jab iska koi aashiq ki nazar meri beti par padi tou tum kaise apni beti ko bachaoge....



Kamalnath... Manju tum faltu mai baat ko badha Chadha kar bol rahi ho aisa kuch nahi woh baacha toh....



Manju... haan haan pta hai... Mai tumhe thoda bhut akalmand samjhthi thi but tum poore morkh ho TejSingh ne kaha aur tumne maan liya... aisa hi tha toh apni beti ke saath kyun nahi aaya kyun use akela chod diya shayad woh bhi apni beti ke gande kaam ke baare mai Jaan gya hoga...



Kamalnath... ( Gusse mai tez awaaz mai ) Manju.... kuch bolne se pehle soch liya karo kya keh rahi kiske baare mai keh rahi ho... Bhaiya ko mai aache se jaanta hoon aur yashoda bitiya ko bhi... Woh aisa kuch nahi ki hai sab man gadant kahani banaye jaa rahi hai tu...



Manju... Tumhare chillane se sacchai nahi badal jayegi woh ek raa** hai jo dhanda..... Aahhh..



Ek thappad ki goonj kamre mai sunayi padti hai...



Kamalnath.. chup ek dum chup kab se jo man mai aaya bole jaa rahi hai rukne ka naam nahi le rahi... yeh yahi rahegi kaan khol kar sun le...


Manju... ( Rote hue ) haan haan maaro mujhe.. mai pagal kutiya hun na Jo bhonke jaa rahi hoon... anpad hoon iska matlab yeh nahi mujhe kuch pta nahi kya chal raha samaaj mai.. kal ko baaki sab ko yeh baat pata chalegi... Toh kiss kiss kam muh band karoge aap, sab log gandi gandi baatain banayenge... aap kiss kiss ka muh band karenge, iske saath saath woh meri beti ke baare mai bhi ulta seedha bolenge... Mai ek maa ho kar kaise apni beti ke baare mai bura sun sakti hoon... Ek izzat hi hai humare paas aur yeh jo badi mehnat se kamaya hai... Kya hoga jab koi beti ke baare mai hume ganda bole bolo... Isse aacha ek kaam karo mujhe aur meri betiyon ko zeher de kar maar do fir bhale hi apni ek aur beti ke saath reh Lena... Mai apni betiyon ke baare mai samaaj se kuch nahi sun sakti...


Aur bilakh bilakh kar rone lagti hai... Kamalnath bhi maju ki baatain sun kar sunya ho jata hai... Wanhi bahar Yashoda dono ki baatain sun rahi thi....



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Location kamalnath house....




Kamalnath ko kamre mai kaafi samay ho gaya tha... Woh bhut der tak apni biwi se behes krne ke baad jab room mai baitha hua tha... Toh soch raha aakhir kya karna chahiye... Usne TejSingh ko wada bhi kiya tha aur yashoda ko aise chod bhi nahi sakta tha... Aise anjaan seher mai akeli Yashoda jaha woh kisi ko jaanti bhi nahi thi... TejSingh ko bharosa tha uska bhai yashoda ka khyaal rakhega magar kamalnath apne ghar mai jhagda bhi nahi chahta tha... Woh bhi jab uski do betiyan ghar mai hi Hain...



Kya kare soch uska sir dard Krna laga... ant mai usne Yashoda se baat kar iss samasya ka hal dhoondne ke liye jab room se nikal hall mai aaya toh dekhta hai Yashoda waha hai hi nahi na hi uska samaan...



Kamalnath chehre ka rang udd jata hai Yashoda ko waha na dekh kar... Use samjhte der nahi lagti ki usne jo baatain biwi k saath hui thi sun li thi... Dil tez tez dhadak raha tha yeh soch kar ki woh Tej Singh ko kya jawaab dega jisne yashoda ki jimmedari use di thi ek anjaan seher mai uspe bharosa kar bhej diya tha...



Bhale hi TejSingh ne apne fayde ke liye Yashoda ko khud se door kiya tha... Lekin fir bhi kamalnath ki zimmedari thi usko surakshit rakhna... Chahe kaise bhi halat ho.. kamalnath jaldi se ghar se bahar nikal road par idher udher yashoda ko dhoondne nikal padta hai lekin Yashoda kahi nahi dikh rahi thi...



Ghanta bhar beet gya tha yashoda ko dhoondte hue.. paseene se bheeg chuka tha kamalnath pair dard karne lage the usne moholle mai har aadmi har bacche har dukaan par pucha lekin Yashoda kahi nahi mili.. thak haar kar kaamfi time beetne ke baad jab uski himmat Tut gayi toh ek mandir ki ssedhiyon par baith gaya... Bhagwan se yashoda sahi salamat surakshit ho yahi kamna kar raha tha... Sath hi aage kya kare iss baare mai bhi soch raha tha...




Wohi iske opposite mandir ke dusre gate ki ssedhiyon par yashoda ek bag aur hath mai bacche ko liye apne aane waali zindagi ke baare mai soch rahi thi... Iss naye sheher mai ab woh kya kare... Jo kuch bhi usne apne chacha ke Ghar suna uska dil gawahi nahi de raha ki uski wajah se uske chacha jinke kitne ehsaan the uske pita par unko takleef phunche... Iss liye woh waha aur ruk na saki aur saman le bahar nikal gayi... Magar samasya abhi bhi wohi thi ki woh jaye kaha kare toh kya kare...

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Woh wapis apne seher bhi nahi jaa sakti thi qki usko ab tak samjh aa gaya tha ki unlog ko uske baare mai pata chal gaya hoga aur woh use waha dhoondh rahe honge... Aur iss naye sheher mai bhi woh kisi ko nahi jaanti thi aur wapas jaane ke liye bhi uske paas paise bhi nhi the... Thak haar kar woh bhi mandir ke bahar bas bhagwan se prathana kar rahi thi uski madat ki guhaar laga rahi thi...




Evening time... 7:45 pm...




Dheere dheere yeh din bhi dhal Gaya aur subh se raat ho gayi kamalnath bhi dukhi man se apne ghar ko wapas lout gaya... subh se bhookhe pet woh poore sheher mai Yashoda ko dhoond raha tha jab Suraj dalne laga toh woh bhi himmat Tut gayi aur apne ghar laut gaya... bas ek hi prathana kar raha tha ki Yashoda jaha kahi bhi ho theek ho... Ghar pahunchte hi uski biwi baache bhi pareshan the woh bina kuch bataye ghar se nikal gaya tha... Manju ko Yashoda ka pta tha magar uski beti uske yun jane se darr gayi thi...




Ghuste hi sawaal jawaab chalu ho gye sabke kamalnath shaant bas sabki baatain sun raha tha... Usko apni biwi Manju par bhut gussa aa raha tha aur apni betiyon par bhut pyaar bhi uski fikar karte dekh kar... Kaafi time laga sab kuch shant hua sab usth kar apne apne kamre mai chal diye... Kamalnath ki Biwi manju bhi uske peeche phunch gayi... Usko dekh kamalnath ko gussa aaya usne kheech kar ek chanta uske gaal mai diya... Jisse woh bed se gir padi...



Aankhon mai aansun bhar woh kamalnath ko dekh rahi thi jaise puchna chaah rahi thi q... Magar kamalnath ne uske q ka koi jawaab nahi diya aur chup chap bed ke dusre side let gaya... Woh nahi chahta tha ki koi baat kahe jisse uski betiyon par bhi uska galat asar pade... maa baap ke ghagde ka bacchon par bhi asar padta hai society mai reh kaafi dekh raha tha woh...



Bina kuch bole kamalnath bed par let gaya tha... Aankhon mai neend uske kahi nahi thi bas chinta thi Yashoda ki woh kaisi hogi raat ka samay hai woh bhi anjaan sheher... Manju bhi thappad padne ke baad samjh gayi thi ki yeh kyun hai... Woh kuch kehna chaah rahi thi magar kamalnath ka gussa dekh uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi... Magar woh abhi bhi khud ko galat nahi maan paa rahi thi usne jo kiya apni bacchiyon ke liye kiya... Woh kamalnath ko samjhana chahati thi magar yeh samay use theek nahi laga baat krne ke liye.. uth kar woh bed ke ek taraf let gayi neend uski bhi gayab ho gayi thi ek tak kamalnath ko dekh rahi thi jo sach mai gum tha...



Kamalnath ne bhi ek baar Manju ki taraf dekha aur bed ke baad mai light waala button daba kar lights off kar di... Poore kamre mai shanti chaa gayi... Dono mai se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha halaki dono jaag rahe the... Manju ko lag raha tha kamalnath abhi keval gussa hai thode time baad unko apni baat samjha kar mana legi... Yehi soch kar usne apne aansun ponch aankhen band kar li kuch der mai neend bhi aa gayi... Ab yeh upar waala hi janta tha kamalnath ki narazgi Manju se kab tak rahegi...




Location Temple... Time 9:38 pm...



Dusri taraf madiir mai... Subh se shaam aur shaam se raat hone chali thi. Yashoda wahi seedhiyon par baithi thi tek lagakar ki syad koi uski madat kar de.. subh se shaam tak pta nahi kitne hi logo ko usne madat ke liye kaha... Lekin har koi apni samasya ko dekh dusro ki madat nahi karta... Yehi kalyug ki sacchai hai...



Raat tak Kai logo ko madat se inkaar kar dene ke baad ab uski bachi khuchi himmat bhi jawaab de rahi thi.... Sabse jayada Rona use iss baat par aa raha tha subh se baacha bhookha hai Jo abhi 3 din ka hua hai... Dhoodh khreedne liye bhi uske pass paise nahi hai... baccha bhi subh se rote rote so gya tabiyat bhi theek nhi uski woh kya kare kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha... Kismat par rone ki sivay woh kar bhi kya sakti thi...




Mandir ke gate bhi band ho gye the saamne dhoondh ki dukaan bhi kuch hi pal mai band hone waali thi... Yashoda ek baar fir bachi khuchi himmat bator kar dukan ke paas jati hai aur usse apne bete ke liye thoda dhoondh maangti hai... Magar dukaan waala dhoondh dene se saaf inkaar kar deta hai... Yashoda uske haath jod leti hai... Magar woh Tass se mass na hua...



Aay din roz woh kisi na kisi ko dekhta rehta hai... Madat ke liye guhaar lagate hue kuch sach mai madat maanngte hai kuch madat ke naam par bhi apna Ghar chalate hai... Ek do ki madat woh kar bhi deta hai magar din bhar kisi ki madat karta raha toh ghar dukaan band krne padegi aisa uska sochna tha... Yashoda haar nahi maanti aur viniti karti hai... bhale hi usne baache ko janam nahi diya magar uske ander Mamta baache ke liye jaag gayi thi... Jisne use baache ko uska beta thehra diya tha...



Time bhi kaafi ho gaya tha dukaandar ko bhi dukaan band krni magar yashoda ko na hatte dekh woh bhi tang aa jata hai... Aur ek dhakka lga deta hai jisse yashoda dukaan se thoda bahar ko girti hai.. aur ek chota patthar jo paas mai hi pada tha uske sir mai jaa lagta hai... Dukaan waala palat kar yashoda ko dekhe bagair dukaan band kar nikal jata hai... Yashoda bhi patthar ke lagne se behosh ho jaati hai... Kamjori use pehle se thi 3 din se usne kuch khaya bhi nahi tha...




... Late night 3:15 AM...




Hhhhh hhhh Padko pakdo dekho woh kaha gya hhhh hhhh... Bachkar nahi jana chahiye...



Ek aadmi galiyon mai bhaag Raha tha sakal se hi chor dikhayi pad raha tha... Uske peeche 4,5 police waale bhaag rahe the .. jinhe pta nahi kitne dino se uski talaash aur aaj woh patte waalo par jab chapa maarne gye toh unhe woh mil gya jiske baad sab jugadi logo ko chod iske peeche pad gaye... Aadmi bhi bhaagne mai tez tha lagatar woh police waalon ko chaka raha tha... Chauraha par phunch kar jab use laga ki police uske peeche nahi hai tabhi use fir se unki awaaj sunayi deti hai jise sun woh ek dewaar se tek laga baith jata hai...



Hhhh hhhh yahi kahi chupa hoga patil tum do logo ke saath uss taraf jao... Dhoondo use iss baar bachkar nahi jana chahiye.... Naak mai dum kar rakha hai isne... bach kar jana nahi chahiye warna tumhari khaal alag kar dunga...



Aadmi sab kuch baith kar sun raha tha... Thodi hi der mai police waale waha se right aur left nikal gye... Tabhi usko thodi tasalli hui...



Aadmi... Hhhhhh Bach gya Aaj toh uss behen ke lode nazim ke chakkar mai yeh saala daroga meri gaand hi maar leta... Saala pta nahi kyun meri gand ke peeche pada hai kutta behen ka loda... Saale ki biwi deti nahi hogi isliye meri lene par pada hai... Ab kuch din chup kar lund pakad kar baithna hoga nahi yeh agar pakad liya toh mera lund Muth maarne ke layak bhi nahi chodega gaand ka gufa alag bana dega.. Iss nazim ki gaand bhi baad mai hi marunga abhi woh wapis aaye isse pehle mereko cut lena chahiye....



Yehi sab soch woh uthkar ek baar road par idher udher dekh hi Raha tha tabhi use kahi se bacche ki rone ki awaaz sunayi deti hai... Woh idher udher dekhta hai tabhi use paas waali dukaan ke paas aurat dikhayi padti hai.. jiske paas mai hi baacha ro raha tha... Ek pal toh woh bhi dar jata hai kahi uske rone ki awaaz sun police wapis na aa jaye... Woh aage badh hi Raha tha ki use man mai uske papa ki awaaz sunayi deti hai... Jo Marne se pehle uske pita ne usko kaha tha...




Short flashback...




Beta... Beta Tony... Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai beta...



Tony... Haan pita ji.. dariye nahi aapko kuch nahi hoga...


Pitaji.. Har ghar mai ek khota sikka hota hai humare ghar mai hum dono hi nikle.... Apne ghar mai bhi Ek hi hona chaiye Aur woh mai rhunga aur mere baad koi nahi hoga....

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Tony.. bas kijiye pita ji....



Pitaji.. hospital mai aate aate meri zindagi ki poori reel mere saamne se gujar gayi... Saari zindagi mai maine khud par garv karne waala koi kaam kiya ho mujhe yaad nahi aaya bete.. Maine aaj tak jo bhi kaam kiye uska aant aaj mere saath hi ho jayega beta marne ke baad koi mujhe yaad kare aisa koi bhi kaam maine nahi kiya... Kisi ka bhala kiye bagair jaa raha iss baat ka bhut afsos ho raha hai... Maine tujhe apne jaisa banaya iss baat ka mujhe koi dukh nahi magar meri tarah zero bankar nahi marega tu... HaR insaan ki shuruaat zero se hi hoti hai magar life sabko hero banne ka chance deti hai bhut se log mauka kho dete hai maine bhi kho diya beta... Life tujhe bhi hero banne ka ek mauka zaroor degi use mat khona... mauka khud chal kar tumhare paas aayega use pakad kar rakhna... Fir dekhna woh aacha kaam dekh kar tumhe khud par garv mehsoos hoga... Aisa kaam kiye bagair agar mere paas aaye toh Tony tujhe maaf nahi karunga...



Tony... Pitaji mai aapko kuch nahi hone dunga sab theek kar dunga...



Pitaji... Tujhe chod kar jaunga bhi kaha beta... Marne ke baad bhi tera peecha nahi chodunga.... Aahh kabhi terreaa saaathh nahiii chodunga.... Aahh kaaabbhi nahhiii....



Flashback end...



Ek baar fir Tony Yashoda ki taraf dekhata hai... Sir par chot lagne se khoon nikal raha tha uske... Paas mai baacha bhi ro raha tha... Jise woh yashoda ke haatoh se apne hath mai le leta hai... Ek nazar baache ko aur yashoda ko dekh kuch sochte hue nirnay leta hai... Aur idher udher dekhta hai tabhi use kuch nazar aa jata hai jise dekh uski aankhein thodi chamak aa jati hai....


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( KALYUG... Part 5 )



( Zero To Hero... Intro..)





Early morning... 5:15 AM...





Hhhh... Hhhh... Hhhh... Bas pahunch hi gaya... Thoda sa aur Tony bas




Khud se hi baat kar Tony kaafi der se thele ko chalaye jaa raha tha... Jispe usne yashoda aur baacha dono ko lita diya tha... baccha abhi bhi ro raha tha wohi yashoda behosh thi
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Tony ko samjh nahi aa raha woh uski madat kaisekare pehle socha yaha se chalana chahiye ghar baaki wohi sochega aage kya karsakte hai... Usne Jaise taise karke Yashoda ko utha kar thele per lita diya... Maathe se bhut khoon abhi bhi nikal raha tha usne apni shirt ki aasteen fad kar uske sir par bandh di... Aur bacche ko uske paas lita kar thela le ghar ki taraf chal diya... Abhi uske dimag se police kar darr nikal chuka tha aur kismat bhi uske saath thi ki police waha se chali gayi thi...




Kaafi mehnat masakkat karne ke baad Tony thele ko lekar apni basti mai phunch gaya... Jaha usko maasi mill gayi raaste mai jo paani bhar rahi thi... Subh 6 baj gye the pahunchte pahunchte iss samay basti ki saari auratain paani bharne nal par phunch jati hai... Tony ka poora bachpan yaha gujara tha pehle maa thi uske jaane ke baad papa hi uske sab kuch the... Woh bhi kuch samay pehle hi chal base... Ristedaar ke naam par ek mausi hi thi Tony ki jo madat kar deti thi... Tony ko do time ka khana mausi ke Ghar hi hota tha... Aur pita ke jaane ke baad toh woh uske saath hi rehta tha... Khud ke ghar mai ghutan hoti thi use...




Aeee... Tonyyyy.. kidher se aa raha hai aur yeh ladki kon hai tere saath... Kya hua ise...




Mausi Tony ko dekh puchti hai... jo kaafi der se nal ki line mai apna number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi... Woh Tony ko apne bete ke jaise hi maanti thi... Tony ki maa ki badi behen thi dono behno mai bhut pyaar tha tabhi choti behen ke jaane ke baad usne Tony ki poori dekhbhal ki maa ki kami nahi hone di use... Woh Tony ke pita se kaafi gussa rehti thi... Pita Tony ke choRi , lootmaari, gundagardi... Yehi kaam tha unka aur unke saath reh rehkar Tony bhi waisa hi ban gaya tha...




Woh Tony ko bhut samjhati thi magar Tony kha kisi ki sunta 2 no. Ka kaam jitna gairkanoni hai... Utna hi Paisa usme hota hai... Tony ne padhai likhayi bhi nahi ki thi muskill se apna naam likh pata tha... Aise mai woh apne pita ke nakse kadam par chalta raha aur bada Gunda ban raha tha... Kaafi naam tha Tony ka basti mai... basti mai lagbhag 1 lakh se jayada log rehte the... Tony ko lagbhag har koi jaanta tha... Uske saath reh kar uska beta Nazim bhi bigad gaya tha... Maar Peet , jua khelna , satta lagana , ladkiyon chedna yeh kaam mai Nazim expert ban gaya tha Tony ke saath reh kar... Jiske karan roz Nazim ko maar padti thi apni maa se... magar maar se kaha asar hota dusre din fir wohi kaam...




Kher back to story... Mausi jinka naam Vimala tha pareshan aur hairaan ho gayi thi Tony ko subh kisi ko saath mai dekh kar jab paas jaake unhone dekha toh ladki ke saath baacha bhi tha... Jo abhi filhaal toh so raha tha shayad rote rote thak gaya hoga...




Vimala.... Kya re... Ab yeh kaam bhi karne laga tu... Neech kon hai yeh ladki aur yeh baacha kiska hai bata mujhe warna Aaj tu jute khayega merese.. ghysne nahi dungi ghar mai na roti dungi tereko khane ke liya... Bta kon hai yeh...



Tony jo thela chala kar thak gaya tha... Thodi saans le raha tha itne mai vimala maasi ki baat sun thoda ghabra bhi gya fir bola...



Tony... subh subh kya chik chik kar rahi hai Tai... Chal baju hat isko ander lekar chal tereko sab btata hai mai...



Tab tak basti ke bhi kuch log ikhtta ho gye the Tony sabko side kar Yashoda ko hatho mai utha leta hai aur maasi ko bacche ko lekar aane ka bol maasi ke ghar chal deta hai... Maasi bhi Tony ke peeche peeche bacche ko le chal deti saath hi basti ki ek do auratain bhi ghar mai aa gayi thi... Tony Yashoda ko bistar par leta deta hai aur palat kar maasi ko dekta hai toh woh sawaliyan nazron se use dekh rahi thi... Saathhi basti ki kuch auratain bhi apas mai khusur pusur kar rahi thi...



Tony pehle toh ghabra jaata hai fir kal jo kuch bhi hua woh mausi ko bta deta hai...



Vimala Tony ki baat sun shock ho jaati hai... Jitna use Tony ko kisi ke saath dekh laga tha usse jayada shock use laga Tony ko kisi anjaan ki madat karte dekh kar... qki Tony ne aaj tak Gunda gardi chori chakari ke alawa kuch nahi kiya... Kher woh khush bhi thi Tony ki baat sunkar shayad uska yeh beta shudhar jaye... Fir ek nazar yashoda ko dekhatoh uske sir par Patti dekh chonk gayi aur jaldi se kitchen mai garam pani rakh kar apna first aid ka dibba lekar aa gayi...



Yashoda ki tarah Vimala bhi pese se nurse thi... Lekin private hospital mai jisme use kaam bhut paise Kam milte the... Jaise taise karke uske ghar ka kharcha chalta tha... Ghar mai Nazim uski biwi Kanta aur haal mai ek beti Hui thi... pati kaafi samay pehle daaru peekar truck se kuchal gaya tha...





Vimala Yashoda ke sir ki patti hata kar dekhti hai toh khoon ab ruk chuka tha... Ghaav kaafi gehra tha woh kitchen mai jaa ek bartan mai gun guna paani le aati hai aur rui ki madat se zakham saaf karti hai... Use sir mai choti gitti dikhti jise nikaal woh Dettol se use saaf karti hai fir cream aur patti laga Tony ko kehti hai...




Vimala... Ghaav kaafi gehra hai khoon bhi kaafi beh Gaya hai... Ise aspataal lekar Jana padega... Khoon ki battle bhi chadhani padegi... Isse dekh kar lagta hai private hospital hi lekar Jana padega... magar...




Tony... Magar itne paise kaha hai apne paas Tai tu kuch kar na tu bhi toh dacter hai...




Vimala... dacter nahi nurse hoon mai aur bina hospital yeh theek nahi hogi khoon kaafi beh Gaya hai... Battle toh chadhani padegi...




Tony... Private hospital pta hai na kitna paisa leta hai , hai tere pass itna paisa yaa mere paas... Tu kuch kar Tai bacha le ise...




Vimala... Mai kya Karun bhagwan thodi hoon khoon chadhana hi padega na ise... aacha sun ek kaam kar mai iske khoon ka sample tujhe de deti hoon isse lab mai le jaa waha se tu iska milta julta khoon le aana saath mai kuch saman likh kar de deti hoon theek hai...



Tony... Haan theek hai yeh kar lete hai bas kaise bhi bacha le ise...



Fir Vimala Tony ko khoon ka sample de deti hai... Aur saath mai samaan ki parchi bhi...



Vimala.. paise hai na tere pass...



Tony... Haan kuch paise hai...




Vimala kuch paise Tony ke haath mai rakh deti hai.. inko bhi leta jaa kam pade jaane par kaam aayenge...




Tony bhi furti mai waha se nikal jata hai... lab phunch woh sample lab waale ko deta hai jise lab waala jama kar 2ghante baad Tony ko bulata hai tab tak woh wanha se nikal chai cigarette jala leta hai... Aur sochne lagata hai woh anjaan ke liye kyun dukhi ho raha hai jisko woh janta tak nahi... aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua uske saath...




Kareeb 2 ghante intjaar karne ke baad lab phunch woh report leta hai aur maasi ke kahi anusaar blood bank phunch jata hai blood lene... Jaha use pta chalta hai khoon paise ke saath saath donate krne par milta hai... Ab woh kya kare kuch soch hi Raha tha ki uth kar doctor ke cabin mai jaa usse baat krta hai...




Morning... 11:05 Am...




Location Basti...




Ale le le... Baacha kya hua chup ho ja Munna... Bhook lagi hai tereko... Ruk abhi teri Tai tereko duddu pilwayegi... Aeee kanta idher aa...



Kanta... Ha maa aapne bulaya...




( Kanta... Maasi ki bahu Nazim se 2 saal pehle baag kar shaadi kar chuki hai... Dedh saal ki ladki hai ise darasal... Bhaag kar saadi bhi isi chakkar mai ki thi usne Nazim se warna usko nazim mai koi intrest nahi tha... Jawani ke Josh mai do baar Nazim se jismani sambadh ban gye the uske... magar kam jankari hone ke karan baccha theher gaya... Girwane ke liye bhi paise lagte hai jo uske paas the nahi aur yeh paap uske haatho hone se bach Gaya... Kam Umar mai maa banne ke dar se bhaag kar Nazim se shaadi Karli...




Nazim toh kanta ki jawani dekh laar lapakata tha kaise mana karta bass fir... Usne bhi ise hi apni kismat maan liya aur basti mai aa gayi rehne... Kuch hi din Mai Nazim ki sacchai use pta chal gayi woh kaisa hai kya kaam karta hai... Jisse use bhut dukh hua magar ab kar. Bhi kya sakte the...




Vimala shaadi se nakhush thi usne kaafi din tak Nazim se baat nahi ki.. magar use apani bahu kaafi pasand aayi isliye usne Nazim ko maaf kar diya... Magar uske kaam ko leker abhi bhi maarti thi... Nazim kaha kisi ki sunta maar kha kar woh wohi kaam karta jo Tony kehta... kher kuch din Mai Vimala ko Kanta ki sacchai bhi pta chal gayi usne Nazim ko bhut mara aur ghar se nikaal diya kanta se use koi sikhayt nahi thi... Kuch time baad Nazim ko baachi hui jiske karan usne Nazim ko maaf kar diya jisse baachi ko pita ki kami na ho... )

Vimala... Kaha thi tu tab se awaaz de rahi hun mai... yeh le bacche ko bhookh lagi hai jara ise doodh pila de...



Kanta.... Maa yeh kon hai kiska baccha hai...




Vimala... Woh sab baad mai pehle Jo boli tereko woh kar... Baacha bhuka hai syad kal se kuch nahi khaya isne... Iski maa bhi hosh mai nahi hai yeh le jaldi kar...



Kanta Vimala ke haath se bacche ko leti hai... Baacha uske goad mai aa Rona band kar deta hai aur muhh bana kar doodh pilana ka ishara karta hai... Kanta bhi baache ko dekhti hai.. bhut hi masoom sa rang bilkull Saaf gora Kanta ko bhi bete ki chahat thi magar woh ab nazim ko paas bhi nahi aane Dena chahti thi... Roz daaru peekar nazim hath bhi utha deta tha fir subh maa se maar khata.. ab uske dil mai Nazim ke liye koi pyaar nahi tha na izzat pati waali.. kher Kanta bacche ko ek tak dekhti hai fir achanak hi maathe par ek pappi de deti hai... Aur apne blause ka hook khol ek side se doodh nikal use pilane lagti hai... Baacha bhi ghat ghat doodh peene lagta hai kuch der mai shant hokar so jata hai...



Vimala kaafi der se apne bete ka intezar kar rahi jo kal se gayab tha... Aur Tony bhi ab tak nahi aaya... Usne apne paas mai rakhi ek glucose ki bottle Yashoda ko laga di ab woh bhi khatam hone ko aayi thi saath mai Yashoda ki halat bhi bigadti jaa rahi thi haath pair Peele pad rahe the khoon ki kami ki wajah se...



Kaafi waqt gujar jaane ke baad Tony ghar aa gaya magar saath mai Nazim bhi tha jo Tony ko Sahara deker laya tha... Vimala Tony ki aise dekh ghabra gayi aur uski taraf aage badhti ki usse pehle Tony ne khoon ki bottle Vimala ki taraf badha di jise dekh Vimala pehle to hairaan hui fir Tony ko dekh sab kuch samjh aa gaya... Blood bank mai Tony ne khud ka blood de kar exchange mai blood laya hai... Use hairat bhi ho rahi thi Tony aisa kar sakta magar fir jaldi seusne Tony ko paas hi padi dusri charpayi par baitha diya.. aur kanta ko awaaz de Tony ko kuch bana kar dene ko kaha... Fir usne apne globes pehne aur Lag gayi Yashoda ki marham patti karne fir khoon ki bottle laga di saath mai kuch dawaiyan bhi yashoda ko di...




Evening time... 7:35 PM...




Subh se shaam ho gayi thi... sab log abhi bhi wanhi ke wanhi the khoon ki bottle bhi khatam ho gayi ab bas sabko intejaar tha Yashoda ke hosh mai aane ka jo sayad thoda lamba chalne wala tha...



Kanta ne samjhdaari dikhate hue sabke liye khana banaya... Jise Nazim ne bhar pet thoos kar khaya magar Tony ko bhookh nahi thi... Vimala ne kaha bhi use magar woh chup raha aur khana hone ke baad Nazim ke saath bahar chala gaya... Vimala subh se Tony ko harkat notice kar rahi thi... ek anjaan ladki ke liye usko itna fikar dekh woh ander hi ander khush bhi bhut thi...

Kanta Sabko khana khila Dene ke baad kaafi der tak bacche ke saath khelti rahi saath mai apni beti ko bhi sambhal rahi thi... Fir baad mai dono ko baari baari doodh pila kar uska di...



Tony ko khud samjh nahi aa raha tha woh aaj se pehle kisi ke liye itna dukhi nahi hua tha... Uske pita ke jaane ke baad toh usne galat kaam krne mai koi kasar nahi chodi thi.. har waqt maarpet Krna yehi pasand tha use... Mager pata nahi q use aaj Yashoda ko dekh dukh bhi ho raha tha aur khushi bhi ki woh uske liye kuch kar raha hai... Shayad uske pita sahi kehte the... Kisi ki madat karne par Khud ko garv mehsoos hoga... Shayad uske pita ke yeh antim sabd uski zindagi ka naya aarambh tha.... Aur zero se Hero banne ki shuruaat bhi par kiski nazron mai Yashoda ki... Jise woh janta tak nahi...



5 days later...



Location.. Basti...



Yashoda... Bhaisahab mera baacha bhookha hai please thoda sa doodh de dijiye.... mai aapke haath jodti hoon usne kal se kuch nahi khaya hai...



Introduction....



Yashoda... Age 21...


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Tony.... Age 28...

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Vimala... ( Maasi / Tai ) age 52

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Nazim... ( Vimala's Son ) Age 26...


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Kanta... ( Nazim wife ) age 22 one daughter... Age **

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